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2 shorts, please help me improve =) (0 replies)
The Disease (first post, comments appreciated) (1 replies)
edit please its called arriving home! :) (0 replies)
Popping Old Balloons (please comment) (3 replies)
Watching the twilight (8 replies)
Bird, Oh Bird! -- Chapter II (0 replies)
Contagius (Horror,Thriller) (2 replies)
Life Imitating Art (1 replies)
Battling stillness (2 replies)
first short story post please comment (5 replies)
Silly short story (1 replies)
Another Short Story (2 replies)
A Short Story (3 replies)
Bless the Wood (1 replies)
The Quarantine of Love (2 replies)
Short Story I wrote I while ago . . . (4 replies)
"The Crossing" (2 replies)
Ticking (2 replies)
Redemption (2 replies)
Toboe's short story thread (^0^) (0 replies)
Explicit Love/Implicit Lust (4 replies)
Insomnia (New idea) (7 replies)
Can't be seen (3 replies)
"Her Tragedy"(A story with no pattern but heart) (7 replies)
The Perpetual Vengeance of Piggledy-Poppet (2 replies)
Story on my blog (0 replies)
The Master of War (0 replies)
An Insurrection (2 replies)
Shepherd (0 replies)
Disappear (15 replies)
New Crime Story (Would love people's replies please) (1 replies)
Being Friendly (1 replies)
A Letter From Prison (3 replies)
To Those Who Dare (0 replies)
4 Kings of Hell (What do you think?) (0 replies)
The Sisters (0 replies)
Need help on an idea I'm thinking of, (2 replies)
The Farm Animals (3 replies)
Personal Injury (0 replies)
Barley (0 replies)
Postcard (0 replies)
Loss (13 replies)
perfect innocence (2 replies)
The Meeting - Please comment on my first ever story (2 replies)
Self_Delusion - Serenade for the Dead (1 replies)
Life's Blood (4 replies)
Swordfight in the Rain (0 replies)
Bird! Oh, Bird! -- Chapter I (3 replies)
The attack (0 replies)
The death of more than one dream. (Feedback desired please) (0 replies)
A Simple Edit (2 replies)
Heat (0 replies)
Space and Everything (0 replies)
Laundry Day (0 replies)
The Storyteller (5 replies)
Quinne and the infinite hole of realisation (1 replies)
A Memory (0 replies)
Epic Death-Rise (0 replies)
The Prisoner by Callum Chester (0 replies)
A Word - Short Story (2 replies)
Javelin Maddox: An Epic in the Making (Critique, sil-te plait) (5 replies)
Chimney (1 replies)
I have a secret.... (1 replies)
Add a piece (Never ending story) (37 replies)
One Rainy Night -- a little racy (5 replies)
What do you think of my Short Story? (0 replies)
Short Story/Character Sketch (3 replies)
Sophia Turner! My New Story What do you think? (1 replies)
Autopilot (Please give feedback) :) (6 replies)
Longing (My first Short story) (really want people's thoughts) (9 replies)
The Gratis Grotto (12 replies)
Pyrophobia (1 replies)
searching (short story) (4 replies)
The Hunt (please give me your thoughts) (5 replies)
The Last Birthday (3 replies)
Balkans Society (Would really appreciate people's thoughts) (3 replies)
Rain! (What do yout think?) (1 replies)
Anti (0 replies)
Lottery! (People's opinion's please) (6 replies)
From the Cutting Room Floor, please comment (10 replies)
Limbo, (Alternative Drama) (1 replies)
Our Teacher, The Vampire! (2 replies)
the thin man (would be greatful of feedback) (1 replies)
The Importance of Carrying a Pocket Mirror. (5 replies)
Forever Love (2 replies)
Dreams of reality (Vampire Thriller) (2 replies)
What are you? (Short story) (1 replies)
The celebrant (0 replies)
Next Door! (Short story idea) (1 replies)
What do you think of my opening? (3 replies)
What do you wish for? (My Story) (1 replies)
first short story so far, how is it? (4 replies)
The Closet (7 replies)
voices (6 replies)
The Dojo Hunchback (1 replies)
Ted (1 replies)
Toast (10 replies)
Ignore the Light and Sleep, the bomb and the girl, a short story (2 replies)
Love Refreshed (2 replies)
In-N-Out (4 replies)
Tigers (a work in progress.) (1 replies)
Start to new satire...comments/critique needed (5 replies)
Deep down (0 replies)
The Water Spirit (2 replies)
My Grandfather's Inheritance (3 replies)
Prologue (1 replies)
Sparks Fly Upward (0 replies)
cafe carpe diem (9 replies)
The Lost Goat That Teaches a Spiritual Lesson (2 replies)
Dusting My Pen Off (2 replies)
Letting Go (6 replies)
The Skeletal Tree (5 replies)
Rose (0 replies)
Saga (0 replies)
Sculptor of the Earth (2 replies)
Dead Twin (0 replies)
My first short story (0 replies)
God's Child (9 replies)
The Book (1 replies)
The Boy Looked At Johnny (WiP) (5 replies)
Sunset Hostel (5 replies)
The Ice Cream Truck Doesn't Stop Here Anymore (9 replies)
vev (0 replies)
Bandaged Woman - working title (0 replies)
Waves Upon Distant Shores (6 replies)
Scene one of a one scene story (0 replies)
Know Thyself (0 replies)
My zombie idea (8 replies)
Chance O'Poyson: Toxologist to the Stars (4 replies)
Ignorance is Hell (working title) (4 replies)
Alice Cooper (1 replies)
All the Small Things (0 replies)
The greedy girls (0 replies)
Hard Earned Bread (3 replies)
Non Est Mea Culpa (0 replies)
The Farewell -- A five-paragraph story (0 replies)
I Jumped (4 replies)
Short Story: Afterlife (2 replies)
Dear, Sweet Jen: Another Short Story (2 replies)
Wind Chimes (3 replies)
Two-sided Story (8 replies)
Writing Prompt: Rooftops (0 replies)
Enclosure (3 replies)
The Young Rich Man (3 replies)
First go :) (0 replies)
A Victory (0 replies)
My first try (4 replies)
Yeah! (0 replies)
Life with the Baffins (2 replies)
Nocturne (0 replies)
Stories (1 replies)
extracts from a teen book i'm working on (0 replies)
What is your six-word story? (219 replies)
Counting Tiles: My Short Story (5 replies)
Star Snatcher (delete other one) (0 replies)
The Rising -- A single-paragraph story (6 replies)
Hapland (1 replies)
Tenebrous Depths (0 replies)
Star Snatcher (To be finished) (0 replies)
To Be on the Road Part III (0 replies)
Echo Night (Horror/suspense) (1 replies)
Savage By Nature (1 replies)
Honeymoon (0 replies)
Tango means 'closed space,' 'a private space to which one asks permission to enter.' (0 replies)
Dead of the Night (horror/thriller) some swearing, (5 replies)
A Fire Without Blame (0 replies)
It Was Time (0 replies)
To Be on the Road (When the Cat Decides) -- Part II (0 replies)
A new member, and a story about drugs.... (9 replies)
Pony (2 replies)
Prisoner Of War (0 replies)
Another Afternoon Tea. Comments, please! (2 replies)
beginning of a short story -- eternity in alestrat (7 replies)
China Town (0 replies)
By MJB give it a read (0 replies)
Untitled Fantasy (First ever attempt! Critique welcome!) (3 replies)
To Be on the Road (When the Cat Decides) -- Part I (0 replies)
Love for Road Trip (0 replies)
Mass (2 replies)
"I'm sorry..." (2 replies)
Please people check my short story for errors,my final draft is really near (0 replies)
The Bus Ride (0 replies)
The Magic Box (3 replies)
Change of Juice (1 replies)
"meh" story, need advice (1 replies)
3 coins from Foes (2 replies)
Love's Chemistry II (0 replies)
Sugaring Off (5 replies)
Wish Me Luck (5 replies)
'Immmortal Blue Fire' (3 replies)
Streams (9 replies)
Prophet's Flowers (4 replies)
A journey to love (PART 2)... (1 replies)
Emit Hates Mondays (0 replies)
Ftly hits!!! (0 replies)
Until eternity (2 replies)
A journey to love (5 replies)
Bird Bones. (5 replies)
Lovers through war and peace (beginning) (13 replies)
The Boys (1 replies)
Children's story (0 replies)
Not done and untitled. (1 replies)
Roses on the Wind (1 replies)
The Silence of War - First post (1 replies)
Foolish ramblings (5 replies)
Remember (17 replies)
Two Roses (8 replies)
Guise (3 replies)
The Princess and the Dragon (11 replies)
First Day of Spring (2 replies)
Ultraman and the Pagan Babies (7 replies)
the visitation of the gods (0 replies)
The Last Part of Me (6 replies)
The Awakening (2 replies)
A State of Cry and Neigh (0 replies)
Sweet Suffering (0 replies)
Untitled (open to suggestions) this one's pretty long! (10 replies)
Nostalgia (2 replies)
Resurfacing [new story -- depressing story warning!] (0 replies)
My One Regret (3 replies)
Comic Relief. (1 replies)
The Unwritten (Horror first post) 18+ ohh ! first post ! (6 replies)
The Last Birthday (2 replies)
The beginning of a cute love story (6 replies)
14 years old, story I'm working on. Please comment (4 replies)
Best Friends. (Explicit) (9 replies)
NEW SHOES by LIME MELLONE-600 word taster (3 replies)
The Doctor (A Comedy Story, Response Please) (1 replies)
Hope (0 replies)
Blind Chief. Awaiting your comments/criticism (5 replies)
It Doesn’t Matter if it’s Red (0 replies)
Truth and Reality (2 replies)
White Blood Cells (8 replies)
asiistants (0 replies)
Choice, Consequence (0 replies)
Loved you too late (6 replies)
Moving on...Or how could a girl have reached such feelings? (3 replies)
Escape (1 replies)
Frost (1 replies)
Sweat (2 replies)
A Man of His Senses (4 replies)
The End of His Chain (3 replies)
Short Story Narrative (2 replies)
Martin (8 replies)
My Lesson On Life (1 replies)
The New Kid (0 replies)
Pretty Little Monsters (0 replies)
The Stimulating Side-Effect of Music (2 replies)
Mundane (0 replies)
The Looking Glass (0 replies)