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MarkBastable
06-29-2009, 05:16 AM
My very short story - more an extended one-liner, really - has been e-published here (http://towerweb.net/mt/authors/mark_bastable/lifes_blood.pdf).

prendrelemick
06-30-2009, 05:41 AM
Now there's a new twist. Good one.

billl
06-30-2009, 05:56 AM
yeah, actually, that was a good ending. i wasn't really into it until half-way, though, it took time for the words to actually amount to two characters in a situation. and i think most readers would be ready for more from these two (or at least one of them). it'd be a great scene early on in a larger story.

JacobF
07-04-2009, 09:46 AM
That wasn't just witty and delightful -- it was downright hilarious. I found myself laughing at almost everything the vampire said. The twist was really great, too. The vampire reminded me of Lord Henry Wotton.

Delta40
07-04-2009, 10:25 AM
I love your style. It was a great read and a lovely little twist. Thanks