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mmaria
03-05-2009, 06:38 AM
A spring day was smiling from all sides and entering into all the pores of town. People were seeing the long winter off with a relief, and with less effort doing their everyday works.

Scent of violets was spreading through the forest where G. was walking. She was deeply inhaling mild vapors of the coming spring. Buds were shining implying leafy branches of trees. G.'s face reflected her inner freshness and satisfaction. She was absorbing every vibration, every noise, every colour, every beam of the nature...

- Hello! a little bird called her from a tree.

- Hello! replied G.

- Spring is coming! twittered the bird.

- Yes, finally! replied G.

- How did you spend the winter? asked the bird.

- Here and there. All in all, not bad, he, he... laughed G. and winked at the
bird.

- And how about you? she asked the bird.

- Not bad, either, he, he... replied the bird and flapped off.

A young man who was walkig by, suddenly saw a girl talking to herself. He stood there watching her shocked by the sight. Then, filled with fear turned away from the path he was walking along and ran to the opposite direction.

1n50mn14
03-05-2009, 11:57 AM
Grammar and sentence structure.
Enough said.

mmaria
03-05-2009, 04:40 PM
Grammar and sentence structure.
Enough said.


Not enough. You could have quoted the mistakes and suggested the corrections. But... thanks for reading it, anyway.