The Hunt (please give me your thoughts)

[LeonClaire]

This story is nothing like Twilight and has huge twists!
What do you think?

3 university students Alexander, Danielle, and Chris hunt vampires at night, Alexander likes getting injuries because at his local hospital works a young beautiful nurse that he really likes, she starts to get suspicius of the students, she comes to find out that these students hunt vampires. Claire begins to hangout with them, but when the group come across the wrong vampire it isn't fun & games anymore.

[krispykritta]

it sounds interesting.

[Lettersndnumbrs]

it sounds alright, when are u gonna start writing this story?

[LeonClaire]

I like twilight but I feel this something different!

3 university students Alexander, Danielle, and Owen hunt vampires at night, Alexander likes getting injuries because at his local hospital works a young beautiful nurse that he really likes, Claire becomes suspicious of the students, she comes to find out that these students hunt vampires. Claire begins to hangout with them, but when the group come across the wrong vampire it isn't fun & games anymore.

Few Details

Owen & Danielle are siblings

Alex has known Owen & Danielle since primary school.
They began hunting when they were 18 just before high school ended, now in University they have found nests of vampires live near by.

Claire is a young nurse, Claire starts to worry when Alex regularly turns up at the hospital after a hunt.

This story has happy & very sad moments!

[ms5801a]

It could be really really good, or it could be cheesy. The premise of the story looks very interesting, but lately the vampire thing is getting a lot of limelight. I like the mix of vampire and university. My big advice is try to veer away from making it too twilightesque. Good luck, I wanna see how it ends up!

[Lettersndnumbrs]

i agree with ms, you really should distinguish yourself from the contemporary vampire craze. From what you told us, This idea could become a good book series, or a bunch of crap. Just try not to make the story have most of the focus on Alex crushing on a nurse.