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LIME5000
03-10-2009, 02:27 PM
NO Shoes
LIME5000
03-12-2009, 08:06 PM
Soooo...I see a number of you on here have read the above post...umm interesting.
What are you thoughts, hate it, love it couldnt give a rats hoot???

come on people spill zee beans!!!
mmaria
03-13-2009, 07:46 AM
I liked your story. It is very easy to read, if there is such an expression in English: it is very readable, hehe. Only, I did not understand was it a woman or a man.
1n50mn14
03-13-2009, 09:41 AM
Huh. I could have sworn I commented on this...

Anyway. Really liked it. Original, fresh. A quirky, satisfying ending.