josierosie
04-19-2009, 10:17 AM
Hi all,
I'm entering this story into a competition but wondered if I could get some feedback on what people think.
Tango is a visual word. It conjures red and oranges; temptresses in ludicrously tight outfits spinning to erotic beats; their movements sharp and strong, at the same time fluid and full of grace. It is those images that brought him here to this tiny Argentine town, to this small bar on a warm side street. But he sits alone as she dances the Tango without him.
I'm entering this story into a competition but wondered if I could get some feedback on what people think.
Tango is a visual word. It conjures red and oranges; temptresses in ludicrously tight outfits spinning to erotic beats; their movements sharp and strong, at the same time fluid and full of grace. It is those images that brought him here to this tiny Argentine town, to this small bar on a warm side street. But he sits alone as she dances the Tango without him.