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Dinaliuyang
07-25-2009, 11:53 PM
White Hair Exchanges into Black Hair

Written by: Li Xuting

Translated by:Liu Yang

An honest and low-profile man, Laozhang,who likes doing things quietly. But one day, he seemed changed into another man, who began to wear long hair. Someone asked him why, he only smiled, but without saying a word.
The things in the world are subtle, the less he said, the more we wonder. Due to Laozhang’s hair was too long to look like a lady from his back. We all wanted to know what had happened.
One day, there’s no other person in the office, so I asked him why he wears long hair. He smiled, “I couldn’t say anything until the result come out.” It’s true that he had his own reason and had right to refuse to answer. So from that time, all of us stopped asking him the reason and forgot his change slowly.
The Spring Festival was coming. Laozhang went to see his mother in a small village. But when he came back, his long hair was gone, his head was bald. We were all puzzled and said people changed so fast, even the honest Laozhang started to pretend cool. In the face of these words, he still didn’t saying anything just smiled.
I saw Laozhang pushing a wheelchair-bound an old woman and walking out, when I was taking a walk one night. I asked him who she was. He told me that she was his mother, and she looked so well though she was in the wheelchair.
I walked away after chatting with his mother. Somebody called me when I came back, it was Laozhang.
He said: “I finally solved the problem. At last, my long hair was useful.”
He told me that his mother was suffering from stomach cancer, and her all hair dropped down due to the chemotherapy. Because of her bald head, she didn’t agree to come to the city with her son.
Laozhang said to her: “I’ll buy a wig for you, it looks like real.” But the old woman was an very honest person, hate the word “fake”, so she still didn’t agree her son to buy a fake one for her. After hearing that, Laozhang was so sad and sat up all night, and finally he devised a good idea.
So one day, Laozhang went to that small village to see his mother with a stranger. He asked his mother: “Mom, what do you think of my hair, is it real?”
She laughed, “I’m not too old to see that your hair is the real.”
Laozhang said: “That’s great, mom, please don’t move.” then he brought a chair and let that stranger to cut down his all chair.
The old woman said: “Son, you don’t need to do that, I won’t go with you even you accompany me with bald head.
Laozhang said: “Mom, you see.”
The old woman saw that stranger was sitting in a chair and doing something with that hair, but because of her eyes was not too good, she didn’t see clearly.
After a long time, the stranger said: “Done, have a try.” And then the old woman saw clearly that there was a “wit” in his hand.
Laozhang took the wig and said: “Mom, I knew you hate false things, but you see now, this is my real hair, it’s a real one, mom, please have a try.”
The old woman was in tears, who said in a voice choked with sobs: “Well…I wear…”
From then on, the old woman moved to the city with her son, and all the people, who saw her always said though she was silk, her sprit was great, looked at her black hair.
Every time she heard those words, the old woman always laughed happily and then touched her long black hair.

Dinaliuyang
07-27-2009, 12:41 AM
Could anybody tell me what do you think about the story, or if there are something wrong sentences in it....
Please tell me if you find something wrong, thanks a million.

Dinaliuyang
07-28-2009, 02:51 AM
Turning White Hair Into Black
Written by:Li Xuting

Translated by:Liu Yang

Honest and low-profiled, Laozhang,who likes doing things quietly. But one day, he seemed changed into another man. He began to wear long hair. Some of my colleagues asked him the reason, but he only smiled without saying any word.
The things in the world are subtle. The less he said, the more we wonder to know. So we all wanted to know why he wore long hair cause he really looked like a lady from his back.
One day, there’s no other person in the office, so I asked him why he wears long hair. He smiled, “I couldn’t say anything until the final result is in.” Yes, he had his own reason and had right to refuse to answer. So from that time, we stopped asking him the reason and gradually forgot it.
Before the Spring Festival, Laozhang went to see his mother who lives in a small village. But after the festival, he came back with a bald head, his long hair was gone. We were all puzzled and sighed, “How can people change so fast, even if Laozhang, the honest man in our office, starts to pretend cool.” But, Laozhang, in the face of these words, still only smiled without saying anything.
I saw Laozhang pushing a wheelchair-bound an old woman and walking out on a Friday evening, when I was taking a walk. The old woman looked as fresh as paint though she was in the wheelchair. So I asked him who she was. And he told me that she’s his mother.
After chatting with his mother, I walked away. And when I came back Laozhang called me.
He said: “I finally solved the problem. My hair was useful indeed.”
He told me that his mother was suffering from stomach cancer, and lost all her hair cause the chemotherapy. So she didn’t agree to come to the city and live with her son.
Laozhang said to her: “I’ll buy a wig for you, it looks like real.” The old woman is a very honest person. She hates the word “fake”, so she didn’t agree his proposition either. After hearing that, Laozhang was so sad and sat up all night, but finally he devised a good idea.
So after several months, before the Spring Festival, Laozhang went to see her with a stranger. He asked his mother: “Mom, what do you think of my hair, is it real?”
She laughed, “I’m not too old to see that your hair is real.”
Laozhang said: “Well, mom, please don’t move.” then he brought a chair and let that stranger to shave off his hair.
His mother looked at her son and said: “Son, you don’t need to do that, I won’t leave even if you shaved off your hair and look like me now.”
Laozhang said: “Mom, you see.”
The old woman saw the stranger was sitting in a chair and doing something with the hair, but she didn’t see clearly cause her bad eyes.
After a long time, the stranger said: “Done, have a try.” Then the old woman saw clearly, there was a “wig” in his hand.
Laozhang held the wig and said: “Mom, I knew you hate false things, so I gave you my real hair, you see, it’s real, mom, have a try, please, I beg you.”
“Well…I wear…”The tearful old woman said, her voice choked with sobs.
Finally, the old woman moved to the city. All the people, who saw her, always said, “Look at her black hair, she looks so vigorous.”
Every time she heard those words, the old woman always laughed happily and combed her long black hair with her hand.