LeonClaire
06-09-2009, 03:53 PM
This is a plan I would like people's thougts before I actually write the story:
It's set in an apartment building in new york, the main character is Michael, he discovers that his friend next door to him, as suddenly got up and left, that same day a new person is seen entering his apartment a well built dark character who with his very presence can scare anyone, Michael doesn't think too much of it, until one night he hears strange noises next door, like a bangin sound, Michael gets worried when his girlfriend who lives in new york doesn't answer her phone for a few days, Michael is determined to find out who the person next door really is?
I'll save the spoilers for the full story if people think it is good because there is a twist to this chilling thriller. hope to get your views thanks!
It's set in an apartment building in new york, the main character is Michael, he discovers that his friend next door to him, as suddenly got up and left, that same day a new person is seen entering his apartment a well built dark character who with his very presence can scare anyone, Michael doesn't think too much of it, until one night he hears strange noises next door, like a bangin sound, Michael gets worried when his girlfriend who lives in new york doesn't answer her phone for a few days, Michael is determined to find out who the person next door really is?
I'll save the spoilers for the full story if people think it is good because there is a twist to this chilling thriller. hope to get your views thanks!