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Eyes Like Diamonds (Very Dark) (2 replies)
Unfortunate (6 replies)
California Dreamin' (3 replies)
Galaxy Guy Revisited (1 replies)
Welcome Home (2 replies)
Unfinished (0 replies)
Born with it (first time writer) (1 replies)
All I've known. (Ultra short) (0 replies)
Just a Friend (0 replies)
Paranoid (0 replies)
An Incident In The Big Easy (7 replies)
The crystal rose (2 replies)
Start to a Jewish Extremism Novel (1 replies)
Kristina (2 replies)
The Lion (3 replies)
Life isnt fair (0 replies)
Born in Blood (0 replies)
Judgement (2 replies)
Circus Boy (5 replies)
La Guitarre (5 replies)
Soul Snatchers (first ever time writing) (7 replies)
A bottle of wine('Roc de Lassac' to be presice) (1 replies)
The angel with the blue wings (2 replies)
Farewell, Mr. Fluffy (2 replies)
Weft (1 replies)
Stop frame animation of sleep (0 replies)
A Democratic, Interactive Christmas Carol (Your vote needed to save Christmas!) (4 replies)
Le Desperado d'Amour (0 replies)
The Happy Demise Of Hidy The Clown (9 replies)
Bush/Kyoto: The Legacy of Death (3 replies)
The Tale of Humans (4 replies)
Ocean Within Ocean (VERY short) (6 replies)
Harvey (3 replies)
The Painting of Cynthia Greene (1 replies)
A Teenager; A Lover; A Psycho (0 replies)
The Bratty Little Princess (2 replies)
My first short story... Silence (4 replies)
PLz coment (10 replies)
Metamorphosis (7 replies)
For You (cyberpunk, some language and drug references) (5 replies)
The Killer Smile (11 replies)
The Catalyst (0 replies)
short story request (4 replies)
Not Soon Forgot (memoir) (1 replies)
Mike and Frieda (7 replies)
A Short 'Story' - Devil's Advocate (0 replies)
Grimms Bridge (6 replies)
The Memories That Lie Hidden in Light (0 replies)
New-old story. Horror/suspense? (3 replies)
An Integration Memory (8 replies)
Star Soldier (3 replies)
Crashing (1 replies)
Skimming the Surface (6 replies)
Taxi (0 replies)
Short Story recomendations (12 replies)
The Fish Tank (0 replies)
Cold Love That Burns (1 replies)
The Wall On The Way (0 replies)
Commuting (0 replies)
Short Story (Welcome Home) (7 replies)
The Coming of Age (0 replies)
Hard Times and Other Little Fantasies (0 replies)
Memories from Growing Up (Part 1) (0 replies)
Quarter Life Fantasy (0 replies)
The Further Adventures of French Sailor (2 replies)
A short horror story (10 replies)
A Global Disaster (1 replies)
Which one? (0 replies)
Missing Persons (2 replies)
Progreta (3 replies)
The Walking Banana (0 replies)
the crow (0 replies)
Paradise (0 replies)
Return (Thriller/Suspense/Horror) (3 replies)
* A Snowflake's Chance In Hell * (2 replies)
Finish the short story.... (1 replies)
Humanty Lost (4 replies)
My First Post - Comments Appreciated (5 replies)
Entwined (comments much appreciated!) (6 replies)
Short Story... (7 replies)
That Time of Day (0 replies)
Just Imagin your story with this words (0 replies)
Dichotomy of Love and Obsession (9 replies)
Pablo Cruise ----The California Sound (7 replies)
Danielle (18 replies)
Feedback greatly appreaciated on this in-class story I wrote (8 replies)
Annoying little pest (12 replies)
Fleeting Mermaid (4 replies)
Very short beginning needs judgment: I have a story critique soon please help (2 replies)
Will You Be There? (4 replies)
Lieutenant X Says "Attention!" to Private Y (3 replies)
An appeal for the world s conscience (0 replies)
New Story is composed by Saleh Alyamani (0 replies)
Dinner Conversation (8 replies)
The Happerdale (0 replies)
Permanently Switched Off (0 replies)
The French Sailor (4 replies)
Traveller in the Dark (2 replies)
The Poet (0 replies)
Chessplaying Trolls in the Back Yard (3 replies)
Noctis Carmen (4 replies)
The Deeps (1 replies)
A Mess of Numismatic Pottage (5 replies)
A Long Tongue (4 replies)
Making Your pet Mad at You (2 replies)
Live as if you'll die today (0 replies)
brain dogs (very short story, please critique) (14 replies)
A Small Problem of Polarity (0 replies)
Published anyone? (0 replies)
The Story of Brian, Savior (0 replies)
The World and the Bicyclist (6 replies)
LOVE (free form prose) (4 replies)
Rough Microfiction (1 replies)
the bill of sale (5,000 words, please critique) (0 replies)
The Market (2 replies)
Was it an offer to live? (0 replies)
Shop Girl (0 replies)
pulling the trigger (0 replies)
The Galaxy Guy (1 replies)
Saying Goodbye (2 replies)
Pinnacles of Life (1 replies)
The Day It Rained Airplanes (2 replies)
The street that only sold Chandeliers. Based on a recurring dream. (0 replies)
Bhindu Mali (1 replies)
four meetings (0 replies)
A Climb Up A Mountain: A Sketch (Based on a dream I had recently) (0 replies)
31 miles (0 replies)
Sorry Dada (36 replies)
Timmy and the Midnight Cow (1 replies)
Aviator Sunglasses (4 replies)
Snow On Round Tops (4 replies)
plan chit (2 replies)
Alexandria (1 replies)
Kitchen Table Conversations (2 replies)
June (1 replies)
Ashes of Amber (3 replies)
First Short Story ~ Feedback? (8 replies)
Two Eyes For a Finger (Another true story of my youth) (0 replies)
Auntie's Anti-fiction (136 replies)
Please help me with my story, ideas anything (0 replies)
Guidance (3 replies)
Elijah's Story (0 replies)
Hansel and Gretel Hide Grandma's Gold (3 replies)
Could anyone help to evaluate translation from Italian to english? (5 replies)
Lucas, in Love and Death (6,263 words short story) (4 replies)
(Time out of Mind) (1 replies)
Henry Pockets (0 replies)
And She Did Not Want to Be Real (0 replies)
Comatose (2 replies)
In Accordance [contains mature language] (3 replies)
She's Only Thirteen Your Honor (4 replies)
Match.com ----a little practice (2 replies)
The Spectator (0 replies)
Please review/edit my story, I need feedback. (3 replies)
Love's Chemistry (2 replies)
To Destroy Darkness (0 replies)
happiness (2 replies)
End of the Night (0 replies)
Assignment (feedback appreciated) (13 replies)
This is the first part of a dream I had (Part 2) (1 replies)
Colony of the Green Queens (0 replies)
A Love Universal (3 replies)
Breaking the Silence {Unfinished College Competition Entry} (1 replies)
son of dust on troubadour 21 (0 replies)
Mystical Nonphysician (0 replies)
Flipper does Tahiti------a cautionary tale (1 replies)
Eat at Lonesome Bachelor's (3 replies)
grief-action for a gcse course work (0 replies)
Project Icarus (3 replies)
Stop Story: The Gold Mask (69 replies)
Preview of my unfinished, sci-fi short story (7 replies)
Death at Mangix Inn (2 replies)
She Found Heaven (A short story) (10 replies)
Hi Hello. Good day to all beings! (4 replies)
Please please help--- my class will critique this story soon and i need input. (13 replies)
Three Part Story----created after shuffling cards (2 replies)
Dream (3 replies)
Ordinary (3 replies)
Need help immediately please! (6 replies)
The Bathroom (1 replies)
An accident on the hill. (1 replies)
She loves Me Not? (4 replies)
Hot Teenage Vampire Love a Halloween treat (5 replies)
The Unplanned Rendezvous (4 replies)
The Porcelain Planet (6 replies)
First Short Story - 'Broken.' (2 replies)
Awake (Weird romantic drama) (3 replies)
The Knight of Three Hairs... (1 replies)
Animalistic (1 replies)
Rage Against the Machine (1 replies)
The Staunch User (3 replies)
An Encounter With Rails (true story) (4 replies)
This is the first part of a dream I had (4 replies)
Happy to miss the train (2 replies)
The Theater of Morning (3 replies)
3-minute ''autobiographical story''. (1 replies)
A History of Potato Salad (4 replies)
Unnammed, Please comment or suggest name (0 replies)
Willy Maldonado 2 please comment (2 replies)
Judgment Day (0 replies)
The Ramble (0 replies)
"They Say" Please let me know what you think... (2 replies)
Trout Face Soup (5 replies)
A Portrait of the Vampire as a Young Woman (0 replies)
Dreadful Mornings (0 replies)
belt o'shadows (0 replies)
The Shortcut (The story I had submitted for June elimination) (1 replies)
Concerning the Soulless. (2 replies)
First short story ever,would like feedback (1 replies)
Rio Hannah please comment (0 replies)
150 words (23 replies)
Cheese Apocalypse (1 replies)
Silent Tears- 1434 (0 replies)
Another One Bites the Dust ... (1 replies)
In Power and Glory (2 replies)
Hells Bells - 1361 Words (3 replies)
The Antiquity please comment (1 replies)
"Memoirs of a Wallflower" (6 replies)
Short story about a dream. (1 replies)
The Sparrow - 1200 words (4 replies)
Two Worlds (0 replies)
Should I scrap this or continue writing it? (1 replies)
Gilberto Fernandez - A Short Story. In Need of Immediate Criticism. (1 replies)
Called "John's Cell", Very short, needs Validation (15 replies)
Hell's Kitchen (first draft) (6 replies)
Okay, what was wrong with "A Lesson in Humility"? (16 replies)
Pace, Pace (2 replies)
A Troll Story. Please comment! (0 replies)
One Happy Meal (Kindly comment) (24 replies)
Showering with the Chimps (0 replies)
Icemoon (4 replies)
Willy Maldonado (2 replies)
Old story rewritten let me know what you think. (2 replies)
A short narrative, would greatly appreciate any criticism (6 replies)
Snow angel (0 replies)
Disaster they said. (0 replies)
Pghrtacheaie'n (0 replies)
A bullet in the heart (0 replies)
The healers and the human heart (0 replies)
And now, at last... (0 replies)
A Choice to Make (0 replies)
PLEASE COMMENT first short story (7 replies)
a history of pain (part 1 of 2) (0 replies)
The angels of mons and le cateau (8 replies)
Terror of the Dead (1 replies)
Short Story: Baby Blue (1 replies)
Burst Bubbles (1 replies)
When all is Lost. (3 replies)
unfinished short story..can someone comment please.. (0 replies)
Broken (comments greatly appreciated) (5 replies)