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motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 03:03 AM
Single male baking
And dirtying every pot
Who will wash dishes?

And run like the wind
Tasting freedom’s adventure
Your youth is fleeting

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 03:05 AM
and run like the wind
do not seek, find Monet's rage
on your fingertips

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 03:07 AM
on your fingertips
is the power to caress
how tender love is

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 03:10 AM
How tender love is
In the cradle of your arm
I hear your heart beat

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 03:14 AM
motherhubbard is not really a motherhubbard, I learned today. Hi MH! :)

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 03:14 AM
I hear your heart beat
as we sway across the floor
but stay off my feet

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 03:17 AM
but stay off my feet
you always step on my toes
maybe we should sit

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 03:26 AM
maybe we should sit
on a sofa built for two
snuggle for awhile

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 03:30 AM
Snuggle for a while
It is cold out this morning
And warm here in bed

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 03:35 AM
And warm here in bed
my ice cold feet find a home
in your back ... oh no! :eek:

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 03:37 AM
In your back...oh no
the children stepped on a crack
drat those pesky kids!

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 03:40 AM
drat those pesky kids
i never knew goats ate tins
until i saw it ... :lol:

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 03:42 AM
until I saw it
I could not comprehend it
Evidence of love

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 03:55 AM
Evidence of love
pink roses upon her cheeks
bashful eyes look down

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 03:57 AM
bashful eyes look down
Where do we go when we die?
bashful eyes look down

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:00 AM
Bashful eyes look down
So difficult to decide
look up for a kiss

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 04:05 AM
look up for a kiss
It's geometry. Question:
Tell, who is that man?

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 04:08 AM
Tell, who is that man
a sagging face was once proud
such snow on the roof

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:08 AM
Tell, who is that man-
He makes me warm like lilac
Honey in his voice

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 04:09 AM
OH NO NOT AGAIN... http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s122/kiz_paws/Smilies/smilieguitaring.gif

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:09 AM
Such snow on the roof
It sparkles in the sunlight
And drips as it melts

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:10 AM
It's me, I'm sorry!

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 04:18 AM
And drips as it melts
that wistful dream of my heart
the nay-sayers won

T'is not you, M-H ... but this is fun dancing with you and Jon! :thumbs_up

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:21 AM
The nay-sayers won
But that’s not the end of me
I will fight again

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 04:22 AM
Honey in his voice
not some mere infinite love,
only she would see____________

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:25 AM
only she would see
she sees, but she says nothing
heart full of secrets

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 04:39 AM
heart full of secrets
Is that why children are born
weeping in white light?

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:41 AM
Weeping in white lights
no shelter in which to hide
Why lie to yourself?

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 04:44 AM
Why lie to yourself
when truth is at your doorstep
whining to come in

motherhubbard
02-02-2008, 04:45 AM
whining to come in
will not get you through the door
say goodnight, Gracie

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 04:49 AM
say goodnight, Gracie
roll those stockings off your legs
and let your feet soak

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 04:53 AM
and let your feet soak
in a place sweet with sleep sweat.
This ain't no disco

firefangled
02-02-2008, 09:28 AM
Angels left L A
they wait at San Simeon
for the judgement day

alakungfu
02-02-2008, 09:55 AM
This ain't no disco
No heaven for the retro
But a jammin' track



For the Judgment Day
approaching ominously
through prophetic shadows

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 12:10 PM
But a jammin' track
pumps me up at my workout
crank up the volume! :p

alakungfu
02-02-2008, 12:44 PM
Crank up the volume
Play up your waveringly
Clangorous racket

TheFifthElement
02-02-2008, 01:00 PM
Clangerous racket
wails from beneath my car's hood
signalling expense.

alakungfu
02-02-2008, 01:22 PM
Signalling expense,
Hastily my billfold wraps
My remaining cash.

RobinHood3000
02-02-2008, 01:53 PM
My remaining cash
Is spent to purchase for me
A Firefly-class.

zanna
02-02-2008, 07:27 PM
a Firefly-class
surely sounds interesting
what do they teach you?

jon1jt
02-02-2008, 07:32 PM
a Firefly-class
surely sounds interesting
what do they teach you?

What do they teach you?
It's what I unteach myself;
and teach, tenderness.

kiz_paws
02-02-2008, 09:33 PM
And teach tenderness
lest aesthetics escape us
in the quest for Self

alakungfu
02-03-2008, 10:20 AM
In the quest for Self,
Ego plays the primary;
It's down to business.

kiz_paws
02-03-2008, 02:02 PM
It's down to business
the pot of gold has been found
and the Rainbow weeps

Janine
02-03-2008, 04:06 PM
And the Rainbow weeps;
Generations in pure drops
Reflecting brilliance.

Jane Jane
02-03-2008, 04:40 PM
find their answers soon
or fall into time and space-
all alone in thought

Janine
02-03-2008, 05:18 PM
Jane Jane, the way you play this game is, you take the last line of the person's Haiku above you, and then create the rest of your Haiku; sorry to have to be the one to tell you this...your haiku is quite lovely though...

alakungfu
02-03-2008, 11:04 PM
Reflecting brilliance
Crescendoing water gusts
Ripple like harp strings.

motherhubbard
02-04-2008, 01:24 AM
Ripple like harp strings
Becoming strong like thunder
A deep moaning growl

kiz_paws
02-04-2008, 02:42 AM
A deep moaning growl
a certain car hit the fence
and (***) hit the fan!

dramasnot6
02-04-2008, 04:53 PM
:lol: Kiz! (love it!)

And (***) hit the fan!
Fumbling for some clarity
Everything turned queer.

alakungfu
02-04-2008, 06:13 PM
Everything turned queer,
reeked of sheer perversity,
and flaked off in scents.

dramasnot6
02-04-2008, 06:57 PM
And flaked off in scents
Melting chocolate chip cookies
Come to a crumble

kiz_paws
02-04-2008, 09:20 PM
Come to a crumble
these people we call leaders ...
... Who can we count on?

:lol: dramas -- time to boogie, eh? ha ha! :thumbs_up

jon1jt
02-04-2008, 10:18 PM
... Who can we count on?
dream of fever, murky light,
the 'I' of incense.

motherhubbard
02-04-2008, 10:39 PM
the 'I' of incense
Or the ‘O’ of obsession?
This room smells of you

_JadeRain_
02-05-2008, 12:14 AM
This room smells of you
Filled with the rare, sweet perfume
Even though you're gone

mazHur
02-05-2008, 01:31 AM
Everything turned queer
faces turned into pumpkins
what a Halloween!

kiz_paws
02-05-2008, 01:17 PM
Even though you're gone
my heart keeps up the pattern
silk sheets and magic

[maz, cool haiku, but that line had been addressed a few posts ago... sorry I didn't follow yours]

motherhubbard
02-05-2008, 01:27 PM
Silk sheets and magic
First time butterflies drown in
One more glass of wine

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 01:56 AM
One more glass of wine
enables me to see things
as they really are :p

symphony
02-06-2008, 01:58 AM
One more glass of wine
to go with the cerise dusk
thawing the red sun

symphony
02-06-2008, 02:02 AM
oops!

as they really are
up on my tv screen, i
try to shoo them off...

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 02:07 AM
try to shoo them off
these happy vibes of my love
they are in too deep

symphony
02-06-2008, 02:13 AM
they are in too deep
the dews in the leaves' grooves are
too palled to rain down...

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 02:16 AM
too palled to rain down
and wash away the image
my tears are frozen

Hello to you, symphony! :wave:

symphony
02-06-2008, 02:26 AM
my tears are frozen,
my flesh in ashes last, marred
skin and sculptured face...

Hiya Kiz :wave:

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 02:31 AM
skin and sculptured face
remained in his fevered mind
and carried him home

symphony
02-06-2008, 02:44 AM
and carried him home--
to donjons, the only light was
the white albatross
...

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 02:53 AM
the white albatross
spread his magnificant wings
and called out his song

symphony
02-06-2008, 03:00 AM
and called out his song
"Aint no sunshine when she's gone"
to Julia Roberts :p

(i love this song from Notting Hill, listening to it right now)

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 03:05 AM
to Julia Roberts
tripping the light fantastic
with her gleaming smile

symphony
02-06-2008, 03:51 AM
with her gleaming smile
she watched the sun play tricks, watched
olive leaves go gold...

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 03:59 AM
olive leaves go gold
I find my small bent halo
try to make it fit

symphony
02-06-2008, 04:05 AM
try to make it fit
just how much brain do you need
to fill an eggcup

kiz_paws
02-06-2008, 04:08 AM
to fill an eggcup
the easter bunny melted
I sat and wondered

_JadeRain_
02-06-2008, 12:55 PM
I sat a wondered
What the future has in store
Possibilities

Pensive
02-06-2008, 04:11 PM
Possibilities
Ever-ready to occur
When never needed

dramasnot6
02-06-2008, 06:00 PM
When never needed,
Hearts drift, gray clouds on blue skies
We love to be loved.

jon1jt
02-06-2008, 10:02 PM
Yea dramas! :)


We love to be loved,
or to want nothing at all.
Talk to me next week.

dramasnot6
02-06-2008, 11:04 PM
Talk to me next week
These days, I have been dipping
In lonely waters

kiz_paws
02-07-2008, 12:45 AM
In lonely waters
sea nymphs play their windswept songs
the tide is now out

Il Penseroso
02-07-2008, 01:18 AM
the tide is now out,
specks of sand listlessly dry
under liquid stars.

kiz_paws
02-07-2008, 12:31 PM
Under liquid stars
lovers whisper sensual thoughts
sharing body warmth

jon1jt
02-07-2008, 12:34 PM
sharing body warmth;
to be tucked under a star
where one sleeps to breathe.

symphony
02-07-2008, 03:27 PM
where one sleeps to breathe
the utopian silvern air
of redolent dreams...

jon1jt
02-07-2008, 05:27 PM
of redolent dreams...
young faces in snow-streaked light.
Later they'd make love.

Il Penseroso
02-07-2008, 05:34 PM
of redolent dreams,
flowers melt, sunlight filters
through kitchen windows


d'oh, you beat me to it!

later they'd make love
snuggle and tease words through lips,
tensely self-aware

jon1jt
02-07-2008, 05:59 PM
tensely self-aware.
Crowds, the unforgiving clock--
working its sweet time

Il Penseroso
02-07-2008, 06:03 PM
working its sweet time
beating a pulse in membranes
connected through rhyme

kiz_paws
02-07-2008, 07:39 PM
Connected through rhyme
two little notes dance their way
from my heart to yours

dramasnot6
02-07-2008, 07:52 PM
Jon, IP, and Kiz??!! I can't compete!

From my heart to yours-
An unforgiving tremor,
Shaking us senseless.

jon1jt
02-07-2008, 08:30 PM
oh now now dramas you rock :)



Shaking us senseless;
Jack London's To Build A Fire,
that kiss of warm snow.

kiz_paws
02-07-2008, 09:48 PM
that kiss of warm snow
melted days of agony;
on with the loving :blush:

[drama, I echo the sentiment -- you rock! Wished everyone in the house would join us, this is soooooo much fun! :)]

jon1jt
02-07-2008, 10:32 PM
on with the loving
whirring, slapping sticky street...
child wants crayons.

motherhubbard
02-07-2008, 11:17 PM
a child wants crayons
castle coloring books take
a lot of purple

dramasnot6
02-08-2008, 01:31 AM
:blush: Thanks for the kind words Jon and Kiz. :D

A lot of purple
Caresses my sheets, my sea
Tints royal sunsets.

kiz_paws
02-08-2008, 02:51 AM
:blush: Thanks for the kind words Jon and Kiz. :D

A lot of purple
Caresses my sheets, my sea
Tints royal sunsets.You are very welcome, and this was a total gem, drama! Go drama Go! :thumbs_up



jon ... "to be tucked under a star" ... I LOVED this line ... it will stick with me for a long time to come.... beautiful! :thumbs_up

Tints royal sunsets
slivers of gold slowly melt
into azure skies

symphony
02-08-2008, 08:58 AM
into azure skies
a covey of plumy wings
enshrouding the blue...

motherhubbard
02-08-2008, 10:36 AM
Enshrouding the blue
heaven's starry skies shine bright
map to briny ships

kiz_paws
02-08-2008, 12:08 PM
map to briny ships
sail the seven shades of blue
each day a new port

dramasnot6
02-08-2008, 12:34 PM
Each day, a new port
Tasting waters of passion
Bottled ecstasy

Thanks for the props kiz! And the cool starter line!

Riesa
02-08-2008, 07:35 PM
bottled ecstasy
contains the mess for a bit,
skin is weaker than

motherhubbard
02-09-2008, 01:22 AM
skin is weaker than
time's steady pace, bringing us
close to our goodnight

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 02:10 AM
close to our goodnight.
You lay yourself beside me,
your toes painted wet.

:p

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 02:41 AM
Your toes painted wet
stand in the way of passion
or was it the wine... :p

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 03:06 AM
or was it the wine...
but we'd never see the sea
if I told the truth.

:p

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 03:14 AM
If I told the truth
kaleidoscope reaction
fumbling in the dark

[sorry, I have to chuckle there... :lol: ]

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 03:46 AM
:p

fumbling in the dark,
stuck with these wobbling eyes,
searching for heart-switch.

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 04:03 AM
Hey ...I like! :lol:

Searching for heart-switch
needing no help, just kisses
melt down the igloo

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 04:09 AM
now that's a cool haikuuuuu Kzzzz!

melt down the igloo,
I felt so greedy and shy...
all that water, mine!

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 04:21 AM
now that's a cool haikuuuuu Kzzzz!

melt down the igloo,
I felt so greedy and shy...
all that water, mine!Cool eh? Ha ha! ya got me!


All that water, mine
it slid, slipped, but got away
raindrops can't be caught

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 04:29 AM
raindrops can't be caught,
but they can be stopped by lips;
let's dream of angels.

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 04:32 AM
Let's dream of angels
on fluffy pillows so soft
in a bed of pure white snow

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 04:42 AM
in a bed of pure white snow
the sun burns away the mist,
leaves a canvas, paint!

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 04:46 AM
Leaves a canvas, paint!
and the artist softly smiles
knowing he has touched

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 04:52 AM
knowing he has touched,
hands along your face in prayer.
Shucks, it's kind of sad.

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 04:59 AM
Shucks, it's kind of sad
its too cold to go outside
I hang up my skates

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 05:08 AM
I hang up my skates,
I think of the Book of Luke.
Did Luke write with wine?

TheFifthElement
02-09-2008, 10:44 AM
Did Luke write with wine
or blood, staining the page with
words of violence?

motherhubbard
02-09-2008, 05:07 PM
Words of violence
Venting his secret anger
Showed her no mercy

alakungfu
02-09-2008, 07:42 PM
Showed her no mercy
Shaved the resolve from his restraint
Surrendered to love

jon1jt
02-09-2008, 09:49 PM
Surrendered to love,
painting apples like Cezanne,
only one tree bears.

Il Penseroso
02-09-2008, 10:05 PM
yay cezanne!

only one tree bears
the graceful drip of knowledge
split from sprouted seeds

kiz_paws
02-09-2008, 10:06 PM
split from sprouted seeds
and a tree grows in Brooklyn
how I want to climb

Il Penseroso
02-09-2008, 10:58 PM
how I want to climb
the tempered drift of storm winds,
lazy carousel

kiz_paws
02-10-2008, 12:20 AM
Lazy carousel
porcelain ponies so bright
make me five again...

alakungfu
02-10-2008, 02:56 AM
Make me live again...
Going broke with richer men
Staking the whole house

kiz_paws
02-11-2008, 01:53 AM
Staking the whole house
what is mine will be for me
my fence will make sure

this is NOT me, but it fit the haiku ... don't mind me, I just felt compelled to tell you this...

dramasnot6
02-11-2008, 02:18 PM
My fence will make sure
Rabbits shall never invade
Australian blues

kiz_paws
02-11-2008, 04:23 PM
Australian blues
meet Canadian boogey
oh what a party!

alakungfu
02-11-2008, 06:05 PM
Oh what a party
late September underneath
The stars. Man, it rocked.

barbara0207
02-11-2008, 06:49 PM
The stars. Man, it rocked.
And the gorgeous Northern Lights
above Kiz' prairie. :D

alakungfu
02-11-2008, 09:47 PM
Above Kiz' prairie
'gainst the Rocky Mountain rim
generous windsong

Riesa
02-11-2008, 09:48 PM
generous windsong
float stars pinned to night, wind twists
their bright bodies, chime

kiz_paws
02-12-2008, 03:54 AM
The stars. Man, it rocked.
And the gorgeous Northern Lights
above Kiz' prairie. :D
sweet, barbara! :thumbs_up


Their bright bodies, chime
with the sound of breaking glass
tossed to the mantle

alakungfu
02-12-2008, 06:52 AM
Tossed to the mantle
breaking the crust off the ice
forever freeze-dry

kiz_paws
02-12-2008, 12:35 PM
forever freeze-dry
the planet as we know it
keep the tradition

symphony
02-12-2008, 12:51 PM
keep the tradition,
rant on, no matter how well
you're paid, aint enough
...

shini
02-12-2008, 12:55 PM
you"re paid ,aint enough
heart breakes
tears falls

dramasnot6
02-12-2008, 01:37 PM
Welcome to Litnet shini!
the way a Haiku works, is the first line is 5 syllables, the second is 7, and the last also 5

alakungfu
02-12-2008, 02:17 PM
You're paid, ain't enough
not like shootin' the cool breeze
Are you feeling me?

kiz_paws
02-12-2008, 03:37 PM
Are you feeling me
or is it two dimensions
only that you see

alakungfu
02-12-2008, 04:39 PM
Only that you see,
really see me, the heart's ship
that's been run aground

motherhubbard
02-12-2008, 11:30 PM
That’s been run aground
And there is no hope left for it
Please change the subject

symphony
02-12-2008, 11:41 PM
Please change the subject.
Isnt that an awesome drink?
Need one more? Waiter!

motherhubbard
02-12-2008, 11:45 PM
Need one more? Waiter!
Please bring us some more dessert.
And warm the coffee

symphony
02-13-2008, 12:01 AM
And warm the coffee
the evening's growing dark, on
your mercerized hair...

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 12:46 AM
your mercerized hair
matched the disco ball earrings
and five inch heeled shoes

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 01:14 AM
I'm back!


and five inch heeled shoes.
She stands beyond the windmills,
where the main star sails.

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 01:17 AM
where the main star sails
in the oceans of our hearts
we hide the anchor

symphony
02-13-2008, 01:22 AM
we hide the anchor
lest the albatrosses see
our woes aground

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 01:25 AM
go symphy, go kizzy, go me! :p


our woes aground
in a field of tulips stream,
on whose shoulder weep.

symphony
02-13-2008, 01:32 AM
heya jon and kiz :wave:

on whose shoulder weep
a thousand phoenixes, their
tears healing wounds...

ntropyincarnate
02-13-2008, 01:33 AM
On whose shoulder we weep,
But fear betrayal by the
Hand that offers love.

symphony
02-13-2008, 01:46 AM
tears healing wounds
dewdrops washed away from leaves
for a greater rain…

hand that offers love
touching the lilacs, waiting
for a greater rain…

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 01:51 AM
Bang bang, very nice!



for a greater rain;
the same with a greater road:
it's where it takes you.

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 01:54 AM
it's where it takes you
do you want to go or not
ride those waves in life

C'mon everyone, don't be shy! Jump in :p

Il Penseroso
02-13-2008, 01:56 AM
it's where it takes you,
the end a yellowed sliver,
curved, entering hills


I tried kiz!

ride those waves in life
fleck mist, careen with the spray
dipping up from myths.

symphony
02-13-2008, 01:57 AM
ride those waves in life
the ones that have silver domes
as fumes of fierce speed...


Edit: :lol: again! lemme see....

curved, entering hills,
a path goes u-turn, with dents
as fumes of fierce speed...

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 02:01 AM
Dipping up from myths
pixie dust sugars a trail
shyly I follow

*** what the heck are we doing?! *** :lol:


as fumes of fierce speed
intoxicate and confuse
a battle is won

[Love it when it is a free-for-all .... where's Jon? Yoooo hooooo!] ;)

symphony
02-13-2008, 02:06 AM
okay i'm lost now! :lol:


shyly i follow
hurrying to catch up with
the maestros on work... :D

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 02:15 AM
the maestros on work
black notes on parchment paper
that yellows with age

symphony
02-13-2008, 02:22 AM
that yellows with age,
scriptures of faith: sanctities
and causes questioned...

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 02:29 AM
:wave: Hey Symphony! This is fun :)

and causes questioned
sips of grog and eyes of mud
the parrot glowers

symphony
02-13-2008, 02:43 AM
sure is :D

the parrot glowers
at human attempts to teach
silly gags, riddles

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 02:59 AM
silly gags, riddles
rainbow confetti smiles on
a sea of people

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 03:01 AM
I'm back, yippeee! (my darn computer plug fell out again! grrr!)

silly gags, riddles:
Gregorian chants were once
dreams in my half-sleep.

symphony
02-13-2008, 03:11 AM
welcome back ;)


the sea of people
moving in seething waves in
search of perfection…



dreams in my half-sleep
meandering thoughts that stray in
search of perfection…

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 03:13 AM
thank ye ms. poetiphonica. :p

search for perfection,
living fantasies and dreams,
like kids in the dark.

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 03:20 AM
like kids in the dark
we scoped out the next decade
as Loki giggled

symphony
02-13-2008, 03:22 AM
like kids in the dark
squalling for a mamma who,
otherwise, just barks!


Edit: not again! too slow to even catch cold, aint i? :D
Fix it, maestros. I'm off for a shower. Gotta get ready for an exam too, Cya. ;)

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 03:27 AM
study?!! yuck! :)

otherwise, just barks!
arf..arf...arfarf..arfarfarf!
doggie wants a treat.

:p

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 03:33 AM
doggie wants a treat
kitty laughs and tells that dog
go and help yourself

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 03:35 AM
go and help yourself,
kitty has a change of mind
and raids cookie jar

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 03:36 AM
and raids cookie jar
while Nero fiddled deftly
the Doughboy just sighs

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 03:40 AM
the Doughboy just sighs.
With a depth of compassion,
Aunt Jemima laughs.

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 03:44 AM
Aunt Jemima laughs
her humour is delightful
my mornings are fun

jon1jt
02-13-2008, 03:55 AM
and this poet takes off his hat...night night Kizzer. Much fun. :)

my mornings are fun,
knowing all previous days
lack its kissy flow.

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 04:00 AM
Lack its kissy flow
polluted rivers choke on
the fish stop dancing

thanks for the pie, it's been a slice!! :nod:

mazHur
02-13-2008, 06:31 AM
the fish stop dancing
poor Darwin turns in his grave
evolution stops!

alakungfu
02-13-2008, 07:52 AM
evolution stops
equivocal tension sends
bovine smoke signals

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 02:39 PM
bovine smoke signals
in the fields of golden grain
clouds above whisper

alakungfu
02-13-2008, 04:24 PM
clouds above whisper
indefatigable rain
faced before a fall

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 06:21 PM
faced before a fall
tears stain the porcelain doll
sightless eyes so sad

mazHur
02-13-2008, 06:35 PM
sightless eyes so sad
grope in the dark aimlessly
love hidden in heart

kiz_paws
02-13-2008, 06:42 PM
love hidden in heart
that cannot blossom until
the seeds meet sunbeams

alakungfu
02-13-2008, 07:05 PM
the seeds meet sunbeams
in the core of this being
transcendence submerged

kiz_paws
02-14-2008, 12:31 AM
transcendence submerged
the pool of human pity
seeks to defrost time

symphony
02-14-2008, 12:47 AM
seeks to defrost time
from its sepulchral sculptures
hinged to timelessness...

kiz_paws
02-14-2008, 12:53 AM
hinged to timelessness
bluebirds speak to hummingbirds
over morning tea

symphony
02-14-2008, 01:02 AM
over morning tea
the first sun rays play tricks and
makes gilded whiskey....

kiz_paws
02-14-2008, 01:07 AM
makes gilded whiskey
the old man turned the handle
smiling through the cracks

symphony
02-14-2008, 01:15 AM
smiling through the cracks
silvern moonbeams perforate
tall benighted walls


mornin' kiz ;)

motherhubbard
02-14-2008, 01:27 AM
tall benighted walls
what hides beneath your shadow?
Frightening memory

kiz_paws
02-14-2008, 01:43 AM
Frightening memory
painted smiles on grimey face
yellow eyes peer out

mazHur
02-14-2008, 06:57 AM
yellow eyes peer out
from sockets of jaundiced death
life is moribund!

alakungfu
02-14-2008, 08:02 AM
Life is moribund!
Armed to its reflective teeth
Tough competition

mazHur
02-14-2008, 08:20 AM
Tough competition
you and me in love, let's see
who wins who loses?

alakungfu
02-14-2008, 08:58 AM
who wins who loses?
to complete the web of life
at your dying point

mazHur
02-14-2008, 01:09 PM
at your dying point
the clock of time seems to stop
life rewinds itself

alakungfu
02-14-2008, 02:14 PM
life rewinds itself
through the misty veil of pasts
over with one day

dramasnot6
02-14-2008, 03:25 PM
Over with one day
I dammed your flood of kisses
No more Valentine.

</3

alakungfu
02-14-2008, 05:39 PM
No more Valentine
Bridge from Eve to Clementine
Fails for all their strain

mazHur
02-14-2008, 05:51 PM
Fails for all their strain
is not true of Valentine
kisses give it strenght

_JadeRain_
02-14-2008, 06:18 PM
Kisses give strength
Unless they are from brothers
He is annoying

mazHur
02-14-2008, 06:55 PM
He is annoying
I can't stand him any more
on Valentine day

TheFifthElement
02-15-2008, 04:49 AM
On Valentines day
I shivered in the cold wind
watching petals fall

mazHur
02-15-2008, 04:53 AM
watching petals fall
reminds me of the frailty
of life in this world

alakungfu
02-15-2008, 08:33 AM
of life in this world
of love charts in the next realm
success revival

kiz_paws
02-15-2008, 01:10 PM
success revival
back onto the horse I go
and start all over

TheFifthElement
02-15-2008, 02:35 PM
and start all over -
go back to the beginning
before it happened.

alakungfu
02-15-2008, 03:29 PM
before it happened.
The rough, the loose, the graven
individual

mazHur
02-15-2008, 06:47 PM
individual
is the beauty of her love
typical her ways

alakungfu
02-15-2008, 09:59 PM
typical her ways
as the flecks of western lights
considering the stars

motherhubbard
02-15-2008, 10:03 PM
considering the stars
She set off for her journey
Adventure at sea

kiz_paws
02-15-2008, 11:57 PM
Adventure at sea
foamy blue waters hiding
mermaids so pretty

Il Penseroso
02-15-2008, 11:59 PM
adventure at sea,
rollicking shouts, sunsets carved
by an ample breeze

d'oh

mermaids so pretty
lounging their sticky green tails
on salt covered stones

kiz_paws
02-16-2008, 12:14 AM
on salt covered stones
the sea trickled so gently
driftwood lies dormant

mazHur
02-16-2008, 06:38 AM
driftwood lies dormant
like a rat gripped by a trap
sighing its last breath

alakungfu
02-16-2008, 08:14 AM
sighing its last breath
gently slumping into still
spent assuaging ease

symphony
02-16-2008, 10:04 AM
spent assuaging ease
the lyrics in the leaves once
the rain is over...

motherhubbard
02-16-2008, 10:36 AM
the rain is over
the thirst of the earth is quenched
birds sing their sweet song

alakungfu
02-16-2008, 01:21 PM
birds sing their sweet song,
hungry peanut gallery
spouting accolades

kiz_paws
02-16-2008, 03:02 PM
spouting accolades
and who is the dreamiest
oh, the teen idols...

alakungfu
02-16-2008, 06:53 PM
oh, the teen idols...
how they have changed since Elvis -
but, no, not really

lucidnightmares
02-16-2008, 10:52 PM
but, no, not really
this pain, it can`t be denied
but the tears will pass

Il Penseroso
02-17-2008, 12:59 AM
but the tears will pass,
a storm no longer under
eyelids grown breathless

jon1jt
02-17-2008, 01:05 AM
Yea IP's here!

eyelids grown breathless
like two notes that fly to sea,
caught in a mood swing.

Il Penseroso
02-17-2008, 01:07 AM
yea! jon's laptop is working!!

caught in a mood swing,
a terrible binary
shift of memory

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 01:10 AM
caught in a mood swing
should he stay or should he go
I need some choc'lit ;)

jon1jt
02-17-2008, 01:12 AM
:lol: right on!

shift of memory.
oh let us sing, sing kumbaya
to good memories!

Il Penseroso
02-17-2008, 01:15 AM
to good memories
a cheery nod, swinging bangs.
I need some choc'lit.

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 01:24 AM
[We interupt this thread to say YOU ROCK, Il Penseroso]! :p

I need some choc'lit
that will fix my ying and yang
make me whole once more

Il Penseroso
02-17-2008, 01:33 AM
thanks! you pretty much kick *** too kiz!

make me whole once more
vocal chords ran together
scratching a blues tune

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 01:36 AM
scratching a blues tune
the dusty man holds his cap
and sings his heart out

jon1jt
02-17-2008, 01:39 AM
and sings his heart out,
"The earth is shaped like a tear!"
People find me strange.

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 01:41 AM
People find me strange
but hey I like it like that
just what IS normal :p

jon1jt
02-17-2008, 01:43 AM
just what IS normal.
The world is round; buy that car.
Oh I don't fit in.

:p

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 01:44 AM
Oh I don't fit in
square peg in a round hole
life is so much fun!

jon1jt
02-17-2008, 01:53 AM
life is so much fun.
"I want to see what whaling is."
Said he to Ahab.

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 02:51 AM
Said he to Ahab
who was stuck on a trident
of an angry god :eek:

TheFifthElement
02-17-2008, 04:52 AM
Wow you guys! Love the vibe, wish I lived in the America's and could join you.

of an angry god
I seek forgiveness, raise hands
scraped to the bare bone

alakungfu
02-17-2008, 08:49 AM
scraped to the bare bone
opaque depths of ivory casts
razed to a cruel fate

TheFifthElement
02-17-2008, 09:30 AM
razed to a cruel fate
bodies litter the highway
like pebbles on sand

alakungfu
02-17-2008, 01:33 PM
like pebbles on sand,
secluded outcasts rumbling
off river highways

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 02:04 PM
off river highways
shells sleep among the driftwood
wind whispers echos

alakungfu
02-17-2008, 03:37 PM
wind whispers echos
into the deaf background noise
of the wild city

kiz_paws
02-17-2008, 11:38 PM
of the wild city
black eyes, cauliflower ears
oh Saturday nights

Il Penseroso
02-18-2008, 12:05 AM
oh Saturday nights
bled dry, drifting Sunday fog
the past is erased