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mazHur
07-30-2008, 09:49 AM
others who suffer
may be destined to suffer
they should blame their slate
CdnReader
07-30-2008, 10:05 AM
they should blame their slate (state?)
life's not lived in a fishbowl
the world contributes
mazHur
07-30-2008, 11:57 AM
WELL, I MEant slate,,,ie slate on which god wrote our fates!
mazHur
07-30-2008, 12:01 PM
the world contributes
to the sufferings of people
roses, thorns and storms
CdnReader
07-30-2008, 12:18 PM
roses, thorns and storms (great line, Maz)
find the beauty in amongst
forces of nature
qimissung
07-30-2008, 10:36 PM
forces of nature
the sky a green lantern and
earth holding her breath
firefangled
07-31-2008, 12:04 AM
earth holding her breath
she's been here before, always
the patient mother
CdnReader
07-31-2008, 11:59 AM
the patient mother
smiling and quiet, while they
paint stars overhead
asilef73
08-02-2008, 11:40 PM
paint stars overhead
and sketch a harvest moon to
diminish the dark
CdnReader
08-03-2008, 09:43 AM
diminish the dark
with a bright golden presence
shed light on the lost
qimissung
08-07-2008, 08:13 PM
shed light on the lost
toss golden coins of knowledge
to the benighted
CdnReader
08-08-2008, 11:26 AM
to the benighted
who face the stars with courage
craft paddled forward
Il Penseroso
08-09-2008, 01:59 AM
craft paddled forward,
the rowboat tug propelling
one through blurred star waves
ampoule
08-09-2008, 08:58 AM
one through blurred star waves
tries to still the breaking points
with her touch, they sink
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 10:28 AM
with her touch, they sink,
harbour bright, sparkling droplets,
then rise again, whole
(Welcome back, Amp.)
Janine
08-09-2008, 01:55 PM
then rise again, whole
restrictions of blood and bone
crumble into ash
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 02:45 PM
crumble into ash
weightless white falls from fingers
drift earthward in clumps
mazHur
08-09-2008, 03:12 PM
drift earthward in clumps
wind its bitter enemy
blows it here and there
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 03:15 PM
blows it here and there
as if no one really cares
how the others fare
mazHur
08-09-2008, 03:30 PM
how the others fare
go out and find if you dare
ghouls, ghosts and ogres!
qimissung
08-09-2008, 03:57 PM
ghouls, ghosts and ogres
tremble at the great one's breath
fly Halloween leaves!
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 04:03 PM
fly Halloween leaves!
orange and rust, smoke and burn,
fill the autumn air
barbara0207
08-09-2008, 04:45 PM
fill the autumn air
with the sweet smell of apples,
my orchard, my Eden.
mazHur
08-09-2008, 05:13 PM
my orchard, my Eden,
may angels take care of you
let spring be your fate
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 06:31 PM
let spring be your fate
once covered with fallen leaves
now icicles drip
mazHur
08-09-2008, 06:39 PM
now icicles drip
like snow covered thorns in fall
rosy weather gone!
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 07:07 PM
rosy weather gone
lost in the fall's creeping chill
snowflakes will fly soon
qimissung
08-09-2008, 08:00 PM
snowflakes will fly soon
ebullient children doing
jubilant cartwheels
CdnReader
08-09-2008, 08:17 PM
jubilant cartwheels
right side up, then upside down,
over and over
qimissung
08-09-2008, 08:49 PM
over and over
I fall in and out of love
oh my life, my soul!
NickLinsky
08-09-2008, 09:33 PM
Oh my life, my soul!
Am I here beyond my brain?
Am I done on death?
symphony
08-10-2008, 01:45 AM
am i done on death?
will my soul be disgorged with
the last shaky breath?
amuse
08-10-2008, 02:36 AM
the last shaky breath
the last clumsy step: holy
cow patties! fell stench!
TheFifthElement
08-10-2008, 05:09 AM
cow patties! fell stench!
low-lowing beasts, how you graze
everything you touch!
CdnReader
08-10-2008, 09:52 AM
everything you touch
crumbles into loving dust
fills my life with you
(Welcome back, Fifth. Your words were missed.)
qimissung
08-10-2008, 09:26 PM
fills my life with you
liquid solvent of your love
frothy to the brim
kiz_paws
08-10-2008, 10:01 PM
Frothy to the brim
drink the bubbles for good luck
that is what they say ...
Janine
08-10-2008, 11:02 PM
Hi Kiz, I missed all of you when I was gone...glad to be back!
that is what they say...
no one ever seems to know,
tell me, who are - 'they'?
firefangled
08-11-2008, 12:07 AM
tell me, who are they
for whom life is not a cage
but an endless sky
CdnReader
08-11-2008, 11:07 AM
but an endless sky
blue horizons vanish in
cloudless drifts of air
mazHur
08-11-2008, 11:19 AM
cloudless drifts of air
drag the threadless kite of life
to a world unknown
CdnReader
08-11-2008, 11:26 AM
to a world unknown
the reality hidden
within, without, there!
mazHur
08-11-2008, 11:38 AM
within, without, there
hides in the cosmic secret
a secret unknown
CdnReader
08-11-2008, 01:09 PM
a secret unknown
tucked in a black velvet pouch
kept from prying eyes
symphony
08-11-2008, 01:23 PM
kept from prying eyes
an innocent box of chocs
and a hushed chuckle
mazHur
08-11-2008, 03:04 PM
and a hushed chuckle
sounded from the Sunder Bans
tigress took my smile
CdnReader
08-11-2008, 04:22 PM
tigress took my smile
pasted it over her scowl
impersonation
mazHur
08-11-2008, 04:26 PM
impersonation
is necessary in love
for the moon to shine
CdnReader
08-11-2008, 04:39 PM
for the moon to shine
sprinkle daily with sugar
crystallization!
mazHur
08-11-2008, 06:24 PM
crystallization
is all you need to make sweet
caramel,honey!
CdnReader
08-12-2008, 02:03 PM
caramel, honey-
dipped donuts, and chocolate chips....
my guilty pleasures
asilef73
08-13-2008, 01:04 AM
my guilty pleasures?
the texture of his skin and
the weight of his eyes.
qimissung
08-13-2008, 01:20 AM
the weight of his eyes
the breadth of his reach wraps me
in silvery love
Janine
08-13-2008, 01:21 AM
the weight of his eyes
numb lids close and gaze within
too much to perceive
symphony
08-13-2008, 07:17 AM
too much to percieve
eyes welled up to the windows
too close to the rain
firefangled
08-13-2008, 08:30 AM
too close to the rain
too far from that love of mine
Chattanooga blues
CdnReader
08-13-2008, 11:28 AM
Chattanooga blues
ukelele string plucking
lively melody
ampoule
08-14-2008, 09:49 AM
lively melody
your fingers fretting my skin
what is this new tune
mazHur
08-14-2008, 09:51 AM
what is this new tune
that stirs the strings of your heart
and makes it giggle!
CdnReader
08-14-2008, 10:59 AM
and makes it giggle
shake and shiver with delight
up and down my spine
mazHur
08-14-2008, 11:06 AM
up and down my spine
your love moves like an ocean
of emotions deep
CdnReader
08-14-2008, 11:36 AM
of emotions deep
i will not speak, until we are
better acquainted
mazHur
08-14-2008, 11:39 AM
better acquainted
you get with thorns if you come
closer to flowers!
CdnReader
08-14-2008, 02:34 PM
closer to flowers
enjoy life with bumblebees
grazing by your nose
mazHur
08-14-2008, 03:28 PM
grazing by your nose
a bumblebee kissed her cheek
then lunged for the lips
CdnReader
08-14-2008, 04:34 PM
then lunged for the lips
with a straight and even gaze
that belied his goals
mazHur
08-14-2008, 04:42 PM
that belied his goals
his ambitions which every
young heart aspires for
CdnReader
08-14-2008, 05:26 PM
young heart aspires for
good friends, good times, and reaching
for the distant stars
mazHur
08-14-2008, 05:43 PM
for the distant stars
yearns every loving heart but
never gets near them
barbara0207
08-14-2008, 06:14 PM
never gets near them,
never gets to share their souls,
outcast forever
mazHur
08-14-2008, 06:18 PM
outcast forever
as if i was'nt human
but damn Lucifer!
CdnReader
08-14-2008, 06:50 PM
but damn Lucifer
and his flame-heated basement
where to escape this?
mazHur
08-14-2008, 07:28 PM
where to escape this?
well, you can come to saint's hut
quipped with all good things!
kiz_paws
08-14-2008, 09:39 PM
quipped with all good things
a Baker plies his sweet trade
the hot ovens call
Oniw17
08-14-2008, 09:47 PM
The hot ovens call
Hel draws me torward seduction
Am I disciplined?
mazHur
08-15-2008, 10:10 AM
Am I disciplined?
Am I doing what is right?
Redundant questions!
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 11:09 AM
redundant questions
and always the same answers
awfully boring
mazHur
08-15-2008, 11:19 AM
awfully boring
the exuberance of spring
seems without you
symphony
08-15-2008, 11:31 AM
seems without you
there is no us, only me
with my lonely sighs
mazHur
08-15-2008, 11:37 AM
with my lonely sighs
i rent the sky asunder
until he appeared
symphony
08-15-2008, 11:49 AM
until he appeared
the rain had no dreams threaded
with its running streaks
mazHur
08-15-2008, 11:54 AM
with its running streaks
the droplets of falling rain
augured love's coming
symphony
08-15-2008, 12:04 PM
augured love's coming
in cruel worlds where crises
never give ways through
mazHur
08-15-2008, 12:11 PM
never give ways through
crises are a part of life
you've to live with them
symphony
08-15-2008, 12:29 PM
you've to live with them
for first comes the beauty then
its time for the beast
:p
mazHur
08-15-2008, 12:55 PM
its time for the beast
to make the best of his time
with skin deep beauty!
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 01:10 PM
with skin deep beauty
the rose blossoms and then dies
withering on stem
mazHur
08-15-2008, 01:12 PM
withering on stem
though momentous gives new life
to rose for next spring
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 01:13 PM
to rose for next spring
shrubs planted so lovingly
in hopes of success
mazHur
08-15-2008, 01:19 PM
in hopes of success
sit not hand on hand, my sweet,
let me hold your hand!
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 01:22 PM
let me hold your hand
and trace the lines of your palm
look to your future
mazHur
08-15-2008, 01:28 PM
look to your future
old age is catching up fast
make most of your time
symphony
08-15-2008, 01:28 PM
let me hold your hand
and take you to a walk, this
world has whiles to sing...
mazHur
08-15-2008, 01:35 PM
world has whiles to sing
let us not miss this precious
moment lest tune changed
symphony
08-15-2008, 01:47 PM
moment, lest tune changed,
will be forgotten in its
solitary songs
mazHur
08-15-2008, 01:49 PM
solitary songs
spread their incense in the air
makes loving hearts throb!
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 03:57 PM
makes loving hearts throb
stranglehold on his slim neck
blood stops elsewhere too
:p
mazHur
08-15-2008, 04:02 PM
blood stops elsewhere too
neurons carry the signal up
your spine and below!
symphony
08-15-2008, 05:11 PM
your spine and below
it the rising of the fear:
those cold butterflies
mazHur
08-15-2008, 05:18 PM
those cold butterflies
will soon fly away at the
first drizzle of rain
symphony
08-15-2008, 05:22 PM
first drizzle of rain
mingles with the rest, wonder
which was the first drop?
mazHur
08-15-2008, 05:31 PM
which was the first drop?
Ask the womb of the scorched earth
where new life is born.
symphony
08-15-2008, 05:38 PM
where new life is born
marching on celebrations,
death reserves its time.
Wow its 3:37 AM. And i have an exam tomorrow! :eek: *runs to bed*
mazHur
08-15-2008, 05:41 PM
death reserves its time
and who doesn't? Make best of
time as life is short.
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 05:54 PM
Time as life is short
for the one bowing on stage
watch out for the hook!
mazHur
08-15-2008, 05:58 PM
watch out for the hook!
It is sharp and pointed steel
once in won't come out!
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 06:01 PM
once in won't come out
Cupid slips away laughing
now it's up to you!
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 06:04 PM
Now it's up to you
Escape the comfort demon
Run and save yourself
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 06:25 PM
Run and save yourself
but if you put others first
you won't be alone
mazHur
08-15-2008, 06:31 PM
you won't be alone
reminiscences of my
love will swarm your heart
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 06:40 PM
Love will swarm your heart
Relieving and deceiving
Each locust must eat
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 06:44 PM
Each locust must eat
Eat and eat and grow and burst
a plague upon us
mazHur
08-15-2008, 07:01 PM
a plague upon us
is impossible ,my dear,
we have faith in love!
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:05 PM
we have faith in love
and wherein lies faith lies power
even without fact
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 07:08 PM
even without fact
people will believe strange things
magic, not science
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:12 PM
magic, not science
teaches us the truth of life
abstract thought is fey
mazHur
08-15-2008, 07:12 PM
magic, not science
is the basis of occult
too hard to explain
mazHur
08-15-2008, 07:14 PM
abstract thought is fey
maybe but what makes it work
certainly not science
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:17 PM
certainly not science
Science is merely a word
Something trivial
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 07:20 PM
something trivial
a whisper in the darkness
a rose petal falls
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 07:20 PM
A rose petal falls
silent into the morn's dew
much like my tears have
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 07:24 PM
Hiya, Kiz.... :)
much like my tears have
fallen on this silk pillow
so has the rain shone
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:25 PM
so has the rain shown
with aggression comes new life
Forever know that
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 07:26 PM
Hi Oniw.... *waves*
Forever know that
life can never defeat you
if you smile through it
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:30 PM
Hello to you also, though I'm not sure how to do that waving emoticon in your post.
if you smile through it
it may very well still hurt
but others won't know
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 07:31 PM
but others won't know
the depths of my anger
covered with fake grins
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:33 PM
covered with fake grins
I am, but are not we all
I wish I could stop
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 07:35 PM
I wish I could stop
my smile is paining me now
but you count on me
CdnReader
08-15-2008, 07:35 PM
Oh... no emoticon at all, I just typed it in. :)
I wish I could stop
but my feet won't quit dancing
till dawn or later
Drat... too late! :D
but you count on me
too frequently, and I
can't always comply
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 07:37 PM
till dawn or later
its always the question when
don't keep track of time
kiz_paws
08-15-2008, 07:38 PM
ha ha, such fun! Wish jon were here to catch this, he had such fun with haiku!
anyhoo.... gotta go out now, carry on (I have no idea of where to continue with this, sorry!)
K♥zzo :wave:
Oniw17
08-15-2008, 07:38 PM
can't always comply
My cognitive dissonance
Holds my will at bay
kiz_paws
08-16-2008, 01:57 AM
Holds my will at bay
your aloof expression chills
I am dying here
motherhubbard
08-16-2008, 02:03 AM
I am dying here
too cold then I am too hot
could this be the change?
symphony
08-16-2008, 02:19 AM
could this be the change?
a morning of gold drifting
slowly towards rain
kiz_paws
08-16-2008, 02:38 AM
Slowly towards rain
hummingbirds try to race clouds
and trees brace themselves
qimissung
08-16-2008, 05:12 AM
and trees brace themselves
for the storm, the ax, the blight,
whatever befalls
kiz_paws
08-16-2008, 09:45 AM
Whatever befalls
matters not with our deep love
our anchor in storms
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 10:42 AM
our anchor in storms
smallest moments to cling to
memory's shelter
symphony
08-16-2008, 10:46 AM
our anchor in storms
savior of our days, decades,
save our souls again
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 10:56 AM
Mornin', Symphony. :)
save our souls again
just like you did once before
promise we'll be good
mazHur
08-16-2008, 11:04 AM
G'morning' all!
promise we'll be good
and do our homework well
prior we go to bed
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 11:14 AM
Hiya, Maz... Surely it isn't morning where you are? ;)
prior we go to bed
give us milk and gingerbread
bring us lovely dreams
symphony
08-16-2008, 11:18 AM
Good morning Cdn, though its 9:17 PM down here! (Sorry i didnt notice ur haiky earlier)
bring us lovely dreams
and take us to the graceful
everafter lands
mazHur
08-16-2008, 11:20 AM
HI
yes it's 9.20 pm here,,,but never mind it looked nice bidding you G'morning and wishing you and all there a happy day!
maz
bring us lovely dreams
visions of being reborn
with youth and beauty
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 12:11 PM
Oh still early enough here, with most of the day to go.... 12:11 pm... Let me see if I can meld these two....
everafter lands
eternity overflows
with youth and beauty
mazHur
08-16-2008, 12:19 PM
with youth and beauty
you can conquer hearts but not
infidelity
qimissung
08-16-2008, 12:39 PM
It's 11:36 a.m. her. Reader and Kiz_paws, I know your in Canada, but where on earth are you guys, symphony and mazHur, if you don't mind saying?
infidelity
bee lover, bee my honey
the rose, distraught, dies
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 01:01 PM
the rose, distraught, dies (lovely line, Qim)
and right before my eyes, arise
two more buds to bloom
kiz_paws
08-16-2008, 01:11 PM
two more buds to bloom
tenderly nurtured for now
and give them some time
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 01:23 PM
and give them some time
don't rush, for they grow too fast
next you know they're gone
mazHur
08-16-2008, 02:46 PM
Hi
I live in Karachi, Pakistan.
and Symph.....Hmmmm...well let her tell you herself that she's from ex_Pakistan now called Bangla Desh!
cheers
maz
mazHur
08-16-2008, 02:53 PM
next you know they're gone
never to come back again
until the next spring
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 03:15 PM
until the next spring
shall I wander, lost, friendless
await your return
mazHur
08-16-2008, 03:46 PM
await your return
play with your fond memories
that's all i can do!
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 04:39 PM
that's all I can do
slam the door behind me as
I exit your life
djy78usa
08-16-2008, 07:49 PM
I exit you life,
But don't shed a single tear,
we will meet again.
mazHur
08-16-2008, 07:54 PM
we will meet again
please rely on our love
it is crystal true!
symphony
08-16-2008, 08:16 PM
it is crystal true:
the perfection this morning
carries in its blue
mazHur
08-16-2008, 08:22 PM
carries in its blue
a blob of burning sphere
descends from the sky
symphony
08-16-2008, 08:37 PM
descends from the sky
and runs down in silvern blues,
touch the muslin streaks
mazHur
08-16-2008, 08:42 PM
touch the muslin streaks
feel the delicate texture
and swoon at her feet!
symphony
08-16-2008, 08:46 PM
and swoon at her feet,
worship the divine beauty
of what we dont see...
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 08:46 PM
Is it morning already? :lol:
And swoon at her feet
Fallen into a dead faint
Wake me in the morn.
Of what we don't see
I must not tell nor reveal
Secrets hidden deep
mazHur
08-16-2008, 08:50 PM
Secrets hidden deep
will erupt like volcanoes
you just wait and see!
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 08:51 PM
you just wait and see
there will be daffodils and
daisies everywhere
mazHur
08-16-2008, 09:01 PM
yeah it's G'morning here !
you must be preparing to hit the sack!
daisies everywhere
pave the way for two lovers
meeting after long
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 10:02 PM
No, not yet. Gotta make a late airport run..... :)
Meeting after long
days, months, years of only words
dancing 'cross the screen
mazHur
08-16-2008, 10:07 PM
dancing 'cross the screen
we find shadows of slim love
hand cuffed and shackled
the long night is not long to get over,,,,patience,dear, patience!;):)
CdnReader
08-16-2008, 10:20 PM
handcuffed and shackled
inside this small cubicle
time clock ticks too slow
qimissung
08-16-2008, 10:49 PM
you just wait and see
I will bring you tender love piled
on silver platters
kiz_paws
08-17-2008, 01:08 PM
On silver platters
the waiter served a fine meal
to a broken heart
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 03:43 PM
to a broken heart
i dedicate this sweet song
in hopes of repair
alakungfu
08-17-2008, 03:54 PM
in hopes of repair
to the Star of Bethlehem
bright jewel of the Nile
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 04:08 PM
bright jewel of the Nile
ebony eyes, mischievous,
planning new intrigues
mazHur
08-17-2008, 04:40 PM
bright jewel of the Nile
the cause of all the troubles
won't let go its shine
mazHur
08-17-2008, 04:43 PM
hey, you beat me this time! lol
planning new intrigues
you acted faster than me
and made me wonder!
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 06:40 PM
(hahaha... gotcha! ;))
and made me wonder
how the moon is pinned to the
fabric of the night
mazHur
08-17-2008, 07:01 PM
fabric of the night
studded with the twinkling stars
reminds me of you
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 07:24 PM
reminds me of you
the tip-tap of the keyboard
words floating over
mazHur
08-17-2008, 08:03 PM
words floating over
the ocean of cyber space
carry us along
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 08:39 PM
carry us along
especially when we are
weakened by battle
mazHur
08-17-2008, 08:58 PM
weakened by battle
re-enforcement on the way
gives some hope to win
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 09:00 PM
gives some hope to win
when others support you well
good friends keep us sane
mazHur
08-17-2008, 09:09 PM
good friends keep us sane
but sometimes we lose our
minds and go mindless!
CdnReader
08-17-2008, 09:12 PM
minds and go mindless
just when you thought you had it
figured out, it's gone!
mazHur
08-17-2008, 09:18 PM
figured out, it's gone
the hex of the lurking war
it's all peace around.
alakungfu
08-17-2008, 10:54 PM
it's all peace around,
irenic laconic flood
of contained silence
mazHur
08-17-2008, 11:00 PM
Hey, Ala,,,what does this word irenic mean??
I couldn't find it i the dictionary!
of contained silence
a phenomenon not yet
understood nor tried
alakungfu
08-18-2008, 01:28 AM
MazhHur, irenic means peaceful; its roots are Greek
understood nor tried,
leaving a rift resounding
shame no name could heal
CdnReader
08-18-2008, 10:15 AM
shame no name could heal
but do labels give answers
or only handles?
qimissung
08-18-2008, 09:00 PM
or only handles
bringing us understanding
always of others
mazHur
08-18-2008, 09:09 PM
always of others
historians are wont to
give references
qimissung
08-18-2008, 09:19 PM
give references:
"Yes, in love he will always
be honest and true."
mazHur
08-18-2008, 10:01 PM
be honest and true
if you want to win my love
for eternity
CdnReader
08-18-2008, 10:20 PM
for eternity
the winds will blow and the
fine sand will settle
djy78usa
08-19-2008, 12:43 AM
fine sands will settle
after the waves carry them
to new homes ashore
CdnReader
08-19-2008, 11:58 AM
to new homes ashore
dragging their burdens, weary,
webbed feet in wet sand
mazHur
08-19-2008, 02:43 PM
webbed feet in wet sand
creating maple leaf marks
decorate the beach
CdnReader
08-19-2008, 03:44 PM
decorate the beach
shells, driftwood, crabs skittering,
ocean's denizens
mazHur
08-19-2008, 04:01 PM
ocean's denizens
once out of water become
subsistence for earth
CdnReader
08-19-2008, 04:35 PM
Hiya, Maz. :)
subsistence for earth
this deep black rich soil cascades
through weary fingers
Oniw17
08-19-2008, 04:40 PM
through weary fingers
the baton passes tonight
is the future safe?
CdnReader
08-19-2008, 04:43 PM
Hi Oniw....
Is the future safe?
There's no way to know, short of
learning time travel.
Oniw17
08-19-2008, 04:47 PM
learning time travel
is easy when you pass out
wake in the future
barbara0207
08-19-2008, 06:07 PM
wake in the future,
mankind, you are sleeping now.
who'll set the alarm?
symphony
08-19-2008, 06:20 PM
who'll set the alarm?
are there any needed? wont
mom take care of it?
(mine always does, since i have this habit of throwing the clock outta the window and sleeping on :p )
mazHur
08-19-2008, 06:23 PM
Hiya, Maz. :)
subsistence for earth
this deep black rich soil cascades
through weary fingers
Hi CR !
who'll set the alarm?
Who will pull out the Lotus
Eaters from slumber?
barbara0207
08-19-2008, 06:32 PM
mom take care of it?
dad look after his li'l one?
Cuddly bear, I'm safe.
mazHur
08-19-2008, 06:41 PM
Cuddly bear, I'm safe
you have no chance to return
from Siberia!
barbara0207
08-19-2008, 06:46 PM
From Siberia
to the Arabian Sea - ;)
the sun warms my skin
mazHur
08-19-2008, 06:50 PM
the sun warms my skin
not as much as your warm breath
a heave which gives life!
Oniw17
08-19-2008, 07:02 PM
a heave which gives life
a stride which opens the door
bright life, then darkness
barbara0207
08-19-2008, 07:04 PM
bright light, then darkness,
the door of life closed on me.
hell or paradise?
mazHur
08-19-2008, 07:08 PM
bright life, then darkness
spreading its gloom all over
sun lost among stars!
mazHur
08-19-2008, 07:11 PM
hell or paradise
like good and evil exist
but nobody knows
Pensive
08-19-2008, 07:41 PM
But nobody knows
A present has to arrive
Corpses are lovely
qimissung
08-19-2008, 07:48 PM
Corpses are lovely
Shall I leave mine to further
enrich this pale earth?
mazHur
08-19-2008, 07:56 PM
enrich this pale earth
this jewel of the cosmos
with your Big Bang steps
symphony
08-19-2008, 08:38 PM
with your Big Bang steps
make path where there were none, trod,
Live as the Being
mazHur
08-19-2008, 08:55 PM
Live as the Being
Being which has many forms
yet has none in fact
qimissung
08-19-2008, 09:16 PM
yet has none in fact
my soul shivers-universe-
so much empty space
asilef73
08-19-2008, 11:03 PM
so much empty space!
how to fill up this needing;
stifle the wanting?
Oniw17
08-20-2008, 01:59 AM
Stifle the wanting?
An easy thing to achieve
Destroy the comfort.
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 10:02 AM
Destroy the comfort
felt in unearned ignorance
Learn from agony
mazHur
08-20-2008, 10:05 AM
Learn from agony
of being alone at heart
put a bunk bed there!
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 10:10 AM
Mornin', Maz.... ^^^ Cute!
* * * * *
Put a bunk bed there
Haul your bones to sleep on high
Store your books below.
mazHur
08-20-2008, 10:22 AM
G'morning, CR ~ thanks!
Store your books below
but take care no pages get
torn or rent apart
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 10:23 AM
torn or mutilated
like the ripped edges of
my smashed broken heart
mazHur
08-20-2008, 10:30 AM
my smashed broken heart
still craves for that cruel love
which made it this way
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 11:07 AM
which made it this way?
not the one that went your way?
crossed in cyberspace?
mazHur
08-20-2008, 01:51 PM
crossed in cyberspace
oblivious of how much
we loved each other
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 02:56 PM
we loved each other
in the blueness of morning
and through night's release
mazHur
08-20-2008, 02:58 PM
and through night's release
descended angels from the
sky roses in hand
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 03:38 PM
sky roses in hand
she approached tentatively
proffering her gift
Oniw17
08-20-2008, 04:47 PM
Proffering her gift
She walks down the lonely streets
Looking for someone
barbara0207
08-20-2008, 05:18 PM
Looking for someone
she spent her lonely nights and
days to no avail
Oniw17
08-20-2008, 05:56 PM
days to no avail
spent exclaiming the offer
but no one receives
qimissung
08-20-2008, 06:56 PM
but no one receives
love that's leaking from the marrow
a raindrop on a petal
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 07:16 PM
a raindrop on a petal
reflects the totality
of humanity
mazHur
08-20-2008, 08:11 PM
of humanity
talks everybody but where
is humanity?
Oniw17
08-20-2008, 08:21 PM
is humanity
worth fighting the good fight for
Or are we all doomed?
mazHur
08-20-2008, 08:26 PM
Or are we all doomed?
This question has always posed
a threat to the world.
CdnReader
08-20-2008, 08:56 PM
a threat to the world
that emerges from outside
is truly within
mazHur
08-20-2008, 09:02 PM
is truly within
a volcano of a heart
erupting with love
Haven
08-21-2008, 06:04 AM
erupting with love
heart beats loud within his chest
dead face hides passion
CdnReader
08-21-2008, 09:18 AM
dead face hides passion
or perhaps passion died too
does despair win all?
barbara0207
08-21-2008, 04:34 PM
does despair win all?
Look, there is a silver line
on the horizon
firefangled
08-21-2008, 05:38 PM
on the horizon
the sky bent like a blue smile
the earth bluer still
symphony
08-21-2008, 09:42 PM
the earth bluer still
the blue blush from a blunder
made in yesterdays
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