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CdnReader
05-06-2008, 04:01 AM
not to be alone
every person's greatest wish
ever unfulfilled

asilef73
05-06-2008, 11:52 PM
ever unfulfilled
in tedious existence?
rely on daydreams.

Sarasvati21
05-07-2008, 12:56 AM
rely on daydreams
black night skies and sunny days
soaring in the clouds

Il Penseroso
05-07-2008, 03:25 AM
soaring in the clouds,
air the softest of fingers
suns gently tickle

CdnReader
05-07-2008, 03:40 AM
suns gently tickle
shining fingers of brilliance
coaxing stems and leaves

Il Penseroso
05-07-2008, 03:57 AM
coaxing stems and leaves,
puddle whirlpool sinking to
echoing sludge trails

symphony
05-07-2008, 04:02 AM
echoing sludge trails
voices that fall loosely in
a reluctant rill

Sarasvati21
05-07-2008, 04:03 AM
echoing sludge trails
lead me into the mountains
whispers bounce from rocks

CdnReader
05-08-2008, 04:52 AM
whispers bounce from rocks
voices captured in the past
still there...can you hear?

asilef73
05-08-2008, 09:32 PM
still there...can you hear?
lingering souls of the lost
terrified of ghosts

kiz_paws
05-09-2008, 02:48 AM
Terrified of ghosts
the past was best left unsaid
shadows forever

CdnReader
05-09-2008, 05:00 AM
shadows forever
attached fiercely to my heels
there is no escape

kiz_paws
05-09-2008, 11:21 AM
There is no escape
sloppy kisses and wet nose
paws around my heart ;)

firefangled
05-09-2008, 01:39 PM
There is no escape
sloppy kisses and wet nose
paws around my heart ;)

and that is exactly how it is...Kiz, this is so true and tender.

firefangled
05-09-2008, 01:44 PM
Stop what you're doing,
think a moment, all the heartbeats...
no, all the heartbeats

asilef73
05-09-2008, 08:58 PM
no, all the heartbeats
that rattled and bruised my chest
were never much fun

CdnReader
05-10-2008, 04:58 AM
were never much fun
sliding into misery
pull me out again

asilef73
05-10-2008, 12:22 PM
pull me out again
polish me with tender care
remind me to shine

CdnReader
05-10-2008, 03:45 PM
remind me to shine
my hair, comb my teeth and brush....
oh no.... got that wrong

asilef73
05-13-2008, 11:40 PM
oh no...got that wrong
so many mistakes i've made
in reading your heart

Pensive
05-14-2008, 12:10 PM
In reading your heart
Blunders I made I do not
Want least to recall

dramasnot6
05-15-2008, 02:08 AM
Want least to recall
Signals of my memory
Drowned by noises of fear.

CdnReader
05-15-2008, 04:44 AM
Drowned by noises of fear
Writhing in the pain you caused
I close up my heart

dramasnot6
05-15-2008, 05:08 AM
I close up my heart,
my mind. My everything that
You buried alive.

asilef73
05-15-2008, 06:08 AM
you buried alive
all the thoughts and the feelings
that defined my soul

CdnReader
05-16-2008, 04:38 AM
that defined my soul
i pulled heaven down, intact,
and stored it inside

asilef73
05-17-2008, 08:02 PM
and stored it inside
to keep it safe from the world
with its callous ways

CdnReader
05-18-2008, 03:49 AM
with its callous ways
man's future precarious
its gaze gone askew

alakungfu
05-18-2008, 02:08 PM
its gaze gone askew,
Saggitarius misfires,
its game gone awry

kiz_paws
05-19-2008, 03:30 AM
Its game gone awry
oh merry-go-round horses
life in the fast lane

CdnReader
05-19-2008, 04:27 AM
life in the fast lane
a blur of meaninglessness
love cannot catch up

alakungfu
05-19-2008, 07:31 AM
love cannot catch up
fire shivers up the threshold
then romance expires

kiz_paws
05-19-2008, 01:44 PM
Then romance expires
tarnish on the silvery wings
I will rise again

Il Penseroso
05-19-2008, 02:21 PM
I will rise again,
meet day with honeyed halo
buzzing from the hive

mazHur
05-19-2008, 02:36 PM
buzzing from the hive
poor worker took off to fetch
nectar for the Queen

Il Penseroso
05-19-2008, 03:13 PM
nectar for the queen,
syrup distilled by servants
for the guarded cache

kiz_paws
05-19-2008, 09:32 PM
For the guarded cache
a heart on a faded sleeve
hope was running high

alakungfu
05-20-2008, 02:57 AM
hope was running high
when I wrote this note of love
to retrieve you, sweet

CdnReader
05-20-2008, 04:30 AM
to retrieve you, sweet
child, from the brink of despair,
I'd do anything

alakungfu
05-20-2008, 05:44 AM
I'd do anything
to cater to your whims, I'd
leave ten worlds behind

kiz_paws
05-20-2008, 12:53 PM
Leave ten worlds behind
and free your secret passion
the sky opens up

alakungfu
05-20-2008, 02:07 PM
the sky opens up
dreams turn into dragonflies
reclaiming drained fjords

mazHur
05-20-2008, 05:33 PM
reclaiming drained fjords
creates more space for humans
aquatic life ends

Pensive
05-20-2008, 05:42 PM
Aquatic life ends
Industries do not care least
If million die

mazHur
05-20-2008, 05:48 PM
If million die
millions see the light of life
death breeds life, life death!

Pensive
05-20-2008, 05:52 PM
Death breeds life, life death
Give and take is the policy
Of what we call world

mazHur
05-20-2008, 05:57 PM
Of what we call world
Is not the real world dear
something is beyond!

Pensive
05-20-2008, 06:00 PM
Something is beyond
Beyond the strength of our eyes
Yet we claim it exists

alakungfu
05-20-2008, 07:15 PM
Yet we claim it ex-
ists but that we can ill af-
ford the reckless cost

kiz_paws
05-20-2008, 08:11 PM
**cringing at hyphenations** :eek:

afford the reckless cost
too many syllables float
and cause me to cringe

[sorry, guess I am anal about this...] ;)

CdnReader
05-21-2008, 03:33 AM
and cause me to cringe
toes tucked up to my ankles
inside out with fear

AdoreroDio
05-21-2008, 07:05 PM
inside out with fear
nothing is hidden from you
innermost is out

asilef73
05-21-2008, 10:41 PM
innermost is out
a secret i can't contain
leaking from my eyes

CdnReader
05-22-2008, 05:05 AM
leaking from my eyes
a salty ocean of tears
for all who are lost

alakungfu
05-22-2008, 06:26 AM
for all who are lost
with Robbin Hood, Nottingham's
silent enemy

asilef73
05-23-2008, 09:58 PM
silent enemy
the grim figure of death leers
over my shoulder

khall12807
05-23-2008, 10:08 PM
Over my shoulder
I peer down the passageway
Seeking an escape

CdnReader
05-24-2008, 06:58 AM
seeking an escape
please show me to the back door
of this crazy world

kiz_paws
05-24-2008, 10:43 AM
Of this crazy world
the only sense that I make
comes from my canine ;)

abgunner10
05-24-2008, 10:52 AM
Comes from my canine:
malodorous, sultry coil,
wrought with stink and shame

CdnReader
05-24-2008, 11:26 AM
wrought with stink and shame
yes, life is full of mistakes
you are forgiven

toni
05-24-2008, 02:13 PM
you are forgiven
cold opals run through your feet-
autumn on your hair

mazHur
05-24-2008, 07:17 PM
Seeking an escape
I plodded down the tunnel
found no light on end

kiz_paws
05-24-2008, 10:16 PM
Seeking an escape
I plodded down the tunnel
found no light on endFound no light on end
a one-way narrow tunnel
save me from myself


you are forgiven
cold opals run through your feet-
autumn on your hairAutumn on your hair
sun spun lanterns, harvest gold
sheaves of fragrant wheat

Janine
05-24-2008, 10:50 PM
That last haku is really lovely, Kizz!

sheaves of fragrant wheat
glisten in the moonlit down
silken summer threads

Il Penseroso
05-25-2008, 01:36 AM
I agree with Janine, very nice kiz!

silken summer threads,
twined by spindly legs carving
moisture trails in air

CdnReader
05-25-2008, 04:02 AM
moisture trails in air
dripping on my upturned face
morning dew released

dramasnot6
05-25-2008, 08:00 AM
Morning dew released
From velvet skies of Winter
Blades and petals kissed

alakungfu
05-25-2008, 10:09 AM
Blades and petals kissed
reformed in the amethyst-
teased kindled sunset

kiz_paws
05-25-2008, 11:37 AM
:blush: Thank you, Janine and IP, we all work rather nicely together, no? :)

Teased kindled sunset
shadows swallow the daylight
tuck in the robins ;)

Il Penseroso
05-25-2008, 05:59 PM
of course!

tuck in the robins
and they shall drop no longer
warmth above late frost

asilef73
05-25-2008, 07:36 PM
warmth above late frost
the sun dances down its track
bringing a quick thaw

kiz_paws
05-25-2008, 08:55 PM
Bringing a quick thaw
to a bag of frozen peas
a black eye swelling

Janine
05-25-2008, 09:32 PM
Yes, we do Kizz!

a black eye swelling
swirling winds of cloudy mist
rain decends, weeping

dramasnot6
05-26-2008, 02:17 AM
Rain descends,weeping
floods onto vast green patches,
Crying for great growth.

kiz_paws
05-26-2008, 02:24 AM
Crying for great growth
sunflowers stretch to greet Sol
kissed by morning dews

CdnReader
05-26-2008, 06:51 AM
kissed by morning dews
daisies raise their bright faces
awaiting sun's love

dramasnot6
05-26-2008, 10:39 PM
Awaiting Sun's love,
they howl amidst the fire dance,
calling to their Ra.

kiz_paws
05-27-2008, 03:14 AM
Calling to their Ra
lithe bodies moved to music
and the fire blazed on

CdnReader
05-27-2008, 03:15 AM
and the fire blazed on
tongues of flame, red and angry,
consuming the world

kiz_paws
05-27-2008, 03:17 AM
Consuming the world
fear of unknown equals hate
how can we stop this

CdnReader
05-27-2008, 03:28 AM
how can we stop this
one haiku follows the next
an endless spiral!

:lol:

Il Penseroso
05-28-2008, 12:19 AM
an endless spiral,
edges sinking, fractal shore,
beaches always split

CdnReader
05-28-2008, 04:51 AM
beaches always split
cliffs sagging into the sea
rebuilding the world

firefangled
05-28-2008, 08:14 AM
rebuilding the world
first give the earth room to grow
hope it forgives us

kiz_paws
05-29-2008, 05:29 PM
Hope it forgives us
and we have a chance to build
that which we destroyed

djy78usa
05-29-2008, 05:32 PM
that which we destroyed
was not that great anyhow
I don't miss it much

mazHur
05-29-2008, 06:18 PM
I don't miss it much
let time gone be gone for good
come let's sing and dance !

kiz_paws
05-30-2008, 03:45 AM
Come let's sing and dance
get out your red paint brushes
and we'll do the town :p

mazHur
05-30-2008, 05:33 AM
and we'll do the town
as is done by Scot bride grooms
day before marriage

CdnReader
05-30-2008, 06:08 AM
day before marriage
gather together the past
and fling it forward

kiz_paws
05-30-2008, 11:19 AM
And fling it forward
this worn broken heart of mine
I'm on my own now

CdnReader
05-30-2008, 11:51 AM
I'm on my own now
which way does this joystick turn?
oops! butterflies yet?

mazHur
05-30-2008, 02:00 PM
oops! butterflies yet?
glistening colors before eyes
life wasn't like that!

CdnReader
05-30-2008, 02:44 PM
life wasn't like that
before you tossed me that smile
slick and nonchalant

mazHur
05-30-2008, 04:43 PM
slick and nonchalant-
would not a star-crossed lover
look like when he smiles?

CdnReader
05-31-2008, 04:52 AM
look like when he smiles?
cat swallowed the canary
gulped him down and grinned

Tiny Dancer
05-31-2008, 06:19 AM
gulped him down and grinned
did the sea that fateful night
no more shall we meet

mazHur
05-31-2008, 09:45 AM
no more shall we meet
not even in our dreams
It's a long long day !

CdnReader
06-02-2008, 04:26 PM
It's a long long day
boxes, scissors, packing tape
packaging my life

mazHur
06-02-2008, 06:59 PM
packaging my life
in a narrow box of love
I sent her as gift

kiz_paws
06-02-2008, 09:59 PM
I sent her as gift
a box of chocolate sweet
this was my mistake

CdnReader
06-03-2008, 04:02 AM
this was my mistake
hesitating at the cliff
instead of jumping

qimissung
06-03-2008, 07:37 PM
instead of jumping
I want to leapfrog into
mango love with you

lucidnightmares
06-03-2008, 09:27 PM
mango love with you
the taste of it on my tongue
never meant to last

kiz_paws
06-03-2008, 09:47 PM
Never meant to last
these carefully practiced lines
came not from the heart

mazHur
06-04-2008, 11:33 AM
came not from the heart
the words you uttered when we
parted forever

kiz_paws
06-06-2008, 02:28 AM
Parted forever
baby snow owls all grown up
fly to new futures

dramasnot6
06-06-2008, 11:22 PM
Fly to new futures
Wings trapped-elevator shafts
Free on Floor Thirty

asilef73
06-07-2008, 04:21 PM
Free on Floor Thirty
a view of the cityscape
quiet behind glass

dramasnot6
06-08-2008, 06:58 AM
quiet behind glass
images lay in waiting
revealing what's gone

alakungfu
06-08-2008, 08:56 AM
revealing what's gone
mottled painful increments
"til they're truly lost

mazHur
06-08-2008, 11:40 AM
"til they're truly lost
you cannot accuse them for
not biting deep in!

asilef73
06-08-2008, 12:40 PM
not biting deep in
the marrow of life leaves a
bitter aftertaste

mazHur
06-08-2008, 12:53 PM
bitter aftertaste
has every good medicine
and gets you well soon

dramasnot6
06-12-2008, 09:42 AM
And gets you well soon-
Studying, head above dark clouds
Drive beyond all tears

Janine
06-12-2008, 06:25 PM
drive beyond all tears
rays of optimism
scatter rain's salt sting

Il Penseroso
06-12-2008, 11:00 PM
scatter rain's salt sting
breaking the soft stillness of
two upslanted eyes

bree
06-13-2008, 06:38 AM
two upslanted eyes
staring in the dark
mercy it's the cat!

dramasnot6
06-13-2008, 11:06 AM
Mercy,it's the cat!
Shapeless form of fur,so still...
Lifeless beneath wheels.

alakungfu
06-13-2008, 12:53 PM
lifeless beneath wheels
the dirty Savannah side road
surrounded by elk

CdnReader
06-14-2008, 09:42 AM
surrounded by elk
the forest viewed through bright eyes
wonder and marvel

Pensive
06-15-2008, 04:39 AM
Wonder and marvel
About the perplexities
Of this very life

CdnReader
06-15-2008, 10:14 AM
of this very life
i often decline to ask
what meaning it holds

Pensive
06-15-2008, 05:19 PM
What meaning it holds
Wait for you to appear
Am I just in love?

CdnReader
06-15-2008, 06:55 PM
Am I just in love
with the aura you create?
Or is it for real?

Il Penseroso
06-16-2008, 12:44 AM
or, is it for real?
time controlled by ticking clocks,
pasts by speed deduced

alakungfu
06-16-2008, 04:36 AM
pasts by speed deduced
to their cleft raw undersoles
stranded and bereft

CdnReader
06-16-2008, 11:00 AM
stranded and bereft
left above high water mark
an ocean away

firefangled
06-16-2008, 06:00 PM
an ocean away
tomorrow rushes toward me
farewell yesterdays

CdnReader
06-16-2008, 06:16 PM
farewell yesterdays
dreams never met anyhow
you're the next best thing

qimissung
06-17-2008, 01:00 AM
you're the next best thing,
cold leftovers in the fridge,
a hand-me-down dress.

CdnReader
06-18-2008, 10:23 AM
a hand-me-down dress
frayed cuffs, and yellowing lace,
embraced by my past

asilef73
06-19-2008, 02:17 AM
embraced by my past
and thwarted by my present.
dream of my future

firefangled
06-19-2008, 03:40 AM
dream of my future
a still white morning, fresh snow
naked snow angels

zanna
06-19-2008, 02:20 PM
naked snow angels
grace the 'roof of the world,'
created by kids

asilef73
06-19-2008, 03:06 PM
created by kids
macaroni necklaces
expressing their love

Albatross of Hu
06-19-2008, 03:55 PM
expressing their love
parting forever
standing alone in the wind

Smoogles
06-20-2008, 12:46 AM
Parting forever
we make akward eye contact
our last glimpse of love

(sorry "standing alone in the wind" is 7 syllables so I assumed you meant to put "parting forever" as the last line)

asilef73
06-20-2008, 01:32 PM
our last glimpse of love
in our dying mother's eyes.
unconditional.

mazHur
06-20-2008, 07:11 PM
our last glimpse of love
in our dying mother's eyes.
unconditional.

unconditional!
I cannot give you my heart
unless you kiss me!:)

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:00 AM
unless you kiss me
i am able to maintain
an icy distance

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:03 AM
an icy distance
is not fair my love in love
come into my arms!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:07 AM
come into my arms
if you are brave enough to
weather the tempest

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:18 AM
come into my arms
if you are brave enough to
weather the tempest

weather the tempest?
I accept your challenge; blow
as hard as you can

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:28 AM
weather the tempest?
I accept your challenge; blow
as hard as you can

:lol:

as hard as you can,
hold me. beware! my passions
can be quite stormy.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:32 AM
:lol:

as hard as you can,
hold me. beware! my passions
can be quite stormy.


can be quite stormy
but who is afraid of storms?
let storm engulf me!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:37 AM
let storm engulf me.
i care not to struggle much
over life's ending.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:42 AM
over life's ending
you will attain Nirvana
do not be afraid

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:53 AM
do not be afraid
to tread these pathways alone
in peace and quiet

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:00 AM
in peace and quiet
works its way the lycanthrope
building commotion...

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:06 AM
building commotion
on its run towards lower ground
the flashflood rages

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:09 AM
the flashflood rages
all the sluices are open
not a single dyke

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:16 AM
not a single dyke
in sight to protect me from
flooding emotions

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:22 AM
flooding emotions
prove a heart throbbing with love
let them inundate...

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:28 AM
let them inundate,
your dreams of a love fulfilled.
in time it will be.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:34 AM
in time it will be
in time you and I will be
well what? you can tell

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:45 AM
well what? you can tell
me! i cannot guess your heart!
how you confuse me!

mazHur
06-21-2008, 09:45 AM
how you confuse me!
Really Miss thirty five
I must be kidding

asilef73
06-21-2008, 01:41 PM
i must be kidding
myself to think that you would
love me more with time

mazHur
06-21-2008, 02:43 PM
love me more with time
but, nay, time is no one's page;
let love rule our hearts

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:34 PM
let love rule our hearts
as we walk this darkened wood
searching for the light

mazHur
06-21-2008, 03:37 PM
searching for the light
please don't go alone at night
take my heart with you

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:42 PM
take my heart with you
i will not miss its beating
if it brings you joy

mazHur
06-21-2008, 03:44 PM
if it brings you joy
it will bring me joy as well
Come on let us dance!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:53 PM
i wonder how much longer we can keep this going without anyone else joining in :P

come on let us dance
and laugh away the fears that
will cause our sorrow

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:01 PM
i wonder how much longer we can keep this going without anyone else joining in :P

come on let us dance
and laugh away the fears that
will cause our sorrow

will cause our sorrow
to be transformed into joy
if an angel comes!..

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:09 PM
if an angel comes
to part us forever would
you willingly go?

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:13 PM
you ,willingly go
anywhere without fear of
formless angel's thought

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:29 PM
formless angel's thought:
"why are my wings so fragile
and halo dusty?"

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:33 PM
and halo dusty?
Oh, no, it's how it feels in
mind and flies around

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:08 PM
ack! thanks for the awkward first line Maz :lol:

mind and flies around
the itching in my head. your
name will not leave it.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:17 PM
name will not leave it-
will keep you drawing closer
to edge of my lips

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:21 PM
to edge of my lips
press silken fingertips to
coat them with kisses

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:24 PM
coat them with kisses
turn them red with flaring heat
melt me down like wax

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:28 PM
melt me down like wax.
take this formless me and shape
it as you see fit.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:34 PM
melt me down like wax.
take this formless me and shape
it as you see fit.

lovely!


it, as you see fit,
can be molded into shape
with a glance of love

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:41 PM
lovely!


it, as you see fit,
can be molded into shape
with a glance of love

thanks! ;) as are all of yours.

with a glance of love
no words will need exchanging.
i've known you always.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:57 PM
i've known you always
I will never forget you
I'll run with your breath

asilef73
06-21-2008, 08:10 PM
i'll run with your breath
and leave you here gasping like
fish out of water

mazHur
06-21-2008, 08:17 PM
fish out of water
means hard cash for fishermen
grasp me in the deep

asilef73
06-21-2008, 08:42 PM
grasp me in the deep
and pull me towards the surface
or i'm lost at sea.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 09:11 PM
or i'm lost at sea
or the land beneath moving
let's wade hand in hand

asilef73
06-22-2008, 05:34 AM
lets wade hand in hand
like children at the seashore
braving rugged surf

mazHur
06-22-2008, 05:45 AM
braving rugged surf
out into the sea they went
and swam together

asilef73
06-22-2008, 06:24 AM
and swam together
their sleek, shining bodies were
cutting through the waves

mazHur
06-22-2008, 06:35 AM
cutting through the waves
a mermaid came on the shore
and bid me Hello !

asilef73
06-22-2008, 06:40 AM
and bid me hello
as she twined seaweed through her
fine, tapered fingers

mazHur
06-22-2008, 06:54 AM
fine, tapered fingers
some compare it with fingers
of Queen Cleopatra

asilef73
06-22-2008, 07:01 AM
Queen Cleopatra,
with her hideous asp, took
the easy way out

mazHur
06-22-2008, 07:08 AM
the easy way out
to get out from the forest
is to keep running

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 08:03 AM
Is to keep running
the goal of an athlete or
to keep inhaling?

mazHur
06-22-2008, 08:17 AM
to keep inhaling
as long as you are alive
means you are kicking!

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 11:04 AM
means you are kicking
screaming and violently
clashing in dispute

mazHur
06-22-2008, 11:11 AM
clashing in dispute
smashing its head against rocks
waves achieve nothing

asilef73
06-22-2008, 01:18 PM
waves achieve nothing
but at least give credit to
their consistency

mazHur
06-22-2008, 01:49 PM
their consistency
changes with the gliding moon
waves become ripples!

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 02:35 PM
waves become ripples
detentions of reflection
of moon-sponsored Styx

Oniw17
06-22-2008, 02:42 PM
Of moon sponsered Styx
Artemis plots from her thrown
Fair trade for the hunt

asilef73
06-22-2008, 03:24 PM
fair trade for the hunt,
my hart dashes swiftly on.
you will not catch him.

Oniw17
06-22-2008, 03:59 PM
You will not catch him
The fox is crafty and cunning
He works through others

asilef73
06-22-2008, 04:07 PM
he works through others
on his insidious plans?
he will not fool me!

mazHur
06-22-2008, 04:46 PM
he will not fool me
neither he will betray me
I know I know I......

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 05:02 PM
I know I know I
think, I am confounded in
principle, not love

mazHur
06-22-2008, 05:05 PM
principle, not love
that is not love's principle
All's fair in love, boy!

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 08:29 PM
All's fair in love, boy! -
You'd better believe it , Jack! -
Then the die is cast.

mazHur
06-22-2008, 08:35 PM
Then the die is cast
gone's the fear of loss and gain
Little Johnny's glad

ampoule
06-23-2008, 06:59 AM
Little Johnny's glad
Happy to find his plaything
It jumps to the touch

mazHur
06-23-2008, 08:07 AM
It jumps to the touch
what a springy little toy
wanna play with it?

Oniw17
06-23-2008, 09:17 AM
Wanna play with it?
Wanna see what it can do?
Aim, but don't shoot me

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 09:21 AM
Aim, but don't shoot me
Bury love's arrow so deep
It doesn't hurt much

Oniw17
06-23-2008, 09:24 AM
"It doesn't hurt much."
"I have tried to tell you that!"
Wasteful habits leave

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 09:28 AM
Wasteful habits leave
the earth unpopulated
Will we ever learn?

ampoule
06-23-2008, 10:44 AM
Will we ever learn?
The mistakes of our children
Seeping back to now

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 10:49 AM
seeping back to now
the white clouds of dreams lifted
greeting a new day

alakungfu
06-23-2008, 01:32 PM
greeting a new day,
entrancing loomed fustian
dreams and princely hopes

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 04:10 PM
dreams and princely hopes
wrapped in velvet and jewels
who will next be king?

mazHur
06-23-2008, 04:34 PM
who will next be king?
Know what Ezra Pound hath said?
Eunuchs would be kings!

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 04:44 PM
Eunuchs would be kings!
and the lines would end right there
no more princesses!

mazHur
06-23-2008, 04:49 PM
no more princesses,
no more manly men for them
in world of eunuchs !

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 04:50 PM
in world of eunuchs
men are treated as women,
the sexes equate

mazHur
06-23-2008, 04:54 PM
the sexes equate
but not the hermaphrodites
both sexes suffer

firefangled
06-23-2008, 05:40 PM
both sexes suffer
when one is thought greater
than the other one

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 05:42 PM
than the other one
but how can equality
ever be equal?

firefangled
06-23-2008, 05:48 PM
ever be equal?
my wife says it can't be true
while she is the boss

:lol: :lol: :lol:

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 05:50 PM
while she is the boss
you should take a vacation
holiday pay rules

:D

firefangled
06-23-2008, 05:58 PM
holiday pay rules
hmmm let me look that one up
yes, I'm entitled!

asilef73
06-23-2008, 06:52 PM
yes, i'm entitled
to give my love where i please.
who are you to judge?

_Shannon_
06-23-2008, 06:59 PM
who are you to judge?
So, I like peanut butter
better than jelly

asilef73
06-23-2008, 07:10 PM
better than jelly
with its sticky sweet goodness?
that's hard to believe!

_Shannon_
06-23-2008, 07:13 PM
LOL!!! wonderful!

that's hard to believe!
Burnt popcorn can fill the whole
house with choking smoke

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 07:15 PM
house with choking smoke
thick dark billows hanging low
a sadness creeps through

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 07:32 AM
a sadness creeps through,
transcendental casement view,
eerie visions splayed

mazHur
06-24-2008, 07:37 AM
eerie visions splayed
elves,ghouls, zombies and banshees
singing and dancing

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 10:33 AM
singing and dancing
when all else fails, these are my
last saving graces

mazHur
06-24-2008, 01:10 PM
last saving graces
shone on her lips like pink rose
her cheeks glowed with fire

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 01:12 PM
her cheeks glowed with fire
reflection of sun's glory
tanned, lithe, and ready

mazHur
06-24-2008, 01:19 PM
tanned, lithe, and ready
she lied on the altar high
to be sacrificed

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 01:58 PM
to be sacrificed
when life is just beginning
what is the purpose?

mazHur
06-24-2008, 02:06 PM
what is the purpose
of being a man or a
woman without love.

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 03:20 PM
Woman without love,
man without love's conviction,
what legs to stand on?

mazHur
06-24-2008, 03:23 PM
what legs to stand on?
have a look at the blind bats
they love upside down!

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 03:52 PM
they love upside down
dizzy all the time and shifting
fallen emotions

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 03:53 PM
fallen emotions
pooled in falseness at my feet
nothing real to hold

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 04:01 PM
nothing real to hold
but a scored arrow tipped in
scalding erstwhile wit

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 04:05 PM
scalding erstwhile wit
drips off my sloping shoulders
don't bother with it

asilef73
06-24-2008, 09:45 PM
Woman without love,
man without love's conviction,
what legs to stand on?
love this one!


don't bother with it
our materialism
merely passes time

dramasnot6
06-25-2008, 10:54 PM
Merely passes time
Lovers,enemies...the same.
All distract from death.

_Shannon_
06-26-2008, 07:35 AM
all distract from death
magician's tricks avert us
gaping, open-mouthed

ampoule
06-26-2008, 08:38 AM
gaping, open-mouthed
I suck the air so shocked
why did you choose her