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Pendragon
01-15-2007, 01:48 PM
in sherds on the sand,
tiny pieces of memory—
seven years bad luck…

Susan Sonnen
01-15-2007, 02:39 PM
seven years bad luck_
that was a decade ago!
some things never change.

Pensive
01-15-2007, 02:50 PM
Some things never change
Their appearance reminds us
Of old splendid days!

Susan Sonnen
01-15-2007, 05:14 PM
of old splendid days
I sing with joy's merriment,
coins fall in my hat

Janine
01-15-2007, 05:19 PM
Of our splendid days!
We treasure these times between
Memories' pages.

Janine
01-15-2007, 05:22 PM
Of our splendid days!
We treasure these fine moments;
Coins fall in my hat.

Janine
01-15-2007, 05:23 PM
did I fix that right?.......

Whifflingpin
01-15-2007, 08:20 PM
Coins fall in my hat
I made three cherries line up
Did I fix that right?

Janine
01-15-2007, 08:33 PM
Did I fix that right???
Whifflingpin, you're a
Jovial poet!

Susan Sonnen
01-15-2007, 09:16 PM
jovial poet
lights lives where'ere he travels _
poems line his face

Riesa
01-15-2007, 10:00 PM
poems line his face
metre in thin highways for
thoughts to travel 'crost.

Janine
01-16-2007, 12:18 AM
Thoughts to travel 'crost
Global horizons of space;
Mind has no limit.

zanna
01-16-2007, 12:50 AM
Mind has no limit,
therefore, willpower can win,
just don't give up yet.

Janine
01-16-2007, 01:39 AM
Just don't give up yet,
With your faith, hope and courage
A life will be "lived".

ktd222
01-16-2007, 02:34 AM
A life will be "lived".
Nay. I can't help it worry,
it is in my genes

Janine
01-16-2007, 02:59 AM
It is in my genes -
Live true and be completed
By creating art.

Laindessiel
01-16-2007, 03:55 AM
By creating art
You can create "artistic".
I live in Ghana.

Whifflingpin
01-16-2007, 08:14 AM
I live in Ghana.
Sounds like a dim echo of
"Eyeless in Gaza"

Pendragon
01-16-2007, 03:06 PM
eyeless in Gaza,
wandering for many days—
seeking solace there…

Janine
01-16-2007, 03:46 PM
Seeking solace there…
In rivers of fluid thought,
The mind finds it's home.

Triskele
01-16-2007, 03:48 PM
the man finds its home
sadly on the streets so cold
like hearts of warm souls

zanna
01-16-2007, 03:51 PM
like hearts of warm souls,
her eyes held compassion in
their green and brown depths.

Triskele
01-16-2007, 03:53 PM
their green and brown depths
where lies their self... infinity
to the end of green

zanna
01-16-2007, 04:31 PM
to the end of green
earth they travelled together
never to part ways.

Janine
01-16-2007, 04:46 PM
Never to part ways
Tall twin oaks, since seed cojoined
Stand stately and proud.

zanna
01-16-2007, 04:50 PM
Stand stately and proud,
hold your head high and smile, don't
let them take your poise.

Janine
01-16-2007, 05:11 PM
Let them take your poise?
Ignore those jealous of you;
Be steadfast, stand proud.

Whifflingpin
01-16-2007, 06:38 PM
Be steadfast, stand proud
as cedars of Lebanon.
Yours is the vict'ry.

Janine
01-16-2007, 06:45 PM
Yours is the vict'ry
Challenging days win to fate -
The glory is yours!

Petrarch's Love
01-16-2007, 07:37 PM
The glory is yours!
A life of punished meekness
Now inheritance

Susan Sonnen
01-16-2007, 10:13 PM
now inheritance,
those stories told by Granddad
worth more than rubies

Virgil
01-16-2007, 10:31 PM
Worth more than rubies
Is the sweet love from your heart.
Let your eyes shine bright.

Janine
01-16-2007, 10:58 PM
Hi Virgil - that was really pretty....ah


Let your eyes shine bright,
They reveal your inner light -
A world of true sight.

Petrarch's Love
01-16-2007, 11:31 PM
A world of true light
Hidden in mundane conduits
To the Highest Word

samercury
01-16-2007, 11:49 PM
To the Highest Word
Eternal, pure, far from reach
Shining rays of sun

Virgil
01-16-2007, 11:53 PM
Very nice Same. I like that a lot.

Shining rays of sun
On the black driveway pavement.
Poor feet need slippers.

Petrarch's Love
01-17-2007, 12:06 AM
Poor feet need slippers
Sits unshaven, hungry, cold
Empty cup waiting

Janine
01-17-2007, 12:28 AM
Empty cup waiting;
Fresh tea steaming, silver pot -
Teatime in England.

Susan Sonnen
01-17-2007, 01:23 AM
teatime in England,
he wonders if she still sings
as she pours Earl Grey

ktd222
01-17-2007, 03:09 AM
as she pours Earl Grey
a bird hears the mating call
and swoops down to mate.

Janine
01-17-2007, 03:17 AM
....and swoops down to mate.
butterflies in late summer;
cocoon's winter over.

ktd222
01-17-2007, 09:43 AM
cocoon's winter over.
Sounds too poetic following
a silly image.

Pendragon
01-17-2007, 10:49 AM
a silly image—
laughter often breaks sickness
when all else will fail…

Adolescent09
01-17-2007, 12:59 PM
when all else will fail-
an untold passion strikes your breast
and makes your body float..

white shadows
01-17-2007, 03:31 PM
and makes your body float,
above it all, sky and stars
dream of dreams to float

white shadows
01-17-2007, 04:06 PM
burn and rage away
from this world's lost facade
grants us all to fade

Janine
01-17-2007, 05:11 PM
Grants us all to fade
Into obscurity; gray
Numbs our broken hearts.

Adolescent09
01-17-2007, 07:38 PM
number our broken hearts,
what lies within permeates,
our souls and ambitions dessimate,

ktd222
01-17-2007, 09:33 PM
our souls dessimate
in face of the Holy Ghost,
our father the lord.

Adolescent09
01-17-2007, 09:36 PM
our father the Lord.
takes things which we know little of
and improvises wonders, unknown to us

ktd222
01-17-2007, 09:37 PM
Adolescent09,

the haiku has to be in a 5-7-5 syllable format

ktd222
01-17-2007, 09:41 PM
and improvises
wonders, unknown to us -the
ones who sense with sense

Janine
01-17-2007, 10:04 PM
ones who sense with sense
of our true being and selves
find reward in truth.

ktd222
01-17-2007, 10:38 PM
find reward in truth
distorts the very fabric
of reality - Arghhh!

Triskele
01-17-2007, 10:53 PM
of reality - Arghhh!
simple syllable count
changed not by the words

changed not by the words
the onomatopoeias
oof!, arghh, grrr! and ow!

hee hee

Janine
01-18-2007, 12:14 AM
hee hee, yourself!

oof!, arghh, grrr! and ow!
The dogs will bark and the cats
Will run far away!

Janine
01-18-2007, 01:48 AM
Will run far away
to exotic lands sweet with
seductive pursuits.

Janine
01-18-2007, 01:58 AM
Seductive pursuits;
Exotic flesh ignites life
Sweet delicate spice.

Janine
01-18-2007, 02:00 AM
Sweet delicate spice;
Life is full of pleasures, pain
Worth all we suffer.

ktd222
01-18-2007, 02:39 AM
Worth all we suffer -
Only if the sufferings
are actual pleasures

Adolescent09
01-18-2007, 08:10 AM
are actual pleasures,
not to be compromised
by ulterior whims

ktd222
01-18-2007, 10:48 AM
by ulterior whims,
or ulterior motives, or
ulterior design

Adolescent09
01-18-2007, 11:13 AM
ulterior design
culminates in avarice
dwindling hopes

Riesa
01-18-2007, 12:24 PM
dwindling hopes catch on
a whispered secret and blossom
daintily as Spring

Adolescent09
01-18-2007, 12:37 PM
daintily as spring
when His mighty finger
smudges white on blue

Pendragon
01-18-2007, 06:05 PM
smudges white on blue,
red on nose and lips, black brows—
bow tie and overalls …

Riesa
01-18-2007, 06:31 PM
bow tie and overalls
a confused look usually
reserved for strange men

Rosalind_May
01-18-2007, 06:34 PM
Reserved for strange men
The table is laid proudly -
"Fetch the tartare sauce."

Weeping Willow
01-18-2007, 07:07 PM
Fetch the tartare sauce
And boil some potatos
It is dinner time!

brainstrain
01-18-2007, 08:06 PM
It is dinner time!
The oven timer just rang
Chicken and rice...mmm.

A true story ^_^

Janine
01-18-2007, 09:33 PM
Chicken and rice...mmm.
Hot biscuits in the oven;
Mouth-watering treats!

Virgil
01-18-2007, 10:20 PM
Mouth watering treats
for the pooch make her obey.
Sit, give me your paw.

Riesa
01-18-2007, 10:28 PM
Sit, give me your paw,
I said, sit.... sit, SIT, SIT!!! SIT!!!!!!!!
I really hate Pugs.

Virgil
01-18-2007, 10:33 PM
I really hate Pugs,
That little snarky devil.
Still he wags his tail.

Riesa
01-18-2007, 10:43 PM
:lol:

Still he wags his tail,
goes on walks, gets hugged and kissed;
and still bites joggers.

Janine
01-18-2007, 10:50 PM
And still bites joggers,
My cute little brown doggie;
Black cat is polite.

Riesa
01-18-2007, 10:52 PM
Fetch the tartare sauce
And boil some potatos
It is dinner time!


willow!!!!

Riesa
01-18-2007, 10:53 PM
Black cat is polite,
until locked up in a wall,
she'll out the murderer.

The Bookinator
01-18-2007, 11:04 PM
Black cat is polite.
"Please give me some more tuna."
...No! Not the can kind!

x894565256
01-18-2007, 11:19 PM
No! Not the can kind!
We shriek as another fam'ly
dinner starts chaos.

Janine
01-18-2007, 11:42 PM
Dinner starts chaos.
Been that way since I was young;
loud and lively talk!

Pendragon
01-19-2007, 11:05 AM
loud and lively talk!
someone pass me a cue stick!
spoiling for a fight!

Janine
01-19-2007, 03:09 PM
Spoiling for a fight
Youth glared at each other,
Refrained, then they fled.

The Bookinator
01-19-2007, 03:59 PM
Refrained, then they fled.
Two angry birds of color
unite when Cat comes

The Bookinator
01-19-2007, 04:04 PM
"Unite when Cat comes!"
Cries the canine leader, Rex.
Flee, catnip lover!

Il Penseroso
01-19-2007, 05:30 PM
Flee, catnip lover
the sod catalogues your moves,
and plots his next meal.

Susan Sonnen
01-19-2007, 07:13 PM
and plots his next meal
eyeing gifts on the table
he maps in his mind

Janine
01-19-2007, 08:52 PM
He maps in his mind,
Inventing discoveries;
freshly thought notions.

Virgil
01-19-2007, 09:13 PM
Freshly thought notions
Send the flesh into spasms.
The mind doesn't work.

Susan Sonnen
01-20-2007, 01:23 AM
the mind doesn't work
following Love's last display _
all systems shut down

zanna
01-20-2007, 01:45 AM
all systems shut down
brain's checked out for the night, it's
finally friday. :)

Janine
01-20-2007, 03:06 AM
Finally friday;
Weekend possibilities
Layed down to some chance.

Janine
01-20-2007, 03:10 AM
Layed down to some chance
Random yet unknown to us
Twists divert our paths.

Janine
01-20-2007, 03:13 AM
Twists divert our paths;
We recall not intentions
First set in the plan.

Pendragon
01-20-2007, 10:09 AM
First set in the plan,
Was to take out the rulers—
Unlead, sheep follow…

Whifflingpin
01-20-2007, 01:18 PM
Unled, sheep follow
Winding tracks on wild mountains.
They can; why can't we?

Il Penseroso
01-20-2007, 03:22 PM
They can; why can't we,
play our puzzles in the wind,
be the leaves we see.

Riesa
01-20-2007, 04:02 PM
:) purty.

be the leaves we see
compliant to the breeze which
lifts so easily

Susan Sonnen
01-20-2007, 04:51 PM
lifts so easily
her heart from despair's cold grasp,
one ray of hope's strength

Janine
01-20-2007, 08:24 PM
One ray of hope's strength,
May we find it in our depths;
Experience life.

zanna
01-20-2007, 10:44 PM
Experience life
don't let it pass you by, but
enjoy all the thrills.

Janine
01-21-2007, 01:03 AM
Enjoy all the thrills!
Ride the wild roller-coaster;
Breathless downhill plunge.

pioussoul
01-21-2007, 09:49 AM
Breathless downhill plunge,
Back to the place we came from,
Where lies true blessings.

Pendragon
01-21-2007, 11:19 AM
Where lies true blessings?
In giving or receiving?
What do you believe?

Susan Sonnen
01-21-2007, 12:22 PM
what do you believe?
life's meaning comes down to this...
now you must decide.

Janine
01-21-2007, 03:49 PM
Now you must decide -
Roads converge in a woodland,
Sounds like Robert Frost!

Susan Sonnen
01-21-2007, 04:24 PM
sounds like Robert Frost
your love of Mother Nature...
birds and bees fly free

Janine
01-21-2007, 04:32 PM
Birds and bees fly free,
Corn grows towards the sleepy sky,
Evening odors breathe.

Susan Sonnen
01-21-2007, 11:48 PM
evening odors breathe
under amused, winking stars,
all Earth is alive

Petrarch's Love
01-22-2007, 12:01 AM
All earth is alive
Made pregnant with rich damp, warmth
Of sun and rain joined.

Janine
01-22-2007, 12:20 AM
Of sun and rain joined,
The buttercups in the field;
Dew drops in their hearts.

Susan Sonnen
01-22-2007, 12:57 AM
dew drops in their hearts
faces lifted to the sun...
buttercups enchant

Janine
01-22-2007, 01:49 AM
Buttercups enchant,
Bees that buzz nearby the stream,
Flowing water sings.

Petrarch's Love
01-22-2007, 01:52 AM
Buttercups enchant
But dandeilion allure
Is slower growing.

Reccura
01-22-2007, 02:50 AM
Is slower growing
Young minds teach and talk a lot
They see rays of light

Pendragon
01-22-2007, 10:02 AM
They see rays of light,
They stretch out tender tendrils,
Plants worship the Sun…

Petrarch's Love
01-22-2007, 12:57 PM
Plants worship the sun
Offering perfumed incense
'Til death bows them home.

Adolescent09
01-22-2007, 02:46 PM
'Til death bows them home,
all souls ascend, destiny,
He sees and judges

Janine
01-22-2007, 03:41 PM
Nice Haiku, Adol,

He sees and judges;
All about him submit to -
Infinite wisdom.

Adolescent09
01-22-2007, 03:48 PM
Thanks

infitinite wisdom,
insurmountable courage,
his maxims obeyed,

Janine
01-22-2007, 03:58 PM
You might want to revise - you spelled infinite wrong - I am a poor speller too but it looks like a typo. Nice Haiku though; I like it.

His maxims obeyed,
They bow to his majesty;
Henry Fifth does rule.

Adolescent09
01-22-2007, 05:36 PM
Thanks for correcting me. Yes, it was a typo lol. (It's very challenging to write a good verse with a select number of syllables per line. That's why I like this.)

Henry fifth does rule,
a conquest beset within
a resistless fort

Janine
01-22-2007, 06:08 PM
Glad your are back on the thread. Personally, I got addicted once I got the hang of it. At first I was all thumbs and did not do the syllable count correctly. Now it seems to come naturally. This thread is totally fun, and a good learning/thinking exercise.

A resistless fort -
Henry swells with noble plans,
Against all odds.


Sorry, big Henry V fan - love the film!

Adolescent09
01-22-2007, 08:08 PM
against all odds
set right yet undone again
tranquility gone,

Janine
01-22-2007, 08:51 PM
Tranquility gone,
Confusion ceased fate's hand; King's
Son a garden lost.

Still thinking on Henry V and his son Henry VI

Nice poem below your Haiku - did you write it? You are a "romantic", Adolescent09.

Janine
01-23-2007, 01:44 AM
Son a garden lost,
Left home and never looked back;
Mother's heart forlorn.

Janine
01-23-2007, 01:45 AM
Mother's heart forlorn;
Feeling sting of rejection,
She weeps all night long.

Janine
01-23-2007, 01:47 AM
She weeps all night long,
Because no answer exists,
Crushed with emotion.

Pendragon
01-23-2007, 09:35 AM
Crushed with emotion,
Heart of shattered splinters bleeds,
Boundless sorrow weeps…

Pendragon
01-23-2007, 09:37 AM
Boundless sorrow weeps—
At the tomb of His dead friend—
“Lazarus, come forth!”

Adolescent09
01-23-2007, 09:38 AM
(Yes I did, thanks.; my goal with that poem was to make it as short as possible but flow very smoothly. The rhythm of the poem makes it roll off your tongue in just a few seconds..)

"Lazarus, come forth!"
your omnipresent desire,
depleted, I condemn

Susan Sonnen
01-23-2007, 09:38 AM
sorry...got in too late! and now I'm really confused...

Pendragon
01-23-2007, 09:52 AM
my apologies...I did not mean to cut you off. :(

Janine
01-23-2007, 03:43 PM
Depleted, I condemn
Those threatening sanity,
Ego anchors self.

Janine
01-23-2007, 03:46 PM
(Yes I did, thanks.; my goal with that poem was to make it as short as possible but flow very smoothly. The rhythm of the poem makes it roll off your tongue in just a few seconds..)

"Lazarus, come forth!"
your omnipresent desire,
depleted, I condemn

Adolescent, why don't you post your lovely poem in the "share poem" thread? It would be nice to share it there. I think in here, it resembles a series of Haiku and it is confusing some people. I thought it was Haiku's at first, too; now I think Susan S thinks it is and does not know how to proceed with H thread lines.
The poem does flow nicely; I like how you described it to me. Janine

brainstrain
01-23-2007, 09:48 PM
Ego Anchors Self
But the anchor sinks the boat
please don't drown yourself

Janine
01-23-2007, 10:20 PM
Please don't drown yourself
Virginia Wolfe, such insight;
Worlds we can not know.

zanna
01-24-2007, 12:29 AM
Worlds we can not know
what lies inside of his head?
I haven't a clue.

(I often seem to be clueless, don't I? Sensing a haiku trend here . . . hmmm. . . .)

Riesa
01-24-2007, 12:38 AM
I haven't a clue
like scooby-doo slip-sliding
being chased by ghosts

Janine
01-24-2007, 01:22 AM
Being chased by ghosts,
Gray myst floats by my window
Shutters in the night.

Reccura
01-24-2007, 02:42 AM
Shutters in the night
Hide when the moon is out there
I rest beside you

Riesa
01-24-2007, 02:45 AM
I rest beside you
in wavy summer grass, mouths
full of blueberries.

Janine
01-24-2007, 02:52 AM
Full of blueberries,
Steaming pie crust ozzed out blue
Juice, sweet aroma.

Laindessiel
01-24-2007, 02:55 AM
Boundless sorrow weeps—
At the tomb of His dead friend—
“Lazarus, come forth!”

That was brilliant, Uncle Pen! I had to actually count the syllables because it seemed impossible to put a dialogue in a haiku.

Juicy sweet aroma
The bees and flies surround it.
Shoo! Fools, go away!

Beautiful Janine! Hello!

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:00 AM
juice, sweet aroma
of appricots and spices,
soon fills the glass with longing.

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:01 AM
whoops, I was too slow - thought no one was out there this late . Hello beautiful - yourself, Lainy!

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:05 AM
Haven't seen you lately to talk to.

Shoo! Fools, go away!
Women, we're the fools, 'cause we
Longing fills the cup.

well, Lain, I tried to fix it!

Laindessiel
01-24-2007, 03:16 AM
It's nice, don't worry about it. It's 3:15 P.M. here now. (Although I worry about your last line...)

Riesa
01-24-2007, 03:28 AM
hi guys. :wave:

Longing fills the glass
with moonlit drops of honey
and bitter lemon.

ktd222
01-24-2007, 03:33 AM
and bitter lemon
made bitter hearts - This is
the days of our lives.

Laindessiel
01-24-2007, 03:36 AM
That was nice, Riesa..

The days of our lives
Combat the war of the worlds
Deep within our hearts

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:42 AM
So sorry, Lain, you are right - boy did I mess that one up big time. Forgive me, girls. Riesa, you did a good job fixing my last line, thanks. Can I change mine now? I will take it from your last line, Lain. It is 2:41 AM here:yawnb:

Deep within our hearts
Lies the core of our true souls
Hide from it we can't.

Laindessiel
01-24-2007, 03:45 AM
The overused :" To err is human. Perfect is boring." It's okay Janine! ;)

Hide from it we can't
The tears,longing in my eyes
Tutti mi manchi (I miss you all)

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:48 AM
Thanks, just tired and can never seem to fix them right when I post too slow.
Someone else has to take this one. I don't know what that means. Going to bed anyway...can't think now.....nite:wave:

Laindessiel
01-24-2007, 03:50 AM
Goodnight Janine! The last line means "I miss you all" in Italiano. ;) I have to bail out now too. Zia Zeny is waiting for me... ;) Someone else will take over...

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:51 AM
Good, have a nice day with Zia Zeny, whoever that is.

ktd222
01-24-2007, 03:58 AM
Tutti mi manchi (I miss you all),
said the girl to her goats, as
the slaughterhouse loomed.

Susan Sonnen
01-24-2007, 10:00 AM
the slaughterhouse loomed,
without a care, cattle moved
through the gate of death

Pendragon
01-24-2007, 10:00 AM
That was brilliant, Uncle Pen! I had to actually count the syllables because it seemed impossible to put a dialogue in a haiku. Thank you, My Flower. I didn't think I could do it either! ;)


through the gate of Death,
the long dusty trail now over—
cattle become food…

Adolescent09
01-24-2007, 03:09 PM
Thank you, My Flower. I didn't think I could do it either! ;)


through the gate of Death,
the long dusty trail now over—
cattle become food…

cattle became food,
irrigated corpses,
carcass for the crows

ktd222
01-24-2007, 03:19 PM
carcass for the crows
to feed on. Steaks for me. The
veins for dental floss

Janine
01-24-2007, 03:47 PM
Veins for dental floss
Of lost victims of these crimes,
Against humanity.


Awful thought...but could not do much with that last line...sorry

ktd222
01-24-2007, 03:50 PM
Sorry is on my part, Janine. I've been in a state of morbidity lately.

Janine
01-24-2007, 04:06 PM
Yes, I can see that....hey me, too...but try to cheer up.....

Against humanity,
Background of colorful life;
Nature soothes us all.

Triskele
01-24-2007, 05:41 PM
nature soothes us all
in a cold embrace of life
the harsh winds do blow

Janine
01-24-2007, 06:19 PM
The harsh winds do blow.
Winter, eventually,
Will give way to spring!

ktd222
01-24-2007, 06:28 PM
Will give way to spring,
where we all die, for plants won't
photosynthesize

Whifflingpin
01-24-2007, 06:41 PM
Photosynthesize!
absorb stifling gas, let light
give back breath and food

Janine
01-24-2007, 06:55 PM
Give back breath and food,
To he who lies in streets;
Countless souls in need.

Janine
01-24-2007, 06:56 PM
Countless souls in need
Of their isolation's end,
Come together here.

amuse
01-24-2007, 11:36 PM
come together here -
the picu is where all sick
poems recover!

zanna
01-25-2007, 12:09 AM
poems recover
power and beauty when shared
with your closest friend

Janine
01-25-2007, 03:05 AM
with your closest friend
You can always be yourself;
Honest, free spirit.

amuse
01-25-2007, 09:36 AM
honest, free spirit
this loyal hound i loved as
a pup dazzles me

Pendragon
01-25-2007, 09:49 AM
a pup dazzles me,
friendly, free spirit—yet he
uplifts my sorrow…

Susan Sonnen
01-25-2007, 10:13 AM
uplifts my sorrow
as a desert's coolest breeze_
he kisses my cheek

Riesa
01-25-2007, 12:20 PM
He kisses my cheek
soft in sleep, nuzzling me out
of my lush dreaming

Adolescent09
01-25-2007, 03:01 PM
of my lush dreaming,
blue on stocks forest abound,
beautiful springs

Whifflingpin
01-25-2007, 04:42 PM
Beautiful springs
bubble softly through lilies.
Lotus blossoms dream.

Janine
01-25-2007, 04:44 PM
Beautiful springs,
From earth, fast flowing water;
Waterfall's rainbows.

Janine
01-25-2007, 04:46 PM
Oops sorry...too slow - fixed it


Lotus blossoms dream,
From earth, fast flowing water;
Waterfall's rainbows.

ktd222
01-25-2007, 04:54 PM
Waterfall's rainbows.
Ah, I remember that place -
the double suicide

Janine
01-25-2007, 05:38 PM
The double suicide;
Together they go to meet
The great unknown realm.

Triskele
01-25-2007, 06:00 PM
the great unknown realm
where souls do meet their old foes
and forgiveness reigns

Janine
01-25-2007, 07:18 PM
Nice thought, Triskele.

and forgiveness reigns
When hearts peel off the layer of
bitter resentment.

brainstrain
01-25-2007, 08:17 PM
bitter resentment
too often can rule a life
forgive and forget

Heh, that worked out quite well. I do believe i'm getting the hang of this!

lit_lover
01-25-2007, 08:48 PM
Forgive and Forget
The Reciprocals of time
We cherished so dearly

Janine
01-25-2007, 08:51 PM
welcome lit lover to Haiku, I haven't seen you on here before this. Nice Haiku!

We cherished so dearly,
Holding deep within our hearts,
Forever, unchanged.

ktd222
01-25-2007, 11:51 PM
Forever, unchanged.
Rotting away into pulps
of fertilizer.

Janine
01-26-2007, 02:26 AM
Of fertilizer,
We plan garden's 'wakening,
Lush luminous blooms!

Reccura
01-26-2007, 03:00 AM
Lush luminous blooms!
beautiful flowers smile
when the sun rises

Janine
01-26-2007, 04:05 AM
When the sun rises
I sleep on, now reluctant
To face a new day.

benjidog
01-26-2007, 04:21 AM
To face a new day
Joining good natured deaths smile
To eternity

Laindessiel
01-26-2007, 04:23 AM
Photosynthesize!
absorb stifling gas, let light
give back breath and food

Same thoughts I give to you, Uncle Whiff! Great brilliant haiku!


Thank you, My Flower. I didn't think I could do it either! ;)

With my Uncie Pen? Nothing seems impossibleh!


When the sun rises
I sleep on, now reluctant
To face a new day.

To face a new day
My hair seems to grow forwards
Along with my mind...

Laindessiel
01-26-2007, 04:25 AM
Benjidog, oh man! ;) Okay, Janine will take it from yours...

Benj, congrats on your first post!

ktd222
01-26-2007, 09:22 AM
Along with my mind,
other selves, we argue til
madness overwhelms.

Pendragon
01-26-2007, 10:30 AM
madness overwhelms,
but if madness then this be—
purpose lies therein…

Janine
01-26-2007, 03:56 PM
Purpose lies therein…
Within our every life breath;
Creativity!

TwiztidKarma
01-26-2007, 06:44 PM
Creativity,
Holds my inner enemy,
Forever a thought ,

Janine
01-26-2007, 07:39 PM
Welcome TwiztidKarma - interestig name. Nice first (?) Haiku

Forever a thought,
Silent dream of you and me
Sealed in memory.

zanna
01-26-2007, 07:53 PM
Sealed in memory
I refuse to forget
that special moment

Janine
01-26-2007, 08:11 PM
That special moment,
You first spoke to me, and I,
Stood spellbound in time.

amuse
01-26-2007, 09:56 PM
stood spellbound in time
that moment when i found them
dangling from the beams

Riesa
01-26-2007, 10:13 PM
dangling from the beams
in lurid exhibition
the end of belief

amuse
01-26-2007, 11:44 PM
the end of belief:
when ridiculosities
abound unnoticed

Janine
01-26-2007, 11:57 PM
Abound unnoticed,
Numerous tiny insects -
Ants building sand homes.

Virgil
01-27-2007, 12:47 AM
Ants building sand homes,
See how they run to mother.
What do they live on?

Petrarch's Love
01-27-2007, 01:33 AM
What do they live on?
On what substance do they feed?
They, the unreal ones.

Susan Sonnen
01-27-2007, 01:36 AM
they, the unreal ones,
pillage the minds of poets_
melancholia

zanna
01-27-2007, 02:36 AM
melancholia
such bittersweet emotions
often overwhelm.

And Janine, what a great follow up! Pretty much the kind of moment I was thinking about! *gets misty-eyed* It was an amazing one. :)

TwiztidKarma
01-27-2007, 03:34 AM
Often Overwhelm,
Cradeld in the sands of time,
To restart the ryme,

zanna
01-27-2007, 03:41 AM
to restart the ryme (rhyme, twizt?)
just give me a little time
and bring me a lime.

benjidog
01-27-2007, 05:46 AM
and bring me a lime
to put in my ice and drink
sitting here with smiles

Pendragon
01-27-2007, 10:47 AM
sitting here with smiles—
hiding behind masquerades—
play incognito… :cool:

Susan Sonnen
01-27-2007, 10:50 AM
sorry...just pretend I wasn't here...isn't there a delete button??

back to Pendragon....

sitting here with smiles—
hiding behind masquerades—
play incognito…
__________________

Riesa
01-27-2007, 10:58 AM
play incognito
relinquish all spotlights, in
reclusive favor

Janine
01-27-2007, 02:35 PM
Reclusive favor
Is what I often desire,
Leave me to myself.

Riesa
01-27-2007, 04:57 PM
leave me to myself;
I'll ponder the sun's glinting
gift to the water

benjidog
01-27-2007, 05:44 PM
gift to the water
titanic in the cold blue
silent among fishes

amuse
01-27-2007, 08:28 PM
silent among fishes
ghost eels: their hallmarks tiny
zaps and candlelight

Janine
01-28-2007, 01:16 AM
zaps and candlelight
silent mists fly past doorways
window frames full moon

amuse
01-28-2007, 02:25 PM
window frames full moon
light illuminates her she
discards grievous shrouds

Whifflingpin
01-28-2007, 03:07 PM
Discards grievous shrouds
dons garments of festivals
spangles grass with stars

Janine
01-28-2007, 04:50 PM
Whiff, love that Haiku - especially last line!

Spangles grass with stars,
Full moon casting on the lawn,
Such heavenly light.

benjidog
01-28-2007, 05:43 PM
Such heavenly light
Wind blows breeze across lawn
snowflakes swirling soft

Janine
01-28-2007, 09:58 PM
snowflakes swirling soft
in the frozen tundra, we
brace from fury's blow.

amuse
01-28-2007, 10:29 PM
brace from fury's blow
she felled mountains whilst sparring
with big sis today

TwiztidKarma
01-28-2007, 10:33 PM
With big sis today,
Running away with my thoughts,
today I shan't rot.

amuse
01-28-2007, 11:23 PM
today i shan't rot;
they've placed me in the fridge - god
save the buttermilk!

samercury
01-28-2007, 11:32 PM
save the buttermilk!
place it somewhere nice and cool
away from the cat

Virgil
01-28-2007, 11:55 PM
Hi Same. Nice haiku.

Away from the cat
the poor dog licks his scratches.
He'll bark when cat mews.

Janine
01-29-2007, 12:04 AM
Hi Virgil, humm, was "cat mews" from Hamlet?.."the cat will mew, the dog will have his day....

He'll bark when cat mews,
Then try to daunt the feline
Under chair cat hides.

samercury
01-29-2007, 12:09 AM
Under chair cat hides.
Patience is the golden key
To future glory

Janine
01-29-2007, 12:22 AM
To future glory,
May they raise the bloody flag,
Many lives gone, lost.

ktd222
01-29-2007, 12:54 AM
Many lives gone, lost
to the deed doer, which, in turn,
will be deeded too.

Janine
01-29-2007, 02:22 AM
Will be deeded, too
With judgement's revealing light;
Justice in truth reigns.

Laindessiel
01-29-2007, 04:10 AM
Justice in truth reigns
When policies and rules are
Raking time for time

Outlander
01-29-2007, 08:59 AM
Raking time for time
Observes blind the blowing wind
White flakes cool decay

Pendragon
01-29-2007, 12:18 PM
white flakes cool decay—
snowfall closed schools today—
I hopefully make it…

TwiztidKarma
01-29-2007, 12:36 PM
I hopefully make it,
Through tears of sorrow and joy,
Four centuries last,

Misscaroline
01-29-2007, 04:30 PM
Four centuries last
Still we stand homogenous
Assimilation :p

Hi....

Janine
01-29-2007, 06:35 PM
Assimilation -
All mankind in one body
Earth, "human beings"

Misscaroline
01-29-2007, 06:37 PM
Earth, "human beings"
Where's the fun in that without
our dearest martians?

Hi Janine! :wave: Haven't seen you in awhile....

TwiztidKarma
01-29-2007, 06:51 PM
Our dearest martians?
Could they learn our simple pain?
One cant tell, but look.

Misscaroline
01-29-2007, 07:03 PM
One can't tell, but look--
Perhaps the butterfly's wings
Will cause tsunamis.

Janine
01-29-2007, 09:43 PM
Will cause tsunamis,
Earthquakes splitting planet's crust;
Is this world ending?

Susan Sonnen
01-29-2007, 11:50 PM
is this world ending
or am I simply dying...
a raven watches

Janine
01-30-2007, 12:10 AM
A raven watches,
Doves peacefully cuddle on roof;
Agression subdued.

amuse
01-30-2007, 12:53 AM
Agression subdued
a small kernel pops: listen!
his heart's opening!

TwiztidKarma
01-30-2007, 12:56 AM
His heart's opening!
But inside we found nothing,
We froze in silence!