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hack
11-16-2009, 11:30 PM
one thousand pardons
speaking without listening
crimson on my cheeks

ampoule
11-16-2009, 11:36 PM
crimson on my cheeks
wanting to take it all back
but you won't let me

hack
11-16-2009, 11:37 PM
clinking spoon wakens
my one hundred meter stare
new day in china

Silas Thorne
11-16-2009, 11:40 PM
new day in China
following the sharemarket
the numbers are cold

ampoule
11-16-2009, 11:48 PM
the numbers are cold
the counting frozen solid
chill me to the bone

hack
11-17-2009, 12:04 AM
chill me to the bone
in the freezer go the chops
Tuesday brings a thaw

hack
11-17-2009, 12:54 AM
Tuesday brings a thaw
Saturday is bleak and wet
crocus stirs below

ampoule
11-17-2009, 08:24 AM
crocus stirs below
turning over in its sleep
waiting to be called

hack
11-17-2009, 01:35 PM
waiting to be called
there's a message from the king
we two have a dream

mazHur
11-17-2009, 03:11 PM
we two have a dream
floating over our eyelids
shining in our eyes

hack
11-17-2009, 04:10 PM
shining in our eyes
a distant fear now closer
Phobos at full tilt

mazHur
11-17-2009, 06:24 PM
Phobos at full tilt
the war between the good and
evil continues.

hack
11-17-2009, 09:18 PM
evil continues
though thwarted at every turn
side by each with love

atiguhya padma
11-18-2009, 02:47 PM
side by each with love
a brutal line to contend
with. love to guide you

hack
11-18-2009, 11:22 PM
with love to guide you
your hem sweeps my heart from me
ground beneath your feet

sadparadise
11-19-2009, 07:56 PM
Ground beneath your feet
a romance once desired
humdrum days now old.

ampoule
11-19-2009, 10:00 PM
humdrum days now old
seem new, rejuvenated
with you in my life

hack
11-19-2009, 11:28 PM
with you in my life
a hundred other lovers
cursing my foul name

Haunted
11-20-2009, 11:56 AM
cursing my foul name
let me be yours forever
that beautiful b*tch

mazHur
11-20-2009, 12:04 PM
that beautiful b*tch
that sexy mamasita
walks and talks in dream!

Haunted
11-20-2009, 12:39 PM
walks and talks in dream
she makes no whispers by day
saves all for the night

mazHur
11-20-2009, 12:58 PM
saves all for the night
when stars twinkle with delight
around the blue moon.

hack
11-20-2009, 10:51 PM
around the blue moon
Jimi Hendrix Purple Haze
colors changing hue

sadparadise
11-21-2009, 12:05 PM
Colors changing hue
minnow waits under thin ice
amber leaves reflect.

Dark Muse
11-21-2009, 12:40 PM
Amber leaves reflect
the color within your eyes
under the sunset

hack
11-21-2009, 02:13 PM
under the sunset
thin hope rests on mountaintops
then comes crushing night

sadparadise
11-21-2009, 03:25 PM
Then comes crushing night
fog rises, dew dampens moods
choking in the plight.

atiguhya padma
11-22-2009, 05:07 PM
choking in the plight
passion aroused through the rope
intense precipice

sadparadise
11-23-2009, 11:41 PM
Intense precipice
acute wound passions ensnare
a strangers allure.

hack
11-24-2009, 12:03 PM
a strangers allure
eyes accidentally caress
a trader in love

atiguhya padma
11-24-2009, 06:05 PM
A trader in love
is forever on the phone
making heart deals

Buh4Bee
11-24-2009, 09:38 PM
a lonely heart ache

hack
11-24-2009, 10:25 PM
making heart deals
I got the nuts, ten to ace
sunglasses pulled down

Dark Muse
11-24-2009, 10:27 PM
Sunglasses pulled down
as she peers above their rim
"Come hither" she says.

Silas Thorne
11-24-2009, 10:33 PM
'Come hither' she says,
but I paralytic, drunk,
can't even roll near.

atiguhya padma
11-25-2009, 03:23 PM
can't even roll near
the right rocks stand a circle
crack-wizened and worn

hack
11-25-2009, 08:30 PM
crack-wizened and worn
like an old rode hard saddle
hard luck junkie whore

Haunted
11-26-2009, 02:40 AM
hard luck junkie whore
once a glamor pin up girl
until fate nailed her

hack
11-28-2009, 01:46 AM
until fate nailed her
prophet who hung with Jesus
Mary Magdelene

atiguhya padma
11-28-2009, 04:48 AM
Mary Magdalene
The other half of Mary
More interesting

Silas Thorne
11-28-2009, 05:25 AM
More interesting
than the city's lights at night,
waves on a dark sea.

white camellia
11-28-2009, 06:10 AM
waves on a dark sea
whose laments in the breath of
winter lingered on

hack
11-28-2009, 09:05 PM
winter lingered on
not waiting for a season
that would do it harm

Pensive
11-29-2009, 04:50 PM
That would do it harm
Hit heart in such one way now
Ought to be broken

mazHur
11-29-2009, 04:53 PM
Ought to be broken
my heart in those careless hands
more brittle than glass

atiguhya padma
11-29-2009, 06:24 PM
More brittle than glass
Is that faith without reason
Childhood fantasy

mazHur
11-29-2009, 06:31 PM
Childhood fantasy
drove me to the yam yam tree
where waited my love.

hack
11-30-2009, 12:06 AM
where waited my love
soft as steel in Gods two hands
bent toward my will

Haunted
11-30-2009, 12:26 AM
bent toward my will
the silver fork in your hand
serving up a feast

Silas Thorne
11-30-2009, 01:10 AM
serving up a feast
chicks strain their necks, their mouths wide,
o what sick goodness!

Haunted
11-30-2009, 03:45 AM
o what sick goodness!
I beg the white satin to
not fall on your face

hack
12-01-2009, 02:50 PM
not fall on your face
nor summer in your black hair
but spring in your step

Make it a tanka by adding this refrain;

there is no place for winter
because winter leaves me cold

atiguhya padma
12-01-2009, 07:41 PM
but spring in your step
causes imbalance, better
take life in your stride

hack
12-01-2009, 11:59 PM
take life in your stride
step across an ocean wide
stroll to distant stars

Haunted
12-02-2009, 10:58 PM
stroll to distant stars
saying goodbye to a world
with no lights...no you

Turtletoast
12-03-2009, 12:02 AM
with no lights...no you
forever in dark am I
you are my north star

symphony
12-03-2009, 05:22 PM
you are my north star--
the night every night is far,
our world falls farther...

mazHur
12-03-2009, 05:25 PM
our world falls farther...
like the far away bright stars
lost in the cosmos!

symphony
12-03-2009, 05:33 PM
Lost in the cosmos
of your eyes, knowing the black
lights, I play your eyes.

mazHur
12-03-2009, 05:36 PM
lights, I play your eyes
burning bright with lover's sight
aiming at my heart!

symphony
12-03-2009, 05:54 PM
aiming at my heart,
do you fail? looking back, do
you return, wander?

mazHur
12-03-2009, 05:56 PM
you return, wander
if that may get your devi
you are a lover!

symphony
12-03-2009, 06:01 PM
you are a lover,
your breath smells of kisses, that
distant treasured world

mazHur
12-03-2009, 06:05 PM
distant treasured world
awaits the love of my heart
my belov-ed fair.




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symphony
12-03-2009, 06:08 PM
my belove-ed fair
of colors too wild, too rare,
of men who dont care

mazHur
12-03-2009, 06:10 PM
of men who dont care
are scant in my religion
love you love thy dog!

symphony
12-03-2009, 06:16 PM
love you, love thy dog
baked-cookie-disposition
morning in the pot

mazHur
12-03-2009, 06:22 PM
morning in the pot
night snugged in your silky arms
Ah! the lucky dog!

symphony
12-03-2009, 06:28 PM
ah! the lucky dog!
there in that couch the summer
remains, lets remain.

mazHur
12-03-2009, 06:30 PM
remains? lets remain
together for a life time
till nothing remains!

symphony
12-03-2009, 06:36 PM
Till nothing remains,
remains the questions of whys
and the hows and wheres.

mazHur
12-03-2009, 06:38 PM
and the hows and wheres
and whys are clog in love's way
let's get two in one!

symphony
12-03-2009, 06:43 PM
let's get two in one
life and live mine and yours in
one endless heaven

mazHur
12-03-2009, 06:59 PM
one endless heaven
with you and me alone there
like Adam and Eve

symphony
12-03-2009, 07:09 PM
like Adam and Eve
we love and fall, wisdom is
the sudden put-down.

mazHur
12-03-2009, 07:11 PM
the sudden put-down
is a trait of the cowards
lovers never die!

symphony
12-03-2009, 07:17 PM
lovers never die
unloved, the moment you see,
you are being seen.

mazHur
12-03-2009, 07:21 PM
you are being seen
but you really don't know
who is watching you?

symphony
12-03-2009, 07:27 PM
who is watching you?
the curtains draw the night out
leave a soft whisper.

mazHur
12-03-2009, 07:29 PM
leave a soft whisper
press the petals with soft touch
of your rosy lips!

symphony
12-03-2009, 07:36 PM
of your rosy lips
i sang but the music dies
when summer vetoes

mazHur
12-03-2009, 07:38 PM
when summer takes off
green leaves turn into yellow
spread gold everywhere!

symphony
12-03-2009, 07:39 PM
spread gold everywhere
bring in the honeyed morning
of suns and summers

mazHur
12-03-2009, 07:43 PM
of suns and summers
of fairies , angels and gods
Man's a mystery.

symphony
12-03-2009, 07:54 PM
Man's a mystery
that nature flips through, and will,
someday, close the book.

Buh4Bee
12-03-2009, 09:54 PM
Ah! well done, well done
beautiful exchange of words
start a new haiku?

symphony
12-03-2009, 11:44 PM
Ah! well done, well done
beautiful exchange of words
start a new haiku?

Start a new haiku?
Was my previous effort
completely ignored?

:P

Annabelle
12-04-2009, 12:56 AM
Completely ignored?
Our sphere of existence
Within your wisdom

hack
12-05-2009, 08:15 AM
within your wisdom
lie hid my meager questions
whisper master, low

sadparadise
12-06-2009, 07:13 PM
Whisper master, low
a comprimised seduction
naked in our rooms

mazHur
12-06-2009, 07:31 PM
naked in our rooms
lie two bodies still alive
moving up and down!

hack
12-06-2009, 11:39 PM
moving up and down
pulled then pushed, turned away last
hot suns, distant stars

learntodiscover
12-07-2009, 10:33 AM
hot suns, distant stars
burning crusts of existance
I am torn, upheaved.

hack
12-07-2009, 11:32 PM
I am torn, upheaved
earth rent, sky shattered, sea black
and I want you still

Haunted
12-08-2009, 10:44 PM
and I want you still
before God — can't forgive you
can't live without you

sadparadise
12-12-2009, 04:55 PM
can't live without you
lost in your snarling tantrum
beat and forgotten.

mazHur
12-12-2009, 05:05 PM
beat and forgotten
Adam now lives on scorched Earth
abandoned by god!

hack
12-13-2009, 12:10 AM
abandoned by god
bereft of hope, who goes there?
whose hand shall I take?

sadparadise
12-13-2009, 01:20 AM
Whose hand shall I take?
untrustworthy government
cultural ruin.

ShoutGrace
12-13-2009, 03:10 AM
Cultural ruin
Rebuilding after failure
People lift their heads

Haunted
12-14-2009, 11:58 AM
people lift their heads
at last, my day of glory
in a black casket

hack
12-14-2009, 11:33 PM
in a black casket
strewn with roses red and white
my heart heavenbound

mazHur
12-14-2009, 11:37 PM
my heart heavenbound
angels at the pearly gate
watching me with awe!

hack
12-16-2009, 11:56 AM
watching me with awe
my sweet children there below
at my feet of clay

Haunted
12-16-2009, 08:56 PM
at my feet of clay
my thighs would rise from hands
I'm your creation

Annabelle
12-17-2009, 01:07 AM
I'm your creation
Yet you know just this of me
Infinity is here

BienvenuJDC
12-17-2009, 01:10 AM
Infinity is here
From before the beginning
And after the end

Haunted
12-17-2009, 04:33 AM
And after the end
when the black lace softly drops
will you kiss goodbye

Silas Thorne
12-17-2009, 05:38 AM
Will you kiss goodbye
to those nights you so treasured?
Tears drop to the floor.

TheFifthElement
12-17-2009, 04:55 PM
Tears drop to the floor
on chains I'm stringing for you:
sad pearls, rare jewels.

Haunted
12-18-2009, 10:59 AM
sad pearls, rare jewels
chained to an unwanted love
far, far from the sea

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 01:54 PM
Far, far from the sea
The grand vessel is at rest
Yearning for the waves.

Haunted
12-18-2009, 03:08 PM
yearning for the waves
to come crashing in, roll out..........
'til I fall asleep

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 03:13 PM
'til I fall asleep...
would you please, stay by my side...
...cause...I'm....afraid...ofzzzzzzzz

Haunted
12-18-2009, 03:19 PM
...cause...I'm....afraid...ofzzzzzzzz
and the dark.......and the monsters......
that'll take you from me!!!!!!!

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 03:24 PM
That'll take you from me!!
Yes, that is the only thing...
Slipped in the abyss!

Haunted
12-18-2009, 03:37 PM
Slipped in the abyss
a whole underworld opens
that's where I will stay

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 08:19 PM
That's where? ...I will stay
If you will show me the way,
I'll return again.

Haunted
12-18-2009, 08:39 PM
I'll return again
in the middle the night
to watch over you

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 08:42 PM
To watch over you
Tis my honorable task
I will...at all costs!

hack
12-19-2009, 05:35 AM
it will, at all costs
heaven rips my purse from me
needles eye awaits

BienvenuJDC
12-19-2009, 12:58 PM
Needle's Eye awaits
The small gate of mystery
There undiscovered

Captain_Kuchiki
12-19-2009, 02:46 PM
Don't you remember?
I was there for all that time
You never noticed.

Haunted
12-19-2009, 05:01 PM
there undiscovered
our little secret world but
you never noticed

mazHur
12-19-2009, 05:42 PM
you never noticed
you never cared about it
you were a dumb star.

BienvenuJDC
12-19-2009, 06:16 PM
You were a dumb Star
a stupid celebrity
who cares for yourself

Haunted
12-20-2009, 11:14 AM
who cares for yourself
more than me but that isn't
enough, or is it?

BienvenuJDC
12-20-2009, 11:39 AM
Enough, or is it?
Is there more to search for now?
Is there contentment?

Haunted
12-20-2009, 11:54 AM
Is there contentment?
why's a little peace of mind
so hard to come by?

hack
12-22-2009, 09:53 PM
so hard to come by
peace bought with experience
of a broken heart

mazHur
12-23-2009, 01:02 AM
of a broken heart
how could you the full heart feel
its cracked agony?

Heathcliff
12-23-2009, 05:17 AM
Its cracked agony?
Shimmers in the chilly dawn,
stays awake 'til nigh.

mazHur
12-23-2009, 05:32 AM
stays awake 'til night
searching with its beaming eyes
nothing but darkness.

Heathcliff
12-23-2009, 05:37 AM
Nothing but darkness,
Invisible screaming light.
Hides in the shadows.

hack
12-23-2009, 11:53 AM
hides in the shadows
hung there in the tanners shed
reeking of lost lives

Haunted
12-23-2009, 12:20 PM
reeking of lost lives
reminiscent of lost loves
this grave bears my name

Dr Jekyll
12-23-2009, 12:31 PM
This grave bears my name
Dark and swoote, dust lies here now
Under misty hands

Haunted
12-23-2009, 01:02 PM
under misty hands
I'm victim to the charm of
a brooding vampire

BienvenuJDC
12-23-2009, 11:03 PM
A brooding vampire
stands over his latest victim
turning them to night.

hack
12-24-2009, 12:59 AM
turning them to night
stars wheel in heavens deep vault
searching out the Sun

chaneybean
12-25-2009, 08:00 PM
search out the sun
daylight warms your very soul
smile in the sunlight

Dinkleberry2010
12-25-2009, 09:16 PM
smile in the sunlight
grin in the light of the moon
frown when rain begins

Heathcliff
12-25-2009, 10:05 PM
Frown when rain begins,
Look up to the crying sky.
See a rainbow drown.

hack
12-26-2009, 12:36 PM
see a rainbow drown
in rain, then find sun once more
rousing hues just hid

Haunted
12-26-2009, 12:53 PM
rousing hues just hid
you look cute when you are shy
feign small talk with me

Heathcliff
12-26-2009, 08:36 PM
Feign small talk with me,
Pretend you know how to fly.
Stifle a bold smile.

RobinHood3000
12-27-2009, 06:49 PM
Stifle a bold smile
Trying to feign dispassion
No use - I'm in love

Heathcliff
12-27-2009, 11:19 PM
No use - I'm in love,
Heart clouded by intentions.
Make a lonely wish.

Dinkleberry2010
12-27-2009, 11:44 PM
make a lonely wish
silence will give you a gift
that is beyond price

Heathcliff
12-28-2009, 02:27 AM
That is beyond price,
A burden of the weakest.
Penny in your hand.

hack
12-29-2009, 09:19 PM
penny in your hand
copper over both your eyes
Charon, keep the change

Heathcliff
12-29-2009, 10:22 PM
Charon, keep the change.
Glimmers in the children's eye.
Sparkling of hope.

Haunted
12-30-2009, 10:26 PM
sparkling of hope
in a string of Christmas lights
one burns out — all will

Heathcliff
12-30-2009, 11:14 PM
One burns out - all will.
Faster to the finish line.
Stumble to glory.

kiz_paws
12-31-2009, 04:49 AM
Stumble to glory
cardboard wings melting in rain
future trickles down

Haunted
12-31-2009, 12:42 PM
future trickles down
cheek..shoulder...midriff...leg...sole
'til it's in the drain

kiz_paws
12-31-2009, 08:38 PM
'til it's in the drain
pieces of yesterday's child
shattered consciousness

Heathcliff
01-01-2010, 01:05 AM
Shattered consciousness,
Colours drip out of their hands.
A cherry on top.

ashley_bergman
01-01-2010, 01:34 AM
A cherry on top
Completes a piece of beauty
Which sates my hunger.

toni
01-02-2010, 11:11 AM
Which states my hunger,
empty plate, dinner table-
a whirlwind of sorts

qimissung
01-02-2010, 09:46 PM
a whirlwind of sorts
winter storm-a snow globe of
insatiable grace

Heathcliff
01-03-2010, 07:15 AM
Instatiable grace,
Unfathomable fate comes.
A heartbeat away.

Haunted
01-05-2010, 10:41 AM
a heartbeat away
from flatlining, there is you,
waiting in the wings...

Dark Muse
01-06-2010, 03:30 AM
Waiting in the wings...
for the final curtain call
of Death's masquerade

toni
01-06-2010, 11:20 AM
of Death's masquerade,
dagger gleaming in the hall,
in 2 minutes - death.

Haunted
01-06-2010, 12:35 PM
in 2 minutes - death
but between zero and two
it's love on the fly

Heathcliff
01-07-2010, 07:06 AM
It's love on the fly.
Birds of a feather fall down,
Can't tear us apart.

Haunted
01-08-2010, 11:29 AM
can't tear us apart
not shears nor splitting earthquakes
none except ourselves

Heathcliff
01-09-2010, 12:08 AM
None except ourselves,
Dance on the blood-striken floor.
On a broken heart.

qimissung
01-09-2010, 02:25 AM
on a broken heart
play a broken sad refrain
love is hard to find

Heathcliff
01-09-2010, 02:30 AM
Love is hard to find,
The phiranas in the sea.
Search through the haystack.

And that is probably how you spell phirana... :rolleyes:

qimissung
01-09-2010, 03:19 AM
search through the haystack
piranhas nip loving thoughts
plunge from divine dream

Heathcliff
01-09-2010, 03:22 AM
Plunge from divine dream,
Tickle your own fantasies.
Wish upon a star.

(Ahh, so that's how you spell piranha...)

Haunted
01-11-2010, 03:02 PM
Wish upon a star
which I nicknamed after you
our own universe

Heathcliff
01-12-2010, 02:55 AM
Our own universe,
A mute scream of constant space.
Stands a lonely star.

Dark Muse
01-12-2010, 02:57 AM
Stands a lonely star
across the vast desert land
lighting through darkness

Heathcliff
01-12-2010, 03:07 AM
Lighting through darkness,
Night-drifter's lamp in the mist.
Snow falls in his cup.

Haunted
01-13-2010, 12:11 PM
snow falls in his cup
covering some loose change and
the last drop of hope

hack
01-13-2010, 01:16 PM
the last drop of hope
honey flavored, gold and sweet
saving best for last

Haunted
01-13-2010, 06:36 PM
saving best for last
me, you, and your sweet mercy
here's to coup de grāce

hack
01-13-2010, 11:32 PM
here's to coup de grace
antidote for a hard life
is an easy death

ampoule
01-14-2010, 09:58 AM
is an easy death
the thing we are hoping for
no thrashing, no screams

Haunted
01-14-2010, 12:33 PM
no thrashing, no screams
here I am, locked in a dream
can't move, speak or leave

BienvenuJDC
01-14-2010, 08:04 PM
Can't move, speak or leave,
Paralyzed by the venom,
The venomous stare.

hack
01-14-2010, 11:50 PM
the venomous stare
locked on a warm beating heart
scales slip over stone

Heathcliff
01-15-2010, 04:50 AM
Scales slip over stone,
Sandy water in your toes.
Invisible teeth.

kafkaroach
01-15-2010, 11:24 PM
invisible teeth,
gnashing, calmly, quietly
time opens, closes

Heathcliff
01-16-2010, 12:24 AM
Time opens, closes,
See the world in black and white.
Clock strikes twelve - cuckoo.

Haunted
01-16-2010, 01:37 AM
clock strikes twelve - cuckoo
there were two hands...now one's gone
I'm losing my mind

kafkaroach
01-16-2010, 02:20 AM
I'm losing my mind
sight, sound, taste, smell, touch, fleeting;
black truth luminous

hack
01-16-2010, 12:47 PM
black truth luminous
glowing brighter than red coals
beauty becomes ash

Haunted
01-16-2010, 01:22 PM
beauty becomes ash
worshipped in a grecian urn
make me a goddess

hack
01-17-2010, 01:52 AM
make me a goddess
fashioned from old sandalwood
ancient skies and pearls

TheFifthElement
01-17-2010, 08:44 AM
Ancient skies and pearls
riven from oysters, tang of
the sea. My love. You.

hack
01-17-2010, 11:26 PM
thesea.mylove.you
notthesmallestspacebetween
theearth.yourlove.me

Heathcliff
01-18-2010, 12:20 AM
The Earth, your love, me.
A natural disaster,
Waiting to happen.

ampoule
01-18-2010, 08:51 AM
Waiting to happen
It won't if I just sit here
So, I'll get started

Heathcliff
01-19-2010, 12:23 AM
So, I'll get started,
I'll percevere 'til the ends.
Carry out my dream.

AimusSage
01-19-2010, 12:52 AM
Carry out my dream
Without you I cannot die
Safe me from myself

Heathcliff
01-19-2010, 01:05 AM
Save me from myself,
Climb the vine to the tower.
Carry me on horse.

AimusSage
01-19-2010, 01:14 AM
Carry me on horse
Beauties of the great planes
Ride toward the sun

Heathcliff
01-19-2010, 01:20 AM
Ride towards the sun,
Burning in the day and night.
Mid-summer Night's Dream.

AimusSage
01-19-2010, 02:00 AM
Mid-Summer Night's Dream
Forgotten through time immortal
A poem so lovely

Heathcliff
01-19-2010, 02:04 AM
A poem so lovely,
An effortless successor.
A walking legend.

ampoule
01-19-2010, 08:53 AM
a walking legend
stumbles imperceptibly
we know it happens

Heathcliff
01-21-2010, 05:44 AM
We know it happens.
Climbing in a mountain range,
Come back home again.

Haunted
01-24-2010, 10:39 PM
come back home again
even if it's your shadow
a sign that you're here

Dark Muse
01-24-2010, 10:44 PM
A sign that you're here
in traces of frosted breath
leaves lingering fear

Heathcliff
01-24-2010, 11:00 PM
Leaves lingering fear,
Mountanous quake shivering.
The trees falling down.

hack
01-27-2010, 10:33 PM
trees falling down
slowly tip and rip the earth
graceful with no sound

Haunted
01-27-2010, 11:47 PM
graceful with no sound
snow falls, red roses turned white
above, headstone nods

BienvenuJDC
01-28-2010, 12:04 AM
above, headstone nods
below, the ground hungers more
with no food tonight

hack
01-28-2010, 12:32 AM
with no food tonight
hunger watching over sleep
stars above still spin

BienvenuJDC
01-28-2010, 12:37 AM
stars above still spin
in their rotation around
our lives through the night

Haunted
01-28-2010, 12:54 AM
our lives through the night
lit by a thin halo of
white mist, dew and tears

BienvenuJDC
01-28-2010, 12:57 AM
white mist, dew and tears
drench us in the new morning
when hope is revealed

Heathcliff
01-28-2010, 07:15 AM
When hope is revealed,
Escape a cursed prison cell.
To show her the stars.

hack
01-28-2010, 11:14 PM
to show her the stars
Ngonde, the Moon, wakes and
shakes his spangled cloak

Haunted
01-29-2010, 12:14 AM
shakes his spangled cloak
he wakes centuries old dust
from where I once lay

BienvenuJDC
01-29-2010, 12:16 AM
From where I once lay,
the impression shows perfect,
revealing my form

Haunted
01-29-2010, 01:25 AM
revealing my form
backlit by the setting sun
the dress undresses

BienvenuJDC
01-29-2010, 01:27 AM
the dress undresses
making imaginations
unnecessary!

atiguhya padma
01-29-2010, 02:12 PM
unnecessary
beauty that hides bitter pain
blood on pristine snow

kiz_paws
01-29-2010, 09:22 PM
Blood on pristine snow
flesh adheres not to metal
the mercury falls

hack
01-30-2010, 11:04 AM
the mercury falls
ragged breath congeals in fog
footfalls crunch through snow

atiguhya padma
01-31-2010, 06:45 PM
footfalls crunch through snow
landscapes merging skyscenes with
quiet peaceful mind

Dark Muse
01-31-2010, 06:47 PM
Quiet peaceful mind
shatters with the illusion
reflected in glass

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 02:13 AM
Reflected in glass
the image copies them all
but only reversed

Babyguile
02-01-2010, 09:16 AM
but only reversed
except one troubling truth
pounding through the sky

atiguhya padma
02-01-2010, 01:31 PM
pounding through the sky
snow bears crunching clouds make flakes
fall like parachutes

Haunted
02-02-2010, 12:51 AM
fall like parachutes
tangled cords, broken harness
can you catch me still

hack
02-02-2010, 01:19 AM
can you catch me still
humming bird too quick to see
are you really there?

BienvenuJDC
02-02-2010, 12:33 PM
are you really there?
or are you the creative
product of my mind?

Babyguile
02-02-2010, 02:55 PM
product of my mind?
like the many Gods of man
that man created

atiguhya padma
02-02-2010, 07:49 PM
that man created
the child his fruit ripened
into latent death

BienvenuJDC
02-02-2010, 11:35 PM
into latent death
each will go without slight hope
that do not know God...

Heathcliff
02-03-2010, 05:57 AM
That do not know God,
Nothing much else to do now.
Lost eternity.

TheFifthElement
02-03-2010, 04:39 PM
Lost eternity -
a stone dropped in calm waters
ripples the surface

atiguhya padma
02-03-2010, 04:39 PM
Lost eternity
That dream of endless boredom:
Clap-happy heaven

hack
02-04-2010, 04:10 PM
clap happy heaven
where venereal disease
is a frame of mind

TheFifthElement
02-04-2010, 05:06 PM
Is a frame of mind
something which defines us or
something we define?

blank|verse
02-04-2010, 05:07 PM
Is a frame of mind
just another term for skull?
And what's a brain box?

JPHD
02-04-2010, 05:55 PM
And what's a brain box?
so many questions,
so little time....

Babyguile
02-04-2010, 05:55 PM
And what's a brain box?
Something evasive and sly
Or just a headcase?

Babyguile
02-04-2010, 05:56 PM
twice in a row lol

JPHD
02-04-2010, 06:06 PM
twice in a row lol
intriguing dimensions of probability
the solution eludes me

Babyguile
02-04-2010, 06:23 PM
the solution eludes me
lol, be it a one or three?
The sloth counts its toes.

JPHD
02-04-2010, 06:33 PM
The sloth counts its toes.
they smell like death.
yet the question remains

atiguhya padma
02-04-2010, 06:39 PM
the question remains
inside, seeking synthesis,
with any answer.

JPHD
02-04-2010, 06:57 PM
with any answer.
the human spirit endures.
form has no meaning