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krymsonkyng
04-01-2009, 10:03 AM
and love is crazy
anything involved is fair
it keeps 'em spinning

Sapphire
04-01-2009, 10:14 AM
It keeps 'em spinning
the spiders need their webs filled
butterflies conquer

symphony
04-01-2009, 11:00 AM
butterflies conquer
my eyes are here to waver
in the uber speed

mazHur
04-01-2009, 11:26 AM
in the uber speed
hides a period of dwell
where two lovers meet.

krymsonkyng
04-01-2009, 08:10 PM
where two lovers meet
there's a pause in the earth's tworl
so that time takes pause

firefangled
04-02-2009, 01:12 AM
so that time takes pause
breathe in the night sounds
hold them silently

Dark Muse
04-02-2009, 01:19 AM
Hold them silently
beneath the dark waters
until all is still

Sapphire
04-02-2009, 04:37 AM
until all is still
time - the universe collapses
motion captured in

I take "collapses" is pronounced like "col-laps" ... not sure, but you could skip the "the" if it is 3 syllables instead of 2...

alakungfu
04-02-2009, 03:55 PM
motion captured in
noise punctuated without
smooth records sailing

krymsonkyng
04-02-2009, 07:26 PM
smooth records sailing
black disks of favorite songs
fly towards my poor head

zanna
04-05-2009, 03:43 AM
fly towards my poor head
many rotten tomatoes
I dodge the cliche

ampoule
04-05-2009, 08:02 AM
I dodge the cliche
I want my life to stand out
Not ordinary

Sapphire
04-05-2009, 08:26 AM
Not ordinary
But outstanding, unique, one
just to be yourself

Annabelle
04-05-2009, 10:03 AM
Just to be yourself
And part of the world itself
This is happiness

Sapphire
04-05-2009, 10:25 AM
This is happiness
Momentary, but so true
Everlasting bore

Lynne50
04-05-2009, 04:42 PM
Everlasting bore
Everyone still knows your name
Silence is golden

BienvenuJDC
04-05-2009, 04:48 PM
Silence is golden,
We have two ears to listen,
But one mouth to speak.

krymsonkyng
04-05-2009, 09:48 PM
but one mouth to speak
your two eyes one nose two ears
but one word will do.

ampoule
04-06-2009, 08:32 AM
but one word will do
more will surely drown you out
you'll need mouth to mouth

Sapphire
04-06-2009, 08:54 AM
you'll need mouth to mouth
kiss of life to live again
death is defeated

Annabelle
04-06-2009, 09:09 AM
Death is defeated
When it is happily faced
You and me alone

Sapphire
04-06-2009, 09:13 AM
You and me alone
know about the ghost up there
He hides it away

Annabelle
04-06-2009, 09:57 AM
He hides it away
From the meanest of means and
Which is everything

kiz_paws
04-06-2009, 01:11 PM
Which is everything
the rain dancing in your eyes
a gold band tightens

ampoule
04-06-2009, 01:28 PM
a gold band tightens
has turned many fingers blue
what's a girl to do?

PrinceMyshkin
04-06-2009, 01:33 PM
A gold band tightens
the river over-surges
peace comes very slow

Janine
04-06-2009, 04:04 PM
peace comes very slow
serene songs that soften the dusk
shadows on stone paths

Eugenie
04-06-2009, 04:08 PM
shadows on stone paths
invite me to just follow
regardless of fear.

krymsonkyng
04-06-2009, 07:52 PM
regardless of fear
she smiles lets the doctor speak
what's a girl to do

zanna
04-07-2009, 01:19 AM
what's a girl to do?
stand one time more than she falls,
and go on with life. =)

Eugenie
04-07-2009, 07:29 PM
I like that Zanna.

And go on with life
despite its hazy future,
the light is so sheer.

Janine
04-08-2009, 05:31 PM
the light is so sheer
drifting on perfumed petals
spring's pure white flowers

krymsonkyng
04-08-2009, 11:28 PM
Spring's pure white flowers
could use a little color
I ready my brush

Silas Thorne
04-09-2009, 12:22 AM
I ready my brush
to paint you empty colour,
please watch these shadows.

motherhubbard
04-09-2009, 12:25 AM
please watch these shadows
you never know what could be
lurking in the dark

Annabelle
04-09-2009, 10:49 AM
Lurking in the dark
Hiding from the perverseness
Of life so vivid

motherhubbard
04-09-2009, 10:52 AM
Of life so vivid
the dreams of ambitious youth
hope for the future

BienvenuJDC
04-09-2009, 11:23 AM
Hope for the future
Is found in our past, look back...
If you seek, it's there!

krymsonkyng
04-09-2009, 08:55 PM
if you seek it's there
dig deep fingers stretched wide out
to take all you can

kaymf
04-09-2009, 10:58 PM
to take all you can
and try and do all you can
yet you feel empty

Il Penseroso
04-09-2009, 11:22 PM
yet you feel empty,
skin of glass shredding white light -
a dark corner tongue

Annabelle
04-09-2009, 11:25 PM
Yet you feel empty
Full of emptiness again
And ceasing in it

andave_ya
04-10-2009, 01:24 AM
a dark-corner tongue
teasing the edge of my lips
then claiming them fully.

krymsonkyng
04-10-2009, 03:14 AM
then claiming them fully
deliberate slow counting
insects in her web

Sapphire
04-10-2009, 05:06 AM
insects in her web
bugs, ants, even butterflies
struggling to get out

Janine
04-10-2009, 03:34 PM
struggling to get out
anywhere but here; driven on
restless notes within

Eugenie
04-11-2009, 02:52 PM
restless notes within
the very depths of my soul-
a new song is born.

mazHur
04-11-2009, 03:10 PM
a new song is born
a new life springs from the air
there's peace all around!

zanna
04-12-2009, 01:24 AM
there's peace all around
on a late winter evening
but spring is now near . . .

krymsonkyng
04-12-2009, 04:44 AM
but spring is now near
we've passed winter's harrying
ice panorama

mazHur
04-12-2009, 05:54 AM
ice panorama
glaciers, avalanches
life buried in snow.

andave_ya
04-12-2009, 12:42 PM
Life buried in snow
We are crushed under a load
of ambivalence.

mazHur
04-12-2009, 01:01 PM
of ambivalence
of the right way to approach
we think but in vain.

krymsonkyng
04-13-2009, 12:09 PM
we think but in vain
we sense through feeling alone
we wade through data

zanna
04-13-2009, 01:18 PM
we wade through data
a wash of information,
carried down life's stream

mazHur
04-13-2009, 03:10 PM
carried down life's stream
destination yet unknown
stuck in a delta

alakungfu
04-13-2009, 03:40 PM
stuck in a delta
at a loss of which exit
yields up ocean fruits

mazHur
04-13-2009, 04:03 PM
yields up ocean fruits
scampi, crayfish, breams and perch
but nev'r a mermaid.

Sapphire
04-13-2009, 04:58 PM
but nev'r a mermaid
in the deep of the ocean
they will not get caught

mazHur
04-13-2009, 05:39 PM
they will not get caught
On the contrary mermaids
will swim to catch me!

Sapphire
04-13-2009, 05:42 PM
will swim to catch me
haunting, singing, playing nice
I am on dry land

mazHur
04-13-2009, 05:54 PM
I am on dry land
she knows it and also knows
how to pull me in!

Sapphire
04-13-2009, 06:01 PM
How to pull me in
Is not difficult to find
All over my face

mazHur
04-13-2009, 06:05 PM
All over my face
glistens my love alone for
her-my dear mermaid!

Sapphire
04-13-2009, 06:06 PM
Her - my dear mermaid
Living in the fairy world
Loving every day

mazHur
04-13-2009, 06:18 PM
Living in the fairy world
twinkling wand of love in her
hand, flipping her tail.

krymsonkyng
04-14-2009, 10:07 AM
hand flipping her tail
profane motion set in time
and the bass beats on

Sapphire
04-14-2009, 10:11 AM
And the bass beats on
The violins keep quiet
As a flute whispers

mazHur
04-14-2009, 11:19 AM
As a flute whispers
butterflies begin to dance
color my lips red.

krymsonkyng
04-14-2009, 04:50 PM
color my lips red
with each kiss a bit more comes
I play the Joker

mazHur
04-14-2009, 05:12 PM
I play the Joker
the king and queen get amused
the courtiers weep.

Sapphire
04-14-2009, 05:57 PM
The courtiers weep
tears form a river of salt
to sail away on

mazHur
04-14-2009, 06:04 PM
to sail away on
is no joke in a desert
with ship of your life.

krymsonkyng
04-14-2009, 08:39 PM
with ship of your life
frail vessel among the storms
who then is captain?

zanna
04-15-2009, 01:33 AM
who then is captain?
it's every man for himself!
each makes his own path

Sapphire
04-15-2009, 05:03 AM
each makes his own path
walk beside, next, opposite
but keep on moving

mazHur
04-15-2009, 05:19 AM
but keep on moving
moving is the symbol of
life that brings us near.

Sapphire
04-15-2009, 05:38 AM
life that brings us near
closing in, final minutes
until death arrives

mazHur
04-15-2009, 05:39 AM
until death arrives
let us sit together hand
in hand and talk love!

Sapphire
04-15-2009, 05:48 AM
in hand and talk love
but not practise it, you mind!
all just in theory

krymsonkyng
04-15-2009, 09:55 AM
all just in theory
space and time are relative
total precision

zanna
04-15-2009, 11:42 PM
total precision
could never express my love
some things transcend words

=)

kiz_paws
04-15-2009, 11:47 PM
Some things transcend words
the cry of a lonely dog
a night sky on fire

zanna
04-15-2009, 11:52 PM
a night sky on fire
aflame with distant stars, best
seen in the desert

Janine
04-16-2009, 12:36 AM
seen in the desert
drifting dust on purple sands
sketches of moonlight

Dark Muse
04-16-2009, 12:41 AM
Sketches of moonlight
illuminate winter sky
caressing white glow

zanna
04-16-2009, 12:51 AM
caressing white glow
illuminates morning air
as I gently wake

krymsonkyng
04-16-2009, 01:29 AM
as I gently wake
the world comes into focus
I bury my head

Sapphire
04-16-2009, 04:56 AM
I bury my head
But leave my body wander
in the sand of time

alakungfu
04-16-2009, 04:37 PM
in the sand of time
I lose my quiet bearings
soft but willingly

Janine
04-16-2009, 04:59 PM
softly but willingly
sleep takes hold of my being
cozy caresses

Lynne50
04-16-2009, 05:44 PM
cozy caresses
a welcome home brings gladness
Love is in the air

Janine
04-16-2009, 06:26 PM
love is in the air,
reflecting back to youthful
springs, days long gone by

krymsonkyng
04-16-2009, 07:04 PM
springs days long gone by
into the conversation
outdated debate

Janine
04-16-2009, 07:59 PM
outdated debate
unreresolved issues in dust
loose ends dangling

Sapphire
04-17-2009, 04:42 AM
loose ends dangling
wind, trying to catch them all
but most will stay free

ampoule
04-17-2009, 09:13 AM
but most will stay free
living within their own minds
wherever thoughts go

Sapphire
04-17-2009, 09:21 AM
wherever thoughts go
I will not follow - free mind
empty in the head

krymsonkyng
04-17-2009, 04:24 PM
empty in the head
students march into classrooms
exit nearly filled

alakungfu
04-17-2009, 04:25 PM
empty in the head
but brazen bells ringing on
inside sighs aloft

mazHur
04-17-2009, 04:30 PM
inside sighs aloft
running like the blood in veins
lacking oxygen

alakungfu
04-17-2009, 04:34 PM
lacking oxygen
fragmenting into lesser
painful molecules

zanna
04-17-2009, 05:13 PM
painful molecules
the snake imbues his victim
with neurotoxins

Sapphire
04-17-2009, 05:24 PM
with neurotoxins
I would be totally lost
poisoning all the world

zanna
04-17-2009, 05:38 PM
pois'ning all the world
foul words of hate spread like fire --
we must overcome!

mazHur
04-17-2009, 05:56 PM
we must overcome
our own self if we wanted
to help keep world peace.

Eugenie
04-18-2009, 07:18 AM
wow, you guys are all so imaginative.

carried down life's stream
is a constant swell of filth,
living is messy.

alakungfu
04-18-2009, 09:12 AM
living is messy
like a teenager's bedroom
done, laid aside, lost

to keep world peace
I write a descriptive note
of saved bitterness

mazHur
04-18-2009, 09:56 AM
of saved bitterness
I write a descriptive note
done, laid aside, lost

alakungfu
04-18-2009, 01:06 PM
done, laid aside, lost
the first poem that I wrote
never to impress

Shurtugal
04-18-2009, 01:46 PM
never to impress
the lies that are told by man
when shall it ever end?

mazHur
04-18-2009, 03:14 PM
when shall it ev'r end?
Or is there any end to it?
Hate, the destroyer!

alakungfu
04-18-2009, 03:28 PM
Hate the destroyer
Single-minded steward of
Driven resentments

mazHur
04-18-2009, 03:36 PM
Driven resentments
smoldering grievances
unresolved issues.

kaymf
04-18-2009, 04:11 PM
unresolved issues
have come between our friendship
why did it change us?

mazHur
04-18-2009, 04:15 PM
why did it change us?
You ought to put this question
to Darwin, not me!

Shurtugal
04-18-2009, 06:24 PM
to darwin, not me!
evolution is a joke.
Try elogent smoke.

mazHur
04-18-2009, 06:54 PM
Try elogent smoke
if you want to go for one
it is colorless!

krymsonkyng
04-18-2009, 07:21 PM
it is colorless
devoid of any flavor
and without substance

Shurtugal
04-18-2009, 07:52 PM
and without flavor
And devoid of all feelings
Is the heart of stone

krymsonkyng
04-19-2009, 03:34 AM
(is the heart of stone
written as without flavor
or without substance?)

is the heart of stone
a weight for your chest to bear
or a rock to throw?

Eugenie
04-19-2009, 09:58 AM
why did it change us,
those small simple sounding words,
words are life or death

crystalmoonshin
04-19-2009, 10:28 AM
Words are life or death
Like soft warm lights that hug us
Or simply like knives

kiz_paws
04-19-2009, 11:46 AM
Or simply like knives
useless unless they are sharp
much like your glances

mazHur
04-19-2009, 12:13 PM
Or simply like knives
piercing through the mortals
leaving dead behind.

much like your glances
lightning flickers on the sky
clouds roaring thunder

krymsonkyng
04-19-2009, 05:02 PM
clouds roaring thunder
resounding with the fury
of those overlooked

mazHur
04-19-2009, 05:21 PM
of those overlooked
there is need to rectify
their grievances true.

crystalmoonshin
04-19-2009, 06:07 PM
Their grievances true,
with veils shrouding the faces
Stained with countless tears

mazHur
04-19-2009, 06:09 PM
Stained with countless tears
shining like stars and meteors
dearer than diamonds.

krymsonkyng
04-19-2009, 07:37 PM
dearer than diamonds
closer than home and harder
to get a grasp on.

zanna
04-20-2009, 12:22 AM
to get a grasp on
life, one must have a handle --
sanity, for example.

mazHur
04-20-2009, 06:00 AM
sanity, for example,
is unfit for love
it chokes it to death

Eugenie
04-20-2009, 01:18 PM
to get a grasp on
the true meaning of one's life,
a life-long journey.

alakungfu
04-20-2009, 03:16 PM
a life-long journey,
eternal material wealth
in love's cruelty

Sapphire
04-20-2009, 04:08 PM
In love's cruelty
I could never find a home
But my lover did

mazHur
04-20-2009, 04:19 PM
But my lover did
something I cannot explain
why I am alone!

Sapphire
04-20-2009, 04:35 PM
Why I am alone
is not nobody's business
So just do not ask

mazHur
04-20-2009, 04:39 PM
So just do not ask
just leave me alone to die
so I can't reply.

Sapphire
04-20-2009, 04:41 PM
So I can't reply
Understand the urgency
Or just move along

mazHur
04-20-2009, 04:46 PM
Or just move along
I've already gotten late;
train won't wait for me!

Sapphire
04-20-2009, 04:49 PM
Train won't wait for me!
Taxi won't stop, Airplane land
The sailboat will wreck

mazHur
04-20-2009, 05:15 PM
The sailboat will wreck
but don't worry I'll fix new
mast and sails to it!

Sapphire
04-20-2009, 05:19 PM
mast and sails to it
wooden hull with strong spantings
a helm to keep course

mazHur
04-20-2009, 05:24 PM
a helm to keep course
and me in charge of the wheel
you sitting beside!

krymsonkyng
04-20-2009, 08:58 PM
you sitting beside
bus stop bill poster rainfall
makes me wish for more

zanna
04-21-2009, 12:43 AM
makes me wish for more
time. the seconds tick by, loud
make the most of now!

Silas Thorne
04-21-2009, 12:48 AM
make the most of now
before someone else does it
and leaves you the dregs

zanna
04-21-2009, 12:53 AM
and leaves you the dregs --
that's what fair-weather friends do.
true friends are there e'er.

(sorry guys; sometimes you just have to fudge it! :lol:)

Janine
04-21-2009, 01:30 AM
true friends are there e'er
they don't deceive, leave behind
broken wave of thoughts

krymsonkyng
04-21-2009, 10:12 AM
Broken wave of thoughts
the tide cresting ideas
seas meet in brain storm

Sapphire
04-21-2009, 10:42 AM
Wow, I like that one KrymsonKyng :)

Seas meet in brain storm
Crashing, fuming, fighting on
Who will win don't mind

Ok, that last line is definitely a "fudge it"

alakungfu
04-21-2009, 01:07 PM
Who will win don't mind
returning empty-handed
so long honour keeps

Sapphire
04-21-2009, 01:14 PM
So long honour keeps
One, Two, Gone! Was it ever
possession to none

krymsonkyng
04-21-2009, 05:38 PM
possession to none
the process that takes riches
and leaves only rags

andave_ya
04-21-2009, 05:44 PM
and leaves only rags -
what's left of dreams giving way
to reality.

mazHur
04-21-2009, 05:47 PM
and leaves only rags
tears, sighs and sufferings
their only treasure!

to reality
marched I in my dream last night
but got lost in dark.

zanna
04-21-2009, 11:28 PM
but got lost in the dark
lying 'neath a field of stars
awe inspiring

krymsonkyng
04-22-2009, 11:22 AM
awe inspiring
blunder makes me wonder why
high card's all I got.

zanna
04-23-2009, 02:10 AM
high cards all; I got
dealt a good hand; family,
happiness and love.

krymsonkyng
04-23-2009, 02:27 AM
happiness and love
usually coterminous
the math may be off

Sapphire
04-23-2009, 05:53 AM
the math may be off
Life is not an equation
a chaos theory

ampoule
04-23-2009, 08:28 AM
a chaos theory
your life, so tumultuous
calm down now, cool it!

Sapphire
04-23-2009, 09:22 AM
Calm down now, cool it!
Or I will throw you in ice
freeze in time itself

alakungfu
04-23-2009, 01:34 PM
freeze in time itself
like so many rainbow prisms
controlling the skies

Stargazer86
04-23-2009, 02:23 PM
Controlling the skies
Let the rain cascade freely
Upon our parched soil

krymsonkyng
04-23-2009, 02:33 PM
upon our parched soil
grow new things with the season
of our first harvest

zanna
04-23-2009, 11:45 PM
of our first harvest,
there were many zucchini --
a common problem!

BienvenuJDC
04-24-2009, 12:30 AM
a common problem!
And some regular issues
Are easily solved...

zanna
04-24-2009, 01:00 AM
are easily solved
yet some of the simplest
questions elude us

ampoule
04-24-2009, 07:52 AM
questions elude us
for we must live the answers
feel them deep inside

zanna
04-24-2009, 12:43 PM
feel them deep inside
the rumble of the bass drums
at summer parades

krymsonkyng
04-24-2009, 01:28 PM
at summer parades
stand in rows and files to march
ninety degree lives

zanna
04-24-2009, 01:35 PM
krymsonkyng -- I really like that one, especially the last line! =)

ninety degree lives
are not acute or obtuse
they are just perfect. =)

ampoule
04-27-2009, 08:46 AM
they are just perfect
nestled together, mewing
those little kitties

alakungfu
04-27-2009, 09:11 AM
those little kitties
with numbers on their sweaters
to keep track of them

Tsuyoiko
04-27-2009, 09:17 AM
To keep track of them
I tattooed their names across
Their little foreheads

krymsonkyng
04-27-2009, 12:50 PM
their little foreheads
set firmly to the grindstone
engraving knowledge

Il Penseroso
04-27-2009, 02:39 PM
engraving knowledge
cornflakes stuck to unrinsed bowls -
how the morning ends

alakungfu
04-28-2009, 09:56 AM
how the morning ends
breaking into the noonday's
close mixed media

Sapphire
04-28-2009, 10:22 AM
close mixed media
telling everyone's secret
none left to keep up

krymsonkyng
04-28-2009, 01:47 PM
none left to keep up
the colors tattered by winds
threadbare earth below

Il Penseroso
04-29-2009, 02:49 PM
threadbare earth below
the dull stainless steal doors of
a palace of blue

mazHur
04-29-2009, 02:53 PM
a palace of blue
mountains of floating white clouds
sea gulls migrating.

krymsonkyng
04-29-2009, 09:20 PM
sea gulls migrating
up coast gathering flotsam
in their vicious beaks

mazHur
04-29-2009, 09:37 PM
in their vicious beaks
trembles the life of their prey
struggling to escape.

ampoule
05-02-2009, 09:09 AM
struggling to escape
she smiled, saying, I'll be back
he relaxed, let go

Stargazer86
05-02-2009, 11:40 AM
He relaxed, let go
Purple carresses her skin
No more. He loves her.

mazHur
05-02-2009, 01:08 PM
he relaxed, let go,
but the bird never returned
to the cage again.

mazHur
05-02-2009, 01:11 PM
No more he loves her,
day dreams or stargazes
in the starry nights

Sapphire
05-02-2009, 02:11 PM
in the starry nights
all directions are given
aliens will come

Stargazer86
05-02-2009, 02:19 PM
Aliens will come
Wells forsaw what was to be
War of the Worlds begins

mazHur
05-02-2009, 03:53 PM
War of the Worlds begins
let's wait to see what remains
of them of us all!

Stargazer86
05-02-2009, 04:56 PM
of them of us all
of nothing of ev'rything
All together alone

mazHur
05-02-2009, 05:05 PM
All together alone
I meet myself in the crowd
whenever I want

krymsonkyng
05-02-2009, 06:45 PM
aliens will come
through fences over rivers
across all borders

mazHur
05-02-2009, 06:49 PM
across all borders
the rule is you begin shared
haiku with last line!

Stargazer86
05-02-2009, 06:50 PM
Whenever I want
I disappear into dreams
Of stars and moonlight

mazHur
05-02-2009, 06:53 PM
Of stars and moonlight
consists the spring of lovers
brightening their hearts

krymsonkyng
05-02-2009, 08:38 PM
brightening their hearts
despite previous mistakes
will they forgive me?

kiz_paws
05-02-2009, 09:59 PM
Will they forgive me?
handshakes that feel like dead fish
in a life long drawn

ampoule
05-04-2009, 08:29 AM
in a life long drawn
who will hold the artist's brush
the choice is not ours

mazHur
05-04-2009, 08:40 AM
the choice is not ours
let us walk through the stoic
happ'ning hand in hand

crystalmoonshin
05-04-2009, 08:43 AM
The choice is not ours
Fate made our paths cross and now
I kiss you goodbye

crystalmoonshin
05-04-2009, 08:48 AM
OOOps, I was a few minutes late.. Sorry

Happ'ning hand in hand
are love and hate in my heart
Don't confuse my mind!

mazHur
05-04-2009, 08:50 AM
Don't confuse my mind
the overlapping shadows
are quite frightening


I kiss you goodbye
that's all I can do right now
come into my arms!

crystalmoonshin
05-04-2009, 08:52 AM
Are quite frightening
the sounds that some from silence
in this cold palace.

Sapphire
05-04-2009, 09:42 AM
in this cold palace
fire would burn down all the walls
destroy all this ice

alakungfu
05-04-2009, 09:59 AM
destroy all this ice
retrieve the flawed icicles
sweating swollen dreams

Sapphire
05-04-2009, 10:03 AM
sweating swollen dreams
let them blow up in your face
wake up with a scream

breathtest
05-04-2009, 10:06 AM
sweating swollen dreams
immersed in this sour end
obsessed with your death

krymsonkyng
05-04-2009, 12:01 PM
obsessed with your death
I journey through life waiting
for what dreams may come

autolycus
05-04-2009, 01:30 PM
for what dreams may come
I wander through the marketplace
while it rains lightly

mazHur
05-04-2009, 02:06 PM
while it rains lightly
I unfold my umbrella
rejoice in drizzle.

alakungfu
05-04-2009, 03:06 PM
rejoice in drizzle
sublimating in the damp
cars splatter the heat

mazHur
05-04-2009, 03:43 PM
cars splatter the heat
roads soak in watery sheen
puddles laugh with joy

krymsonkyng
05-04-2009, 03:47 PM
puddles laugh with joy
little feet dash images
into rainbow mist

mazHur
05-04-2009, 03:52 PM
into rainbow mist
the flower girl looks more sweet
than the blooming rose.

Pensive
05-04-2009, 04:18 PM
Than the blooming rose
I prefer injurious thorn
It hurts less than love

mazHur
05-04-2009, 04:27 PM
It hurts less than love
but who in world loves the thorn?
love may hurt-thorns bleed!

Oniw17
05-04-2009, 04:34 PM
love may hurt-thorns bleed!
or you bleed because of thorns
but love has caused death

Stargazer86
05-04-2009, 04:50 PM
But love has caused death
By poison and by dagger
Two star crossed lovers

alakungfu
05-04-2009, 05:02 PM
Two star crossed lovers...
Denied her his dignity,
the woman succumbs.

Oniw17
05-04-2009, 05:05 PM
the woman succumbs
and the mountains move closer
the end may come soon

Stargazer86
05-04-2009, 05:39 PM
The end may come soon
Humans build then destroy, but
The roaches remain

Oniw17
05-04-2009, 07:10 PM
the roaches remain
those carp swim with protection,
by water, from death

mazHur
05-05-2009, 12:44 AM
by water, from death
the roach may die, carp survive
the submarines sink

Janine
05-05-2009, 01:01 AM
the submarines sink
doors jammed, clamshells tightly clasp
destined sea iron grave

mazHur
05-05-2009, 02:23 AM
destined sea iron grave
soul hovering above water
like a perturbed fish

krymsonkyng
05-05-2009, 02:46 AM
like a perturbed fish
cheeks rouged and eyes bulging wide
primordial teeth

mazHur
05-05-2009, 03:01 AM
primordial teeth
grinding elements of bone
embedded in flesh

Janine
05-05-2009, 04:35 PM
embedded in flesh
fresh blood stains blackened to rust
thorns crowning his skull

mazHur
05-05-2009, 05:39 PM
thorns crowning his skull
he dug into the tender
flesh of wolverine

krymsonkyng
05-05-2009, 07:32 PM
flesh of wolverine
wraps the sinews back in place
eyes snap back open.

Janine
05-05-2009, 09:39 PM
eyes snap back open
pretty peacock feather-eyes
attract the love birds

Stargazer86
05-06-2009, 12:26 AM
Attract the love birds
Blossoming in the spring time
Sing their song of joy

krymsonkyng
05-06-2009, 01:00 AM
sing their song of joy
written in wind voiced by ghosts
glee echoes awhile

Janine
05-06-2009, 01:34 AM
glee echoes awhile
now the embers glow faintly
wind whistles through pines

mazHur
05-06-2009, 02:08 AM
wind whistles through pines
nothing seems to stop its way
all are invited.

krymsonkyng
05-06-2009, 10:10 AM
all are invited
bring your friends call a neighbor
it'll be a time

mazHur
05-06-2009, 02:02 PM
it'll be a time
for the forlorn lovers two
meeting after eons!

Janine
05-06-2009, 03:13 PM
meeting after eons
we may have felt much wiser
no, leave as we came

symphony
05-06-2009, 03:38 PM
no, leave as we came
faint lights, drawn curtains, low eyes
a dismantled stage


[glad to see you here in this thread, Janine! :D ]

Janine
05-06-2009, 08:41 PM
a dismantled stage
dust settling on darkened glass,
shadows stretch formless

Dark Muse
05-06-2009, 08:45 PM
Shadows stretch formless
spanning across deep black voids
whispers never stop

krymsonkyng
05-06-2009, 10:15 PM
whispers never stop
the mill grinds out its rumors
social world's tumors.

mazHur
05-06-2009, 10:18 PM
social world's tumors
require surgery before
cancer overtakes.

Janine
05-07-2009, 12:31 AM
cancer overtakes
those who are not vigilant
wrath upon ones soul

BienvenuJDC
05-07-2009, 12:46 AM
wrath upon ones soul
the sky feigns its power down
one against all kind

Janine
05-07-2009, 12:57 AM
one against all kind
a delicate lone life-force
striving to survive

mazHur
05-07-2009, 05:51 AM
striving to survive
I asked for some oxygen
but 'water' refused!