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[Riesa]

oops, a photo finish.

[Virgil]

You guys have been great. I was going to highlight one or two as being outstanding, but I found it difficult to limit it to a couple. So I'll praise them all.

Enlarge life and soul
Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
Quartet in E flat

[Weeping Willow]

Quartet in E flat
Or better the 9th symphony
Classic is your music

[samercury]

Classic is your music
It makes you look so happy.
Be very grateful

[Weeping Willow]

Be very grateful
For what you had have and will
Let the light guide you.

[Riesa]

Let the light guide you,
Let the seasons renew you;
--The force be with you.

sorry. it just seemed to fit.

[Weeping Willow]

I'll try to avoide Starwars... :)

The force be with you
Deep inside you being whole
raising like a fountain

[Virgil]

classic is your music
but today it's rock and roll
Rolling Stones on disk

[Virgil]

Oh, how did I screw that up?

[kilted exile]

Oh, how did I screw that up? no matter

Rolling Stones on disk
The volume ever louder
Rising like a fountain

[Virgil]

Rising like a fountain
rocket propelled into space
I'm going to the moon.

[Riesa]

cool save, kilted

Rising like a fountain
In evenings hallowed garden
Warm scent of Lilacs.

[Riesa]

Okay, V. You win.

[kilted exile]

I'm going to the moon
To escape the unbearable
warm scent of lilacs

[samercury]

Warm scent of lilacs
Fills up the place where you sat
A few days ago

[Weeping Willow]

A few days ago
As the sorrow filled my heart
Stone rained down to Earth

[samercury]

Stone rained down to Earth
Falling softly from the stars
Shh, listen closely

[Riesa]

Shh, listen closely
Warriors ear to the ground
Muted vibrations.

[samercury]

good one :nod:

Muted vibrations
That shake the earth with strong waves
While I'm still sleeping

[kilted exile]

While I'm still sleeping
You got yourself all dressed
A note on the door

[samercury]

A note on the door
Telling me that you have left
Never coming back

[Riesa]

Never coming back
I'm picking out a Thermos
And I'll go camping.

????

[samercury]

And I'll go camping
With my family and friends
While there, I'll get lost

[Riesa]

While there, I'll get lost
Travel in circles, mindless
Leaf caught in current.

[Virgil]

Leaf caught in current
small rocks rolling down the glen
somewhere, someone laughed

[Riesa]

Somewhere, someone laughed
Saxophone, Bass; clinks, clangs, strums
--Jazz band striking up.

[Virgil]

Jazz band striking up
Shall we dance to the tune of
Sophisticated Lady?

[Riesa]

Sophisticated Lady (7) :p
Thelonious, man! Coltrane.
Flamboyant rhythm!

[Weeping Willow]

Muted vibrations.
Like the sonar at the sea
Strong pulse inside me

[Virgil]

Sophisticated Lady (7) :p


True, but (a) it really fit nicely :cool: and (b) "sophisticated" is said real fast that it sounds almost like 3. :D

Strong pulse inside me,
hiking through the Catskills, through
woods and streams, down hills.

[Weeping Willow]

I'm not sure if it is allowed to end the middle line in a comma but i'll do it anyway..
Just tell me if it's wrong.. :)

Woods and streams, down hills
Trees every where you look, i'm,
The Weeping willow

[Riesa]

It looks fine to me, Weeping Willow. btw, I'm really enjoying your Haiku!

The Weeping willow
Careworn visage so hidden
Behind Nature's dreads.

[Weeping Willow]

Thanks.. i enjoy it a lot... but i think i'll go meloncoly because of Jakobin.. :(

Behind nature dreads
Life are taken without a cause
So now i shall weep.

[Riesa]

:(

So now I shall weep
Unrelenting tears shall flow
Dousing the hearts' flame.

[samercury]

Dousing the hearts' flame
And smothering its bright light
With dark, cold water

[Riesa]

With dark, cold water
Immersed in a deep dark well
Drowning, I'm drowning.

[samercury]

Drowning, I'm drowning
No one is here to save me.
I'm already dead

[Riesa]

I'm already dead
Death came unbidden, shrouded
Embalmed and buried, I live.

[samercury]

Embalmed and buried, I live
But only to die later
Going in circles

[Virgil]

Going in circles
The wheel of life spins again
Poor young man passed on.

[samercury]

Poor young man passed on
And never to be heard from
Life will carry on :(

[Riesa]

Life will carry on
A seed will sprout in Springtime
Buds bloom, Rivers flow.

[samercury]

Buds bloom, Rivers flow
Light goes through the universe
Going through the sky

[Riesa]

oh, lovely, Sam.

Going through the sky
Comet's trailblaze past planets
Glimpse of ancient past.

[samercury]

yours too

Glimpse of ancient past
When the world was much safer;
The child's voice was heard

[Virgil]

Glimpse of ancient past
Coloseum and Hadrian's Forum
All roads lead to Rome

[Virgil]

Same - You changed avatars again!!!

[Riesa]

I'll try a 'kilted' maneuver

The Child's voice was heard
Singing hymns in the pantheon
All roads lead to Rome

[samercury]

Same - You changed avatars again!!!

You noticed? :eek:

All roads lead to Rome
-Not all lead to happiness.
Aim for the blue sun

[Riesa]

someday I'll have to figure out how to have an avatar of my own.


Aim for the blue sun
The triple moons many beams shine
On our purple sea.

[samercury]

On our purple sea
We'll be floating forever
And never go down

[Riesa]

And never go down
under waves, under the sea
Lazybones floating.

[samercury]

Lazybones floating
In the sky, doing nothing.
Ah, this is the life

[Riesa]

Ah, this is the life
The trick is to not give a damn
Gracefully, like Rhett.

[Virgil]

someday I'll have to figure out how to have an avatar of my own.


Reisa, go to http://www.avatarity.com/.
Or you can Yahoo "avatar" and it will give you other sites as well from where you can pick it. Save the one you like and then upload it in your profile.


Gracefully, like Rett
we saunter into the ballroom.
Cool dudes eyeing girls.

[Riesa]

Reisa, go to http://www.avatarity.com/.
Or you can Yahoo "avatar" and it will give you other sites as well from where you can pick it. Save the one you like and then upload it in your profile.




Thank you, Virgil :nod:

Cool dudes eyeing girls
Leaning against muscle cars
Smoking cigarettes.

[B-Mental]

Smoking cigarettes
Laughing in the face of death
Fuming in the night

[Riesa]

Fuming in the night
Looking at constellations
Drinking red, red wine

[Virgil]

Drinkin red, red wine [Was this a softball for me]
I'll have a chianti tonight
Italian dinner

[Riesa]

always a softball for you :)

Italian dinner
Jolly wine, nice company
And Fettucini

[Virgil]

And fettuccini
served under scallops and shrimp
marinara sauce

[Weeping Willow]

Marinara sauce
If there is no Bread eat pie
Execution begin!

[B-Mental]

Execution Begin!
The black hood is then lowered
Precious seconds left

[Weeping Willow]

Precious seconds left
Axe raise high above and down,
Down to the river.

[The Unnamable]

You have to know cricket for this one:

156 for 7
Gloved and boxed I wait
Apprehensive eagerness
Finger points skyward.


But not for this one:

Men are a phallusy
Hi Love:
Charmingly thrusting his maleness deep inside of me.
Bye Love.

[Riesa]

Den, in her thread starter writes:"Ok, so, I write a haiku, then the next poster uses the last line of myhaiku... k?;)

Haiku:
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

2. A poem written in this form."


Just a refresher for what this thread is about. ;)

[Riesa]

Down to the river
With the utmost dignity
Mary, Queen of Scots.

[nickelsilver]

Mary, Queen of Scots
Meet Kevin, the King of Queens
Hist'ry as sitcom

[Riesa]

:lol:

Hist'ry as sitcoms
Brady family becomes
False USA

[Weeping Willow]

False USA
And Europe is on fire,
Viva la Mexico!

[Riesa]

Viva la Mexico!
Tequila, Zapatistas
El Sol, y Amor.

[dcdavi]

El Sol, y Amor
in Tijuana can make
you burn baby burn.

[Riesa]

:wave:

You burn baby burn
In Icarus' fatal flightpath
Fall, crash--burn Baby.

[samercury]

Fall, crash--burn Baby
It's not as if life's worth it,
Be a nighttime ghost

[dcdavi]

Be a nighttime ghost;
Spirits are invisible
During the daytime

[samercury]

During the daytime
Wandering in the attic
Where they can't be found

[dcdavi]

Where they can't be found
Yet a search always ends in
the last place you look.

[Virgil]

Thank you, Virgil :nod:

Cool dudes eyeing girls
Leaning against muscle cars
Smoking cigarettes.

I see you have picked a nice avatar. Is that a seashore? Also this haiku above was excellent.

The last place you look
is the first place you should go
then decide where to

[samercury]

:thumbs_up

Then decide where to
In this damp and dreary land
It doesn’t matter

[dcdavi]

It doesn’t matter
Samercury decries just
make mine depressing

[samercury]

Make mine depressing
Don't worry, it's not this time
-Running teddy bear

[Virgil]

Running teddy bear
lay down to sleep beside me
this the longest night

[samercury]

*not 'morbid'*

This the longest night
As I sat down waiting for
The coming daylight

[Virgil]

Very good.

The coming daylight
Sweet kiss prior to rising
sunlight through curtains

[Weeping Willow]

Then Decide where to
life has paths waiting for you
Now just choose but one.

[Riesa]

I see you have picked a nice avatar. Is that a seashore? Also this haiku above was excellent.

The last place you look
is the first place you should go
then decide where to


Yes, it's my own photo the caribbean.

Grazia, it makes me think of the fifties.

and yours are continually very good. :)

Now choose but one
Supercilious glutton
Constantly begging!

[Weeping Willow]

You've been to the caribbean... :goof: .... how fun.... i Envy you... ;)

Constantly begging!
Please take me away from here
Far away from here.

[Riesa]

I've traveled around a bit. The Carribean is my favorite ocean of the oceans I've seen. I've never been to Israel, but I used to work in an Israeli restaurant serving hummus and Yemenite soup, YUM.


Far away from here
Silver embrace cocoons you.
Ripe, luminous clouds

[Weeping Willow]

Yes Hummus it the best.. if you ever come here i'm personally taking you to the best Hummus in the world.. and that is a fact...

Ripe, luminous clouds
A storm gathers high above
Lightning strikes the night

[Riesa]

Wow, that would be fantastic, wouldn't it? Crazy idea. I'd have to have some of that spicy hot sauce, too. I forget what it was called, I used to put it on every thing. Maybe we just called it Chile.
(ZHOUG?)

Lightning strikes the night
Skeleton key wrought in light
Dazzles--velvet sky.

[samercury]

Dazzles--velvet sky
Beautiful peaceful light
From the stars above

[nickelsilver]

From the stars above
Light shines on stars below
Galaxy of fame

[Riesa]

Galaxy of fame
Orion's Bow sits frozen
All targets unscathed

[samercury]

All targets unscathed
Beware oh brave prey, beware
For Death is coming

[Riesa]

For Death is coming
ringing his brass dinner bell
For your soul to eat.

[samercury]

For your soul to eat
And your beating heart to munch
Such a great festin

[Riesa]

Such a great festin
daintily nibbling elbows
Licking funny bones

[samercury]

Licking funny bones
My favourite human bone...
Went down the wrong way

[Riesa]

Went down the wrong way
sputtered, rolled eyes up in head
now death comes, you're dead

[Virgil]

Yes, it's my own photo the caribbean.

Grazia, it makes me think of the fifties.

and yours are continually very good. :)

Now choose but one
Supercilious glutton
Constantly begging!


Only place I've been to in the Carribean is Aruba. It was lovely. Too bad we are so limited in our ability to post photos. I've noticed there's a few photographers on the forum and it would be nice to share pictures. Why does your avatar make you think of the fifties?


Now death comes, you're dead
The sullen descent or rise
to one's final fate

[samercury]

To one's final fate
One must finally come.
What a dreadful place

[Virgil]

What a dreadful place
Toothless hags and wrinkled men
Let's find another bar

[samercury]

Good one

Let's find another bar
Where the service is nicer
Back slowly away

[Riesa]

What a dreadful place
Toothless hags and wrinkled men
Let's find another bar

brilliant


Back slowly away
Hands held up high, get away
Gamey rabbit,you.

oh, and I meant the haiku about muscle cars and cigarettes made me think of the fifties.

[samercury]

Sorry >_<

Gamey rabbit,you
Stop running away from me...
I just want to eat

[Riesa]

why, sorry, samercury?

I just want to eat
T-bones grilled to perfection
and Green bean salad.

[Virgil]

and green bean salad
to reduce my expanded waist
It tastes like green grass

[samercury]

It tastes like green grass
Looks very much like it too-
A flying donkey?

[Virgil]

Deleted....

[Virgil]

A flying donkey
is not the kind that Riesa owns
her's is expecting.

[samercury]

Her's is expecting
A beautiful, blue baby
With a purple horn

[Virgil]

With a purple horn
the trumpeter sounds the clarion
Sunset approaches.

[samercury]

Sunset approaches
And the beautiful horse moves
On the dark storm clouds

[Riesa]

Wowee, samercury. nice

On the dark storm clouds
My troubled mind does ponder
Singular tedium.

[samercury]

Singular tedium
That fills my life, day and night
Thoughts are killing me

[Riesa]

Thoughts are killing me
I grow smaller, expiring
I just keep shrinking.

[samercury]

:cool:

I just keep shrinking
As I keep on walking here
Why do I feel weak?

[Riesa]

Why do I feel weak?
Unanswerable question
There are no mistakes.

[samercury]

There are no mistakes
Is what all those who err say
It is not my fault

[rollopodmarsh]

it is not my fault
peering through jaundiced eyes
fields of yellow grass

[Weeping Willow]

Yes it is called " Zhoug" but i personally prefer hot chilli.. (i going through a Mexican pahse.. :) )..

Fields of yellow grass
Flower carpet covers the earth
Colors of magic

[Riesa]

I have some great Mexican recipes. If you like to cook, I'll send them to you.

Colors of magic
Sky resonates in coral
Could almost Believe.

[Weeping Willow]

Oh yaeeeee :)..... please do.. i love Mexican food.. as a matter of fact today i just bought tortillas.. Yam :)

Could almost Believe
Believe that you were there
With me at the end.

[Riesa]

You got it, give me a little bit to dig 'em out. Are you a vegetarian?

With me at the end
Papery hand fluttering
--Touch chilled cheeks so still.

[Weeping Willow]

You can look at my christmas presents picture in the jingle bell post for my
" recovering vegeteran " pin button :)....

Touch chilled cheeks so still
Cold hand shivered my lonely heart
And so i stand still.

[Riesa]

Alrighty, then. I'll send you some recipes.

And so I stand still
Heart obliged to resume it's
Undulating beat.

[Weeping Willow]

Thank you :) :p ;)... yum...

Undulating beat
Seismic waves flot on the ocean
The ocean of time

[nickelsilver]

The ocean of time
Mountain of grief, stream of life
Isthmus of Christmas

Yeah, I know that doesn't really make much sense, but try saying "isthmus of Christmas" five times quickly . . . .

[Riesa]

:) there's more where those came from if you ever run out of ideas.

The ocean of time
We are tiny flits of fish
Attacking the tide

[Riesa]

The ocean of time
Mountain of grief, stream of life
Isthmus of Christmas

Yeah, I know that doesn't really make much sense, but try saying "isthmus of Christmas" five times quickly . . . .


:D

Isthmus of Christmas
Our attempted common ground
--At least we both drink.

[Weeping Willow]

At least we both drink
How shall we lay down in peace
Serenity now.

[Riesa]

Serenity now
Frank Costanza hates his life
And don't we all laugh.

[Weeping Willow]

And don't we all laugh
Laugh till our eyes cry a river
And we drown in joy

[Riesa]

And we drown in joy
Amniotic euphoria
Like an unborn babe

[samercury]

Like an unborn babe
Unaware of its status
Part of being human

[Xamonas Chegwe]

Part of being Human has 6 syllables!!

So I will ignore the last post.

Like an unborn babe
I constantly seek out
The door into life

[Riesa]

It happens.

Part of being human
Foibles and pettiness
A door out of life.

[samercury]

Part of being Human has 6 syllables!!

So I will ignore the last post.

It does? :eek2:...oops x_X....making mistakes is an important part of being human ;)

A door out of life
And going to someplace new-
Hope to see you soon

[Virgil]

Hope to see you soon
I await beside the rock
quietly for you.

[Aurora Ariel]

Quietly for you
Those flowers sit by the bed
Wilting life away.

[Virgil]

Very nice.


Wilting life away
Sitting at my desk typing
Lit Network forum

[Riesa]

:wave: Hi Aurora Ariel, nice to see you back on board.


Lit Network Forum
Suffer the housework, Lets me
Proscrastinate so.

[Weeping Willow]

Proscrastinate?? what does this word mean.. my dictonary can't figure it out.. :)

Proscrastinate so
Here is the reason, to why?
Am i still at work

[Riesa]

No Hebrew for Procrastinate? Amazing!
It means: to put off doing something until a later time, to delay needlessly. Like to wait until the last minute to write a term paper that you've had 3 months to write.:)

Am I still at work?
Daydreams have stolen my thoughts
If not my body.

[Weeping Willow]

I don't know.. could be a word for it... i search and if i'll find i will tell you... :)
Oh.... thanks for the translation...:p :)

If not my body
Then my soul, my heart, my life
Give them back to me

[Weeping Willow]

Well there is a word... Procrastinate - "דחה, השהה, עכב"
I just didn't think of it that way..... :)

[Riesa]

Well there is a word... Procrastinate - "דחה, השהה, עכב"
I just didn't think of it that way..... :)



"דחה, השהה, עכב" well, I never think of it that way, since I can't think in Hebrew!

Give them back to me
Or just shrink me and keep me
--A pocket toy.

[Weeping Willow]

Me neither.. when we use it, it usaly in a phrase.. meaning:
Prosponing for the last minute..

--A pocket toy
Nutcracker screams from down there
Help! it is dark here

[Riesa]

Help! It is dark here
Amongst the angst and anger
Of my revulsion.

[Riesa]

Of my revulsion
I have thought better of you
That's all in the past.

[Riesa]

That's all in the past.
Watch me fly away from you
You-unbelieving

[Riesa]

You-unbelieving
That I've come to my senses
At last, Bye Bye, Love.

[Riesa]

At last, Bye Bye, Love
You'll be fine, you always are
Lots of fools out there.

[Riesa]

Lots of fools out there
Who'll be taken in by you
Such banality!

[Weeping Willow]

That's all in the past
Let the bygones be bygones
Opening new page

[samercury]

Opening new page
Going where no one knows you
And starting anew

[Riesa]

Opening new page
Lovely blank receptacle
Of glorious thoughts

[samercury]

Of glorious thoughts
That remain unspeakable.
This is my story

[Riesa]

This is my story
Come close and look in my eyes
My eyes are not mute.

[samercury]

My eyes are not mute
They can see everything-
Even through your smile

[Riesa]

Even through your smile,
Your balm for the public eye,
Hidden misery.

[samercury]

Hidden misery
Festering on the inside
-Pretend it's not here

[Riesa]

Pretend it's not here
Believing in delight is
The very first step.

[samercury]

The very first step
To success and happiness
Is very painful

[Riesa]

Is very painful
Akin to the birthing room
A new life begins

[samercury]

A new life begins
While somewhere, one is ending
It's the way of life

[Riesa]

A+ in Haiku for Miss Samercury

[Weeping Willow]

Hi same.. Nice new avy.. :)

It's the way of life
The way of the new people
Generation X

[Virgil]

Willow, Riesa, Same - Some really good stuff today. I'm sorry I can't keep up with you guys.

Generation X
Stepping into the river
Gone are the hippies

[Riesa]

Yes, Virgil, I've been wondering what happened to you. I know you are involved in some serious, intelligent, philosophical debates around this place, but I miss your haiku voice.


Gone are the hippies
Wide-eyed peaceful free spirits
Who brought us free love

[Virgil]

Those debates unfortunately take up a lot of time. And I don't have that much to begin with. But I am off from work for the next couple of weeks.

Who brought us free love?
Paul McCartney, Mick Jagger?
How fast the times change.

[Riesa]

How fast the times change
Imagine Dutch Pioneers
Enjoying ipods!

[Aurora Ariel]

Enjoying ipods
Music, songs, notes strung along
The train is thumping.

*Thanks, Virgil for your kind comment earlier:)

[Virgil]

The train is thumping,
outrageously bouncing by
as I try to sip tea

edit: I missed counted on the last line. Sorry :cool:

[Riesa]

The train is thumping
It's shrill whistle is blowing
Tap my foot, waiting.

[Virgil]

tap my foot, waiting
for the washer mechanic
dirty clothes piled up

[Riesa]

as I try to sip tea
the dog jumps onto my lap
and burns my fingers.

[Riesa]

Gentlemen first.

[Virgil]

"And burns my fingers,"
said sadly the novice witch
with melted nail tips

[Weeping Willow]

Hi.. thank you Virgil.. i try my best...

with melted nail tips
Fingers work to roll my smoke
Cigarettes are bad

[Riesa]

Cigarettes are bad
Let's smoke Davidoff Cigars
Still bad, yet refined.

[samercury]

:thumbs_up


Still bad, yet refined
In the end, no difference
-the pain will go on

[Riesa]

-the pain will go on
Galaxy of lightning bolts
Divide this body

[samercury]

Divide this body
Into four different parts,
Give them to the shark

[Riesa]

:D :D

Give them to the shark
Sharks gotta eat same as the
Worm. Little dirt snake.

:brickwall :brickwall

[samercury]

:D
Worm. Little dirt snake.
Not as dangerous as 'it',
The Anaconda

[Riesa]

The Anaconda
Greatest slithering serpent
Not your ideal pet.

[Virgil]

You guys are too much!! :lol: :lol:

The anaconda
slithers through the rain forest
waiting for dinner

[samercury]

Not your ideal pet
Neither is it nutricious
To a little child

[samercury]

waiting for dinner
And screaming: "mommy, mommy"
Driving her insane

[nickelsilver]

Waiting for dinner
No patience for your questions
"You want fries with that?"

[Weeping Willow]

Driving her insane
Making her "Mucho Loca"
Going bit crazy

[samercury]

:lol:

Going bit crazy
Howling at the moon at night
-Story of my life

[Weeping Willow]

Danke!

Story of mi life
Irish tale in the making
Where' mi lucky charms

[samercury]

:lol:
Where' mi lucky charms
-They're in the cereal box.
You can see it, right?

[Weeping Willow]

You can see it, right?
Yes it's right in the middle
Under your nose

[Riesa]

Oh My, :D

You can see it, right?
Oh wait! That's skull and crossbones
Not lucky, not at all.

[Riesa]

Under your nose
and through your waxy moustache
Hey, there's some Charms stuck

[samercury]

Hey, there's some Charms stuck
Underneath the Christmas tree.
The mouse is hiding

[Weeping Willow]

The mouse is hiding
Felix is ambushing him
Tom and Jerry too

[Virgil]

Tom and Jerry too
Phil and Brenda and Jenny
Gangs all here tonight.

[samercury]

Sorry >_<

Gangs all here tonight
To celebrate Kyo's party
Here comes Sakura

[Weeping Willow]

For what??

Here comes Sakura
Or maybe it shikaka
No it's shishkabab

[Riesa]

No it's shiskabab
Goats meat, cherry tomato
Squeezed lime the last touch.

[samercury]

Squeezed lime the last touch
To make a beautiful cake-
Whoops, wrong recipe

[Riesa]

Whoops, wrong recipe
Unless it's some key lime pie
But pie is not cake.

[samercury]

:lol:
But pie is not cake
It's not a cooky either.
Then, what can it be?

[Riesa]

Then, what can it be?
It must be a round pastry
Baked in a round dish.

[samercury]

Baked in a round dish
In the oven for hours-
The witch is happy

[Riesa]

The witch is happy,
The little toes are just right
For appetizers

[samercury]

For appetizers,
And for the a great lunch you made-
Thank you very much

[Riesa]

Thank you very much
A confession: The slightest
Gift makes me smile.

[samercury]

Gift makes me smile
Especially coming from
The master of Death

[Riesa]

The master of Death
Resides in the sunlit sky
According to Job

[Virgil]

The master of death
claims five hundred for satan
Dark days are coming

[samercury]

According to Job
Who has gone through obstacles
And came out on top

[Virgil]

According to Job
He has commited no sin
Why the punishment?

[dcdavi]

Why the punishment?
Siddhartha found his answer
All is suffering

[Riesa]

:wave:
All is suffering
All is profound happiness
All is as all is.

[samercury]

All is as all is
Forever in a circle
Coming back again

[Virgil]

Coming back again
After a winter's cold slumber
Hibernation blues

[Weeping Willow]

Hibernation blues
The tunes of the living dead
Music to my ears

[Aurora Ariel]

Music to my ears
Echoes in strange memories
Play the song of birth.

[Weeping Willow]

Play the song of birth
The circle of life turn, turn
Immortality

[samercury]

Good one

Immortality
Doesn't come to all of us
We live until Death

[Weeping Willow]

Thank you.. :)

We live until Death
This is our bless and our curse
Depends who's looking

[samercury]

Depends who's looking
From this side of Paradise
Life is suffering

[Weeping Willow]

Life is suffering
But down here in Hell it just
Party all the time

[Virgil]

Play the song of birth
The circle of life turn, turn
Immortality

I really like that one too.


Party all the time
A Roman feast on Fridays
Saturday Hungover

[Weeping Willow]

Thanks.. :)..

Saturday Hungover
From my mistakes i don't learn
3 beers are enough

[Virgil]

Three beers are enough
Three wild bears are dangerous
Three doggies pleasant

[samercury]

:lol:

Three doggies pleasant
Especially when sitting
On the comfy couch

[Virgil]

On the comfy couch
I doze and dream of heaven
Awake to stiff neck

[Weeping Willow]

Awake to stiff neck
The bus has not arrived yet
Going back to sleep

[samercury]

Going back to sleep
'Cause later, I won't have time
I am so tired

[Weeping Willow]

I am so tired
My head is sore and acheing
Better i go back

[samercury]

Better i go back
To my bed and get some rest
-Or I could go out

[Riesa]

-or I could go out
Feel the sun's warmth on my face
Breeze lifts my spirit

[samercury]

wow....

Breeze lifts my spirit
And carries it to the skies
Looking down below

[Riesa]

:)
Looking down below
From its perch on the high cliffs
A nestling fears flight.

[samercury]

:nod:
A nestling fears flight
Away from the sweet safety,
Afraid of the fall

[Riesa]

Afraid of the fall
One small push he discovers
The wings God gave him

[Virgil]

The wings God gave him
Were used to stir rebellion
Satan surmised sin

[samercury]

Satan surmised sin
Attracting more to his side
The Final battle

[Virgil]

The final battle
of King Arthur's loyal Knights.
Apocalyptic!

[samercury]

Apocalyptic
Always remaining in my
Dreadful memory

[Weeping Willow]

Dreadful memory
Of dark times and places, why?
Can't we bring back time

[Riesa]

Can't we bring back time
Drop those jaded precursors
--Find innocence lost

[Virgil]

Find innocence lost
Like pulling back river water
Way back to its source

[Riesa]

Nice, I love it.

Way back to its source
Thunderheads spill rain like oil
To drench the parched land