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amuse
01-30-2006, 01:19 PM
Juice, dripping money
Harvesting Scrooge's trees yields
Such delightful fruits

(:sick:, lol)

Xamonas Chegwe
01-30-2006, 02:35 PM
Such delightful fruits,
From such delightful labour;
Bless their wailing heads.

Riesa
01-30-2006, 02:55 PM
Bless their wailing heads,
Rock their sobbing bodies, heal
Them at three a.m.

Weeping Willow
01-30-2006, 05:42 PM
Them at three a.m
Morning will Come to all soon
And i shall be gone

chmpman
01-30-2006, 06:21 PM
And I shall be gone
Away to work the machine
Does this pay fulfill?

Xamonas Chegwe
01-30-2006, 06:28 PM
Does this pay fulfill,
The needs I have, my longings?
Or just pay the bills?

samercury
01-30-2006, 08:54 PM
Or just pay the bills?
Pick up the tab after IT
We're sure having fun

Virgil
01-30-2006, 11:43 PM
We're sure having fun
Don't tell the wicked teacher
She'll put an end here.

samercury
01-30-2006, 11:46 PM
She'll put an end here.
Give you an essay, a test
"I'm sure you'll do well"

Virgil
01-30-2006, 11:55 PM
"I'm sure you'll do well"
Can you count on it always?
Not in the summer.

ktd222
01-31-2006, 12:09 AM
Not in the summer,
but all year do I love you,
'Let me count the ways...'

Xamonas Chegwe
01-31-2006, 05:54 PM
Let me count the ways,
To drag back love from anger;
Not one without tears.

Riesa
01-31-2006, 07:15 PM
Nice.

Not one without tears;
No one drudging past sorrow
Has gone by dry eyed.

samercury
01-31-2006, 08:19 PM
Has gone by dry eyed
Why you keep on pretending
Is a mystery

Riesa
01-31-2006, 08:41 PM
Is a mystery;
Like a full-fledged Nancy Drew:
My favorite kind.

Virgil
01-31-2006, 08:46 PM
Has gone by dry eyed
Why you keep on pretending
Is a mystery
Very nice, Same.

My favorite kind
Cappuccino ice cream, oh
With chocolate bits

samercury
01-31-2006, 09:01 PM
Thanks

With chocolate bits
Like them, life's precious moments
Are hard to obtain

Riesa
01-31-2006, 09:40 PM
Are hard to obtain;
Granite encrusted Ruby;
A Mother's rare peace.

Virgil
01-31-2006, 11:35 PM
A mother's rare peace
comes dripping slow; listen; hush;
The kids are asleep.

RobinHood3000
01-31-2006, 11:40 PM
Heroes fight on to
Rescue, determination
Gilding their duty.

Riesa
01-31-2006, 11:54 PM
'comes dripping slow; listen; hush;'--that's so soothing.

The kids are asleep
In limp camaraderie
Possessing such dreams

Riesa
01-31-2006, 11:59 PM
Sorry, Robin.
Just make sure you follow the last line of the last Haiku. :)

Possessing such dreams
Psychic rudiments contend;
Gilding their duty.

ktd222
02-01-2006, 01:10 AM
Gilding their duty.
No life before one duty:
obligatory.

Hazel-Ra
02-01-2006, 05:42 AM
obligatory
work sure bore the pants off me
when ends the torture?!

Nisha
02-01-2006, 01:41 PM
When ends the torture?!
Aware of the unknown there
taunting you to seek..

Riesa
02-01-2006, 02:30 PM
Taunting you to seek;
Ripping away when you grasp;
Love's crooked torment.

Hazel-Ra
02-01-2006, 02:40 PM
Love's crooked torment
men need ten min after sex
women need more now!

Riesa
02-01-2006, 03:01 PM
Women need more now,
More yesterday and next week.
Mists of future bleak.

Hazel-Ra
02-01-2006, 03:13 PM
Hey Reisa :)

Mists of future bleak
Depths of the human soul cry
Endless line of pain

Riesa
02-01-2006, 03:25 PM
Hi, Hazel-Ra. Love your user name even more now, great book.
Nice Haiku, too. :)

Endless line of pain
Shifting, circling, rise and fall
Ragged breath sustains life.

chmpman
02-01-2006, 07:58 PM
Ragged breath sustains life
A cold dry wind through bare limbs
Creation on pause.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-01-2006, 08:08 PM
Love's crooked torment
men need ten min after sex
women need more now!
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Why not get a second man for afters? A lot of us aren't too exclusive! :nod:

Creation on pause;
Awaiting a new species,
With chocolate flesh!

Riesa
02-02-2006, 01:29 AM
With chocolate flesh
I'm melting.. I can't recall
With this toffee brain.

Hazel-Ra
02-02-2006, 05:44 AM
With this toffee brain
I attempt to get going
Morning blues again

Hazel-Ra
02-02-2006, 05:45 AM
p.s. Thanks Reisa :)

dcdavi
02-02-2006, 07:02 AM
morning blues again
-- when the saints go marching in --
levies bourbon street

nickelsilver
02-02-2006, 11:34 AM
Levies Bourbon Street
It's bourbon and water, now
City on the rocks

Aurora Ariel
02-02-2006, 12:14 PM
City on the rocks
Dark waves are crashing closer
Sunlight sinks below.

atiguhya padma
02-02-2006, 01:33 PM
Sunlight sinks below
The surface, distorted warmth
Stretched underworld

Oceallaigh
02-02-2006, 02:26 PM
A Demon of Night
He is keeper of the Light
By the name of Rafe

Éabha Ashling Flamme
She is the vison of Flame
The Eve in his dreams

Weeping Willow
02-02-2006, 04:27 PM
The Eve in his dreams
Is The Garden of Edan
A dream for us all

Xamonas Chegwe
02-02-2006, 04:43 PM
A dream for us all;
It's going to get crowded,
In the Turkish baths!

Weeping Willow
02-02-2006, 04:49 PM
In the Turkish baths!
There lived a king Old and Wise
From the years bathing!

Xamonas Chegwe
02-02-2006, 05:13 PM
From the years bathing,
My skin is soft and supple;
My nails have dissolved.

chmpman
02-02-2006, 05:25 PM
My nails have disolved
But hidden fangs grow sharper;
In embrace I strike.

Riesa
02-02-2006, 07:22 PM
In emrace I strike
An empress ruling countries
With sweet violence.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-02-2006, 08:03 PM
With sweet violence,
I pluck the rose from the bough;
Her thorns bite me back.

Virgil
02-02-2006, 11:54 PM
Her thorns bite me back
A scent that intoxicates.
Sweet, hurtful torment.

Riesa
02-03-2006, 12:17 AM
Sweet, hurtful torment
This fiery constrainment
Enthralls and crumbles.

RobinHood3000
02-03-2006, 12:29 AM
Enthralls and crumbles
Each empire does in turn
For man is no god.

Virgil
02-03-2006, 12:29 AM
Enthralls and crumbles
Roman empire falls to dust
Trajan's arch soiled

edit: Hey Robin, we were thinking along the same lines.

RobinHood3000
02-03-2006, 12:31 AM
Great minds, eh?

Weeping Willow
02-03-2006, 08:07 AM
Sorry,, virg' but i prefer Robin's line... :) hope you don't mind ... :blush:..

For man is no god
The power of creation
Is not ours to rule

Nisha
02-03-2006, 09:05 AM
Is not ours to rule
Fate,being the prince of god
mocks men's cursed laments.

Sad tht I cnt participate more often... :( :bawling:

Riesa
02-03-2006, 11:08 AM
Mocks men's cursed laments;
Dousing ambition towards
Perfection with rain.

Hazel-Ra
02-03-2006, 12:01 PM
Perfection with rain.
Darkness and wind guide it's path
Falling from the sky

Xamonas Chegwe
02-03-2006, 01:05 PM
Falling from the sky,
Amphibian rain descends;
A shower of frogs.

Hazel-Ra
02-03-2006, 01:15 PM
A shower of frogs
a bath of mud-soaked penguins
madness delights me

Riesa
02-03-2006, 01:27 PM
Madness delights me!
I'll take cinnamon sugar
On my howling rage.

atiguhya padma
02-03-2006, 01:32 PM
On my howling rage
Streaks across your face beneath
This full pallid moon

Riesa
02-03-2006, 02:13 PM
This full pallid moon
Rising so painstakingly
Slow above our hill.

Hazel-Ra
02-03-2006, 02:19 PM
Slow above our hill
The silent walk wearily
Never finding home

Riesa
02-03-2006, 02:27 PM
Never finding home;
Immersing ourselves in this
Place, perhaps here.

Hazel-Ra
02-03-2006, 02:38 PM
Place, perhaps here
your thoughts, jokes, opinions
for other's input

Riesa
02-03-2006, 02:51 PM
For other's input
Is the frame that holds us up
When in pain we doubt.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-03-2006, 03:06 PM
When in pain we doubt,
Our convictions and beliefs;
It's only human.

Hazel-Ra
02-03-2006, 03:14 PM
It's only human
to want something that cannot
be had for good reason

Riesa
02-03-2006, 07:28 PM
Be had for good reason;
Suspend reasoning between
Vagrants and true need.

Virgil
02-04-2006, 01:02 AM
Vagrants and true need
hat held out for commission
cold gloomy winter

Riesa
02-04-2006, 02:55 AM
Cold gloomy winter
Trudging steps through muck ridden
Streets, Feel the air, friend.

Weeping Willow
02-04-2006, 09:36 AM
Streets, Feel the air, friend
Can you smell, it's gonna snow
Snow is magical

Xamonas Chegwe
02-04-2006, 09:51 AM
Snow is magical,
Especially the warm type;
Shame it's very rare.

Weeping Willow
02-04-2006, 10:06 AM
Shame it's very rare
Yet that what make it's beauty
So precious to us

Virgil
02-04-2006, 10:19 AM
So precious to us
the little child with mucus
running down her nose.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-04-2006, 10:27 AM
Running down her nose,
I'm jumping from lip to lip;
She has a big face.

Hazel-Ra
02-04-2006, 01:56 PM
She has a big face.
She has a big ev'rything
In fact she's just big

Virgil
02-04-2006, 02:19 PM
In fact she's just big;
That elephant of mine, Ra
You should see her poop.

Weeping Willow
02-04-2006, 05:09 PM
You should see her poop
In a spark of a moment
It can kill your nose

RobinHood3000
02-04-2006, 05:48 PM
It can kill your nose
The immortal stench of the
Ebbing tide, painful.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-04-2006, 08:24 PM
Ebbing tide, painful
Jellyfish under my foot,
I hate the seaside!

Riesa
02-04-2006, 08:32 PM
I hate the seaside!
Why stand by and look; could be
Snorkeling instead.

chmpman
02-04-2006, 08:45 PM
Snorkeling instead,
Absorbed in pretty neon
While a shadow gains.

Virgil
02-04-2006, 09:45 PM
while a shadow gains
the sun slides away to hide
beneath the domain

Xamonas Chegwe
02-04-2006, 09:59 PM
Beneath the domain,
Of the king of Atlantis,
Lies the worlds last gnome.

Scheherazade
02-04-2006, 10:02 PM
Lies the world's last gnome,
Hardly ever tells the truth!
Can't trust even him.

Riesa
02-05-2006, 12:29 PM
Can't trust even him;
He sends evil sprites with claws
To disturb my dreams.

RobinHood3000
02-05-2006, 12:37 PM
To disturb my dreams
Requires an alarm that
Can play William Tell.

Riesa
02-05-2006, 12:49 PM
Can play William Tell:
But I don't advise it for
Obvious reasons!

Xamonas Chegwe
02-05-2006, 06:41 PM
Obvious reasons,
To believe the obvious,
Obvious to all?

Scheherazade
02-05-2006, 06:45 PM
Obvious to all
It should be but none could see
The charade goes on.

Petrarch's Love
02-05-2006, 07:10 PM
The charade goes on
While the shadows of this world
Live what's real and best.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-05-2006, 07:15 PM
Live what's real and best;
Drain the cup of life, and then,
Have another cup.

samercury
02-05-2006, 07:22 PM
Nice

Have another cup.
Worry not about what's next
Enjoy the moment

Petrarch's Love
02-05-2006, 07:26 PM
Enjoy the moment.
Drink in the liquor's warm glow.
Then sing. Loudly sing!

Xamonas Chegwe
02-05-2006, 07:43 PM
Then sing. Loudly sing;
Elton your heart out baby,
And don't care who hears!

samercury
02-05-2006, 07:54 PM
And don't care who hears
'Cause they won't stay here for long.
Thanks for listening

Outlander
02-05-2006, 08:55 PM
Thanks for listening
Dried gum waiting to be found
Superbowl Sunday

samercury
02-05-2006, 09:12 PM
Superbowl Sunday
How could I have forgotten?
It is today right?

RobinHood3000
02-05-2006, 10:04 PM
It is today, right?
Anniversary has passed...
I'm in biiiiig trouble.

Hazel-Ra
02-06-2006, 06:20 AM
I'm in biiiiig trouble.
Should never have hit on the
president of spain

Riesa
02-06-2006, 11:31 AM
President of Spain
Lifts his hand and stills the wind.
Hush, it's quiet time.

amuse
02-06-2006, 01:21 PM
hush it's quiet time
translate my latin while i
take your nap and snack

Xamonas Chegwe
02-06-2006, 02:40 PM
Take your nap and snack,
While you are still able to;
Hard times are ahead.

Riesa
02-06-2006, 02:54 PM
Hard times are ahead;
Life is not always pony
Rides in May sunshine.

Petrarch's Love
02-06-2006, 02:57 PM
Rides in May sunshine
Though frost glazes the window
What power in dreams!

Theshizznigg
02-06-2006, 03:05 PM
Rise, young lovers hearts do break,
In rain does the quiver ache,
Arrow pierced him through and through,
His heart is shattered by its shaft.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-06-2006, 05:56 PM
Rise, young lovers hearts do break,
In rain does the quiver ache,
Arrow pierced him through and through,
His heart is shattered by its shaft.

Not a haiku, and the first line isn't the last line of the poem before. Apart from that, not bad. I suggest you read the first post in this thread and try again. :D

chmpman
02-06-2006, 06:27 PM
What power in dreams!
Midgets astride Pegasus;
Praise the name Wonder!

Xamonas Chegwe
02-06-2006, 06:38 PM
Praise the name Wonder;
Eyes that have no need to see,
Stevie's heart does that.

Riesa
02-06-2006, 08:25 PM
Stevie's heart does that;
I take myself through changes
Listening to him.

'Don't you worry 'bout a thing' a little borrowed from this great song.

Outlander
02-06-2006, 08:28 PM
Listening to him
Robinhood in trouble now?
Anniversary!

Riesa
02-06-2006, 08:36 PM
Anniversary;
Roses, wine and some mayhem
--Cinco de Mayo.

Virgil
02-06-2006, 09:40 PM
Cinco de mayo
with margaritas with salt;
Tequila, hooray.

Riesa
02-06-2006, 09:45 PM
that hooray looks a little limp; not a big fan of Tequila?

Tequila, hooray!
Sipped when chilled; leisurely pace
Ensures enjoyment.

Virgil
02-06-2006, 10:21 PM
that hooray looks a little limp; not a big fan of Tequila?

Actually there are two stories with tequila and me:
(1) I remember being around 20 or 22 something like that, and an old friend and I sat on his stoop (we grew up in Brooklyn) one night and drank tequila (I don't remember how much) but I got drunk, vomited, and never could take the taste of unmixed tequila again.
(2) I was on a business trip around 10-12 years ago to a place in eastern Washington State, which is real cowboy country. We went out to a cowboy bar the first night with my boss at that time and the fellow we were visiting, a real cowboy, wears cowboy boots and hat with shirt and tie, has horses, shoes them himself, on his little ranch. Obviously this was a drinking kind of place, and I was handling it very well, I was probably drinking something that I was accostumed to. They were drinking tequila, and towards the end they each bought shots of Cuevo Gold, the extra high proof, whatever that is. And they insisted I join them. I drank both. I didn't shove them down like they did, but I finished them, and I guess the tequila at that proof level didn't taste quite as bad. I was fine that night, went back to the room, was not drunk. But I felt what I can only call a physical memory recall to that Brooklyn experience with my friend. My gut had sort of convulsions, with the terrible tequila taste coming up on me. But the night passed, and the next morning the three of us were in the cowboy's office reviewing design drawings. I was fine all morning, but all of a sudden, coming from no where, I felt that convulsion again, and I sat back, energy just draining out of me. I felt the taste come up again and my stomach bubbling. I said, "Ray, I got to go to the bathroom; I think I'm going to lose it." He later said I had turned pale as a ghost. He walked me to the bathroom in his building. As we were walking, it was getting worst, almost like your blood pressure dropping. All of a sudden I couldn't hold it any more. But, thank heavens we were passing an empty office with a waste paper basket right by the door. With a stroke of improvised necessity I stepped into the room, picked up the pail, and let it out into it. And just like that, it was over; I felt great. After rinsing my mouth out, we went back to work and had a great laugh over it. We all still bring it up, and it is still a point of jokes between the three of us.

Virgil
02-06-2006, 10:22 PM
Ensures enjoyment?
It doesn't. Not tequila.
Very bad memories.

Riesa
02-06-2006, 11:36 PM
Two stories are better than none.

Very bad memories:
Half digested Lamb Kurma
After Curry Row.

Virgil
02-06-2006, 11:56 PM
Not really. If God gave me the chance to do them over, I would pass.

After curry row
We reach the underground Taj,
And bring our own beer.

Riesa
02-07-2006, 12:01 AM
ha. Therein lies the crux of life.

And bring our own beer!?
What kind of hokey party
Are you putting on?

RobinHood3000
02-07-2006, 06:44 AM
Are you putting on
That stupid fedora, sir?
Archaeologists...

atiguhya padma
02-07-2006, 06:58 AM
Archaeologists,
And palaeontologists
Feel it in their bones

Hazel-Ra
02-07-2006, 07:07 AM
Feel it in their bones
When the winds of time change and
our world is altered

Riesa
02-07-2006, 11:03 AM
Our world is altered
With a nice simple smile
And a cheery hello.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-07-2006, 05:29 PM
And a cheery hello,
Falls flat from my drying lips;
I see her with him!

RobinHood3000
02-07-2006, 06:06 PM
I see her with him!
I charge forward, sword in hand
Honor and vengeance...

chmpman
02-07-2006, 06:07 PM
I see her with him.
Life empties and sinks;
A balloon let loose.

Riesa
02-07-2006, 06:10 PM
A balloon let loose
Can be brought down; remember
To aim for the heart.

Petrarch's Love
02-07-2006, 10:12 PM
To aim for the heart
And yet to miss your target
Is a great sadness.

RobinHood3000
02-07-2006, 10:27 PM
Is a great sadness
Really all that terrible?
The answer: Indeed.

Riesa
02-08-2006, 12:20 AM
The answer indeed
Comes from within; a deep breath
Settles upsets down.

Hazel-Ra
02-08-2006, 06:43 AM
Settles upsets down.
Peptobismol cures all ills
At least the box claims

Riesa
02-08-2006, 11:00 AM
At least the box claims
You will be rich; tall, younger,
Smart; So good-lookin'!

atiguhya padma
02-08-2006, 02:09 PM
Smart; So good-lookin'
Unusually bright too
Must be something wrong!

Xamonas Chegwe
02-08-2006, 04:16 PM
Must be something wrong,
Wtih my splelcehcker, thmup it!
There, it's a lot better!

chmpman
02-08-2006, 04:18 PM
Yet again I'm too slow.

"There, it's a lot better,"
Mother coos into child's ear;
Bike in hand he mounts.

samercury
02-08-2006, 05:33 PM
Bike in hand he mounts
Rides off to the forgotten
Midnight memories

Xamonas Chegwe
02-08-2006, 05:45 PM
Midnight memories;
I lie there trying to sleep,
but her face won't leave.

chmpman
02-08-2006, 09:02 PM
But her face won't leave;
Little urchin girl at my
Window in the cold.

Riesa
02-08-2006, 09:52 PM
Window in the cold,
Scraping frost, late once again;
Hurry up, Hurry!

nickelsilver
02-09-2006, 11:21 AM
Hurry up, hurry!
School bus is coming, slowpoke!
Ugh!! Little sisters . . .

amuse
02-09-2006, 12:16 PM
ugh!! Little sisters...
imps twittering sans respite
muzzle or hug them?

samercury
02-09-2006, 12:22 PM
oops!.....

samercury
02-09-2006, 12:25 PM
Muzzle or hug them?
Why do ask that question-
Easy choice to make

Petrarch's Love
02-09-2006, 12:33 PM
Easy choice to make
So I'll accept that ring now
And say to him "Yes!"

Riesa
02-09-2006, 12:37 PM
And say to him "yes"
Breathing room diminishes
Restricting air flow.

atiguhya padma
02-09-2006, 02:16 PM
Restricting air flow
Takes you further, higher,
Deeper, so they say.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-09-2006, 02:46 PM
Deeper, so they say,
The city of Atlantis,
Shrouded in seaweed.

Riesa
02-09-2006, 02:50 PM
oh,nice.

Shrouded in seaweed,
Man overboard surfaces
Miles from his boat.

not so nice.

Virgil
02-09-2006, 11:21 PM
Miles from his boat
He floats away toward the shore
Until the shark bites.

Riesa
02-09-2006, 11:53 PM
Until the shark bites;
I shall linger; adoring
Stars, and breathing air.

Virgil
02-10-2006, 12:17 AM
Stars and breathing air.
Hollywood actors think they
own it all. Sorry.

Riesa
02-10-2006, 12:56 PM
Own it all? Sorry,
Impossible. Though desire
Brings golden daydreams.

Hazel-Ra
02-10-2006, 01:20 PM
Brings golden daydreams
Like those days in the height of
summer... beautiful days

Petrarch's Love
02-10-2006, 01:30 PM
Summer...beautiful days
When I did not live in this
Icy cold climate

Hazel-Ra
02-10-2006, 01:41 PM
Icy cold climate
Ain't it a son of a *beep*
When will spring be here???

Riesa
02-10-2006, 03:22 PM
When will spring be here?
While riding; I saw cheeky
Wildflowers peeking.

Hazel-Ra
02-10-2006, 03:46 PM
Wildflowers peeking
through their petals at the trees
waving in the wind

Xamonas Chegwe
02-10-2006, 04:17 PM
Waving in the wind;
Black flags on skeletons of,
broken umbrellas.

chmpman
02-10-2006, 04:22 PM
Broken umbrellas;
Shelter from the elements
Downtrodden by man.

Petrarch's Love
02-10-2006, 08:13 PM
Downtrodden by man
But still hoped for by angels
He raises his head.

Hazel-Ra
02-10-2006, 08:33 PM
He raises his head
Up to the sky with a sense
Of impending doom

Riesa
02-10-2006, 08:53 PM
Of impending doom,
I will toss some thoughts about,
Depends on my mood.

Petrarch's Love
02-10-2006, 08:57 PM
Depends on my mood
Whether I will dance and sing
Or rest quietly

Xamonas Chegwe
02-10-2006, 09:23 PM
Or rest quietly,
If you like; It won't matter,
We will still find you.

RobinHood3000
02-10-2006, 09:32 PM
We will still find you,
Danger awaits wherever
You can seek to hide

samercury
02-10-2006, 09:40 PM
:nod:

You can seek to hide
Away from the real world
Deluding yourself

Riesa
02-10-2006, 09:48 PM
Deluding yourself:
Chasing windmills, or hunting
Snipe, it's amusing!

Xamonas Chegwe
02-10-2006, 09:51 PM
Snipe, it's amusing;
Picking off people from the,
Top of tall buildings!

Thanks for the set up Riesa. ;)

Riesa
02-10-2006, 10:04 PM
Anything for you, Xamonas. ;)

Top of tall buildings
Reflecting sun, mirrored walls
Slick, a super slide.

Virgil
02-10-2006, 10:51 PM
Brings golden daydreams
Like those days in the height of
summer... beautiful days
That's really good one.


Slick, a super slide
We haven't won a game since,
Since the cookoo croaked.

RobinHood3000
02-10-2006, 10:53 PM
Since the cookoo croaked
We haven't had anyone
To cookoo our meals

Riesa
02-10-2006, 10:58 PM
To cookoo our meals
We have to first wahshaw the
Veggetablelas.

Virgil
02-12-2006, 01:11 AM
Veggetablelas
in the steamerabeles
La, la, la, di, da

That was hard.

RobinHood3000
02-12-2006, 09:22 AM
La, la, la, di, da,
I don't give a rat's behind
About anything.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-12-2006, 11:53 AM
About anything,
You have your own opinion;
And I the right one!

samercury
02-12-2006, 12:35 PM
And I the right one!
Now- see how modest I am.
You agree, don't you?

Virgil
02-12-2006, 12:46 PM
You agree, don't you?
No I don't. I dispute it.
Can't we get along?

RobinHood3000
02-12-2006, 12:51 PM
Can't we get along?
Bah! Humbug...we can never
Learn to live in peace.

dcdavi
02-12-2006, 12:56 PM
learn to live in peace.
it beats the alernative--
living in pieces

Xamonas Chegwe
02-12-2006, 01:23 PM
Living in pieces,
makes it hard to commune with,
One's feminine side.

chmpman
02-12-2006, 02:53 PM
One's feminine side
As a wise man once told me
Can be one's Greek side.

Virgil
02-12-2006, 08:43 PM
I have no idea what that means and I'm not going to ask.

Can be one's greek side
the salad with the olives
add some feta, too

RobinHood3000
02-12-2006, 08:54 PM
Add some feta, too.
Thatta way, it will go well
With-a my hands-a.

Riesa
02-12-2006, 10:02 PM
With-a my hands-a
Smashing plates. "Yasas!" explode
Ripened with Anise.

Virgil
02-12-2006, 11:50 PM
Ripened with Anise
I ask for tomatos for
my homemade pizza

RobinHood3000
02-13-2006, 06:39 AM
My homemade pizza
Say hello to the ceiling
No hand-tossed for me.

Riesa
02-13-2006, 10:19 AM
No hand-tossed for me;
"It's debauched, and immoral!"
Cries the Rolling Pin.

Petrarch's Love
02-13-2006, 01:07 PM
Cries the rolling pin:
"Where has all the flour gone?
The dough is sticky"

Virgil
02-13-2006, 01:12 PM
Hi Petrarch. Someone needs to start a new poem for discussion in the poem of the week thread. How about you?

The dough is sticky
But wait until you taste it
Bread is a good thing.

Riesa
02-13-2006, 01:29 PM
Bread is a good thing,
Torn, gravy soaked, served up with
Wine, pasta and love.

atiguhya padma
02-13-2006, 01:41 PM
Wine, pasta and love
An intoxicating mix
But rather messy.

Riesa
02-13-2006, 01:56 PM
But rather messy;
Skin's beauty, as well as silk,
They're easily cleaned.

dcdavi
02-13-2006, 02:36 PM
they're easily cleaned;
so anal retentives can
get closer to god.

Virgil
02-13-2006, 02:38 PM
Bread is a good thing,
Torn, gravy soaked, served up with
Wine, pasta and love.
Oh, I love this one.

They're easily cleaned
But they redirty again
those little devils.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-13-2006, 03:41 PM
I agree Virgil. Sometimes Riesa's so good that I wonder why I bother.

Those little devils,
That get into your sock drawer;
Stealing one of each.

Riesa
02-13-2006, 04:12 PM
I'm floored, stop it, you two. But you've both made my day. La la la, I feel giddy.

Stealing one of each
Of my three good hearts, Husband;
Chegwé and Virgil.

Muh!

Virgil
02-13-2006, 04:20 PM
Chegwe and Virgil
Sitting on a fence; one said
Umph and the other bmph

Xamonas Chegwe
02-13-2006, 04:20 PM
She air-kissed me! My turn to feel giddy. ;)

chmpman
02-13-2006, 05:17 PM
Virgil: Think Odysseus sitting on a rock and weeping.

Umph and the other bmph;
Two specks colliding on Earth
But still dodging life.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-13-2006, 05:29 PM
But still! Dodging life,
Is all very well my friend;
But it will catch up.

RobinHood3000
02-13-2006, 08:25 PM
But it will catch up!
Said the hare's buddy, Cecil.
Bah! Tortoise is slow.

Petrarch's Love
02-14-2006, 12:52 AM
Bah! Tortoise is slow
And may end up as a soup
If he's not clever.

atiguhya padma
02-14-2006, 01:19 PM
If he's not clever
Brevity of language: love
Intensive evenings

Virgil
02-15-2006, 01:41 AM
Intensive evenings
With night music and some wine
With kisses and hugs.

Riesa
02-15-2006, 11:26 AM
With kisses and hugs,
Ease in solidarity
Mends raw misery.

amuse
02-15-2006, 12:59 PM
mends raw misery
with strands of golden fibers
spun from a pure heart

atiguhya padma
02-15-2006, 02:21 PM
Spun from a pure heart
The thread of man's true nature,
Emperor's new clothes

Xamonas Chegwe
02-15-2006, 03:03 PM
Emperor's new clothes,
Machine washed, dried and ironed;
That must have hurt him!

RobinHood3000
02-15-2006, 04:03 PM
That must have hurt him!
Said the rugby team's medic
His neck's all messed up.

Riesa
02-15-2006, 11:15 PM
"His neck's all messed up."
That's okay, it's your first try.
"Play-dough is squashy."

Virgil
02-15-2006, 11:20 PM
Play-dough is squashy;
try to bake it and it melts;
eat it and it hurts.

Riesa
02-15-2006, 11:35 PM
Eat it and it hurts,
Go ask Evil Knievel.
Kids never listen.

samercury
02-15-2006, 11:42 PM
Kids never listen.
That's what adults always say.
Do you think that's fair?

Virgil
02-15-2006, 11:50 PM
Do you think that's fair,
grounding a bad teenager?
Yes, he failed english.

Petrarch's Love
02-16-2006, 12:04 AM
Yes, he failed English
But that did not stop him from
Writing best sellers.

chmpman
02-16-2006, 12:41 AM
Writing best sellers,
Smut to please the masses; yet
I made a living.

Riesa
02-16-2006, 01:06 AM
I made a living,
I lived, I sat and waited
I left, I'm living.

onions
02-16-2006, 04:42 AM
I left, I'm living.
The sun is rising at dawn
Bringing drops of dew.

onions
02-16-2006, 04:43 AM
I left, I'm living.
The sun is rising at dawn
Bringing drops of dew.


I think japanese used such similies in haiku very often.

atiguhya padma
02-16-2006, 01:23 PM
Bringing drops of dew
Morning proudly undoes night
Heralding the day

Xamonas Chegwe
02-16-2006, 03:52 PM
Heralding the day;
Cacophony of churchbells,
And I'm working nights!

onions
02-16-2006, 04:05 PM
And I'm working nights;
World is so boring and flat
In its dark colors.

Riesa
02-16-2006, 05:08 PM
In its dark colors,
Velvet night dresses itself,
With stars for earrings.

chmpman
02-16-2006, 05:20 PM
With stars for earings
And the moon for curving mouth,
Night's language enchants.

Xamonas Chegwe
02-16-2006, 05:26 PM
Night's language enchants,
The sons of Adam, that come,
To hear her tall tales.

Riesa
02-16-2006, 06:30 PM
To hear her tall tales,
Drink her tropical wind, in
Cups of Pirate's gold.

amuse
02-16-2006, 08:00 PM
Cups of Pirate's gold:
salty ingots flavored with
betrayal and ransom.


:eek: re: sixth syllable

Xamonas Chegwe
02-16-2006, 08:12 PM
B'trayal and ransom, (Dropped a syllable)
Vengeance and infamy; a,
Pretty good night out!

Virgil
02-16-2006, 09:28 PM
Pretty good night out
swigging beer and oogling girls
with the boys of youth

Riesa
02-16-2006, 09:51 PM
With the boys of youth
Climbing crooked trails at dusk
Under Perseus.

Virgil
02-16-2006, 10:22 PM
Under Perseus
We watched the moon cross the sky
And you in my arms.

atiguhya padma
02-17-2006, 06:01 AM
And you in my arms
As Mars flickers in the sky
Feel the warmth of skin

smilesad
02-17-2006, 06:49 AM
one thousand years of stomach ache,
fifteen minutes of satisfaction

atiguhya padma
02-17-2006, 07:55 AM
Of satisfaction
My cat is wise beyond words
I must study him.

Riesa
02-17-2006, 10:29 AM
I must study him,
Conscious that I'm the theme of
His contemplation.

atiguhya padma
02-17-2006, 10:36 AM
His contemplation
Placates volcanic temper
Anger slows its pace

white camellia
02-17-2006, 10:45 AM
Anger slows its pace
sightless slave of instinct but
man befooled by lore

atiguhya padma
02-17-2006, 10:55 AM
Man befooled by lore
Promoting superstition
From an ancient book

Xamonas Chegwe
02-17-2006, 01:25 PM
From an ancient book,
A magic potion I brewed;
It made my nose blue.

atiguhya padma
02-17-2006, 01:49 PM
It made my nose blue
And then brought me to these knees
Your voice said "Tis you"

Petrarch's Love
02-17-2006, 09:40 PM
Your voice said "Tis you"
And my voice replied "Tis you"
And then it was "we."

Xamonas Chegwe
02-17-2006, 10:17 PM
And then it was "we";
I thought a bit and said, "mous?";
They laughed; I hate French!

samercury
02-18-2006, 08:43 PM
They laughed; I hate French!
A feeling shared by many
Attending her class

chmpman
02-18-2006, 08:50 PM
Attending her class
Boys were smitten and couldnt
Think to save their lives.

Virgil
02-18-2006, 09:24 PM
They laughed; I hate French!
A feeling shared by many
Attending her class
:lol:

Think to save their lives
On board a sinking vessel
Water near knee high.

Aurora Ariel
02-18-2006, 10:26 PM
Water near knee high
He's looking for a way out
The rafts are broken.

Virgil
02-19-2006, 12:00 AM
The rafts are broken
Out with the life vests, first mate.
Try not to swallow.

RobinHood3000
02-19-2006, 01:05 AM
Try not to swallow...
Why did you do that?? Now I've
Got to buy a new drill...

Riesa
02-19-2006, 10:54 AM
Got to buy a new drill,
Preferably Makita,
My old one is junk.

RobinHood3000
02-19-2006, 11:54 AM
My old one is junk
Since I crashed into a cliff
Hanggliders aren't cheap