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Laindessiel
12-27-2006, 11:04 PM
Hard to say goodbye
And sorry, for that matter.
...Goodbye and sorry...

samercury
12-27-2006, 11:11 PM
...Goodbye and sorry...
-Runs away and trips on branch-
Back to starting line

Susan Sonnen
12-27-2006, 11:11 PM
goodbye and sorry
whispered Autumn as she left;
Winter stormed right in

Riesa
12-28-2006, 12:59 AM
winter stormed right in
ripping the summer screens in
its frigid slamming

Virgil
12-28-2006, 01:30 AM
Its frigid slamming
Makes the sweet rhythm rock cold.
Blues guitar makes swing.

Riesa
12-28-2006, 01:43 AM
blues guitar makes swing
Chet's trumpet slices blue-notes,
a precise surgeon

Virgil
12-28-2006, 01:58 AM
A precise surgeon
cut off my leg yesterday.
Now they call me peg.

Riesa
12-28-2006, 02:11 AM
:lol:
you better lay off the ..... *whistling*

Now they call me Peg,
after a lifetime of Marg.
I only liked Meg.

Triskele
12-28-2006, 02:16 AM
now they call me peg
soon i will be torsoe boy
a tipsy doctor

:sick:

Janine
12-28-2006, 02:31 AM
A tipsy doctor
Gave me a tipsy drug; now
I am quite tipsy!

Whifflingpin
12-28-2006, 09:37 AM
I am quite tipsy
On my most tipsy toes
Nutcracker ballet

Pendragon
12-28-2006, 09:52 AM
Nutcracker ballet?
Did the leading male dancer.
Slip doing a split? :lol:

Laindessiel
12-28-2006, 10:14 AM
Slip doing the split
Is how some people err, true
I'll hold your leg, please.

Whifflingpin
12-28-2006, 10:49 AM
I'll hold your leg, please,
Kiss gently behind your knee;
Delicate hollow

Riesa
12-28-2006, 11:00 AM
delicate hollow
wisp of a word: air. days spent
breathing in rhythm

Laindessiel
12-28-2006, 11:58 AM
Wow, Riesa, that was good!

Breathing in rhythm
And dancing in slow motion.
Trespass my castle.

thehangedman
12-28-2006, 12:57 PM
Trespass my castle.
For I've been locked up too long.
Imprisoned by Pride

Laindessiel
12-28-2006, 01:01 PM
Imprisoned by Pride
Swims in lost prejudices.
Hyped up by swindling.

Hello and welcome Hangedman! :wave:

thehangedman
12-28-2006, 01:37 PM
Hyped up by swindling,
Consumed by careless deceit,
Liars die alone.

Hello to you Lain. (wow that's a lot of posts for a month ;) )

Poetess
12-28-2006, 01:40 PM
Hyped up by swindling
Carried up with erroneous views
And put down by truth

Laindessiel
12-28-2006, 01:49 PM
People here are very nice, Hang. And smart. They inspire me to write. ;)

And put down by truth
Goodness reigns. Not by Hitler.
He wrote Mein Kampf, duh.

zanna
12-28-2006, 02:06 PM
He wrote Mein Kampf, duh.
You didn't know it was him?
You ignorant fool.

Hang, cool to meet you. Keep Haikuing. :)

Whifflingpin
12-28-2006, 02:19 PM
You ignorant fool
Who know not whence comes the wind
nor whither it goes.

zanna
12-28-2006, 02:30 PM
Nor whither it goes,
over thither and yon, but
I look everywhere.

thehangedman
12-28-2006, 02:50 PM
I look everywhere,
And still I have not found you.
I am fortune's fool.

Nice to meet you too Zanna :)

Whifflingpin
12-28-2006, 03:28 PM
I am fortune's fool
If you are fortune's fool, then
Fortune has two fools

samercury
12-28-2006, 05:50 PM
Fortune has two fools
Each more foolish than the next.
Look, look- here they come

Riesa
12-28-2006, 06:21 PM
Look, look - here they come
the first drops of rain from clouds
long hanging darkly

Triskele
12-28-2006, 07:42 PM
long hanging darkly
like the flapping black banners
of the khans army

zanna
12-29-2006, 01:07 AM
of the Khans army
they were terrified always
is this our last day?

Janine
12-29-2006, 01:54 AM
Is this our last day?
The end could be nearer than
Thinking could predict.

Pendragon
12-29-2006, 10:58 AM
Thinking could predict
The end of all life on Earth—
Scary, is it not?

Laindessiel
12-29-2006, 11:01 AM
Scary, is it not?
There come the ghosts! Run and hide!
And from behind: BOO.

zanna
12-29-2006, 12:25 PM
And from behind: BOO.
my brother's at it again.
no rest for weary.

Laindessiel
12-29-2006, 12:36 PM
No rest for weary
Go home, got slippers, then eat.
No rest for wary.

zanna
12-29-2006, 12:54 PM
no rest for wary
always looking around the
corner of my life.

Laindessiel
12-29-2006, 01:06 PM
Corner of my life
Depends on the edges of
Fragileness of me.

zanna
12-29-2006, 01:20 PM
fragileness of me
that's what he talked about - but
why break my heart, then?

Susan Sonnen
12-29-2006, 01:36 PM
why break my heart, then?
tell what purpose has been served__
wolves howl in distance

Whifflingpin
12-29-2006, 01:40 PM
wolves howl in distance
pussy cat purrs at my feet
far things are fearful

Laindessiel
12-29-2006, 01:46 PM
Far things are fearful
Tangible things are cowards.
Please pass the courage

zanna
12-29-2006, 02:27 PM
please pass the courage
I, just like the lion, don't
have bravery now.

thehangedman
12-29-2006, 03:16 PM
Have bravery now,
My abled-bodied soldier.
Death should fear your hand.

Neo_Sephiroth
12-29-2006, 03:16 PM
Have bravery now
Fight for what you believe in
End with no regrets.

zanna
12-29-2006, 03:24 PM
End with no regrets,
Live each day to the fullest
that's the way to go.

thehangedman
12-29-2006, 03:55 PM
That's the way to go!
Neo bumped my last haiku.
Now it won't be seen.

:(

ShoutGrace
12-29-2006, 06:16 PM
Now it won't be seen
My fungus is safely stored
Inside my old sock.

Whifflingpin
12-29-2006, 06:46 PM
Inside my old sock
lie many golden guineas.
Banks are not for me.

ShoutGrace
12-29-2006, 06:58 PM
Banks are not for me
I prefer to knock over
Gas stations and stores.

Janine
12-29-2006, 09:31 PM
Gas stations and stores
Taint the roads with ugliness.
Crave open space.

Virgil
12-29-2006, 09:38 PM
Hi Janine.


Crave open spaces
To run and howl with the pack.
Dinner was a mouse.

ShoutGrace
12-29-2006, 11:00 PM
Dinner with a mouse
Add a little salt and then
Slice that rodent up.

Janine
12-30-2006, 12:47 AM
Slice that rodent up
Anticipating grotesque,
Stew meat's delicious!

Virgil
12-30-2006, 12:59 AM
Stew meat's delicious
with lots of fresh rosemary.
Salt is still needed.

ktd222
12-30-2006, 01:27 AM
Salt is still needed,
just in case a wound occurs -
due to the hot stew.

toni
12-30-2006, 02:49 AM
Due to the hot stew
Hands are blistered,and callused
Sliced carrots and meat

Silv
12-30-2006, 02:56 AM
Sliced carrots and meat
Pouring piping hot gravy
Over the stewed rat

ShoutGrace
12-30-2006, 08:03 AM
Over the stewed rat
The victorious mother
Cackles with delight.

Pendragon
12-30-2006, 01:25 PM
Cackles with delight—
Tricky auld green ugly witch—
Heating up the oven!

Laindessiel
12-30-2006, 01:41 PM
Heating up the oven
'Til your gloves burn up the turk.
Rub it with spices.

Whifflingpin
12-30-2006, 05:51 PM
Rub it with spices
Soak it in natron and myrrh
Bind and entomb it.

B-Mental
12-30-2006, 06:37 PM
Bind and entomb it
decorate it with a sock
hope wart goes away

Virgil
12-30-2006, 07:38 PM
Cackles with delight—
Tricky auld green ugly witch—
Heating up the oven!

Hey that's a great one Pen!! One of the best.


Hope wart goes away
with new super duper cream.
Witchy woman not.

Petrarch's Love
12-30-2006, 07:41 PM
Witchy woman not
Bad as she's made out to be
Curse misunderstood.

zanna
12-30-2006, 08:37 PM
Curse, misunderstood
I never can articulate
myself! Like right now!

Janine
12-30-2006, 11:23 PM
Myself! Like right now!
Befuddled as usual -
Which way to go next?

Virgil
12-30-2006, 11:27 PM
Which way do we go next?
The new year is like a sea,
Vast, wide, and breezy.

Janine
12-31-2006, 01:56 AM
and so it is indeed.... and a new adventure for all of us!

Vast, wide, and breezy,
Oceans beckoned me, foam capped waves
Swept my soul to sea.

ktd222
12-31-2006, 02:07 AM
Swept my soul to sea...
into the measured depths, ah,
seamless seasons be...

P. M. Manmohan
12-31-2006, 07:28 AM
Seamless seasons be
The end of black cold night sky
O my sweet little thing

P. M. Manmohan
12-31-2006, 07:36 AM
O my sweet little thing,
how big have you grown ! Stop ! Then,
there's no one on your side !!!..

Pendragon
12-31-2006, 09:59 AM
No one on your side?
You and me take on them all!
Can’t take us both! http://www.websmileys.com/sm/fam/fam05.gif

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 10:24 PM
Can't take us both
Lovely sadness, hid'ous joy
Which one do you want?

((I've been away too long again...:bawling:))

zanna
12-31-2006, 10:47 PM
Which one do you want?
I thought you liked me better
than that! Fine, I'm gone.

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 10:59 PM
...Than that? Fine, I'm gone--
The orange and turkey will
Take me to the bar....

((This is a drunkard on New Year's, supposedly.... not really supposed to make sense....))

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:09 PM
Take me to the bar . . .
and bring on the buttermilk!
I can't stand much else. :)

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:14 PM
I can't stand much else
The carolers kicked my door
Sister sings off key

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:20 PM
Sister sings off key
Where's the cotton when you need
it . . . ah, much better.

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:22 PM
...It, ah, much better.
Let's blow this popsicle stand!
The turkey will drive...

((Still drunkards....wait, what was that buttermilk thing about???:confused:))

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:25 PM
The turkey will drive
you crazy, man! Don't listen
to him, he is foul. (fowl)

The buttermilk thing comes from the old Dukes of Hazzard show . . . Enos would never drink, so he always asked Daisy for a frosted mug of buttermilk. :)

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:29 PM
To him, he is foul
But to me he is wondrous
How can he be crude?

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:31 PM
How can he be crude?
What happened to Prince Charming?
I thought I knew him.

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:32 PM
I thought I knew him
Unnoticed the limbs lopped off
Bloody slipper fits

((Old Cinderella, if you don't get the reference...))

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:37 PM
Bloody slipper fits
finally! Thought I'd never
get it on again.

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:41 PM
Get it on again
Don't know what you were thinking
Gonna make it fit...

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:45 PM
Gonna make it fit
if it takes all day and night!
but, it's only 'ku.

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:48 PM
But it's only ku
It need not be perfect, dear
One line could be six!!!!

zanna
12-31-2006, 11:51 PM
One line could be six,
she says. Sheese, what is this world
coming to? Don't know . . .

Misscaroline
12-31-2006, 11:58 PM
Coming to? Don't know....
Perhaps ask for directions
Orange is sober

((I seem to like these drunkards...))

Janine
01-01-2007, 02:55 AM
Orange is sober,
The sunset and "Horizon -
Lily" in closing.

Janine
01-01-2007, 02:58 AM
Lily in closing
Makes gentle music fragile
To impending night.

Janine
01-01-2007, 03:01 AM
To impending night,
Foam clouds hide in silk gray mist,
Fog moistens my breasts.

Janine
01-01-2007, 03:07 AM
Fog moistens my breasts,
Drops refect rosey petals,
Night sweetens our love.

Janine
01-01-2007, 03:11 AM
Night sweetens our love;
Tomorrow hope may recall
Promises we've made.

Janine
01-01-2007, 03:17 AM
Promises we've made
May be as paper, consumed,
Burnt, inks melted, ash.

Janine
01-01-2007, 03:20 AM
Burnt, inks melted, ash -
All dreams comsumed in nothing,
My hopes, scattered wind!

ShoutGrace
01-01-2007, 04:19 AM
My hopes, scattered wind!
What I thought I'd try to be
Laughing in my face.

zanna
01-01-2007, 05:27 AM
Laughing in my face
they told of my worst moment
you weren't s'posta hear.

Whifflingpin
01-01-2007, 07:13 AM
You weren't s'ppos'd ta hear
Those words of admiration.
Don't get big-headed.

Pendragon
01-01-2007, 10:09 AM
Don't get big-headed—
Everyone gets lucky sometime—
Think you’re special?

RobinHood3000
01-01-2007, 10:20 AM
Think you're special?
You have no idea, do you?
My one and only. :blush:

Whifflingpin
01-01-2007, 10:26 AM
My one and only
hairbrush lies on that brown book.
Why should I need more?

brainstrain
01-01-2007, 02:12 PM
Why should I need more?
'Cause I never had enough
Learn to be frugal

...uh oh. I can't quite remember what frugal means. Please someone tell me if I'm using it incorrectly =D

Il Penseroso
01-01-2007, 02:20 PM
A polite way of saying cheap. Or thrifty.


Learn to be frugal,
eat sawdust and claw garbage
to survive today.

brainstrain
01-01-2007, 02:26 PM
Oh, not exactly what I was going for. But it works ^_^

To survive today
I must look to tomorrow,
and never forget

Pensive
01-01-2007, 03:44 PM
And never forget
The way she giggled at you
When you lost the match

Whifflingpin
01-01-2007, 05:57 PM
When you lost the match
You could not light the oven.
No fish for supper.

Riesa
01-01-2007, 11:10 PM
No fish for supper
Hawaiian sling was stolen
by angry mermaids.

brainstrain
01-02-2007, 01:58 AM
by angry mermaids
by a calm and tranquil sea
I sit happily

brainstrain
01-02-2007, 02:00 AM
I sit happily
for once in this forlorn life,
peace belongs to me

Pensive
01-02-2007, 05:43 AM
Peace belongs to me
They can not play with weapons
Weapons lay astray!

Whifflingpin
01-02-2007, 09:57 AM
Weapons lay astray?
That's a court martial offence!
Lock him up at once.

Il Penseroso
01-02-2007, 01:23 PM
Lock him up at once,
morbid stones thrown in streetways
mark the man unfit.

Pendragon
01-02-2007, 02:48 PM
Mark the man unfit
Who would trade love for duty—
And mark him absent… http://smilies.vidahost.com/otn/love/kotc.gif

Whifflingpin
01-02-2007, 05:21 PM
And mark him absent,
Erase his name from all scrolls,
Let him not have lived.

Misscaroline
01-02-2007, 05:25 PM
Let him not have lived.
I cannot tolerate your
Existence. Be gone!

Whifflingpin
01-02-2007, 05:27 PM
Existence begone!
Come forth the dark and empty
spaces of my soul.

Misscaroline
01-02-2007, 05:39 PM
Spaces of my soul
Fill with the radiant light
Beloved sun beams

gotta go, loves!!! :bawling:

Janine
01-02-2007, 07:37 PM
Very pretty Missc!

Beloved sun beams,
Upon my welcome skin, quenching
My quest for the light.

Whifflingpin
01-02-2007, 08:11 PM
My quest for the light;
Good thought, good word, good action,
spake Zarathustra

Pendragon
01-02-2007, 08:52 PM
Spake Zarathustra
Friedrich Nietzsche’s handwork—
Philosophy rules!

Janine
01-02-2007, 09:38 PM
Philosophy rules
The universe of like minds;
Mine hungers for more.

Pendragon
01-03-2007, 10:22 AM
Mine hungers for more—
More of your love freely given—
To warm me at night… http://smilies.vidahost.com/otn/love/malelovies.gif

Whifflingpin
01-03-2007, 10:56 AM
To warm me at night
Hot milk, an egg and sherry,
a well spiced posset.

Arania
01-03-2007, 11:05 PM
A well spiced posset
Is limp on my tabletop
I can only look.

dramasnot6
01-03-2007, 11:53 PM
I can only look
Forever fogging the glass
Reading silent lips

B-Mental
01-04-2007, 12:32 AM
Reading silent lips
knowledge attenuated
On a foggy eve

Janine
01-04-2007, 01:17 AM
On a foggy eve,
We find solace in shadows;
Spirit trees stand still.

Janine
01-04-2007, 01:26 AM
Spirit trees stand still...
Mossy wood pale green with mist,
Drops that mirror night.

amuse
01-04-2007, 01:52 AM
drops that mirror knight
heroes despair as bad luck
vies with maid's rescue



*apologies for tweaking the alliteration ;)

Janine
01-04-2007, 01:57 AM
very nice amuse!

Vies with maid's rescue,
Handsome warrior, noble cause
Tharted by evil.

zanna
01-04-2007, 02:22 AM
th'arted by evil,
good causes struggle to live,
but there is still hope.

Il Penseroso
01-04-2007, 02:29 AM
But there is still hope,
time for the ragged red breast
to claim salvation.

Whifflingpin
01-04-2007, 08:18 AM
To claim salvation
All you have to do is die
In the one true faith.

Pendragon
01-04-2007, 09:56 AM
In the one true faith—
Why do then people argue,
Over who is right?

Pensive
01-04-2007, 10:11 AM
Over who is right
There is a very big fight
They all are quite wrong

Laindessiel
01-04-2007, 12:28 PM
They are all quite wrong
With calamities spreading
Why don't we all care?

Whifflingpin
01-04-2007, 06:29 PM
Why don't we all care?
Who then would we all care for?
Some are receivers.

Pendragon
01-04-2007, 11:35 PM
Some are receivers—
Some are more like broadcasters—
Makes static mostly… :(

B-Mental
01-05-2007, 12:17 AM
Makes static mostly
Broken dials spinning freely
random solid gold

zanna
01-05-2007, 12:53 AM
random solid gold
everywhere - it must have
been Midas' touch.

Pendragon
01-05-2007, 10:21 AM
been Midas' touch,
more carefully bestowed—
good might come of it

Janine
01-05-2007, 08:34 PM
Good might come of it,
If we take the fault, turn it
To our advantage.

Janine
01-05-2007, 10:35 PM
To our advantage,
We seek wisdom from great books;
Time for refection.

Janine
01-05-2007, 11:22 PM
Time for refection.
To know who we've been before,
Contemplate past lives.

Janine
01-06-2007, 02:06 AM
Contemplate past lives;
Reincarnate eyes look back
To endless vistas.

Janine
01-06-2007, 02:34 AM
To endless vistas
Stars rest in bright unison,
Two moons slowly rise.

Janine
01-06-2007, 03:32 AM
Two moons slowly rise
Above strange remote planets;
Life questionable?

ktd222
01-06-2007, 04:23 AM
Life questionable?
"Yes, only on satellites,
for ice prevents life."

Whifflingpin
01-06-2007, 07:27 AM
For ice prevents life;
Yet without ice seas dry up
Ice enables life.

alhara
01-06-2007, 07:41 AM
burn the rage away
letters are illuminated
paper curls smiling

Pendragon
01-06-2007, 09:56 AM
paper curls smiling,
painted dimples showing now—
the new doll bows low…

Pendragon
01-06-2007, 09:58 AM
The new doll bows low,
Offers crumpets on tray—
One lump or two, dear?

Pendragon
01-06-2007, 10:00 AM
“One lump or two, dear?”
Said Punch to partner Judy—
Stick raised to strike!

ktd222
01-06-2007, 10:29 AM
Stick raised to strike!
Then Judy phoned the police,
knowing Punch was one.

brainstrain
01-06-2007, 10:36 PM
Alhara ignored Whifflingpin, so I'm restarting the chain properly ^_^

Ice enables life
Fire forever melts the ice
does fire prevent life?

Janine
01-07-2007, 03:42 AM
Does fire prevent life?
Deep forests of lush undergrowth
Hide gems of fresh seed.

Whifflingpin
01-07-2007, 09:23 AM
Hide gems of fresh seed
In the cornfields of your mind
Rich harvests later.

Pendragon
01-07-2007, 11:02 AM
“Rich harvests later!”
Was Jack Sparrow’s promise—
Dodging Davey Jones…

(Apologies Wiff for not noticing the break in the chain!)

Janine
01-07-2007, 05:07 PM
Pen, what do you mean by "the break in the chain"?

Dodging Davey Jones…
Pirate arms throw wild punches,
Meanwhile rebel flees!

Whifflingpin
01-07-2007, 05:31 PM
Meanwhile rebel flees!
But his red shirt and black plume,
They will rise again!

Janine
01-07-2007, 11:10 PM
They will rise again
From the smoldering ashes;
Saplings bud and breathe.

Arania
01-08-2007, 01:01 AM
Saplings bud and breathe
The sweet air of morning dew
Blowing colored glass.

B-Mental
01-08-2007, 01:19 AM
Blowing colored glass
transported by the ocean
wades upon my shore

Janine
01-08-2007, 02:25 AM
Wades upon my shore -
Seas that echo solitude,
Footprints wet with sand.

Laindessiel
01-08-2007, 03:11 AM
Footprints wet with sand
I write my heart on his hand.
Coping with the loss.

Janine
01-08-2007, 03:21 AM
Coping with the loss,
I find a way to survive,
More than that - to live!

Janine
01-08-2007, 03:23 AM
Hi Lain, & unfortunately - bye - I am going to bed! It is after 2AM here and I am tired out. Hope I see you around tomorrow. I have missed you....J

Laindessiel
01-08-2007, 03:26 AM
Awww.. I have missed you too, Janine! Our Internet is still out and I'm just here at a computer cafe. I can't even access all websites. :( I hope to be back by tomorrow.

ktd222
01-08-2007, 05:03 AM
More than that - to live!
That is when gambling and I
fell madly in love

Janine
01-08-2007, 05:08 AM
Lain, I can only stay a minute to answer what you have written. Now it is 4:00Am...I have been reading, but now I was falling asleep. So glad to hear you missed me, too. It has seemed really empty and quiet on this site the past week. As for the internet services, I had the same problem here the other day that you are having....strange. I had to go to my library, which has computers; thank heaven for that! I could not get my emails to function and then Lit Net stopped working for me correctly. Wonder what is going on with the net these days? Have to go to bed now for certain. Talk to you tomorrow hopefully. Hope your service is fully restored soon..... Janine

Janine
01-08-2007, 05:12 AM
Fell madly in love
with a man who couldn't return
his heart to me.

Pendragon
01-08-2007, 10:28 AM
Janie, it was between #6902 qne #6903. The next poster didn't follow Wiff's last line, and broke the chain. Brainstrain went back and fixed it. Pen.

his heart to me,
he freely said he would give—
with no strings attached

Triskele
01-08-2007, 04:53 PM
with no strings attached
we depart to that grey land
to be lost in thought

Riesa
01-08-2007, 05:55 PM
to be lost in thought
tangled in the tips of trees
like broken kite strings

brainstrain
01-08-2007, 06:13 PM
Like broken kite strings
shattered dreams fly towards the stars
searching for a home

Whifflingpin
01-08-2007, 07:57 PM
Searching for a home
Refugees lurk in hotels
Avoiding police.

Triskele
01-08-2007, 08:36 PM
avoiding police
their shifty eyed glare of hate
brings crime from shadow

Misscaroline
01-08-2007, 08:39 PM
Brings crime from shadow
I swear I didn't do it!
Flashlight in your eyes

((It's been too long....:zombie::))

Whifflingpin
01-08-2007, 08:58 PM
Flashlight in your eyes,
You thank all your supporters.
The great prize is yours

Janine
01-08-2007, 10:19 PM
The great prize is yours;
The sport was fairly played out -
This grand game of life.

Riesa
01-08-2007, 10:30 PM
this grand game of life,
manipulate rules to suit
the board being played

Triskele
01-08-2007, 11:05 PM
Brings crime from shadow
I swear I didn't do it!
Flashlight in your eyes

((It's been too long....:zombie::))

zombie? who/what is that, sorry, just curious

amuse
01-09-2007, 12:42 AM
the board being played,
splayed, tested - can it bear all
these olympians?


*i mean, i know it's a year early, but i love the divers! :)

Pendragon
01-09-2007, 09:56 AM
these Olympians—
the Gods themselves up on high—
do they care for us ?

Whifflingpin
01-09-2007, 11:04 AM
do they care for us
when they are fledged and nest-free?
What are we for then?

Janine
01-09-2007, 06:15 PM
What are we for then?
To breathe and to live, then die
Life purpose -"to be".

kilted exile
01-09-2007, 09:44 PM
Life purpose - "to be"
Though more time is spent thinking
Rather than being

Janine
01-10-2007, 12:00 AM
Rather than being
Saddened by your life's losses,
Dwell on it's blessings.

Susan Sonnen
01-10-2007, 01:00 AM
dwell on life's blessings,
they far outshine any loss!
sally forth in faith

Janine
01-10-2007, 02:13 AM
Sally forth in faith,
That tomorrow will be grand;
Gaze on new vistas!

Laindessiel
01-10-2007, 02:15 AM
Lain, I can only stay a minute to answer what you have written. Now it is 4:00Am...I have been reading, but now I was falling asleep. So glad to hear you missed me, too. It has seemed really empty and quiet on this site the past week. As for the internet services, I had the same problem here the other day that you are having....strange. I had to go to my library, which has computers; thank heaven for that! I could not get my emails to function and then Lit Net stopped working for me correctly. Wonder what is going on with the net these days? Have to go to bed now for certain. Talk to you tomorrow hopefully. Hope your service is fully restored soon..... Janine

Oh, where do you live? In Asia, some telecom companies are still trying to restore the Internet to working perfectly (the Taiwan quake is the cause.) As for us, Internet cafes are saviours. ;) And thankfully, we can have access to LitNet.

Laindessiel
01-10-2007, 02:15 AM
Gaze on new vistas
Sitting, staring on the sill
Watching the birds fly...

Pendragon
01-10-2007, 09:58 AM
Watching the birds fly—
Light wings lift into the sky,
Riding on the breeze…

Weeping Willow
01-10-2007, 12:05 PM
Riding on the breeze
As I escaped from Chile
To Argentina

SnámhDáÉan
01-10-2007, 01:54 PM
To Argentina!
First class seats are far too hard.
Give me poverty!

JackShea
01-10-2007, 02:15 PM
[QUOTE=SnámhDáÉan;274812]
So hard to follow
Is there anything at all
Dearest Finnegan?

I like your style which I just started reading as it makes me think. I look forward to reading more. As to the above, and everyone sees something diffeent, but what I see, and perhaps I am wrong, is a reference to Joyce and Finnegan's Wake?

Best,

Jack

ktd222
01-10-2007, 11:26 PM
Give me poverty!
Or give me some food because
I'm without a job.

Virgil
01-11-2007, 12:01 AM
I'm without a job
So I have to hold up banks.
Pistol in pocket.

Riesa
01-11-2007, 12:09 AM
Pistol in pocket
won't make them give you money
Point it, silly.

:p

:wave:

ktd222
01-11-2007, 12:10 AM
Pistol in pocket.
Too bad it's a toy pistol.
Verdict: five to life.

ktd222
01-11-2007, 12:16 AM
Point it, silly.
I do not think wolves have thumbs.
Better yet, growl loud

Virgil
01-11-2007, 12:20 AM
Better yet, growl loud
to scare away the rif raff.
Show teeth if afraid.

Hey ktd, I replied to your comment in my blog.

ktd222
01-11-2007, 12:30 AM
Show teeth if afraid.
Show your baby picture if
embarassed. Then go...!

Yes, it's always good to get into the mind and hear a poets thoughts
Darn excellent poem by the way...like you didn't already know.

Riesa
01-11-2007, 12:37 AM
embarassed? then go
watch old home videos of
highschool gymnastics.

Janine
01-11-2007, 02:43 AM
Highschool gymnastics,
Quickly made it up the rope,
Starring down, fear grips.

dramasnot6
01-11-2007, 02:56 AM
Staring down, fear grips
jagged rocks. Handle of a
natural dagger

ktd222
01-11-2007, 03:18 AM
natural dagger
sounds so quaint, and yet is a
sign so ominous

Pendragon
01-11-2007, 10:30 AM
sign so ominous
footprints in new fallen snow—
a cougar is around…

B-Mental
01-11-2007, 05:31 PM
a cougar is around
warn your children and elders
everyone wary

Susan Sonnen
01-11-2007, 07:06 PM
everyone wary
as Earth loses her footing,
but no one assists

ktd222
01-11-2007, 09:14 PM
but no one assists
because Earth doesn't have feet.
So I wait for Mike...

B-Mental
01-11-2007, 09:39 PM
So I wait for Mike
The 'I wanna be like Mike'
Rich, handsome, retired

ktd222
01-11-2007, 11:39 PM
Rich, handsome, retired -
is the description for those
to who I envy.

amuse
01-12-2007, 01:18 AM
***love your location, Pendragon!***


to whom i envy:
sod off! to those i adore:
...you gladden my life.

Janine
01-12-2007, 02:04 AM
...you gladden my life;
the essense of your being
rejoices in my soul.

amuse
01-12-2007, 05:50 AM
rejoices in my soul
where dark, gruesome voices once
languidly hovered

Whifflingpin
01-12-2007, 08:24 AM
languidly hovered
dragonflies over water
verdant with lilies.

Pendragon
01-12-2007, 09:42 AM
verdant with lilies,
the ancient pond still lovely—
great blue heron rules…


http://www.naturaltapestries.com/Michaelgallery/animals/images/Great%20Blue%20Heron.jpg

ktd222
01-12-2007, 09:53 AM
quite a majestic looking heron, Pen.

great blue heron rules…
but not as much as great blue
whales rule...blup, blup, blup

http://www.geocities.com/RainForest/Canopy/8484/bluewhale6.jpg

Whifflingpin
01-12-2007, 02:26 PM
"whales rule blup, blup, blup"
what kind of a line is that?
Don't you just love them?

brainstrain
01-12-2007, 05:15 PM
Don't you just love them?
Loving, Caring, Meddling, But
Annoying...Parents

Janine
01-12-2007, 09:24 PM
Annoying...parents
And time never changes that,
Must try our patience!

ktd222
01-13-2007, 12:53 AM
Must try our patience
by nagging about smoking
pot in the bedroom.

B-Mental
01-13-2007, 12:57 AM
pot in the bedroom
like sleeping in a snowbank
unwise to repeat

ktd222
01-13-2007, 01:43 AM
unwise to repeat;
but yet, rinse and repeat is
such fun excercise.

Janine
01-13-2007, 02:42 AM
Such fun excercise,
Skating on a glassy pond-
Ice streaks paint motion.

ktd222
01-13-2007, 06:23 AM
Ice streaks paint motion
to where your tracks dissappear
below the thin ice

Pendragon
01-13-2007, 10:12 AM
below the thin ice,
captured like fish under glass—
running out of air…

ktd222
01-13-2007, 10:44 AM
running out of air…
need to find...an..air pocket....
soon...soo...soo...so....s...

Anon22
01-13-2007, 01:54 PM
soon...soo...soo...so....s...
I will return again once
more... later you guys

Pendragon
01-14-2007, 11:01 AM
more... later you guys—
I gotta go workin’ on my
latest rap album…

http://www.websmileys.com/sm/music/musik14.gif

Susan Sonnen
01-14-2007, 11:45 AM
latest rap album
leaves her hurt, unsatisfied.
she seeks true beauty.

Pensive
01-14-2007, 01:58 PM
She seeks true beauty
Not only in red-ish roses
In white ones as well

Susan Sonnen
01-14-2007, 04:15 PM
in white ones, as well,
these roses are now offered -
send love's purity

Triskele
01-14-2007, 04:16 PM
in white ones as well
purity in color lasts
only till the change

Janine
01-14-2007, 06:10 PM
Only till the change,
Of seasons in the windy
City of our dreams.

Riesa
01-14-2007, 09:05 PM
City of our dreams,
vines coil and climb misty
walls crumbling with age

Virgil
01-14-2007, 10:34 PM
Walls crumblin with age
Along the upper west side.
Lazy sh*tty life.

Janine
01-14-2007, 10:48 PM
Hi Virgil, Now that is a show stopper....gee what I can I do with this one.....

Lazy sh*tty life.
Drunk on a Saturday night,
Alone, dejected.

Virgil
01-14-2007, 11:18 PM
Hi Janine. I see you handled it.

Alone, dejected
One returns home to dinner.
Mama's meals are good.

Janine
01-14-2007, 11:47 PM
Yeah, Virg, I was going to change the vowel but nothing would work. I was thinking shotty but it is spelled shoddy...wanted to make you laugh if I changed it some.:lol:

Mama's meals are good;
Five star***** establishments rate,
But Ma serves us love!

Virgil
01-15-2007, 01:10 AM
But Ma serves us love
While swivels to the music.
Kitchen always loud.

Il Penseroso
01-15-2007, 01:10 AM
But ma serves us love,
baskets filled with softest bread
leaking faded warmth.

Il Penseroso
01-15-2007, 01:12 AM
Kitchen always loud,
reflected scenes, broken homes
leaking faded warmth.

Janine
01-15-2007, 03:38 AM
Leaking faded warmth,
Rain gutters spill summer heat;
Drizzle of days spent.

Reccura
01-15-2007, 03:46 AM
Drizzle of days are spent
when she lost him forever,
she wept and she died.

_____________________

that was the worst haiku I've ever seen

Janine
01-15-2007, 03:58 AM
She wept and she died.
Her soul, so young and fine, flung
Arrows in my heart.

Pensive
01-15-2007, 05:13 AM
Arrows in my heart
Piercing me very cruelly
I feel quite broken

Whifflingpin
01-15-2007, 06:49 AM
I feel quite broken;
amphora of life's red wine
in sherds on the sand.