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kiz_paws
04-01-2007, 12:30 AM
kiz_paws - your Haiku cracks me up - love the second line!:lol:
tee hee, glad you enjoyed as life does have its square pegs moments! :)
AdoreroDio
04-01-2007, 12:30 AM
lets all get along
or we all might be to late
to catch the early worm
kiz_paws
04-01-2007, 12:45 AM
catch the early worm
or life's moments will leave you
wishing you were there
hyperinsomnia
04-01-2007, 12:49 AM
wishing you were there
Telling her you'll ease the pain
Holding her again
Il Penseroso
04-01-2007, 01:46 AM
Holding her again
like the sun revolves the earth,
steadfast attraction.
hyperinsomnia
04-01-2007, 02:50 AM
Steadfast attraction
Is far more physical than
something you can trust
kandaurov
04-01-2007, 05:48 AM
Something you can trust
Crumbling into heaps of dust
Blown by a fierce gust
hyperinsomnia
04-01-2007, 05:51 AM
blown by a fierce gust
Into some far off place
all of my beliefs
Pendragon
04-01-2007, 09:37 AM
all of my beliefs,
I have steadfastly held true—
now I must question…
now I must question—
could I be the one mistaken—
am I really certain?
am I really certain
enough to stake forever on
one roll of the dice?
one roll of the dice—
you either win or else you lose—
momentous options—
momentous options—
life-altering decisions—
think before you choose…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/decisions.jpg
vin1391
04-01-2007, 10:36 AM
think before you choose
All about your job so tight
Remember yourself.
ktd222
04-01-2007, 12:28 PM
Remember yourself
when giving clothes to Goodwill -
take some in return
Janine
04-01-2007, 06:00 PM
take some in return?
I always do that, so funny,
but hopefully give more!
amuse
04-01-2007, 11:49 PM
but hopefully: give more
love that ye may live richly,
as do golden hearts.
Janine
04-02-2007, 12:03 AM
as do golden hearts,
burn with illumination,
soul's fire glows for you.
vin1391
04-02-2007, 04:48 AM
Souls fire glows for you
Among the heart pure and true,
Within the beauty you.
B-Mental
04-02-2007, 05:50 AM
within the beauty
photons transmit endlessly
pheremones of love
Pendragon
04-02-2007, 08:56 AM
pheromones of love,
from Aphrodite’s nighty—
seduced other gods…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/inlove.gif
kandaurov
04-02-2007, 09:57 AM
seduced other gods
by being one: the final
emancipation
kiz_paws
04-02-2007, 11:59 AM
Emancipation
all the ties have been severed
the freed heart now soars...
kandaurov
04-02-2007, 01:39 PM
The freed heart now soars
All the walls have become doors
No more locks to force
quasimodo1
04-02-2007, 02:40 PM
I see the red door and want to paint it black remotely such are my skills at haiku
Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 02:52 PM
My Monday is full
of stress, sadness, and worry;
I hope this week shines.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 02:52 PM
My Monday is full
of stress, sadness, and worry;
I hope this week shines.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 02:53 PM
My apologies
about the double posting;
what a hard Monday.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 03:00 PM
Quasimodo1,
why paint the red door black? Please
give Haiku a chance.
:thumbs_up
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Janine
04-02-2007, 03:02 PM
My Monday is full
of stress, sadness, and worry;
I hope this week shines.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Well, I am confused more than you - where did you get the line "My Monday is full" Uncle Lar?
Sorry, but I am starting from kandaurov's last line:
No more locks to force,
The red doors have been opened,
The emperor is now free!
kandaurov
04-02-2007, 03:40 PM
The Emperor is now free!
Let there be a jubilee
Full of dance and glee
Janine
04-02-2007, 04:04 PM
Yeah, but it did not follow correctly with the last line. Someone started a whole new line. Confusing....
Full of dance and glee,
Exoticly rich with scent,
Swirling dizzy skirts!
Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 04:09 PM
May the Emperor
rule with wisdom, charity,
and prosperity.
Sorry about the confusion.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Uncle Lar
04-02-2007, 04:15 PM
Swirling dizzy skirts
to celebrate the coming
of the Emperor.
Janine
04-02-2007, 05:09 PM
Of the Emperor,
I speak highly with respect,
Most times in great awe.
ejarg7
04-03-2007, 01:36 AM
Most times in great awe
Mesmerized, filled with wonder
Devoid of reason
Bebbin
04-03-2007, 02:23 AM
Devoid of reason
Life is filled with mysteries
They fall in darkness
B-Mental
04-03-2007, 02:37 AM
They fall in darkness
seedlings purchase timorous
cast upon the wind
Reccura
04-03-2007, 03:12 AM
Cast upon the wind
I go to a barren land
and I free myself
B-Mental
04-03-2007, 03:55 AM
and I free myself
from bedsheets and blankets grasp
arise, the day begins
Reccura
04-03-2007, 04:04 AM
Arise, the day begins (isn't that six syllables?)
I tear myself from freedom
I enjoy choco (late)
____________________
I'm thinking oif Goya right now.
Iza has to go right now!!!!! Goodbye!!!!!
B-Mental
04-03-2007, 04:08 AM
I enjoy choco
mystical sweet confection
treasured by many
Ciao Iza
ejarg7
04-03-2007, 04:36 AM
Treasured by many
across seven continents
Ahh, the addiction!
kandaurov
04-03-2007, 05:06 AM
Ahh, the addiction!
It's like a big fat cockroach
It won't, just won't die!
Virgil
04-03-2007, 07:07 AM
It won', just won't die,
This dream of playing guitar.
Strumming my life down.
vin1391
04-03-2007, 09:02 AM
Strumming my life down
Eating out of my food stock
Await visitor
Pendragon
04-03-2007, 09:22 AM
Await visitor—
Will you bring me new flowers?
Old withered away—
Old withered away—
Cannot recall when they died,
Folded into dust…
Folded into dust…
Always ashes to ashes,
No mortal remains…
No Mortal remains
For long by my tombstone—
Set down flowers—flee
Set down flowers—flee,
But the circle continues—
The Reaper comes soon…
Others will leave you
Tiny quiet remembrances
And then flee as well…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/grave2_full.jpg
Uncle Lar
04-03-2007, 10:22 AM
And then flee as well
to blissful Harmony in
the passing of Time.
kandaurov
04-03-2007, 12:16 PM
The passing of Time
Passing time and time again
Vile Eternity
AdoreroDio
04-03-2007, 12:27 PM
Vile Eternity
Scathing hot nothingness around
Surrounds me, kills me
ejarg7
04-03-2007, 08:51 PM
Surrounds me, kills me
and brings me back from the dead
again and again
Janine
04-03-2007, 09:45 PM
Again and again,
I hear your lost voice echo
Within my numb heart.
B-Mental
04-03-2007, 11:34 PM
within my numb heart
reconciled to solitude
echoes lost lovers
ktd222
04-04-2007, 12:04 AM
echoes lost lovers
against the darkened backdrop
where music crackles
Janine
04-04-2007, 01:18 AM
where music crackles,
hateful notes ring in the air,
and send me reeling.
Bluemauvey
04-04-2007, 05:36 AM
And send me reeling
So I untangle, pondside
The surface tension
Isagel
04-04-2007, 08:57 AM
The surface tension
a mirror in my teacup
breaks by a caress.
Bluemauvey
04-04-2007, 09:10 AM
Breaks by a caress
The glass heart and jealous lie
Of winter's embrace
megan_m
04-04-2007, 09:15 AM
burn and rage away
like the fat man that you are
do you understand
Adolescent09
04-04-2007, 09:33 AM
do you understand
that pain never comes and stays?
do you understand
that love never goes away?
do you understand
our love will bere here always?
do you understand
that warm loathe converts to love?
and your hate for me
will never always remain,
even as you breath...
Uncle Lar
04-04-2007, 09:48 AM
Even as you breathe,
life goes on, with or without
you; so don't worry.
Bluemauvey
04-04-2007, 10:15 AM
burn and rage away
like the fat man that you are
do you understand
I know a laugh is never the required answer but...:lol:
Bluemauvey
04-04-2007, 10:17 AM
You? So, don't worry
In time you will be others
Man of the people
Pendragon
04-04-2007, 10:28 AM
Man of the People,
By the People Elected;
For the People Serve...
Bluemauvey
04-04-2007, 10:47 AM
For the people serve
Hot dogs, burgers and French fries
For the king, lark's tongues
kandaurov
04-04-2007, 11:18 AM
For the king, larks' tongues
For the queen, elephants' lungs
And milk for their youngs
[strangest, most bizarre piece of writing I have ever produced]
kiz_paws
04-04-2007, 12:43 PM
And milk for their young
their helpless cries are answered
a united love
AdoreroDio
04-04-2007, 01:05 PM
a united love
That can never be broken
fills our longing hearts
Uncle Lar
04-04-2007, 01:52 PM
Fills our longing hearts
with Joy, Peace, and Gladness now
and forevermore.
kandaurov
04-04-2007, 01:57 PM
and forevermore-
seems like an eternity?
it's just a lifetime.
aprildutcher
04-04-2007, 02:11 PM
it's just a lifetime.
to break our lonely habits
to be alone now
Riesa
04-04-2007, 03:53 PM
to be alone now,
a honeysuckle porch with
firefly candles
ktd222
04-04-2007, 07:44 PM
firefly candles
flicker among the midnight
moon. (Do I dare try?)
Bluemauvey
04-04-2007, 07:53 PM
Moon, do I dare try
To emulate you on drum
Or on Entwhistle?
kiz_paws
04-05-2007, 12:09 AM
to be alone now,
a honeysuckle porch with
firefly candles
Nice job, Riesa, my compliments! :)
Or on Entwhistle
so nice to be a solo
in the harvest sun
AdoreroDio
04-05-2007, 01:04 AM
In the harvest sun
workers now toil endlessly
for future rewards
ktd222
04-05-2007, 03:25 AM
for future rewards
dabla do da do...do. Live
in the present tense.
Il Penseroso
04-05-2007, 04:22 AM
in the present tense
no article rearranged
to fit modern modes.
Bluemauvey
04-05-2007, 05:45 AM
To fit modern modes
The past is once more disguised
Kills fashion victims
kandaurov
04-05-2007, 06:11 AM
'to fit modern modes?'
I'm sorry, I don't know much
about music things :(
kandaurov
04-05-2007, 06:15 AM
Shoot, forgot to refresh before posting. Sorry!
Kills fashion victims
Anonymously, with guile,
With spite and a smile
hyperinsomnia
04-05-2007, 06:30 AM
With spite and a smile;
stay for a while! May I,
Destabilize you?
Bluemauvey
04-05-2007, 06:51 AM
Destablise you
Bad seahorse, you shall sleep out
On the quarter-deck
kandaurov
04-05-2007, 07:34 AM
On the quarter-deck
Of the ship that will take you
To Unconsciousness
Bluemauvey
04-05-2007, 07:42 AM
To unconciousness
Are we sent by the surgeon
Just below the pain
kandaurov
04-05-2007, 07:59 AM
Just below the pain,
Lies Truth; beyond the threshold
All the stars seem few
Bluemauvey
04-05-2007, 09:02 AM
All the stars seem few
Appearance is deceptive
Lucky sky so big
Uncle Lar
04-05-2007, 09:33 AM
Lucky Sky so big,
with all its vast Beauty, Grace,
and wonderful Charm.
:thumbs_up
Pendragon
04-05-2007, 10:27 AM
and wonderful charm
he put into all his tales—
most with a moral…
most with a moral—
like The Ransom of Red Chief—
Gift of the Magi…
Gift of the Magi…
Roads of Destiny—wonderful!
After Twenty Years…
After Twenty Years…
Adventures of Shamrock Jolnes…
The Enchanted Profile…
The Enchanted Profile…
and The Whirligig of Life…
The Last Leaf—how sad…
the last leaf, how sad!
we must now close up the book—
never forget him…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/ohenry.jpg
autolycus
04-05-2007, 10:48 AM
...never forget him
amen, all rise, open door
where to now for lunch?
B-Mental
04-05-2007, 12:04 PM
where to now for lunch?
the parkbench on riverside?
greasy spoon cafe?
Uncle Lar
04-05-2007, 01:36 PM
Greasy spoon Cafe,
with its lovely Waitresses,
so dear to my Heart.
AdoreroDio
04-05-2007, 02:26 PM
so dear to my heart
is that young child within each
which giggles out loud
Uncle Lar
04-05-2007, 04:15 PM
That which giggles out
loud can be very joyful
or so mischievous!
AdoreroDio
04-05-2007, 05:02 PM
or so mischivious
now is Dr.Forrester
when on the TV
(Lily Adams is with her friend and is pushing her mstie fandomness onto Miss Dio. Hi everyone!)
Janine
04-05-2007, 05:03 PM
So mischievous
Can be the antics of squirrels
Youthful pests frolic!
Uncle Lar - wasn't there too many syllables in last line?...I shorted by one word. I guess it depends on how you pronounce the word, not sure.
Oops too slow - will do new one to correct.
When on the TV,
People sometimes feel 'all nerves'
Cameras scare me.
Uncle Lar
04-05-2007, 05:35 PM
"Mischievous" can be
pronounced in three or in four
syllables, Janine.
Per Merriam-Webster Dictionary:
http://m-w.com/dictionary/mischievous
:thumbs_up
Janine
04-05-2007, 05:36 PM
ok, I was wondering about that - gotcha. But I was too late anyway so I wrote another one.
Uncle Lar
04-05-2007, 05:40 PM
Cameras scare me, so
I do my best to avoid
being photographed.
"Camera" can be
so well-pronounced in three or
in two syllables.
Per Merriam-Webster Dictionary:
http://m-w.com/dictionary/camera
:thumbs_up
Janine
04-05-2007, 05:54 PM
Cameras scare me, so
I do my best to avoid
being photographed.
"Camera" can be
so well-pronounced in three or
in two syllables.
Per Merriam-Webster Dictionary:
http://m-w.com/dictionary/camera
:thumbs_up
"Cameras scare me, so
I do my best to avoid
being photographed." - me too Uncle Lars!:lol:
Being photographed?
Not to my liking at all,
Can't smile naturally.
ejarg7
04-05-2007, 08:55 PM
Can't smile naturally
And I look weird in photos
Why, I do not know ...
* I don't quite like it as well :) *
Bebbin
04-06-2007, 03:02 AM
Why, I do not know...
How to make of a few things
I have a headache
I have a headache
I don't love you like I did
just like yesterday
Pensive
04-06-2007, 05:24 AM
Just like yesterday
I am sulky and unhappy
Merriment? Not our slave!
kandaurov
04-06-2007, 07:31 AM
Merriment? Not our slave!
I'm free to be stern and grave
And to misbehave!
Uncle Lar
04-06-2007, 09:39 AM
And to misbehave
with no regret, shame, or pain;
madness or genius?
kandaurov
04-06-2007, 10:43 AM
madness or genius
it all amounts to the same:
helps one to stand out
Pendragon
04-06-2007, 11:44 AM
Helps one to stand out—
Bermuda shorts and black socks—
You go—you geezer!
kandaurov
04-06-2007, 01:31 PM
You go—you geezer!
Impersonating Caesar!
Always a teaser!...
Uncle Lar
04-06-2007, 01:55 PM
Always a teaser,
rarely a huge crowd-pleaser,
the Fool walks alone.
kiz_paws
04-06-2007, 02:23 PM
the fool walks alone
the highways of life are long
you must remember
Il Penseroso
04-06-2007, 02:41 PM
you must remember,
let feet roam in dewy past,
touch last prism light.
Uncle Lar
04-06-2007, 04:13 PM
Touch last prism light,
which distorts, colors, or slants,
and make it shine bright.
-----------------------------------
Please have a very
safe and Happy Holiday
Weekend, Everyone!
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
kiz_paws
04-06-2007, 06:45 PM
and make it shine bright
a little hope becomes true
one feels so alive
---------------------------------------------------
Uncle Lar is nice
to send people his greeting
I return the warmth :)
Adolescent09
04-06-2007, 10:17 PM
--Same to you Uncle Lar :)--
one feels so alive,
when passions' breath tinges us,
and tells success' tale..
Janine
04-06-2007, 11:48 PM
And tells success' tale..
We all respect each other,
Share our secret thoughts.
:wave: Hi Adol, how have you been?
Adolescent09
04-06-2007, 11:53 PM
share our secret thoughts,
in shadows under caged bars,
but we are effaced
Hello Janine. I haven't seen/spoken to you in a while. I miss your comments :( How are you :)
Janine
04-07-2007, 12:15 AM
but we are effaced,
we hide from ourselves today;
now shameful of self.
Better now, Adol, been sick three weeks - too long.
ktd222
04-07-2007, 01:11 AM
now shameful of self,
the self blew away the day,
leaving - but a self
Janine
04-07-2007, 01:26 AM
leaving - but a self,
a self without eyes or ears,
dark to all that's "self".
Hi ktd - I hope you don't mind, I expanded on your thoughts.
ktd222
04-07-2007, 01:34 AM
not at all - it's quite wonderful
dark to all that's "self" -
an inward movement that is
like dying, once, twice
Janine
04-07-2007, 02:56 AM
Liked that last Haiku, Ktd...
like dying, once, twice
and burning down to ashes;
rise phoenix's newbirth.
Yes, we could colaborate and write a long poem about "self"
Pendragon
04-07-2007, 08:36 AM
rise phoenix's newbirth—
from ashes of the old comes new—
in a burst of flame…
B-Mental
04-07-2007, 08:56 AM
in a burst of flame
twilight blinks instantly day
scarring my vision
kandaurov
04-07-2007, 09:38 AM
scarring my vision
with absurd, perfect Beauty
low, how very low.
ktd222
04-07-2007, 02:48 PM
low, how very low
the soul goes when Love breaks the
heart in smithereens
Pendragon
04-08-2007, 09:53 AM
heart in smithereens—
you must handle very gently
a heart made of glass…
autolycus
04-08-2007, 11:53 AM
a heart made of glass
burning flame in cage of air
ten thousand beats near
=====
(has anyone noticed we're closer to 10,000 than the 10,000 thread?)
Uncle Lar
04-09-2007, 10:00 AM
Ten thousand beats near
eager anticipation
comes my heart with hope.
Pendragon
04-09-2007, 10:01 AM
ten thousand beats near—
native drums do the talking—
trespass not—taboo…
Uncle Lar
04-09-2007, 11:34 AM
Trespass not—Taboo;
many Rules are made to be
broken and rethought.
:thumbs_up
ktd222
04-09-2007, 12:11 PM
broken and rethought,
I bought the farm for pennies
and no interest
RobinHood3000
04-09-2007, 01:07 PM
...and no interest??
My bank account is defunct
ATM on fritz
Uncle Lar
04-09-2007, 03:10 PM
ATM on fritz,
I must avoid Credit Cards,
Mom and Dad, please HELP!
kiz_paws
04-09-2007, 11:36 PM
Mom and Dad, please HELP!
my bad spending has caught up
I need good advice
Note for Pen: Bravo on the tribute to O.Henry, I enjoyed it immensely and applaud your talents! :)
ktd222
04-10-2007, 01:39 AM
I need good advice
on how to become a free-
loader forever
Pendragon
04-10-2007, 09:07 AM
Thanks Paws! http://www.cosgan.de/images/midi/liebe/u030.gif
loader forever—
my mom always said I’d be—
never be anything—
never be anything—
but take a look at me now—
finally found home…
finally found home—
a place where I can belong—
writing to the world…
Uncle Lar
04-10-2007, 09:28 AM
Writing to the World
about my Happy Birthday
Today is AWESOME!
"Carpe Diem!"
Have a great Day, Everyone!
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
Pensive
04-10-2007, 12:53 PM
Today is awesome
But beware my dearest friends
Tomorrow comes too
Uncle Lar
04-10-2007, 02:41 PM
Tomorrow comes too
with the good things and bad ones;
learn, adapt, and win!
:thumbs_up
Bebbin
04-10-2007, 04:13 PM
Learn, adapt, and win!
The key to success is this
You will never fail
Uncle Lar
04-10-2007, 04:47 PM
You will never fail
if you honestly accept
yourself as you are.
:thumbs_up
Bebbin
04-10-2007, 05:18 PM
Yourself as you are
In the soul's innermost depths
Only found when lost
Uncle Lar
04-10-2007, 05:46 PM
Only found when lost
was the wayward one, after
a moment of bliss.
ktd222
04-10-2007, 07:20 PM
a moment of bliss
lasts a millisecond, though
I do not love you
Adolescent09
04-10-2007, 08:13 PM
a moment of bliss
lasts a millisecond, though
I do not love you
(I'm starting on this new style that is written in a sort of biological concept so it might not be entirely clear. I hope some of you like it.)
Though I do not love you
and widened pavement is ice,
slipping the shiftless
walkway, ground and foot,
the many knive's intrusions,
red, white and platelets
ooze the acute incision,
and rise dark-felt dreams
where the path, the wake,
the calling newly muted,
wrath's voices haulted
kiz_paws
04-11-2007, 01:32 AM
Wrath's voices halted
a flickering ember frail
and silenced the meek
I liked your new style above, Adol well done :)
And I would like to warmly wish Uncle Lar a belated birthday greeting, hope your day was ticketty-boo, as they say here. :)
ktd222
04-11-2007, 02:23 AM
and silenced the meek
Mr. M, for his deeds as
this nation's father
autolycus
04-11-2007, 05:17 AM
this nation's father
and an abandoned motherland
naked dysfunction
Uncle Lar
04-11-2007, 12:00 PM
Naked Dysfunction
can become dangerous and
contagious; please help!
Lote-Tree
04-11-2007, 12:07 PM
Ancient Space
Quarks Bump-in
Light Waves
Uncle Lar
04-11-2007, 12:10 PM
Ancient space light waves
transmute into higher and
powerful light waves.
Lote-Tree
04-11-2007, 12:24 PM
A scientist gathers up fossils
Sublime intricacy of design
Glad tidings
littlewing53
04-11-2007, 12:43 PM
glad tidings spoken
from a beautiful flower
blooming bright yellow
Lote-Tree
04-11-2007, 12:50 PM
blooming bright yellow
Sunflower kissing the sky
the joy
Pendragon
04-11-2007, 01:24 PM
the joy unfinished,
life cut short by accident—
his mother still mourns...
his mother still mourns,
at the thought of what might be
had she kept him home…
had she kept him home
the day The Reaper called—
she blames herself still…
she blames herself, still
when the thread is once broken—
your number is up…
your number is up,
no matter what choices given—
the way of all flesh…
the way of all flesh
born, live a time, then we pass—
just make your dash count
just make your dash count,
the one ‘tween the dates on stone—
always remembered….
For my wife’s cousin, Blake Dunavant, who was accidentally drowned, and for his mother, Mary…
Uncle Lar
04-11-2007, 01:49 PM
Always remembered
and never forgotten now
and forevermore.
Sorry for your loss,
Pendragon.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
ktd222
04-11-2007, 08:41 PM
and forevermore:
I've gotten a restraining
order out on you
Bebbin
04-12-2007, 12:52 AM
Order out on you
Hey, get me some chilli fries
And a diet coke
(And Pendragon, I'm sorry for your loss.)
ktd222
04-12-2007, 01:38 AM
And a diet coke
to crack the pippity pop
bang in my tummy
Pendragon
04-12-2007, 09:12 AM
Thanks Lar and Beb. It was about a year ago and I couldn't write about it at the time...
bang in my tummy,
hot jalapenos , salsa—
Vesuvius’ flames…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/HatDance.gif
Uncle Lar
04-12-2007, 02:21 PM
Vesuvius’
flames burn angrily and soar
throughout the city.
Susan Sonnen
04-12-2007, 07:05 PM
Throughout the city
prowls a hunger for new blood;
evil wears no mask.
Virgil
04-12-2007, 07:33 PM
Evil wears no mask
But it drools over young girls.
Should cover that face.
:lol: :lol:
Janine
04-12-2007, 08:07 PM
Should cover that face,
Red flames of remorse burn down;
tranform you today.
A little Lawrencian verse
The Bookinator
04-12-2007, 08:13 PM
Transform you today:
Nuclear waste is that strong...
Like my uni-eye?
Bebbin
04-12-2007, 08:19 PM
Like my uni-eye?
My one-sided vision stinks
Time to operate!
ejarg7
04-12-2007, 09:53 PM
Time to operate!
Oh, it's Friday the thirteenth
Quick, run! Run and hide!
ktd222
04-12-2007, 11:35 PM
Quick, run! Run and hide!
But not from the light! Oh No!
Nothing but the night!
Susan Sonnen
04-12-2007, 11:38 PM
Nothing but the night
feeds my soul's desire to flee;
starlight beckons me.
Reccura
04-12-2007, 11:41 PM
Starlight beckons me,
save me from another lie,
veins start to explode. (from nervousness of lying :p)
Pendragon
04-13-2007, 09:18 AM
veins start to explode,
transformation has started—
Jekyll becomes Hyde
Uncle Lar
04-13-2007, 10:54 AM
Jekyll becomes Hyde,
Clark Kent becomes Superman;
all want to transmute!
:thumbs_up
Uncle Lar
04-13-2007, 02:15 PM
All want to transmute
into something greater and
better forever.
Have a great Weekend!
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
kiz_paws
04-13-2007, 07:31 PM
Better forever
forgiveness heals my regrets
harmony prevails
Dear Pendragon: Your poem was a lovely tribute, I was sorry to read of your loss.
Susan Sonnen
04-13-2007, 09:25 PM
Harmony prevails
when Winter exits the scene;
birds sing this new Spring!
Bebbin
04-13-2007, 11:45 PM
Birds sing this new Spring!
Alas, love is in the air
Oh, but not for me
ktd222
04-14-2007, 12:43 AM
Oh, but not for me,
with my head mutated so
it looks like a horse
Il Penseroso
04-14-2007, 12:57 AM
It looks like a horse
the shifting gas and bursting
lightbulbs in the sky.
ktd222
04-14-2007, 01:12 AM
lightbulbs in the sky
rides down into my eyes like
some horrific past
Il Penseroso
04-14-2007, 01:47 AM
Some horrific past
blots the present as fountains
spread a mushroom cap
ktd222
04-14-2007, 03:32 AM
spread a mushroom cap,
which suffocates anyone's
will to spread themselves
Bebbin
04-14-2007, 03:52 AM
Will to spread themselves
Wings that dream, soar and triumph
It's humanity
Pendragon
04-14-2007, 07:49 AM
Thanks, Paws! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/MobyLove.gif
It's humanity—
Reach for the stars overlooking
Simple beauty here…
Simple beauty here,
Elegance of flowers,
Natural wonders
Natural wonders—
Animal diversity,
So hard to explain…
So hard to explain
But we keep on trying anyway
Impossible dream…
Impossible dream—
Or maybe someday questions
Finally answered…
Finally answered
So all may believe and know
What happened and when…
Susan Sonnen
04-14-2007, 09:47 PM
What happened and when
remain unanswered; faces
seek truth in the stars.
Bebbin
04-14-2007, 10:16 PM
Seek truth in the stars
Young traveler, what's it be?
Hurry, and depart!
amuse
04-15-2007, 04:05 AM
Hurry and depart,
ne'er abating flames! I
wanna make a wish!
http://www.fotosearch.com/thumb/PHC/PHC001/200392676-001.jpg
Pendragon
04-15-2007, 09:23 AM
wanna make a wish.
wish you all were somewhere near,
closer to my heart...
kiz_paws
04-15-2007, 11:28 AM
Closer to my heart
all my dreams of yesteryear
closing in on me
Janine
04-15-2007, 05:32 PM
Nice H Kiz,
Closing in on me;
Walls, persons screaming loudly;
Nightmare of our times.
Bebbin
04-15-2007, 06:33 PM
Nightmare of our times
Overwhelms me like darkness
Close my eyes and breathe
hyperinsomnia
04-15-2007, 09:59 PM
close my eyes and breathe
I can still recall your scent
and I still believe
ktd222
04-16-2007, 02:50 AM
and I still believe
the musk reminds you of me,
or are you senseless?
Bebbin
04-16-2007, 03:32 AM
Or are you senseless?
Have you a thought of what could
And could never be?
atiguhya padma
04-16-2007, 07:21 AM
And could never be?
Always becoming, moulding,
Loved moving away
Uncle Lar
04-16-2007, 09:50 AM
Loved moving away
at the sound of your Voice, so
bittersweet and calm.
kiz_paws
04-16-2007, 02:14 PM
Bittersweet and calm
t'is the story of my life
I have few regrets
Thanks, Janine! ;)
Uncle Lar
04-16-2007, 02:49 PM
I have few regrets,
yet life comes with challenges;
may I choose wisely!
B-Mental
04-16-2007, 03:17 PM
may I choose wisely
the pathway of destiny
unfolds before me
Uncle Lar
04-16-2007, 03:49 PM
Unfolds before me,
like a Lotus in bloom, the
Answer to Questions.
zanna
04-16-2007, 09:01 PM
Answer to Questions
found in unlikely places:
ask into the wind.
kiz_paws
04-16-2007, 10:49 PM
Ask into the wind
and ye shall find the answers
Though thought provoking
:wave: Hi Uncle Lar!
ktd222
04-17-2007, 01:39 AM
Though thought provoking,
no, no, more like brain numbing
wishes from the wind
Janine
04-17-2007, 02:07 AM
wishes from the wind,
stardrops and moonsnow, drifting
magically on velvet dreams.
*something different - I think I made up a few new words.
quizzical
04-17-2007, 02:43 AM
magically, on velvet dreams
is the one place we may meet.
for now, solitude.
For now, solitude.
awake at the wreckage of
your dreams at sunset
Welcome around, quizzical :wave:
quizzical
04-17-2007, 03:07 AM
your dreams at sunset,
caramelized fantasy,
tis sweet illusion.
hyperinsomnia
04-17-2007, 03:11 AM
'tis sweet illusion
That siezes me when it's dark
Nobody can see
Hi Quizzical :)
quizzical
04-17-2007, 03:19 AM
nobody can see
that which they always yearn for.
unending desire.
Unending desire
to see the burn of your eyes
that once poured black hate
quizzical
04-17-2007, 03:48 AM
that once poured black hate.
now, reconciliation
renews harmony.
Pendragon
04-17-2007, 08:44 AM
renews harmony—
retunes old guitar anew—
pleasant melody…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/waiving_dragon.gif
Hiya, Quiz-Kid!
Uncle Lar
04-17-2007, 09:49 AM
Pleasant melody
with divine harmony makes
beautiful music!
Pensive
04-17-2007, 10:15 AM
Beautiful music
You hardly listen in days
When a war is up!
Uncle Lar
04-17-2007, 11:06 AM
When a war is up,
and it involves my Country,
I feel for Soldiers.
autolycus
04-17-2007, 12:27 PM
i feel for soldiers
where barracks stood are echoes
an army of ghosts
Uncle Lar
04-17-2007, 02:25 PM
An army of Ghosts
may be subdued through prayer
and supernal means.
littlewing53
04-17-2007, 06:53 PM
and supernal means
intangible touch to feel
with bare fingertips
quizzical
04-17-2007, 07:15 PM
with bare fingertips
he carresses her bare back.
tender affection.
littlewing53
04-17-2007, 07:30 PM
tender affection
she smiled to herself within
trusting only him
Bebbin
04-18-2007, 01:18 AM
Trusting only him
The heart away with reason
In hopes to forever
In hopes to forever,
I sing to these diamonds,
Waiting, for shadows
:alien: my muse has deserted me.
hyperinsomnia
04-18-2007, 03:14 AM
in hopes to forever
forget what has been of late
put it behind her
TurkeyBLT
04-18-2007, 04:18 AM
put it behind her
the pure affection of lies
and now she is free
And now, she is free
From the chains and spiral suns,
I crawl from the night
hyperinsomnia
04-18-2007, 05:25 AM
I crawl from the night
Stranger to dark passages
Pressing in on me
Pendragon
04-18-2007, 09:06 AM
Pressing in on me
The weight of the entire world—
Or my own desires?
Or my own desires,
Trying to be all I can
Before it is time—
Before it is time,
Before I am ready, firm
Strong, out on my own
Strong, out on my own
Facing anything, everything—do
I have what it takes?
I have what it takes!
Never second-guess this man,
Firmly I will stand…
Firmly I will stand,
So if it is you and I
Against the whole world—
Against the whole world,
And all hell has broken loose—
Which side do you want?
atiguhya padma
04-18-2007, 10:33 AM
Which side do you want?
My depth, dark nocturne island?
My surface of sky?
Uncle Lar
04-18-2007, 11:49 AM
My surface of sky
is far and wide, containing
beautiful vistas!
atiguhya padma
04-19-2007, 03:52 AM
Beautiful vistas
Said the brochure. But crowds of
Trees stare back at me
Pendragon
04-19-2007, 08:43 AM
Trees stare back at me
Could one be an Ent disguised?
Middle Earth come real?
Uncle Lar
04-19-2007, 09:43 AM
Middle Earth, come real!
Awaken all with Wisdom
and Wizardry now.
Janine
04-19-2007, 05:54 PM
and Wizardry now,
Illustionist, Magician
plays his secret games.
Outlander
04-19-2007, 07:03 PM
Plays his secret games
I coughed during the lake house
Oh Dear, chewables
Pendragon
04-20-2007, 08:35 AM
Oh Dear, chewables—
Lord, I hate medications—
Stuck on them for life…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Ill.gif
Uncle Lar
04-20-2007, 10:24 AM
Stuck on them for life,
will not need them after death,
no more Prescriptions.
Susan Sonnen
04-20-2007, 08:27 PM
No more prescriptions
written for my malady;
'tis no cure for love.
Pendragon
04-21-2007, 09:24 AM
'tis no cure for love—
the madness embraces your heart,
and muddles your mind…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Cupid.gif
Weeping Willow
04-21-2007, 05:59 PM
And muddles your mind
Like a whirlpool at sea
Sucking you deep down
kiz_paws
04-21-2007, 09:40 PM
Sucking you deep down
your tainted retakes on life
oh when will you learn
quizzical
04-21-2007, 10:32 PM
oh when will you learn,
exams are but two weeks away.
Procrastination.
(i actually do have exams in less than two weeks... *sigh*)
Pendragon
04-22-2007, 09:53 AM
Procrastination,
In time has its own revenge—
Midgaurd Serpent’s Tail…
(for those not in the know, the Midgaurd Serpent grew so large it encircled the Earth (Midgaurd) and bites its own tail!)
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/world_spinning_1.gif
zanna
04-23-2007, 12:12 AM
Midgaurd Serpent's Tail -
like my cell phone snake game . . . oop,
forgot about work! :)
ejarg7
04-23-2007, 12:23 AM
Forgot about work!
but, who can blame me for that
i am but human
Whifflingpin
04-23-2007, 08:13 AM
I am but human
with, in Hopkins' words, one part
immortal diamond
Pendragon
04-23-2007, 09:00 AM
immortal diamond—
crystallized carbon shining—
once a lump of coal...
Uncle Lar
04-23-2007, 10:31 AM
Once a lump of Coal,
now a beautiful Diamond,
a Human matures.
AdoreroDio
04-23-2007, 10:50 AM
a human matures
as she opens her eyes to
the evil filled world
Uncle Lar
04-23-2007, 01:37 PM
The evil-filled world
cannot last forever; it
can become reformed.
kiz_paws
04-23-2007, 09:22 PM
Can become reformed
this heart that lives in the past
and thus can set sail
Janine
04-23-2007, 09:30 PM
and thus can set sail...
we dream, floating in soft winds,
adrift with imagery.
Hi Kiz :-)
ktd222
04-23-2007, 09:39 PM
adrift with imagery
the trapezoid cat chases
bumble bees away
kiz_paws
04-23-2007, 09:39 PM
Adrift with imagery
the soft sea sings a nice song
and puts me to sleep
Hello there, Janine! :wave:
kiz_paws
04-23-2007, 09:41 PM
Woot -- ktd222 has beat my posting, so I will reply to her nice haiku:
bumble bees away
I laugh at the strange image
that so beholds me
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