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mazHur
12-21-2007, 02:17 AM
about innocence
you needn't worry at all
sin with innocense

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 02:19 AM
Sin with innocense
checking out the forbidden
testing the water

mazHur
12-21-2007, 02:22 AM
testing the water
means you are afraid of it
be bold and splash it

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 02:27 AM
Be bold and splash it
paint was meant to be wilder
maybe ask Dali...

mazHur
12-21-2007, 02:43 AM
maybe ask Dali
or Picasso or Rembrandt
let's see colors speak

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 02:51 AM
Let's see colors speak
they thought to one another
Oh.... we've gone too far....

mazHur
12-21-2007, 02:57 AM
Oh.... we've gone too far....
the night's coming to an end
love's homework remains!

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 03:02 AM
Love's homework remains
never go to sleep angry
life is way too short

mazHur
12-21-2007, 03:05 AM
life is way too short
we are sojourners of love
lets love, love and love !

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 03:08 AM
Lets love, love and love
an accent on the lovin'
hey, thats a blues tune...

mazHur
12-21-2007, 03:23 AM
hey, thats a blues tune...
maybe but love's pink for me
pink cheeks, pink lips, wow!

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 03:24 AM
Pink cheeks, pink lips, wow!
my paint-with-numbers is fun
but let's mix it up...

mazHur
12-21-2007, 03:28 AM
but let's mix it up
before your paint-with-numbers
loses its brilliance

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 12:17 PM
Loses its brilliance
when rainbows seen with sad eyes
remember to dream

crazefest456
12-21-2007, 12:32 PM
remember to dream
how you used to dream as child
let your mind wander

Il Penseroso
12-21-2007, 01:56 PM
let your mind wander
thinking of sled rides, snowballs
thrown with a shiver.

kiz_paws
12-21-2007, 08:12 PM
Thrown with a shiver
Cupid aimed the love arrow
hoping to capture

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 12:36 AM
hoping to capture
unwavering minds of youth
failing hopelessly

symphony
12-22-2007, 02:03 AM
failing hopelessly
the spider once again tries
to climb its own web....

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 02:12 AM
to climb its own web
"the itsy bitsy spider..."
macabre fragmentation

<AH I broke the rules!!
give me a second>

macabre falsehood...


SORRY!! kiz I forfeit this poem..

kiz_paws
12-22-2007, 02:13 AM
Macabre falsehood
the high fashion industry
oh the high prices

[no probs, craze, no forfeit -- your haiku is awesome!] :)

symphony
12-22-2007, 02:31 AM
oh the high prices
everest will be ashamed
even that's been won

kiz_paws
12-22-2007, 02:34 AM
Even that's been won
a heart sewed onto a sleeve
and the rag doll sighs

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 02:49 AM
and the rag doll sighs,
forgotten, for her master
her stitches worn out

kiz_paws
12-22-2007, 03:13 AM
Her stitches worn out
as someone loved her that much
it was well worth it

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 03:37 AM
it was well worth it
staying up so late, for her
pleasant gratitude

kiz_paws
12-22-2007, 03:39 AM
Pleasant gratitude
the quiet company of
a beloved pet dog

mazHur
12-22-2007, 04:14 AM
a beloved pet dog
of a beloved is as
beloved as she!

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 05:22 AM
beloved as she
time speaks to me (in slumber)
ticking to a dirge

mazHur
12-22-2007, 05:37 AM
ticking to a dirge
the atmosphere became sad
all poesy was gone!

Oniw17
12-22-2007, 05:45 AM
all poesy was gone
the rhythm was beyond lost
thus did come the end

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 05:46 AM
All poesy gone
when reborn to a phoenix
full of stark truth, fearless

woops(minor edit :)):
thus did come the end
when reborn to a phoenix
full of stark truth, fearless

mazHur
12-22-2007, 05:51 AM
full of stark truth, fearless
Joan of Arc died on the stake
what a saintly death !

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 05:54 AM
what a saintly death!
None shall remember valor,
only her demise

symphony
12-22-2007, 07:54 AM
only her demise
presaged the birth of new worlds
foreshadowed by war...

Wyoecho
12-22-2007, 10:50 AM
foreshadowed by war
not wanting to face the end
all truth was destroyed

mazHur
12-22-2007, 11:09 AM
all truth was destroyed
when you applied reason
love and faith vanished

kiz_paws
12-22-2007, 01:30 PM
love and faith vanished
with the unfaithful lover
cannot count the loss

crazefest456
12-22-2007, 01:37 PM
cannot count the loss
of those beautiful minds, died
of unsaintly wars

TheFifthElement
12-22-2007, 02:56 PM
of unsaintly wars
we are all victims, sorry
though we can't say why.

kiz_paws
12-22-2007, 03:35 PM
though we can't say why
we are all linked together
in our life somehow

TheFifthElement
12-22-2007, 03:48 PM
in our life somehow
we must join the dangling ends
to make a circle

mazHur
12-22-2007, 03:49 PM
in our life somehow
connected we are like isle
but from underneath

mazHur
12-22-2007, 03:51 PM
to make a circle
you start with a straight line
then give it a twist

crazefest456
12-23-2007, 01:12 AM
then give it a twist
the taut knot on his forehead
iron creases, gently...

motherhubbard
12-23-2007, 02:05 AM
iron creases, gently...
glowing embers fall like rain
Beauty that can burn

firefangled
12-23-2007, 10:00 AM
beauty that can burn,
the night on the high lake cliffs,
starlight on water

mazHur
12-23-2007, 10:12 AM
starlight on water
shines like a dancing hall for
two lovers discreet

kiz_paws
12-23-2007, 10:34 AM
Two lovers discreet
they hold in check the passion
that would shock the moon

mazHur
12-23-2007, 10:47 AM
that would shock the moon
and make him hide his face in
dark clouds forever

kiz_paws
12-23-2007, 10:49 AM
Dark clouds forever
trying to hide the rainbow
Beauty shall prevail

mazHur
12-23-2007, 10:55 AM
Beauty shall prevail
in bones and meat and skins
let's dress up for dance!

kiz_paws
12-23-2007, 11:12 AM
Let's dress up for dance
don't forget to bring our masks
we want to fit in...

mazHur
12-23-2007, 12:08 PM
we want to fit in
the small expanse of our
rich pacific hearts

kiz_paws
12-23-2007, 12:09 PM
Rich pacific hearts
seafood is so good for you
won't you please join me?

mazHur
12-23-2007, 12:14 PM
won't you please join me?
I have cooked lobsters, shrimp,fish--
all for my gourmet1

kiz_paws
12-23-2007, 12:20 PM
All for my gourmet
was a plate of little clams
watch out for the pearls

mazHur
12-23-2007, 12:35 PM
watch out for the pearls
rough handling will take away
their lustre and shine

kiz_paws
12-23-2007, 12:43 PM
Their lustre and shine
is hidden on the inside
tantalize no more

mazHur
12-23-2007, 12:49 PM
tantalize no more
the bleak sphere of stale pearls
get me a new pearl !

kiz_paws
12-24-2007, 02:51 AM
Get me a new pearl
my pearls of wisdom are old
and I need to grow

Pensive
12-25-2007, 08:31 AM
And I need to grow
Have the wisdom of Gandalf
Whom all remember

mazHur
12-25-2007, 10:35 AM
Whom all remember
for his fabulous wisdom
legendarium

kiz_paws
12-26-2007, 12:29 AM
legendarium
how the mirror reminds us
yesterday was good

firefangled
12-26-2007, 02:24 PM
yesterday was good,
walked to horizon's sharp edge,
it cut through the crap

mazHur
12-26-2007, 02:46 PM
it cut through the crap
and darted straight into the
heart of tomorrow

crazefest456
12-26-2007, 02:48 PM
heart of tomorrow
is very similar to
heart of yesterdays

mazHur
12-26-2007, 02:50 PM
heart of yesterdays
unlike heart of tomorrow
bleeds with memories

crazefest456
12-26-2007, 02:53 PM
bleeds with memories
of care and hurt, one and same
circulated blood

mazHur
12-26-2007, 03:02 PM
circulated blood
if not warm will sometimes clot
get near my heater

crazefest456
12-26-2007, 03:03 PM
get near my heater
in the stranded car, because
a blizzard is nigh!

mazHur
12-26-2007, 03:24 PM
a blizzard is nigh
and before emotions freeze
we must keep dancing

crazefest456
12-26-2007, 04:26 PM
we must keep dancing
the twang of biwa
can fuel our stories

kiz_paws
12-26-2007, 04:34 PM
Can fuel our stories
this egg nog and rum I drink
think I'll go lie down

mazHur
12-26-2007, 04:50 PM
can fuel our stories,
can give wings to Cinderella,
just one look of yours

mazHur
12-26-2007, 04:52 PM
Can fuel our stories
this egg nog and rum I drink
think I'll go lie down

think I'll go lie down
and just take a hundred winks
before I restart

kiz_paws
12-26-2007, 09:08 PM
Before I restart
must think of all to let go
brain in overtime

jon1jt
12-29-2007, 01:09 AM
brain in overtime,
a boy on a rusty bike
eyes a falling star

kiz_paws
12-29-2007, 03:53 AM
Eyes a falling star
possibilities spill forth
life is for living

Wyoecho
12-29-2007, 11:27 AM
Life is for living
tarry not, begin at once
fly away today

mazHur
12-29-2007, 11:36 AM
fly away today
so you can reach tomorrow
in real earnest

kiz_paws
12-29-2007, 11:58 AM
In real earnest
eagle nest built on a cliff
to house her babies

mazHur
12-29-2007, 01:00 PM
to house her babies
she acted prematurely
did not take a man

Wyoecho
12-29-2007, 02:28 PM
did not take a man
needed not the pain and hurt
of unfaithfulness

Haven
12-29-2007, 03:56 PM
of unfaithfulness
in this age of internet
it is so easy

to create a bond
constrained only by bandwidth
... imagination

the desire to roam
exploring your libido
is cybersex wrong?

mazHur
12-29-2007, 04:11 PM
is cybersex wrong?
have you ever tried it
ever had orgasm?

it is so easy
to talk about sex as
if that's only life

Il Penseroso
12-30-2007, 03:04 AM
if that's only life,
breezes melted into skin,
stars, grow into death.

jon1jt
12-30-2007, 03:09 AM
there were mountains, IP made them. :)


stars, grow into death...
death is not that last horseman.
The stars, who you are.

Riesa
12-30-2007, 03:11 AM
the stars, who you are.
mistrust life. cross sun with ash
become a pirate

Il Penseroso
12-30-2007, 03:14 AM
thanks jon.

yay Riesa's back!


become a pirate
eat salt torn from the sea,
drift mightily on

jon1jt
12-30-2007, 03:17 AM
go Riesa go!

dramasnot6
12-30-2007, 03:23 AM
Drift mightily on
Taste the wind's lips to find your
Dark destination.

jon1jt
12-30-2007, 02:04 PM
Dramas back!!!

mazHur
12-30-2007, 02:07 PM
Dark destination
has finally arrived and
new drama will start.

Wyoecho
12-30-2007, 02:41 PM
new drama will start
always so many issues
stalling for more time

Il Penseroso
12-30-2007, 11:23 PM
stalling for more time
spot blooms, cradle irises
watch light turned fluid

kiz_paws
12-31-2007, 02:26 AM
Watch light turned fluid
beneath the rainbow gentle
we kiss forever

crazefest456
12-31-2007, 02:45 AM
we kiss forever
and with our last breath, fleeting,
seraphs fly us away

kiz_paws
12-31-2007, 02:56 AM
Seraphs fly us away
in the twinkling of an eye
we find forever

TheFifthElement
12-31-2007, 08:19 AM
we find forever
resting in spaces between
words we cannot speak

firefangled
12-31-2007, 10:57 AM
words we cannot speak
are always with us, like red
hiding within gold

Il Penseroso
12-31-2007, 05:06 PM
hiding within gold
a yellow sliver, pressed firm
remnant of the sun.

crazefest456
12-31-2007, 05:23 PM
remnant of the sun
fell to the earth's atmosphere
lighting the sky

dramasnot6
12-31-2007, 10:44 PM
Dramas back!!!

It's good to be back! :D Thanks jon!

Lighting the sky
Supernova of my heart
Burns to a frazzle

symphony
01-01-2008, 03:41 AM
burns to a frazzle...
unseen to eyes but the third,
cold ashes remain

....

crazefest456
01-01-2008, 03:45 AM
cold ashes remain
of my long forgotten lore
submerged in his mind

TheFifthElement
01-01-2008, 05:24 AM
submerged in his mind
electrical impulses,
synapses firing.

Wyoecho
01-01-2008, 12:22 PM
synapses firing
creating thoughts uncontrolled
danger is mounting

mazHur
01-01-2008, 12:45 PM
danger is mounting
any time a bobby could come
and knock at the glass!

kiz_paws
01-01-2008, 12:54 PM
And knock at the glass
the wobbly man wants some more
life appears so good

Wyoecho
01-01-2008, 04:56 PM
life appears so good
through glass tinted with rose
must be the sun’s glare

motherhubbard
01-01-2008, 05:39 PM
must be the sun’s glare
I raise my hand to my brow
So that I may see

mazHur
01-01-2008, 05:45 PM
So that I may see
you I look into the eyes,
of my heart's mirror

Wyoecho
01-01-2008, 08:47 PM
of my heart's mirror
reflections are but a dream
shadows in the glass

kiz_paws
01-02-2008, 03:53 AM
Shadows in the glass
how my mind likes to play tricks
you are everywhere

TheFifthElement
01-02-2008, 05:29 AM
you are everywhere
like the memory of dreams
lost amongst the stars.

ktd222
01-02-2008, 05:34 AM
lost amongst the stars
are yellow m&ms I
tossed up to the night

Il Penseroso
01-03-2008, 12:10 AM
tossed up to the night,
spiralled away alone, dim
as farthest planets.

Riesa
01-03-2008, 12:42 AM
I love that, it's so lonely, dim and silent.

as farthest planets
tug triplet moons shaded by
slivered slips of ships.

my mouth is numb from drinking ice water, but slivered slips of ships wouldn't be easy to say ten times even if I were drinking chamomile tea.

Il Penseroso
01-03-2008, 02:21 AM
I don't care how hard it is to say, it's still incredibly beautiful.


slivered slips of ships
crusted shells form neon moons
for seawater clowns

CdnReader
01-03-2008, 06:27 PM
for seawater clowns
drifting freely below tide
numbed mouths gulp in pain

mazHur
01-03-2008, 06:30 PM
numbed mouths gulp in pain
the mermaid's kiss was too cold
need micro waving!

CdnReader
01-03-2008, 06:33 PM
^^^ You're so fast, Maz. :)

need microwaving
ethereal misted heat
life's perfect quickness

mazHur
01-03-2008, 06:36 PM
life's perfect quickness
survival of the fittest
slow damn you Darwin !

Wyoecho
01-03-2008, 10:00 PM
slow damn you Darwin
natural selection no!
I’ve become extinct!

mazHur
01-03-2008, 10:04 PM
I’ve become extinct
come and make a clone of me
make me live again !

Riesa
01-03-2008, 10:10 PM
make me live again.
Ship me like a sea-monkey,
damn, I'm back-ordered.

jon1jt
01-04-2008, 02:21 AM
damn, I'm back-ordered.
Disturbing the scenery,
where I want to be.

ktd222
01-04-2008, 02:57 AM
where I want to be
the hunted animal - let
the doe feed on me

jon1jt
01-04-2008, 03:15 AM
the doe feed on me,
and wash me down with scotch. The
scene, pornographic.

kiz_paws
01-04-2008, 04:20 AM
scene, pornographic
naked messages in rain
falling down my face

jon1jt
01-04-2008, 04:32 AM
falling down my face,
Billie Holiday's oohh, oohhs...
Oh, it's moonlight drool.

kiz_paws
01-04-2008, 04:34 AM
Oh, it's moonlight drool
a chance to taste forever
just let yourself go

jon1jt
01-04-2008, 04:41 AM
Oh, it's moonlight drool
a chance to taste forever
just let yourself go

just let yourself go
climb dream-rope to fairytales:
a Valentine moon!

:p

kiz_paws
01-04-2008, 04:45 AM
just let yourself go
climb dream-rope to fairytales:
a Valentine moon!

:p
Nice, I like!


A Valentine moon
sugar crescent in the sky
I peeked while kissing

jon1jt
01-04-2008, 04:59 AM
I peeked while kissing
snow-woman flashing navel,
blew cold kiss to me!

kiz_paws
01-04-2008, 05:05 AM
Blew cold kiss to me
a fragile rose lay frozen
and yet I felt warm

CdnReader
01-04-2008, 05:31 AM
And yet I felt warm
covered up in the fallen
leaves of forest's death

symphony
01-04-2008, 09:27 AM
leaves of forest's death
drawn by slow breezes to my
ebony window ....

CdnReader
01-04-2008, 09:59 AM
ebony window
a blackness too dense to see
the beauty within

Ludmila607
01-04-2008, 10:46 AM
I am frozen
what to say or do
just wait in silence.

TheFifthElement
01-04-2008, 02:44 PM
the beauty within
lingers, breathless, after dark
exposed to moonlight

mazHur
01-04-2008, 03:13 PM
exposed to moonlight
she looked like a moon goddess
waiting to be loved

kiz_paws
01-04-2008, 10:41 PM
waiting to be loved
alabaster dreams so fine
pass me the champagne

TheFifthElement
01-05-2008, 09:06 AM
pass me the champagne,
inside each fine bubble a
universe explodes.

CdnReader
01-05-2008, 09:24 AM
universe explodes
stars shiver, as moons devolve
macrocosmic mess

mazHur
01-05-2008, 09:27 AM
Judgment I am not
but I can perceive you are
hiding something real

macrocosmic mess
this universe may appear
and we littering it

CdnReader
01-05-2008, 09:32 AM
and we littering it
with our useless humanness
what else could we do?

mazHur
01-05-2008, 09:35 AM
what else could we do?
we keep asking this question
and live on to die

Wyoecho
01-05-2008, 09:38 AM
and live on to die
from the moment we are born
death is closing in

CdnReader
01-05-2008, 09:54 AM
death is closing in
blackness filling deep corners
velvet dark creeps in

Wyoecho
01-05-2008, 10:22 AM
velvet dark creeps in
soothing presence touches me
nothing more to do

kiz_paws
01-05-2008, 01:24 PM
Nothing more to do
the forest awakes in peace
and offers Silence

zanna
01-05-2008, 01:29 PM
and offers Silence
to my truest confession --
but don't you love me?

kiz_paws
01-05-2008, 01:32 PM
But don't you love me
I am the keeper of bones
or so my dog thought ;)

AdoreroDio
01-05-2008, 01:40 PM
or so my dog thought...
dogs have biased opinions
though, being loyal

zanna
01-05-2008, 02:13 PM
though, being loyal
is a double edg-ed sword -
are patriots good?

Wyoecho
01-05-2008, 04:36 PM
are patriots good?
only for the status quo
revolt, save the day!

mazHur
01-05-2008, 05:06 PM
revolt, save the day,
life is too short to live, dear,
hate begets nothing

AdoreroDio
01-06-2008, 02:37 AM
hate begets nothing
except frustration, anger
and similar things

kiz_paws
01-06-2008, 03:08 AM
And similar things
dance wildly in our travels
I smell the sweet earth

TheFifthElement
01-06-2008, 05:51 AM
I smell the sweet earth
from the deck of a ship as
it carries me home.

CdnReader
01-06-2008, 06:10 AM
it carries me home
beyond the fairy-nest of
tangled limbs and roots

Wyoecho
01-06-2008, 11:26 AM
tangled limbs and roots
that grow constantly apart
turns the valley green

mazHur
01-06-2008, 12:45 PM
makes the valley green
and studs it with roses red
the rouge of your cheeks

kiz_paws
01-06-2008, 01:54 PM
The rouge of your cheeks
brought on by the night's cool breeze
or was it a kiss...

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 02:04 PM
or was it a kiss
that made me realize it
no, it was true love

mazHur
01-06-2008, 02:35 PM
no, it was true love
not a plain kiss on the lips
of a blooming flower

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 02:38 PM
hey that was six syllables, no matter it was still good :)

A blooming flower
could represent the hearts of
everyone

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 02:40 PM
a blooming flower
could represent the hearts of
everyone whos loved

(sorry my computer messed up)

mazHur
01-06-2008, 02:43 PM
hey, be cautious lest you get charged for ''flooding'' ! I was in the start for the same reason !!

mazHur
01-06-2008, 02:44 PM
everyone whose loved
fully knows what a kiss means
and where it leads to

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 03:04 PM
and where it leads to,
that ever winding road, is
more than you can wish

(thanks aou the flooding tip by the way)

mazHur
01-06-2008, 03:08 PM
more than you can wish,
more than you can ever dream
my love is for you

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 03:10 PM
my love is for you
For you alone, it cannot
die, it's eternal

CdnReader
01-06-2008, 03:11 PM
my love is for you,
clasped here in my palm, gentle
spirit accept me

ack!

die, it's eternal
escape is not possible
live now while you can

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 03:12 PM
spirit accept me
for my faultations and flaws
because i am true

mazHur
01-06-2008, 03:16 PM
because i am true
I am like a straight tree
first to be cut down!

hey, cDn, you are playing 'double strokes'' !!lol

CdnReader
01-06-2008, 03:18 PM
^^^ tried to fix my lapsed answer....it didn't work! lol

first to be cut down
royal flush to a full house
my hand beats yours flat

mazHur
01-06-2008, 03:18 PM
live now while you can
is just a word of the mouth
life is not a joke!

CdnReader
01-06-2008, 03:20 PM
life is not a joke
told, giggling, behind cupped hands,
mischievous sparkle

mazHur
01-06-2008, 03:23 PM
my hand beats yours flat
my lips burn with hot coffee
as I sip your words

mazHur
01-06-2008, 03:25 PM
mischievous sparkle
could be seen over your head
are you under spell?

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 03:26 PM
as i sip your words
i know them to all be lies
yet, i still listen

Jane Jane
01-06-2008, 03:30 PM
And similar things
that make the world tired and grey,
the rainbow is lost.

mazHur
01-06-2008, 03:32 PM
yet, i still listen
to your baloney my dear
well, you know quite well

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 03:38 PM
well, you know quite well
what i certainly think, and
you have always known

CdnReader
01-06-2008, 04:13 PM
you have always known
how to make my spirit sing
just whisper, here, now

xlxlauraxlx
01-06-2008, 04:28 PM
just whisper, here, now
the words you long to hear
with your gentle voice

mazHur
01-06-2008, 06:11 PM
with your gentle voice
whisper in my ears your love
and see the world dance!

kiz_paws
01-06-2008, 09:34 PM
Hi, xlxlauraxlx, nice haiku!

And see the world dance
as only someone like you
who loves to chase ghosts

Wyoecho
01-06-2008, 10:52 PM
who loves to chase ghosts
like visions glanced across time
hazy in the gloom

kiz_paws
01-07-2008, 12:48 AM
Hazy in the gloom
he found his way back from Hell
and drank away thoughts

Il Penseroso
01-07-2008, 01:02 AM
and drank away thoughts
alone, spinning suspended
above a still room

kiz_paws
01-07-2008, 01:09 AM
Above a still room
a little mouse made mischief
and drove us all mad

CdnReader
01-07-2008, 04:29 AM
and drove us all mad
trying to reach sky-high goals
chasing our own tails

mazHur
01-07-2008, 05:43 AM
chasing our own tails
we are always moving in
some vicious circles

CdnReader
01-07-2008, 06:50 AM
some vicious circles
lead, like a swirling whirlpool,
to the sea's bottom

mazHur
01-07-2008, 07:00 AM
to the sea's bottom
lies the door to old treasures
dive in and get some

CdnReader
01-07-2008, 09:11 AM
dive in and get some
dig deep to the bottom and
scoop up the best parts

xlxlauraxlx
01-07-2008, 12:26 PM
scoop up the best parts
and in your heart they shall keep
til death do you part
(i couldnt think of a last line lol)
btw i am not really really sad and doing loads of these i just am bored

mazHur
01-07-2008, 01:36 PM
til death do you part
but where would you go alone
come -l-e-t us join hands

xlxlauraxlx
01-07-2008, 01:40 PM
Come let us join hands
Let's show the haters, the blind
Just how strong we are

mazHur
01-07-2008, 01:56 PM
Just how strong we are
could be judged from our conduct,
killing cockroaches !

zanna
01-07-2008, 05:34 PM
killing cockroaches
was pointless in their old house
let's just coexist

Wyoecho
01-07-2008, 11:22 PM
let's just coexist
and blend among the flowers
with the butterflies

crazefest456
01-07-2008, 11:30 PM
with the butterflies
I soar among thoughts, infused
in the love of His.

Wyoecho
01-07-2008, 11:44 PM
in the love of his
desire I find myself
yielding to his wish

dramasnot6
01-08-2008, 02:12 AM
Yielding to his wish,
Starry skies offered an ear,
Heaven intervenes

TheFifthElement
01-08-2008, 04:31 AM
Heaven intervenes
in Thursday's football result;
rain interrupts play.

dramasnot6
01-08-2008, 04:54 AM
Rain interrupts play
The gray playground flooded
Time to go inside

CdnReader
01-08-2008, 05:35 AM
Time to go inside
paw through the entrails to find
the truth of your life

kiz_paws
01-08-2008, 12:48 PM
The truth of your life
splashes on me as you smile
I cling to your eyes

xlxlauraxlx
01-08-2008, 01:16 PM
i cling to your eyes
because they are my only
pathway to your soul

mazHur
01-08-2008, 01:40 PM
pathway to your soul
runs through your husband's belly
serve him a nice meal !

xlxlauraxlx
01-08-2008, 01:43 PM
Serve him a nice meal
with bangers, mash and peas. And
gravy. Ahhh bisto :)

TheFifthElement
01-08-2008, 02:42 PM
Gravy, ahhh bisto -
children follow their noses
to a tasty dish!

CdnReader
01-08-2008, 02:44 PM
to a tasty dish
his eyes wander, envious
of what he can't have

xlxlauraxlx
01-08-2008, 02:57 PM
Of what he can't have
is nothing. Nothing, to that
he already has

kiz_paws
01-08-2008, 03:04 PM
He already has
my heart on a platter fine
a table well set

TheFifthElement
01-08-2008, 03:10 PM
a table well set
observing traditional
rules of appetite

kiz_paws
01-08-2008, 03:14 PM
Rules of appetite
are made up as we go on
in our Earthly feasts

xlxlauraxlx
01-08-2008, 03:19 PM
In our earthly feasts
we show greed, and wastefulness.
Others, helpless: watch

mazHur
01-08-2008, 03:54 PM
Others, helpless: watch
us lost in the cosmic love
unaware of selves

xlxlauraxlx
01-08-2008, 03:58 PM
Unaware of selves
Wondering and lost yet still
and all motionless

CdnReader
01-08-2008, 03:58 PM
and all motionless
invisible as silkwebs
hidden in silence

xlxlauraxlx
01-08-2008, 04:37 PM
Hidden in silence
in those shadowy corners
are ghosts of our pasts

kiz_paws
01-08-2008, 05:57 PM
Are ghosts of our pasts
that which shall shape our future
or can we let go?

Wyoecho
01-08-2008, 09:34 PM
or can we let go?
and not regret the moment
we had our first kiss

Il Penseroso
01-09-2008, 02:40 AM
we had our first kiss,
stole light from stars, twinkled in
initial exchange.

kiz_paws
01-09-2008, 02:51 AM
Initial exchange
my hand bumps yours by mistake
but we both like it

Il Penseroso
01-09-2008, 03:26 AM
but we both like it
words met with undertows of
breath, wisping onward.

kiz_paws
01-09-2008, 03:37 AM
Breath, wisping onward
the first hurdle has been passed
it sucks to be shy

Il Penseroso
01-09-2008, 03:42 AM
it sucks to be shy,
have eyes that glimmer only
lowered to green ground.

kiz_paws
01-09-2008, 03:46 AM
Lowered to green ground
the snake in the grass hisses
and hides the apple

jon1jt
01-09-2008, 03:49 AM
Go Kiz go, go IP go!!!! Write on!

mazHur
01-09-2008, 06:44 AM
and hides the apple
from the sight of first couple
and leaves them wondering

CdnReader
01-09-2008, 09:18 AM
and leaves them wondering
where it is safe to find sleep
and peace

mazHur
01-09-2008, 08:08 PM
and peace
would not come to lovers two
who are two in one!

Il Penseroso
01-09-2008, 10:03 PM
who are two in one?
the sea and moon's exerted
pull; these without touch?


ha! have fun with that one!

kiz_paws
01-09-2008, 10:05 PM
Go Kiz go, go IP go!!!! Write on!

Ha ha, Jon, why didn't ya hop in? ;)

Pull these without touch
the quills poked the smallest one...
such sad little eyes

Riesa
01-09-2008, 10:05 PM
kiz beat me

such sad little eyes
remain felt, it's the nature
in emotion's look

(oh well, just a little juggling required.)

Wyoecho
01-09-2008, 10:06 PM
in emotions drag
moments turn into hours
the painful night wails

Il Penseroso
01-09-2008, 10:09 PM
Ha ha, Jon, why didn't ya hop in? ;)



I wondered the same thing.

mazHur
01-09-2008, 10:09 PM
pull these that don't touch,
the sinews of my mortal
flesh are in your hands

kiz_paws
01-10-2008, 03:59 AM
The painful night wails
each raindrop is a message
my nose drips with news

toni
01-10-2008, 04:07 AM
My nose drips with news
and further drips memories
on my ancient sword



:(

kiz_paws
01-10-2008, 04:11 AM
on my ancient sword
there is a small engraving --
please use with caution

mazHur
01-10-2008, 11:54 AM
please use with caution
my heart is not a football
to be kicked around

jon1jt
01-11-2008, 12:36 AM
please use with caution
my heart is not a football
to be kicked around



Ha ha, Jon, why didn't ya hop in? ;)

Pull these without touch
the quills poked the smallest one...
such sad little eyes


Thanks, Kiz. Sometimes I get in the mood to just disappear. I think singer Suzanne Vega sums up this feeling for me perfectly:


If you want me
You can find me
Left of center
Off of the strip

In the outskirts
In the fringes
In the corner
Out of the grip" ;)

to be kicked around,
poets going through customs
learn to compromise