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CdnReader
07-27-2007, 06:22 AM
sunlight birds flit by
salty seabreezes beckon
tall sails billowing

Pendragon
07-27-2007, 10:33 AM
tall sails billowing,
The Flying Dutchman arises--
Is that Davey Jones?

CdnReader
07-27-2007, 11:19 AM
Is that Davey Jones?
No. A modern rendition...
Captain Jack Sparrow. :)

Riesa
07-27-2007, 11:40 AM
Captain Jack Sparrow
spiced rum, eels and seaweed juice;
New scent for cologne?

symphony
07-27-2007, 11:52 AM
new scent for cologne?
and dad looks so fab today...
something's going on.

Il Penseroso
07-27-2007, 11:53 AM
New scent for cologne:
salt seas whipped and tamed inside
bathroom stored bottles.

something's going on
behind the spinning atom
but we can't see it.

symphony
07-27-2007, 12:04 PM
but we cant see it
whatever hovers behind
that stained old curtain

CdnReader
07-27-2007, 12:15 PM
that stained old curtain
hides so many skeletons...
do you want to know?

Riesa
07-27-2007, 12:21 PM
do you want to know
the happy housewife's secret?
Bathroom stored bottles.

:p

CdnReader
07-27-2007, 12:23 PM
Bathroom stored bottles.
Pastel containers of glass,
what do they contain?

Il Penseroso
07-27-2007, 01:31 PM
do you want to know
the happy housewife's secret?
Bathroom stored bottles.

:p


ahhh, that's too funny. Nice to see you around Riesa.

what do they contain
to trick the winter ice, heavy
snow, and sprout again?

littlewing53
07-27-2007, 01:56 PM
snow and sprout again
patiently waits the flower
wrapped in sweet slumber

Pensive
07-27-2007, 06:42 PM
Wrapped in sweet slumber
Unaware of the world around
He enjoys his dreams

Pendragon
07-28-2007, 10:22 AM
He enjoys his dreams,
His escape from reality—
Life has become harsh…

CdnReader
07-28-2007, 10:26 AM
Life has become harsh...
the world's agonies displayed.
A child's hungry cry.

symphony
07-28-2007, 11:50 AM
a child's hungry cry
goes unheard, unattended
what world we live in

CdnReader
07-28-2007, 11:59 AM
what world we live in
avoiding painful lives with
turned heads and blind eyes.

symphony
07-28-2007, 12:03 PM
turned heads and blind eyes--
cries go unheard, deaths unseen.
peace is murdered cold.

Bii
07-28-2007, 05:08 PM
peace is murdered cold;
the war stick reigns absolute
hope forever lost

CdnReader
07-28-2007, 05:38 PM
hope forever lost
our enemies overrun
our last defences

littlewing53
07-30-2007, 12:30 PM
our last defenses
stand strong in quiet relief
strength belongs to all

kiz_paws
07-30-2007, 01:46 PM
strength belongs to all
we seek in our inner cores
there is always hope

Il Penseroso
07-30-2007, 02:10 PM
there is always hope,
the thread behind needle points
weaving dreams to life.

CdnReader
07-30-2007, 02:43 PM
weaving dreams to life
the nightshifter plies his craft
threads to the future

kiz_paws
07-30-2007, 07:35 PM
Threads to the future
woven with intricate care
waste not a detail

AdoreroDio
07-30-2007, 10:58 PM
waste not a detail
when writing of this beauty
upon a blank page

CdnReader
07-31-2007, 03:16 AM
upon a blank page
i rest my pen, wondering
where to find the words

symphony
07-31-2007, 05:02 AM
where to find the words
to describe this bliss now that
the month's at its end

Pensive
07-31-2007, 07:07 AM
The month's at its end
The new month would begin soon
Holidays will end!

littlewing53
07-31-2007, 12:10 PM
holidays will end
autumn brings a gentle breeze
of coming winter

symphony
07-31-2007, 02:25 PM
of coming winter
i can feel the chilling winds
from where i now stand

verybaddmom
07-31-2007, 03:33 PM
from where i now stand
view obscured, my thoughts like a
winding country road

kiz_paws
07-31-2007, 03:41 PM
Winding country road
twisting through the fields of gold
the hearty grain waves

Il Penseroso
07-31-2007, 05:06 PM
the hearty grain waves
swell and magnify the scope
of earthen recess.

Il Penseroso
07-31-2007, 05:10 PM
of earthen recess
a warped and cracked encounter
is forlornly sketched.

is forlornly sketched
the mountain tremble heard in
caves of solitude.

caves of solitude
fold around the thinking cup,
a glove is needed.

Riesa
07-31-2007, 05:11 PM
of earthen recess
school-worms know much...favorites are
seedball, volleyant.

oh, okay... those first three are amazing...all up until last line, imho. :p Hi IP :wave: :)

A glove is needed
during spring seed-ball, although
where do worms wear them?

Il Penseroso
07-31-2007, 05:13 PM
seedball, volleyant,
a six-legged speck flying
with the sprout of life.


Howdy Riesa! we've gotten ourselves into a muddle. Thanks! was writing fast, that's just what somehow came out.

Riesa
07-31-2007, 05:18 PM
with the sprout of life
at the core of transgression,
lay your judgement down.

Il Penseroso
07-31-2007, 05:20 PM
lay your judgement down
and let it linger supple
as a blossom path.

Riesa
07-31-2007, 05:28 PM
as a blossom path
presumes a shaft of flouncing
sunlight as comrade.

Il Penseroso
07-31-2007, 05:39 PM
very nice.

sunlight as comrade
as fishermen sift sea waves
for a dancing catch.

Riesa
07-31-2007, 06:11 PM
for a dancing catch
the baroque gentleman primed
nets luxurious

Virgil
07-31-2007, 07:37 PM
Nets luxurious
For catching rico fishies
In golden rivers.

Bii
08-01-2007, 04:08 AM
In golden rivers
silver bodies lie sleeping
bronzed amongst their dreams

symphony
08-01-2007, 06:00 AM
bronzed amongst their dreams
our aspirations decay--
once golden dreams dim.

Virgil
08-01-2007, 07:09 AM
Once golden dreams dim
silver nightmares explode bright.
Summer night, dark sight.

CdnReader
08-01-2007, 07:15 AM
Summer night, dark sight
eclipse of the sun shines black
fiery silhouette

symphony
08-01-2007, 07:16 AM
summer night, dark sight
reveals a wing glowing bright--
glued with wax, star-ward.


Edit: Glued with wax, starward
his wings, though not ablaze, were
a fiery silhouette.

Fixed :p

CdnReader
08-01-2007, 07:22 AM
Morning, Symphony.... :) Funny we should bump into each other here.... LITERALLY! LOL!

Fiery silhouette
molten anger precedes her...
thunderbolts of ire.

symphony
08-01-2007, 07:29 AM
Good evening from South Asia :) How's life treating u?

Thunderbolts of ire--
His is a wrath not seen since
the times of Stalin!

CdnReader
08-01-2007, 07:46 AM
Early afternoon in London.... and a lovely day beckons... :)

The times of Stalin...
trapped in long memory's reach...
political dreams.

symphony
08-01-2007, 07:49 AM
it's golden here outside :)

Political dreams
gone astray-- false promises
made. Give not a word.

Bii
08-01-2007, 08:27 AM
made. Give not a word
that deftly voids a sentence
lest chaos ensues.

symphony
08-01-2007, 08:51 AM
made. Give not a word
that deftly voids a sentence
lest chaos ensues.

uhm yeah sorry about that, should've known better than to ruin the next haiku with a weird sentence. sorry again!

lest chaos ensues and
mayhem shows its hideous face,
all hell will break loose.

Pendragon
08-01-2007, 11:05 AM
all hell will break loose,
and perhaps even freeze—
before some believe…

symphony
08-01-2007, 11:23 AM
before some believe
in faith itself-- "to the hill,
say 'Move' and it will"!

Pensive
08-01-2007, 03:43 PM
Say 'move' and it will!
Unlike your heart it follows
Every word you say

littlewing53
08-01-2007, 04:43 PM
every word you say
has drifted and gone astray
silently leaving

Virgil
08-01-2007, 09:46 PM
Silently leaving
With my head held very high.
I don't give a damn.

Weeping Willow
08-02-2007, 01:34 AM
I don't give a damn
To Chestertown Maryland
I set my course to

kiz_paws
08-02-2007, 01:47 AM
I set my course to
paint a blazed trail across town
only to find jail

Bii
08-02-2007, 03:19 AM
only to find jail
a haven in darkened times
a place to find peace

CdnReader
08-02-2007, 05:59 AM
a place to find peace
beyond dream worlds, beyond earth,
fly away with me

symphony
08-02-2007, 11:24 AM
fly away with me
let us rejoice with the world
let gala meet glee...

littlewing53
08-02-2007, 12:04 PM
let gala meet glee
there's a party every day
bring out the smiles

symphony
08-02-2007, 12:11 PM
bringing out the smiles,
all those remarks of hallmarks--
"sharing is caring"...

littlewing53
08-02-2007, 12:13 PM
hi symph...it's another lovely day in haiku..

sharing is caring
wrap your arms around someone
let your spirit shine

_JadeRain_
08-02-2007, 12:23 PM
Let you spirit shine
Through the blank, black and darkness
The light of the soul

symphony
08-02-2007, 12:33 PM
hey there littlewing :D

the light of the soul--
a radiance nurtured and
enkindled again...

littlewing53
08-02-2007, 12:36 PM
enkindled again
the fire burns bright with heart
faith brings strength homeward

Bii
08-02-2007, 02:17 PM
faith brings strength homeward
but love persuades it to stay
fear prevents escape

CdnReader
08-02-2007, 02:19 PM
fear prevents escape
barriers at every turn
wordless screams echo

Pendragon
08-02-2007, 03:32 PM
wordless screams echo
inside my glass box prison
mirrors reflect me...

Bii
08-02-2007, 04:07 PM
mirrors reflect me
my eyes stare into my eyes
no recognition

CdnReader
08-02-2007, 04:13 PM
no recognition
of previous misdeeds means
the future repeats

Bii
08-02-2007, 04:20 PM
the future repeats
a DVD on playback
rewind, stop, replay

CdnReader
08-02-2007, 05:11 PM
^^ Excellent! :)

rewind, stop, replay
the memories of my life
stuck on fast forward

symphony
08-02-2007, 11:12 PM
stuck on fast forward,
in whirlwind the events run,
today gives no time

Virgil
08-02-2007, 11:19 PM
Today gives no time
to arrange the mind's cobwebs.
Spiders crawl at night.

symphony
08-02-2007, 11:23 PM
spiders crawl at night,
web of all their secrets spun,
they wander about...

ktd222
08-03-2007, 12:28 AM
they wander about --
I pick one up, and then suck
out its goey juice

CdnReader
08-03-2007, 05:53 AM
'out its gooey juice
'twould be only a shell of
a spider's life source.

libernaut
08-03-2007, 06:33 AM
bring out the smiles
stretching 'cross the face of time
creating haiku

Bii
08-03-2007, 06:48 AM
creating haiku
precise construction of words
creating beauty

Virgil
08-03-2007, 07:20 AM
Creating beauty
Casually is like watching
Moonbeams drip slowly

Pendragon
08-03-2007, 08:08 AM
moonbeams drip slowly,
candle wax melting nightly,
metamorphosis....

symphony
08-03-2007, 08:27 AM
Creating beauty
Casually is like watching
Moonbeams drip slowly


moonbeams drip slowly,
candle wax melting nightly,
metamorphosis....

both of these were terrific.


Metamorphosis--
swells a cell to colossal
bodies, evolving.

One tiny being
grows a dose, bestows such awes,
by some unknown bliss...

Bii
08-03-2007, 01:13 PM
by some unknown bliss
my heart is mirrored in yours
your faults are my faults

littlewing53
08-03-2007, 01:15 PM
your faults are my faults
on the chalkboard of all time
written in our love

CdnReader
08-03-2007, 02:09 PM
written in our love
the passions of our past
drift to tomorrow

littlewing53
08-03-2007, 06:07 PM
drift to tomorrow
down the swift living river
in a fearless raft

CdnReader
08-03-2007, 06:13 PM
in a fearless raft
i shall challenge the rapids
swiftly flowing thoughts

littlewing53
08-03-2007, 06:24 PM
swiftly flowing thoughts
often leads me to trouble
without care or sense

CdnReader
08-03-2007, 06:45 PM
without care or sense
I wander the twisted paths
to find love's abode

littlewing53
08-03-2007, 07:03 PM
to find love's abode
travel the lanes of passion
filled with life's living

CdnReader
08-03-2007, 07:19 PM
filled with life's living
hearts stretched over soul's domain
spiritual smile

Virgil
08-03-2007, 07:25 PM
Spiritual smile
From the mysterious woods
while a river smirks

littlewing53
08-03-2007, 07:30 PM
B-E-A-U-T-F-U-L....

while a river smirks
the wet smooth rocks ponder
your wet all over

CdnReader
08-03-2007, 07:35 PM
you're wet all over
spray-soaked with ocean's salt tongue
cleansed in earth's shower

(oh-dark-35 in london....night all)

Virgil
08-03-2007, 11:37 PM
cleansed in earth's shower
delighted in soft moonglow
rapturous flower

motherhubbard
08-03-2007, 11:41 PM
Rapturous flower
Silken sweet smelling petals
Open to the sun

Pensive
08-04-2007, 01:56 AM
Open to the sun
My poor plants take the last breath
Now are left to wilt!

World_Traveler
08-04-2007, 03:21 AM
Now are left to wilt
the echoed footsteps of us
like resounding car horns

ktd222
08-04-2007, 04:02 AM
like resounding car horns
honking for the gal braving
the cold in a skirt.

CdnReader
08-04-2007, 06:01 AM
the cold in a skirt,
the heat in a big parka,
undressed for weather

Bii
08-04-2007, 10:36 AM
undressed for weather
wrapped in the warmth of the sun
naked innocence

kiz_paws
08-04-2007, 11:11 AM
Naked innocence
six baby puppies are born
helplessly bleating

CdnReader
08-04-2007, 03:24 PM
helplessly bleating
lambs follow behind mothers
like sheep tend to do

Virgil
08-04-2007, 07:25 PM
Like sheep tend to do
I went to the sorry barn
To sleep againt hay.

motherhubbard
08-04-2007, 07:29 PM
to sleep against hay
leaves me itchy all over
i prefer the bed

Virgil
08-04-2007, 10:50 PM
I prefer the bed
Too awkward in the back seat.
Burns on the floor rug.

:p :D :lol:

Son of Belial
08-04-2007, 11:53 PM
Burns on the floor rug
carelessly discarded fag
a sign of our minds

kiz_paws
08-05-2007, 12:10 AM
a sign of our minds
disappears at the next sale
greedy hands grabbing

CdnReader
08-05-2007, 05:10 AM
greedy hands grabbing
sticky kisses, big bear hugs
child's version of love

Bii
08-05-2007, 01:52 PM
childs version of love
a simplistic purity
yet easily hurt

CdnReader
08-05-2007, 02:04 PM
Yet easily hurt
can result in misplaced fear.
Embrace inner strength.

Virgil
08-05-2007, 05:36 PM
Embrace inner strength
To fix your will for battle.
Never, never quit.

kiz_paws
08-06-2007, 12:55 AM
Never, never quit
and thus cede your victory
hold your own strength now

CdnReader
08-06-2007, 04:22 AM
hold your own strength now
furiously forge ahead
pockets full of grit

Bii
08-06-2007, 05:41 AM
pockets full of grit
fallen from the daytime moon
stardust in my eyes

airam
08-06-2007, 08:19 AM
stardust in my eyes
the gutter beneath me cold
hope is all i am

airam
08-06-2007, 08:22 AM
stardust in my eyes
the gutter beneath me cold
hope is all I am

Bii
08-06-2007, 08:34 AM
hope is all I am
and the rest a living shell
empty bag of bones

symphony
08-06-2007, 09:01 AM
empty bag of bones
which once perhaps carried fruits
carry fragile limbs

Pendragon
08-06-2007, 10:30 AM
carry fragile limbs,
and tails that break when touched--
lizards are funny!

symphony
08-06-2007, 02:20 PM
lizards are funny
the way they crawl on the walls--
humble residents.

Bii
08-07-2007, 03:20 AM
humble residents
wait without expectation
of wonderful things

CdnReader
08-07-2007, 06:20 AM
Of wonderful things
I have dreamed in the soft night...
Emerging futures.

Haven
08-07-2007, 09:24 AM
Emerging futures
what will they bring? Do you know?
maybe hope and light?

CdnReader
08-07-2007, 09:32 AM
maybe hope and light
grown in alternating rows
will yield fields of peace

littlewing53
08-07-2007, 12:09 PM
will yield fields of peace
abundance of dreams abound
the keeper nurtures

CdnReader
08-07-2007, 01:13 PM
the keeper nurtures
his tiny flock, small white dots
speckled on the hills

Bii
08-07-2007, 01:16 PM
speckled on the hills
like an attack of pustules
adolescent trees

CdnReader
08-07-2007, 01:19 PM
^^^ "pustules" .... great word!

adolescent trees
dream of touching the ceiling
branches to the sky

symphony
08-08-2007, 08:32 AM
branches to the sky--
"shine on me with that blue bliss
I yearn to embrace."

CdnReader
08-08-2007, 09:04 AM
I yearn to embrace
all of you...to reach, touch, merge,
become one with you

ktd222
08-08-2007, 10:33 AM
become one with you -
identity theft - the one
thing you can't protect

Pendragon
08-08-2007, 11:14 AM
thing you can't protect
is the thing you refuse to face:
hiding will not help...

white camellia
08-08-2007, 11:42 AM
Hiding will not help
Laying bare will not help
No exit, milord!

kiz_paws
08-08-2007, 12:12 PM
No exit, milord!
just when you thought you were done
back to the kitchen!

littlewing53
08-08-2007, 01:06 PM
back to the kitchen
where mud pies and cakes are made
playing grownups fun

Bii
08-08-2007, 01:15 PM
playing grownups fun
with whips, and things that vibrate,
not so innocent

littlewing53
08-08-2007, 02:13 PM
...that's great bii....

not so innocent
behind the closed door whispers
love me even more

Bii
08-08-2007, 02:38 PM
love me even more
give me everything I want
devour your soul

ktd222
08-08-2007, 08:53 PM
devour your soul
trapped in a slit of light, too
frightened of the night

Pensive
08-08-2007, 09:40 PM
Frightened of the night
She prays for the arrival of
An early good day

CdnReader
08-09-2007, 04:50 AM
an early good day
streaming glittering sunrays
bathe me in dawn light

symphony
08-09-2007, 07:28 AM
bathe me in dawn light
the early purple smile of
lavish lavenders.

ktd222
08-09-2007, 08:25 AM
lavish lavenders
is what I use to wipe my...
shut yo dirty mouf

Pendragon
08-09-2007, 09:49 AM
shut yo' dirty mouf!
you dissing me? who you think?
bring it on, hommie!

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Hommies.gif

ktd222
08-09-2007, 04:02 PM
bring it on, hommie!
"Ahmm." "Ah, love, let us be true
to one another"

Il Penseroso
08-10-2007, 12:51 AM
to one another
be like gentle ripple curves
outward embracing.

motherhubbard
08-10-2007, 12:57 AM
outward embracing
leaves my skin all a tingle!
what could happen next?

CdnReader
08-10-2007, 05:06 AM
what could happen next?
planetary positions
predict the future?

Pendragon
08-10-2007, 02:38 PM
Predict the future?
I've been called a "psychic."
That doesn't make me one...

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/CrystalBall.gif

andave_ya
08-10-2007, 08:51 PM
That doesn't make me one
Alas, what are you saying?
Make me one of what?

Virgil
08-10-2007, 09:08 PM
Make me one of what,
the old sharks who feast on legs?
The water is cold.

andave_ya
08-10-2007, 09:11 PM
The water is cold
I cannot go all the way
The life in me fails.

Virgil
08-10-2007, 09:14 PM
The life in me fails
To comprehend the harshness.
Death seems to be here.

Il Penseroso
08-11-2007, 12:38 AM
death seems to be here,
the skirting glaze across brows
formerly blinking.

ktd222
08-11-2007, 12:46 AM
formerly blinking -
because death must have a death
wish. I don't do that

Il Penseroso
08-11-2007, 12:49 AM
wish...I don't do that,
hopes are strangled in the fog,
crimsoned by the dawn.

Il Penseroso
08-11-2007, 01:06 AM
crimsoned by the dawn
the glory we glow in straw
grown by the morning

grown by the morning
we state our elocution
and dissolve like night

and dissolve like night
our fondest cares and thinkings,
sand-stormed into light.

sand-stormed into light
the textured breeze fills our skin
with its commotion

with its commotion
the city stamps theatrics
of its underside.

motherhubbard
08-11-2007, 01:12 AM
Of it’s underside
I get a nice firm hand full
made vulnerable

CdnReader
08-11-2007, 03:50 AM
made vulnerable
in a world filled with terror
newspapers sell fear

Bii
08-11-2007, 04:25 AM
newspapers sell fear
a smidgeon of gossip, and
women with big boobs!

ktd222
08-11-2007, 04:30 AM
women with big boobs
gathered together shields us
from the deadly storm

CdnReader
08-11-2007, 08:45 AM
^^^ LOL @ Bii.... I think I know which newspapers you're talkin' about too. LOL!

...and LOL @ ktd222 too.... what a mental image THAT leaves!! LOL!

from the deadly storm
whizzing and buzzing insects
fly in formation

symphony
08-11-2007, 11:04 AM
fly in formation--
particles with fiery speed--
prompt atoms in them

motherhubbard
08-11-2007, 11:12 AM
prompt atoms in them
to move and buzz all around
friction caused heat

symphony
08-11-2007, 12:10 PM
friction caused heat
uncaring words burnt red hot
burnt out eyes averse

Il Penseroso
08-11-2007, 12:41 PM
burnt out eyes averse
to chills of empty snowfields
fill space with fire.

motherhubbard
08-11-2007, 12:43 PM
fill space with fire
smoke clouds my reality
I see what I want

quasimodo1
08-11-2007, 12:51 PM
To Symphony: I'm kind of put-off by the Haiku short format and don't feel very confident about writing them but your last bit was the best one I've noticed in some time. Just an opinion. quasi

Pendragon
08-11-2007, 12:58 PM
I see what I want.
What others want to picture
Is their own business...

symphony
08-11-2007, 01:28 PM
To Symphony: I'm kind of put-off by the Haiku short format and don't feel very confident about writing them but your last bit was the best one I've noticed in some time. Just an opinion. quasi
Thanks quasi! :)

Is their own business
the cause of such buzziness
that throws apart dreams?

CdnReader
08-11-2007, 02:11 PM
that throws apart dreams
scattered storybits windward
pieces of our lives

motherhubbard
08-11-2007, 02:12 PM
pieces of our lives
can come together in such
unexpected ways

CdnReader
08-11-2007, 02:17 PM
unexpected ways
of circumnavigating
make me quite dizzy

motherhubbard
08-11-2007, 02:22 PM
make me quite dizzy
with those soft breathy kisses
and touch me right there

CdnReader
08-11-2007, 04:30 PM
and touch me right there
where my heart used to beat strong
now an empty hole

motherhubbard
08-11-2007, 09:28 PM
now an empty hole
where a little grey hare lived
hiding from the fox

_JadeRain_
08-12-2007, 12:44 AM
Hiding from the fox
The small grey hair witnesses
His brother chased down

motherhubbard
08-12-2007, 12:49 AM
His brother chased down
the bully, and whipped him good!
He cried like a girl.

kiz_paws
08-12-2007, 02:15 AM
He cried like a girl
which was not such a bad thing
in the big picture

CdnReader
08-12-2007, 06:46 AM
in the big picture
will anyone ever care
what we've written here?

TheFifthElement
08-13-2007, 04:55 PM
what we've written here
stains for all eternity
the minds of others

CdnReader
08-14-2007, 05:19 AM
the minds of others
bobble along in the wind
like balloons on strings

TheFifthElement
08-14-2007, 10:02 AM
like balloons on strings
thoughts weave and bob playfully
fat, and full of air.

CdnReader
08-14-2007, 10:14 AM
fat, and full of air,
giant bullfrogs croak songs of
love unrequited

Pendragon
08-14-2007, 10:20 AM
love unrequited
she stands a wallflower, sad
watching him dancing...

CdnReader
08-14-2007, 10:30 AM
watching him dancing
shiny black shoes, two left feet
she loves that he tries

TheFifthElement
08-14-2007, 01:12 PM
she loves that he tries
although at times failure seems
inevitable

littlewing53
08-14-2007, 01:19 PM
inevitable
as the seasons change
love brings forth both rain and sun

CdnReader
08-14-2007, 01:37 PM
^^^ Mixed up syllable counts, LW. ;)

love brings forth both rain
and sun in alternating
servings offered 'round

TheFifthElement
08-14-2007, 02:59 PM
servings offered 'round
bellies cry, the plate empty.
Not much of a meal.

kiz_paws
08-14-2007, 07:37 PM
Not much of a meal
but was the best I could do
until the heartburn... :blush:

kitten
08-14-2007, 08:15 PM
until the heartburn
i enjoyed eating sausage
no more tomorrow.

littlewing53
08-14-2007, 09:02 PM
no more tomorrow
dried sunsets and wet full moons
basket turned over

earlier post...Cdn...gee, i get soooo mixed up...like tying shoelaces...:D

Virgil
08-14-2007, 09:05 PM
basket turned over
on the patio deck floor.
Apples and mushrooms.

amuse
08-14-2007, 10:24 PM
apples and mushrooms:
they are the most delicious
sangria combo!

kiz_paws
08-14-2007, 11:26 PM
Sangria combo!
such a grand medley of tastes
how I love to eat

amuse, I absolutely LOVE your signature!]

CdnReader
08-15-2007, 04:21 AM
how I love to eat
pizza and fried chicken and
ham sammidges too :D

kitten
08-15-2007, 08:05 AM
ham sammidges too
meatball subs lost another
hope for salami?

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 09:23 AM
hope for salami,
be sad when it's pastrami;
Oh boy, chorizo!

kitten
08-15-2007, 09:38 AM
oh boy, chorizo
one of my favorite meals
ending with pudding.

Pendragon
08-15-2007, 11:28 AM
ending with pudding,
dark black mocha chocolate
heavenly delight

littlewing53
08-15-2007, 12:26 PM
heavenly delight
chocolate chocolate yum
gold melts in my mouth

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 12:53 PM
gold melts in my mouth
platinum between my thighs
birthing precious love

kitten
08-15-2007, 01:34 PM
birthing precious love
i would rather have kittens
soft, adorable

CdnReader
08-15-2007, 01:42 PM
soft, adorable
balls of grey fluff bounce across
fragrant fields of grass

kitten
08-15-2007, 01:52 PM
fragrant fields of grass
running through in my slippers
falling on my face

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 02:19 PM
falling on my face
hiding my embarrassment
hope no one's watching

kitten
08-15-2007, 02:22 PM
hope no one's watching
my karaoke singing
run away red faced

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 03:01 PM
run away red faced
the boys are laughing again
childhood is cruel

kitten
08-15-2007, 04:09 PM
childhood is cruel
name calling and hair pulling
it's good to be old

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 04:47 PM
it's good to be old,
and live just for the moment
second by second

kitten
08-15-2007, 04:50 PM
second by second,
sadly, time slips slowly by.
where did i go wrong?

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 04:53 PM
where did I go wrong?
she pulls clothes from the machine,
all stained candy pink

kitten
08-15-2007, 04:55 PM
all stained candy pink
from the lollipop she ate
her lips were sticky.

TheFifthElement
08-15-2007, 05:01 PM
her lips were sticky,
drenched in the blood of victims,
consuming their flesh

kitten
08-15-2007, 05:31 PM
consuming their flesh
the hunger was satisfied.
anyone for pie?

RobinHood3000
08-15-2007, 06:06 PM
Anyone for pie?
Cake is so overrated.
Filling is the key.

kitten
08-15-2007, 06:55 PM
Filling is the key.
Emptying is not helpful
Unless you're peeing.

motherhubbard
08-15-2007, 07:05 PM
unless you're peeing
don't waste your time on the pot
read on the sofa

kitten
08-15-2007, 08:47 PM
read on the sofa
it is more comfortable
than a cement wall

Il Penseroso
08-15-2007, 09:01 PM
than a cement wall,
the crumbling ligament aches
as time whirls nature.

CdnReader
08-16-2007, 03:40 AM
as time whirls nature
in an ageless lover's dance
cosmic balance rests

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 05:12 AM
cosmic balance rests
drops it's head on God's shoulder
like old lovers do.

kitten
08-16-2007, 06:49 AM
Like old lovers do,
we strolled along the water -
beside it, not in.

CdnReader
08-16-2007, 07:39 AM
beside it, not in
I skirt the edges of love
refusing to drown

Haven
08-16-2007, 08:17 AM
refusing to drown
in a sea of emotion
still gasping for air

kitten
08-16-2007, 08:18 AM
still gasping for air
i finally cross over
the big finish line

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 01:37 PM
the big finish line
may be closer than you think,
don't race towards death

kitten
08-16-2007, 01:43 PM
(yay! my haiku play-mate is back!!! :) )

don't race towards death
it is dark and scary, no?
head into the light.

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 01:46 PM
kitten, that's so nice! :) I'm glad to play.

head into the light
let the warmth envelop you
without any fear

kitten
08-16-2007, 01:48 PM
without any fear
life and love can be found not
on a street corner

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 01:53 PM
on a street corner
old women are gossiping
life's simple drama

_JadeRain_
08-16-2007, 01:54 PM
On a street corner
The Little Match Girl shivers
Winter wind can kill

opps, let me try again

Life's simple drama
Petty fodder for many
Willing to endulge

kitten
08-16-2007, 01:54 PM
i can fix this.... :)


willing to indulge
a foreign car stops in front
of a candy store

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 02:02 PM
of a candy store
I dream; of lollipops and
bright aniseed balls ;)

kitten
08-16-2007, 02:04 PM
bright aniseed balls
hang not from the cherry tree
but sit in a tray.

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 02:08 PM
but sit in a tray
keep your feet out of the snow
push...and off you go!

CdnReader
08-16-2007, 02:11 PM
push...and off you go!
don't stop to breathe, just gulp in
enthusiasm

kitten
08-16-2007, 02:13 PM
enthusiasm:
face life with it every
day. or you'll be sad.

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 03:09 PM
day...or you'll be sad
my mother droned on and on.
I never listen.

kitten
08-16-2007, 03:33 PM
i never listen
to the birds singing in trees
when i am sleeping.

TheFifthElement
08-16-2007, 04:29 PM
when I am sleeping
on the shadow-side of Earth
you wake up the Sun.

kitten
08-16-2007, 04:42 PM
you wake up the Sun
and the Earth starts revolving
again for my day.

literaturerocks
08-16-2007, 05:47 PM
you wake up the sun
As I wake from my slumber
Start the day anew