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Il Penseroso
06-05-2007, 01:40 AM
humanity blooms
cascading over fallen
leaves, deadstick litter.
Janine
06-05-2007, 01:47 AM
leaves, deadstick litter,
winter's impending decay;
brilliance preceeds death.
Il Penseroso
06-05-2007, 01:53 AM
brilliance precedes death,
moths with silken spasmic wing
flutter to the grave.
Riesa
06-05-2007, 03:32 AM
swimming lazily
funnelled in blue, swirling to
where seashell sounds rest.
I ****ing love this IP...oops for the foul language :eek:
flutter to the grave
those mountains hollering OM
oh! it has been done
symphony
06-05-2007, 04:03 AM
Oh! It has been done!
World is finally serene!
My dream! O my dream!
Pensive
06-05-2007, 09:57 AM
My dream! O my dream!
Every night I see you die
Contrary to my hopes.
Uncle Lar
06-05-2007, 10:02 AM
Contrary to my
Hopes and dreams, I'll never be
A good Director.
symphony
06-05-2007, 11:28 AM
A good director,
actors moving like puppets--
Dreams of hollywood.
_JadeRain_
06-05-2007, 11:30 AM
Dreams of Hollywood
Many try but few succeed
Goodbye Norma Jean
littlewing53
06-05-2007, 01:31 PM
goodby norma jean
so tender did you know well
life lived in moments
atiguhya padma
06-05-2007, 05:39 PM
Life lived in moments,
Died in seconds, memories
Lonely snapshots, stills.
CaptureLife
06-05-2007, 05:47 PM
Lonely snapshots, stills
haunting pages of albums,
gone and forgotten
_JadeRain_
06-05-2007, 11:55 PM
Gone and forgotten
A headstone with no flowers
Ten years since his death
Il Penseroso
06-06-2007, 12:04 AM
Holy crap Riesa's got a potty mouth! but thank you, I appreciate it.
Ten years since his death,
flowers still slowly nip air
and seasons wheel by.
_JadeRain_
06-06-2007, 12:11 AM
And seasons wheel by
Flys one year - still another
Time persists onward
Il Penseroso
06-06-2007, 12:19 AM
Time persists onward,
wizening cracks of Trojan walls
like Helen's white face.
_JadeRain_
06-06-2007, 12:44 AM
Like Helen's white face
Alone launched a thousand ships
She is that lovely
symphony
06-06-2007, 12:57 AM
She is that lovely,
Rosy lips and snowy face—
Missing were the wings.
_JadeRain_
06-06-2007, 01:09 AM
Missing were the wings
Angles forgotten by God
Dust covered halos
Bebbin
06-06-2007, 02:12 AM
Dust covered halos
Where has the innocence gone?
The heavens sheds tears.
atiguhya padma
06-06-2007, 04:27 AM
The heavens shed tears
Tiny parachutes gently
Falling through the air
Pendragon
06-06-2007, 08:54 AM
falling through the air,
floating away on breezes,
snowflakes disappear...
autolycus
06-06-2007, 12:36 PM
snowflakes disappear
white essence essays revenge
cornflakes are dissolved
CaptureLife
06-06-2007, 04:57 PM
cornflakes are dissolved
into a milky abyss.
I guess I'll have toast
Bebbin
06-06-2007, 06:17 PM
I guess I'll have toast--
mankind's greatest invention
But where's the butter?!
GrayFoxDown
06-07-2007, 05:21 AM
But where's the butter?!
to spread a modest refrain
and bid the sunrise...
Riesa
06-07-2007, 07:42 AM
o' IP it's not like you didn't know about my potty mouth. :p
and bid the sunrise
hidden inside gray pockets
of morning hello
Pendragon
06-07-2007, 09:48 AM
of morning hello,
you only receive grumbles—
not morning person!
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Grr.gif
_JadeRain_
06-07-2007, 12:18 PM
Not morning person!
Just a creature of the night
Like a vampire
ktd222
06-07-2007, 07:40 PM
Like a vampire,
I always bite in fits of
passion close to you
Il Penseroso
06-08-2007, 03:05 AM
True. but still sounds funny, I suppose since I'm used to sterile forum talk most frequently. Nice haiku by the way.
Ok I'm stumped. Have at it.
ktd222
06-08-2007, 03:10 AM
ok, ill change it.
passion close to you...
five minutes later I'm done.
Let's not cuddle. Please!!!
Riesa
06-08-2007, 07:38 AM
thanks, IP...and it's true about the sterility. :( my laptop broke, with my list of 'favorites' so I've not been able to access the less than sterile forums lately.
Let's not cuddle, please.
leave the sap to the maples,
to sun with wax wings.
autolycus
06-08-2007, 09:47 AM
to sun with wax wings
daedalian invention failed
to see the wax fruit
symphony
06-08-2007, 09:55 AM
To sun with wax wings
She flew, never to return;
But oh cruel fate!
symphony
06-08-2007, 10:01 AM
oops! erm okay....
To see the wax fruit
Lit like candles, Forest God
Pan danced with angels.
autolycus
06-08-2007, 12:38 PM
pan danced with angels
the perfection of soufflé
arrogant sugar
symphony
06-08-2007, 02:49 PM
Arrogant sugar
When mixed with nice hot chilli
Makes an irony.
autolycus
06-08-2007, 03:07 PM
makes an irony
steely sarcasm burnished
ah! a silver tongue
symphony
06-08-2007, 04:25 PM
Ah! a silver tongue
Slashing the world into half;
Mind the swords of words.
Pendragon
06-08-2007, 07:35 PM
mind the sword of words—
fang-edged double danger—
cuts going, coming…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/KungFu.gif
ktd222
06-08-2007, 10:49 PM
cuts going, coming,
going, coming, going...just
go alright, ok
symphony
06-09-2007, 12:52 AM
go alright, ok
begone forever! ever,
ever and ever!
autolycus
06-09-2007, 01:23 AM
ever and ever
effortlessly leverage
fever of our times
symphony
06-09-2007, 02:16 AM
fever of our times,
shuddering ages go by,
soon it's time's threshold.
autolycus
06-09-2007, 09:40 AM
soon it's time's threshold
the moment that sleeps awake
before the first beer
symphony
06-09-2007, 11:47 AM
before the first beer
the morning sun appeared
innocence cheered
Pendragon
06-09-2007, 01:30 PM
innocence cheered,
at today’s graduation—
my son becomes man…
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Graduate1.gif
Pensive
06-09-2007, 03:08 PM
My son becomes man
I can't bring back yester-years
When he was little
ktd222
06-09-2007, 08:42 PM
When he was little
the world was large. Now the world
can't contain his heart
symphony
06-10-2007, 03:08 AM
Cant contain his heart
'Tis too heavy a burthen
And the mind too frail.
autolycus
06-10-2007, 04:06 AM
and the mind too frail
unburdens at the gallop
the racing thoughts stilled
dramasnot6
06-10-2007, 04:30 AM
The racing thoughts stilled
Pulsing as a minds mare, 'till
He triggered it down
symphony
06-10-2007, 04:49 AM
He triggered it down
The pain beyond endurance
The world turned crimson
Pensive
06-10-2007, 07:26 AM
The world turned crimson
She cancelled plan of leaving
This good, coloured world!
symphony
06-10-2007, 10:17 AM
the good, coloured world
is too much for my frail quill
to put into words
Pensive
06-10-2007, 03:19 PM
To put into words
Some things are not that easy
We fear the very them
autolycus
06-10-2007, 03:21 PM
fear the very them
a veil of thunder blossoms
love the very us
symphony
06-10-2007, 05:31 PM
love the very us
love this very piece of pie
love the blue crocus.
Il Penseroso
06-11-2007, 01:56 AM
love the blue crocus,
pitied mouth of aborted
streams in mountain glens.
dramasnot6
06-11-2007, 07:35 AM
Streams in mountain glens
Bathe upon the dreaming earth
Oh serenity
autolycus
06-11-2007, 08:43 AM
oh serenity
night and nightmare held at bay
by a firefly
Pendragon
06-11-2007, 10:07 AM
by a firefly spark,
campfire alight, guitar strums
sings about "Cold Light"
Here we pronouce firefly with only two syllables!
Haven
06-11-2007, 10:59 AM
sings about "Cold Light"
velvet sky shot through with stars
diamonds of the night
kilted exile
06-11-2007, 12:09 PM
Diamonds of the night
Lucy playing in the sky
Lysergic Acid
CaptureLife
06-11-2007, 06:36 PM
Lysergic acid
was the hippie 'fix' of the
mid 1960s
CaptureLife
06-11-2007, 06:42 PM
Wait... this one is better!
Lysergic acid?
Girls with kaleidoscope eyes
won't live forever.
littlewing53
06-11-2007, 06:57 PM
won't live forever
haight-ashbury changed it's tune
janis joplin died
Janine
06-11-2007, 08:00 PM
janis joplin died,
she shines in eternal songs,
Death claims no glory.
quasimodo1
06-11-2007, 08:18 PM
jimi and janice drained by an audience the owl called them
Unbeliever
06-11-2007, 09:07 PM
Death claims no glory,
But life sings eternally;
Sing loudly and strong.
Il Penseroso
06-11-2007, 11:46 PM
sing loudly and strong
bend notes around curling walls,
let no ear straighten.
Haven
06-12-2007, 06:18 AM
let no ear straighten
until the last chord is struck
Silence flows loudly
Pendragon
06-12-2007, 08:48 AM
silence flows loudly,
a horrible, unearthly groan--
hear utter silence
autolycus
06-12-2007, 10:37 AM
hear utter silence
black bear at the riverbank
hear otter silence
littlewing53
06-12-2007, 12:37 PM
hear otter silence
that speaks a language unheard
underwater sounds
symphony
06-12-2007, 02:10 PM
underwater sounds
breathless me, low breathing waves
watch seahorses dance
watch seahorses dance
through underwater forests
gripping each other
Unbeliever
06-12-2007, 04:20 PM
Gripping each other,
We hungrily love 'til dawn,
Sweating profusely.
littlewing53
06-12-2007, 05:39 PM
sweating profusely
the desert claims another
a thirst without end
Susan Sonnen
06-12-2007, 06:23 PM
A thirst without end,
Homelessness wanders our streets
hoping to be quenched.
ejarg7
06-13-2007, 12:36 AM
Hoping to be quenched
The eternal thirst within
till it breathes no more
ktd222
06-13-2007, 03:15 AM
till it breathes no more
I will smother it with my
grandmother kisses
Haven
06-13-2007, 08:58 AM
grandmother kisses
to comfort baby crying
tears are kissed away
Pendragon
06-13-2007, 09:04 AM
tears are kissed away,
broken heart mending nicely
the healing now begins...
atiguhya padma
06-13-2007, 10:05 AM
Healing now begins
That old preachers process of
Leeching the life blood
littlewing53
06-13-2007, 12:25 PM
leeching the life blood
is but a lifeless old process
tipping one heartless
autolycus
06-13-2007, 01:23 PM
tipping one heartless
serves not he who stands and waits
rather ten percent
symphony
06-13-2007, 03:07 PM
rather ten percent
of whatever's left of me
soused in warmth and charmth
Susan Sonnen
06-13-2007, 06:05 PM
Soused in warmth and charm,
bed and breakfast offers offers peace
not easily found.
CaptureLife
06-13-2007, 07:35 PM
not easily found
that dusty treasure on the
very top bookshelf
Susan Sonnen
06-13-2007, 11:41 PM
very top bookshelf -
ancestral dreams safely kept
intact and treasured~
atiguhya padma
06-14-2007, 05:25 AM
Intact and treasured,
That sexy impurity
Heartfelt desire
autolycus
06-14-2007, 06:37 AM
heartfelt desire
surrounded by dark intent
praline excellence
ktd222
06-14-2007, 08:28 AM
praline excellence -
and add butterscotch - extra
credit goes to you
Pendragon
06-14-2007, 08:35 AM
credit goes to you
for pointing out men's failures--
can you see any good?
symphony
06-14-2007, 11:24 AM
can you see any
good in massacring this world?
they call it progress!
CaptureLife
06-14-2007, 11:47 AM
They call it progress!
Harmful gases abounding
Till no more ozone!
littlewing53
06-14-2007, 12:03 PM
till no moe ozone
a hue of blue faintly seen
breathing without air
Il Penseroso
06-14-2007, 01:05 PM
breathing without air
gills suction encrusted slime
and flap burning pain.
Bebbin
06-14-2007, 10:08 PM
And flap burning pain
It overcomes the masses
To be numb again
J A S M I N E S
06-14-2007, 10:24 PM
To be numb again
open the light hole
may be the darkness leave my soul
autolycus
06-15-2007, 07:25 AM
darkness leave my soul
the oil of blessing in it
make a puff pastry
Haven
06-15-2007, 08:19 AM
make a puff pastry
with butter, milk, flour and yeast
Food for the soul, yes?
littlewing53
06-15-2007, 01:11 PM
food for the soul yes
with the early morning dawn
yesterday is past
CaptureLife
06-15-2007, 02:56 PM
Yesterday is past,
Tomorrow has not yet come,
Today is our time!
kiz_paws
06-15-2007, 03:04 PM
Today is our time!
let us break bread together --
and catch up on news.
ktd222
06-15-2007, 10:27 PM
and catch up on news...
Lead story: People switching
places with their pets.
Bebbin
06-15-2007, 11:31 PM
Places with their pets
What if we were ruled by them?
A sight it would be!
autolycus
06-16-2007, 05:16 AM
a sight it would be
if the massless photon swarm
ever made it here
symphony
06-16-2007, 06:34 AM
ever made it here
struggling with my feeble pen
'gain to pen a thought.
autolycus
06-16-2007, 11:49 AM
gain to pen a thought
to lose a mind to shadow
infinite regre(t)ss
symphony
06-17-2007, 06:18 AM
infinite regrets
infinitesimal joys
ad infinitum
Pendragon
06-17-2007, 10:09 AM
ad infinitum—
those who mess with other's poetry—
change to suit themselves...
change to suit themselves
the portraits remain unmasked,
sways among the dead..
Greetings and hugs, my dear Uncle Pen! :blush:
I miss haiku, I am sorry everyone, I am getting quite rusty:(
Whifflingpin
06-17-2007, 10:46 AM
Sways among the dead
The myrtle, stands laurel too;
Sorrow and honour.
symphony
06-17-2007, 11:27 AM
ad infinitum—
those who mess with other's poetry—
change to suit themselves...
who messed with ur poems?! :eek:
Sorrow and honour
mixed with bittersweet vanity--
the monarch's liquor
:thumbs_up nice, symphony.. I have seen your blog and I must say, your Haikus are all brilliant and inspiring!
the monarch's liquor
touched the lips of human greed
brushed against his sin
=I am the defenition of Haiku rust:p=
symphony
06-17-2007, 12:19 PM
:thumbs_up nice, symphony.. I have seen your blog and I must say, your Haikus are all brilliant and inspiring!
the monarch's liquor
touched the lips of human greed
brushed against his sin
=I am the defenition of Haiku rust:p=
Glad that u like my haikus. I remember starting off with posting haikus and cinquains with miscounted syllable orders in every thread when i first began participating in this forum a few weeks back (cuz thats what happens when u post without checking the first page containing the rules! :D ) Anyway, now that I'm 'catching on' to it, i'm finding it more fun and i must say i'm getting addicted to this forum, esp. the personal poetry section. :D
Brushed against his sin
tottering piles of infamy
crumpled upon his throne.
By the way, toni, I dont have a blog in the lit-net. Which blog were u talking about? the one in my.opera? if yes, how did u come across it?
kiz_paws
06-17-2007, 09:36 PM
Crumpled on his throne
the makeshift despot wearied
no one will listen...
[Uncle Lar, I hope you are doing well, haven't seen you here for a bit...] :)
autolycus
06-18-2007, 10:04 AM
no one will listen
tea and black ink by the lake
speak to the many
Pendragon
06-18-2007, 10:10 AM
who messed with ur poems?! :eek:
Oh, that. People never agree on syllable count, but then we all pronouce things differently. Had one I didn't see how it could possibly be off any way you pronounced the last line shortened. Que sera, sera!
Speak to the many
of wonder, power, glory:
But will they listen?
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/BlahBlah.gif
symphony
06-18-2007, 10:21 AM
but will they listen
to soft symphonies of peace
tuned with melodies?
littlewing53
06-18-2007, 12:13 PM
tuned with melodies
the notes rested quietly
smiling at the sounds
ktd222
06-18-2007, 12:21 PM
smiling at the sounds
made by blood spurting out from
my neighbor's small mouth
kiz_paws
06-18-2007, 12:54 PM
My neighbor's small mouth
did reveal a sad secret
we cried together
Pensive
06-18-2007, 03:42 PM
We cried together
The movie was tear-jerking
Then how could we laugh?
Momtaz
06-18-2007, 04:20 PM
How could we laugh?
After all we have seen
How sugar tastes saline?
while salt tastes sweet
symphony
06-18-2007, 05:15 PM
Momtaz, i see u did the same mistake as i did a few weeks ago... checking out the 1st page does the trick ;)
Then how could we laugh
while a child in rags worn out
was crying hungry?
MysticalWriter
06-18-2007, 10:49 PM
Was crying hungry,
The blood of him who died. Lo,
He gave you your life.
Hm, bad- I couldn't come up with much. I guess it would infer that the man died for you so that you can have a life (Ex. Soldier dying for his country?).
autolycus
06-19-2007, 05:39 AM
he gave you your life
four hands holding all the cards
bidding commences
Haven
06-19-2007, 06:29 AM
bidding commences
someone's earthly possessions
just a job lot now
Pendragon
06-19-2007, 09:50 AM
Just a job lot now,
got a bid over here, Guv'ner?
Pound and a tanner?
autolycus
06-19-2007, 01:08 PM
pound and a tanner
economics in water
a new world arrives
symphony
06-19-2007, 01:52 PM
a new world arrives
the old one bows out quietly--
nineteen fourty five
Unbeliever
06-19-2007, 04:10 PM
Nineteen forty five -
A brand new way of killing
Becomes all the rage.
littlewing53
06-19-2007, 07:11 PM
becomes all the rage
purple glittered hi heel boots
what will it be next
kiz_paws
06-19-2007, 07:39 PM
What will it be next
man's quest to be number one
in the cosmos vast...
symphony
06-20-2007, 12:58 AM
in the cosmos vast
hidden in this galaxy
somewhere lies this world...
motherhubbard
06-20-2007, 01:17 AM
somewhere lies this world
yet the harder I seek the
more lost I become
symphony
06-20-2007, 01:27 AM
more lost i become
whilst the world glares and points at
my befuddled self!
motherhubbard
06-20-2007, 01:30 AM
my befuddled self!
Now where have I put those keys?
Hurry up, we’re late!
MysticalWriter
06-20-2007, 01:50 AM
Hurry up, we're late!
The end is nearin' and still,
We stay carelessly.
symphony
06-20-2007, 02:22 AM
we stay carelessly,
footsteps coming closer still,
untill the doom comes...
symphony
06-20-2007, 02:36 AM
meh! that was the stupidest of haikus.
sorry i'll try another one
we stay carelessly
going about our daily lives
running aimlessly
ktd222
06-20-2007, 12:13 PM
running aimlessly
in search for air to grab - what
maddness is in that?
littlewing53
06-20-2007, 12:23 PM
madness is in that
jump over the precipice
abandon caution
abandon caution
wine whistled on from the chains
screaming blood and gore
=rusty=
symphony
06-20-2007, 01:10 PM
screaming blood and gore,
piercing soul, this is a place
whence ruth stays away.
=amateur=
:p
andave_ya
06-20-2007, 07:30 PM
Whence truth stays away
I fall, and groan, without Him
Who giveth me strength.
Him meaning Christ :nod:
That's the first time I've written a haiku!
symphony
06-20-2007, 09:22 PM
and its a damn good one! :) u clearly have talent, andya.
Who giveth me strength,
Wherefore hast thou left me sole?
Take me where thou art.
sorry i'm a total loser when it comes to archaic english :(
autolycus
06-20-2007, 10:36 PM
take me where thou art
yet in all seasons summer
places of the heart
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 01:54 AM
Places of the heart,
They be held within thy hands,
So, my love, take care.
Pensive
06-21-2007, 02:33 AM
So, my love, take care
Your life means a lot to some
Do you realize?
ktd222
06-21-2007, 03:57 AM
Do you realize
I just passed gas...in a jug:D
for you to inhale
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 03:58 AM
Do you realize?
The pain and sorrow you make,
Burns hard within me.
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 04:05 AM
Do you realize
I just passed gas...in a jug:D
for you to inhale
Ooops! I posted at the same time! haha...
Um, I'll do this one then =/
For you to inhale,
The true dying air of love,
Is grotesquely foul.
littlewing53
06-21-2007, 12:11 PM
is grotesquely foul
yesterday's meal left over
together we ate
motherhubbard
06-21-2007, 12:15 PM
together we ate
drank and were merry, but now
you are gone from me
andave_ya
06-21-2007, 12:38 PM
You are gone from me
I am left alone, undone,
why did you leave me?
motherhubbard
06-21-2007, 12:40 PM
why did you leave me
I thought you really liked me
things were going great
littlewing53
06-21-2007, 12:46 PM
things were going great
until i stubbed my big toe
pain screams without care
symphony
06-21-2007, 01:07 PM
pain screams without care
robes get stained with blood until
that last breath comes out.
my! i am totally addicted to these haiku and cinquain games! ^_^
littlewing53
06-21-2007, 02:57 PM
that last breathe comes out
waiting yet hopful for more
death meets another
symph...awesome...aint it cool..:D
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 03:21 PM
Death meets another,
The soul who is unwilling.
It runs to the next.
andave_ya
06-21-2007, 03:30 PM
It runs to the next
This day to another
I am content here.
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 03:46 PM
I am content here,
The Lord, He guideth me straight.
He assures my end.
andave_ya
06-21-2007, 03:47 PM
He assures my end
I rejoice in His great love
I do not deserve.
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 04:00 PM
I do not deserve,
I cannot withhold His Love,
Yet still- I feel shame.
andave_ya
06-21-2007, 04:02 PM
Yet still- I feel shame
He loves though I don't deserve
Why do I yet sin?
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 04:04 PM
Why do I yet sin?
Why does my soul feel anguish?
This burden called sin.
andave_ya
06-21-2007, 04:05 PM
This burden called sin
Destroys my soul entirely
He raises me up
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 04:08 PM
He raises me up,
I rebel and turn away,
Yet He still abides.
andave_ya
06-21-2007, 04:10 PM
Yet He abides,
As persevering as I
He teaches me love.
MysticalWriter
06-21-2007, 04:14 PM
He teaches me love,
He reveals me who I am,
"Why me Lord?" I ask.
littlewing53
06-21-2007, 08:13 PM
awesome haikus....amen...
why me lord i ask
willing and yet powerless
my spirit within
symphony
06-21-2007, 08:54 PM
my spirit within
ascends, spirited anew--
claws let go, at last
_JadeRain_
06-22-2007, 01:12 AM
Claws let go, at last
The lion begins to feed
The flesh of the feast
symphony
06-22-2007, 01:28 AM
the flesh of the feast
devouring the delicious
dainties, make a toast
_JadeRain_
06-22-2007, 01:32 AM
Dainties, make a toast
Vows for a new begining
Now the time resets
motherhubbard
06-22-2007, 01:35 AM
Now the time resets
you are free to start over
try not to screw up
MysticalWriter
06-22-2007, 02:23 AM
Try not to screw up,
I may want to have that sup,
That she cooked for me.
motherhubbard
06-22-2007, 08:49 AM
that she cooked for me
is a suprise, and she did
a really fine job
Pendragon
06-22-2007, 10:02 AM
a really fine job
exorcising the demons
that torment my soul
autolycus
06-22-2007, 10:52 AM
that torment my soul
is another flashy gem
ignorance is bliss
motherhubbard
06-22-2007, 10:59 AM
Ignorance is bliss
Must be some kind of genius
I feel pretty blue
symphony
06-22-2007, 12:21 PM
i feel pretty blue
cloud nine seems too far away
from where i now sway
littlewing53
06-22-2007, 01:01 PM
from where i now sway
the music in the wind sings
heart expands unfolds
Haven
06-22-2007, 01:05 PM
heart expands unfolds
to ask the question, lover
do you see me still?
symphony
06-22-2007, 01:13 PM
do u see me still?
for i'm no more here, my sigh
echoes in the air...
:wave: hey littlewing, welcome to the addiction again!! :thumbs_up
littlewing53
06-22-2007, 01:15 PM
do you see me still
my heart sings to you alone
undeclared outloud
littlewing53
06-22-2007, 01:16 PM
good morning symph..:D ..it is so delightful to write the haiku...
symphony
06-22-2007, 01:29 PM
morning :) (uhm its almost midnight in here though!)
hmm 2 haikus i see...
undeclared out loud
some things are better unsaid
sounds are sounds mere.
echoes in the air
comes back to haunt my nightmare
sounds are sounds mere.
littlewing53
06-22-2007, 01:43 PM
so enjoy yr haiku symph...inspiring....
sounds are sounds mere
unheard in morning silence
the soft singing bird
symphony
06-22-2007, 01:48 PM
thanks :)
the soft singing bird
could not have sung so sweetly
if u were not here
littlewing53
06-22-2007, 01:53 PM
if you were not here
the red flowers would not bloom
days would seem so long
symphony
06-22-2007, 02:02 PM
days would seem so long
chained hours dragging their feet
clocks stand reluctant.
anyway, cya littlewing, i'm off to sleep now *yawn*...
littlewing53
06-22-2007, 02:16 PM
clocks stand reluctant
time considers hesitates
forward backward still
MysticalWriter
06-22-2007, 04:44 PM
Forward, Backward still.
One step forward, two backwards.
This life seems so- flat.
symphony
06-23-2007, 02:41 AM
this life seems so flat
squared by the daily duties
a routine ho-hum.
motherhubbard
06-23-2007, 02:49 AM
A routine ho-hum
Chief cook and bottle washer
Is there more to life
symphony
06-23-2007, 02:53 AM
is there more to life
than duty, work, forbearance,
before death hits us?
motherhubbard
06-23-2007, 06:48 AM
before death hits us
let us play and laugh and love
live while you still can
symphony
06-23-2007, 07:17 AM
Live while you still can,
Devour the delicacies,
Let the sun warm you.
Pendragon
06-23-2007, 10:12 AM
let the sun warm you
the starfish lining shoreline
twinkle under moon....
Haven
06-23-2007, 04:00 PM
twinkle under moon
star bright Venus is declared
the love light of June
MysticalWriter
06-23-2007, 04:14 PM
The Love light of June,
Wonderous in its beauty,
Glares brightly on us.
Pensive
06-23-2007, 05:01 PM
Glares brightly on us
This flower in early spring
Quite attracting us
Enchanted
06-23-2007, 05:05 PM
Quite attracting us
are the amorphous clouds that
sweep us off our feet.
kathycf
06-23-2007, 05:53 PM
Sweeps us off our feet
like an old time movie
dancing on dust
kiz_paws
06-23-2007, 07:59 PM
let the sun warm you
the starfish lining shoreline
twinkle under moon....
Ooooo, nice one, Pen!
Dancing on dust
the meadow fairies gather
for their morning tea...
ktd222
06-23-2007, 11:23 PM
for their morning tea
this dummy and his friend brought
an E and an A
_JadeRain_
06-23-2007, 11:43 PM
An E and an A
Notes dance up and down the scale
Music is living
Bebbin
06-24-2007, 12:14 AM
Music is living
The sound is like a fresh breeze
A sense of relief
andave_ya
06-24-2007, 12:35 AM
A sense of relief
floods my soul, brings peace
As Morpheus comes.
(Morpheus as in wooing Morpheus, NOT Morpheus from the Matrix, lol!)
autolycus
06-24-2007, 08:39 AM
as morpheus comes
one considers chemistry
and heroism
symphony
06-24-2007, 08:50 AM
And heroism,
as the years vaporise,
shines in brighter sparks.
Pendragon
06-24-2007, 09:23 AM
shines in brighter sparks,
it's the moon's night on the town
stars bow down in awe...
Enchanted
06-24-2007, 12:48 PM
Stars bow down in awe
to the awkward yet vital
role of Fifth Business...
autolycus
06-24-2007, 12:55 PM
role of fifth business
stately report commandment
amendment silence
Haven
06-24-2007, 05:54 PM
amendment silence
sweet sleep; Morpheus your arms
let me nestle there
kilted exile
06-24-2007, 06:56 PM
Let me nestle there
Among the toffee crisp bars
nestle or Nestle
Haven
06-24-2007, 07:25 PM
Oy Shrek, your PM is full... Liked your blog, :lol:
nestle or Nestle
one succours, one steals your teeth
Dentists hate Nestle
kilted exile
06-24-2007, 09:11 PM
Dentists hate Nestle
Dentists spoil all kids fun
Lets kill the dentists
andave_ya
06-25-2007, 12:22 AM
Let's kill the dentists
I'm sure Niamh would agree with me
They hurt like crazy!
:p that was fun.
BroadwayBaby
06-25-2007, 01:27 AM
they hurt like crazy!
the pains of love's fateful death...
Aphrodite help...
atiguhya padma
06-25-2007, 11:42 AM
Aphrodite help....
Hunger overwhelms my heart
Dizzyingly sick
Enchanted
06-25-2007, 06:29 PM
Dizzyingly sick
is the rose that dies quietly
in the marshy bog
autolycus
06-26-2007, 01:02 AM
in the marshy bog
the accident of noel
stops online journal
kiz_paws
06-26-2007, 01:46 AM
stops online journal
this sentiment of dentists
alas poor Niamh
we knew the dear well
when last we heard her teeth ached
and revenge was sought?
But no, this Irish
lass maintained her cheerful ways
which makes us all smile :)
Pensive
06-26-2007, 02:25 AM
Which makes us all smile
Are talks of little children
When are not weeping!
Pendragon
06-26-2007, 09:37 AM
when are not weeping,
holes in the floor of heaven,
there is no rainbow....
Enchanted
06-26-2007, 11:03 AM
There is no rainbow;
there are only pots of gold
beneath an elf's feet.
autolycus
06-26-2007, 12:44 PM
beneath an elf's feet
a thousand years of dead leaves
the book of ages
Pensive
06-26-2007, 12:46 PM
The book of ages
Commits suicide on treatment
It receives from men
Enchanted
06-26-2007, 01:45 PM
It receives from men
sound and fury, yet conveys
nothing...
Il Penseroso
06-26-2007, 03:24 PM
conveying nothing
words wrap trickling streams around
flapping tree shadows.
littlewing53
06-26-2007, 04:04 PM
flapping tree shadows
quietly singing a tune
merrily noted
Enchanted
06-26-2007, 07:17 PM
merrily noted
is your service towards my
very noble cause.
Pendragon
06-26-2007, 07:23 PM
very noble cause
Medical Doctors fulfill--
I am alright, guys!
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Astronat.gif
andave_ya
06-26-2007, 07:25 PM
I am alright, guys!
You may have fallen on me
Mishap forgiven.
Enchanted
06-26-2007, 07:36 PM
mishap forgiven?
or a permanent grudge held?
nothing is certain...
symphony
06-27-2007, 12:56 AM
Nothing is certain,
which seems to be the problem
once you've given up.
Pendragon
06-27-2007, 09:08 AM
once you've given up
might as well call The Reaper,
life becomes worthless...
life becomes worthless
unless you choose to fight on
Devil take hindmost...
kiz_paws
06-27-2007, 10:54 AM
very noble cause
Medical Doctors fulfill--
I am alright, guys!
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Astronat.gif
This is such good news
you really had me worried
the poet smiles on...
[YAY!] :thumbs_up
Devil take hindmost...
we forget ourselves sometimes
and give in to wiles..
littlewing53
06-27-2007, 11:49 AM
the poet smiles on
another day to write on
pen in hand engaged
atiguhya padma
06-28-2007, 04:53 AM
Pen in hand engaged,
Cures not the world of beliefs
Dangerous and false
Dangerous and false
spiders' sticky web of lies
silent deadly trap
Pendragon
06-28-2007, 10:44 AM
silent deadly trap,
tongue deadly poison spreads--
enticing many
Haven
06-28-2007, 12:23 PM
enticing many
with slick flick of sticky tongue
frog satiated
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