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mazHur
06-15-2008, 07:43 PM
in space
there is no life
just one heaven and hell
pass through cosmic black holes first to
reach them.

Il Penseroso
06-16-2008, 12:42 AM
reach them,
touch to escape
the sound ringing, light rolled
around each gapless stone, witness
their form

alakungfu
06-16-2008, 04:27 AM
their form
rejects the rule
of space and timeliness
for mutually culled response
in kind

CdnReader
06-16-2008, 11:03 AM
in kind
replies, polite
words, unengaging smile,
a desperation of motives
drives me

ampoule
06-16-2008, 04:02 PM
drives me
betrayed message
this sinister touching
the abnormal definitions
you give

firefangled
06-16-2008, 05:40 PM
you give
me goose bumps with that look,
makes me honk and fly like a bird
gone wild

CdnReader
06-16-2008, 06:25 PM
gone wild
it's that finger-
in-the-socket look with
hair standing on end, a starburst
aura

ampoule
06-17-2008, 08:56 AM
aura
radiating
I so want to touch it
but no, what if it bursts like a
bubble

qimissung
06-17-2008, 11:45 PM
bubble,
dream holder, smile
giver, rainbow maker,
sail away on your fantastic
journey

Il Penseroso
06-18-2008, 12:04 AM
journey
between white stars,
stale bulbs staring, the past
a static print from which is splashed
bodies

firefangled
06-18-2008, 08:03 AM
bodies,
the Dollmaker
smiles at our ambition,
our finding within each secret
secrets

CdnReader
06-18-2008, 10:19 AM
secrets
kept in boxes,
like bright jewels of thought,
treasures of who I am, pried from
my fists

qimissung
06-18-2008, 11:30 AM
I just love this one, CdnReader.

qimissung
06-18-2008, 11:56 AM
my fists
grasp my rage
pummel witless heaven
danger hears the siren song, leaps
I'm lost

asilef73
06-19-2008, 02:08 AM
I'm lost
in this morass
of philosophical
questions, bereft of tangible
answers

firefangled
06-19-2008, 03:46 AM
answers
always the same
hammer me like a blade
temper me and inscribe my soul
shine me

asilef73
06-19-2008, 02:34 PM
"shine me"
offered sweet Spoon.
dulcet innuendo
made to Dish as Cow jumped over
the moon.

mazHur
06-20-2008, 07:16 PM
the moon
shines on the sky
a galaxy of stars
approaches from all around to
own it

Smoogles
06-21-2008, 02:37 AM
own it
my possessions
always getting me where
my greed leads me, along a road
endless

mazHur
06-21-2008, 02:44 AM
endless
journey begins
when two hearts fall in love
destination doesn't matter
for them

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:57 AM
for them
that waste their time
with unrequited love
please be wiser than i and just
let go

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:07 AM
let go
trifling matters
taken seriously
ruin life by sucking life out
of it

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:21 AM
of it
i dare not speak
the overwhelming urge
to love engulfs my heart and it
consumes

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:27 AM
consumes
by full measure
nectar from the flowers
the hungry moth is full of lust
for buds

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:29 AM
of it
i dare not speak
the overwhelming urge
to love engulfs my heart and it
consumes

hey, this was a good one,,,I liked it !
chow!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:34 AM
for buds
moths should not crave.
mature flowers are where
the sweetest nectar lays ripe for
taking.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:39 AM
for buds
moths should not crave.
mature flowers are where
the sweetest nectar lays ripe for
taking.

taking
the nectar out
of mature flowers is
fine but every flower in bud
must bloom!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:45 AM
taking
the nectar out
of mature flowers is
fine but every flower in bud
must bloom!

:lol: fair enough.

must bloom
to bear its fruit
or wither away in
slow, necrotic death. love is hard
to grow.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:50 AM
to grow
is not loves goal;
love is love all the time
if it changes it is not love
take care!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:03 AM
take care
of who you trust
with the delicate truths
of your hopes and fears. you may be
betrayed.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:07 AM
betrayed
by my own life
I may be but one thing
is sure that your lasting partner
is death

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:12 AM
is death
coming to call
with his bony fingers
outstretched for the stealing of my
short life?

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:19 AM
short life
or a life long
all suffer the same fate
Heart's desires never get fulfilled
Never!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:25 AM
never
is such a strong
word. i will lose all faith
if you cannot temper it with
maybe.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 05:31 AM
maybe
I was erring
heart's desires may come true
if your faith is strong and your heart
passioned

asilef73
06-21-2008, 05:39 AM
passioned
soul i am not
lacking. patience is my
missing trait. elusive love seems
to me.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 10:08 AM
to me
what's important
may not be so for you
yet our hearts beat with the same
rhythm !

asilef73
06-21-2008, 01:50 PM
rhythm,
an important
aspect in heartbeats, but
passion is the force that makes your
heart pound

mazHur
06-21-2008, 02:48 PM
heart pound
at the sight of
that beautiful maiden
when she unveils like Cleopatra
her face !

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:28 PM
her face,
in dewy youth,
unblemished new cream. who
would not love her perfection and
beauty?

mazHur
06-21-2008, 03:34 PM
beauty,
is like a rose
that blooms in spring for the
pleasure of nectar-sucking moths
then fades

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:39 PM
nectar-sucking moths again is it?

then fades
dropping petals
and releasing seeds to
carry on the wind. beauty starts
anew.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 03:43 PM
anew
shall we discuss
the matters of heart's joy
the problems of aging body,
Or what?

asilef73
06-21-2008, 03:47 PM
or what
would you prefer?
mystery lies in both
aging and in joy. tell me what
you want.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 03:53 PM
or what
would you prefer?
mystery lies in both
aging and in joy. tell me what
you want.

you want
exactly what
I had been looking for
a cocktail of beauty and age
to drink;) :)

ampoule
06-21-2008, 03:58 PM
for buds
moths should not crave.
mature flowers are where
the sweetest nectar lays ripe for
taking.


Exactly!!

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:02 PM
Exactly!!

Welcome, Lady !

asilef73
06-21-2008, 04:04 PM
to drink
in your deep sighs
and breathe your every breath
i would sacrifice all. i'm held
captive.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 04:10 PM
captive
thou are not in
Love's world two hearts beat
together in total freedom
of self

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:03 PM
of self
i must give more
to prove my worth of love.
why do i always seem to give,
not take?

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:07 PM
not take
a kiss for free
nor give a kiss for free
but in the realm of heart givers
take lead!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:15 PM
take lead?
dear, have i not?
recall the day we met...
didn't you discern the heart i
gave you?

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:20 PM
gave you
not me my heart
in return for your heart?
Why thou complaineth now , my dear,
kiss me!

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:27 PM
kiss me
you sweet young fool!
i swear to not reject
your tender advances bravely
put forth.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:31 PM
put forth
whatever you
are hiding in your blob
of heart so I can put my soul
in there

asilef73
06-21-2008, 07:37 PM
in there
your soul resides!
how is it you did not
miss what took me so long to steal
from you?

mazHur
06-21-2008, 07:55 PM
from you
came the message
the messenger told me
'Sir, how did you lose your heart to
my dame''?

asilef73
06-21-2008, 08:13 PM
my dame
or my sire
bestowed upon me the
impulse for dreaming of love meant
to be

mazHur
06-21-2008, 08:20 PM
to be
in your lover's arms
is gaining paradise
on this terrestrial patch of
ugly gloom

asilef73
06-21-2008, 08:39 PM
:) i know you are sleep deprived. sleep well, Maz!

ugly gloom
can be dispelled
by trading words with
me. we will paint a world where love
rules all.

mazHur
06-21-2008, 09:07 PM
rules all
with equal hand
True love is willful loss
a sacrifice for another
and more

asilef73
06-22-2008, 05:42 AM
and more
that is given
without resentment. love
is a selfless act when in its
best form.

mazHur
06-22-2008, 05:52 AM
best form
of Love is Love
love for love sake they say
love for the sake of banal thing's
mere lust

asilef73
06-22-2008, 06:22 AM
mere lust
can cause a wise
man to do foolish things.
judgment impaired for a moments
pleasure.

mazHur
06-22-2008, 06:32 AM
pleasure
of seeing you
may not be as good as
keep loving an unseen goddess
for'vr!

asilef73
06-22-2008, 06:48 AM
hey! is for'vr an actual abbreviation or are you cheating? :lol:

for'vr
is a long time
to love the unseen and
goddesses demand worship and
homage

mazHur
06-22-2008, 07:04 AM
Well, the correct form may be different such as forev'r or bla bla but such contractions have been used by poets to meet their rhythmic requirements

homage
has to be paid
by the weak and fragile
to the powerful without any
demur

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 08:00 AM
demur
as with a bud
a butterfly hastens
to choose a more mature bloom to
pander

mazHur
06-22-2008, 08:25 AM
pander
why? The budding
flower attracts the moth
more than any flower in bloom
to bloom

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 11:11 AM
to bloom
at an early
stage, when to spread your wings
and take to the friendly skies thrown
ariight

mazHur
06-22-2008, 11:16 AM
aright
on her four feet
falls the cat on the ground
or the monkey on his two legs
aright!

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 11:21 AM
I think mazHur you would have preferred if I answered your haiku

to bloom
as to which bloom
moth roughshod crusading
through reveries of rapturous
riot

mazHur
06-22-2008, 11:25 AM
It's just a game,,,, friend!

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 11:26 AM
Sorry, mazHur

aright
Woe, wrong, I sing
this song to pass away
the time of day and gravely say
"S'aright!"

mazHur
06-22-2008, 11:30 AM
"S'aright!"
well said, my friend,
when the heart misses beat
when circulation has slowed down
all's dull

asilef73
06-22-2008, 01:13 PM
all's dull
when routine has
established itself in
all life's aspects. variety
is spice.

mazHur
06-22-2008, 01:53 PM
is spice
too hard to find?
Fetch some from the blue sea
some from the garden, some from hills
Rejoice!

firefangled
06-22-2008, 02:36 PM
Rejoice!
with a whisper,
bouillabaisse, bisque, potage
cucumber, vichyssoise, Ah!
saffron

Oniw17
06-22-2008, 02:36 PM
rejoice
take what you want
communal luxuries
like the amish or like the tribes
survive

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 02:40 PM
saffron
circumscribing
a dish of rice into
a signature-rouxed recipe
for two

survive
in pairs, two heads
together battling the odds
and end up winning the raw deal
of stakes

asilef73
06-22-2008, 03:20 PM
for two
the moon shines low
across the shadowed leaves
atmosphere of romance in the
garden

of stakes
and twine, water
schedules, growing seeds
and time must you be possessed to
garden

Oniw17
06-22-2008, 04:06 PM
garden
growing ideas
seeds of deceit sprout roots
Knowledge does mean paranoia
protect

asilef73
06-22-2008, 04:14 PM
protect
your tender heart
with a mask of jaded
visage. you are much safer on
your own.

mazHur
06-22-2008, 04:49 PM
your own
business is what
you are supposed to care
about; let God manage His own
affairs

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 04:55 PM
your own
as now, as then
fruits of restitution
shabby souvenirs to hollow
by heart

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 04:59 PM
affairs
of the frail heart
transported parcel post
to the ends of the potently
heartless

mazHur
06-22-2008, 05:01 PM
by heart
she remembered
moments of those joyous
days when moon envied her beauty
unique

alakungfu
06-22-2008, 08:36 PM
unique
the figuring
of a visage of
rare vintage shown fair reflection
in time

mazHur
06-22-2008, 08:42 PM
in time
all is going
to be well; hand in hand,
you and I will roam the blue skies
entwined

asilef73
06-22-2008, 10:15 PM
entwined
my fingers in
your hair, silken tendrils
rubbing against raw nerves. i am
obsessed.

Oniw17
06-23-2008, 04:50 AM
Obsessed
With solitude
Turn inward, rays recede
See the ground where you plant your seed
Reflect

ampoule
06-23-2008, 07:08 AM
reflect
think long and hard
the pictures of your love
riding, coming to your rescue
blades drawn

Oniw17
06-23-2008, 09:11 AM
Blades drawn
At the ready
Pen's tucked, smashing dead dreams
They don't know he's fast and deadly
Prepared

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 09:27 AM
prepared
I stand my ground
sword at the ready, wrists firm,
the challenge is laid, and I am
unfazed.

ampoule
06-23-2008, 10:48 AM
unfazed
her glaring eyes
steam the tendrils hanging
she pushes them away and stands
erect

alakungfu
06-23-2008, 01:12 PM
erect
denying the
confluence of trial
and error, rejecting failure
in fact

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 04:16 PM
in fact
there is no truth
separate from feelings
and reactions, a personal
defect

mazHur
06-23-2008, 04:39 PM
defect
may be perceived
even in the freshest rose
in music lisp with impaled hands
in us

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 04:43 PM
in us
will you ever
find the serene comfort
of a quiet life, relaxed and
happy?

mazHur
06-23-2008, 04:47 PM
happy?
No, I am not
a rose plucked from the bough
amidst spring and laid over the
dead, Oh!

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 04:49 PM
dead, oh
the dead will walk
again, despite your fears,
zombies and vampires....will you be
ready?

mazHur
06-23-2008, 04:52 PM
ready?
tell me who isn't?
a day will come when all
yes all would be over,zombies
and us

firefangled
06-23-2008, 05:33 PM
and us,
what then happens
to us - our energy?
God hides, even in our despair
and fear

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 05:42 PM
and fear
will cover us
all, like a grey sheet of
cold rain, dripping down the back of
your neck

mazHur
06-23-2008, 05:44 PM
and fear
not fear for fear's
sake; for fearing fear is
worse than fear itself; for God's sake
have heart

asilef73
06-23-2008, 07:08 PM
have heart,
my dearest friend,
love will overwhelm you
when you find your match. she will be
flawless.

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 07:17 PM
flawless
turning in the
bright sun, glinting, breathless,
shining jewel of love offered
freely

mazHur
06-23-2008, 08:02 PM
freely?
There is no such
thing as a free lunch in
the world. Earning love freely is
rare chance

CdnReader
06-23-2008, 10:44 PM
rare chance
a chance to dance
give me your hand, follow
me into a spun daylight trance
spin me

firefangled
06-24-2008, 12:02 AM
spin me
you will I know,
rain rippled clay dirt road,
walk me down there so long ago
again

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 07:50 AM
again,
cost yet too dear,
recognition declined,
dross lassitude spiraled into
morass

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 10:32 AM
morass
deeply held in
no way up, no way out
all helping hands have disappeared
help me

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 03:27 PM
help me
to my reward,
invested charity
drawn in times of uncertainty from
loose change

mazHur
06-24-2008, 03:35 PM
help me
to my reward,
invested charity
drawn in times of uncertainty from
loose change

good one, Ala!

loose change
scattered here and
there clinking like cymbals
Ah, my life is minted like a
fake coin

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 03:49 PM
nice one yourself mazHur,

fake coin
a plate for a
tender destiny of
denial and conquer in the
real world

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 03:51 PM
fake coin
passed between hands
fine manipulation
prestidigitation process
magic!

real world
nipping at heels
no more imagining
no more daydreaming, time to get
busy

mazHur
06-24-2008, 03:53 PM
real world
lies beyond stars
but, hold on! Are the stars
really what they appear to be
I doubt

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 04:03 PM
I doubt
that you can know
what monsters lurk deep in
my darkest places... ready to
jump out!

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 04:03 PM
I doubt
that my words will
be remembered thiugh I
trust that they still meant something at
the time

mazHur
06-24-2008, 04:07 PM
jump out!
of your black holes
proceed to the cosmos
someone might be waiting for you
up there

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 04:09 PM
up there
in that big blue
expanse of beautiful
sky, my love for you unrestrained
let loose

mazHur
06-24-2008, 04:09 PM
the time
would decide what
is true and what is false
we cannot be our own judge
mind it!

mazHur
06-24-2008, 04:11 PM
let loose
not your feelings
high, I'm but a tiny
bit of hunch back, ugly and dark
mind it!

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 04:14 PM
up there
in the recessed
star nebula, vessel
for erupting satellites. Wrung
vista!

CdnReader
06-24-2008, 04:14 PM
mind it
and then grind it
i can hardly find it
in the deepest darkness mine it
diamond!

vista
stretched beyond the
horizon, greens and blues
violets, too.... and then coral-hued
sunsets

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 04:18 PM
mind it
till the cows come
home and then hie yourself
to the watering hole, shake a
trickle

alakungfu
06-24-2008, 04:22 PM
diamond
clarity of
preference, hued, in the
tradition of Oriental
princes

asilef73
06-24-2008, 10:02 PM
hmmmmm. i'm picking trickle

trickle
through my fingers
and pool about my feet.
feather-light grains of sand that i
can't grasp

ampoule
06-25-2008, 08:23 AM
can't grasp
my emotions
this animal instinct
could easily bring us trouble
take care

lucidnightmares
06-25-2008, 11:37 AM
take care
of what you have
it can all slip away
with just one moment of despair
forgive...

asilef73
06-25-2008, 08:34 PM
forgive
my present lack
of discretion. i know
my eyes betray me. they drink your
presence.

mazHur
06-26-2008, 02:33 PM
presence
broke the suspense
of my love for those eyes
all that I could see in them was
not me

CdnReader
06-26-2008, 02:39 PM
not me
floating backwards
running my fingers through
beaded doors... jangling my entrance
annoyed

mazHur
06-26-2008, 02:49 PM
annoyed
at what he said
she carped at him at once:
'Go and wipe your nose; show me not
your face!'

CdnReader
06-26-2008, 03:13 PM
your face
swimming in my
memories, watery
visions of a mere liquid past
succumbed

mazHur
06-26-2008, 03:57 PM
succumbed
to the pressure
of the gust of gentle wind
roses spread their petals in joy
of spring

CdnReader
06-26-2008, 07:13 PM
of spring
earth's renewal
sprouts reaching for the blue,
tendrils of green, spiralling up
climb me

mazHur
06-26-2008, 07:18 PM
climb me
deem it as a
ladder leading to the
moon i have built a house of love
for you

CdnReader
06-27-2008, 12:55 AM
for you
i could breathe deep
inhaling your being
into me, becoming you, and
joining

qimissung
06-27-2008, 04:13 PM
joining
pieces of wood
together seamlessly
tender carpenter of my heart's
desire

CdnReader
06-27-2008, 04:16 PM
desire
is nothing but
wants and needs run amok
listen to what i ask of you
relent

ampoule
06-27-2008, 06:37 PM
relent
touch my Lamb's Ear
the bees will not hurt you
everyone needs your tenderness
me too

CdnReader
06-28-2008, 01:14 AM
me too
cogitating
dusty gears, whirring quick,
gathering pieces of my brain
in place

asilef73
06-29-2008, 02:51 PM
in place.
you have plastered
us together with our
same sticky secret; making me
peaceful.

mazHur
06-29-2008, 03:11 PM
peaceful
days are over
tranquil nights are no more
we are under the torrents of
strong love

CdnReader
06-29-2008, 03:28 PM
strong love
flexible yet
unbending....relenting
in time for forgiveness, steadfast
stand still

asilef73
06-29-2008, 03:43 PM
stand still.
breathe in, breathe out.
ground yourself in present.
there is time yet to make yourself
fulfilled.

ampoule
06-29-2008, 08:25 PM
fulfilled
filled full of what
my ego up to here
makes me sick of myself and yet
I preen

mazHur
06-29-2008, 08:35 PM
I preen
feathers and fur
of the monster of my
ego with my beak and tongue to
be free

CdnReader
06-29-2008, 10:39 PM
be free
of the shackles
that bind you to this earth
fly above your inhibitions
let go

ampoule
07-01-2008, 11:31 AM
let go
please don't fight it
stop thrashing around so
just lie back upon the water
and float

mazHur
07-01-2008, 11:35 AM
and float
like a dead corpse
in the Dead Sea of Life
Or keep on moving your hands and
feet. Swim!

ampoule
07-01-2008, 12:15 PM
Hmmm...you made a tough one mazHur. :)

feet. Swim!
hands. Kick! breathe in
breathe out, without a doubt
tread this water lightly, just come
closer

mazHur
07-01-2008, 01:01 PM
Hmmm...you made a tough one mazHur. :)

feet. Swim!
hands. Kick! breathe in
breathe out, without a doubt
tread this water lightly, just come
closer

HEY, you simply 'knocked' it down! good catch !

closer
as you bring your
eyes to mine you will get
lost in a sea of Unity-
love-bound

CdnReader
07-01-2008, 03:19 PM
love-bound
in your deep pools
my ankles tied to the
bottom....cannot rise....no breathing
allowed

mazHur
07-01-2008, 03:29 PM
allowed
to serve your heart
I will decorate it
with the roses of my deep love
in bloom

CdnReader
07-01-2008, 03:57 PM
in bloom
rosy cheeks shine
a smile as wide as the
Mississippi....eyes glinting with
mischief

mazHur
07-01-2008, 04:01 PM
mischief
is it not than
what? Your smile is so big
bigger than a sky asunder
My God!

CdnReader
07-01-2008, 04:02 PM
My God
has swords and spears
to defeat enemies.
Wouldn't it be better to just
play chess?

mazHur
07-01-2008, 04:07 PM
play chess
the game of the
kings. Pawns,rooks,baron and the
queen die one after another;
King smiles

CdnReader
07-01-2008, 05:10 PM
king smiles
library burns
nothing but blackened beams
timbers crashing down around us
books lost

mazHur
07-01-2008, 05:17 PM
books lost
in cyberspace
hard to read on the screen
hard to scribble notes with your pen
no ink

CdnReader
07-01-2008, 05:20 PM
no ink
can ever change
the way history is
written by the victors and the
strongest

mazHur
07-01-2008, 05:23 PM
strongest
will never learn
from history and in their
whims try to alter history
by force

alakungfu
07-02-2008, 03:31 AM
by force
perchance by hest
luminous quality
imprinted oh the very soul
supplants

ampoule
07-02-2008, 09:01 AM
supplants
I won't allow
my sword is at his chin
backwards he steps to the plank's end
you're safe

qimissung
07-02-2008, 12:51 PM
you're safe
from bitter exile,
from poverty's fierce kiss
and calamity's tight embrace.
You're home.

CdnReader
07-02-2008, 06:30 PM
You're home
and I'm still here.
Will we ever meet in
the mists of evening, when shadows
lengthen?

mazHur
07-02-2008, 06:44 PM
lengthen
not the journey
of love by your short steps
walk with me swiftly hand in hand
cut short

asilef73
07-02-2008, 09:48 PM
cut short
again; feelings
that are never going
to be realized except in
your dreams.

qimissung
07-02-2008, 11:01 PM
your dreams
knocking at my
dreams' door, blithely soaring,
holding hands for ageless eons
we love

CdnReader
07-03-2008, 12:03 AM
we love
those who love us
near-perfect symmetry
flowing between our bodies and
dancing

asilef73
07-03-2008, 12:54 AM
dancing
down the same path.
always oblivious.
deluded by this illusion
before.

Xyrus
07-03-2008, 05:09 AM
before,
you knew me well--
your heart beats so clearly
In your pretty pink bosom's core
No more

alakungfu
07-03-2008, 05:44 AM
no more
the grind of stock
and trade, my hearth belies
the toll that toil has taken on
my nerve

ampoule
07-03-2008, 08:05 AM
my nerve
is on the edge
you better hold your breath
watch me tiptoe on that taut line
look out!

CdnReader
07-03-2008, 01:58 PM
look out
the chance to fly,
the opportunity
to live life high above the clouds....
toss me!

mazHur
07-03-2008, 05:58 PM
toss me
as you may like
I'm a little blob
of flesh in the hands of your eyes
toss me!

CdnReader
07-03-2008, 06:07 PM
toss me
o'er your shoulder
'tis good luck, they all say,
like salt strewn behind you...path of
crystals

mazHur
07-03-2008, 06:11 PM
crystals
of white sugar
are not as sweet as the
gentle kiss of some rosy lips
I love

CdnReader
07-03-2008, 06:13 PM
I love
marmalade on
toast, pepperoni and
mushroom pizza, and a glass of
red wine

mazHur
07-03-2008, 06:16 PM
red wine
isn't as red
as the blood which runs in
my veins at the slightest thought of
my love!

alakungfu
07-03-2008, 07:57 PM
my love
my ribald wretch
the Adam for my apple
I'll never get over the ways
you smile

qimissung
07-03-2008, 10:37 PM
clever, ala!

CdnReader
07-03-2008, 11:02 PM
you smile
and i melt in
the puddle of your eyes
absorbed by your being and thrown
sideways

qimissung
07-03-2008, 11:36 PM
sideways
out of kilter
skewed, I tumble, roiled
in the open sea of your love
centered

CdnReader
07-04-2008, 03:15 PM
centered
in my being,
eyes focused on middle
from where all goodness arises
accept

mazHur
07-04-2008, 06:31 PM
accept
that earth is round
accept that sun rises from
the east and sets in the far west
accept

qimissung
07-04-2008, 06:53 PM
accept,
evil exists,
goodness can not prevail,
And love only an illusion~
never.

CdnReader
07-04-2008, 06:57 PM
never
let go of me,
even though the winds blow
from the north, and the sun burns holes
above

mazHur
07-04-2008, 07:04 PM
above
the clouds it flies
the golden eagle has
no fear of wetting from rain and
falling

CdnReader
07-04-2008, 07:09 PM
falling
through the rain-filled
never-ending sky, and
no parachute can save me now
catch me!

mazHur
07-04-2008, 07:17 PM
catch me!
I heard her say
but how can I catch her
she is too bulky for my lap
my cat!

CdnReader
07-04-2008, 07:54 PM
my cat
drizzles long white
hair on every surface
in sight.... she needs a better hair
stylist!

mazHur
07-04-2008, 08:47 PM
stylist
can't help your cat
from shedding her hair all
around; better get a new cat
from Siam!

CdnReader
07-04-2008, 09:41 PM
from Siam
i ordered jam
blackberry and ginger
put it on my toast, and dreamed of
the east

Page Sniffer
07-04-2008, 11:38 PM
The East
urns dripping tall
with rose kiss, hug berry
and mint starry night swirl -- you'll love
next Fall.

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 12:11 AM
next fall
we'll head elsewhere
Paris, maybe, to walk
along the Seine, or Venice's
canals

asilef73
07-05-2008, 02:28 AM
canals,
filled to bursting
with springs heavy downpour,
curl among hills fraught with tender
new green

Page Sniffer
07-05-2008, 02:34 AM
New green
along the banks.
Or perhaps we'll read Yeats
in Washington Square, while doves coo
hopeful...

qimissung
07-05-2008, 12:00 PM
hopeful...
wizard believe
you can cast a spell and
change these unlovely stones into
beauty

mazHur
07-05-2008, 12:12 PM
beauty
draws me nearer
not to you but your mind
you may be white, black or brown
or dun

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 02:29 PM
or dun
or tan or sand,
all these colours that are
neutrally bound by the spectrum
of light

Page Sniffer
07-05-2008, 02:42 PM
Of light,
that sparkles in
the eyes of an ardvaark.
Smitten by jams; subway horns and
moon jazz.

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 03:23 PM
moon jazz
saxophones blare
a mournful wail into
a dark lunar night.... will you dance
with me?

mazHur
07-05-2008, 03:28 PM
with me
she came to the
discotheque but soon left
to dance with an old sickly man
My God!

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 03:32 PM
My God!
What was with that?
She disapproved of your hat?
Your tie? Your hairstyle? What was she
thinking?

mazHur
07-05-2008, 03:46 PM
thinking
about your gait
makes me stagger like a
drunk who had sipped love from your eyes
wholesale

alakungfu
07-05-2008, 04:01 PM
wholesale
from the beds of
drowzy flower petals,
reserved seeds of good intent as
compost

mazHur
07-05-2008, 04:04 PM
compost
spread all over
the cemetery was
nothing but the blood and flesh of
flowers

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 04:57 PM
flowers
in shades of love
blooming in every thin
crevice of a heart's device and
bereft

mazHur
07-05-2008, 05:07 PM
bereft
of its color
fragrance and gorgeousness
a rose is but like crumpled waned
paper!

Page Sniffer
07-05-2008, 05:38 PM
Paper!
Words written, words
said; both cut deep as do
words both carelessly and fully
pondered.

mazHur
07-05-2008, 06:03 PM
pondered
whole night and day
the clouds covered the sky
and all in it like a shroud set
on dead

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 06:33 PM
on dead
memories grow
new ideas, new thoughts,
new philosophies to take us
higher

mazHur
07-05-2008, 06:36 PM
higher
up in the sky
there are heaven and hell
wonder what made god keep them
so far

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 07:04 PM
so far
over oceans
and round about the poles
this massive earthscape twirling through
the days

mazHur
07-05-2008, 07:15 PM
the days
belong to you
you own the nights as well
it's my poor heart that you disown
stealing

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 07:47 PM
stealing
away the light
moon-shadows creeping ever
closer to horizon's sharp edge
delayed

mazHur
07-05-2008, 08:10 PM
delayed
flight of love took
off for the moon with the
speed of light until it landed
safely

CdnReader
07-05-2008, 08:24 PM
safely
guided through the
harrowing shallows of
the everglades, watching out for
'gators

mazHur
07-05-2008, 08:35 PM
gators
and crocodiles
have spiny backs not fit
for riding on;get on the horse
and flee!

ampoule
07-05-2008, 10:43 PM
and flee!
I wait for thee
to help you free your need
your wants and your desires I grant
thank me

CdnReader
07-06-2008, 01:24 AM
thank me
in the morning
when the sun has risen
and your eyes are still glowing with
desire

asilef73
07-06-2008, 01:43 AM
desire
is a tricky
thing to shackle. it has
a tendency of eluding
these chains.

mazHur
07-06-2008, 11:01 AM
these chains
must be broken
time and space should not be
allowed to hinder our love
progress

symphony
07-06-2008, 11:16 AM
progress
has its issues:
chance one at a time and
wait for the next, watch your coffee grow
colder...

Oniw17
07-06-2008, 12:04 PM
colder
moves much slower
When ice looks like boulders,
glacier walls melt and flood over
sober

mazHur
07-06-2008, 12:36 PM
sober
people around
have no business in a
pub; either they should drink or leave
at once

CdnReader
07-06-2008, 01:25 PM
at once
life seems little
more than a blip on the
screen of the universe and i'm
left out

alakungfu
07-06-2008, 01:27 PM
at once
at rainbow's end
as soon as I wake up
winsome chances will surface in
tandem

qimissung
07-06-2008, 07:09 PM
tandem
thoughts crisscross my
mind~keep or leave you?
Autumn leaves can better see the
future

asilef73
07-06-2008, 09:28 PM
future
lessons to learn
and beauty to see. cling
tightly to my hand and do not
lose hope.

ampoule
07-07-2008, 12:47 PM
lose hope
you will shrivel
become little to yourself
no arms to reach, no hands to clasp
so mute

mazHur
07-07-2008, 12:51 PM
so mute
yet I can hear
the sound of her heart from
miles away resounding my name
mazHur!

alakungfu
07-07-2008, 02:25 PM
mazHur
I implore you
not another word! You charm and you
tempt me to do what I would not
do! Please!

CdnReader
07-07-2008, 02:29 PM
do! Please!
take me with you
to another world where
we can eat chocolate and drink wine
till morn

mazHur
07-07-2008, 03:11 PM
till morn
we sat under
the yum yum tree and looked
in each others eyes until we
were lost!

CdnReader
07-07-2008, 05:48 PM
were lost
and then were found
crystalline pockets of
life's beauty, hiding there among
the reeds

ampoule
07-07-2008, 05:52 PM
were lost!
oh my mittens!
come here little kitten
I know if you find them you'll be
purring

alakungfu
07-07-2008, 05:53 PM
were lost,
smitten for good
cheated from playing the
field for nought or ever for oft
a deal

ampoule
07-07-2008, 05:54 PM
ooops! ya beat me!

the reeds
they gently sway
the frog peeks through and laughs
the fireflies tell where he is though
you're it!

firefangled
07-07-2008, 05:59 PM
purring,
so alluring,
must you be demurring,
if so, I will be deferring,
surly

firefangled
07-07-2008, 06:04 PM
now what do I do....!? I don't have three in me right now.

A deal
to make one squeal,
free gas for a whole year,
all you have to do is drive here,
go south

firefangled
07-07-2008, 06:06 PM
You're it!
So come find me,
but you'll have to climb high,
to the top of the tallest tree,
catch me

CdnReader
07-07-2008, 06:58 PM
catch me
in pearlescent
shadows of spring's glory
swing me beneath tall oaken boughs
softly

mazHur
07-07-2008, 07:17 PM
softly
the wind whispered
something in rose's ears
all the garden began to swing
with joy!

CdnReader
07-07-2008, 07:47 PM
with joy
and hand in hand
skipping gaily to the school
they grow up so fast, and we must
let go

mazHur
07-07-2008, 07:52 PM
let go
he's just a kid
what if he whacked you on
your shoulder under impulse of
touching

asilef73
07-07-2008, 11:14 PM
touching
is an art form
conveying tenderness.
fingers the brushes and skin the
canvas.