New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

[CdnReader]

profane
or sacred, shall
we argue opposites?
perhaps better to remain at
centre

[mazHur]

centre
or off centre
earth continues to spin
in wait for another Big Bang
Bang, Bang !

[Pendragon]

Bang, Bang !
We used to say.
You are dead. Game we play.
Violence becomes reality now--
guess why...

[mazHur]

guess why...
you slept so late
in the day yesterday
when fiches sang songs of sweet love
guess why?

[firefangled]

guess why,
a grown man speaks,
the ocean in his voice,
full of life, salt of love, harvest
moonlight?

[symphony]

moonlight--
how ambiguous
it can get, warming those
who are in lover's arms, sleeping
with peace

with peace
it cascades down
upon them, chilling those
who dont e'en have beds, let alone
lovers!

....

[firefangled]

moonlight--
how ambiguous
it can get, warming those
who are in lover's arms, sleeping
with peace

with peace
it cascades down
upon them, chilling those
who dont e'en have beds, let alone
lovers!

....

Oh Symphony! I don't even want to try and follow these. Somtimes you just knock me over with your perceptions.

[mazHur]

lovers
do not need beds
they recline in the chair
of heart and swing at every beat
of love


anxiety

[packersfan]

of love
our hearts beat of
love's all we ever need
without it we'll wither away
just love

[mazHur]

just love
and nothing else
we shall talk together
in this world and the other world
no joke

[packersfan]

no joke
how much you mean
you are my only dream
i'll die before i let you go
i'll die

[mazHur]

no joke
how much you mean
you are my only dream
i'll die before i let you go
i'll die


I'll die
without you
without your touch of love
without loving you for ever
mind it

[CdnReader]

mind it
has been some time
since I walked along this
weather-beaten shore, looking for
your smile

[packersfan]

Mind [that]
You're a Child
You know not about love.
Follow your dreams and be careful.
Look out.

[mazHur]

mind it
has been some time
since I walked along this
weather-beaten shore, looking for
your smile

your smile
brightens the moon
gives gold to the moonlight
this earth glitters like molten gold
of love

[CdnReader]

of love
i shall not speak
as my torn heart bleeds here....
dripping my inner self, seeping
dark red

[mazHur]

of love
i shall not speak
as my torn heart bleeds here....
dripping my inner self, seeping

dark red
like a tempered
rose glistens my heart for
you to come and bless it with a
firm kiss

[ampoule]

dark red
is the color
of my passionate thoughts
those sinful desires smoldering
inside

Well shoot! Let me try again to get an edge in here. ;) ;)

firm kiss
gets melted soft
when you press against me
listening, feeling for every
response

[mazHur]

mind it
has been some time
since I walked along this
weather-beaten shore, looking for
your smile


Mind [that]
You're a Child
You know not about love.
Follow your dreams and be careful.
Look out.


Look out
for the lunging
thorns waiting to prick you
and teach you how to love a rose
truly

[packersfan]

Truly
See the smile
smile of innocence
smiles of the children play
smiles

[firefangled]

smiles,
and the breathing
of the soul, the passion
pounding still, as if heartbeats were
hammers

[ampoule]

hammers
collecting them
for danger and warning
justice, freedom, but mostly love
this land

[mazHur]

hammers
collecting them
for danger and warning
justice, freedom, but mostly love
this land

this land
is no common
land but a land unique
where all is love and love is all
indeed

[symphony]

Oh Symphony! I don't even want to try and follow these. Somtimes you just knock me over with your perceptions.
Leaving in south asia does the trick i guess :p


indeed
i was in here
before, when this banyan
was still growing, and looked more like
bonsi
...

[mazHur]

bonsi
are elegant
to look at and carry
kiss them whenever you want to
with love

[packersfan]

with love
is how you sleep
is how you sleep so still
but now child you are crying
please sleep

[firefangled]

please sleep,
child, without fear,
and if you wake, you'll see
that I am here and wishing you
sweet dreams

[packersfan]

sweet dreams
child, sweet dreams
innocence won't last long
have sweet dreams now, because you'll wake
so soon

[CdnReader]

so soon
must you leave me
to wander wearily
through a desolate landscape of
love lost?

[mazHur]

love lost?
what makes you think
I will leave you and live
without the life i owe you and
your love

[ampoule]

so soon
must you leave me
to wander wearily
through a desolate landscape of
love lost?

love lost?
you bet it is
taken by wheelbarrow
dumped in a river full of sludge
stinking

[mazHur]

stinking
rotten lilies
of bad memories come
only to create depressive
climate

[CdnReader]

climate:
discouragement
pressed down and shoved aside
cloudy grey skies, rain, and no end
in sight

[firefangled]

in sight,
perhaps not now -
love walks with silent steps,
waits like a wildflower for you
to see

[firefangled]

to see
love, live in love,
like a warrior, tender
and precise, wild with abandon,
watching

[mazHur]

in sight
are those words that
you wrote on my heart's slate
when sky bowed down to kiss the earth
with love

[mazHur]

watching
you leave so soon
my heart weeps with sorrow
unjust that you leave me alone
to die

[mazHur]

to see
for a blind man
is as difficult as
for a woman to lend her ears
to love

[symphony]

Nice :p but u dont have to give a cinquain for all the former ones, weaving one with the last line of the prev. post will do. But okay if u chose to... better make it a single thread though. :)


To Love:
I was with you
since the day i breathed last.
To Hate: I saw you in her eyes
in death.

[mazHur]

Nice :p but u dont have to give a cinquain for all the former ones, weaving one with the last line of the prev. post will do. But okay if u chose to... better make it a single thread though. :)


To Love:
I was with you
since the day i breathed last.
To Hate: I saw you in her eyes
in death.

sometimes it is difficult to let go a good thread just because it happened to cross

in death
we live again
to love and keep loving
as we loved in the life before
on earth

[Pendragon]

on earth
we stand and gaze
wondering what lies out
beyond the stars, behind it all--
go on...

[firefangled]

go on,
leap into space,
it is there inside you,
take a ride on your heart, send it
rockin'

[mazHur]

on earth
we stand and gaze
wondering what lies out
beyond the stars, behind it all--
go on...

go on
just keep going
beyond the stars
till you find yet another world
asleep

[ampoule]

sorry, i'm confused

[ampoule]

I'm confused as to what our new friend mazHur is doing. I believe he should have used fire's cinquain to continue the game. Perhaps, like symphony suggested, he should start his own thread of cinquains.


go on,
leap into space,
it is there inside you,
take a ride on your heart, send it
rockin'


rockin'
is better than
robbin' the cradle, right?
just don't tip it too far or we'll
fall out

[firefangled]

fall out,
will all fall down,
the heart knows its limits,
from the frail air of dreams, we must
return

[packersfan]

return
i beg of you
the children are waiting
our hearts hurt, our eyes only cry
come back

[mazHur]

return
my heart my love
you took away cleverly
through your enchanting looks and guile
all fraud

[mazHur]

come back
my pussy cat
don't make me feel lonely
without your sweet rub and purr
and meow !

[packersfan]

and meow
says messed up dogs
a dog that says meow
its a wonder why dogs say that
freaky

???

[mazHur]

freaky
things boggle mind
in the darkness of night
no one near to hold you and kiss
you tight

[scarlet pain]

you tight
and cuddling close;
shutting my eyes tighter
to not to look through the dark.Oh!
teddy!

[mazHur]

teddy
things are easy
to manage and handle
carry them in lap and fondle
and kiss

[Pendragon]

and kiss
the fire of night
smouldering shadows slink
crossing graveyards, crossroads, gallows--
Reaper...


And mazHur, if you are not going to follow the rules as stated on page one of this thread, please start your own thread...

[mazHur]

reaper
solitary
reaper moves in the field
harvesting moon and twinkling stars
of love

[littlewing53]

of love
where did it go
beyond the sky and stars
to another place just near here
to you

[mazHur]

to you
i dedicate
all the love that exists
in the deeper world of my heart
kiss me

[littlewing53]

kiss me
with tenderness
just there behind my ear
where hides the tomorrows to come
revealed

[mazHur]

kiss me
with tenderness
just there behind my ear
where hides the tomorrows to come
revealed

revealed
behind your ears
is a budding G-spot
which needs a hot very hot kiss
to bloom

[ampoule]

to bloom
you must plant first
something that is worthwhile
and if it is, you won't have to
go deep

[packersfan]

go deep
into the sea
swim with all the fishes
and go jump with all the dolphins
let's go

[firefangled]

lets go
skinnydipping
into the full moon lake;
it's clear to the bottom, the moon
lives there

[mazHur]

the moon lives there
hiding its face
from the burning sun's eye
and waits for the evening to come
to shine

[firefangled]

the moon lives there
hiding its face
from the burning sun's eye
and waits for the evening to come
to shine

mazHur, the structure of the cinquain is:

2 syllables
4 syllables
6 syllables
8 syllables
2 syllables

You must begin yours with only the last line of the previous cinquain.

[mazHur]

oh, sorry ,,,all got mixed up !


to shine
like a moon bright
on a dark summer night
borrow some gold of love from me
and smile

[ampoule]

and smile
is what I did
a fist of white gravel
swimming to the surface, a gift
for you

[mazHur]

for you
is everything
my heart, my soul, my mind
if you want to have more you can
my life

[TheFifthElement]

my life
tumbles away.
Each grainy moment slips
through thin glass, I'm powerless to
stop it

[mazHur]

stop it
I am coming
with new grains of moments
to refill your thin glass of time
with life

[symphony]

"stop it",
with teary eyes
she begged, in giggling fits.
i stopped, and saw her tears turned real
at once

....

Edit:

with life
and everything
it offered, i lived, but
in death, forgot to leave a piece
of life...

[mazHur]

at once
I fell in love
at once I got to know
the meaning of love at first sight
at once

of life
I think no more
for my love is my life
If I lose my love I will cease
to live

[Pendragon]

to live
a normal life
what would I give away?
everything, every wish--
my all...

[mazHur]

my all
that's all I have
all that is left of me
a heart turned into ashes gray
white dust

[symphony]

white dust
under rippling
water holds another
world of its own, with colourful
beings...

[mazHur]

white dust
under rippling
water holds another
world of its own, with colourful
beings...

beings.....
in lands remote
may be separated
but they live in each others heart
in love

[packersfan]

in love
for evermore
my heart does follow yours
not even death can separate
our love

[mazHur]

our love
is for love's sake
like the golden moon rays
like the silvery shine of sun
sublime

[ampoule]

sublime
or sub-lemon
it's all the same to me
just the thought makes me pucker up
kiss me

[packersfan]

kiss me
you know you want
the fullness of my soul
the true expressed love of my heart
tonight

[TheFifthElement]

sublime
or sub-lemon
it's all the same to me
just the thought makes me pucker up
kiss me

^^^ love this ampoule (sub-lemon!)

I couldn't help but post this :

tonight
I'm gonna have
myself a real good time
I feel alive-ive-ive-ive, and
the world....

God bless Freddie Mercury!

But on a serious note:

tonight
let the wild dogs
run unfettered on the
streets, the night belongs to them not
to us

[mazHur]

kiss me
or whatever
give my heart that warm feel
that melts it like a chocolate
in hands

[mazHur]

tonight
full moon will glide
through the windows of my
heart's pavilion and brighten
my life

[firefangled]

my life -
have I done this
cinquain before? C'mon,
choo-choo, switch tracks, rock n' roll my
caboose

[mazHur]

caboose
will surely change
track and choo-choo for you
so that you can keep on writing
cinquains

[symphony]

Cinquains...
easy, i will
tell you the recipe. Take
raw thoughts in a syllabled bowl,
and serve ;)

[mazHur]

and serve
on a platter
with sweet and sour sauce
embellish it with some salad
Phoochka !

[ampoule]

Phoochka!
puffy, crunchy
fill them up with good things
then fill me up to curb this
hunger

[mazHur]

hunger
respects no law
it cannot wait to eat
delicious Phoochkas with chutney
of love!

[symphony]

lol mazhur u got the spelling right. finally! :lol:


of love
sprained to hatred
and hatred burned to wrath
till wrath made me bleed, so that i
gloated

....

[littlewing53]

gloated
yet justified
love spills over with ease
pouring profusing from my heart
catch me

[packersfan]

catch me
i want to fly
only if you catch me
only if you let my heart soar
only if

[firefangled]

only if
you will not bite,
I'll give you delicious,
and exotic morsels with my
fingers

[packersfan]

fingers
and tiny toes
everything about you
is pure 'cuz you are my baby
baby

[mazHur]

:)

gloated
my little goat
and jumped up my sofa
asking for some medicine
a dose

[mazHur]

baby
come let us dance
at the music of love
let me kiss the stars of your eyes
all night


and

fingers
placed on your lips
you look like a school girl
punished for babbling in the class
of hearts

[ampoule]

:)

gloated
my little goat
and jumped up my sofa
asking for some medicine
a dose

a dose
one is enough
for any more than that
would leave me clinging to the vine
gasping

[mazHur]

gasping
for some fresh air
in the dungeon of life
I found her full of oxygen
of love

[Pendragon]

of love,
I ask you now,
are you prepared to share
your heart, your soul, your all, without
regrets?

[mazHur]

Regrets?
Nope, not at all
it's the smoke that rises
from the fire of love in my heart
sweet heart!

[firefangled]

sweet heart-
shape of berries,
dipped in dark chocolate,
midnight taste, nectar dripping from
your lips

[_JadeRain_]

Your lips
Are like the lips
Of a garden Tulip
Seperate entities that move to
Kiss me

[mazHur]

sweet heart-
shape of berries,
dipped in dark chocolate,
midnight taste, nectar dripping from
your lips

your lips
like rose petals
cheeks like glistening pink pears
eyes like two Koh-e-Noors of Love
need me

[mazHur]

kiss me
and fill my heart
with the nectar of love
so the eyes of your sullen soul
can flash

[ampoule]

can flash
your name across
my closed eyelids, credits
slowly moving, to show how much
you've played

[mazHur]

you've played
the game quite well
and given me hard time
now it's my turn to hit the mark
Ready?

[firefangled]

Ready
to open your eyes?
Beauty is all around,
it clings to you like rain does on
roses.

[mazHur]

roses
the fruits of spring
fall prey to fall's devil
smile for a short time then dwindle
and die

[ampoule]

and die
in your embrace
I am no longer me
you make me more than me, for now
I'm yours

[firefangled]

I'm yours,
the way those clouds
embrace the mountaintop,
completely, but lightly, a kiss
away

[mazHur]

away
you are from me
like soul from my body
how come then you can surely say
I'm yours

[firefangled]

I'm yours,
I'm yours, I am,
yours is what I am, and
I will repeat it, over and
over


Note: The new cinquain cannot end with over. No, no.

[packersfan]

?

Over
all the glory
over all the high praise
you are still the most important
'ver all

[mazHur]

over
the game of love
is now over; the dawn
of tomorrow hearkens us to
new jobs

[mazHur]

'vr all
the car looks fine
comfortable cozy
good for a long drive together
lets go

[ampoule]

lets go
let go. Come with
me into the tree tops
sway in the branches, then have a
picnic

[mazHur]

picnic
nice idea
but why on the tree tops
why not under a yum yum tree
love heart!

[ampoule]

love heart!
oh pretty please
say it just one more time
I know it's stored in there somewhere
for me

[firefangled]

for me
there is no time,
but a moment of life,
a flower in an infinite
blooming

[symphony]

blooming
lavenders will
greet me as i go, let
thorns do their work though, i couldnt
care less
...

[scarlet pain]

care less
i become of
you and loose you forever-
no coming back ever to my heart;
unfair!

[ampoule]

unfair!
we like to say
when things don't go our way
but the true culprit is our long
suff'ring

[mazHur]

suff'ring
and pain that's all
you get in love's domain
heart yearns to meet the beloved
sighing

[ampoule]

sighing
take it leave it
but do I have a choice
I shrug my shoulders, what does it
matter

[symphony]

"matter
is everything
we can see now", said he.
I looked, watched, realised, and it
caught me

...

[packersfan]

matter
it truly does
i swear with all my heart
but right now we'll just pretend, it
doesn't

[TheFifthElement]

Caught me?
Did you? Or did
I slip myself into
your net? Was it by chance, or by
design?

[packersfan]

design
myself to be
the one i want to be
won't make myself on what you want
just me

[mazHur]

just me
and you alone
on the island of love
no Man Friday to disturb us
our love

[packersfan]

our love
is what matters
like dancing butterflies
and cows jumping over the moon
why not?

[ampoule]

why not?
snuggle right here
warm yourself next to me
together we can watch the leaves
twirling

[mazHur]

twirling
come and embrace
me in your loving arms
I belong to you for ever
my love

[firefangled]

my love
has no limits,
it is the sun and moon,
the reflection and reflector,
of you

[mazHur]

of you
I think and think
how we loved each other
then you left me in the lurch and
were gone !

[TheFifthElement]

of you
I think and think
how we loved each other
then you left me in the lurch and
were gone !

were gone
although never
forgotten. The lines of
my face remember yours, troubled
with grief

[mazHur]

with grief
life is laden
no one to love or care
the garden of my heart smacks of
desert

[packersfan]

desert
me if you must
but please try not to leave
you've a family counting on you
please no

[mazHur]

please no
not tonight, dear,
I am tired and sleepy
and have to rise early to join
office

[packersfan]

office
is why i hate
the most ever hated
but it's not too bad, 'cuz there's hope
fridays

[ampoule]

fridays
staying up late
watching movies with you
anticipating our bedtime
hurry

[symphony]

hurry
we dont have time
to loiter in these rooms,
i heard they hold dead souls walking
around....

[mazHur]

around....
dead souls walking
like dead trees in a wood
with faces like burnt ashes gray
eyes red

[firefangled]

eyes red,
don't be afraid,
the shaft of light from you,
gets skewed between us, making me
look wild

[PrinceMyshkin]

Look wild
but act mild or
look mild if you intend
to pounce on some unsuspecting
victim

[ampoule]

victim
my wicked smile
he loves our little game
caught, writhing, pretending to break
away

[firefangled]

victim,
we will not be,
love prevails, when you're small,
it is small with you, whispering,
love life

[firefangled]

oops! dare I chance to follow...only to duplicate again...YES!

away,
I pretend, sway
in the trees, wind sailing
me to paradise and windswept
blue skies

[Pendragon]

blue skies
yellow sunshine
verdant grass, sapphire brook,
sunset crimson violet shadows--
colors

[ampoule]

colors
are mine showing?
perhaps they are too bright
but you are the artist and I
thank you

[mazHur]

thank you
for that smile
that blessed dynamo
which sent electricity running
my veins

[firefangled]

my veins
flow to my heart
in them the thorn and rose,
once a cloud because a rose needs
water

[mazHur]

water
evaporates
from the eyes of my heart
and fills the thirsty clouds with drops
of love

[firefangled]

of love
words pour from me,
what of laughter, tickles,
breathless with funny, same thing, but
new voice

[mazHur]

new voice
comes from the heart
the voice of an eagle
with a broken wing trying to
fly high

[firefangled]

fly high,
into the clouds
made from all earth's wishes,
pick one, you will have to give or
receive

[mazHur]

receive
love and embrace
the lover in my heart
and I will return your favor
doubly

[ampoule]

doubly
singers singing
pray twice, their songs so sweet
entertaining the angels in
heaven

[mazHur]

heaven
inhabited
by time-old houris is
a useless place for men-folk
so young

[Pendragon]

so young,
impulsive, rash—
quick to think you know all—
just beginning your journey to
knowledge…

[mazHur]

knowledge
drives me crazy
and compels me to think
become an ignoramus now
forget!

[ampoule]

forget!
it matters not
what you know or how
you know it. Pretend it is the
first time

[mazHur]

forget!
it matters not
what you know or how
you know it. Pretend it is the
first time

first time
it was alright
then it began to change
the chocolate topping began to
curdle

[firefangled]

curdle,
unwanted word,
but I like cottage cheese,
and home made yogurt makes me wink,
mmm tart !

[mazHur]

mmm tart !
okay sweeten
your mouth with candy floss
but for heaven's sake stop winking
at me

[ampoule]

at me
there is laughter
funny thoughts of a man
like fire winking at mazHur, floss
in mouth

[mazHur]

at me
there is laughter
funny thoughts of a man
like fire winking at mazHur, floss
in mouth

in mouth
an ampoule of
ancient Chinese Gin Sing
works like an aphrodisiac,
feels good!

[firefangled]

feels good!
when a woman
laughs, it rivals the lark,
variations like a blackbird,
listen

[Sweets America]

Listen!
There are footsteps
Behind you! You should not
Turn round, for you could face your worst
Nightmare...

[mazHur]

Nightmare...
she screamed with dread
eyes wide open with fear
the werewolf caught her by the neck
she bled.........

[symphony]

she bled
to death and then
to life again, never
knowing which way to look-- she died,
she lived
.....

[mazHur]

she lived
like a princess
in the tiny green speck
of my heart and made it sparkle
with love

[Pendragon]

with love,
sparkling eyes,
golden glow, bewitch me—
twenty-eight years, not enough time,
my love...


http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Princess.gif

[mazHur]

my love...
my love for you
is beyond time and space
you will always live in my heart
love heart!

[alexsears]

im not much of a poetry kid so ill just listen to u guy ok :D

[alexsears]

hey mazhur i know what your thing abut the world war means now answer me if you dont know about it :D :D :D

[symphony]

my love
ponders.... lingers....
conceiving nothing but
on whom to fall upon, to be
settled :lol:

....

edit: sorry i thought Pen was the last to hv written a cinquain, my bad. I'll edit the first words by a bit. :)

love heart
ponders.... lingers....
conceiving nothing but
on whom to fall upon, to be
settled

[mazHur]

settled
in the centre
of my heart is a nymph
so sweet so naughty. I can't tell
her name

[ampoule]

her name
do not tell me
I don't want to hear it
jealous? me? whatever makes you
think that

[mazHur]

think that
how would you feel
if it rains and rain drops
kiss you under the bikini
and wet!

[ampoule]

and wet!
is what we'll be
the storm rains lashing out
pelting us with icy fingers
freezing

[firefangled]

freezing -
it's been so long
since a red nose and ears,
I would like to feel it again,
and snow!

[mazHur]

and snow!
Oh, that white cap
worn by the mountains high
melts like chocolate by the heat
inside

[firefangled]

inside
you must venture,
inside freezing is warm,
the crystals of the universe
live there

[symphony]

live there
and die fighting
for the cause will haunt you
in life, in death, in life after
your death!

[mazHur]

live there
in the palace
of my love-ridden heart
listen to the music sublime
and dance

[mazHur]

your death
has saddened me
grief has struck the whole world
I stand at your memorial
and cry!

[ampoule]

and cry
I do too much
this pool of saltiness
must surely run dry for I need
a break

[mazHur]

a break
from this humdrum
a chuckle,a warm kiss
a lover's tight embrace is all
you need!

[Pendragon]

you need
to leave better
last lines for the next one
momentous poetry requires
kick-starts

[mazHur]

kick-starts
won't make you run
faster than a poor snail
you need wheels and wings to muster
the art

[ampoule]

the art
is in the brush
or the note or the pen
that brings the color or the voice
to us

[firefangled]

to us
the poem comes
like a blackbird, and stares
at nothing in particular,
and sings

[ampoule]

and sings
the melody
lovely one writ for me
the music resonates within
thank you

[symphony]

thank you
my li'l poodle,
for your humble presence
in my lap, you make me feel all
cosy....

[Pendragon]

cosy
in my own chair
reclining with my dog,
reading latest stories written--
deadlines...

[_JadeRain_]

Deadlines
My editor
Is like the Grinch Who Stole
Christmas. Now will his heart grow three
Sizes?

[mazHur]

Deadlines
have to be met
goals have to be attained
something have to be done to make
headlines

[mazHur]

sizes"
A, B, C, D,
wonder which size you are
all sizes are available
what's yours?

[TheFifthElement]

'what's yours
is mine' the old
man said, his face too close,
breath reeking, fiddling with his
trousers.

[mazHur]

sorry,,,,

[mazHur]

trousers
have two pockets
one on each side and one
or two at the back and look great
unzipped!;)

[ampoule]

unzipped
my mouth blabbed on
and you placed your finger
against my lips and said, shh, shh,
there now

[firefangled]

there, now,
that is the star,
the one that must be far,
it shines so brightly, blinding all
but you

[TheFifthElement]

but you
are nothing, and
I am nothing, and we
are nothing but specks floating in
darkness

[littlewing53]

darkness
hides behind light
bringing the weary ones
lost and searching for so much more
come home

[mazHur]

come home
the spring of love
waits for you with open arms
to hug and embrace you with gift
of love

[firefangled]

of love,
cinquains abound,
let's talk of spinach found
between your teeth, the source for her
laughter

[mazHur]

laughter
will make you sad
a monkey tried to laugh
and fell down the coconut tree
and died

[symphony]

and died
with all my love
in his heart, and rested
quietly in mere memories
and tears.

[mazHur]

and died
with all my love
in his heart, and rested
quietly in mere memories
and tears.

and tears.
your tears will tear
up my heart and kill me
I love you my little darling
you know

[symphony]

you know
what may happen
when you're using kindness
as your defense against the brute,
dont you?

[mazHur]

dont you
realize how
much I miss you,your love,
you seem to have a heart of stone
tough grit

[symphony]

tough grit
held the castle
together, kept it from
falling apart, like my dreams did
once when...

[mazHur]

tough grit
held the castle
together, kept it from
falling apart, like my dreams did
once when...

once when,,,,,,
we were in love
my heart was your castle
your love was my fortunate forte
forgot?

[symphony]

forgot
all but the hushed
moments of bliss, of life
in love, love in life, your eyes in
my eyes...

[mazHur]

forgot
all but the hushed
moments of bliss, of life
in love, love in life, your eyes in
my eyes...


my eyes
leave them alone
O craven, when I die
my beloved lives in my eyes
forever!

[symphony]

fore'er
we can stay put,
and watch war create war,
man kill man, lives gulp lives, and bathe
in blood
....

[mazHur]

in blood
circulates life
let us not let blood go
down the drain in futile pursuits
of war

[TheFifthElement]

of war
and bitterness
I feel the shame of my
nation. An eye for an eye reigns
these days

[firefangled]

these days
I remember
Newsweek, a naked child,
cover controversy, crying,
Stop! Stop!

[ampoule]

Stop! Stop!
spinning the world
a hard jolt to bring us
to our knees, to stand once again
in peace

[Pendragon]

In peace,
may I now rest
yesterday behind me.
Never understand why dismal
days come...

[firefangled]

days come
in a thin line
at the edge of darkness -
free your mind, slip through, a new world
awaits

[mazHur]

awaits
in the blue sky
someone become a star
for his love to become a star
and join

[ampoule]

and join
me, right down here
you can't hear me giggling?
you can see me but not hear me
speak up

[mazHur]

speak up
what's in your heart
be not a coy maid
be not shy, reserved ,reluctant
of drone

[TheFifthElement]

of drone-
ing mothers I've
had my share. Oh for some
peace! I drown out her voice with a
good wine

[andave_ya]

Good wine
A heady scent
Swirling the cup gently,
Luscious red seductive color.
Assails.

[mazHur]

Assails
the chastity
of young virgin flowers,
the impregnating moth helps them
bear fruit

[ampoule]

bear fruit
pass the platter
luscious, dripping and ripe
let us all taste the essence of
your mind

[mazHur]

your mind
has great ideas
yet it needs garnishing
with the sauce of my lovely thoughts
to click

[ampoule]

to click
or not to click
can make all the diff'rence
in my true love's health and safety
refrain

[mazHur]

refrain
Impossible!
Love is my bed and bread
I sleep in love, get up in love,
alone!

[firefangled]

alone
is not lonely,
nor is lonely alone,
I reach out from that morning space
my hand

[Pendragon]

my hand
types the words out--
but unguided, meaningless.
intellect required weaving
words fine

[mazHur]

words fine
will not suffice
prove your grit through actions
hold me tight and kiss me dearly
my love

[symphony]

:( why is it always some love-related 2-syllabler when i'm here?! I'm bad(pathetic i'd say) at love things!! *sniff*

nevertheless...

my love,
scattered to a
melancholic melange,
awaiting a touch -- to revive,
to live....

[barbara0207]

:( why is it always some love-related 2-syllabler when i'm here?! I'm bad(pathetic i'd say) at love things!! *sniff*

nevertheless...

my love,
scattered to a
melancholic melange,
awaiting a touch -- to revive,
to live....

:lol:

to live
is not to love
automatically
but then some people seem to think
it helps ...

[symphony]

*sigh of relief*

it helps
to find someone
who wont drop bombs of love
at you, even if its for a mere
second... :D

[mazHur]

second?
is like an year.
an year's like a leap year,
a leap year is like a light year
in Love!

[symphony]

NO!!!!

in love
and words of love
my death awaits, creeping
up in the form of syllabled
love words!

[barbara0207]

love words
shall not be seen
to bother hence this fair
and troubled lady; do not make
her cry.

[packersfan]

her cry
is what makes me
feel like i have done wrong
but her smile is beyond right
it's bliss

[ampoule]

it's bliss
this kiss so deep
I leap to catch each one
and run to hide them under my
pillow

[mazHur]

it's bliss
this kiss so deep
I leap to catch each one
and run to hide them under my
pillow

pillow
dictionary
is all that's needed
to behold and shower kisses
in bliss

[symphony]

in bliss
the lavender
turned to the dahlia,
only leaves could hear the whispered
secrets

secrets
of lilac dreams,
secrets kept from the wind,
who by his touch, can make her core
shiver....

[ampoule]

shiver
your sounding voice
behind my ear, whisper
pleading words that beg my senses
to feel

[symphony]

to feel
as i do now,
you will have to go through
some of the scorching spheres, and fears,
and tears.

[Pendragon]

and tears
have I shed down
through thirteen lonely years—
drinking depression's bitter cup—
who cares?

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[ampoule]

who cares?
lots of people
but care does not always
come the way we need it the most
teach us

[TheFifthElement]

teach us
the meaning of
happiness, a lovers
touch, unexpected smile, a shared
secret.