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sprinks
01-20-2009, 09:43 AM
all told
as they gathered
around their grandmother
how the fairies play in the woods
tonight
firefangled
01-20-2009, 07:23 PM
tonight
the dark spaces
lose their grip on the ghosts
the lighthouse beam reveals the webs
parting
qimissung
01-20-2009, 10:30 PM
parting,
your lips meet mine
on a lost highway, our
voltage high beams that shatter the
dark night
sprinks
01-21-2009, 03:21 AM
dark night,
shadows lurking
interrupting my dreams
the blankets do not veil my fear
from you
Il Penseroso
01-22-2009, 03:03 PM
from you
I gather rain,
droplet cascade, a wall
imprinting memory in words
fallen
Riesa
01-22-2009, 06:44 PM
fallen,
a collision
with silence where even
echoes have vanished, hushed as lives
long lost
adwara1
01-22-2009, 07:05 PM
Long lost
my lonely soul
to the ends of world
it traveled in vain,
to ease my pain
qimissung
01-22-2009, 09:08 PM
to ease
my pain swallowed
whole a rock which lay there
choking my heart til it gave birth
to you
adwara1
01-22-2009, 10:34 PM
To you
that I give my heart
to remain forever
you will not find strangers because
its full of you
alakungfu
01-23-2009, 11:39 AM
it's full
of you to me
the word for love, the clue
for eternity, the last hour
my own
adwara1
01-23-2009, 01:50 PM
My own
destiny that I
traded, charity for greed
love for lust, good for evil, that I
parted
qimissung
01-23-2009, 06:59 PM
parted
from humanity,
I flew through the night, a
thing apart, unclean, unhuman,
once loved
adwara1
01-23-2009, 08:46 PM
Once
loved us
the sheltering tree, the flowing stream
and the chirpy birds, now ask when I pass by
where is she?
alakungfu
01-24-2009, 09:43 AM
Where is
she that followed
thee to the depths and back?
Hear her plea and fruitless key, lost
theif knack.
Hobbes
01-25-2009, 02:11 AM
Theif knack
Patty is whacked
Her purse to her bosom
Her goods all packed. He led the cops
Off track.
sprinks
01-25-2009, 08:25 AM
off track,
on rough terrain
low on fuel with no food,
but sitting here with you makes it
perfect.
alakungfu
01-25-2009, 09:41 AM
Where is
she that followed
thee to the depths and back?
Hear her plea and fruitless key, lost
theif knack.
Sorry Hobbes, I misspelled "their" in the last line
Perfect
is the springtime
sprouting rainbows and buds
Vivid are stars that paint young evenings
in love
sprinks
01-25-2009, 10:20 AM
In love,
hearts beating in
unison, minds in sync,
nothing can stop a love so true,
so pure.
alakungfu
01-25-2009, 01:58 PM
So pure
in thought would I
aspire to. Surely, no. Partly
pure hopes and confused reasonings
prevail.
firefangled
01-25-2009, 04:36 PM
prevail
hot buttered rums
rare treat for a kid's cold
trees covered the whole mountainside
snow white
alakungfu
01-25-2009, 05:38 PM
snow white
as the desert
to the nearly blinded
before the sun drops over the
far off
Hobbes
01-26-2009, 12:17 AM
Far off
the sky's palace,
In Earth's humble kingdom
I start looking inside for my
light's guide
sprinks
01-27-2009, 02:57 AM
light's guide
is better than
the guide of night, tricking
people into believing they
are safe
jekan blazer
01-27-2009, 04:59 PM
are safe?
do you think that
we're ever really safe?
you cannot ever be that sure,
can you?
Il Penseroso
01-27-2009, 10:34 PM
can you
solve and figure
for alphabets of I?
replace standard lists with one of
your self?
Hobbes
01-27-2009, 11:29 PM
Your self?
"An Itchy Chi"
What do you think of YOU.
"An Id out of psyche syncho'."
Far out..
qimissung
01-28-2009, 12:27 PM
far out...
multiply pi
by the radius of we
to find the area of my love
for you
jekan blazer
01-28-2009, 01:48 PM
hmm..... tough one....
:idea:
got it
for you,
i give nothing
of what little i own,
but the love i hold within me,
sweet love.
adwara1
01-29-2009, 07:52 AM
Sweet love
in the beginning
turned into poison
I swallow it with no fear, for
its still you
jekan blazer
01-29-2009, 01:04 PM
Sweet love
in the beginning
turned into poison
I swallow it with no fear, for
its still you
you goofed on the last line... it's 2 syllables, not three
Hobbes
01-30-2009, 02:19 AM
some things you lose, and some things you just give away
Ill base mine off of it
still you.
just like you were.
Present falters my past.
Is that still us, or did I just
Let go.
jekan blazer
01-30-2009, 01:00 PM
some things you lose, and some things you just give away
Ill base mine off of it
still you.
just like you were.
Present falters my past.
Is that still us, or did I just
Let go.
great poem!!!
thank you for basing it off my sig!!!
Il Penseroso
01-31-2009, 05:09 PM
let go
of what cannot
be held, but still caress
the shell that crumbles under your
fingers
qimissung
01-31-2009, 07:09 PM
fingers
warm and alive
reach in and caress my
soul; such audacity! Please, keep
me warm
me warm,
you warmer, he
warmest of all. It's not
right for him to be so warm when
naked
mazHur
02-01-2009, 09:55 AM
naked
thoughts like naked
women trespass my dreams
how should I tell them to leave me
alone!
alakungfu
02-01-2009, 01:36 PM
alone
with no prospect,
myself and no counsel,
attuned to your own inner voice
captive
firefangled
02-01-2009, 04:19 PM
captive
of the tall grass,
the sequoia's reaching,
drowned in the rolling melt of snow
keep me
Hobbes
02-01-2009, 07:48 PM
if you don't understand: Plato
Keep me
in the sunlight.
I must leave from this cave.
Its my right to feel and to want.
to Need.
Hobbes
02-01-2009, 07:54 PM
Sorry Hobbes, I misspelled "their" in the last line
That makes sense now. Well, It was a fun challenge to work off of.
qimissung
02-01-2009, 11:23 PM
to need
the truth, I wipe
shadows from my blinking
eyes. Ardent reality! I
look away
Hobbes
02-02-2009, 01:12 AM
Beliefs
Look away (three)
to the yonder
country of my past life.
Edelweiss stays forever in
my heart.
alakungfu
02-02-2009, 06:04 AM
my heart
drifts from abject
to targeted lovelock
secure in the last extreme, fixed
in place
adwara1
02-02-2009, 01:04 PM
In place
far far away
flowers bloom in winter
stars twinkle in rain, is where I
lost my brain
mazHur
02-02-2009, 02:25 PM
lost brain
lost all in it
all the gray and the white
some new color seems to have it
engulfed
Hobbes
02-02-2009, 11:27 PM
Engulfed
By distrortion.
The contradictions grow.
How do we live our live, yet guide
Others
adwara1
02-03-2009, 02:09 AM
Others
have come and gone
I lay stranded on the shore
with no courage to retort or
venture
alakungfu
02-03-2009, 07:21 AM
venture
trust capital
brick in the economy
lever in the marginal scale
Cold Wall
Hobbes
02-03-2009, 11:51 PM
HUMANITY?
Cold Wall
made out of stone.
Berlin saw through the cracks.
what others could not see from the
outside.
mazHur
02-04-2009, 02:29 AM
outside
water a fish
I am struggling for a
breath; Inside I am fighting death
for life
ampoule
02-04-2009, 09:50 AM
good one Maz.
for life
there are prices
waterslide birth canals
hanging upside down in terror
crying
alakungfu
02-04-2009, 02:52 PM
crying
for attention
not outwardly, inside
where the windows of the tender
souls reach
mazHur
02-04-2009, 03:02 PM
souls reach
after a hard
trip to the Soul Mansion
only to wait for their bodies'
return
Il Penseroso
02-05-2009, 12:11 AM
return,
new thoughts spinning
an old environment,
whirlwind snagging soil, clouds brought
to sky
alakungfu
02-05-2009, 12:29 AM
to sky
domed over the
river beds and fitted 'tween
the redwood fern establishments
at dawn
Delta40
02-05-2009, 12:47 AM
At dawn
blazing rays of light
grey lakes neath settling mist
broken by the sudden sound of birds
sweet song
alakungfu
02-05-2009, 09:43 AM
sweet song
coursing through the
sugar you breathed in my veins
when you led me 'round the room in
your arms.
jekan blazer
02-05-2009, 02:10 PM
your arms...
they crushed my soul...
they just left me for dead...
your arms are the most horrid thing...
evil...
mazHur
02-05-2009, 02:25 PM
evil
is what you think
evil is nothing but
a ploy to keep you off the track
you choose
alakungfu
02-05-2009, 02:29 PM
evil
succumbs to my
artless appetites for
plain inane sophistication
requite
alakungfu
02-05-2009, 02:41 PM
Sorry mazHur
you choose
gnarled victory
for your close companion
and forsake you the fledgling lists
that fell
mazHur
02-05-2009, 04:11 PM
that fell
beneath all grace
was none other than Greed
in search for more it lost what it
possessed
Hobbes
02-05-2009, 07:20 PM
Not my own dogma (too many puns, i feel geeky)
Possesed
By holy ghosts
We lack security.
Greed is a creed for self fufilled
prophets.
alakungfu
02-05-2009, 08:34 PM
prophets
in the backyard
storming down floral ramparts
a community fundraiser
circus
Hobbes
02-06-2009, 01:24 AM
circus
of birds in flight.
With feats of daring do
backed by a pure canvas of blue
drawn past
Riesa
02-06-2009, 04:59 PM
Drawn past
melancholy
into glad clarity,
I bathe in soft serenity;
I'm free.
mazHur
02-06-2009, 06:01 PM
I'm free
to roam about
with the vagabond clouds
and to fall at my will as rain
or hail!
adwara1
02-06-2009, 07:36 PM
Or hail
is it that night
which disquieted the silence,
my lone companion, we converse between
four walls
alakungfu
02-06-2009, 08:58 PM
four walls
a rampart make
to keep out the deluge
of the madding crowd, or onset
of debt
adwara1
02-07-2009, 07:55 AM
of debt
that I owe all
for the joy I gain,times
hard you wended me through, how do I
match it
mazHur
02-07-2009, 07:59 AM
match it
try again and
see if you can compare
a rose may be sanguine but heart
sheer blood
alakungfu
02-07-2009, 08:31 AM
sheer blood
spills over the
battlegrounds as the proud
enemy turns its back on its
honour
mazHur
02-07-2009, 09:59 AM
honour
and dignity
have no real sense for
a wretch dying of hunger and
disease.
alakungfu
02-07-2009, 10:52 AM
disease
a cold release
turning over of keys
encraching of sick victim's peace
brain frieze
qimissung
02-07-2009, 02:19 PM
Clever, alakungfu!
brain frieze
curves, crevasses
knowledge, downhill skier,
nerves launching across snowy vales
beauty
alakungfu
02-07-2009, 03:08 PM
beauty
trumps idealism
in the scheme of values,
tall tree of listing paragons'
furloughed
mazHur
02-08-2009, 02:30 PM
furloughed
the subaltern
of eternal peace lies
on the battle ground never to
rejoin
Hobbes
02-08-2009, 07:50 PM
rejoin ~the OTHER meaning
ideas by
compromising some points
to make it all homogenous
oatmeal
adwara1
02-09-2009, 10:42 PM
Oatmeal
for empty paunch is
all one needs vacuous skies
have seared earth, loud rain is all
one heeds
adwara1
02-11-2009, 11:30 PM
One heeds
the words of his love
as if they define life
even when in language they mean
drivel
alakungfu
02-12-2009, 08:00 PM
drivel
is brought to mind
when the conversation
turns to criticism and colored
phrases
adwara1
02-16-2009, 12:30 AM
Phrases
both truth and lies
in the book of history stand
the test of time though it is hard for
the former
alakungfu
02-17-2009, 02:58 PM
former
lives, forgotten
sins, desperate dreams, souls
filled entirely with pop culture
live wires
adwara1
02-21-2009, 05:16 AM
Wires
barbed formed
boundaries lands were same
same were the people but pride kept them
apart
mazHur
02-21-2009, 08:18 AM
apart
we are like two
islands standing quietly
in the wide seas but underneath
conn'c-ted!
adwara1
02-22-2009, 03:57 PM
Conn'c-ted
are the trees in soil
growing above with age
roots below holding hands building
their strength
ampoule
02-23-2009, 09:30 AM
their strength
such a thin line
no one would believe it
taut gives in to slack, such relief
don't pull
alakungfu
02-24-2009, 07:40 PM
don't pull
the words out of
my mouth that way. You hear
shat you want and not the real truth.
I give.
mazHur
02-24-2009, 08:01 PM
I give
my words to you
where ever I happen
to be I will always be yours.
C'mon Smile!
mazHur
02-24-2009, 10:51 PM
I give
new life to earth
I bring mirth, merriment
I am Sun, I am rain, I am
rainbow!
sorry for double entry,,the page i opened up listed Ala's verse on top to which i re-replied!!:)
Rainbow---
Hide not from me
Your blue, your red and yellow.
Sit with me---have a cup of tea!
Just be.
alakungfu
02-25-2009, 10:47 AM
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=437&pictureid=3296
Just be
one with the wind
gone with the kiss of love
before the dawn rises to meet
your time
adwara1
02-25-2009, 11:48 AM
Rainbow
take me with you
I wish to slide all over
world playing on your polychromed
facet
Thread opened on previous page, sorry did not notice
the above posts
Hobbes
02-25-2009, 10:00 PM
Your time
is recorded
by a neurologic
inculcation of pulled up thought
patterns
mazHur
02-25-2009, 10:30 PM
patterns
of life appear
first in the mind before
the body learns to absorb hits
of waves
adwara1
02-26-2009, 01:56 AM
of waves
one pair of feet
said our prints are washed
away the other said our travels
will not
mazHur
02-26-2009, 02:25 AM
will not
fade nor perish
the flowers of our love;
they will bloom in lovers' hearts
forev'r!
Il Penseroso
02-27-2009, 12:39 AM
ever
forgone and con-
cluded, clouded and so
occulted, assumed and composed
to shame
mazHur
02-27-2009, 01:00 AM
to shame
why put our love?
you love me and I you
Is it not enough for hearts' joy?
speak up!
Hobbes
03-01-2009, 05:03 PM
Speak up!
I don't want to
keep standing for your voice.
If I fail, the idea will
perish
alakungfu
03-02-2009, 03:26 PM
perish
in this dungeon
of resurging despair,
overcome figuratively
of late
adwara1
03-04-2009, 04:53 PM
Of late
I have started
wondering where it all
began, onset of my journey to
the dark side
The dark side---
It is tempting
to abscond from the light,
to wander yonder with th' Siths.
Treason.
(I just watched Star Wars: Episode III, starring Mannequin Skywalker... :rolleyes: )
adwara1
03-04-2009, 10:17 PM
Treason
what a vile word
temptations preyed on me
oh how weak I was, why is evil
so easy
Hobbes
03-05-2009, 09:13 PM
So Easy
to walk, why ride?
Why talk when there's TV.
There's deprivation of which we
should see!
ampoule
03-07-2009, 10:22 AM
should see!
should listen too!
but I'd rather touch it
aroma intoxicating
then taste
alakungfu
03-07-2009, 11:02 AM
then taste
of saffron and
rose jelly, deep inside
the brink of disseminating
flavours
adwara1
03-16-2009, 08:38 PM
Flavors
life Is full of
them let go yourselves
off of the bland being you will find all the
colors
ampoule
03-17-2009, 08:20 AM
colors
some true some not
wear your ribbons lightly
give them away, do not strangle
with lies
firefangled
03-17-2009, 09:08 AM
with lies
is not the way
make promises come true
hope floats on briny circumstance
faith too
Lozenge121
03-17-2009, 11:20 PM
Faith too
Floats away when
It is proved unable
To fix all problems of the lost
Human
alakungfu
03-18-2009, 04:36 PM
the cold
drawing me in
its Swarovsky castle
playing out its rapt symphony
in white
alakungfu
03-18-2009, 04:40 PM
Sorry, wrong entry
human
suffering, why?
for the little things or
for the reasons leaders make in
their place?
ampoule
03-24-2009, 08:31 AM
their place?
why is it theirs?
can't it be mine also?
I will sleep in the corner here,
dreaming
adwara1
03-25-2009, 09:59 AM
Dreaming
been done enough
time has arrived now
march into wilderness hiding
the dreamland
mazHur
03-25-2009, 11:35 AM
dreamland-
my only clime
where I meet sweet fairies
waving their wands murmuring chants
of love
adwara1
03-25-2009, 12:44 PM
Of love
and war are men
ardent war for love, love for war
are base, sacrifice is the
zenith
mazHur
03-25-2009, 07:41 PM
zenith
is that one point
where the visionary
force hits the far most particle
in glum
ampoule
03-29-2009, 02:03 PM
in glum
you have fallen
it's rather sticky, no?
its slimy web holding you tight
let go
mazHur
03-29-2009, 02:09 PM
let go
she's a buddy!
she came here looking for
someone she knows but doesn't want
to tell.
Hobbes
03-30-2009, 09:45 PM
to tell.
It is hard to
When he watches sports but
also has a subscription to
Glamour
adwara1
03-30-2009, 10:58 PM
Glamour
who can resist
whatever the era from
ancient to modern it cast its
fairy spell
alakungfu
04-01-2009, 11:13 AM
fairy
spell of thousands
of childhood dreams
hanging in suspended net of
balance
adwara1
04-01-2009, 11:37 AM
Balance
big need for a
relation, ego and
doubt forever tilting it on
both ends
firefangled
04-02-2009, 01:19 AM
Waking
something turning
like azaleas in March
delicate among the lions
dark dreams
adwara1
04-02-2009, 12:53 PM
Dark dreams
lure innocent
souls promising joy, blind
from nothingness they sustain the quest
alone
alakungfu
04-02-2009, 04:02 PM
alone
in the sunlight
holding your dreams
from framing encroaching shadows
in love
ampoule
04-05-2009, 08:06 AM
in love
there is no shame
inhibitions are gone
windows opened by the senses
listen
adwara1
04-05-2009, 03:24 PM
Listen
flowers whisper
we don't last for long, but are
loved for which we are, for as long as
we are
ampoule
04-06-2009, 08:37 AM
we are
is what I'm told
we were, too, but now are
and someday we will be again
till then
adwara1
04-06-2009, 08:53 PM
Till then
when hope rains with
vigor and flowers bloom
in the withered garden of glory
I strive
alakungfu
04-17-2009, 04:32 PM
I strive
to make sense yet
I fight to understand
a wealth of uncertainties fill
my fill
mazHur
04-17-2009, 04:37 PM
my fill
who can fulfill?
I am ever thirsty
Like a cloud floating in the sky
rainless
alakungfu
04-18-2009, 12:42 PM
rainless
Arizona
vales construed facts of life
with absence of contents caught up
in cups
adwara1
04-19-2009, 11:42 AM
In cups
we poured our souls
bodies quivered as the
horned man drank, we got all the riches
but joy
mazHur
04-19-2009, 12:19 PM
but joy
is the name of
a dodo and no chance
of finding one to sing the song
of love.
breathtest
04-19-2009, 12:41 PM
Extinct
Lost in a time
When order fractures and
Wakes nocturnal with angry eyes
Alive
Hobbes
04-19-2009, 09:24 PM
But Joy!
Harked the angels.
The Demons were banished
And the ignorant purity
kept Chaste
alakungfu
04-20-2009, 03:06 PM
kept Chaste
through the annals
of Audacity and
Rhyme in idiosyncratic
Metre
mazHur
04-20-2009, 03:23 PM
Metre
is a measure
of the air you inhale
and exhale into graded words
in life.
alakungfu
04-21-2009, 01:20 PM
in life
I find what my
Maker had in mind for
me and what I shared with his sleight
of hand
Kayrose
04-21-2009, 08:28 PM
In hand
We walk together
Till the road ends
And all we have is us
Forever together.
I have no Idea if I did that right but here it is!
ampoule
04-23-2009, 08:34 AM
In hand
We walk together
Till the road ends
And all we have is us
Forever together.
I have no Idea if I did that right but here it is!
It's lovely but not the correct form. You begin with the last two syllables of the person above you, so it should have been 'of' hand and then you follow the pattern of syllables for a cinquain...
2
4
6
8
2
Good luck and try again, often.
ampoule
04-23-2009, 08:37 AM
of hand
I watch you reach
do not prick your finger
unless prepared to sleep it off
wake up
alakungfu
04-23-2009, 01:40 PM
wake up
your fates await
pick one for your own style
or dark destiny may find you
sweating
ampoule
04-27-2009, 08:51 AM
sweating
tossing, turning
a hot night of dreaming
drag me through the sand to oceans
quenching
firefangled
04-27-2009, 09:30 AM
quenching
this early dew
day rising like magma
from the oceans edge makes me burn
for life
Il Penseroso
04-27-2009, 02:43 PM
for life
and plenitude
to show, window blinds must
spread slivers of our inside selves
to day
ampoule
04-28-2009, 09:16 AM
to day
a toast to you
I hold my glass up high
my face a rainbow reflecting
crystals
alakungfu
04-28-2009, 10:06 AM
crystals
of starlight flash
like a fairy's hard gaze,
iridesce keenly before my
dark eyes
ampoule
05-02-2009, 09:18 AM
dark eyes
such deep dark pools
my reflection is lost
I'll not cause the mirror to break
with tears
alakungfu
05-02-2009, 09:41 AM
with tears
I recognized
the childhood sweetheart's gaze
in his yearning bad boy pose that
made light
firefangled
05-06-2009, 02:32 AM
made light
understanding
a beam in the darkness
of hate and mistrust that is war
true sight
symphony
05-06-2009, 03:32 PM
true sight
a world, an eye
dark eyes falling upon
a darker world, a moment of
truth, curbed
alakungfu
05-11-2009, 01:39 PM
truth, curbed
at love's expense
due to the lyrical
contour of heart's shuffled nature
star-tossed
ampoule
05-11-2009, 02:23 PM
star-tossed
mixed galaxies
the shaken universe
poured out, a creamy froth savored
drink up
ampoule
05-14-2009, 08:52 AM
Where are all of you cinquain people? Hanging with the haikus I guess. ;)
drink up
try to quench it
your thirst for everything
usually you drown all of us
your quest
mazHur
05-14-2009, 09:00 AM
your quest
for cinquain
should now be over as
you asked for it and you've got it
want more?
alakungfu
05-14-2009, 12:58 PM
want more
rapt expression
or are your ears burning?
dismal the trust that prompts your
sorrows
mazHur
05-14-2009, 01:08 PM
sorrows
will live as long
as I live in this world;
after me there will be all bliss
no grief.
ampoule
05-14-2009, 02:08 PM
no grief
just stay alone
people bring such heartache
keep yourself company, it's best
be sane
mazHur
05-14-2009, 02:10 PM
be sane
why do you say?
Insanity is bliss
It makes you forget who you are
and where!
ampoule
05-14-2009, 02:14 PM
and where!
it matters not
I'll try absurdity
as long as I'm invisible
for now
mazHur
05-14-2009, 02:20 PM
for now
let us bother
not as soon a time will
come which will definitely prove
we're One!
alakungfu
05-14-2009, 05:17 PM
we're one
in perceiving
unity, partners split
into witness of the power
of love
ampoule
05-15-2009, 08:47 AM
of love
a book, a guide
turn to page twenty nine
compare your leafy shape with mine
a match
alakungfu
05-15-2009, 01:24 PM
a match
Chess, Checkers,
volleyball, goofy golf
all in a breezy summer
day's turn
mazHur
05-15-2009, 03:33 PM
day's turn
and then return
after each and every
night no matter it rains or hails
they're there!
alakungfu
05-15-2009, 04:35 PM
they're there
my tools to hand
my weapons to bent mind
watch me strike a stirring stasis
acclaim!
qimissung
05-20-2009, 04:07 PM
acclaim
a toy boat
sailing under the bridge
why want this which fades away like
twilight?
alakungfu
06-05-2009, 02:02 PM
twilight
source of his sighs
pdestal for her dreams
land of the unsung projects run
uphill
qimissung
06-08-2009, 11:26 PM
uphill
first family
then clamor to survive
I want to live in Belize, please
arrive
ampoule
06-10-2009, 09:09 AM
arrive
day is dawning
the sun still rests in clouds
the rain will dust the tablelands
do chores
alakungfu
06-10-2009, 10:07 AM
so chore
when I could be
reading about vampires
who never do chores, they just last
and need
qimissung
06-10-2009, 06:48 PM
and need
to breathe you in
my feet are jubilant
my hair dancing a salsa, I
sing you
mazHur
06-10-2009, 06:54 PM
sing you
what? a sonnet
from Shakespeare or Blake;
Byron is too blunt and crude for
this hour.
alakungfu
06-10-2009, 07:42 PM
this hour
how it galls, and
yet, this place, how it soothes,
adores me that I have a stitch
to wear
qimissung
06-12-2009, 01:26 AM
to wear
this hour adorns
it's richness a satin
bright as a ruby, clement as
our love
mazHur
06-12-2009, 04:53 AM
our love
is a phantom
which roams about cyber
like a shadow of virtual beast
in rut.
Haunted
06-12-2009, 08:55 AM
in rut
him loving her
until the hunters come
all ends in a second: one shot
two kill
alakungfu
06-12-2009, 02:02 PM
two kill
initiative
one kills, consequence
ten kill, blanket occupation
rough break
qimissung
06-12-2009, 03:33 PM
rough break
wild sea washes
me toward the horizon
fierce waves slam, sink, sea foam strangles
why me?
Nick Capozzoli
06-13-2009, 01:05 AM
Why me
Says the faucet
Being twisted. Drip, drip,
Drip says the water in the sink
I think.
alakungfu
06-13-2009, 12:30 PM
I think
in hemispheres
I entertain in spheres
Where does the phosphorescent yield
pick sides?
Haunted
06-14-2009, 07:23 PM
pick sides
the right or left
I turn and toss trying
not to get up on the wrong side
of bed
just mercedes
06-14-2009, 08:02 PM
of bed
of dreams, perchance,
knitting up missing threads
maintaining the spirit's garments
in light
ampoule
06-15-2009, 06:20 AM
in light
there is no dark
but shadows persist, watch,
an opening to send in clouds
and rain
mazHur
06-15-2009, 07:18 AM
and rain
and hail came too
mysterious weather
haunted the space all around there
one day.
Haunted
06-15-2009, 08:43 AM
one day
one fateful day
the bath water will rise
to my chin and carry me off
to sea
alakungfu
06-15-2009, 09:29 AM
to sea
where the mermen
carry off the truest
believers who fantasize
in style
acdouglas92
06-15-2009, 09:44 AM
The cold,
which creeps slowly
and dares me to question
my own brash incredulity
with reason.
qimissung
06-16-2009, 12:21 AM
in style
I slink into
the ballroom, hold out my
arms and I am swept away by
my prince
with reason
held at bay I
fling my heart into the
fire whose flames encompass rose of
my heart
alakungfu
06-16-2009, 09:58 AM
my heart
aches with pleasure
at the sly, wicked hint
of raucous wayward deluge you
propose
Haunted
06-16-2009, 10:21 AM
propose
that's a big word
let's just think small for now
thanks for the thought and the dainty
diamonds
mazHur
06-16-2009, 10:23 AM
propose
some novel scheme
a way to kiss your heart
make you smile from far and near
always.
just mercedes
06-16-2009, 10:26 AM
diamonds
are my best friend
even better than mink
better than the keys to the Rolls
always
mazHur
06-16-2009, 10:26 AM
diamonds
should not go waste
they are tokens of love
impetus which made me propose
your hand.
alakungfu
06-16-2009, 02:03 PM
your hand
strong and stern, kind
to the food it prepares,
but blatantly ignorant to
sweet tears
ampoule
06-20-2009, 12:48 AM
sweet tears
moisten my face
a glaze when they harden
that breaks in two when you slice my
trusting
Haunted
06-21-2009, 12:29 PM
trusting
you will catch me
like the game I fall back
but yet this ain't no game and you
didn't!
alakungfu
06-24-2009, 10:58 AM
Didn't
rise with the sun
to greet the new day, dear.
I left it behind last night and
you, too.
Beautifull
06-24-2009, 07:13 PM
You, too,
I'm done playing,
You've taken it too far,
Too much pain from your hand it came,
I cry...
alakungfu
06-25-2009, 09:27 AM
I cry
in the pit of
my soul where no one's been
since the day you introduced us.
Feel, pain!
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 06:49 PM
Feel, Pain?
is it really?
the squeezing and wrenching
of a heart. it seems pain is too...
simple...:bawling:
from the heart, this is!
rtc143
06-25-2009, 07:21 PM
Simple
can you be sure?
or is it the toughest
thing you will ever have to do?
choices
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 07:24 PM
choices
i flinch from them
which way do i go now?
what if the way i go isn't
my way?
rtc143
06-25-2009, 07:27 PM
My way
or the highway
is so very cliche
and I am just here to say HEY!
guess what!?
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 07:30 PM
guess what?!
i am crazy!
i can't help but say
my love is mot my life, but is
my heart...
rtc143
06-25-2009, 07:42 PM
my heart
is out of me
no literally ah!
hurry please put it back in now!
really!
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 07:44 PM
really?
how can it be?
you were here a sec ago
where did you go so fast away
from me
rtc143
06-25-2009, 07:46 PM
from me
is this new key
where it leads is my heart
feel free to come in anytime!
feel free...
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 07:53 PM
feel free...
to live a life
to love or hate as wish
to give or take with the one you
admire.
rtc143
06-25-2009, 07:55 PM
admire
it as i do
all its slendor and its
beautiful glimmer and spark
beauty
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 07:57 PM
beauty
some hard to find
some easily founded
it doesn't matter unless it's
inside...
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:03 PM
inside
my mind i felt
amazed and inspired
by the poem above this one
so true
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:06 PM
*thank you*
so true
that a love's not
found but discovered when
two opposite people attract
rare love
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:14 PM
rare love
isn't all love
as rare as rain in the
driest deserts in the world today
all love
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:16 PM
all love
but some just hate
the ones who love even
when they are at their worst, they love
anytime
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:20 PM
Anytime
you get a chance
please consider changing
history by making new hope
for us
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:23 PM
for us
i might just risk
anything for the love
that i know i would receive from
just you
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:25 PM
just you
and only you
forever and ever
we will stay together for good
or bad.....
dun dun dun!!!
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:31 PM
:lol:
or bad..
i can't tell right,
is it really? it seems
to turn a nasty green color...
rotten!
uh oh!
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:33 PM
rotten
disgusting rats
sold me out for a pound
now i'm stuck here in this prison
that's life
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:36 PM
that's life
the right to live
is the right to life, right?
i don't know if life is living
is it?
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:38 PM
is it
something simple
or something too complex
or could it be that you don't care
i see
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:40 PM
i see
the right and wrong,
see pain in too many,
see love to heal the broken ones,
healing
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:44 PM
healing
those who need it
fills my heart with joy, and
i can't help but help all despite
my thoughts
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:47 PM
my thoughts,
centered on one.
though he does know i do,
he ignores, constantly rejected,
i cry
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:49 PM
I cried
just now when i
read that because you seemed
so saddened and tortured by this
person
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:52 PM
person
who lives in a
pinapple under the
sea...under the sea, i can't help
my mind
rtc143
06-25-2009, 08:54 PM
my mind
is just like that
dont worry it happens
to the very best of us so...
blue snake!!
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 08:59 PM
blue snake
a fantasy?
or a type diamond?
maybe a pretty ornament?
rubbish!
rtc143
06-25-2009, 09:02 PM
rubbish
is a good word
to use when something weird
comes your way;you think it's stupid
like this
Beautifull
06-25-2009, 09:09 PM
like this,
to say goodbye
it's just cruel what time does
to two friends who enjoy their fun
next time....
Haunted
06-29-2009, 12:05 AM
next time....
we'll do it right
but deep down in our hearts
you know...I know...there won't be a
next time
MorpheusSandman
06-29-2009, 12:15 AM
Next time
I'll see you there
Across the walks and glade
By the lights of a crescent sun
Please be
Haunted
06-29-2009, 01:01 AM
please be
understanding
she was only playing
didn't know she has the power to
destroy...
mazHur
06-29-2009, 01:31 AM
destroy
if you wish to
my heart, my soul, my life
I have dedicated to you
my love!
Haunted
06-29-2009, 01:42 AM
my love
I am the night
watching you sleep and
it pains me at dawn that I have
to leave
Beautifull
06-29-2009, 02:18 PM
to leave?
oh what a shame!
party has not begun
why wouuld i leave fun behind for
curfew
March Hare
06-30-2009, 11:59 PM
Curfew?
I'll take you
Home. Then come back to the
Party and hopefully find a
New girl
ampoule
07-08-2009, 10:42 AM
New girl
you created
with your insistent love
you push, I stumble but keep my
footing
Beautifull
07-08-2009, 11:37 PM
footing
i have lost it
way back when life got hard
now i'm tripping, trying to find
a hold
qimissung
07-09-2009, 09:20 PM
a hold
on me I feel
your hand light and warm on
my neck and I feel love well up
behold
Beautifull
07-09-2009, 09:23 PM
behold
the one to me
that i'm the one to them
we stay together forever
or die!
Haunted
07-12-2009, 02:46 PM
or die
a hero's death
a war with no winners —
just two people, casualty
of love
Beautifull
07-12-2009, 05:45 PM
of love
i will be born
of love i live my life,
of love i will die in good peace
or else.
Haunted
07-12-2009, 07:29 PM
or else?
oh no, please don't
'cos it won't change a thing
it's desiny that we belong
apart
Beautifull
07-12-2009, 07:36 PM
apart
never happens
for both of us it is
forever, love in our hearts or
heartache
Haunted
07-15-2009, 09:18 PM
heartache —
to you it's just
collateral damage
you've no idea you just ended
my world
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