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CdnReader
08-20-2008, 10:04 AM
leave me
to weep in the
wake, drowning in your quick
passing, floundering and gasping
for air

mazHur
08-20-2008, 10:13 AM
for air
to flutter wings
of a butterfly or
the blades of a windmill the west
wind blows

CdnReader
08-20-2008, 10:16 AM
needs thrust
and energy
to propel us beyond
the boundaries of this present
concept

mazHur
08-20-2008, 10:27 AM
concept
is like a dream
it may seem true to one
mind but false to the other or
may change

CdnReader
08-20-2008, 11:10 AM
may change,
june flows like a
summer stream, then july
hammers the senses, hazy and
hot days

qimissung
08-20-2008, 07:11 PM
hot days
August lurching
toward us like a mad
dog-killing sun has us in it's
crosshairs

CdnReader
08-20-2008, 07:14 PM
crosshairs
identify
targets, triggers pulled by
madmen who feel justified in
their rage

Oniw17
08-20-2008, 07:20 PM
Their rage
It echoes on
But the sound of their cries
Has vanished into the abyss
With time

CdnReader
08-20-2008, 07:23 PM
with time
counting away
the seconds of our lives,
how can we not grasp every bit
with glee?

qimissung
08-22-2008, 07:09 PM
with glee
we gnash the pulp
of life, tearing the meat,
sucking the juice, feeling it give
us life

opheliac
08-23-2008, 01:04 AM
us life
now imprisoned
in a cold, sunless sphere
day after day, without a torch
to guide

qimissung
08-23-2008, 11:03 AM
to guide
the loveless and
the blind, the white bird flies
into the storm, into the dark
with you

CdnReader
08-23-2008, 12:39 PM
with you
I expose the
inner core of me, the
soft, untouched parts that languish there,
unseen.

opheliac
08-24-2008, 02:28 AM
unseen,
in the great depths,
down, down below the sea,
a secluded cave of beauty
is mine.

firefangled
08-25-2008, 07:55 AM
is mine
somewhere out there,
the uncluttered hour,
the faceless clock, space with silence
real time

symphony
08-25-2008, 07:59 AM
real time
and surreal
timelessnesses, we are
born to live through the years, then lose
the tracks

opheliac
08-25-2008, 08:24 AM
the tracks
as thin as sticks
held my train, now broken
and motionless, pulled off its course
to death

_JadeRain_
08-29-2008, 11:55 AM
To death
I leave these words
You shall fail to take me
Until given authority
By me.

firefangled
08-30-2008, 01:27 AM
real time
and surreal
timelessnesses, we are
born to live through the years, then lose
the tracks

I like this one, Symphony

symphony
08-30-2008, 09:22 AM
Thanks Fire. :)

By me,
the roads create
a destiny. In me,
rests centuries of history...
of me.

mazHur
08-30-2008, 10:29 AM
History? Oh, no,,,,not yet! lol


of me
better not think
think about yourself
think how you will make history
in youth

alakungfu
08-30-2008, 11:47 PM
In youth,
Aristotle,
did you comtemplate the
paradox in arbitrary
these thoughts?

mazHur
08-31-2008, 08:04 AM
these thoughts
live as long as
one lives; they pop off as
soon as spirit leaves its home
in ruins

qimissung
09-01-2008, 12:10 AM
ruins
step carefully
once beautiful, now gone
the debris left behind can still
destroy

Riesa
09-01-2008, 12:24 AM
destroy
the reaction,
it's tireless and mean.
No changes forthcoming unless
your own.

firefangled
09-01-2008, 04:58 AM
your own
words, your own hands
make something small, love it
with care, watch it grow, realize
your love

symphony
09-01-2008, 08:27 AM
your love,
they say, has wings.
Mine -knows no blue air- clings
to worldly pleasures and lives in
small things

alakungfu
09-01-2008, 10:34 AM
small things
permeable
in the spaces between
shelving and window-dressed storefront
resins

mazHur
09-01-2008, 11:40 AM
resins
are a thing of
the past; fill crevices
join broken hearts with polymers
they're good!

CdnReader
09-01-2008, 01:59 PM
they're good!
the salt-scented
breezes that greeted me,
despite weighted down by heavy
luggage

:)

mazHur
09-01-2008, 02:29 PM
luggage
handed over
to the concierge made us
free to move around the garden
of love

CdnReader
09-01-2008, 05:52 PM
of love...
must we speak of
love when grey skies loom low,
heavy with rain, and cold wet winds
batter?

alakungfu
09-01-2008, 10:05 PM
batter?
one part ripple
two part triple-decker
fusion -- combine stiffly in rough
placard

mazHur
09-02-2008, 08:24 AM
placard
caught my eye at
the airport and made me
feel I was not forsaken by
my friends

alakungfu
09-02-2008, 05:35 PM
my friends
surround my car
on a weekend evening
vying for my refreshed wallet
from work

qimissung
09-02-2008, 07:10 PM
from work
I walk home dull
of heart and mind, a drone
who seeks refreshment with the rose
of love

Sarida
09-02-2008, 07:11 PM
from work
sincere longing
to leave it all behind
and drive on and on forever
alone

Sarida
09-02-2008, 07:13 PM
:( you beat me to it!!!

CdnReader
09-04-2008, 06:16 AM
alone
but not adrift,
immersed in white silence,
caught in the irreversible
life flow

wilbur lim
09-04-2008, 07:26 AM
How great
Is thou,how great
Is your advice,magnanimity,demeanour and
The most dominant in my life:Your humanity towards me!
God bless.

ampoule
09-04-2008, 03:54 PM
Aren't we still supposed to use the last two words of the last post?


alone
but not adrift,
immersed in white silence,
caught in the irreversible
life flow

life flow
sometimes stagnant
open up the pumps please
stir the muck that's underneath me
refresh

mazHur
09-04-2008, 04:28 PM
Aren't we still supposed to use the last two words of the last post?



life flow
sometimes stagnant
open up the pumps please
stir the muck that's underneath me
refresh

you are supposed to begin with the last two syllables-not words.:)

refresh
take it easy
all the muck beneath you
has been scrubbed, the place cleaned up
Begin!:)

CdnReader
09-04-2008, 05:02 PM
Begin
now, for waiting
means that tomorrow's gains
will be lost in today's missing
pieces.

mazHur
09-04-2008, 05:10 PM
pieces
put together
may join the broken heart
but how will you hide the broken
heart lines?

CdnReader
09-04-2008, 05:13 PM
heart lines
should be start lines
begin here, travel there,
don't stray too far, or this dim path
will fade

mazHur
09-04-2008, 05:19 PM
will fade
and never bloom
again; the roses and
daisies of heart need a sprinkle of
your love

ampoule
09-04-2008, 06:21 PM
Thanks mazHur. :D I think you had to correct me on that once before. ;)

your love
is scaring me
holding me like a vise
trying to make me cry uncle
I can't

CdnReader
09-04-2008, 06:47 PM
I can't
imagine life
without your smile, your eyes,
your sparkle, and your eagerness,
and you

alakungfu
09-04-2008, 10:44 PM
and you
require my most
valiant escapades,
the adventures I aspire to
and crave

qimissung
09-06-2008, 01:04 AM
and crave
a piece of your
kind understanding; we,
in silent yearning, beg, the moon
and I.

mazHur
09-06-2008, 05:27 AM
and I
can see the whole
world in the iris of
your enchanting eyes smiling
with love

qimissung
09-06-2008, 10:45 AM
with love
contentment our
hearts beat out this paean
of gladness-thank you God for this
dear one

mazHur
09-06-2008, 10:53 AM
dear one
how long do you
want me to suffer the
pangs of separation from you?
Come back!

mazHur
09-06-2008, 10:54 AM
dear one,
how long do you
want me to suffer the
pangs of separation from you?
buck up!

CdnReader
09-06-2008, 01:19 PM
buck up!
straighten that neck,
throw those shoulders back, and
get your arms and legs ready for
more work!

mazHur
09-06-2008, 01:24 PM
more work!
how much more work
do you want me to do
I've already 'blessed' you for more
than thrice!

CdnReader
09-06-2008, 01:53 PM
than thrice!
but how can he
imagine that she would
wait any less than a lifetime
for him

mazHur
09-06-2008, 02:13 PM
for him
I waited long
but in the end what I
got was nothing but a bundle
of lies.

qimissung
09-06-2008, 03:24 PM
of lies
his twisted tongues'
words curled around my
heart so beautifully it broke
in half

CdnReader
09-06-2008, 03:29 PM
in half,
in quarters, in
eighths or sixteenths, there is
no way to divide my love much
smaller

mazHur
09-06-2008, 03:47 PM
in half,
in quarters, in
eighths or sixteenths, there is
no way to divide my love much
smaller


:)

smaller
the meteors get
the farther they travel
in the cosmic clime until they
vanish

qimissung
09-06-2008, 04:21 PM
vanish
sorrow until
tomorrow; I'll throw you
in the trash bin, oh scurvy one
Be gone!

mazHur
09-06-2008, 04:35 PM
Be gone!
I have seen you
experienced you too
get lost with your ugly face,
sorrow!

qimissung
09-06-2008, 05:07 PM
sorrow
banished, light lives
amazing life-I dance
to unseen music; won't you dance
with me?

alakungfu
09-06-2008, 05:42 PM
With me,
without the one
you were with yesterday.
Will you stay with me a little
longer?

mazHur
09-06-2008, 06:05 PM
longer
than the Nile is
the story of my life
it's an other Decamaron
to say

CdnReader
09-06-2008, 06:20 PM
to say
life is love, and
love is life, leaves no room
for beauty and pain and desire
within

dramageek
09-06-2008, 06:25 PM
within
the mists we keep
our secrets to ourselves
while longing to break free of life's
constraints

CdnReader
09-06-2008, 06:27 PM
constraints,
like chains, bind us
to the material
world, and our spirits drift off, lost,
searching

alakungfu
09-07-2008, 01:25 PM
searching
like famed Horace,
jack of all trades, master
to none, true to philosophers,
steady

CdnReader
09-07-2008, 02:01 PM
steady
to horizon,
sails unfurled, ready to
fly over wishes and dreams, with
bright face

mazHur
09-07-2008, 02:43 PM
bright face
like the bright moon
brightens the nights of my
life like the bright sun unveiling
at dawn

alakungfu
09-07-2008, 02:55 PM
at dawn
Rome's tradition
returns with Horace' slaked
persona drawing Aristotle's
good sense

mazHur
09-07-2008, 03:38 PM
good sense
makes you feel good;
makes others feel good as
well; good sense also leads you to
drink bane

alakungfu
09-07-2008, 04:27 PM
drink bane,
as Socrates,
would worry Plato when
reflecting on biblical fare
betides

mazHur
09-07-2008, 04:43 PM
betides
often the gloom
and glum the heart but the
life goes on and on on its steam
till last.

alakungfu
09-07-2008, 05:23 PM
till last,
in Socrates
pure heart, that out might rise
the fabled myth of Adonis'
bloom coaxed

mazHur
09-07-2008, 05:34 PM
bloom coaxed,
nothing happened,
the pink rose bud withered
in the sirocco unable
to bloom

aBIGsheep
09-07-2008, 06:40 PM
To Bloom?
Not you! Please, no!
To turn into something!
Horrible, uncontrollable
Resist!

mazHur
09-07-2008, 06:47 PM
Resist!
Will you? What for?
There is suffering enough;
If you want to escalate it
Resist!

qimissung
09-07-2008, 06:53 PM
Resist
fight to the end
the desire to submerge
your soul in the swamp of all souls
Rise up!

aBIGsheep
09-07-2008, 06:58 PM
Rise up?
Pfft, My dear boy,
I know and, hell, you know
that I'll be standing over you ready
to push.

mazHur
09-07-2008, 07:01 PM
Rise up!
stand erect
shoulders straight head up
only then you can conquer what
you want

mazHur
09-07-2008, 07:04 PM
to push
someone into
the bog of suspicion
is like pulling a crocodile
by nose.

alakungfu
09-07-2008, 08:00 PM
by nose
was Christian-reared
Cecilia dragged out past
the lions' cages to return
judgment

mazHur
09-07-2008, 08:09 PM
judgment
may have been wrong
what is trash for someone
may be treasure for someone else
Judge not.

alakungfu
09-08-2008, 03:44 AM
judge not
join me, ally
trundle my wee foibles
and I will avail you of your
threshold

firefangled
09-09-2008, 08:17 AM
threshold,
the dark room waits -
the floor squeeks, curtains sigh
where the night crawls in the window
smiling

alakungfu
09-09-2008, 03:04 PM
smiling
from ear to ear
Caesar's virgin warring
sense heard no threat in Gallic troops'
sashay

qimissung
09-09-2008, 11:05 PM
sashay
dance, waltz, occlude
with a rush of wings and
swing me round and higher than your
sweet dreams

alakungfu
09-10-2008, 07:28 AM
sweet dreams
elude my grasp
detail my counscious mind
emphasize the world as I once
knew it

mazHur
09-10-2008, 08:06 AM
knew it
knew what you meant
but sweet dreams are remote
from these sleepless tired eyes of mine
My love!

alakungfu
09-10-2008, 12:54 PM
My love!
My lottery-
ticket holder, what bitter-
sweet combination together
are we.

mazHur
09-10-2008, 01:57 PM
are we
treading the path-
the path of Romeo
and Juliet in our whims,
yes,no?

alakungfu
09-10-2008, 05:20 PM
yes,no?
Fulvia sum
Cleopatra quid pro
quo Octavia willing round Marc's
haren.

mazHur
09-10-2008, 05:36 PM
Haren
and his spouse
name it Mrs haren
went out hitch hiking not knowing
where, why?

alakungfu
09-10-2008, 06:20 PM
yes,no?
Fulvia sum
Cleopatra quid pro
quo Octavia willing round Marc's
haren.

Sorry mazHur, that was a typo. I meant harem, not haren.

alakungfu
09-10-2008, 06:27 PM
where, why?
Never say die.
Scour the skies, sweep the plains;
finish what drove you to its last
waiver...

mazHur
09-11-2008, 07:08 AM
It's alright. Haren is also a word denoting many places as well as Irish surname:)


waiver
impossible
have been charged a quarter
for flooding erroneously
Geez, help!;)

alakungfu
09-11-2008, 08:17 AM
Geez, help!
So many reps
after the meaning of
leaning on this charged driving sway
of life.

mazHur
09-11-2008, 08:44 AM
of life
and death we talk
but seldom think that death
is more mysterious than life;
how come?

qimissung
09-13-2008, 01:24 AM
how come
they drove through the
skies bringing as their gift
the mighty power to destroy?
Come, Peace...

mazHur
09-13-2008, 08:45 AM
Come, Peace...
sit beside me
havn't seen you around
for centuries; havn't felt you
for long.

qimissung
09-13-2008, 11:58 AM
for long
you have not stayed,
Peace, to break bread with your
brothers, stay, we are ill, do not
desert.

alakungfu
09-13-2008, 01:57 PM
desert,
site of sighs in
the thousands, desperate
field of Dali's premonitions, lair
of loss

qimissung
09-16-2008, 12:13 AM
of loss
I speak my mouth
opens and the pictures
creep sorrowfully into the
grim world

mazHur
09-16-2008, 12:22 AM
grim world
full of miseries
wake up in the morning
toil all day,return home and sleep
no love!

qimissung
09-16-2008, 01:07 AM
no love
fever falls on
me like night my
soul hovers like a shade that finds
no home

mazHur
09-16-2008, 01:14 AM
no home
for the stranded
lovers in the heaven
of love; just a nook in the house
to sigh

alakungfu
09-16-2008, 03:59 AM
to sigh,
to call in pain,
the day a redolent
reeling track resonating with
truisms

clumsy angelle
09-16-2008, 04:58 AM
The cold
is still with me

alakungfu
09-21-2008, 10:11 AM
with me,
the memory
of your timely kiss, passed
down from the matchless gods themselves,
Zeus' page

schadenfreude
09-22-2008, 08:29 AM
Zeus' page
threw down a bolt
of thunder in anger,
and now - there is an accident
on earth.

gwyndd
09-22-2008, 10:05 AM
the cold
trundles about
the windowsill asking
to be let in to warm upon
the stove

wilbur lim
09-22-2008, 10:09 AM
Compulsion,
Oh compulsion!You make
Me envious,chagrin and harbour innumerable
Feelings.Compulsion,you are malignant indeed,for you
compel me.

qimissung
09-22-2008, 11:36 PM
compel
me not my own
beloved, quietly
sit and talk of nothing, then, please,
kiss me

qimissung
09-22-2008, 11:38 PM
To the dear new writers who are joining us, the cinquain is five lines of 2, 4, 6. 8 and 2 syllables. We take the last line of the one before us and begin again. You've written some beautiful poetry; I hope you'll visit and write again.

mazHur
09-23-2008, 09:35 AM
compel
me not my own
beloved, quietly
sit and talk of nothing, then, please,
kiss me

kiss me
there is no need
for words of mouth to speak
of love; let our lips meet and
converse!

Cellar Door
09-23-2008, 01:44 PM
kiss me
there is no need
for words of mouth to speak
of love; let our lips meet and
converse!

Converse
with the trees and
realize you are not
alone; good greenness embraces
always

mazHur
09-23-2008, 06:10 PM
always
look for good things
things that do not betray
things that keep the evil away
always!
-

firefangled
09-24-2008, 12:46 AM
always
found me never -
love came in stops and starts,
a game for much less tender hearts,
not mine

wilbur lim
09-24-2008, 09:55 AM
Not mine,
Not yours,discernibly not,
Behold at this peculiar-looking clock,
I perceive this belongs to the idiosyncratic man
At dock.

mazHur
09-24-2008, 08:33 PM
At dock?
No, I'm at sea
to see the cinguain chain
break at its most strongest link
My God!

Cellar Door
09-24-2008, 09:35 PM
At dock?
No, I'm at sea
to see the cinguain chain
break at its most strongest link
My God!

My God
Where are you now
Lonely and dying sigh
With my last breath I try to
Forget

mazHur
09-24-2008, 09:38 PM
My God
why have you abandoned
me? Let me die alone here-
Forget

please read note by a previous poster (Qimissung) here regarding rules governing cinquain writing,,thanks


here it is

''To the dear new writers who are joining us, the cinquain is five lines of 2, 4, 6. 8 and 2 syllables. We take the last line of the one before us and begin again. You've written some beautiful poetry; I hope you'll visit and write again. Qim'':)

Phauszzie
09-24-2008, 11:12 PM
Forget,
no memories
relieved of our troubles
we worry no more as before,
live on.

mazHur
09-25-2008, 02:57 AM
live on
keep your cup filled
with the old amber wine
inebriate, play music ,dance
live on!

qimissung
10-04-2008, 11:22 AM
live on
through fire and ice
through loneliness and pain
into the white heat of new love
savor

mazHur
10-04-2008, 11:33 AM
savor,
drink from the cup
of my eyes the wine of
love until inebriation
engulfs

qimissung
10-05-2008, 10:05 PM
engulfs
me as I try
to breathe, your love gently
clasps my neck, pulls me toward you
exhale

mazHur
10-05-2008, 11:00 PM
exhale
love through every
pore of your existence
make me whirl with its ecstasy
inhale

qimissung
10-06-2008, 07:53 AM
Beautiful, mazHur!

mazHur
10-06-2008, 09:57 AM
Beautiful, mazHur!

thanks, Qim.:)

qimissung
10-08-2008, 07:18 PM
inhale
freedom, revere
its' dear perfume; may it
thrive inside you, an intrinsic
blossom

mazHur
10-09-2008, 05:09 AM
blossom
kisses her cheeks
bowing down with the bough
as she passes under the shrub
in spring

ampoule
10-09-2008, 02:34 PM
in spring
thinking of fall
and back to spring again
tripping over summer, forget
winter

qimissung
10-10-2008, 02:53 PM
winter
winds blow, never
mind the cold snow; come sit
with me, let me melt into your
brave fire

mazHur
10-10-2008, 03:29 PM
brave fire
kindles my heart
like love's lamp burning bright
all peace, warmth and light, no fear of
winters

alakungfu
10-12-2008, 01:30 PM
winters
passing into
the murkiness of time's
advancing dominion over
dew course

qimissung
10-13-2008, 11:55 PM
dew course
snails snip through it
as they squidge past clover,
twigs, roots, pebbles, jostling for
first place

alakungfu
10-14-2008, 06:32 AM
first place
of real honour,
second place of seasoned
accomplishment, third place of raw
drawn skills

qimissung
10-14-2008, 11:38 PM
drawn skills
brute bravery
wan technicality
with these strengths, grasp the red apple
begin

alakungfu
10-15-2008, 06:08 AM
begin
damned alarmist
regime evinced roundly
to void infectious instruments
of flight

ampoule
10-16-2008, 01:03 AM
of flight
take off, landing
a steady trip with you
at the controls steering me home
to you

symphony
10-16-2008, 07:13 AM
to you,
october skies,
a breath and broken eyes
lift up and fail too soon, pursue
long sighs...

firefangled
10-16-2008, 08:02 AM
long sighs,
perhaps a smile,
the years have passed a long
while ago, all your wondering whys
and tears

alakungfu
10-16-2008, 01:51 PM
and tears,
second nature,
a closet fantasy
of the tortured silent partner,
unsung

mazHur
10-16-2008, 03:15 PM
unsung
heroes of war
are not the generals
but soldiers who gave their lives
for you

ampoule
10-16-2008, 03:16 PM
unsung
mute rhapsody
exploding from within
open yourself to me, make love
in tune

firefangled
10-16-2008, 06:55 PM
in tune,
oscillations
through the air, the same sky
that holds my dreams in deepest blue
holds you

alakungfu
10-16-2008, 08:49 PM
holds you,
cloned maverick,
chassis of grated hues
binding your essence. close breaths
trapped tight

qimissung
10-17-2008, 11:54 PM
trapped tight
syncopated
voices break free, chorus
that rises higher like a bird
in flight

alakungfu
10-18-2008, 04:10 PM
in flight,
restoring the
gothick of cathedrals,
grandeur of Buckingham Palace,
dollup

qimissung
10-19-2008, 06:21 PM
dollop,
no more, of fate,
a roundelay of love
honeyed perception, hint of hate
life's wine

ampoule
10-20-2008, 07:31 AM
life's wine
let me have it
I drink it, I bathe in it
sometimes sour, sometimes sweet, always
tasty

qimissung
10-21-2008, 12:49 AM
tasty
nougat of life
it's there for the taking
why am I standing here watching,
waiting?

firefangled
10-21-2008, 08:18 AM
waiting,
because light speeds
through us, around us days
throw their confetti at the sun,
and why?

qimissung
10-22-2008, 10:46 PM
and why
as we approach
the midnight hour do we
ask this of ourselves? nevermore
never

ampoule
10-23-2008, 08:15 AM
never
you'll not allow
my escape, my freedom
I'm sure you'll pluck my wings before
I fly

firefangled
10-23-2008, 05:49 PM
I fly
toward the sun,
the heat of memory
colors me, evaporating
for you

mazHur
10-23-2008, 06:27 PM
for you
God created
blooming roses in spring
twinkling stars, moon, and the bright sun,
we both!

Hobbes
10-23-2008, 08:35 PM
We both
sat on the curb.
Silence was our sonnet
of shakespearian tragedies.
I cried

qimissung
10-23-2008, 10:47 PM
I cried
for star true, for
faith, for a night without
squalling cats, for silence; I cried
for you

ampoule
10-24-2008, 03:55 AM
for you
my heart cries, dies
no matter where you are
these lyrics won't let me forget
our time

firefangled
10-24-2008, 05:20 PM
our time
hides in the stars,
ribbons of light across
the purple moor of the night sky,
ghostly

ampoule
10-24-2008, 05:27 PM
ghostly
ghostly galleons
rapiers and pistols
raise them high for my protection
save me

firefangled
10-24-2008, 05:40 PM
save me
from the highway,
your face in the window,
like moonlight before the thunder,
wait there

symphony
10-24-2008, 05:45 PM
wait there
a while, in which
the whiles we had before
will tear apart a world to show
an eye

firefangled
10-25-2008, 06:35 PM
an eye
that sees our now,
infinite in spaces
past to us, and those toward which
we move

mazHur
10-25-2008, 06:38 PM
we move
and the earth moves
with us; the stars look at
us with moving emotions and
moon spins!

ampoule
10-27-2008, 05:40 PM
moon spins
star's tornado
take cover, now, you must
for surely you will suffocate
moon dust

mazHur
10-27-2008, 05:52 PM
moon dust
covers the earth
like you and me engulfed
in the growing shadow of love
forev'r

firefangled
10-27-2008, 06:26 PM
forev'r




Maz, that's a mighty thin slice of pie, but it's still a "slice of pie."

******

forev'r,
a funny word,
trying to disappear,
so unlike its infinite self,
endless

mazHur
10-27-2008, 07:29 PM
Maz, that's a mighty thin slice of pie, but it's still a "slice of pie."

******

forev'r,
a funny word,
trying to disappear,
so unlike its infinite self,
endless

yeah, 'forev'r! But a kosher, I think!! :)

endless
series of words
spelled in so many ways
by poets in peculiar ways
Hurrah!:)

Hobbes
10-27-2008, 08:42 PM
Hurrah!
Bandwagon. Ho.
As we cheer the captian.
We looked in the mirror and saw...
Lemmings?

asilef73
10-27-2008, 11:20 PM
lemmings
may have it right.
to die en masse may be
a better alternative than
alone.

qimissung
10-28-2008, 11:13 PM
alone
I dream, spinning
a yarn that leads through a
labyrinth of fantastic stories
to you

ampoule
10-30-2008, 07:31 AM
to you
I come, open
ready to receive love
but more than that, ready to give
my own

AMDG
10-30-2008, 10:46 AM
my own
i come into
trying to figure out
who i am, who i want to be
no good

ampoule
10-31-2008, 08:40 AM
no good
prowls round my door
the doorbell is broken
the porchlight burned out, stay away
I beg

AMDG
10-31-2008, 10:44 AM
I beg
for the spirits
to come and lift my soul
to take it away to heaven.
No loss.

qimissung
11-01-2008, 01:20 AM
no loss
to not dance with
you, I have your love and
forever we sway, daisies in
a field

firefangled
11-02-2008, 06:20 PM
A field
of sunflowers
forever in my mind,
though sun is gone, flowers remain
like you

mazHur
11-02-2008, 06:47 PM
like you
like all of us
humanity draws its
breath from the same atmosphere
why fight?

alakungfu
11-08-2008, 12:34 AM
why fight?
--resist an urge
to deflate argument?
defeat the standards; generate
purpose...

ampoule
11-08-2008, 11:03 AM
purpose
wonder, wander
looking for mine, here, there,
I am here because or because
I'm here

alakungfu
11-08-2008, 01:38 PM
I'm here
I said I'd be
I wouldn't have said it
otherwise seasonal record
shaken

firefangled
11-08-2008, 04:00 PM
shaken
free from the stars,
and fallen to the earth,
we came through rain, ice and fire —
timeless

alakungfu
11-08-2008, 08:14 PM
timeless
as the fragrance
rescinded demigods
suffuse in a collector's forged
pallette

ampoule
11-20-2008, 04:21 PM
pallette
under my arm
protects me from your breath
that tells me you are sleeping, not
wanting

alakungfu
11-21-2008, 01:07 PM
wanting
in symmetry
but generously drawn
a character of proportion
weighted

ampoule
11-25-2008, 09:58 AM
weighted
burdens heavy
a puddle of pity
your smile, like arms, can lift me up
thankful

firefangled
11-25-2008, 03:20 PM
thankful
the world holds love
such as this: open words,
hearts unguarded, make a heaven
on earth

alakungfu
11-25-2008, 03:34 PM
on earth
frailties converge
to construct reinforced
statues dedicated to the lost
and found

Paige19
11-25-2008, 06:09 PM
and found
within us, hid
beneath the sensed and parsed,
is what we always were: no-thing,
no one.

Paige19
11-25-2008, 06:13 PM
Oh, and wanted to say -

nice one, Firefangled!

alakungfu
11-25-2008, 06:35 PM
no one
wants to be the
only one to show up
with no money casino night,
get it?

Paige19
11-25-2008, 07:37 PM
get it?
or did it drop
into that crack where it
will sneer at you whenever you
walk past?

Hobbes
11-25-2008, 10:21 PM
Walk past
The House of Mirth,
Where the golden, fevered
Aura is too thick for them to
Breathe in

Paige19
11-25-2008, 11:01 PM
breathe in,
that's one less left.
but would you like to know
how many more you've left to go?
thought so.

alakungfu
11-26-2008, 01:08 AM
thought so
provoked that it
tinkles like change in a
glass, small ideas armored in
brass plate

adwara1
11-26-2008, 03:35 AM
Brass plate
and the broken sword
in the dust lied his body
as a witness to the age-old tragedy
the war

alakungfu
11-26-2008, 09:07 AM
lovely poem adwara1
Note: the composition is supposed to be two syllables, four syllables, six syllables, eight syllables, two syllables

the war
somehow removed
by mles and by prospect
no consolation for clashing
yardbirds

Paige19
11-27-2008, 12:00 PM
yardbirds
counting paces,
measuring out mistakes,
their faces wear excuses left
unsaid

alakungfu
11-27-2008, 01:17 PM
unsaid
the rest to be
interpreted whether
aluding to allusion or
vision

Paige19
11-27-2008, 05:59 PM
vision
visitation
divine revelation
subject to interpretation
not proof

alakungfu
11-27-2008, 07:16 PM
not proof
that provides ground
swell but rumour undercuts
the course of initiative and
license

Paige19
11-30-2008, 09:44 PM
license
is liberty
taken without forethought,
freedom's brush, but rudely painted -
tainted

alakungfu
12-01-2008, 12:10 AM
tainted
abstracted, lost
so goes the rhythm of
the ambivalent en rackets
recrewed

Paige19
12-01-2008, 06:16 PM
re: crewed -
all right, he may
have dipped an oar, but just
to wow the skirts on shore. More like:
he's crude.

firefangled
12-04-2008, 08:21 PM
he's crude
like cigarettes
and cheap whiskey shooters,
draws Bauhaus digs on beer napkins
he keeps

Riesa
12-07-2008, 02:42 AM
he keeps
better versions
of tips of trees, hopedreams
and slivered frowns we have all seen,
she keeps

firefangled
12-08-2008, 06:40 PM
she keeps
a creased photo
where jeans fold into white,
nothing else, pocket memory,
blue jeans

mazHur
12-08-2008, 06:55 PM
blue jeans
will not protect
the treasure embedded;
a thief will come and steal away
all there!

Thespian1975
12-11-2008, 04:51 PM
All there.
Yet not all there
The silence between them
a barrier that will not break
Silence

firefangled
12-17-2008, 02:07 AM
Silence
remembers us
in its last brushed colors
the small rooms bright with our desires
for wings

ampoule
12-18-2008, 09:13 AM
for wings
I would wish for
not only to fly high
but to shelter you in this storm
of life

mazHur
12-18-2008, 09:40 AM
of life
talk to me not
it's your for the taking
be it rain, hail, snow, gale or storm
keep it!

ampoule
12-19-2008, 10:50 AM
keep it
tuck it away
but sometimes peek inside
make sure it's still there and pet it
your thought

firefangled
12-19-2008, 05:30 PM
your thought
a loosed ribbon
carried on the night wind
caught on a branch, in memory's
moonlight

qimissung
12-30-2008, 09:38 PM
moonlight
whispers to the
night, "I disappear. Come,
hold my hand, bring not cold, but
comfort."

alakungfu
01-01-2009, 09:10 AM
comfort
in the silken
links that brush both our rude
whispers and our murmuring doused
sixth sense

TheFifthElement
01-03-2009, 02:18 PM
sixth sense;
a leaf curling
in the presence of death.
A touch of breath in the darkness,
warming.

alakungfu
01-04-2009, 04:20 PM
warming
to the gentle
touch of lapping years, gone,
with a diminishing sleight of
kind hand

qimissung
01-04-2009, 11:59 PM
kind hand
staunch the wounds
caused by mere daily life;
the act of rising alone brings
forth tears

alakungfu
01-05-2009, 06:34 AM
forth tears
springing on her
face when she heard the news
the expected declaration of
her loss

TheFifthElement
01-07-2009, 03:47 PM
her loss
with crazy eyes
stares at the floor. No more
singing, smiling, laughing, dancing:
empty

mazHur
01-07-2009, 05:45 PM
empty
your sorrows here
give it all your worries
this is no coward's heart, my dear,
It's me!

alakungfu
01-08-2009, 02:27 PM
It's me
haunting your dreams
One day, we'll meet somewhere
and you'll know that it's me you can
picture.

mazHur
01-08-2009, 05:40 PM
picture
imprinted on
the wall of my heart shows
my beloved when I look down
at times!

Riesa
01-10-2009, 04:43 AM
at times
waxing gibbous,
she shouts with pregnant shine
Orion stands guard, awaits the
Sisters

alakungfu
01-10-2009, 08:26 AM
Sisters
in Pleiades
contemplate the lucent
rationale of fleet feminine
matter

firefangled
01-10-2009, 09:13 AM
Sisters
in Pleiades
contemplate the lucent
rationale of fleet feminine
matter

Exquisite!

***

matter
please forgive us
our wayward processes
we too are balanced on fragments
of light

alakungfu
01-10-2009, 03:49 PM
Thank you fire-fangled


of light
I have no proof
only demonstration
of an intrinsic used nature
drawn wright

Cat_Brenners
01-12-2009, 12:09 AM
life sucks
I must confess
so if you agree too
join my life sucks compaign with me
so start

Cat

alakungfu
01-12-2009, 06:13 AM
so start
inside the box
adding a master clue
logistical paradoxisms
in check

Il Penseroso
01-13-2009, 11:44 PM
we too are balanced on fragments
of light

very beautiful


in check
a list of words,
spittle drawn in lucid
curves by a gentle tongue, poems un-
covered

alakungfu
01-14-2009, 08:22 AM
covered
wagons, papered
shelves and scented drawers
what were once cliches, now rich stuffed
with thought

ampoule
01-15-2009, 04:33 PM
with thought
supper is planned
as an appetizer
for the filling stuff that follows
dessert

alakungfu
01-17-2009, 11:05 AM
dessert
reminds me of
fluffy clouds of crushed ice
or radiant golden circles
just so

TheFifthElement
01-17-2009, 03:55 PM
just so
you know this is
not a poem. No sir,
don't accuse me of such a crime
in rhyme.

firefangled
01-17-2009, 05:07 PM
in rhyme
I thought I heard
pigeons and the downspout
first one, then the other, cooing
in rain

mazHur
01-17-2009, 05:12 PM
in rain
hail,snow or storm
fidelity demands
us thorns to stand by the side of
roses

alakungfu
01-17-2009, 07:08 PM
roses
token flowers
emblems of the worthy
velvet yield wildly substantial
for love

qimissung
01-17-2009, 07:21 PM
for love
I yield not my
heart's deepest murmurings
yet still I tread through white waters
for love

qimissung
01-17-2009, 07:23 PM
in rain
hail,snow or storm
fidelity demands
us thorns to stand by the side of
roses

quite a beautiful meditation on faithfulness, mazHur...

alakungfu
01-18-2009, 09:52 AM
for love
sweet desertion
of baseless commitments,
faceless assertions of stolen
live flames

Riesa
01-19-2009, 02:48 PM
Live flames
damage nothing
when lit in empty rooms;
mine’s cluttered, and arsonists live
next door.

sprinks
01-19-2009, 11:29 PM
Next door,
near the gum tree,
to the left of the boat,
sits a little boy, waiting to
play soon.

alakungfu
01-20-2009, 05:56 AM
play soon
not soon enough
to ford the seven seas
capture crooks and gun-slingers
all told