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ampoule
06-30-2007, 09:22 AM
once grand
she stands, back swayed
remembering dances
one two three, one two three, with him
dreaming
Pendragon
06-30-2007, 09:58 AM
dreaming...
"all we ever
do or seem is but a
dream within a dream...", so said Poe...
correct...
firefangled
06-30-2007, 01:11 PM
correct
what you have learned
about this paper boat
afloat upon a paper sea
and breathe
ampoule
06-30-2007, 01:30 PM
and breathe
your cleansing breath
that it might fill you up
so you can float around and watch
yourself
symphony
06-30-2007, 01:34 PM
And breathe
fire, like dragons,
roar like the oceans seethe,
pounce on targets like a lion!
Storm on.
storm on
as we approach
our enemies. Prepare
to fight, to kill, to maim. We are
at war
firefangled
06-30-2007, 04:22 PM
at war
do not cry child
angels watch the soldiers —
hear them sigh, as they spread their wings
and fly
ampoule
06-30-2007, 06:06 PM
and fly
we must go high
bounce off clouds, touch the sky
the rainbow wants to tell us why
we cry
we cry
although our tears
are wasted. Slipping down
ineffectually they are
pointless
symphony
07-01-2007, 07:35 AM
pointless
to try to say
empty words meaningless,
for words dont heal, neither do they
give way
ampoule
07-01-2007, 07:47 AM
give way
to this great love
hear it beckoning you?
fill your senses, quench your desire
jump, jump
symphony
07-01-2007, 08:02 AM
jump, jump--
up! down! up high!
next day i got that bump
in my head! mom's right again, why
God why?!
firefangled
07-01-2007, 08:19 AM
jump, jump —
the dark fish leapt,
scales softened for the flight —
somewhere you soar high and weightless
homeward
Pendragon
07-01-2007, 09:25 AM
homeward
bound, I wish I
was, homeward bound—not lost
endless stream of broken dreams—wish
I was…
(a nod to Paul Simon and Art Garfunkel)
I was
walking lonely
as a cloud floating high
over hills and valleys. I saw
a crowd...
(ode to William Wordsworth!)
_JadeRain_
07-01-2007, 11:09 AM
A crowd
Of daffodils
Sways in a bright meadow
Wordsworth paints a pretty picture
Poets
firefangled
07-01-2007, 11:27 AM
Poets,
different children,
learned late to hide your heart,
found a strength in the tender ways
of love
ampoule
07-02-2007, 07:37 AM
of love
there is no end
like the circle of life
it goes on and on forever
turning
totyfroty
07-02-2007, 08:11 AM
Turning over there
and coming back
this is love
always and forever
No end
ampoule
07-02-2007, 08:28 AM
The traditional cinquain is based on a syllable count.
line 1 - 2 syllables
line 2 - 4 syllables
line 3 - 6 syllables
line 4 - 8 syllables
line 5 - 2 syllables
in this game, take the last line of the previous persons cinquain, the same way we play the shared Haiku game.
No problem for me and I don't mean to be a stickler but maybe a review of the 'rules'.
symphony
07-02-2007, 12:38 PM
Turning over there
and coming back
this is love
always and forever
No end
hmm a little deviation from the form but since there's still 2 syllables at the end i guess i can continue...
No end
to the rigors;
and still, down the deep bend
of duty, and forbearance, soars--
uproars.
Whifflingpin
07-02-2007, 03:34 PM
Uproars,
Wild riotous
Assemblies, for a cause,
Or, the Masters say, malicious
Purpose.
Il Penseroso
07-02-2007, 07:26 PM
purpose,
a weeping face
above the falling rain,
a sliding smile in granite skies
twinkling.
littlewing53
07-02-2007, 07:44 PM
twinkling
the dark night sees
across the midnight sky
peering through seeking direction
turning
_JadeRain_
07-03-2007, 12:07 AM
Turning
The seasons change
Nature withers and dies
Spring comes and life starts anew
Rebirth
ampoule
07-03-2007, 03:35 AM
rebirth
it happens when
your inside earth grumbles
and your outer plates cause friction
pushing
symphony
07-03-2007, 03:47 AM
pushing
the options out
and thereby welcoming
the agonies, doubting about
the doubts
ampoule
07-03-2007, 03:17 PM
the doubts
freeze me in place
I grow numb waiting now
for a smart man to thaw me out
hurry
firefangled
07-03-2007, 06:51 PM
hurry
this is not me
I stop to watch rain fall
and listen for the Monarchs wings
passing
Il Penseroso
07-04-2007, 03:14 AM
passing
lone island fluff,
swaying spokelike tendrils
that leap sugared curves across the
salt sea.
(dandelions, the light kind)
_JadeRain_
07-04-2007, 02:57 PM
Salt sea
The ocean roars
The sea is furious
Waves crash in every direction
Drowning
ampoule
07-04-2007, 09:37 PM
Drowning
The tender reeds
In a river of shame
My get-away basket is torn
I tread
I tread
with empty feet,
empty heart, empty mind.
A deserted house, forgotten,
vacant
firefangled
07-05-2007, 03:35 AM
I tread
toward the light
you can tell where I have been
the pieces of dream fall from me
like snow
firefangled
07-05-2007, 03:56 AM
missed that one. I'll follow Bii's to keep myself honest
vacant
but that makes room
to dance, to whisper words
that may change everything: Listen
lovers
ampoule
07-05-2007, 06:08 AM
lovers
wanting inside
becoming each other
looking for a room in moonland
dreaming
Pendragon
07-05-2007, 10:45 AM
dreaming
Morpheus' realm
where all is still weaving
growing crops of nightmares on stems
by tens
ampoule
07-05-2007, 11:24 AM
by tens
you quickly count
the ones who have lost love
but then categories begin
start here
Il Penseroso
07-05-2007, 04:26 PM
start here:
a glazed crevice
expanding childlike,
breaking the dismal shell of gloom:
smile
firefangled
07-05-2007, 07:41 PM
I have lived in places where smile is 2 syllables, so I'm cool with that
smile,
heart is aching...
oh charlie, so like you
I laugh at the surrealism
of life
ampoule
07-05-2007, 11:27 PM
of life
no turning back
do not lust for the past
only pet it and let it go
to seed
littlewing53
07-06-2007, 12:08 PM
to seed
the blossom goes
another year passes
till time again resumes the bloom
to rest
Il Penseroso
07-06-2007, 03:21 PM
to rest
from folded dreams
that brush and shrink on walls,
roots enclosed in ceramic stalls
released.
Adolescent09
07-06-2007, 05:05 PM
released:
the cormorant,
beauty specks horizon
on heaven's entrance and snoozing
angels
firefangled
07-06-2007, 06:46 PM
angels
in your cages
of worship without sin
come run with me through the redwoods
naked
Adolescent09
07-06-2007, 07:28 PM
(ooo.. dirty thoughts? LOL)
naked,
pure chastity,
flake your dunes on my chest,
lay your love in my balmy nest,
and come...
symphony
07-07-2007, 02:29 AM
cant believe i've been such a lazy git in this thread!! :eek:
and come,
the world awaits
yet another lonesome
unwavering knock on the gates
of fate...
Adolescent09
07-07-2007, 03:46 AM
of fate,
and wonder twined,
in angel hearts divined
Whisping clouds of seraph gold,
onward
symphony
07-07-2007, 04:27 AM
onward
coursing the beams
of light, engulfed and scarred
by radiance-- being stellar-ed
is hard.
ampoule
07-07-2007, 05:59 AM
is hard
your thinking core
but oh how your deep eyes
massage my blushing face and kiss
my lips
Pendragon
07-07-2007, 09:41 AM
My lips
stay sealed. Say not
what I may think nor feel.
No one listens anyway these days...
One tear...
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/ZwinkPenIII.gif
one tear
is all it takes;
opens a hardened heart
softening the muscled walls. It's
broken
firefangled
07-07-2007, 12:18 PM
broken…
and what is that?
I take the tattered shirt,
weave it in a quilt and make it
centerpiece
ampoule
07-07-2007, 12:31 PM
center
piecemeal, piecing
ribbons, swatches, torn bits
there truly is a pattern now
in life
firefangled
07-07-2007, 12:38 PM
uh oh, sorry for the extra syllable everyone. nice correction ampoule.
ampoule
07-07-2007, 05:46 PM
Uh uh...not a correction...just carrying on.
_JadeRain_
07-08-2007, 12:42 AM
In life
Days pass quickly
You blink and time flys
Or so the old addage proclaims
Aging
Adolescent09
07-08-2007, 12:52 AM
aging
always imprints
time on a worn dermis
but love binding through the years is
endless
firefangled
07-08-2007, 09:15 AM
endless
infinity
world without end, amen
all time and space are relative
now what
ampoule
07-08-2007, 11:12 AM
now what
time to relax
time to jump in the clouds
time to slip and slide down rainbows
enjoy
enjoy
this moment for
soon it will pass. Why must
we strive so desperately to
move on?
ampoule
07-09-2007, 09:31 AM
move on
nothing to see
but accidents of life
we cause them, have them, tiptoe round
but yes
Pendragon
07-09-2007, 10:04 AM
but yes
I see your point,
I concede the motion.
have you stopped just to try to
listen….
lalaine
07-09-2007, 10:50 AM
Listen
Forget your fears
Believe you can withstand
The chaos, the turmoil deep within
Do it!
ampoule
07-09-2007, 10:58 AM
do it
just, they say, sure
but afraid of the dark,
or spiders, heights, or waters deep,
don't jump
Don't jump
but leap instead
and cast your feet up from
the willing ground, don't hesitate
to soar....
firefangled
07-09-2007, 07:57 PM
to soar,
don’t think of clouds,
leave the moon behind you,
seek to be frail, to be formless,
like air
Haven
07-10-2007, 08:41 AM
like air
invisible
so is it really there?
without the air where would we be?
breathless...
ampoule
07-10-2007, 10:22 AM
breathless
I know it well
a poet word or phrase
catches in my mind, so that
I faint.
lalaine
07-10-2007, 10:41 AM
I faint
Blurry vision
Ti's deafening silence
Plunging to the deep abyss what
Went wrong
littlewing53
07-10-2007, 07:40 PM
went wrong
righting the rain
pebbles faintly falling
catching the wet in the cupped palm
hold firm
Pendragon
07-10-2007, 07:50 PM
hold firm,
when love fails, hate
trys to take its place. the
question you must face is: will you
give in?
littlewing53
07-10-2007, 08:07 PM
give in
lightning strikes strong
piercing deep left breathless
grasping hold of yesterday thoughts
let go
firefangled
07-11-2007, 07:43 AM
let go
you do not die,
no heaven or hell waits,
judgment does not hide in pure light,
you do
symphony
07-11-2007, 10:27 AM
you do
what your gods say,
i in my godless sect
rule the seven seas, and then cry
for more...
ampoule
07-11-2007, 11:22 AM
for more...
of that, from you,
said she, looking hungry.
open your fingers and tell me
the truth
littlewing53
07-11-2007, 12:17 PM
the truth
listens humbly
pondering the wisdom
humanity creates for bread
stand strong
symphony
07-11-2007, 12:38 PM
"Stand strong."
"I do try to!"
"Then why stumble upon
the smallest trivial pebbles?"
Silence.
Silence
spreads like poppies
in a field, the sudden
spill of blood red blooms bobbing in
the hush
littlewing53
07-11-2007, 06:47 PM
the hush
ignores the wind
and moves along without
sandswept dunes and cold nights stirring
strangers
Susan Sonnen
07-11-2007, 06:58 PM
Strangers
idly wander,
waving nonchalantly
at others, each stranger than those
before.
ampoule
07-12-2007, 11:56 AM
before
time slips away
look at my palm and read
if you are part of my fortune
cookie
cookie,
the screen flashes...
what does this mean? I bash
the keys helplessly hoping for
a sign...
PrinceMyshkin
07-12-2007, 03:41 PM
a sign
of certain mad-
ness is to fool around
with arbitrary poem forms
till dusk
ampoule
07-12-2007, 03:45 PM
till dusk
do us part, ha!
I sure think I'm funny
until it is time for the sun
to rise
littlewing53
07-12-2007, 03:47 PM
till dusk
do we part not
beneath the bridge of time
wavering with abiding strength
the will
littlewing53
07-12-2007, 03:47 PM
i love it when the haikus appear magically at the same time...well almost..and what they both say...
ampoule
07-12-2007, 03:48 PM
Beat cha by two minutos but that's okay...we can go with yours.
littlewing53
07-12-2007, 04:05 PM
to rise
again not yet
tomorrow comes quickly
appearing in neon shadows
colors
colours
spread like shifting
sand disturbed by water.
A kalaidoscopic vision
ensues
PrinceMyshkin
07-12-2007, 05:49 PM
ensues
the ruddy mess
when we have done our worst
with what was given us
for now
firefangled
07-12-2007, 07:50 PM
for now
there is only
the story of heaven
the last page is an open door
step through
PrinceMyshkin
07-12-2007, 08:05 PM
step through
to what awaits
for, see, beyond these gates
there is the other side of what
is here
firefangled
07-12-2007, 08:24 PM
is here
where heaven is?
she pointed to her heart,
yes child, heaven is where you are
always
PrinceMyshkin
07-12-2007, 08:28 PM
always
is the day that
preceded yesterday
and will come after tomorrow
has gone
is here
where heaven is?
she pointed to her heart,
yes child, heaven is where you are
always
This is so lovely firefangled.
...has gone
but where? Sadness
bubbles just below the
surface. I realise I am
missing
PrinceMyshkin
07-13-2007, 06:51 AM
missing
is not lost though
it may feel that way, but
what feels to you as missing is
elsewhere
elsewhere
is just a dream;
imagination reigns
there yet I am trapped here in this
moment
ampoule
07-13-2007, 08:59 AM
moment
I pause to touch
it will flitter away
if I don't pay close attention
to time
PrinceMyshkin
07-13-2007, 10:22 AM
to time
I will not cede
anything of my own
that surely dwells most deep and sharp
in me
Pendragon
07-13-2007, 10:45 AM
in me
people confide
what do they think they see?
hermit gone away seeks to hide
inside...
CdnReader
07-13-2007, 02:30 PM
inside
darkness exists
strength, courage and honour
are needed to drive out the fear
of life
symphony
07-13-2007, 03:05 PM
of life
i am scared of,
life is tough to survive.
while death has its beauty veiled oft
and scoffed.
ampoule
07-13-2007, 05:17 PM
and scoffed,
her sneery look
she gave to him, the one
who changed everything tonight
for best
PrinceMyshkin
07-13-2007, 05:28 PM
for best
results use twice
daily, once before and
twice after making love with
whomever
symphony
07-13-2007, 06:12 PM
whomever
i've met so far
has but left me wonder:
can this be the one lightbearer
born e'er?
littlewing53
07-13-2007, 06:14 PM
whomever
spoke the stranger
mumbling a few words
hat tipped kind words spoken slyly
dark wolf
dark wolf
follows my steps.
A grey shape in the night,
like the wind, and I only see
his eyes
PrinceMyshkin
07-13-2007, 06:19 PM
his eyes
and his alone
have the power to see
deeply without fear or reproach
my soul
my soul
stirs the water
a single touch, circles
ripple outwards. Simple cause and
effect
symphony
07-13-2007, 06:29 PM
my soul
cant surrender,
neither can reach the goal,
but still wont give in to despair
or fear
symphony
07-13-2007, 06:31 PM
damn :D
littlewing53
07-13-2007, 06:34 PM
:) ...thought i better refresh before posting...its clear
or fear
speaks so loudly
amongst the shells at sea
sand held stories told secretly
in waves
ampoule
07-13-2007, 10:44 PM
in waves
we thrash around
slapping and kicking air
help! save me! we say back and forth
laughing
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 06:27 AM
laughing
spilling forth loud
no maintaining reserve
let the giggles overtake now
release
ampoule
07-14-2007, 06:36 AM
release
the things that hold
throw yourself into life
breathe in deeply the essence of
good life
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 07:15 AM
good life
search for wisdom
eyes forward, determined
to bravely step through obstacles
achieve
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 07:55 AM
Achieve,
Achieve, achieve
No matter what the cost.
No achievement, the middle-class
is lost
is lost
a place where we
go when darkness rains down
and life seems pointless? Is it just
a word?
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 08:35 AM
a word
is nothing if
it is not everything.
Love, for example, is nothing
but love
but love
is undefined,
a word so simple yet
complex. If only it could be
easy.
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 08:41 AM
Easy
love is that which
we feel for puppies and
our kids. Much harder to love a
"grown-up".
grown up
and suddenly
full of disappointment.
Childish expectations now seem
foolish.
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 08:52 AM
foolish
I suppose, is
how we imagine we
are seen by others. But they too
are fools.
are fools
the ones that know
the way it is and do
it anyway, untouched by their
knowledge?
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 09:26 AM
Knowledge
is only as
good as the results of
its wielding. Do not judge it by
its book.
Pendragon
07-14-2007, 09:50 AM
its book
turn each page, read
a book useless unless
someone delves into secrets
therein
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PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 09:55 AM
therein
any book lies
what we read into it
We are each the authors of our
own book
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 10:05 AM
own book
absorb contents
spill out what you recall
forget most of what you just learned
collapse
collapse
into my arms
I'll hold you there until
your strength returns. Take what you need
from me
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 10:45 AM
from me
or for me, who
can truly tell? Lovers
are those who receive when they think
they give
they give
something, a word,
a kiss, a touch of breath
on waiting skin, a moment in
eternity
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 10:53 AM
eternity
in an hour, wrote
Blake, and yet how many
eternities, kisses, hours can
we stand?
we stand
opposed in time
oceans apart unclear
as to the possibilities.
What next?
symphony
07-14-2007, 11:00 AM
we stand
when united,
while divided we fall--
and who can say if we e'er care
at all?
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 11:02 AM
What next
may never come
for it may have arrived
unbidden, unforeseen and yet
here, here
symphony
07-14-2007, 11:05 AM
gosh! not again! why is it me all the time?! :p
what next
can we expect
from a vicious fanged world
which does nothing but pose a threat
timeless
symphony
07-14-2007, 11:07 AM
*sigh*
here, here
a tourniquet
can solve it all, expels
all the pain there is, and heals all
there is
timeless
is the need that
seals a letter closed and
hurls it to space. In darkness we
reach out
my turn!
there is
a busy time
on this site when poets
clamour to be heard, sometimes they
will clash!
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 11:13 AM
reach out
with an open
hand, for the palm that shows
itself empty, humble and free
is blessed
symphony
07-14-2007, 11:15 AM
muhahah *evil grin* i'm not the only one then ;)
will clash
with each other--
the haste makes us bump, and
trust me dude, when i say, its quite
enjoyed! ;)
symphony
07-14-2007, 11:16 AM
:eek:
enjoyed
this banter, the
exchange of words that bat
back and forth like tennis balls on
the court
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 11:58 AM
The court
of the land says
your evidence is not
sufficient for clear conviction.
Questions?
:eek:
This so make me laugh!
Questions
serve no purpose.
What's the point of asking
why when no one ever deigns to
answer?
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 01:27 PM
Answer
me this, answer
me that, but why not look
to yourself for the answers that
matter?
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 01:42 PM
Matter
Math and physics
Quantum leaps through wormholes
Spatial anomalies that make
heads spin.
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 01:53 PM
Heads spin
In my new dress
Mysteries are no more
And I see myself differently
Shameless
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 02:11 PM
Shameless
With out self doubt
She moved through the people
And they, watching her pass by, smiled
Shameless
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 02:23 PM
Shameless
but not blameless
for she chooses with care
the arrows fired into the abyss.
She aims.
she aims
and misses yet
again, the arrow drops,
fletchings stripped they drift and fall to
the ground
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 04:32 PM
the ground
on which we stand
is not the only ground
there is but some think only that
it is
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 04:41 PM
It is
nothing more than
what it appears to be
but appearances can deceive,
can't they?
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 04:44 PM
Can't they
always do what
you and I can only
wish to do? And get away with
it too?
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 04:56 PM
It too
Is revealing.
But I do like the fit.
I’m sure he will like it as well!
I’m sold
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 04:58 PM
oops.... hehehe
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 05:00 PM
I'm sold
on the red one,
the one with the squiggly
antenna that bops and wiggles
with glee.
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 05:00 PM
Real life
Just imagine
How it could be if we
Could work through our differences and
Forgive
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 05:02 PM
With glee
I bound from bed
Anxious to begin this
Adventure that is life and love
What joy
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 05:08 PM
What joy
to greet the day,
the sunbeams creeping through,
leaving shining trails that draw me
within.
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 05:14 PM
Within
Hide the secrets
Would you like to peek inside?
You may be pleased, but you will be
Surprised!
Surprised!
You bet I am
she says, surveys the mess
with undisguised amusement, swoops
to kiss
PrinceMyshkin
07-14-2007, 05:34 PM
to kiss
would be a fine
way to begin the meal
but what, I'd like to know, would be
dessert?
CdnReader
07-14-2007, 05:56 PM
Dessert
is only served
to those who well deserve.
Have you eaten your potatoes?
Let's see.
symphony
07-14-2007, 08:14 PM
'let's see
what u got there',
the grumpy man grumbled,
while the girl took off her clothes in
tears
ampoule
07-14-2007, 10:22 PM
tears grow
in eyes so kind
that cannot imagine
the futility of a mean
spirit
motherhubbard
07-14-2007, 10:26 PM
Spirit,
Left over shadow ,
What remains once we’re gone.
The question is where does it go?
Back home?
Back home
where I belong
familiar streets are
welcoming me with open arms.
Such love
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 05:20 AM
Such love
as I can give
will never heal the wounds
that have wrestled your soul from its
moorings.
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 08:00 AM
Moorings:
necessary
at times but beware of
staying for too long in foetid
water
Pendragon
07-15-2007, 10:24 AM
water
just a drop left
and I must cross wastelands
where heat causes the mind to mistake
everything...
everything
is kind of wet
today, and warm. Have I
moved to Thailand, I wonder? Weird
weather..
ampoule
07-15-2007, 12:41 PM
weather
beats and pets me
makes me run, makes me look
makes me wonder, cower and shake
quick change
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 12:54 PM
Quick change
is coming soon
when each of us will turn
into something like that which we
are not
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 01:16 PM
Are not
you ready for
coming changes that will
cause the seas to rise, the land to
recede?
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 01:26 PM
Recede?
My hair perhaps
but not alas my waist
-line, but I myself will always
resist
resist
gravity's pull,
reach your arms up to the
sky and stretch, stretch, until you touch
heaven
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 01:44 PM
Heaven...
sounds wonderful.
There will be chocolate...
potato chips....toffee ice cream...
Behave.
Behave!
She slapped his hand,
and giggled playfully.
Despite appearances she was
willing...
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 02:08 PM
Willing
to entertain
the notion of being
single and fancy-free, but not
long-term.
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 02:39 PM
"long-term"
has such a grim
sound, as if one were to
jail bound. I'd prefer a term of
longing
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 02:49 PM
longing
for your answer
which I suppose won't be
long in coming or longer than
five lines!
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 02:50 PM
Five lines
I've left here twice
but have yet to receive
so much as a single reply
from you!
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 02:56 PM
from you
I expect much
because you are able
I want to see you succeed and
Flourish
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 03:05 PM
Fluorish
my darling friend
among your fine hens and
even more darling children, whom
you bless
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 03:09 PM
you bless
with your wisdom
and personality
we are all so lucky to have
our Prince
our Prince,
I wonder will
you ever answer my
message? Or are you now onto
third thoughts?
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 03:38 PM
Our Prince
will be left here
for all to see once we're
all gone....oh, sorry, you said "Prince"
not prints. ;)
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 03:54 PM
Third thoughts?
What’s the hold up?
Do you want it or not?
Get off the pot! There’s not time left
To doubt.
To doubt
is natural
it seems; to trust, a risk
especially amongst these
harsh times
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 04:00 PM
Harsh times
can break a man.
But, he who faces up
to the challenge ahead of him
succeeds.
ampoule
07-15-2007, 04:39 PM
succeeds
the honest one
who looks for all the good
that is inherent in others
for you
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 05:08 PM
for you
I will do it
I will lasso the moon
and pull it down for you to touch
my love
ampoule
07-15-2007, 05:20 PM
my love
is not my love
for he will not succumb
to the pleasures I can give him
today
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 05:24 PM
Today
I offer up
all that I have to give.
Why will you not take it from me?
no strings...
motherhubbard
07-15-2007, 05:34 PM
No strings
On this puppet
He’s like a real live boy
Maybe the blue fairy will grant
His wish
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 05:47 PM
our Prince,
I wonder will
you ever answer my
message? Or are you now onto
third thoughts?
Third thoughts
are often where
I begin then work my
way back to my original
thinking.
_ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ . _
And now back to our original programme
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 05:50 PM
His wish
was always your
command for the heart is
open to the pebble that is
dropped down
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 05:57 PM
Dropped down,
below his sight....
we hide, giggling in glee,
knowing that any minute now,
we're caught.
PrinceMyshkin
07-15-2007, 06:00 PM
We're caught
in our heart's own
hollow, the white slaver-
y of waiting for someone else
to care.
CdnReader
07-15-2007, 06:14 PM
To care
for each other....
Is this not life's greatest
achievement? Shall we not share this
with all?
With all
this time why do
we spend so much of
it waiting? Shouldn't we seize the
moment?
PrinceMyshkin
07-16-2007, 06:37 AM
Moment
by moment we
trade life in favour of
death. The moments glide by. Sometimes
they speed
they speed
without a care
towards the sudden end
of non-existence, or something
like it
ampoule
07-16-2007, 07:23 AM
like it
for all it's worth
liking before you love
helps you want to know and grow with
someone
PrinceMyshkin
07-16-2007, 07:51 AM
Someone
is waiting for
you, someone is always
waiting, but is it the someone
you want?
motherhubbard
07-16-2007, 07:53 AM
You want
What you can't have.
Enough is not enough.
With greedy hands you grab and take.
Selfish!
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 08:49 AM
Selfish
beyond limits,
perhaps....but all they want
is to love and be loved, beyond
limits.
motherhubbard
07-16-2007, 08:54 AM
limits
not set by me
confine me, hold me here
I long to escape the things that
bind me
Pendragon
07-16-2007, 09:05 AM
bind me
to memory—
but even those fetters
can not hold me; shatter all chains—
release
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 09:08 AM
release
to she who waits
the love that's been ignored
and chained up in a dark place for
too long.
symphony
07-16-2007, 09:27 AM
too long
i'll wait no more
let the eye uncover
secrets furled within; let the mist be
lifted
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 09:33 AM
Lifted...
arms stretched open...
let the swirling winds raise
you high above this pretense of
real life.
symphony
07-16-2007, 09:45 AM
real life
and the "reality"
in it makes me wonder,
can anything be more faux than
life is?
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 09:52 AM
Life is
a dance around
the universe, waltzing
along the path of a comet...
spellbound.
symphony
07-16-2007, 09:58 AM
spellbound,
caught in the mo'--
life stood a bit away
from where we were, and death itself
held back.
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 10:00 AM
Held back
without good cause
or justification....
Give me the full width of the world
to live.
symphony
07-16-2007, 10:06 AM
to live
we cry, we strive,
and yet, alas, cannot
find life in life's deadly quest
for death!
hello CdnReader, by the way. :p
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 10:26 AM
Hello backatcha, Symphony. :)
For death
seems but a breath
away. Must we always
struggle to keep it safely at
arm's length?
ampoule
07-16-2007, 10:50 AM
arm's length
the line he draws
do not get close to me
but, oh, if I could curve that line
'round me
PrinceMyshkin
07-16-2007, 10:56 AM
'round me
is memory
and the expansive round
earth around which space is silent
and deep
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 11:02 AM
And deep
is the lost night
of my longing...without
you here to keep the shadows
at bay.
PrinceMyshkin
07-16-2007, 11:05 AM
At Bay
corner of Bloor
I was hoping to meet
my lover but she alas was
elsewhere!
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 11:23 AM
Elsewhere
and Main, she said,
no wonder you missed her....
Intersections apart... the heart
is lost.
symphony
07-16-2007, 11:54 AM
"is lost
the times we shared",
trite it was and would be,
except that u, of all, said it
aloud.
Riesa
07-16-2007, 12:14 PM
Aloud;
dully fading,
your voice oscillates:
Seamist and red chairs. I see, then
I don't.
symphony
07-16-2007, 12:29 PM
i dont
let one too close
lest there are involvments,
dare not get into blisses, lest
they hurt
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 03:21 PM
They hurt
our ears when they
fling epithets. They hurt
our hearts when they forget to be
human.
human
nature never
fails to surprise, although
we ought to have figured it out
by now.
PrinceMyshkin
07-16-2007, 03:37 PM
by now
of course it could
be tomorrow, in which
we'd have missed out on the rest of
today!
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 03:44 PM
today
will soon
be lost in the annals
of history....did you do all
you could?
you could
ask, and I could
answer but then where would
the mystery be? It might be
boring.
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 04:26 PM
Boring
is eggs without
salsa. Boring is tea
without sugar or spaghetti,
no sauce.
no sauce!
You're having a
laugh aren't you? The burly
trucker yelped while egg yolk spilled down
his shirt
CdnReader
07-16-2007, 05:14 PM
His shirt
displayed the wear
of one who struggled through
threadbare times of never enough.
She sighed.
ampoule
07-16-2007, 06:21 PM
She sighed
the patch was sewn
atop the hole of thoughts
but it was not strong enough to
hold them
firefangled
07-16-2007, 07:15 PM
hold them,
they won’t bite you,
unless you squeeze to hard,
then they may disappear like ghosts —
poems
CdnReader
07-17-2007, 04:57 AM
poems...
scatters of words
that reflect inner thoughts,
our true selves on display for all...
or not
firefangled
07-17-2007, 07:57 AM
or not…
the way Hepburn
pronounced rough Charlie’s name...
and what became of rust and lace,
ol’ girl?
PrinceMyshkin
07-17-2007, 08:05 AM
ol' girl
as I first thought
you, till I discovered
there were qualities better than
gender
CdnReader
07-17-2007, 08:50 AM
Gender...
a two-sex world
can't cover the concept.
Surrender your misconceptions...
Accept.
Riesa
07-17-2007, 11:46 AM
Accept
the disconnect,
hollowed crystal prison
mutes words shot across galactic
distance
ampoule
07-17-2007, 11:52 AM
distance
close then farther
than when I touched your arm
and you threw it across the world
away
littlewing53
07-17-2007, 12:31 PM
it's great to read the awesome haikus coming thru....
away
directions change
the wind blows hard eastward
turning i saw your shadow pass
come close
come close
to the cliff edge,
watch the quibbling sea.
Swollen waves storm the waiting shore,
at war
firefangled
07-17-2007, 02:04 PM
at war,
and if you won
all the land, all the wealth,
all choices were yours, your God ruled,
watch out!
Riesa
07-17-2007, 03:12 PM
watch out,
lest beguiled
becomes as air to gills
and no furtive back-swimming
un-nets.
littlewing53
07-17-2007, 04:04 PM
un-nets
weary rider
passing thru the waters
beneath the deep seas wondering
dreaming
Il Penseroso
07-17-2007, 04:28 PM
dreaming
of the heavens
half-conscious scanning of
stone clouds, marble walls; reflections
of us.
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