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scarlet pain
11-06-2007, 06:07 AM
secret
of the seven
seas held by the trident
of the great king Titan!no men
shall know!

firefangled
11-07-2007, 07:46 AM
shall know!
shall share the known!
shall seek peace with the known!
shall not restrict peace to a law!
all shall!

packersfan
11-07-2007, 10:40 AM
all shall
love, the way they
were loved by the people
yes, the people of peace, of hope
of love

Pendragon
11-07-2007, 10:40 AM
of love
I am lacking
eternal prodigal,
seeking someone darkness hiding
my way

all shall
listen, now my
story saddens people:
misunderstood, forgotten, thrown
aside…

adrift
wandering waif
requires love, acceptance,
reassurance that I am of
any worth…

will you
hold my hand for
a moment, brush a tear
from overflowing eyes, be kind
to me…

symphony
11-07-2007, 08:30 PM
to me
and me alone,
i owe my life. No God,
no knight in shining armour, has
saved me

there were
no Lord, no one,
even "Saviors" savoured
what i had stored in me, in this
crushed cup....

mazHur
11-07-2007, 09:26 PM
saved me
from disaster
no one but my shadow
which followed me in my days of
hardships

crushed cup..
will break my heart
O my cup bearer serve
the wine of your enchanting eyes,
in eyes

ampoule
11-07-2007, 11:21 PM
in eyes
I see your truth
and you like my looking
but your eyes, deep and dark, see me
blinking

firefangled
11-08-2007, 07:44 AM
blinking
once, she was gone,
hummingbird, wings singing
that song, down by the Oswego,
dancing

mazHur
11-08-2007, 08:07 AM
dancing
to please his mate
the peacock fanned his tail
like a mistress pleasing his man
madly

firefangled
11-08-2007, 09:56 AM
madly,
through the long day,
I rush, plague of data,
writing on water, no swimming
allowed

Pendragon
11-08-2007, 11:52 AM
allowed
my pain, I go
if no one goes along
alone unafraid to challange
hell's gates

mazHur
11-08-2007, 12:05 PM
hell's gates
are closed for me
that has put me in hell
I really cannot understand
what,hell?

ampoule
11-08-2007, 03:48 PM
what hell
is in my loins
chopped and scattered about
bring them together for me please
soon, please

mazHur
11-08-2007, 04:00 PM
soon, please
before I lose
my patience and girdle
up my loins for a new battle
with hell!

firefangled
11-09-2007, 07:25 AM
with hell
those words again!
don't like hell, don't want hell,
don't believe in hell, wait, I smell
meatloaf!!

mazHur
11-09-2007, 08:03 AM
meatloaf
uncooked is hell
bake it in an oven
stoked by blazing fire of hell
then eat

ampoule
11-09-2007, 09:25 AM
then eat
you might like it
or I'll have hell to pay
how wonderful the aromas
cooking

mazHur
11-09-2007, 09:41 AM
cooking
meat is easy
beat to make it tender
with a hollander, then stir fry
serve hot

firefangled
11-09-2007, 09:57 AM
serve hot,
fresh meatloaf, yes,
the divine cold meatloaf sandwich,
never!

Pendragon
11-09-2007, 11:38 AM
never
allow foolish
pride to rend friendships, for
pride: one of the seven deadly
love: pure

_JadeRain_
11-09-2007, 12:07 PM
Love: Pure
It will return
But in greater numbers
Give your heart and recieve a heart
Someday

mazHur
11-09-2007, 02:55 PM
Someday
you will be mine
you have stolen my heart
now what is left of me without
you,love

littlewing53
11-09-2007, 03:18 PM
you love
i watch nearby
secret hopes realized
soon together without delay
i wait

firefangled
11-09-2007, 03:20 PM
I wait
anticipate,
love is a varied thing,
the kneading of it, ketchup edge,
sliced thick

littlewing53
11-09-2007, 03:39 PM
sliced thick
red tomatoe
avocado sliced thin
together between two slices
perfect

ampoule
11-09-2007, 06:30 PM
perfect
this recipe
juicy, so flavorful
open up and let me feed you
this thought

mazHur
11-09-2007, 07:36 PM
this thought
that you are mine
keeps me awake all night
i gaze at the stars and look for
my luck

firefangled
11-09-2007, 08:56 PM
my luck,
I love home cooked,
raised on the sweet comfort
of cornbread, slow hand stews, grits with
red eye

mazHur
11-09-2007, 08:58 PM
red eye,
red hair, red lips,
red cheeks, red this red that
red is my favorite color
my rose!

symphony
11-09-2007, 09:13 PM
My rose
is vivid red
when the thorns make it bleed,
is virgin white when drops of rain
purge it,

salmon--
when winds flow by
making it shiver, in
fits of lust. But your touch makes it
go black.

mazHur
11-09-2007, 09:39 PM
purge it,
unless you want
to get your heart blackened
with the effluent of raw rust
and dust

mazHur
11-09-2007, 09:43 PM
go black
like ebony
and sit on the violin
of my heart like a sleek fret board
with strings

ampoule
11-09-2007, 11:55 PM
with strings
I pull your arms
but no puppet are you
your arms are already around
my waist

Walja
11-10-2007, 12:23 AM
The cold
among crystals
that shine let air unfold
within my mind and make me feel
colorblind.

Walja
11-10-2007, 12:25 AM
ehm sorry.. i somehow screwed up the game...

Walja
11-10-2007, 12:37 AM
ok once more...

my waist
hurts when you push
so hide your claws and wait
to see red stream majestically
shining

schadenfreude
11-10-2007, 06:14 AM
Shining
stars are dreary,
the moon is just the same.
Darling, we are all cliches when
we love.

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:59 AM
we love
in tiny ways
but the result is large
like eating cream puffs on a cloud
heaven

firefangled
11-10-2007, 10:55 AM
heaven,
we make it real,
faith ain't what we say, love,
it's what we do, put some muscle
in it

Pendragon
11-10-2007, 11:16 AM
in it
a grain of truth,
perhaps an entire meal,
depends a lot on what you seek—
you find

firefangled
11-10-2007, 01:03 PM
you find
what moves your heart
in small places and things,
a bird, a laugh, colors made new,
made bright

ampoule
11-10-2007, 02:08 PM
made bright
my eyes, my smile
you did it, you culprit
they are like flashing neon lights
you're here

littlewing53
11-10-2007, 04:11 PM
you're here
amongst the stars
across the sky you breathe
from horizon to horizon
you are

TheFifthElement
11-10-2007, 04:13 PM
you are
the soul speaking
of wonder and rainbows,
a sullen sky waking over
water.

Walja
11-10-2007, 04:18 PM
water
in undergrownd
river just glittering
silently in the echo sound
whispers

littlewing53
11-10-2007, 04:25 PM
whispers
barely spoken
a sound so sweetly sung
there just beneath the river edge
a song

PrinceMyshkin
11-10-2007, 04:27 PM
Whispers
from lovers far
away sometimes reach us
just like “I love you” shouted in
our ears

littlewing53
11-10-2007, 04:35 PM
oh dear...

our ears
attached liked twins
hear sounds of love approach
sensitive and alluring wait
to kiss

ampoule
11-10-2007, 05:06 PM
to kiss
the face of God
kiss your fingers and place
them into the clouds and he will
capture

firefangled
11-10-2007, 06:43 PM
capture
the light of you,
make you see it, then act,
sing, make a poem, paint your life
holy

mazHur
11-10-2007, 06:58 PM
you're here
but I cannot
see or feel any red
hair or a reflection of it
My God!

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:03 PM
sorry,,,time lag problem

holy,
sacred, so what
cows are not forgiven
for their milk,meat and hide by men
all over

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:21 PM
all over
let's play charades
tell me what it sounds like
how many words or syllables
help me

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:25 PM
all over
let's play charades
tell me what it sounds like
how many words or syllables
help me

help me
these deceptions
are no joy for my heart
paper flowers grow not in love
gardens

Zzzzzzzzzz

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:30 PM
Oh NO! Not love again! lol :D

of love
hearts and flowers
steamy showers, back rubs
serenade me with your oboe
oh no

firefangled
11-10-2007, 07:32 PM
gardens
mine are dying,
they thrive on different things,
even within one love, many
words live

firefangled
11-10-2007, 07:33 PM
I give up

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:33 PM
oh no
don't play music
to these over-fed ears
so weary of the food of love
Oh, love!

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:35 PM
We now pause for a short commercial break.

DON'T GIVE UP DON'T GIVE UP

And now, back to your regularly scheduled program.

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:36 PM
words live
but you cannot
hear them with your earthly
ears already dinned with dead noise
words die

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:40 PM
gardens
mine are dying,
they thrive on different things,
even within one love, many
words live

words live
and bubble forth
blow in this little wand
and watch them tickle my earlobes
popping

firefangled
11-10-2007, 07:40 PM
We now pause for a short commercial break.

DON'T GIVE UP DON'T GIVE UP

And now, back to your regularly scheduled program.

:lol: you crack me up!

words die
without kisses
without warm baths, candles,
and the long night with its caught sighs
kiss me

firefangled
11-10-2007, 07:42 PM
words live
and bubble forth
blow in this little wand
and watch them tickle my earlobes
popping

popping,
I hear you laugh,
trickling down, I taste them,
like sweet wine on my lips, pour on
pour on

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:44 PM
popping
out of their cups
they look like two pears
ogling from the bough of sweet love
your eyes!

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:47 PM
ya know...we're getting awful close to some simulpostagasms here. ;)

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:48 PM
Oh my gosh....#2061 and #2062 :blush: :blush:

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:49 PM
kiss me
she said and brought
her cute lips close to mine
I felt like some lightening has
struck me

mazHur
11-10-2007, 07:53 PM
ya know...we're getting awful close to some simulpostagasms here. ;)

be happy, it's your goodluck !! lol

ampoule
11-10-2007, 07:58 PM
popping,
I hear you laugh,
trickling down, I taste them,
like sweet wine on my lips, pour on
pour on

pour on
the sweet honey
stir me with a large spoon
make me dizzy in your glass of
sweet tea




popping
out or their cups
they look like two pears
ogling from the bough of sweet love
your eyes

your eyes
should not go there
cover them with clover
listen now, bees drinking nectar
honey

firefangled
11-10-2007, 08:02 PM
sweet tea,
honey melding,
the glass overflowing,
I catch it with my tongue, the spill
stir again

ampoule
11-10-2007, 08:04 PM
kiss me
she said and brought
her cute lips close to mine
I felt like some lightening has
struck me

struck me
down like a hound
now I'm bound for glory
come to me my highwayman and
save me

firefangled
11-10-2007, 08:10 PM
save me!
comes on horseback,
comes to her by moonlight,
the highwayman in the moonlight,
tonight

Il Penseroso
11-11-2007, 12:52 AM
tonight
in sprinkled bliss
gaze on stars' silver glow
and map the story's gentle turn
inside.

schadenfreude
11-11-2007, 02:26 AM
Oh no!
The cat wears shoes.
The dog is counting stones.
It's enough to turn this blue world
around.

schadenfreude
11-11-2007, 02:27 AM
opps, sorry I read the poems on the wrong page.

symphony
11-11-2007, 04:54 AM
not a problem, schaden. :)

From Penseroso's:
inside
the stormy slits
of your eyes, did i see
the slightest trace of fear, of fear
growing?...


From Schaden's:
around
the world in eight
days now, wouldnt Verne be
amazed at how quickly we are
growing?....

firefangled
11-11-2007, 09:57 AM
growing,
the palm leaf peels,
like a snake, like we have,
but refuse to think as one with
snake, palm

mazHur
11-11-2007, 10:25 AM
snake,palm
yes, I carry
snakes in my palm of hand
they sneak out of my cuffs and sleeves
and bite

firefangled
11-11-2007, 12:06 PM
and bite,
does the winter,
our ears and nose, does float
our breathing, silent in the air -
white birds

Pendragon
11-11-2007, 12:11 PM
white birds,
snowy egrets--
standing tall in canals--
longing deeply for Hatteras
again...

TheFifthElement
11-11-2007, 12:24 PM
again
I find myself
on the outside looking
fondly at round smiling faces
unknown

firefangled
11-11-2007, 01:23 PM
unknown
soldier, your day
does not enough repay
the ragged way you live for our
easy sleep

Walja
11-11-2007, 01:34 PM
easy sleep,
redeemed eyestrain
from the luminous day
the night has replaced washing light
away

mazHur
11-11-2007, 01:35 PM
ea-sy sleep
costs heavily
on lives in time of war
young soldiers, civilians die
dog's death

mazHur
11-11-2007, 01:37 PM
away
from home they went
to catch the terrorist
no weapons of mass destruction
are found

ampoule
11-11-2007, 09:14 PM
are found
little trinkets
ones that you left behind
carefully I rebury them
in sand

firefangled
11-11-2007, 10:15 PM
http://www.karenalkalay-gut.com/crap.htm

in sand,
wrote Adelaide
two, four, six, eight and two,
rest her soul on these windless nights
alone

ampoule
11-11-2007, 10:39 PM
interesting article. unsung poets. there are probably many. even here.

alone
is the write time
to right the things within
churning, burning, begging, crying
escape

Walja
11-12-2007, 08:44 AM
Escape
from the dusty,
dirrty winter falling
into your dreams of indigo
and sleep.

firefangled
11-12-2007, 10:23 AM
and sleep,
where I wander,
down the roads, in the rooms
of fantasy, darkest, deepest
heartbeats

Pendragon
11-12-2007, 12:17 PM
heartbeats--
two become one--
I hold you close to me.
In disbelief that you chose me--
my love...

ampoule
11-12-2007, 11:23 PM
my love
scattered around
like yellow chicken feed
corny with a peck peck here but
more there

mazHur
11-13-2007, 12:16 AM
more there
it moves , kisses
rosy cheeks of a rose,
morning breeze sucks rouge from its cheeks
so sweet

firefangled
11-13-2007, 06:05 AM
so sweet,
mermaid singing, moonlit
water carrying her along,
listen

symphony
11-13-2007, 07:15 AM
listen
not only to
the melodious cuckoo
who can never be held onto,
nor seen...

listen
to the harsh cries
of the early rooster,
wake up, call your soul to rise, 'gainst
all lies
.....

ampoule
11-13-2007, 08:50 AM
all lies
allies when scared
but they won't defend you
they'll leave you standing in the field
alone

Pendragon
11-13-2007, 10:38 AM
alone?
perhaps I am
perhaps you cannot see
those who come when the night is still...
my friends...

TheFifthElement
11-13-2007, 05:03 PM
my friends
whisper behind
their hands, in corners of
rooms, staring. Paranoia breeds
within.

mazHur
11-13-2007, 05:20 PM
within
without all's same
you are my heart, my love
I love you, love you, love you dear
come back !

ampoule
11-13-2007, 08:08 PM
come back
you forgot me
surely an oversight
I'm sure you would have remembered
someday

mazHur
11-13-2007, 08:19 PM
someday
separation
will come to an end and
kind wind will blow to kiss the lips
of leaves

firefangled
11-13-2007, 08:26 PM
someday,
I will wake up,
sit on my front porch swing,
listening to the Swallows sing,
and write

firefangled
11-13-2007, 08:31 PM
of leaves
and simple things,
sunbeams on the water,
the red ivy climbing the tree,
this rain

mazHur
11-13-2007, 08:36 PM
this rain
will send new life
into the scorch-ed earth
flowers will dance with joy,birds sing
love-songs

symphony
11-14-2007, 12:11 AM
love-songs,
as time goes by,
will fade, empty words die.
but this moment lives, when i sing
for you...

mazHur
11-14-2007, 12:38 AM
for you..
all that I have
for me nothing at all
not even a small word of love
not fair

ampoule
11-14-2007, 03:17 PM
not fair
to be alone
when there is such a need
not only to receive, but more
to give

mazHur
11-14-2007, 04:24 PM
to give
you what you want
to satisfy your needs
let us sit together again
and talk

littlewing53
11-14-2007, 05:08 PM
and talk
hearing nothing
but notes of loving care
reminding each other of times
yet known

Pendragon
11-15-2007, 11:12 AM
yet known
by very few
the magic energy
poetic voice releases, dulcet
music...

ampoule
11-15-2007, 05:46 PM
music
makes my world round
firm, fully packed, joyful
with harmonious pheromones
filling

mazHur
11-16-2007, 02:18 AM
filling
the atmosphere
of my heart's universe
the fragrance of your love descends
my soul

Pendragon
11-16-2007, 11:13 AM
my soul
has no hope here
among these earthly lands--
transformed, transported heavenward
shall rest...

littlewing53
11-16-2007, 07:23 PM
shall rest
amongst the fields
where green grasses grow tall
hiding hidden far from those eyes
that see

packersfan
11-16-2007, 07:38 PM
[to] see
is true enough
but to believe in things,
that's not seen, is magical
and bliss

Pendragon
11-17-2007, 11:04 AM
and bliss
must be sought out
one man's heaven, another's hell--
enjoy everything to fullness...
death comes

mazHur
11-17-2007, 11:10 AM
death comes
wrapped in black dress
carrying a black whip in hand
lashing!

packersfan
11-17-2007, 01:15 PM
Lashing
Out like a whip.
Slavery is no more.
And I hope it'll never arise
Again.

ampoule
11-18-2007, 04:46 AM
again
I come to you
coveting your blessing
you can make me new, it's your new
power

TheFifthElement
11-18-2007, 04:55 AM
power
stretches across
the land with great steel arms
linked, defending soldiers protect
our homes

mazHur
11-18-2007, 10:23 AM
our homes
once paradise
are swept away by storms
risen in the Bay of Bengal
Oh, sad!

firefangled
11-18-2007, 11:26 AM
oh sad
distance, time/space,
we must be there, a place
where, face to face, amazed,
we touch

Pendragon
11-18-2007, 11:40 AM
we touch,
the magic's there
time has not erased love
Sown grey in our hair, not our hearts
my love...

mazHur
11-18-2007, 11:42 AM
oh sad
distance, time/space,
we must be there, a place
where, face to face, amazed,
we touch

we touch
like petals two
kissing one another's
lips, oblivious of all around
and melt

mazHur
11-18-2007, 11:44 AM
my love...
how should I say
i live only by you
by the ecstasy of your feel
your love

ampoule
11-18-2007, 01:13 PM
your love
of life through words
touches my heart and soul
so that in my mind I am there
with you

mazHur
11-18-2007, 03:28 PM
your love
of life through words
touches my heart and soul
so that in my mind I am there
with you

this is superb ! almost a precise of my earlier poem

with you
i vow to live
like a cotyledon
of deep consolidated love
sprouting

packersfan
11-18-2007, 05:46 PM
sprouting
like flowers in
the garden of eden
make sure to be aware of the
serpent

ampoule
11-18-2007, 08:25 PM
serpent
please don't bite me
oh, a nibble perhaps
be sure to leave some of my flesh
for him

mazHur
11-18-2007, 11:02 PM
for him
wait these two eyes
even after I'm dea;l
eat every thing of me,O serpent
but eyes!

headfullofpanic
11-18-2007, 11:50 PM
but eyes,
why do you watch
the evil moves of pain
that circle in my ugly mind?
awake!

schadenfreude
11-19-2007, 04:57 AM
Awake!
The alarm rings
screaming wake up! Wake UP!
And cursing, I tear from dreams to
reality.

mazHur
11-19-2007, 05:09 AM
reality
does not live in
deceptively shining
mirrors which only reflect what's
virtual !

firefangled
11-19-2007, 08:37 AM
virtual ?
it is too true,
when I awake, the taste
of her kisses and sighs, I smile
all day

ampoule
11-19-2007, 10:33 AM
all day
the wind of thought
blows through me beckoning
a pause in my activity
tickling

Pendragon
11-19-2007, 10:50 AM
tickling
in my sore throat
running eyes, running nose,
coughing, hoarse, hardly talk, hard to
breathe right..

firefangled
11-19-2007, 12:04 PM
breathe right,
I say, slow down,
I trace your lips again,
my finger memorizing them,
wishing

packersfan
11-19-2007, 08:02 PM
wishing
upon a star
goes unlimitly far
when you truly just believe in
magic

firefangled
11-19-2007, 11:09 PM
magic -
real or unreal?
fire from sticks, fire from rocks,
a galaxy with poetry,
spinning

packersfan
11-19-2007, 11:13 PM
spinning
tops for children.
let their innocence be spun.
for once that top's spinning has stopped
it's gone.

ampoule
11-19-2007, 11:30 PM
it's gone
that old sorrow
I've opened the windows
making room for a new tenant
rent free

firefangled
11-20-2007, 08:59 AM
rent free,
sometimes we are
tennants in our own lives -
Ah! RENT FREE, say it from treetops,
Swaying!

mazHur
11-20-2007, 11:00 AM
wishing
you all the best
even if you hate me
my love for you is forever
stone-heart !

Pendragon
11-20-2007, 11:05 AM
stone-heart.
he will break you.
tenderness hides the truth.
no love except love of sadism...
loves tears...

mazHur
11-20-2007, 11:12 AM
loves tears...
she hates to smile
give her a sniff of love
perhaps she may become her own
and laugh !

TheFifthElement
11-20-2007, 04:06 PM
and laugh
with abandon -
unreserved emotions
overflow like the bath you and
I shared.

ampoule
11-20-2007, 07:51 PM
I shared
too much, too soon
he thought he had it all
but I had reserves, yes, new things
surprise

firefangled
11-20-2007, 10:57 PM
surprize,
candles, music,
a slow dance of sight, sound,
indulgences, the bath, massage,
relax

_JadeRain_
11-21-2007, 01:04 AM
Relax
There is always
Tomorrow to finish
Cooking Becasue Tanksgiving is
Thursday

mazHur
11-21-2007, 01:29 AM
Thursday
is just a day
like any other day
unless you come and share with me
our love

Etienne
11-21-2007, 01:54 AM
Our love
in this bottle
shall not weep for long and
gently shall be deflowered in
cul sec!

firefangled
11-21-2007, 10:54 AM
cul sec,
oh help me, French
teacher, it's been so long,
sounds like liquor, but deflower?
next please

mazHur
11-21-2007, 12:29 PM
next please
I'm in hurry
just fifteen minutes left
for the flight to take off for Rome
hurry !

firefangled
11-21-2007, 01:08 PM
hurry?
I like walking
in the deep woods, time slows
and the day is night before you
notice

mazHur
11-21-2007, 01:17 PM
notice
I have taken
of your beautiful lips
It would be cruel not to kiss them
with love

Pendragon
11-21-2007, 01:44 PM
with love
comes awkwardness...
do I touch, will she like--
confused chaos somehow settles--
a kiss..

mazHur
11-21-2007, 02:11 PM
a kiss..
is a blessing
of lips which are first made
by nature in creation of
fetus

ampoule
11-21-2007, 04:26 PM
fetus
ever growing
like love that must be born
surrounded in soft protection
sleeping

mazHur
11-21-2007, 04:32 PM
sleeping
snugged in my arms
I caress her red hair
she looks up and tries to smile
pussy cat !

Etienne
11-21-2007, 04:59 PM
sleeping
snugged in my arms
I caress her red hair
she looks up and tries to smile
pussy cat !

Pussy
cat is not right
two syllables only
should be this line of poetry
you write

*I changed it too late the first version, which was used in the next poem was:

Pussy
cat is cheating
two syllables only
should be contained if we follow
the rules

mazHur
11-21-2007, 05:07 PM
the rules
are rules no doubt
but when it comes to love
a pussy doubles up into
a cat!

Etienne
11-21-2007, 05:27 PM
the rules
are rules no doubt
but when it comes to love
a pussy doubles up into
a cat!

A cat!
while so sneaky
cannot avoid the laws
of jungle, physics or poetry
ever

mazHur
11-21-2007, 05:29 PM
ever
this thought occurred
to you that felines are
not only cats but have genders
pussies!

Etienne
11-21-2007, 05:34 PM
Pussies!
when they're women's
then they'e good arguments
but a cat's, sorry, ain't worth squat
to me

ampoule
11-22-2007, 01:33 AM
to me
the perfect day
is to be full enough
but still hungry for your second
helping

firefangled
11-22-2007, 09:04 AM
helping
one, delicious!
go slow for the second,
try something new, savor each taste,
mmm mmm

mazHur
11-22-2007, 09:20 AM
mmm mmm
enjoy my dear
have as many servings
as you like until you are full
and dead !

Pendragon
11-22-2007, 11:46 AM
and dead
arose pallid
in blood stained shrouds
marching forward with blazing orbs
ghost birds...

turkeys--
slain before, for
Thanksgiving Feasts eaten--
alive by eldrich fire advanced:
stuff this!

ampoule
11-23-2007, 09:27 AM
stuff this
in your pocket
and take it out later
holding it to your lips for sweet
kisses

mazHur
11-23-2007, 09:33 AM
kisses
began the show
and things began moving
scenes started changing and brought in
climax

Susan Sonnen
11-23-2007, 10:14 AM
climax
brings with it hope,
for what has happened once
might happen once again...even
better...

Pendragon
11-23-2007, 11:06 AM
Better?
I think so, yes.
Much improved here lately.
Living daily one at a time--
chin up!

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/HearttoHeart-1.gif

Susan Sonnen
11-23-2007, 01:55 PM
chin up!
expectations
reaching for the heavens
make dreams thrive and passion blossom
anew.

ampoule
11-24-2007, 06:13 AM
anew
is what you are
awashed with glowing sun
warming your beautiful hands for
writing

firefangled
11-24-2007, 08:40 AM
writing,
make no mistake,
is a touch, as roses
so pale in moonlight, nonetheless,
are red

mazHur
11-24-2007, 09:28 AM
are red
like roses fresh
the petals of your lips
let me kiss them my Juliet
and die

Wyoecho
11-24-2007, 09:45 AM
and die
not yet to live
this mortal coil trod
while failing eyes are closed at last
no God?

Pendragon
11-24-2007, 11:00 AM
No God?
No, tell another.
Does not wash with me, now.
This butterfly is designed for
one plant

the worm
eats the leaves,
cocoons, transforms, flies--
butterflies return feast flowers...
cycle...

ampoule
11-24-2007, 12:35 PM
cycle
around the block
pick me up at noon please
a chilly willy picnic will
warm fast

mazHur
11-24-2007, 12:39 PM
warm fast
the safe haven
of your long loving arms
please hold me tight in your warm grip
all night

thescholar
11-24-2007, 12:52 PM
all night
chaos rages
silent screams do echo
yet the virgin child never stirs
last sleep

mazHur
11-24-2007, 01:16 PM
last sleep
the longest sleep
is the fate of all things
what happens after the sleep ends
god knows

thescholar
11-24-2007, 01:38 PM
god knows
if im lucky
pull the trigger, find out
seems the barrel wasn't empty
too late

mazHur
11-24-2007, 01:47 PM
too late
for you to come
Oh, my dear crusader!
we have already lost battle
of love

Wyoecho
11-24-2007, 02:41 PM
of love
I know not how
I only know the pain
flowers grow in daylight’s sunshine
with rain

thescholar
11-24-2007, 02:42 PM
of love
you speak with spite
you speak of bleeding hearts
pains, and many wasted years
a shame.

ampoule
11-24-2007, 06:12 PM
of love
I know not how
I only know the pain
flowers grow in daylight’s sunshine
with rain

with rain
I wash my hair
then dry in daytime breeze
ready for the scents of this night
of love



of love
you speak with spite
you speak of bleeding hearts
pains, and many wasted years
a shame

a shame
to miss out on
sunsets entertaining
your eyes and tickling your good soul
please look

Etienne
11-24-2007, 06:54 PM
please look
have all the muses
become Venus' own slaves?
Enter Thiasus; fauns, pans, nymphs,
Bacchus!

firefangled
11-25-2007, 11:05 AM
Bacchus,
dangerous game
you played, but time ran out,
the poets won, moonlight lovers,
writing

Pendragon
11-25-2007, 12:12 PM
writing.
humming a tune.
Saw Valkyries riding
horses down The West Wind under
the Moon...

firefangled
11-25-2007, 09:13 PM
the Moon
woke you, daylight
it seemed to be, how bright
it seemed to grow while reflecting
your eyes

thescholar
11-25-2007, 09:22 PM
the moon
silk-spun cirlce
man, blue cheese, high tide?
what untold secrets do you hold
for me

ampoule
11-26-2007, 03:43 AM
the Moon
woke you, daylight
it seemed to be, how bright
it seemed to grow while reflecting
your eyes

your eyes
they puzzle me
behind their misty veil
look deeply into mine and see
the moon



the moon
silk-spun circle
man, blue cheese, high tide
what untold secrets do you hold
for me

for me
there is this hope
to feel a loving touch
a tap on the shoulder and I
will turn

mazHur
11-26-2007, 04:13 AM
the moon
turned into stone
lost its light and lustre
when you showed up on the terrace
my love

will turn
night into day
the soft touch of your hand
come and brighten my days and nights
my moon

Pendragon
11-26-2007, 11:01 AM
my moon
lies far out there
verdant Endor supports
lifeforms never seen in your dreams—
awaits

poet
to come and write
describe them all.
paint with words such picture perfect—
unknown...

packersfan
11-26-2007, 09:58 PM
unknown
heavens above
we think we really know
but I don't think we truly know
we wait

firefangled
11-26-2007, 10:36 PM
we wait,
and time does not,
how cruel to leave us
chasing, then come pushing us from
behind

ampoule
11-26-2007, 11:16 PM
we wait,
and time does not,
how cruel to leave us
chasing, then come pushing us from
behind

AMEN!! :)


behind
is what I'll be
if I don't hurry there
and make my presence known throughout
this land

V.Jayalakshmi
11-27-2007, 01:23 AM
This land is mine,sole owner and proud too,

What if this gets outlawed?

I knew it not,for laws are but man made,

And I will hold with pride this mother earth.


Rock me not for I am fragile,

A roused farmer am I today.

I grow flowers, spices too.

I shall always hold this earth with love.:)

ampoule
11-27-2007, 07:36 AM
This land is mine,sole owner and proud too,

What if this gets outlawed?

I knew it not,for laws are but man made,

And I will hold with pride this mother earth.


Rock me not for I am fragile,

A roused farmer am I today.

I grow flowers, spices too.

I shall always hold this earth with love.:)

I'm afraid this is not a cinquain. You should probably post this under Personal Poetry.
For this thread you are supposed to begin your cinquain with the last two words of the person before you, five lines with the following syllable count:
2-4-6-8-2

I hope you can join us.

mazHur
11-27-2007, 07:53 AM
this land
of pinkish tinge
borrowed from the red sun
is too far for me to behold
with love

Pendragon
11-27-2007, 12:10 PM
with love,
one can heal wounds,
break down dividing walls
courage blossoms under flaming
tests, love...

firefangled
11-28-2007, 08:31 AM
tests love,
all these cinquains,
of many endings that could be,
it reigns

Pendragon
11-28-2007, 02:16 PM
it reigns,
one or other--
Hate or Love: one ruler.
Mankind exists to serve masters:
Choose One:

mazHur
11-28-2007, 02:26 PM
Choose One
or take them all
Ezra Pound truly said
we are not ruled by rulers but
Eunuchs !

ampoule
11-28-2007, 08:38 PM
Eunuchs
are people too
just like us who voted
or did NOT vote thinking ours were
bigger

mazHur
11-29-2007, 06:04 AM
bigger
or smaller
does not matter. The knife
is a knife if it cuts through hard
with ease!

Pendragon
11-29-2007, 01:53 PM
with ease
the artist draws,
sketching shadows, sunlight--
merging effortlessly the whole
portrait...

mazHur
11-29-2007, 02:03 PM
portrait...
what's a portrait
to do with your feelings
it sees and keeps smiling at you
quietly

ampoule
11-29-2007, 03:19 PM
quietly (bad bad mazHur ;) isn't that three syllables? picky picky picky):D
I watch your mood
your face dark and troubled
I want to start over, know what
went wrong

mazHur
11-29-2007, 03:32 PM
quietly (bad bad mazHur ;) isn't that three syllables? picky picky picky):D
I watch your mood
your face dark and troubled
I want to start over, know what
went wrong

good, good, good, Amp. The pronunciation of a word and the 'point' where you place the stress depends on the number of teeth you have in your mouth !;)

went wrong
nothing with me;
only you were skeptic
about me, about my warm love
Love-heart!

TheFifthElement
11-29-2007, 04:03 PM
love-heart
dissolving on
my tongue. Words of sweetness
ingrained into my tastebuds say
be mine

mazHur
11-29-2007, 04:11 PM
be mine
says the coy maid
but when I try to touch
her she moves away and says, No,
Not now!

Etienne
11-29-2007, 04:18 PM
Not now!
cruel headache
today like yesterday
and you know, this week of the month
good night

ampoule
11-30-2007, 12:12 AM
good night
I wish it was
but there aren't enough stars
to go around and help me to
forget

mazHur
11-30-2007, 04:30 AM
forget
the past, relive
the present moment,dear
myriads of moments contains one
moment

ampoule
11-30-2007, 08:23 AM
moment
precious moment
you are waiting for me
but I cannot take what I don't
deserve

mazHur
11-30-2007, 10:57 AM
deserve
a kiss , don't I?
Come hither and kiss me
until all my senses become
your lot

ampoule
11-30-2007, 08:31 PM
your lot
may I use it
put together a game
slow pitch, fast ball, curve ball, but no
strikes out

Wyoecho
12-01-2007, 12:13 AM
Your Lot
lest you choose more
will result in much pain
endless rainly days lacking time
for me

mazHur
12-01-2007, 02:50 AM
for me
no twinkling star;
for you the galaxy;
why fate is so unkind to me
Oh, God!

mazHur
12-01-2007, 02:54 AM
strikes out
slow pitch, fast ball,
curve ball, spins and guggly,
whole lot is at your disposal,
Begin

ampoule
12-01-2007, 07:38 AM
begin
now the clock ticks
I watch and chew my nails
my right leg hits against the desk
hate tests

firefangled
12-01-2007, 08:03 AM
hate tests
us all at times,
cruelty comes creeping
with its reasons, but love creates
kindness

mazHur
12-01-2007, 09:30 AM
kindness
begets kindness
but I had to be cruel
during surgery to rid you
of sore !

TheFifthElement
12-02-2007, 06:09 AM
of sore
and broken dreams
I am a prisoner,
troubled by nightmares in which you
leave me.

firefangled
12-02-2007, 09:10 AM
leave me
to my blackbirds
and paper skies, night comes
with its fire and ice, I'll forget
your lies

symphony
12-02-2007, 09:14 AM
your lies
wont make me stop
believing in people,
you hardly ever meant so much
to me....

firefangled
12-02-2007, 09:29 AM
to me
there is one soul,
in which I wander rapt,
one light held in a dark hand,
loosely

TheFifthElement
12-02-2007, 10:44 AM
loosely
fitted nightdress
grazing the floor. Moonlight
illuminates your curves, I reach
to touch

Susan Sonnen
12-02-2007, 02:46 PM
to touch,
thereby, to know
secrets buried decades
ago, bringing to light lost dreams
of yore

ampoule
12-02-2007, 09:21 PM
of yore
remembering
and perhaps forgetting
whichever is most convenient
for you

mazHur
12-02-2007, 09:40 PM
for you
i seem to live
for you I wait to die
but you are so uncaring. sweet
what's wrong?

firefangled
12-03-2007, 03:59 AM
what's wrong?
come rest your head
and tell it all to me,
worries are like caged birds, they need
to fly

mazHur
12-03-2007, 04:03 AM
to fly
with broken wings
would be a miracle
but with you as my flying mare
all's well

_JadeRain_
12-03-2007, 03:56 PM
All's well
That ends well is
The way Shakespeare put it
Screw courage to the sticking place
Read On!

mazHur
12-03-2007, 04:06 PM
Read On!
The book of love
and learn to feel the beats
of my restless heart that yearns for
your love

FacialFracture
12-04-2007, 12:02 AM
Your love
smells like women,
Or maybe it's your mouth;
You always stink of stale lipstick
At night.

ampoule
12-04-2007, 04:04 AM
at night
I think of you
in balmy land gazing
the sky looking back at you, I'm
refreshed

firefangled
12-04-2007, 08:02 AM
refreshed
the weather's here,
clouds lift in the cool wind,
so many bright stars watching, like
your eyes

littlewing53
12-04-2007, 04:56 PM
your eyes
reflect the breathe
a thousand days exist
bear the weight of secrets untold
your lips

mazHur
12-04-2007, 05:01 PM
your lips
like rose petals
your eyes like smiling life
your gait like an anaconda
in rut..........

littlewing53
12-04-2007, 05:16 PM
in rut
we find the pure
covered in ignorance
filled with lasting hungar unknown
till then

mazHur
12-04-2007, 06:05 PM
till then
let us promise
to keep our promise
the promise of promising to
promise

schadenfreude
12-05-2007, 05:31 AM
Promise
that the sky will
fall down; that the sun will
explode, because then we will all
be safe.

ampoule
12-05-2007, 06:36 AM
be safe
wrap yourself up
here, use this bubble wrap
then I can snap, crackle, pop you
for fun

TheFifthElement
12-05-2007, 08:46 AM
for fun
I hide under
the stairs, listening to
the sound of your voice pitching in
the dark.

firefangled
12-05-2007, 09:09 AM
the dark,
no idea,
no light, no door, I'm lost,
wandering, hands out, where is it...
the light

symphony
12-05-2007, 09:28 AM
The light
always flickers
at the other end, 'las! --
All the dark silhouettes save themselves
for me...

mazHur
12-05-2007, 09:29 AM
the light
is before you
open your eyes and see
the seven colors of rainbow
kissing.