Three People Haiku

[Janine]

pretty religious thou seem to be
I'm not sure but I can guess
there shines a star in the sky
it's far away but looks nigh!;)

:eek:
What's this? A four line haiku, mazHur? :lol:

New one starts:

Fallen far behind

[Silas Thorne]

Fallen far behind
the runner trips over dawn

[BienvenuJDC]

Fallen far behind
the runner trips over dawn
the day has lapped him

[Silas Thorne]

Great! :)


I'm soaked to the skin

[BienvenuJDC]

I'm soaked to the skin
my thin bones are drowned within

[Janine]

I'm soaked to the skin
my thin bones are drowned within
shivering with cold

[BienvenuJDC]

The unfair morning

[Silas Thorne]

The unfair morning
started before I got up

[Janine]

The unfair morning
started before I got up
sun streams hells vapours

[BienvenuJDC]

The lonely chipmunk peeked...

[Janine]

the lonely chipmunk peeked
with the most mischevious eyes

[Haunted]

the lonely chipmunk peeked
with the most mischevious eyes
spying on the cats

[BienvenuJDC]

Evil Siamese...

[Silas Thorne]

Evil Siamese
stealers of mittens

[Janine]

Evil Siamese
stealers of mittens
feline innocence

[Silas Thorne]

Fie on you, Frodo!

[Janine]

Fie on you, Frodo!
Golum lusts for the shiny ring

[BienvenuJDC]

Fie on you, Frodo!
Golum lusts for the shiny ring
Precious they want...NO!

[kiz_paws]

Craggy rocks whispered

[BienvenuJDC]

Craggy rocks whispered
The light voice intensified

[kiz_paws]

Craggy rocks whispered
The light voice intensified
until the dream waned

[Janine]

rich merchant of dreams

[Haunted]

rich merchant of dreams
trades in futures and desires

[firefangled]

rich merchant of dreams
trades in futures and desires
a stranger to now

[BienvenuJDC]

Steel structures sprout up...

[mazHur]

Steel structures sprout up
thrusting javelins in earth's heart

[Haunted]

Steel structures sprout up
thrusting javelins in earth's heart
Mother Nature bleeds

[ampoule]

hold this in your hand

[Silas Thorne]

hold this in your hand
'It's not a small bomb is it?'

[BienvenuJDC]

hold this in your hand
'It's not a small bomb is it?'
Whew! ...a bit of hope...

[ampoule]

:D:lol::D:lol::D

I love seeing how these go. Someone could certainly do a personality evaluation, couldn't they? Yikes! ;)

Oh, see how they go

[Monamy]

Oh, see how they go
all together, all at once

[BienvenuJDC]

Oh, see how they go
all together, all at once
When we work as one!

[mazHur]

where ever we go

[Janine]

wherever we go
I will stay close to you

[BienvenuJDC]

Wherever we go,
I will stay close to you.
One request...don't fart!

[mazHur]

wherever we go
I will stay close to you
thank you very much

[mazHur]

One request...don't fart!
you had been farting all day
No more pollution!

[BienvenuJDC]

I shot an arrow...

[mazHur]

I shot an arrow...
could hardly hit the bull's eye

[BienvenuJDC]

I shot an arrow...
could hardly hit the bull's eye
But I hit his nose...

[mazHur]

Why hit the nose, man?

[BienvenuJDC]

Why hit the nose, man?
The nose is in the middle...

[ampoule]

I shot an arrow...
could hardly hit the bull's eye
I was watching you

[BienvenuJDC]

Why hit the nose, man?
The nose is in the middle...
The bull was not hurt...:)

[mazHur]

china shop and bulls?

[BienvenuJDC]

china shop and bulls?
Stock Markets and bears and bulls...

[mazHur]

china shop and bulls?
Stock Markets and bears and bulls...
It's all 'push and pull'!

[BienvenuJDC]

I stuck my finger...

[mazHur]

I stuck my finger...
fiddling with 'cove detanta'

[BienvenuJDC]

I stuck my finger...
fiddling with 'cove detanta'
It bled a little...:(

[mazHur]

it was a hard bite

[BienvenuJDC]

it was a hard bite
but it went down smooth enough

[alakungfu]

it was a hard bite
but it went down smooth enough
clean in time with guilt

[kaymf]

losing a friendship

[tailor STATELY]

losing a friendship
wrenches the soul mightily

[Haunted]

losing a friendship
wrenches the soul mightily
let's go have a drink

[mazHur]

we are born to die

[tailor STATELY]

we are born to die
a truth that soothes the weary

[Silas Thorne]

we are born to die
a truth that soothes the weary
but not their loved ones.

[Janine]

Death's awesome threshold

[BienvenuJDC]

Death's awesome threshold
The door posts run crimson red

[Silas Thorne]

Death's awesome threshold
The door posts run crimson red
the paint's still drying

[Janine]

paint freshly applied

[BienvenuJDC]

paint freshly applied
goes unnoticed by the girl

[Silas Thorne]

paint freshly applied
goes unnoticed by the girl
leaning on the wall

[BienvenuJDC]

skinny dipping girl

[Janine]

the brick wall crumbles

[Janine]

:lol:oh, no - not again....I am off to dreamland....

[BienvenuJDC]

skinny dipping girl
the boys peeking through the hole
the brick wall crumbles

[mazHur]

Have you ever loved?

[BienvenuJDC]

Have you ever loved?
The betraying emotion...

[mazHur]

Have you ever loved?
The betraying emotion...
oops! sorry it's the third person who has to write the last line!

[BienvenuJDC]

**Let's try this again...;)**

:yawnb: HEY! We need a third person over here!!!

Have you ever loved?
The betraying emotion...

[PoeticPassions]

Have you ever loved
the betraying emotion
of forgotten bliss

[BienvenuJDC]

As the rain drops fall...

[PoeticPassions]

between the sheets of our lust

[ampoule]

As the rain drops fall...
between the sheets of our lust
my fire is put out

[mazHur]

Fate's not on my side

[ampoule]

Fate's not on my side
but my mattess is sagging

[BienvenuJDC]

Fate's not on my side
but my mattess is sagging
don't jump on the bed...

[mazHur]

What else is bed for?

[Haunted]

What else is bed for?
English roses in the spring

[BienvenuJDC]

What else is bed for?
English roses in the spring
Or a foundation...

[Haunted]

we are in contract

[BienvenuJDC]

we are in contract
It is binding us together

[mazHur]

we are in contract
It is binding us together
like waves in the sea!

[alakungfu]

lipstick applique

[mazHur]

lipstick applique
beauty does not rely on

[ampoule]

lipstick applique
beauty does not rely on
only magnifies

[mazHur]

Where are you, my love?

[Haunted]

Where are you, my love?
in the twilight air you breathe

[Janine]

Where are you, my love?
in the twilight air you breathe
stale vapor of dreams

[mazHur]

No to pessimism

[BienvenuJDC]

No to pessimism
Negative thoughts are undone

[Janine]

No to pessimism
Negative thoughts are undone
optimistic soul

[BienvenuJDC]

The mountain emerged...

[alakungfu]

Latch-key to freedom

[Haunted]

(simultaneously postings?)


The mountain emerged...
bright peaks masking dark shadows


Latch-key to freedom
only for those who seek it

[Janine]

The mountain emerged...
bright peaks masking dark shadows
valleys lay silent

Latch-key to freedom
only for those who seek it
glipse of tomorrow

[BienvenuJDC]

Sunbeams shoot across

[Janine]

sunbeams shoot across
sparkling reeds of green sea grass

[Stargazer86]

Sunbeams shoot across
Sparkling reeds of green sea grass
Nature's precious jewels

[Janine]

Shimmering satin

[BienvenuJDC]

Shimmering satin
Like the shining of red hair

[mazHur]

Shimmering satin
Like the shining of red hair
entangled in thorns

[BienvenuJDC]

Flailing in the sea

[mazHur]

Flailing in the sea
swinging its tail the sting ray

[BienvenuJDC]

Flailing in the sea
swinging its tail the sting ray
Flees its captors gone

[PoeticPassions]

unworthy words slip

[BienvenuJDC]

unworthy words slip
Through the lips of blind passion

[mazHur]

unworthy words slip
Through the lips of blind passion
leaving you nowhere.

[BienvenuJDC]

Passion is shown upon

[ampoule]

Passion shown upon
Everything he sees and hears

[mazHur]

Passion shown upon
Everything he sees and hears
Everything he likes.

[BienvenuJDC]

The blush permeates

[Haunted]

The blush permeates
so deep in the heart it hurts

[mazHur]

The blush permeates
so deep in the heart it hurts
but nobody knows.

[PoeticPassions]

the unsaid lingers

[BienvenuJDC]

the unsaid lingers
expression holds emotion

[mazHur]

the unsaid lingers
expression holds emotion
the rose of love blooms

[BienvenuJDC]

The aviator flies

[Haunted]

The aviator flies
a dreamy new atmosphere

[alakungfu]

The aviator flies
a dreamy new atmosphere
conspires to ground him

[BienvenuJDC]

A slug oozes by

[alakungfu]

a slug oozes by
leaves its scent in the bracken

[Haunted]

a slug oozes by
leaves its scent in the bracken
fresh beer on the way

[mazHur]

Alone in the crowd

[Janine]

Alone in a crowd
Strangers intimidate me

[mazHur]

Alone in a crowd
Strangers intimidate me
get me out of here!

[Janine]

get me out of here!
been online more than makes sense

[BienvenuJDC]

get me out of here!
been online more than makes sense
I am addicted

[Janine]

true, what can be done?

[BienvenuJDC]

True, what can be done?
Where is such dialogue found?
I've looked all around.

[BienvenuJDC]

Oh...wait...I wasn't supposed to finish it...:blush:

[Janine]

Oh...wait...I wasn't supposed to finish it...:blush:

no problem...just start a new one Bien....

[BienvenuJDC]

The black clouds rolled in...

[Janine]

the black clouds rolled in
rose tinge obliterated

[BienvenuJDC]

the black clouds rolled in
rose tinge obliterated
the smell of the rain

[billl]

the smell of the rain
first thunder breaks my memory
awakened by storm

[BienvenuJDC]

awakened by storm
the troops sprang to life ready
at a moments notice

[mazHur]

a dastardly act

[BienvenuJDC]

a dastardly act
shedding the blood of the young

[alakungfu]

a dastardly act
shedding the blood of the young
chalk it, down with Strife

[BienvenuJDC]

The seed bursts with green

[Haunted]

the seed bursts with green
a flower grows, red and wild

[BienvenuJDC]

the seed bursts with green
a flower grows, red and wild
seeds are made...again...

[Haunted]

delicious saga

[mazHur]

delicious saga
of my long affair with her

[BienvenuJDC]

delicious saga
of my long affair with her
may end in danger

[Haunted]

thrillseekers of love

[Janine]

thrillseekers of love
beware of consequences

[BienvenuJDC]

thrill seekers of love
beware of consequences
love is an action

[Haunted]

startled by thunder

[mazHur]

startled by thunder
he clenched his girl friend so tight

[Janine]

startled by thunder
he clenched his girl friend so tight
moist intimacy

[BienvenuJDC]

Forbidden love runs

[symphony]

i against the gains

[BienvenuJDC]

Forbidden love runs
Either me -- or the Prize won
I, against the gains

[mazHur]

the Bengal Tigress

[BienvenuJDC]

The Bengal Tigress
sultry vicious temptation

[mazHur]

The Bengal Tigress
sultry vicious temptation
only for the 'bless-ed'!

[BienvenuJDC]

the young nubile thing

[Haunted]

the young nubile thing
mistress to the romantics

[mazHur]

the young nubile thing
mistress to the romantics
drunken poets' dream!

[BienvenuJDC]

(I like that start...)

Drunken poets' dream...

[Haunted]

(don't know if I can match up...)

Drunken poets' dream...
intoxicating fancies

[BienvenuJDC]

Drunken poets' dream...
intoxicating fancies
bring about poems...

[mazHur]

Drunken poets' dream...
intoxicating fancies
unfulfilled desires

[Haunted]

unfulfilled desires
but powerful enough to
bring about poems...

[Janine]

born out of sadness

[Haunted]

born out of sadness
poor Inspector Wallander

[Janine]

born out of sadness
poor Inspector Wallander
lost in trail of tears

[Janine]

dawning light in fog

[Janine]

dawning light in fog
communication shattered

[Janine]

No one is around so I am pretending I am three people! The theme is BBC's crime drama Wallander:

dawning light in fog
communication shattered
he finds her dying...

[BienvenuJDC]

The fog starts to lift...

[Janine]

the fog starts to lift
tomorrow begins anew

[BienvenuJDC]

the fog starts to lift
tomorrow begins anew
the sun...strong again

[Janine]

vast Swedish landscape

[BienvenuJDC]

vast Swedish landscapes
rocky fields and evergreens

[Janine]

vast Swedish landscapes
rocky fields and evergreens
paintings in limbo

sorry, since no ones up, I am morphed into being the third person...

[BienvenuJDC]

Paintings in limbo
a sign of what dreams may come

[Janine]

paintings in limbo
a sign of what dreams may come
a simplistic peace

[BienvenuJDC]

Mickey and Donald

[Janine]

Mickey and Donald
Began their wondrous journey

[BienvenuJDC]

Mickey and Donald
Began their wondrous journey
with their friend Goofy

[Janine]

:lol: I am feeling a little 'Goofy' myself right now.

journey nears an end

[Monamy]

Wow, you both seem to get it going pretty smoothly. I hate to interfere =X

[Haunted]

when life gets hard... laugh!
when it gets even harder
collapse...start over...

[mazHur]

stumbling all the time

[Haunted]

oops...I"m not supposed to do both lines, am I. My bad!

[Haunted]

stumbling all the time
we dance around what to say

[BienvenuJDC]

stumbling all the time
we dance around what to say
Insert foot in mouth

[mazHur]

terror everywhere

[Haunted]

terror everywhere
Angels and Demons playing

[ampoule]

terror everywhere
Angels and Demons playing
we watch them closely


the tree stands alone

[mazHur]

terror everywhere
Angels and Demons playing
the world is haunted!

[Haunted]

terror everywhere
Angels and Demons playing
the world is haunted!

hah ;)

[Janine]

Haunted presense felt

[BienvenuJDC]

Haunted presence felt
A flutter within my soul

[mazHur]

Haunted presence felt
a chill would run through my spine

[mazHur]

Haunted presence felt
A flutter within my soul
my eyes wide open!

[Janine]

my eyes wide open
stunning beauty before me

[BienvenuJDC]

my eyes wide open
stunning beauty before me
she is my true love

[Janine]

she is my true love
thus he spoke in ignorance

[mazHur]

she is my true love
thus he spoke in ignorance
but got her at last!

[Janine]

Was that a wise move?

[BienvenuJDC]

Was that a wise move?
...to take my bishop like that?

[mazHur]

Was that a wise move?
...to take my bishop like that?
.... to flick his gospel?

[BienvenuJDC]

Checkmate! ...and you lose...

[Janine]

Checkmate!...and you lose...
shall we now begin game two?

[mazHur]

Checkmate!...and you lose...
shall we now begin game two?
stale mate! ...play again!

[BienvenuJDC]

I lost everything!

[Janine]

I lost everything!
no you haven't, you're alive

[mazHur]

I lost everything!
no you haven't, you're alive
living without soul!

[tailor STATELY]

What then is life's test

[Janine]

What then is life's test
if no misfortune stops by

[BienvenuJDC]

What then is life's test
if no misfortune stops by
the fire tries us

[Silas Thorne]

Water drips all day

[Janine]

water drips all day
corrosion all around us

[BienvenuJDC]

water drips all day
corrosion all around us
rust and moths destroy

[Janine]

nice one...Bienvenu!

moths flutter in fog

[BienvenuJDC]

moths flutter in fog
dragonflies cruise through the creek

[Janine]

Tired of waiting; I will do line 3!

moths flutter in fog
dragonflies cruise through the creek
bird songs echo night

[Haunted]

shower at midnight

[Janine]

shower at midnight
droplets on green marble tiles

[firefangled]

shower at midnight
droplets on green marble tiles
dew on morning grass

[alakungfu]

sunbeams tease the churl

[mazHur]

sunbeams tease the churl
sun in the sky heat waves hurl

[BienvenuJDC]

sunbeams tease the churl
sun in the sky heat waves hurl
the light tans the girl...

[mazHur]

the girl starts screaming!

[BienvenuJDC]

the girl starts screaming
her bikini was taken

[kaymf]

the girl starts screaming
her bikini was taken
and she wants to swim

[Haunted]

peach soothing lotion

[mazHur]

peach soothing lotion
smear some on your delicate

[PoeticPassions]

peach soothing lotion
smear some on your delicate
rolling curves and hills

[BienvenuJDC]

The dark hero stands

[mazHur]

What about the dunes?

[mazHur]

The dark hero stands
barefoot on the sandy dunes

[tailor STATELY]

The dark hero stands
barefoot on the sandy dunes
keening for his dead

[mazHur]

What about the dunes?

[BienvenuJDC]

What about the dunes?
The waves of the dry desert

[mazHur]

What about the dunes?
The waves of the dry desert
contours of an Eve!

[BienvenuJDC]

Contours of an Eve
Temptations of an Adam

[mazHur]

Contours of an Eve
Temptations of an Adam
and fury of god!

[BienvenuJDC]

Metaphors and nouns

[mazHur]

Metaphors and nouns
prepositional idioms

[BienvenuJDC]

Metaphors and nouns
prepositional idioms
some tools for Haiku

[mazHur]

it's eerie 'round here