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DanielBenoit
09-11-2009, 12:26 AM
With or without you
All things bad seem to fade away

toni
09-11-2009, 12:28 AM
With or without you
All things bad seem to fade away
You're my only hope

DanielBenoit
09-11-2009, 12:34 AM
Saturation of mirrors

krymsonkyng
09-12-2009, 01:59 AM
Saturation of mirrors
clouded by steamy faces

Dark Muse
09-12-2009, 02:02 AM
Saturation of mirrors
clouded by steamy faces
watching with black eyes

DanielBenoit
09-12-2009, 02:15 AM
Forgotten dreams cling

Dark Muse
09-12-2009, 02:17 AM
Forgotten dreams cling
caught in cosmic spider webs

toni
09-12-2009, 02:17 AM
Forgotten dreams cling
caught in cosmic spider webs
complex theories

DanielBenoit
09-12-2009, 02:22 AM
No longer a dream

Dark Muse
09-16-2009, 02:19 PM
No longer a dream
when I wake in this nightmare

DanielBenoit
09-16-2009, 02:21 PM
No longer a dream
when I wake in this nightmare
my mind grows old

toni
09-17-2009, 01:14 PM
Look, your wooden bones

mazHur
09-17-2009, 04:01 PM
Look, your wooden bones
won't help you do the circus

toni
09-18-2009, 02:47 AM
Look, your wooden bones
won't help you do the circus
or march the parade

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 02:53 AM
Look, my hollow soul

toni
09-18-2009, 02:58 AM
Look, my hollow soul
ashen, and dehydrated

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 02:59 AM
Look, my hollow soul
ashen, and dehydrated
you brought me water

toni
09-18-2009, 03:06 AM
They talk like puppets

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 03:18 AM
They talk like puppets
Socks, living breathing, bloodless

toni
09-18-2009, 03:22 AM
They talk like puppets
Socks, living breathing, bloodless
Bound in silver strings

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 03:24 AM
So strange nightingale

toni
09-18-2009, 03:32 AM
So strange nightingale
treading the path to the light

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 03:34 AM
So strange nightingale
treading the path to light
sing your mysteries

toni
09-18-2009, 03:39 AM
Mirror all my thoughts

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 03:43 AM
Mirror all my thoughts
Thy dear invisible ghost

toni
09-18-2009, 03:47 AM
Mirror all my thoughts
Thy dear invisible ghost,
untangled madness

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 03:55 AM
What is that which dwells

toni
09-18-2009, 04:03 AM
What is that which dwells -
lost soul in turbulent seas

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:05 AM
What is that which dwells -
lost soul in turbulent seas
Alas, you are found!

toni
09-18-2009, 04:08 AM
Vultures- hovering

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:14 AM
Vultures - hovering
Over thine own rotten corpse

toni
09-18-2009, 04:25 AM
Vultures - hovering
Over thine own rotten corpse
they make prey-your feet

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:26 AM
'Do you think it is?'

toni
09-18-2009, 04:30 AM
'Do you think it is?'
a ghost veiled in the shadows

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:31 AM
'Do you think it is?'
a ghost veiled in the shadows
of my prison house*

*from Hamlet

toni
09-18-2009, 04:39 AM
Better things await

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:47 AM
Better things await
In the forrest, where all is

toni
09-18-2009, 04:49 AM
Better things await
In the forrest, where all is
dim and forgotten

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:50 AM
Memories of you

toni
09-18-2009, 04:56 AM
Memories of you
ancient haunts of distant past

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 04:58 AM
Memories of you
ancient haunts of distant past
brings back the silence

toni
09-18-2009, 05:12 AM
20th Century Dream

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 05:15 AM
20th century dream
Dead, in the bars of Fitzgerald

(I know, I broke the law :lol:)

toni
09-18-2009, 05:17 AM
:cold:

20th century dream
Dead, in the bars of Fitzgerald
On gutters - a corpse

mazHur
09-18-2009, 11:04 AM
Just leave me alone

toni
09-18-2009, 10:32 PM
Just leave me alone
slowly awaiting the End

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 10:35 PM
Just leave me alone
slowly awaiting the End
the whole empty world

toni
09-18-2009, 10:40 PM
Fractured skulls and veins

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 10:46 PM
Fractured skulls and veins
Draining out my blood and breathe

toni
09-18-2009, 10:57 PM
Fractured skulls and veins
Draining out my blood and breathe
x-rays and blood tests

Dark Muse
09-18-2009, 11:00 PM
She stole the moonlight

DanielBenoit
09-18-2009, 11:03 PM
She stole moonlight
From my soul, and took it

mazHur
09-19-2009, 12:10 AM
She stole moonlight
From my soul, and took it
to the stars beyond

toni
09-19-2009, 12:12 AM
Painting perfection

mazHur
09-19-2009, 12:18 AM
Painting perfection
should I praise the brush or hand

toni
09-19-2009, 12:24 AM
Painting perfection
should I praise the brush or hand
or mind- which creates

AdoreroDio
09-19-2009, 12:28 AM
A slipped mistake

mazHur
09-19-2009, 12:28 AM
Mona Lisa smile/this is cancelled

mazHur
09-19-2009, 12:41 AM
A slipped mistake
Mona Lisa smile reflects

toni
09-20-2009, 11:35 AM
A slipped mistake
Mona Lisa smile reflects
Broken promises

mazHur
09-20-2009, 12:22 PM
Bubbles talk to me

toni
09-20-2009, 12:36 PM
Bubbles talk to me
in teapots, we rose - as steam

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 01:37 PM
Bubbles talk to me
in teapots, we rose - as steam
Rolls over and out

toni
09-20-2009, 01:42 PM
Mocking the sunset

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 01:44 PM
Mocking the sunset
Stiff, petrified upon the shore

toni
09-20-2009, 02:03 PM
Mocking the sunset
Stiff, petrified upon the shore
a death, washed by waves

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:04 PM
I tossed the ashes

toni
09-20-2009, 02:06 PM
I tossed the ashes
with a bat of an eyelash

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:07 PM
I tossed the ashes
with a bat of an eyelash
the wind blew them back

toni
09-20-2009, 02:13 PM
Lit, Parisian streets

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:16 PM
Lit, Parisian streets
Gives me goosebumps in winter

toni
09-20-2009, 02:21 PM
Lit, Parisian streets
Gives me goosebumps in winter
snowflakes on mine cheeks

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:23 PM
droplets of water

toni
09-20-2009, 02:25 PM
Droplets on water
form an image on the floor

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:29 PM
Droplets on water
form an image on the floor
I look into it

mazHur
09-20-2009, 02:32 PM
drops drop drop by drop

toni
09-20-2009, 02:33 PM
drops drop drop by drop
fall on velvet umbrella

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:37 PM
drops drop drop by drop
fall on velvet umbrella
velvet leaks in drops

toni
09-20-2009, 02:38 PM
Up the brick rooftops

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:44 PM
Up the brick rooftops
Might I fall to dusty death?

toni
09-20-2009, 02:47 PM
Up the brick rooftops
Might I fall to dusty death?
Or stain the ground red?

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 02:55 PM
Newspapers forgot

toni
09-20-2009, 02:58 PM
Newspapers forgot
To state my obituary

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 03:00 PM
Newspapers forgot
To state my obituary,
How pointless it was!

toni
09-20-2009, 03:02 PM
The charred piano keys

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 03:03 PM
The charred piano keys
Eat away at my fingers

toni
09-20-2009, 03:08 PM
The charred piano keys
Eat away at my fingers
For your lullaby

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 11:04 PM
Silently, it blows

toni
09-20-2009, 11:10 PM
Silently, it blows
the paper-thin feminist

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 11:12 PM
Silently, it blows
the paper-thin feminist
down the draining pipes

toni
09-20-2009, 11:24 PM
Among grassy plains

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 11:28 PM
Among grassy planes
I am, and yet I am not

Dark Muse
09-20-2009, 11:33 PM
Among grassy planes
I am, and yet I am not
held in natures arms

toni
09-20-2009, 11:34 PM
Skulls in prison cells

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 11:37 PM
Skulls in prison cells
A neat arrangement, spilled wine

toni
09-20-2009, 11:44 PM
Skulls in prison cells
A neat arrangement, spilled wine;
Fortress of suicide

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 11:47 PM
Doth the voice not speak?

toni
09-20-2009, 11:52 PM
Doth the voice not speak?
of phrases both sad and sweet?

DanielBenoit
09-20-2009, 11:54 PM
Doth the voice not speak?
of phrases both sad and sweet?
makes a perfect song

Dark Muse
09-20-2009, 11:58 PM
Dancing desert winds

toni
09-21-2009, 12:00 AM
Dancing desert winds
Silk sheets on my marble skin

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 12:02 AM
Dancing desert winds
Silk sheets on my marble skin
A surreal landscape

toni
09-21-2009, 12:05 AM
Monoprints of past

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 12:20 PM
Monoprints of past
They paint a blurry picture

toni
09-21-2009, 01:46 PM
Monoprints of past
They paint a blurry picture
Untold history

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 01:49 PM
Unwritten pages

toni
09-21-2009, 01:53 PM
Unwritten pages
Images wait to be penned

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 01:55 PM
Unwritten pages
Images wait to be penned
Sweeping syllables

toni
09-21-2009, 02:03 PM
From behind the walls

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 02:05 PM
From behind the walls
Wheels the eye of omniscience

toni
09-21-2009, 02:14 PM
From behind the walls
Wheels the eye of omniscience
mirroring movements

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 02:25 PM
the gun to ceiling

toni
09-21-2009, 02:33 PM
the gun to ceiling
heartbeats burn holes on the wall

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 02:35 PM
the gun to ceiling
heartbeats burn holes on the wall
isomorphic sides

toni
09-21-2009, 02:40 PM
Silk, graceful movements

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 02:42 PM
Silk, graceful movements
Like light, trickling upon glass

toni
09-21-2009, 02:49 PM
Silk, graceful movements
Like light, trickling upon glass,
soft strokes of whispers

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 02:51 PM
Pretty prison cell

toni
09-21-2009, 02:55 PM
Pretty prison cells
roguery, guilt, adorn walls

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 03:00 PM
Pretty prison cells
roguery, guilt, adorn walls
happy, bloody, numb

toni
09-21-2009, 03:07 PM
:p

specks of dusk on skin

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 03:09 PM
specks of dusk on skin
weeping sweat from sun's beauty

toni
09-21-2009, 03:11 PM
specks of dusk on skin
weeping sweat from sun's beauty
basking midnight musks

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 03:13 PM
^:thumbs_up

The aums of midnight

toni
09-21-2009, 03:47 PM
:3

The aums of midnight
Creeps, in the dreary silence

DanielBenoit
09-21-2009, 03:48 PM
The aums of midnight
Creeps, in the dreary silence
Of the sunless skies

toni
09-21-2009, 03:52 PM
The pale, arched statue

Dark Muse
09-21-2009, 08:36 PM
The pale, arched statue
weeped among the ivy vines

DanielBenoit
09-22-2009, 01:25 AM
The pale, arched statue
weeped among the ivy vines
thought upon its state

toni
09-22-2009, 02:18 AM
Expression of dance

DanielBenoit
09-22-2009, 02:25 AM
Expression of dance
Lightfooted, dancing joy and

toni
09-22-2009, 02:34 AM
Expression of dance
Lightfooted, dancing joy and
lighting candlesticks

DanielBenoit
09-22-2009, 02:39 AM
Flying into stars

toni
09-22-2009, 02:44 AM
Flying into stars
trapped within surreal dreamscapes

DanielBenoit
09-22-2009, 02:45 AM
Flying into stars
trapped within surreal dreamscapes
never to leave again

toni
09-22-2009, 03:01 AM
Bleak thoughts on blank page

DanielBenoit
09-22-2009, 03:02 AM
Bleak thoughts on blank page
My pen, dies of apathy

toni
09-22-2009, 03:06 AM
Bleak thoughts on blank page
My pen, dies of apathy
laid on tomb of thorns

DanielBenoit
09-22-2009, 03:10 AM
A hair falls, calling

balehead
09-25-2009, 01:09 AM
A hair falls, calling
Up thoughts of lost summers spent

Haunted
09-25-2009, 01:24 AM
A hair falls, calling
Up thoughts of lost summers spent
on your soft shoulders

toni
09-25-2009, 02:23 AM
A door to madness

Dark Muse
09-25-2009, 02:26 AM
A door to madness
opens deep within my soul

DanielBenoit
09-25-2009, 02:37 AM
A door to madness
opens deep within my soul
and shuts thyself out

dara.cv
09-25-2009, 05:20 PM
beyond her limits

toni
09-25-2009, 05:22 PM
Beyond her limits
She treads the streets of unknown

DanielBenoit
09-25-2009, 05:25 PM
Beyond her limits
She treads the streets of unknown
Where shadows collide

toni
09-25-2009, 05:30 PM
A rose on the porch

Dark Muse
09-25-2009, 06:53 PM
A rose on the porch
forgotten among the dust

AdoreroDio
09-25-2009, 07:36 PM
A rose on the porch
forgotten among the dust
trumpled underneath

Dark Muse
09-25-2009, 07:42 PM
Distant souls collide

balehead
09-26-2009, 02:01 AM
Distant souls collide
And, reviled by the world, end

Il Penseroso
09-26-2009, 09:36 PM
Distant souls collide,
and reviled by the world, end
in suction to sky

balehead
09-28-2009, 02:15 AM
Fallen angels, so

toni
09-28-2009, 07:18 AM
Fallen angels, so
in swift strides, they fall, collapse

DanielBenoit
10-02-2009, 03:38 PM
Fallen angels, so
in swift strides, they fall, collapse
awakened and fade

Dark Muse
10-18-2009, 01:50 PM
Among the black hills

ampoule
10-25-2009, 07:49 PM
Among the black hills
shadows offering the past

Haunted
10-26-2009, 11:17 PM
Among the black hills
shadows offering the past
a place to ferment

Buh4Bee
12-03-2009, 10:09 PM
A place to ferment
an undrinkable Blue Moon

Silas Thorne
12-03-2009, 10:10 PM
A place to ferment
an undrinkable Blue Moon.
My shadow hunts me!

symphony
12-03-2009, 11:50 PM
We sell tomorrows

hack
12-04-2009, 12:44 AM
we sell tomorrows
yesterdays are two for one

tailor STATELY
12-04-2009, 12:51 AM
we sell tomorrows
yesterdays are two for one
except Black Fridays

hack
12-04-2009, 11:17 PM
elderberry whine

hack
12-07-2009, 01:20 AM
elderberry whine
choking sobs of zinfandel

hack
12-08-2009, 12:41 PM
elderberry whine
choking sobs of zinfandel
don't cry in your beer

hack
12-08-2009, 10:03 PM
a course Burmese blend

Dark Muse
12-08-2009, 10:09 PM
a course Burmese blend
on a sultry afternoon

hack
12-10-2009, 11:04 PM
a course Burmese blend
on a sultry afternoon
silk and cotton wed

Buh4Bee
12-13-2009, 08:28 AM
I remember a time

hack
12-14-2009, 11:39 PM
I remember a time
when you burned the beans and cried

Haunted
12-15-2009, 12:34 AM
I remember a time
when you burned the beans and cried
the pork is ruined!

Silas Thorne
12-15-2009, 01:46 AM
Good morning sunshine

Dark Muse
12-15-2009, 01:52 AM
Good morning sunshine
please stop shining in my eye

Silas Thorne
12-15-2009, 01:54 AM
Good morning sunshine
please stop shining in my eye
piss off behind clouds!

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 08:45 PM
The morning sun peeked...

Haunted
12-18-2009, 08:58 PM
The morning sun peeked...
curtains billow to reveal

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 09:21 PM
The morning sun peeked...
curtains billow to reveal


(We need a 3rd person for three people haiku.)

Haunted
12-18-2009, 09:44 PM
You can be the third person like Silas did. I won't report you.

BienvenuJDC
12-18-2009, 10:39 PM
The morning sun peeked...
curtains billow to reveal
a small waking child

hack
12-19-2009, 08:27 AM
but hope clings to me

BienvenuJDC
12-19-2009, 12:45 PM
But hope clings to me
Good fortune drifts around me

Haunted
12-20-2009, 11:11 AM
But hope clings to me
Good fortune drifts around me
snow gives way to sun

BienvenuJDC
12-20-2009, 11:35 AM
The colossal giant

Haunted
12-20-2009, 12:00 PM
The colossal giant
a big heart carved out of stone

hack
12-30-2009, 10:15 PM
The colossal giant
a big heart carved out of stone
blood stone in his veins

kiz_paws
12-31-2009, 04:47 AM
Melting memory

hack
12-31-2009, 09:08 AM
melting memory
true love reduced to blank stare

toni
12-31-2009, 10:20 AM
melting memory
true love reduced to blank stare-
whisper, lost in winds

hack
01-01-2010, 12:36 AM
below crystal peaks

ashley_bergman
01-01-2010, 01:39 AM
Below crystal peaks
A beauty holds your gaze

BienvenuJDC
01-01-2010, 03:01 AM
Below crystal peaks
A beauty holds your gaze
With eyes of a hawk

toni
01-02-2010, 11:02 AM
Fleeting memories

hack
01-03-2010, 11:07 PM
fleeting memories
dreams and things that never were

Haunted
01-05-2010, 02:35 AM
fleeting memories
dreams and things that never were
soon without a trace

toni
01-06-2010, 11:21 AM
Looking through the glass

BienvenuJDC
01-06-2010, 12:23 PM
Looking through the glass
Seeing from new perspectives

hack
01-06-2010, 11:17 PM
looking through the glass
seeing from new perspectives
kaleidoscopic

Haunted
01-06-2010, 11:25 PM
a rainbow of grays

Dark Muse
01-06-2010, 11:27 PM
A rainbow of grays
reflect the ash of your soul

hack
01-07-2010, 01:12 AM
a rainbow of grays
reflect the ash of your soul
kaleidoscopic

toni
01-07-2010, 11:20 AM
Watercolour strokes

hack
01-08-2010, 11:19 PM
watercolor strokes
twisted into an orange sun

Haunted
01-11-2010, 12:16 PM
watercolor strokes
twisted into an orange sun
dark night dripped away

Dark Muse
01-11-2010, 02:09 PM
The violin plays

tailor STATELY
01-16-2010, 06:57 AM
The violin plays
Its vibratro trill sends chills

toni
01-16-2010, 11:45 AM
The violin plays
Its vibratro trill sends chills
from past centuries

DanielBenoit
01-16-2010, 12:09 PM
Time enthuse and use

toni
01-17-2010, 12:23 PM
Time enthuse and use
claustrophobic ideas

DanielBenoit
01-17-2010, 11:45 PM
Time enthuse and use
claustrophobic ideas
Away and away

Heathcliff
01-18-2010, 12:53 AM
The sun and the moon.

Dark Muse
01-18-2010, 12:56 AM
The sun and the moon
two unrequited lovers

ampoule
01-18-2010, 08:48 AM
The sun and the moon
two unrequited lovers

they fight for sky-time

toni
01-19-2010, 11:00 AM
No room for the songs

hack
01-19-2010, 08:51 PM
no room for the songs
neither dirge nor elegy

Heathcliff
01-22-2010, 04:53 AM
No room for the songs,
Neither dirge or elegy.
Singing through a speech.

ampoule
01-22-2010, 10:00 AM
Stop! Clear your settings

MarkBastable
01-22-2010, 12:21 PM
Stop! Clear your settings!
Dump the cache! Abort the job!

toni
01-22-2010, 12:57 PM
Stop! Clear your settings!
Dump the cache! Abort the job!
Take a break! Live free.

Heathcliff
01-22-2010, 11:06 PM
Past the title page,

Haunted
01-22-2010, 11:13 PM
past the title page
comes a new chapter of life

Heathcliff
01-22-2010, 11:18 PM
Past the title page,
Comes a new chapter of life.
Epic, life-long dream.

hack
01-27-2010, 10:26 PM
each drip beats the drum

Haunted
01-27-2010, 11:22 PM
each drip beats the drum
my bleeding heart marches on

BienvenuJDC
01-27-2010, 11:39 PM
each drip beats the drum
my bleeding heart marches on
the rhythm kills me

kiz_paws
01-29-2010, 09:41 PM
In dangerous times

BienvenuJDC
01-30-2010, 12:06 AM
In dangerous times
a brave haunted beauty lived

Haunted
01-30-2010, 12:32 AM
In dangerous times
a brave haunted beauty lived
her hero at war

BienvenuJDC
01-30-2010, 12:37 AM
Her dear valiant peach

Haunted
01-30-2010, 12:59 AM
Her dear valiant peach
served up to please His Highness

BienvenuJDC
01-30-2010, 01:02 AM
Her dear valiant peach
served up to please His Highness
the lowly pitted

Haunted
01-30-2010, 01:04 AM
midnight confessions

BienvenuJDC
01-30-2010, 01:07 AM
Midnight confessions
reveal inner desires

Haunted
01-30-2010, 01:21 AM
Midnight confessions
reveal inner desires
praying for a dream

BienvenuJDC
01-30-2010, 01:35 AM
A dream before you

BienvenuJDC
01-31-2010, 01:06 AM
A dream before you

the wonders of dusk...

Haunted
01-31-2010, 01:42 AM
A dream before you
of day rendezvous with night
the wonders of dusk...

tailor STATELY
01-31-2010, 03:52 AM
Sapphire eyes flash bright

Heathcliff
01-31-2010, 03:53 AM
Laminated watch,

kiz_paws
01-31-2010, 08:13 PM
Sapphire eyes flash bright
frozen halo in the dusk
laminated watch

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 01:04 AM
The beast from within

Haunted
02-01-2010, 01:38 AM
The beast from within
longs for a thing called Beauty

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 01:41 AM
The beast from within
longs for a thing called Beauty
Hidden in shadows

Haunted
02-01-2010, 01:45 AM
Lightning has struck twice

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 01:50 AM
Lightning has struck twice
illuminating the way

Haunted
02-01-2010, 03:22 AM
Lightning has struck twice
illuminating the way
to the hall of fate

toni
02-01-2010, 01:27 PM
A pocketwatch ticks

DanielBenoit
02-01-2010, 01:31 PM
A pocketwatch ticks
Ticking, in my coat-pocket

BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 02:33 PM
A pocket watch ticks
Ticking, in my coat-pocket
ready to tell time