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tailor STATELY
02-01-2010, 06:42 PM
Butterfly kisses
BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 06:56 PM
Butterfly kisses
Grasshopper tap dancing moves
Haunted
02-01-2010, 07:45 PM
butterfly kisses
grasshopper tap dancing moves
coyly courting spring
BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 08:15 PM
People bustling...
Haunted
02-01-2010, 09:32 PM
People bustling...
above, voiceless statues stare
BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 11:39 PM
People bustling...
above, voiceless statues stare
yet none even care
BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 11:47 PM
Drained of emotion
Haunted
02-01-2010, 11:53 PM
drained of emotion
dangling on an old frayed rope
BienvenuJDC
02-01-2010, 11:59 PM
drained of emotion
dangling on an old frayed rope
waiting for buzzards
Haunted
02-07-2010, 11:26 AM
spine-chilling whispers
leaving my whole body drained
BienvenuJDC
02-07-2010, 01:57 PM
spine-chilling whispers
leaving my whole body drained
shaking my own bones
Haunted
02-07-2010, 02:21 PM
short quick tiptoeing
BienvenuJDC
02-07-2010, 03:38 PM
short quick tiptoeing
trying to hide in the dark
Haunted
02-07-2010, 03:53 PM
short quick tiptoeing
trying to hide in the dark
but the seeker knows....
Dark Muse
02-07-2010, 05:02 PM
Dead starlight guides me
littlewing53
02-07-2010, 05:18 PM
dead starlight guides me
invisible bright pathway
Haunted
02-07-2010, 05:35 PM
dead starlight guides me
invisible bright pathway
for the departed
BienvenuJDC
02-08-2010, 01:02 AM
Lurking through the dark
tailor STATELY
02-17-2010, 08:04 AM
Lurking through the dark
lost in a fell labyrinth
kiz_paws
02-17-2010, 12:25 PM
Lurking through the dark
lost in a fell labyrinth
embracing silence
DanielBenoit
02-17-2010, 12:57 PM
watching wild sunsets
it is like no other thing
watching wild sunsets
it is like no other thing
a beauty, no-less.
:confused:
DanielBenoit
02-17-2010, 01:14 PM
I, confused gesture
I, confused gesture
hand on chin, wrinkled forehead
DanielBenoit
02-17-2010, 01:24 PM
I, confused gesture
hand on chin, wrinkled forehead
Am I getting old?
DanielBenoit
02-17-2010, 01:31 PM
Wandering milkmaid
Searching for her Quixote
Wandering milkmaid
Searching for her Quixote
But it was cactus
BienvenuJDC
02-17-2010, 01:44 PM
Searching for refuge
tailor STATELY
02-18-2010, 04:10 AM
Searching for refuge
a storm of mine own making
Heathcliff
02-18-2010, 06:58 AM
Searching for refuge
a storm of mine own making
A cloud of suspense
Heathcliff
02-19-2010, 05:00 AM
Beyond the lamplight,
Trudging over the traintops.
tailor STATELY
02-21-2010, 03:25 AM
Beyond the lamplight,
Trudging over the traintops.
A child lost in play
BienvenuJDC
02-25-2010, 01:46 PM
We go, mimic birds
they come, acting with freedom
We go, mimic birds
they come, acting with freedom,
whispering last songs
BienvenuJDC
02-25-2010, 02:04 PM
The mist drifted out
The mist drifted out
glory of springtime revealed
Dark Muse
02-25-2010, 02:26 PM
The mist drifted out
glory of springtime revealed
in her golden crown
BienvenuJDC
02-25-2010, 02:38 PM
Sixteen, tiny steps
Eight pairs of feet but one mind
Sixteen, tiny steps
Eight pairs of feet but one mind,
paint one, abstract thought
BienvenuJDC
02-25-2010, 02:45 PM
Precious baby born
Precious baby born
a heart to love, mind to mold
BienvenuJDC
02-25-2010, 05:59 PM
Precious baby born
a heart to love, mind to mold
complete innocence
BienvenuJDC
02-26-2010, 02:56 AM
Just before sunrise
I will finally get sleep
Just before sunrise
I will finally get sleep
to escape mad world
BienvenuJDC
03-04-2010, 07:46 PM
Memory fondue
Haunted
03-04-2010, 07:59 PM
memory fondue
of warm images of us
BienvenuJDC
03-04-2010, 08:08 PM
memory fondue
of warm images of us
simmering down smooth
Haunted
03-05-2010, 10:26 AM
morning in mourning
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 11:13 AM
Morning in mourning
looking back, looking ahead
Haunted
03-05-2010, 11:16 AM
morning in mourning
looking back, looking ahead
but no returning
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 11:31 AM
Memories visit
Haunted
03-05-2010, 12:16 PM
memories visit
a brisk breeze down Lovers Lane
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 12:20 PM
memories visit
a brisk breeze down Lovers Lane
heartbreak settles in
Haunted
03-05-2010, 12:31 PM
what's that in the sky?
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 01:14 PM
what's that in the sky?
is it a bird, or a plane?
Haunted
03-05-2010, 01:30 PM
what's that in the sky?
is it a bird, or a plane?
a spirit in flight...
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 01:34 PM
About Superman?
Haunted
03-05-2010, 01:45 PM
about Superman?
my hero you're questioning?
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 05:22 PM
about Superman?
my hero you're questioning?
can he really be?
Haunted
03-05-2010, 05:27 PM
the day is breaking
littlewing53
03-05-2010, 05:55 PM
the day is breaking
dawn lights midnight sleeping skies
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 06:13 PM
the day is breaking
dawn lights midnight sleeping skies
sun rises skyward
Heathcliff
03-05-2010, 07:17 PM
Colours flashing bright
Haunted
03-05-2010, 07:37 PM
Colours flashing bright
hallucinations abound
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 07:49 PM
Colors flashing bright
hallucinations abound
Pink elephants dance
Haunted
03-05-2010, 08:00 PM
on a safari
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 08:09 PM
on a safari
through the plains of Africa
Haunted
03-05-2010, 08:15 PM
on a safari
through the plains of Africa
the wild is calling
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 08:18 PM
livid liquid runs
Haunted
03-05-2010, 08:49 PM
livid liquid runs
oh how bloody delicious!
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 10:04 PM
livid liquid runs
oh how bloody delicious!
staining tongue and teeth
Haunted
03-05-2010, 10:10 PM
there's a time and place
BienvenuJDC
03-05-2010, 10:13 PM
there's a time and place
for everything...a season
Haunted
03-06-2010, 12:14 AM
there's a time and place
for everything...a season
to forget it all
BienvenuJDC
03-06-2010, 12:20 AM
Living and the dead
Dark Muse
03-11-2010, 12:57 AM
Living and the dead
laugh together on the grave
Haunted
03-11-2010, 01:09 AM
living and the dead
laugh together on the grave
there's no tomorrow
BienvenuJDC
03-11-2010, 01:27 AM
Across breaking waves
Dark Muse
03-11-2010, 01:31 AM
Across breaking waves
echoes of the sirens song
Heathcliff
03-11-2010, 03:44 AM
Across breaking waves
echoes of the sirens song
Heartbeat of the dawn
BienvenuJDC
03-23-2010, 10:20 PM
The game is played well
Haunted
03-25-2010, 12:48 PM
the game is played well
winner wins all...except love...
BienvenuJDC
03-25-2010, 12:52 PM
the game is played well
winner wins all...except love...
what's love got to do ........?
Haunted
03-25-2010, 01:04 PM
isn't love a game?
BienvenuJDC
03-25-2010, 01:19 PM
isn't love a game?
where the rules forever change...
Haunted
03-25-2010, 01:25 PM
isn't love a game?
where the rules forever change
the prize elusive...
BienvenuJDC
03-25-2010, 01:29 PM
In the darkest void
Haunted
03-25-2010, 01:34 PM
In the darkest void
where I am in self exile
BienvenuJDC
03-25-2010, 01:41 PM
In the darkest void
where I am in self exile
there is no light here
Haunted
03-25-2010, 01:43 PM
the rocking woke me
BienvenuJDC
03-25-2010, 01:57 PM
the rocking woke me
the small boat tossed to and fro
Haunted
03-25-2010, 02:04 PM
the rocking woke me
the small boat tossed to and fro
sea ready to swallow...
Heathcliff
03-25-2010, 09:14 PM
Sea ready to swallow,
One hundred sleeping children.
Soldiers let them sleep.
BienvenuJDC
03-25-2010, 09:20 PM
Heathcliff....this is THREE person haiku...not shared haiku...LOL
Gibbs walked in with style
Heathcliff
03-25-2010, 09:22 PM
Gibbs walked in with style
Treading lightly on the grass
Sorry... I forgot...
Haunted
03-25-2010, 11:32 PM
Gibbs walked in with style
Treading lightly on the grass
Navy's own top gun
BienvenuJDC
03-26-2010, 12:02 AM
Tony shot a look
Haunted
03-26-2010, 12:09 AM
Tony shot a look
Ziva deflects with a smirk
BienvenuJDC
03-26-2010, 12:14 AM
Tony shot a look
Ziva deflects with a smirk
Gibbs smacks both their heads
MarkBastable
03-28-2010, 12:22 PM
It was a full-moon -
Not that that mattered to those
Haunted
03-28-2010, 12:32 PM
it was a full-moon
not that that mattered to those
with silver bullets
BienvenuJDC
04-03-2010, 12:43 AM
The night was yet young...
Haunted
04-03-2010, 12:50 AM
the night was yet young...
anything could still happen
BienvenuJDC
04-03-2010, 01:05 AM
the night was yet young...
anything could still happen
adventure at brink
Haunted
04-03-2010, 01:09 AM
centuries old lighthouse
BienvenuJDC
04-03-2010, 01:18 AM
centuries old lighthouse
hidden soul walking about
ampoule
04-04-2010, 08:46 PM
centuries old lighthouse
hidden soul walking about
frozen in the torch
kiz_paws
04-06-2010, 12:04 PM
Blue sky meets with sea
mazHur
04-06-2010, 12:08 PM
Blue sky meets with sea
like lovers two hug and kiss
kiz_paws
04-06-2010, 12:13 PM
Blue sky meets with sea
like lovers two hug and kiss
tantalizing dreams
HI Maz!! Long time no talk! :seeya:
mazHur
04-06-2010, 12:21 PM
Blue sky meets with sea
like lovers two hug and kiss
tantalizing dreams
HI Maz!! Long time no talk! :seeya:
Hi kiz...howdy?
:)
Yes, had been away for a while...
tc and keep in touch!
bless!:)
BienvenuJDC
04-06-2010, 01:08 PM
Ancient mariner
Haunted
04-06-2010, 01:15 PM
ancient mariner
alone braving the rough seas
BienvenuJDC
04-06-2010, 02:21 PM
ancient mariner
alone braving the rough seas
with his only love
aliengirl
04-06-2010, 02:30 PM
Shadowy shades
BienvenuJDC
04-06-2010, 02:35 PM
Shadowy shades
Looming over the body
aliengirl
04-06-2010, 03:35 PM
Shadowy shades
Looming over the body
Engulfing desire
kiz_paws
04-06-2010, 07:51 PM
I am not myself
Haunted
04-06-2010, 07:56 PM
I am not myself
my words are lost to the wind
kiz_paws
04-06-2010, 07:58 PM
I am not myself
my words are lost to the wind
soul within a box
Haunted
04-06-2010, 07:59 PM
a torn photograph
BienvenuJDC
04-07-2010, 12:13 AM
a torn photograph
a bitter sweet memory
Haunted
04-07-2010, 12:26 AM
a torn photograph
a bitter sweet memory
broken in pieces
BienvenuJDC
04-07-2010, 12:29 AM
In sea and shadow
Haunted
04-07-2010, 12:34 AM
in sea and shadow
her maiden voyage is doomed
BienvenuJDC
04-07-2010, 12:45 AM
in sea and shadow
her maiden voyage is doomed
swept from the surface
_JadeRain_
04-30-2010, 09:47 PM
Once upon a time
BienvenuJDC
04-30-2010, 11:01 PM
Once Upon a Time
There were three little piggies
mazHur
05-01-2010, 02:56 AM
Once Upon a Time
There were three little piggies
sitting in a sty!
_JadeRain_
05-01-2010, 08:43 PM
Gazing in wonder
BienvenuJDC
05-01-2010, 09:13 PM
Gazing in wonder
Looking beyond the clear blue
Sebas. Melmoth
05-02-2010, 06:36 PM
Gazing in wonder
Looking beyond the clear blue
To see the New Jerusalem.
Sebas. Melmoth
05-02-2010, 07:14 PM
Of all things
BienvenuJDC
05-02-2010, 08:18 PM
(reminder of Haiku rules...
1st line - 5 syllables
2nd line - 7 syllables
3rd line - 5 syllables)
Of all things unknown
There are few endeavors sought
_JadeRain_
05-02-2010, 09:28 PM
Of all things unknown
There are few endeavors sought
Questions unanswered
Haunted
05-03-2010, 12:18 AM
seven eleven
BienvenuJDC
05-03-2010, 12:09 PM
Seven Eleven
Reminiscing the Slushy
Haunted
05-03-2010, 12:25 PM
Seven Eleven
reminiscing the Slushy
so good going down
BienvenuJDC
05-03-2010, 12:30 PM
Going down so good
Sebas. Melmoth
05-04-2010, 10:33 AM
Going down so good
The cold beer foams in the mind
tailor STATELY
05-05-2010, 12:01 AM
Going down so good
The cold beer foams in the mind
To slake my brain-freeze
Sebas. Melmoth
05-05-2010, 08:28 AM
Now is discontent
tailor STATELY
05-05-2010, 03:05 PM
Now is discontent
In the Autumn of our years
Lynne50
05-05-2010, 07:21 PM
Now is discontent
In the Autumn of our years
Too Little, too late.
Sebas. Melmoth
05-06-2010, 08:17 AM
A refreshing wind
DieterM
05-06-2010, 08:29 AM
A refreshing wind
Sweeping lilac scents in spring
Hawkman
05-08-2010, 11:05 AM
A refreshing wind
Sweeping lilac scents in spring
Heaven in a breath
Hawkman
05-08-2010, 11:06 AM
Silently, dogs bark
DieterM
05-08-2010, 11:19 AM
Silently, dogs bark
In the dawn of my winter
BienvenuJDC
05-08-2010, 11:38 AM
Silently, dogs bark
In the dawn of my winter
within my dark dreams
Hawkman
05-08-2010, 11:39 AM
The dead also weep
BienvenuJDC
05-08-2010, 12:19 PM
The dead also weep
with tears of blood streaming down
DieterM
05-09-2010, 04:37 AM
The dead also weep
with tears of blood streaming down
and autumn trees swish
Hawkman
05-09-2010, 06:24 AM
The willow tree sighs
Sebas. Melmoth
05-09-2010, 11:56 AM
The willow tree sighs
With heart-strings torn asunder
BienvenuJDC
05-09-2010, 02:50 PM
The willow tree sighs
With heart-strings torn asunder
bending down to weep
Sebas. Melmoth
05-09-2010, 03:02 PM
The willow tree sighs
With heart-strings torn asunder
Bending down to weep
Nice.
BienvenuJDC
05-09-2010, 03:13 PM
Molten rock seeping
Sebas. Melmoth
05-09-2010, 04:23 PM
Molten rock seeping
Steam rising in mute anger
Hawkman
05-09-2010, 04:27 PM
Molten rock seeping
Steam rising in mute anger
From earth's open wound
Hawkman
05-09-2010, 04:28 PM
Nice.
Definitely!
BienvenuJDC
05-09-2010, 04:32 PM
The sirens seduce
Hawkman
05-09-2010, 04:33 PM
The sirens seduce
Tempting lonely travellers
BienvenuJDC
05-09-2010, 04:35 PM
Falcon of the wind
Striking through the atmosphere
Hawkman
05-09-2010, 04:43 PM
Falcon of the wind
Striking through the atmosphere
Smites and binds her prey.
Sorry Bien, We seem to have two going simultaneously :)
BienvenuJDC
05-09-2010, 04:45 PM
The sirens seduce
Tempting lonely travellers
Destroying their lives
It's okay....we'll just move on...
Pollen floating up
Hawkman
05-09-2010, 04:48 PM
Pollen floating up
Plant's etherial spirits
Sebas. Melmoth
05-09-2010, 06:09 PM
Pollen floating up
Plant's etherial spirits--
Free souls; earthbound men in chains.
BienvenuJDC
05-09-2010, 06:13 PM
Hewn stone from the rock
Jesterhead
05-09-2010, 06:18 PM
only way out is through window of dreams
Sebas. Melmoth
05-09-2010, 06:32 PM
Hewn stone from the rock
Polished by the artist's hands
Dark Muse
05-09-2010, 11:58 PM
Hewn stone from the rock
Polished by the artist's hands
at heart carved for me.
Sebas. Melmoth
05-10-2010, 07:35 AM
An horizon wide
Hawkman
05-10-2010, 07:57 AM
An horizon wide
Across mindless folds of time
BienvenuJDC
05-11-2010, 01:12 AM
An horizon wide
Across mindless folds of time
Echoing sands fall
Sebas. Melmoth
05-13-2010, 08:21 AM
Pyramids decay
tailor STATELY
05-14-2010, 03:02 AM
Pyramids decay
O Sphinx, speak of man's great err
BienvenuJDC
05-14-2010, 03:14 AM
Pyramids decay
O Sphinx, speak of man's great err
A fall to repeat
Sebas. Melmoth
05-14-2010, 08:10 AM
Hark!--distant music
Haunted
05-14-2010, 05:40 PM
Hark!—distant music
carried over the waters
BienvenuJDC
05-14-2010, 06:01 PM
Hark!—distant music
carried over the waters
battle drums begin
Sebas. Melmoth
05-15-2010, 07:48 AM
Atmospheric scent
BienvenuJDC
05-15-2010, 11:13 PM
Atmospheric scent
drifting in the murky fog
Sebas. Melmoth
05-17-2010, 09:27 AM
Atmospheric scent
Drifting in the murky fog:
Eucalyptus drops.
BienvenuJDC
05-19-2010, 04:00 PM
Spanish bayonet
Placed on a German rifle
rabid reader
05-19-2010, 04:09 PM
Spanish bayonet
Placed on a German rifle
In a French Vally
Sebas. Melmoth
05-19-2010, 04:46 PM
Franco-Belgian odd
Franco-Belgian odd
not garden variety
Sebas. Melmoth
05-20-2010, 12:55 PM
Franco-Belgian odd:
Not garden variety
Dark earth; warm white femme.
kiz_paws
05-23-2010, 11:08 PM
Spontanuity
BienvenuJDC
05-23-2010, 11:43 PM
Spontaneity
without giving any thought
Hawkman
05-24-2010, 05:32 AM
Spontaneity
without giving any thought
lost in my design
aliengirl
05-28-2010, 02:05 PM
The spark of life's gone
BienvenuJDC
05-28-2010, 03:26 PM
The spark of life's gone
the glow is fading away
Sebas. Melmoth
05-29-2010, 08:07 AM
The spark of life's gone
the glow is fading away
dying embers cold.
aliengirl
05-29-2010, 01:58 PM
Cold breeze fans my cheeks
BienvenuJDC
05-29-2010, 02:01 PM
Cold breeze fans my cheeks
maybe I should have worn pants...
humpty dumpty
05-29-2010, 02:23 PM
Cold breeze fans my cheeks
maybe I should have worn pants...
And stayed in the sun.
aliengirl
05-30-2010, 02:03 PM
Rustling of the leaves
Sebas. Melmoth
05-30-2010, 02:32 PM
Rustling of the leaves:
woodland's crisp carpet crunchy
aliengirl
05-31-2010, 02:02 PM
Rustling of the leaves:
woodland's crisp carpet crunchy
in all shades of brown
snowdrop17
06-02-2010, 02:54 PM
Myriad layers of
aliengirl
06-02-2010, 03:23 PM
Myriad layers of
wondrous colored dreams
humpty dumpty
06-02-2010, 06:06 PM
Myriad layers of
wondrous colored dreams
floating in the air
snowdrop17
06-03-2010, 03:05 PM
I want you to come
Sebas. Melmoth
06-04-2010, 07:48 AM
I want you to come
over for tea. Will you please?
_JadeRain_
06-04-2010, 11:47 PM
I want you to come
over for tea. Will you please?
I have new china
Sebas. Melmoth
06-06-2010, 06:19 PM
Cut checks, balance book
moonbird
06-07-2010, 06:42 PM
Cut checks, balance book
sliced to pieces in my hand
Buh4Bee
06-15-2010, 09:40 PM
Cut checks, balance book
sliced to pieces in my hand
shredded paper trail
paw prints in clay soil
aliengirl
06-19-2010, 02:11 PM
paw prints in clay soil
shall we follow this fresh track
Sebas. Melmoth
06-20-2010, 10:46 AM
Paw prints in clay soil:
shall we follow this fresh track?
Or, seek peaceful rest?
_JadeRain_
06-22-2010, 01:00 PM
Or seek peaceful rest
Along calm and sandy shores
DieterM
06-24-2010, 09:02 AM
Jump in...add a line!
italicize, make it bold!
Words scream while you read...
DieterM
06-24-2010, 09:05 AM
(Oops got the wrong one just above)
Or seek peaceful rest
Along calm and sandy shores
Dreams strand like old boats…
dafydd manton
06-24-2010, 09:11 AM
Chrysanthemums ache.....
kiz_paws
06-24-2010, 04:28 PM
Chrysanthemums ache.....
teardrops from clouds too heavy
kiz_paws
06-25-2010, 04:28 PM
Chrysanthemums ache.....
teardrops from clouds too heavy
swallowed in the cracks
[I 'answered' this cuz I must be impatient or something -- forgive me!!
Someone start up another round, eh?] :)
PrinceMyshkin
06-25-2010, 05:58 PM
Swallowed in the cracks
I reach up for the early sun.
Clouds drift slowly by
aliengirl
06-26-2010, 04:08 PM
The crimson colored sky
kiz_paws
06-27-2010, 10:58 AM
Crimson colored sky
etched by the paths of eagles
Sebas. Melmoth
07-22-2010, 02:31 PM
Crimson colored sky
etched by the paths of eagles:
blood's reality.
Dark Muse
07-22-2010, 02:37 PM
Poison on your lips
tailor STATELY
07-23-2010, 12:57 AM
Poison on your lips
Atropos, be swift your shears
Sebas. Melmoth
07-25-2010, 03:46 PM
Poison on your lips:
Atropos, be swift your shears--
O wretched fate ours!
aliengirl
09-25-2010, 03:11 PM
When a friend betrays
mazHur
09-25-2010, 08:32 PM
When a friend betrays
one begins to hate himself
Sebas. Melmoth
09-25-2010, 09:13 PM
When a friend betrays
one begins to hate himself--
and justly so, wretch.
Buh4Bee
09-25-2010, 09:42 PM
Hidden heartache breathes
aliengirl
09-30-2010, 02:21 PM
Hidden heartache breathes
And sighs like the heaving night
mazHur
09-30-2010, 02:42 PM
Hidden heartache breathes
And sighs like the heaving night
no one hears the sound!
aliengirl
10-01-2010, 01:52 PM
The misty morning
mazHur
10-01-2010, 02:56 PM
The misty morning
shrouded in cold waves of cold
AdoreroDio
10-01-2010, 09:18 PM
The misty morning
shrouded in cold waves of cold
the forest awakes
aliengirl
10-13-2010, 01:46 PM
The blind alleys of town
tailor STATELY
04-15-2011, 10:40 AM
Blind alleys of town
A trap in the labyrinth
aliengirl
06-21-2011, 11:52 AM
Blind alleys of town
A trap in the labyrinth
Where I lost my self.
mazHur
06-21-2011, 04:25 PM
Why live like an ***??
tailor STATELY
06-24-2011, 05:18 AM
Why live like an ***??
A s d f. Asterisk!!
cacian
11-27-2011, 12:09 PM
Why live like an ***??
A s d f. Asterisk!!
do pick yourself up!
Dark Muse
11-28-2011, 12:05 AM
In your winter eyes
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