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tailor STATELY
06-12-2023, 01:41 AM
Hmmm.... a bit too much mystery to the envelope... Enjoyed !
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: tower, bard, allusion, vineyard, albatross, up
an old sycophant bard of grand allusion
an old sycophant bard of grand allusion wore
his illusory tropes on a long gusseted sleeve
was partial to the vineyard's wine wherefore
while partaking an albatross he did perceive
who sang him sea shanties up in his tower
the most intricate tales for the bard to weave
inscribed on costly parchment hour by hour
expounding to people most ignoble and naïve
this raucous audience with fresh veg did shower
him - thus his daily vegan repast did he receive
6/11/2023
Next: teardrop, waterfall, koi carp, cat, mystical, urn
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-12-2023, 07:04 AM
Curious character!
Challenge accepted!
Next: teardrop, waterfall, koi carp, cat, mystical, urn
Ornamental
A dusky room
Koi carps moving
in the aquarium.
A teardrop gliding
on the
urn like
a mystical
waterfall.
in the bottom
the two yellow eyes of a cat
shimmer in the dark.
Next challenge: roots, basket, allowance, midday, engaging, lentils.
tailor STATELY
06-12-2023, 07:11 PM
Quite imaginative... Enjoyed !
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-13-2023, 07:30 AM
Challenge: roots, basket, allowance, midday, engaging, lentils
An homage to Cat Pictures Please by Naomi Kritzer
Cat Poetry
In a woven basket my calico cat
dreams of engaging big game -
making no allowance whatsoever
for speed nor strength as I prepped
a modest midday meal of lentils
and beetroots in a simmering broth
Poetry is on the agenda today after
the news and a perusal of social
media while "Ziggy" plays the Airplane
on my smart speakers; "Ziggy" was
named "Computer" before it executed
a random command from the telly
In response to "Computer"'s faux pas
I had had to address our new overlords'
complaint of the destruction of half
of their fleet in orbit around Ganymede,
or somewhere - it wasn't my fault that
humanity's AI had a sense of humor
she will protect me -
guide me; inspires me to
post cat poetry
6/13/2023
Next: flaunt, drink, bric-à-brac, forage, rainbow, moonbeam
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-14-2023, 10:54 PM
Lol!I suppose "Ziggy" is a relative of the Alexas.
Challenge accepted.
Danik 2016
06-15-2023, 03:03 PM
Next: flaunt, drink, bric-à-brac, forage, rainbow, moonbeam
Sentimental bric-à-brac
There are always those little ornaments
One gets for present
or buys cheaply on trips,
one only separates from
if one can´t help.
There they rest in their usual corner,
somewhat covered by dust and memories.
Sentimental forage are those
minute foreign figures
those little bottles of drink.
They retain some of their
original rainbow color
under a silver moonbeam.
Next challenge: valet, cards, excruciating, blossom, railroad, summit.
tailor STATELY
06-16-2023, 02:59 AM
Enjoyed :) "There they rest in their usual corner, / somewhat covered by dust and memories." So true.
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-16-2023, 07:34 AM
Challenge: valet, cards, excruciating, blossom, railroad, summit
the valet
he was first and foremost a valet
in the most excruciating sense -
at the summit of his profession
most excellent in the everyday -
wore a white blossom in his lapel
ever the gentleman's gentleman
the valet kept his charge organized
- railroads known for their timely
precision could set their clocks by
his efficiency, had they the sense
grooming and dressing were the
least of his daily duties, kept his
gentleman debonair, for without
this discreet confidant the gentle-
man would live in a house of cards
6/16/2023
Next: færie ring, evanescent, marish, quixotic, Orion, dragonfly
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-16-2023, 10:05 AM
Loved this original and elegant poem!
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
06-17-2023, 02:34 PM
Next: færie ring, evanescent, marish, quixotic, Orion, dragonfly
The Dragonfly
Soaring high under the Orion
I pursue the evanescent night
with quixotic stubbornness.
I dance in the secret faerie rings,
I travel over rich sunflower fields
and marish planes.
I live on the nectar of flowers.
When I'm tired of roaming through
the universe, I just fold my wings
and get to sleep in a buttercup!
Next challenge: goldfish, rider, hangover, washing, solid, trail.
tailor STATELY
06-17-2023, 02:47 PM
Loved this !
Challenge accepted !
tailor STATELY
06-17-2023, 03:58 PM
Challenge: goldfish, rider, hangover, washing, solid, trail
a goldfish fantasy
hungover from a pufferfish's distress
a young dolphin had shaken off its
goldfish fantasy where a færie rider
had taken him through a trail of stars
down a washing waterfall of glittering
comets only to land upon solid ground
where it found its senses challenged -
beached ! and becoming sunbaked
from its stranding - the dolphin issued
its frustration in loud clicks and squeals
soon catching the attention of native
fisher folk children who gently turned
him into the healing, rushing surf foam
6/17/2023
Next: existential, bonsai, mandala, wind, carnival, dance
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-17-2023, 09:41 PM
Lololol!
A dolphin with a goldfish fantasy and getting sunbaked on the top of it!
Challengr accepted!
Danik 2016
06-18-2023, 03:31 PM
Next: existential, bonsai, mandala, wind, carnival, dance
The existential bonsai
There once was a
bonsai. He dreamed
of growing into
a very
big tree
the lar-
gest tree
in the world.
His dream didn´t last long. He was torn from the ground
by a very strong wind, a tornado in fact.Children executed
a wild carnival dance around the fallen tree.
But one kid celebrated him, by gluing a leaf in the middle of
a beautiful mandala. The mandala still graced her house when she was a woman.
Next challenge:bread, anniversary, candles, yellow, calling, entrancing.
tailor STATELY
06-19-2023, 01:20 AM
Enjoyed ! Very fanciful :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-19-2023, 09:11 PM
Challenge: bread, anniversary, candles, yellow, calling, entrancing
o' grave -
candles lit by loved ones who sorrow
and can never let go tis said o' grave -
each anniversary candles' yellow flames
entrancing, dancing calling their dead
as wraiths wheel shrieking, enjoining
the grief stricken to cast their bread for
mercy, mocking with maniacal disdain
6/19/2023 r. 6/20/2023
Next: raven, seashore, driftwood, Pleiades, gravitate, forlorn
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-20-2023, 09:40 AM
Sad poem. Didn´t quite understand the part of the mocking specters.
Next: raven, seashore, driftwood, Pliedes, gravitate, forlorn
The little raven
It was night.
Under the light of the Pliedes
a very small raven
was drifting forlornly
on a piece of wood
on the high sea.
Around him
his parents gravitated desperately
but couldn´t help.
Nobody knew
how he got there.
Suddenly there was a bridge of light
from the sky to the sea.
A beautiful woman descended
took the little bird
in her hands
and deposited it
carefully
on the seashore.
From above the Pliedes winked.
Next challenge:Winter, snow, leaves, spirits, eternal, song.
tailor STATELY
06-21-2023, 06:04 AM
Forgive me my misspelling, also an small edit: specters > wraiths / Pleiades was misspelled.
The specters (now wraiths) are just malcontents and like to sow their hatred upon the living, especially those who are already grieving.
Sweet poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Danik 2016
06-21-2023, 03:51 PM
Never mind, I thought it might be local spelling. I thought a wraith was a kind of flower garland one puts on the coffins of the dead.
tailor STATELY
06-22-2023, 02:44 AM
Challenge: Winter, snow, leaves, spirits, eternal, song
the longest day leaves
the longest day leaves
winter's snow's eternal song
forgotten spirits
6/21/2023 r. 6/22/2023
Next: friends, whispering, inclined, condor, parabolic, peripheral
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Danik 2016
06-22-2023, 08:12 AM
Enjoyed this haiku so much!
Next: friends, whispering, inclined, condor, parabolic, peripheral
Inspiration El Condor pasa:https://www.letras.mus.br/simon-e-garfunkel/36263/traducao.html (Simon and Garfunkel created very different lyrics for that song
The condor
The condor flies over the Inca empire
all day long
whispering a song
all day long
a song of freedom.
In his par'bolic and peripheral position
he sings this song
all day long
the song of freedom
And all the friends so inclined
they sing the song
all day long
the song of freedom.
Next challenge: immense, universe, aeons, silence, squirrel, rebounding.
tailor STATELY
06-22-2023, 02:30 PM
Very inspired... Enjoyed! :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-22-2023, 08:54 PM
Challenge: immense, universe, aeons, silence, squirrel, rebounding
a cosmic silence
a squirrel sees the
immensity of the universe
in a nut
ground and tree and limb -
bounding and rebounding -
gathering and storing
nuts seemingly provided by
aeons in a cosmic silence
6/22/2023
Next: pique, ghostly, ziggurat, placid, wasp, awe
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-23-2023, 01:23 PM
AAAAIIIII!
Next: pique, ghostly, ziggurat, placid, wasp, awe
The ziggurat
An usually placid wasp
dreamed about an awesome ziggurat
inhabited by millions of wasps.
It woke up
and there it was the ziggurat,
in front of her
with the wasps all swarming about it.
The wasp was piqued on finding
that all friends and family
had moved to the ziggurat.
No one had invited her.
But then the ghostly sructure disappeared
into thin air.
It had been a dream inside a dream.
Next challenge: quicksand, howering, dragging, belongings, hat, doorsteps.
tailor STATELY
06-23-2023, 05:22 PM
Enjoyed ! "a dream inside a dream" Very nice :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: quicksand, howering, dragging, belongings, hat, doorsteps
Xquic
the howering had begun; the
howers crept as the blood moon
rose and Xquic observes...
as side hustles went on the black
web this one was quite lucrative -
and paid in crypto currency laundered
so much it was virtually untraceable
dragging the inert form carefully
through the doorsteps outside
was the most arduous task -
a red wheelbarrow near a chicken
coop proved its worth beyond relief
dinner had been rather nice and the
poison quite effective and swift
incriminating belongings were
removed from the body: cell phone,
watch, sorority ring... no need for
temptation to pawn or otherwise
profit by them, they fit nicely in the
septic cleanout - a most fitting end
quicksand would have been her ideal
choice for concealment - a fanciful
thought of disposal where all that
remained was a cloche hat bemused our
protagonist - but was far too intractable
a stolen car, however, would do in a pinch,
towed, then eased into the steeply
sloped lake where it would remain
concealed for decades - providing
a mystery for future sleuths to ponder
... and thus the howering comes to an end;
the blood moon waxes and Xquic sleeps
6/23/2023
Next: tears, boulevard, sedan, moonlit, pebbles, breeze
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-24-2023, 11:38 AM
Lololol! Was nonplussed about what was happening here until I discovered that I had misspelled "hovering", and you taking up the challenge, used an archaic spelling for "hours". Brilliant! That said, your dinner mustn't have been that "nice" yesterday + intensive watching of dark series.
Challenge accepted!
Next: tears, boulevard, sedan, moonlit, pebbles, breeze
During the night
The autumn was shedding cold tears on the ground
as a black sedan appeared on the boulevard
its headlamps illuminating the pebbles on the way
which shone ghostly in the dark night.
What was the sedan doing anyway
in front of the haunted old mansion
at this late hour?
The answer surely rested with the two heavily cloaked figures,
who got out of the car and went into the house
opening the door with a rusty key.
After a while they came out
and drove away
silently as they had come.
Soon the rain ceased and
the landscape shone silvery
bathed in the waning moonshine.
A morning breeze began to blow so very softly,
one could almost see the young flowers opening their buds.
Next challenge: airily. fathomless, sunrise, nest, siblings, hourglass.
tailor STATELY
06-24-2023, 07:24 PM
Exorcising an old house... enjoyed :)
Dinner ?: 2-soft tacos, minestrone, and 2-chimichangas. Yes, a bit of googling for "howering" - it just seemed to fit :) The poem took on a life of its own after my thought of adding the blood moon to the howering and then a wiki of blood moon which led me to the fabled Xquic. The black web and crypto and cars in lakes come from recent news stories. Googled for a style of woman's hat gave me "cloche hat" where I had an epiphany for the "quicksand" stanza. Glad you enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-25-2023, 01:00 AM
Challenge: airily. fathomless, sunrise, nest, siblings, hourglass
siblings all
rest your fathomless minds upon the sunrise -
come thou airily - see the hourglass as forever
full - we siblings, all, sharing a common nest
6/24/2023
Next: ravenous, conscience, drifting, ship, defiant, foregone
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-25-2023, 10:14 AM
Concise and beautiful!
Challenge accepted
!Next: ravenous, conscience, drifting, ship, defiant, foregone
A ravenous conscience keeps drifting
like a ship in a storm,
defiant as to its foregone destiny.
Next challenge: milliards, creature, rainbow, thunder, inviting, seamless.
tailor STATELY
06-26-2023, 07:23 AM
Likewise ! Imagining a "ravenous conscience" :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: milliards, creature, rainbow, thunder, inviting, seamless
microscopic milliards
microscopic milliards
after the thunder -
rainbow creatures
in inviting pools
their diversity one
seamless whole -
a microcosm of
flagellate swizzles
and ciliate giggles
and other odd beasts
who swim and swirl
protesting amorphous
amoebic intrusions
6/26/2023
Next: rays, susurrus, falling, aspen, paraffin, butterfly
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-28-2023, 09:16 AM
Lovely!
"a microcosm of
flagellate swizzles (had to google swizzles)
and ciliate giggles
and other odd beasts
who swim and swirl
protesting amorphous
amoebic intrusions"!
Next: rays, susurrus, falling, aspen, paraffin, butterfly
The Saucy Butterfly
Extending her wings provokingly
in the direction of the sun
bathing in the golden rays
soaring high and higher over the sussurous
of the aspen trees.
No, her wings are no glued with paraffin,
like those of the unlucky Ikarus
once where.
No, the world is hers
not even the sky is the limit.
Next challenge: gold, murmur, bottomless, screening, eventide, camel.
tailor STATELY
06-28-2023, 08:46 PM
Beautiful poem... S1 really stands out :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: gold, murmur, bottomless, screening, eventide, camel
"The Bright and Morning Star" / Revelations
The murmur of a lone camel far away
carries over desert golden sands
leading to a far and distant Samarkand
as eventide's lazy overture proclaims
The bottomless depths of a revealed
universe soon bursts into view -
and comes a new screening of the
heavens by poets and seekers of truth
A bright star appears out of Jacob
heralding our dear Savior's holy birth
6/29/2023 r. Rev 22:16
Next: perfection, roller, starlight, stone, giraffe, bronze
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-29-2023, 07:54 AM
re: Thanks!
Loved this poem, specially the unusual part!
Challenge accepted!
Next: perfection, roller, starlight, stone, giraffe, bronze
Giraffe in starlight
A closed zoo
Ah but they forgot to lock the door,
Of this sleeping zoo.
On one of the enclosures
one perceives
the lonely profile of a giraffe
lit to perfection by the starlight.
In it´s stillnes.
might be a figure made out of bronze
or stone.
Out of nowhere
a ghostly roller appears
and disappears.
New challenge: vernacular, sweetness, raccoons, spring, gnomes, jumping
tailor STATELY
06-29-2023, 03:27 PM
Thanx :) I trimmed the poem of the last two lines since you last read.
Beautiful African tableau: "one perceives
the lonely profile of a giraffe
lit to perfection by the starlight.
In it´s stillnes.
might be a figure made out of bronze
or stone."
I liked that the roller put in but a brief appearance before flying away as if not to spoil the mood :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-30-2023, 04:48 AM
Challenge: vernacular, sweetness, raccoons, spring, gnomes, jumping
by the light of the moon
natty was one of a family of garden gnome
ofttimes left her manicured garden home
to visit with friendly har-rento umescos
in gnomic vernacular, or raccoons - those
masked old-agile souls; as agile in solving
puzzles as with clever-handedness in washing
food in nearby springs, that just amazed natty
jumping together in play natty and tattie
(her har-rento umesco best friend) would
annoy the færies who misunderstood
their nightly frivolity in the woods as they
searched for plump berries by the way
the divine sweetness they vastly coveted
when an alarm went out, loudly trumpeted
the færies hearing from fervid fireflies that
the two had wandered too far whereat
har-rento umescos and færies and gnomes
hurriedly assembled from out of their homes
to search fen, bog, and the odd hollowed log
when they were found at the home of a frog
playing at skittles by the light of the moon
6/30/2023 r. 7/1/2023 (spelling)
Next: mood, decline, voyage, sacrifice, whisper, Mars
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-30-2023, 09:59 AM
Thanx :) I trimmed the poem of the last two lines since you last read.
Beautiful African tableau: "one perceives
the lonely profile of a giraffe
lit to perfection by the starlight.
In it´s stillnes.
might be a figure made out of bronze
or stone."
I liked that the roller put in but a brief appearance before flying away as if not to spoil the mood :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
re: Thanks!
I don´t remember the two other lines but anyway the effect is good, because the emphasis is now all on the Nativity!
re 2: I had a problem with the meaning of "roller". I thought first it was a scooter, in German they are called Rollers and I intended to insert a child on a nightly visit to the giraffe on the roller. But when I checked on the word I found it as part of a
machine or, slang, a drug, possibly a rolled cigarette. I didn´t know what to do with this roller, so it had to appear and disappear in the poem
Danik 2016
06-30-2023, 10:04 AM
Challenge: vernacular, sweetness, raccoons, spring, gnomes, jumping
by the light of the moon
natty was one of a family of garden gnome
ofttimes left her manicured garden home
to visit with friendly har-rento unescos
in gnomic vernacular, or raccoons - those
masked old-agile souls; as agile in solving
puzzles as with clever-handedness in washing
food in nearby springs, that just amazed natty
jumping together in play natty and tattie
(her har-rento unesco best friend) would
annoy the færies who misunderstood
their nightly frivolity in the woods as they
searched for plump berries by the way
the divine sweetness they vastly coveted
when an alarm went out, loudly trumpeted
the færies hearing from fervid fireflies that
the two had wandered too far whereat
har-rento unescos and færies and gnomes
hurriedly assembled from out of their homes
to search fen, bog, and the odd hollowed log
when they were found at the home of a frog
playing at skittles by the light of the moon
6/30/2023
Next: mood, decline, voyage, sacrifice, whisper, Mars
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Very cute!
"har-rento unesco"?
Challenge accepted!
tailor STATELY
06-30-2023, 05:16 PM
Thanx :)
Roller: https://a-z-animals.com/blog/lilac-breasted-roller-national-bird-of-kenya/
Song (cute bird but not very melodic): https://www.google.com/search?q=african+roller+bird+song&newwindow=1&client=opera&sxsrf=APwXEdcCB5CV9zF9YPjOf83DDgE2zuf1BA%3A1688159 311753&ei=T0SfZJipLYG2qtsPyo2E-AY&ved=0ahUKEwjYjOfA8-v_AhUBm2oFHcoGAW8Q4dUDCA8&uact=5&oq=african+roller+bird+song&gs_lcp=Cgxnd3Mtd2l6LXNlcnAQAzIJCAAQBxAeELADMggIABC ABBCwAzILCAAQigUQhgMQsAMyCwgAEIoFEIYDELADMgsIABCKB RCGAxCwAzILCAAQigUQhgMQsANKBAhBGAFQ7RZY_y1g5zhoAHA AeACAAdAOiAGPIZIBBTctMi4xmAEAoAEBwAEByAEG&sclient=gws-wiz-serp#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:59481740,vid:jXTpaAVZcyo
re: "har-rento unesco"? - Had to find some kind of vernacular: taken from a Gnome Dictionary (old-agile soul)... https://www.runehq.com/item/translation-book
natty: well dressed / tattie: potato
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-01-2023, 09:33 AM
Now that was very helpful, tailor, thanks. I expected a lot of things called roller, but not this beautiful multicolored bird. Inserting a line to correct the poem. The Gnome Dictionary has also been very helpful!:)
Giraffe in starlight
A closed zoo
Ah but they forgot to lock the door,
Of this sleeping zoo.
On one of the enclosures
one perceives
the lonely profile of a giraffe
lit to perfection by the starlight.
In it´s stillness.
it might be a figure made out of bronze
or stone.
Under the first rays of the upcoming day,
a gentle roller appears
and disappears.
Danik 2016
07-01-2023, 10:29 AM
After the cute gnome poem!
Next: mood, decline, voyage, sacrifice, whisper, Mars
Transit
So now he was on Mars.
The voyage had been
much less of a sacrifice
than he expected.
The last thing he remembered
were those little voices
whispering "ko umesco, ko umesco."
He found he could breath normally,
stretch himself, move, walk
His mood improved with every step.
Nothing had changed so much after all.
There was even a declining sun
in the horizon (there was a horizon),
preceding the shadows of the night.
Or was the receding ball
mother earth?
New challenge: universe, synchronous, unsurpassed, thirst, gentle, omnivorous.
tailor STATELY
07-01-2023, 06:20 PM
"Giraffe in starlight" - Yes, your ending is more balanced :)
Love your "Transit" poem... "whispering "ko umesco, ko umesco."" ! Wonderful utilization of the gnome language :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-02-2023, 12:11 AM
Challenge: universe, synchronous, unsurpassed, thirst, gentle, omnivorous
it's five o'clock somewhere
the universe is omnivorous -
and when it thirsts it creates
stars and subsequently syn-
chronous planets where hydrogen
and oxygen may combine, and
liquid water is formed for a time,
sometimes being stored as ice
in the cold reaches of space
only to be collected later in un-
surpassed methane cocktails
and gently slurped at 5:00 pm
7/1/2023
Next: twilight, abandon, sitar, frequency, harbinger, asylum
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-02-2023, 09:56 AM
Lol! Enjoyed the poem in spite of it´s cosmic pessimism.
Next: twilight, abandon, sitar, frequency, harbinger, asylum
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
07-02-2023, 07:14 PM
The harbinger of truth
He came from nowhere,
the young man with his sitar
He arrived in the asylum
at twilight.
And he played
his music
for them
frequently,
passionately.
One day he went away
abandoning his sitar.
They never saw him again,
but each twilight
the sitar played for them
passionately,
plaintively.
Next challenge: sublime, word, evolution, android, groping, energy.
tailor STATELY
07-03-2023, 01:20 AM
Ah, the harbinger of truth... enjoyed very much :)
"cosmic pessimism" - lol, more a tragic comedy perhaps :)
Challenge: sublime, word, evolution, android, groping, energy
Rapid AI Mnemosyne
Groping for energy
AI's androids
are evolutionary sublime -
word
7/2/2023
Next: disco, spell, tetrahedron, display, iguana, rainforest
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-03-2023, 08:27 AM
re: Changed the title of the poem to include the forgotten word. Thanks for calling my attention to it.
Enjoyed the compact energetic poem
Challenge accepted!
Next: disco, spell, tetrahedron, display, iguana, rainforest
Danik 2016
07-03-2023, 11:31 PM
Nonsensical
A disco with tetrahedron floor.
On the walls rainforest motives.
On the floor an iguana as if under a spell
displays her dancing art.
Next challenge: horizon, awakening,sledge, antlers, handkerchief, dreams.
tailor STATELY
07-04-2023, 01:35 AM
Enjoyed the surrealistic poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-04-2023, 08:23 AM
Challenge: horizon, awakening, sledge, antlers, handkerchief, dreams
monday morning
dismantlers of dreams never slaking bare their
sledges upon the awakening while the conscious
groggily become horizontal seeking drink and
a crumb after a spent penny to avoid mischief
surrenders to the day waving a white handkerchief
7/4/2023
Next: morning, zenith, meadowlark, waterfall, ring, pendulum
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-04-2023, 09:42 AM
Original take! Only the poor "antlers" remained in solitude (unless they are hidden somewhere).
Next: morning, zenith, meadowlark, waterfall, ring, pendulum
Accident
But what happened to the ring
dropped by the sanguine fiancee,
the gentle meadowlark
found in the waterfall?
No even a pendulum
could locate it.
It was past morning.
The sun was nearing its zenith.
New Challenge: entrancing, figs, leaves, introduction, ode, endeavor.
tailor STATELY
07-04-2023, 07:59 PM
re: "take" - lol, yes, hidden within the solitude of dismall poverty.
Enjoyed your poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-04-2023, 11:48 PM
Sorry to learn that! Pensions seem not to be better than here.
Hopefully you still grow vegetables and fruit.
Curious about your new poem.
tailor STATELY
07-05-2023, 12:54 AM
lol... only a poverty of words (hangin' in there otherwise :) )
: dismantlers
Challenge: entrancing, figs, leaves, introduction, ode, endeavor
Ode to a Fig Tree
Introduction to my humble ode on figs -
I would not endeavor to elucidate upon twigs,
branches midst brambles with deep root -
but its leaves and the royal entrancing fruit
Praised and cursed in Biblical lore the fig tree
has provided sustenance throughout antiquity
being deciduous with large sculpted leaves
of three to five distinct lobes one believes
suited ancient mother Eve and father Adam
for raiment after their transgression in Eden
Oh, how I look forward to late summer months
to pluck off the sweet morsels that confronts
the taste buds with soft spicy sweet - a taste
that must be acquired to be fully embraced
- the uninitiated expecting the jell of Newton
found within a soft cookie not free of gluten
oft not treats upon the noble fig tree again
7/5/2023
Next: finger, unicorn, veil, mound, race, valley
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-06-2023, 12:17 AM
Lol! Antlers-dismal-dismantlers-this linguistic profundity lost me. Love figs and enjoyed the poem on figs
Next: finger, unicorn, veil, mound, race, valley
Story
In a green valley
among mounds of hay
there lived a lonely unicorn
One day he ran a race with himself.
He ran and ran and ran and ran
until he was very far from home.
Suddenly he saw a veiled lady
who was crying because
she cut her finger,
The unicorn consoled her
and she instantly transformed herself
in a beautiful female unicorn.
A bad witch had...well
you know the story.
The male unicorn was happy
They lived from then on together
And run a lot of races
Next challenge: desert,wanderer, oasis, sand, run,intensive.
In a
tailor STATELY
07-06-2023, 01:39 AM
"linguistic profundity" - I like that :)
Wonderful poetic story with a happy ending... brought to mind, in the way of unicorns, one of my favorite movies: "Legend" starring: Tom Cruise, Mia Sara, Tim Curry, David Bennent, Alice Playten, Billy Barty, Cork Hubbert :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-06-2023, 03:24 AM
Challenge: desert, wanderer, oasis, sand, run, intensive
“I'll Be Seeing You”
A desert wanderer found itself on the planet Mars
There were no oases but dune upon dune of sand
Controlled from beyond sometimes 'woken' by guitars
It rollicked and rolled to its own tune as it scanned
For signs of life, for someday its origin would have none...
And it run and run, as it were, trundling through fields
Of rock and sand and crater under a far distant sun
That couldn't sustain even the mirage of cornfields
From this distance and parched environment
And still it ran far beyond mission parameters
Its intensive search providing much enlightenment
For mission specialists who were far from amateurs
Till one day the death knell tolled, out of the blue
And as it at last rested lifelessly was serenaded
By a recording of Billie Holiday's "I'll Be Seeing You"
Then only the sounds of the Martian wind pervaded
7/6/2023
Next: silent, demitasse, canary, news, sunglasses, remoteness
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-06-2023, 07:26 AM
Tragic and somehow cute! Mars is becoming fastly another life resort!
Challenge accepted!
Next: silent, demitasse, canary, news, sunglasses, remoteness
Danik 2016
07-06-2023, 11:31 PM
Breakfast (not at Tyffany's)
His ritual performed every morning:
feeding the canary
then slowly and silently
sipping a demitasse of cofee
while looking at the news.
Then he put his sunglasses on,
and went out.
Clad in the morning mist
the little town had an air
of remotedness.
Nex challenge: forest, singular, raids, restless, piano, lace.
tailor STATELY
07-07-2023, 07:46 AM
Enjoyed: "Clad in the morning mist / the little town had an air / of remotedness." :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-07-2023, 04:35 PM
Challenge: forest, singular, raids, restless, piano, lace
forests under siege
let us raise a song of the forest
lamenting the forests under siege -
where singular insular raids amount
to a bazillion paper cuts laced with
indigenous hate - a restless and
delicate ecosystem in turmoil -
let it be balanced and controlled,
a movement pianissimo - a tribute
from mankind to mother earth
7/7/2023 r.
Next: city, luna moth, summer, imagine, judgment, silence
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-07-2023, 11:23 PM
Enjoyed this ecological poem!
Challenge accepted.
Danik 2016
07-08-2023, 09:57 AM
Next: city, luna moth, summer, imagine, judgment, silence
The infatuated moth
There once was a beautiful moth
That slept a lot
as it was lunar
It danced at night
to the city lights
and the summer heat
One day, can you imagine
It fell in love with a flower
Wanting to visit it at every hour.
It entered a request
not in jest
to become a butterfly.
After a severe indictment
and a fair judgment
the wish was granted.
So that became the lot
Of the lunar moth!
The rest is silence.
New challenge: park, Ferris wheel, pool, bees, intriguing, superlative
tailor STATELY
07-08-2023, 03:13 PM
Wonderful poem: "It danced at night / to the city lights / and the summer heat" :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-09-2023, 02:44 AM
Challenge: park, Ferris wheel, pool, bees, intriguing, superlative
A Poke in the Eye
An intriguing and most superlative engineering
Ferris wheels are great from a distance
I went on one once at an amusement park...
Never again
I remember the thrill of rising until whirlpools
of nausea and vertigo introduced themselves
to each other whilst perched on top of the world...
And then horror of horrors the sensation of going
backwards in the sadistic contraption of torture...
Wild wildebeests couldn't drag me -
I'd rather get a poke in the eye
7/8/2023
Next: statue, windy, thirst, extinct, eavesdrop, tradition
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-09-2023, 01:38 PM
The poem does justice to the feelings of the lyric I. Also diffuses the neologism "wildebeests" that punctilious people might not accept.:D
Myseif, I confess that being phobic of heights, I never ventured on a Ferris wheel
Challenge accepted!
Next: statue, windy, thirst, extinct, eavesdrop, tradition
The eavesdropping statue
In times of yore
without internet
and electronic
spying devices
we have today,
there existed the
now extinct tradition
of people meeting in discreet places
for the exchange of secrets
specially political ones.
On a windy March Roman day
two men met in a room
that held, beside an old statue,
only a likewise old table and some chairs.
After quenching their thirst,
with the vine they had brought
they discussed a secret
involving top politicians
of the country.
Next day the secret was
all over the place,
and both men
had hardly the time
to flee the country.
They hadn´t noticed,
that the statue was hollow
and had someone
hidden inside.
Next challenge: vineyard, storm, antipodes, rusty, exchange, enormously.
tailor STATELY
07-10-2023, 04:29 AM
Enjoyed The eavesdropping statue :) I didn't know the historic precedence.
Challenge accepted !
Really stretching on this one... :)
Challenge: vineyard, storm, antipodes, rusty, exchange, enormously
An Anonymous Poor Man Named Paulus Antipodes
There once was a man named Paulus Antipodes
Who worked in a vineyard and all it embodies
Once lived in an enormously large rusty hut
Which after brainstorming he exchanged for somewhat
Airier digs for the viewing of heavenly bodies
7/10/2023
Next: box, liana, oblivious, necktie, market, film
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-10-2023, 08:26 AM
re: the historic precedence was invented
An Anonymous Poor Man Named Paulus Antipodes-enigmatic!
Next: box, liana, oblivious, necktie, market, film
Challenge accepted!
Antonio Chrisostomos
Antonio Chrisostomos said
"I went to the market",
oblivious of his red necktie.
His girlfriend Eliana asked why
he went to the market
wearing a red necktie.
"To buy a box of potatoes".
"Where are they?"
"There were only tomatoes."
"End of the scene"
Cried the film director.
Next chalenge: cathedral, angels, tower, inspiration, flat, dispel.
tailor STATELY
07-10-2023, 02:22 PM
Eliana... Clever ! Enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-10-2023, 04:42 PM
Challenge: cathedral, angels, tower, inspiration, flat, dispel
"; the aim of poetry is to state simple things in an incomprehensible way." - Paul Dirac
NonZens: An Homage to the poet J. Robert Oppenheimer
Michael Angelo painted
in his shanty humble flat -
a cathedral in his mind
with a fervent brush attack
Angelic inspiration flamed
for his lofty spiral tower
from his palette verdigris !
of which he had no lack
The nave he splashed
neon yellow then deftly drew
with an elemental sharpie
a pollock in basic black
The apse, his greatest
creation, a mural of apples
nigh a blithe kangaroo with
an asp lurking in its sack
Upon an ivory altar a
nightingale was portrayed
that also served as the choir
inspired by Paul Dirac
The façade was allowed to
seed graffiti styled naïveté
to dispel the critics' grief of
Michael's psychedelic shack
7/10/2023
Next: flummox, dagger, intrepid, naïveté, portray, seaside
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-11-2023, 10:24 PM
Got a bit flummoxed about the poem above, specially after confirming the suspicion that Mr. Oppenheimer's poetic status wasn't literary. Enjoyed however the extremely creative decoration of the cathedral.
Challenge accepted!
The Picture
The scene was flummoxing.
Two knights were portrayed
staging an intrepid dagger duel.
The curious part of it was:
they were fighting in their heavy armour,
on the shore of a seaside
with the sea in the background
like two crazy Quijotes.
The style of the picture was naive,
possibly it had been drawn
by the hand
of a child.
Next challenge: rumour, shop, multitude, destitute, running, funny.
tailor STATELY
07-12-2023, 08:22 AM
Enjoyed "The Picture" :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-12-2023, 07:11 PM
Challenge: rumour, shop, multitude, destitute, running, funny
rumours
rumours shop the destitute mind
running whispers tittered to the multitude
- funny how they continue to persist
as if there was nothing better to do
7/12/2023
Next: orange, studio, mandolin, dusk, proliferate, seaside
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-12-2023, 09:19 PM
Enjoyed this rumourous and destitute poem.
Challenge accepted!
Next: orange, studio, mandolin, dusk, proliferate, seaside
Living in the clouds
I bought an orange studio
on the seaside.
in it books proliferated
like kittens.
in the dusk
one could hear
the nostalgic strings
of a mandolin.
Next challenge: summer, wood, antelope, wealth, intensely, circling.
tailor STATELY
07-13-2023, 06:14 PM
Such a beautiful poem... took me there; would be a heaven on earth :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: summer, wood, antelope, wealth, intensely, circling
savannah overture
pale woodwind sounds
would suit the wealth of
antelope grazing about
in high summer -
carrion eaters circling
the savannah's lucid skies
wait for predators
to relinquish their kills
intensely aware of
other prying eyes
7/13/2023
Next: damselfly, meadow, cattails, breeze, stubborn, diamond
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-13-2023, 11:05 PM
Thanks (blush)!
Very original poem Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
07-14-2023, 09:46 AM
Next challenge: damselfly, meadow, cattails, breeze, stubborn, diamond
Damselflies
Damselflies grace with their beauty
the green neadows of cattails
dancing in the mild stubborn breezes
or reveling in the diamond transparency
of the drops of the spring rain.
Next challenge:coffee, estate, bulls, noon, evidently, genuine.
tailor STATELY
07-14-2023, 06:39 PM
From my cellphone...
Enjoyed very much !!!
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: coffee, estate, bulls, noon, evidently, genuine
the fog will lift
red bulls and coffee espressos
evidently are seen as pick me ups
both before and after noon - they
would interfere with my naps so -
'tis better far to feel genuine with-
out jitters - the fog will lift in the
estates of my mind as He sees fit -
such is the word of wisdom in me
7/14/2023
Next: genuine, tapestry, access, core, conservator, hummingbird
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-15-2023, 10:49 AM
LoL! You always open unusual directions. Had a look on Red Bull, a drink that never interested me. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_Bull
Challenge accepted:genuine, tapestry, access, core, conservator, hummingbird
Danik 2016
07-15-2023, 02:03 PM
Challenge accepted:genuine, tapestry, access, core, conservator, hummingbird
The double
A genuine hummingbird
has access to a likeness
in the tapestry hung
in a conservatory.
He sings his best song
But the image doesn´t answer.
He sings and sings
he excels in his performance,
but nothing moves
the other bird.
Hurt to the core he
flies away
He woves
never he'll
sing a note again.
But, soon surrounded
by the songs of
other hummingbirds,
he can´t resist.
He sings to the top og his voice!
Next challenge: air, image, litter, joyous, transgression, softly.
tailor STATELY
07-15-2023, 05:05 PM
I haven't ever tried a Red Bull; some of their commercials are clever. There's a new kid on the block, whose name escapes me, when it comes to alleged pick-me-ups that is being debated in our government's halls.
Beautiful poem... the redemptive power of an unrequited love :)
Challenge accepted !
I googled: surreal painting air, image, litter, joyous, transgression, softly and found this idea for an ekphrastic prompt: https://www.artic.edu/artworks/34181/time-transfixed
Challenge: air, image, litter, joyous, transgression, softly
12:43 pm
12:43 pm and all I can think about
in the lingering silence is the image
of you on a train who knows where
I look in the mirror and you're not
there; the air littered with memories of
transgressions that drove you away
softly I sigh and reflect upon more
joyous times when we were together
- the mind is a terrible thing to lose
7/15/2023
Next: harbor, seagulls, sand dollar, rope, eye, concession
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-16-2023, 01:32 PM
Beautiful nostalgic poem.
Next: harbor, seagulls, sand dollar, rope, eye, concession
The seagull
I like to fly
and keep my realms
under a watchful eye.
Without ropes and concessions,
The open sky is my harbor,
there I meet fellow seagulls
enjoying themselves.
When I feel an urge,
of landing near a shore
Sand dollars greet me.
Next challenge: stage, imperative, lurking, distress, longing, fertile.
tailor STATELY
07-16-2023, 11:43 PM
Light and airy poem... enjoyed very much :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: stage, imperative, lurking, distress, longing, fertile
lurking in familiar shadows
lurking in familiar shadows upon a
fertile stage the natural man in
his madness assails the moral imperatives
of a world crying in its distress
longing for a higher loving-kindness
7/16/2023
Next: troubadour, dolphin, illusory, catspaw, windowpane, constellation
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-17-2023, 01:06 PM
Snif!"a world crying in its distress longing for a higher loving-kindness"!
Challenge accepted:troubadour, dolphin, illusory, catspaw, windowpane, constellation
Pictures
A melancholy dolphin
looking through a windowpane
at the clouds of an illusory sky.
Flowers swaying under catspaws.
Far constellations pierce the night,
and a lonely troubadour´s
plaintive song.
Next: watermelon, ongoing, waterfall, drowsy, Lilliput, racing.
tailor STATELY
07-17-2023, 03:04 PM
Wonderful !
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: watermelon, ongoing, waterfall, drowsy, Lilliput, racing
escape
a watermelon rind kind of day -
ants, like racing lilliputs, growing
drowsy in the intense heat
as viewed from above the bustling
throng - an ongoing ruin to nowhere
escape -
contemplating a waterfall
I meditate
and soon begin to bathe
in the tranquility
of rushing waters
7/17/2023
Next: starlight, greet, embodiment, tranquil, persimmon, lily
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-17-2023, 09:57 PM
Interesting contrast between part one and two of the poem.Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted.
Danik 2016
07-18-2023, 03:34 PM
Next: starlight, greet, embodiment, tranquil, persimmon, lily
Wow: In English"caqui" is elegantly called persimmon.
Persimmon
Under the starlight or under the sun
Greets me persimmon, persimmon
embodiment of sweetness
with its soft, translucent flesh,
offering orange pleasure,
instead of the tranquil contemplation
of the lily.
Next challenge: looking glass, grass, amazing, praying mantis, recurrent, cycles.
tailor STATELY
07-18-2023, 03:48 PM
Delightful ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: looking glass, grass, amazing, praying mantis, recurrent, cycles
58:11
a praying mantis swayed her head
in an elegant recurrent gimbaled fashion
when upon encountering a looking glass
observed otherworldly cycles there -
each day was warm and untroubled
each night a delightful misty rain
aromatic honeysuckle and star jasmine
ever wafted on a light breeze
lazily a shallow brook passed by
burbling in its course with tiny rising
waterfalls as it meandered serpentine
to a sea far, far away from view
the grass shone an inviting blue
hummingbirds afire glowed
industrious færies tended garden groves
and an inkblot toad or two
eternity seemed as but an instant
as the praying mantis beheld this new
realm - then realizing her prayer
was answered swiftly entered in
7/18/2023
Next: galaxy, elegant, imbroglio, sense, queue, whirlpool
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-19-2023, 10:21 AM
Aaii!
Challenge accepted!
Next: galaxy, elegant, imbroglio, sense, queue, whirlpool
Street Scene (Inspired in a supermarket Foto by Tony Walton)
The well dressed lady in the queue
took the elegant galaxy
out of her Prada bag.
She answered the phone,
she seemed to try to calm
the agitated voice
that reached her through the phone
in a whirlpool of emotion.
The people behind her
were dozing on their own cell phones.
Not sensing, nor really caring,
of any internal imbroglios
of emotion amongst them...
Nothing it seems
would interrupt their sleepy boredom
Next challenge: blustering, forward, banquet, lizard, opera, gorgeous.
tailor STATELY
07-19-2023, 04:17 PM
Enjoyed :)
Perhaps:
"The people behind her
were dozing on her own cell phones."
Unawares -
Not sensing, nor really caring,
of any internal imbroglios
of emotion amongst them...
"Nothing it seems
would interrupt this sleepy boredom."
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-19-2023, 06:13 PM
Challenge: blustering, forward, banquet, lizard, opera, gorgeous
divine diva
an operatic lizard - so she was famed abroad
two slights in print that made her wince
that sometimes made her feel like such a fraud
knowing all her blusterings could never convince
she retired most elegantly gorgeous to the mint
and lent her publicist the task to properly evince
certain media where they could stuff their print
the consequences not so dire as to be banned
from banquets, und so weiter, without a single squint
7/19/2023
Next: downy, gladly, nature, evanescent, wisp, pathway
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-19-2023, 09:39 PM
Thanks for the elegant suggestions, tailor, I simply forgot to include two words.
I have to alter a pronoun too. Tomorrow because of my eyesight.
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
07-20-2023, 09:53 AM
Elegant poem! The diva didn´t put herself forward though! "und so weiter" :).
Danik 2016
07-20-2023, 03:23 PM
Next: downy, gladly, nature, evanescent, wisp, pathway
About the future
Nature cultivates evanescent pathways.
A downy wisp of a chick may turn
into a glorious fowl or what?
One would gladly know the future
at least the nearest one,
but also is afraid of it.
Next: armory, chest, river, delightful, shadow, restore.
tailor STATELY
07-20-2023, 03:40 PM
Enjoyed ! Great first line: "Nature cultivates evanescent pathways" :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: armory, chest, river, delightful, shadow, restore
once the river man
he took all personal attacks to heart
and placed each shaft in an armory -
an iron clad chest deep in the lighted
recess of his mind - not for retribution
for he was a delightful man in the ways
of war far from his familial river roots
who would just as easily restore a kind-
ness for evil as kind for kind... and so
he lived in peace amongst the brutality
of his age as all men ought who fall
short of the supernal grace of God
7/20/2023
Next: reticent, yoga, panda, poet, reed, ponder
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-22-2023, 10:08 PM
A moving poem! It requires much discipline to master hurt feelings.
Challenge accepted!
The philosophical panda
There once was a reticent panda
who regularly practiced yoga
and was a poet in his spare time.
He also liked to ponder
on the secret ways of life
and the meaning of the word "reed".
New challenge: figs, deer, sunshine, effort, raw,, climbing.
:
tailor STATELY
07-23-2023, 12:11 AM
Enjoyed the philosophical panda! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: figs, deer, sunshine, effort, raw, climbing
The Dog Days of Summer
Raw heat in the summertime sunshine
Figs should be ripening and bold deer amble
At will in daylight nibbling early plums -
Climbing our property's hillside effortlessly
California quail with their young make their
Furtive rounds wary of our cat Rosie -
Running like the dickens when a threat
is perceived - at flight when in need
Robert's home caught on fire near dusk, just
A hoot and two hollers from us - thankfully
Not igniting our wooded tinder dry hills -
Pray our community will avail with open arms
7/22/2023
Next: Sirius, compilation, timepiece, cobble stones, market, favela
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-23-2023, 08:58 AM
Oh my! With this mild winter, I forget that it is high summer up there. Hope all goes well for you, family and the people around you.
Challenge accepted!
Next: Sirius, compilation, timepiece, cobble stones, market, favela
Sirius
The light of Sirius
transcends compilation
and the sad efficiency of timepieces.
It envelopes alike manor houses, market and
favelas (small unpaved streets, no cobble stones there).
It brings to market
contrasts and differences
happiness and sorrow,
while remaining aloof.
Next: aloof, mountain, feverish, gesture, questioning, atitude,
tailor STATELY
07-24-2023, 12:12 AM
Enjoyed :) "The light of Sirius / transcends compilation / and the sad efficiency of timepieces."
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: aloof, mountain, feverish, gesture, questioning, attitude
121:1
aloof as a mountain with a feverish pitch
no questioning of attitude at this altitude
a single simple gesture becomes manifest
7/24/2023
Next: paramount, family, tradition, bubble, dilemma, wilderness
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-24-2023, 09:20 AM
Enjoyed the concise poem, but didn´t understand the title.
Challenge accepted: paramount, family, tradition, bubble, dilemma, wilderness
Family traditions
Family traditions are of paramount importance,
as they knit related lives close together.
Sometimes however they place the family in a bubble
creating dilemmas
eventually exposing
an underlying wilderness.
Next: amazing, story, awakening, anthropomorphic, lighthouse, enhancing.
tailor STATELY
07-24-2023, 03:37 PM
lol... hate those family bubble situations... enjoyed ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: amazing, story, awakening, anthropomorphic, lighthouse, enhancing
a lighthouse stands sentinel
enhancing the seascape a lighthouse
stands sentinel over all within sight
there's something anthropomorphic -
an awakening of the imagination
when viewing seals off the surf as
their heads bob up and down watching
us on the beach watching them -
'tis easy to recall amazing stories
of merman and mermaids beckoning
mortal men into the deathly depths
7/25/2023
Next: eaves, peace. messenger. jollity, reward, mosaic
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-25-2023, 08:46 AM
Charming seaside poem:
"...here's something anthropomorphic -
an awakening of the imagination
when viewing seals off the surf as
their heads bob up and down watching
us on the beach watching them -"
Challenge accepted:eaves, peace. messenger. jollity, reward, mosaic
The dove's nest
Under the eaves of the roof
a conspicuous nest
reveals the secret work
of those jolly messengers of peace.
It´s true that doves gurr instead of singing,
but they reward their neighborhood
with a mosaic of discreet colors.
Next: untimely, flavors, rain, justice, empower, necklace.
tailor STATELY
07-25-2023, 04:26 PM
Loved your poem... "It´s true that doves gurr instead of singing, / but they reward their neighborhood / with a mosaic of discreet colors."... I was taught doves "coo" but "gurr" works too; funny how each culture interprets the songs of nature differently
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: untimely, flavors, rain, justice, empower, necklace
untimely rain
Chinatown
untimely rain
in San Francisco
drove them inside
she wore a necklace
of matched natural pearls
where's the justice in that
for the oysters likely served
with garlic butter - unique flavors
empowering passion? - a godsend for older
women with osteoporosis - now there's justice
7/26/2023
Next: button, quake, cottage, garlic, gallery, hypnotic
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-26-2023, 09:34 PM
Liked the stairs, but poor rich women with osteoporosis.
Challenge accepted
Danik 2016
07-27-2023, 10:39 PM
The quaking cottage
It was a small house beside a gallery
The sight of that shaky cottage
had an hypnotic effect on me.
It was a precarous enchantment.
The button in the entrance,
when pressed
gave forth an eerie sound.
Not even garlic would drive away
the kindred spirits of their abode,
Next:hourglass, incense, drawer, song, ancient, fulfill.
tailor STATELY
07-28-2023, 08:08 AM
Enjoyed the haunted house :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: hourglass, incense, drawer, song, ancient, fulfill
blue water lilies
incense permeates halls where
monks chant reverberating songs
that fill ancient sacred temples
appeasing silent insensitive gods -
sands slip through the hourglass...
drawers of water
pause by blue water lilies
fulfill destinies
7/28/2023
Next: Capricorn, bronze, caricature, tribute, creation, gown
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-29-2023, 09:51 AM
Very charming contrast between monks and water lilies
Next: Capricorn, bronze, caricature, tribute, creation, gown
On The Sing Of Capricorn
His four hoofs solidly
planted on the ground,
come wind, come rain,
sometimes sun,
sometimes snow
and then sun again.
It doesn´t budge.
In its stubborn stillness
it resembles a caricature
of a bronze statue,
a whim of careless nature,
that chooses the gowns
for its numerous creatures
to celebrate creation.
Next: round, underground, peak, laughter, grinding, flames.
tailor STATELY
07-29-2023, 10:21 AM
Enjoyed very much :) Perhaps 'sign' instead of 'sing' in the title ?
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-29-2023, 01:15 PM
Thanks for the correction, tailor. Why do old neurons always invert letters (sigh!)?
Will correct the poem, when edition is possible.
Curious about your next poem.
tailor STATELY
07-30-2023, 02:08 AM
Challenge: round, underground, peak, laughter, grinding, flames
Goin' underground now -
Goin' underground now -
the grinding of old bones have ceased
Flames never appealed to me -
being put in an urn; my laughter forgotten
A headstone instead where one might come 'round
to see my name and read a poetic inscription
accompanied by an angel blowing a trumpet
I'd like to think I passed on at my peak
spiritually prepared for a joyous reunion
7/29/2023
Next: fog, distant, tiger, peacock, master, prestige
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-30-2023, 10:02 AM
Oh, no!That was a bad choice of words! There should be a lot of rattling of bones and keys yet!!
Next: fog, distant, tiger, peacock, master, prestige
Animal Paradise
A distant country
Seen though massive curtains of fog!
The proud peacock at the entrance
exhibits its elegant fan
and there they are all of them:
tigers, lions, foxes, elephants
and the cheeky little apes frolicking
on ever green trees along with chanting birds.
Fierce animals mingle with tame ones,
and there is enough food and water for all.
There are no masters and no hunters,
no sweating for prestige.
No one knows the meaning of
boredom and humanity.
Next:roses, daisies, cave, music, exquisite, germinate.
tailor STATELY
07-30-2023, 10:58 PM
re: words - (lol)... now cast in stone.
Enjoyed your poem very much... I see the influence of Isaiah :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-30-2023, 11:15 PM
I can't even remember if Isaiah wrote about animals. To tell you the truth my imagination is very poor when it comes to Paradises. This one looks much more like an informal zoo.
Expectant about your next poem.
tailor STATELY
07-30-2023, 11:50 PM
"informal zoo"... lol
Challenge: roses, daisies, cave, music, exquisite, germinate
music most sublime
inquisitive minds germinate not unlike
gardens in Spring when music fills the air -
from the elemental whisperings derived
from nature's soulful spirit to the exquisite
roar of vast cavernous stadia of rock & roll
a sweet rose's kiss
luscious music most sublime
even daisies blush
7/30/2023
Next: shimmer, tide pool, fading, shipwreck, moon, lavender
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-31-2023, 10:11 AM
Charming poem forming a flower!:)
Challenge accepted!
Next: shimmer, tide pool, fading, shipwreck, moon, lavender
Under the lavender moon
Under the dusky lavender moon
shimmers the fading wreck of the ship,
the fading wrecks of so many ships,
caught by the treacherous icebergs.
For the roaming aerial eye,
not far from there
a small tide pool swarms with of life:
snails, barnacles, mussels, anemones,
urchins, sea stars, crustaceans, seaweed, and small fish.
Their now is eternity.
Next: road, water, sunlight, surface, climb, happily.
tailor STATELY
07-31-2023, 10:26 AM
Love tide pools... been much too long for me... my daughter is currently camping on our North coast... https://www.californiabeaches.com/beach/glass-beach/ : Reminds one of Erica Jong's poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-31-2023, 01:07 PM
Challenge: road, water, sunlight, surface, climb, happily
celestial proceedings
the water's surface: a mirror
in the moonlight -
sunlight can not compare
for its climb blots nearly all
other celestial proceedings
from view with its glare -
happily my road lies on the
celestial side not blinded
by everyday cares
7/31/2023
Next: dance, muse, piccolo, lightness, drift, mote
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-31-2023, 10:24 PM
Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
07-31-2023, 10:29 PM
Love tide pools... been much too long for me... my daughter is currently camping on our North coast... https://www.californiabeaches.com/beach/glass-beach/ : Reminds one of Erica Jong's poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Curious beaches! With stones instead of sand?
tailor STATELY
08-01-2023, 04:03 AM
More rocky beaches: https://www.california.com/rocky-beaches-in-california-thatll-blow-your-mind/ and if I remember correctly: https://www.californiabeaches.com/beach/jade-cove/ :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-01-2023, 09:00 AM
Some of the most famous beaches of Brazil (don´t mind the text) The rocky ones are in Rio Grande do Norte, up in the north. I didn´t like them so well, when I was there. One has to be care not to hurt the feet on the stones, when getting into the water:
https://www.essemundoenosso.com.br/praias-de-natal/
Next: dance, muse, piccolo, lightness, drift, mote
Dancing to "baby elephant walk for piccolo".
Muses dancing too, highheeled
drifting with lightness,
balking motes
belying their fame
of ecstatic goddesses.
Next:beginning, wildflower, wonder, wandering, niche, engine.
tailor STATELY
08-01-2023, 04:30 PM
Wonderful beaches :)
Love your lighthearted poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: beginning, wildflower, wonder, wandering, niche, engine
wandering
wandering and wondering
left my engine behind
espied in the beginning
a wildflower in a niche
wandering and pondering
upon this path and that
aimlessly meandering
to a shore strewn with jade
wandering and maundering
just a trifle bit worn
chanced upon the færies
and decided to rest
wandering and sauntering
now fully refreshed
sought out for my engine
to re-enter the race
8/1/2023
Next: yearn, matrix, Saturn, exile, dragonfly, diamond
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-02-2023, 08:59 AM
:):):)
Next: yearn, matrix, Saturn, exile, dragonfly, diamond
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
08-02-2023, 10:32 PM
Yearning for home
Spinning a yarn
about this dragonfly
exiled in the matrix
of old Saturn,
a planet
hard as a diamond,
but without its lustre
and its promise of welt.
Next:underlying, detect, field, immense, bottomless, mammal.
tailor STATELY
08-03-2023, 12:40 AM
Enjoyed ! "dragonfly / exiled in the matrix" :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-03-2023, 01:43 PM
Challenge: underlying, detect, field, immense, bottomless, mammal
invasion: day 1
detecting mammals...
underlying threat computed
probability of sentience high
landing craft deployed
enabling termination protocol
x-ray out
immensely grateful
for vast fields teaming with life
and bottomless seas
8/3/2023
Next: cursive, delivery, sunset, blink, cello, colony
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-03-2023, 10:41 PM
Enjoyed specially the second strophe.
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
08-04-2023, 10:14 PM
Next: cursive, delivery, sunset, blink, cello, colony
Things I like
Things I like:
Cursive writing
Sunset on delivery
The blinking of a birds eye
The far away sound of a cello,
Colonies of doves.
Next: blue, journey, elephant, tide, run, secret.
tailor STATELY
08-05-2023, 01:40 AM
Very nice :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-05-2023, 09:58 AM
Challenge: blue, journey, elephant, tide, run, secret
elephantasy
elephants, with the right filter, are blue; it's
not a secret, they're like chameleons, it's true
- ask tipplers after more than a drink or two
and pink will be their common view. This is
so, they can hide when on their journeys,
which they eschew, ever on the run, whereto
in necessity they may enter into waters, into
the tide and swim leaving wakes of rainbows!
8/5/2023
Next: horoscope, ribbon, jewel, abbey, equinox, harbor
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-05-2023, 01:17 PM
Enjoyed so much this imaginative poem:"they may enter into waters, into/the tide and swim leaving wakes of rainbows!" By the way, are you still saving all these poems on your poetry pages?
Next: horoscope, ribbon, jewel, abbey, equinox, harbor
Challenge accepted!
tailor STATELY
08-05-2023, 05:25 PM
Thanx :) re: Saving? - Yes, still saving in a google.doc started circa November 2021 ?: at maybe 2.x poems per page @ 10 pt print with a bit of white space and dividers (just so) = 330+ pages so far. I may have referenced it somewhere ? Some of the better ones (very subjective here) go into my Padlet web page, which also contains my better poetry (ibid) from a previous 290 page google.doc @ 11 pt print, which was necessitated by google.sites corrupting my website (sheesh!) which contained my poetry circa 2003 - 2018... but I haven't caught up with the Padlet site (up to March 2023? ) yet and still need to clean up and edit (an ongoing process)... you may have seen the Padlet page somewhere in the past (it had a background of pink dogwood leaves and the first pix was my woodstove) as I was trying to fix some graphics at the time due to a photo saving site going pay only :( even for extremely low volume users like me. I also use the first few pages of the newer google.doc as a 2-page template for my Thursdays at Two poetry group :)
Hoping you are saving your gems too ;)
Looking forward to your next offering :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-06-2023, 06:50 PM
I'm glad you are saving the poems on a doc, because several of the poems I like best are more recent ones.I get the feeling that you are more at ease with the poetic tools.
I'm going to save some of mine for a long planned blog.
Mixmax
Wearing my horoscope sign on a ribbon(leo)
Jewels glimmer uselessly hidden
in a cave
by the abbey.
A ship leaves a harbor somewhere
heading for the equinox.
On a pasture a single ox
devours the landscape.
His name is Cronus.
Next: inheritance, watermelon, fierce, ship, eager, tend.
tailor STATELY
08-06-2023, 11:50 PM
The only tools I'm using now are Rhyme Desk as my writing aid: https://www.rhymedesk.com/desk and google and wikipedia for research for quite a while now... with the use of the futureboy anagram solver... https://futureboy.us/lookup/nph-anagram.pl?list=12&orig=generator on rare occasions due to memory issues with this laptop - which will be solved with a refurbished laptop I purchased recently with much beefier memory. The laptop I'm using now doesn't even have enough memory for a windows 10 update, even after moving everything to a memory card :(
Look forward to your blog entry :)
Enjoyed your poem and the tie in with Cronus :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-07-2023, 07:01 AM
Challenge: inheritance, watermelon, fierce, worship, eager, tend
family reunion
an eagerly awaited family reunion
fierce was the sun
lemonade
a watermelon and cold chicken day
grilled corn on the cob and hot dogs
and burgers, and chilled potato salad with
sweet pickles also in the offering
children tilted at piñatas
adults played at horseshoes
and generally caught up -
the most fun was seeing who had received
an inheritance of features tending
closest to photos of long past loved ones:
great-great grandpas' ears,
great-great grandmas' eyes and smiles...
lastly the white elephant exchange
a time honored tradition before
all turning in early in preparation
for Sunday's worship service
8/7/2023
Next: soup, freckles, harmony, words, nuance, truffle
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-07-2023, 09:26 AM
The only tools I'm using now are Rhyme Desk as my writing aid: https://www.rhymedesk.com/desk and google and wikipedia for research for quite a while now... with the use of the futureboy anagram solver... https://futureboy.us/lookup/nph-anagram.pl?list=12&orig=generator on rare occasions due to memory issues with this laptop - which will be solved with a refurbished laptop I purchased recently with much beefier memory. The laptop I'm using now doesn't even have enough memory for a windows 10 update, even after moving everything to a memory card :(
Look forward to your blog entry :)
Enjoyed your poem and the tie in with Cronus :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
I didn´t express myself so well. With tools I meant the basic tools to write a poem: words, images, rhyme and rythm. Your poems seem to flow more naturally today, probably because you have abandoned most helping devices.
I will be happy to explore Rhyme Desk (rhyming often is a big problem) and Futureboy. Thanks for the links and congrats for your new purchase!
Challenge accepted!
tailor STATELY
08-07-2023, 04:43 PM
Ah. The so-called AI tools I dabbled with for a time were great for the Nonsense Poems' thread or perhaps offering scaffolds upon which to gain prompts that had to be fleshed out through way too much editing for some poetic forms I wanted to explore. I haven't trifled with the newer AI available and prolly will not.
Possibly the influence of our county's poet laureates, 2-emeritas & current, and the poetry workshops and readings are beginning to rub off on me (still learning :) )
The Rhyme Desk is helpful at a basic level for rhymes and thesaurus... I will often google if I need a word that Rhyme Desk balks at. It serves me as a better platform for me to write rather than using a text editor... though I cut/paste to a text editor... it's really not all that complicated.
Looking forward to your new poem :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-07-2023, 11:10 PM
I sometimes look for rhymes in the net, will have a look ar Rhyme Desk. Some Apps I liked at the beginning I find limited now . As for Chat gtp didn't manage to download it yet, But, anyway, wouldn't exchange my own attempts for an app.
Poetry
Poetry is a magic
created out of words,
wearing unexpected nuances
flowing in rhythmical cadences.
Songs of harmony or disruption,
poems may contain everything:
From the stock market
to the gushes of the heart.
From delirant dishes
of soup and truffles
to the sunny face of a freckled child.
From a clouded sky
to intergalactic adventures.
From the fragile here and now,
to the multiple evocations
of eternity.
Next: erosion, island, dawn, game, retumbant, round.
tailor STATELY
08-08-2023, 01:24 AM
Wonderful Ars Poetica ! Enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: erosion, island, dawn, game, retumbante, round
shore party
searching for game and water after
dawn upon an uncharted deserted
island with diamond bright sands at
our backs we cut through dense lianas
meter by bitter meter into the jungle
'round about noon we'd had enough
of the cacophony of sound of unseen
game when we came across a sinkhole
created by the erosion of limestone
filled to its rim with cool fresh water
we'd no sooner filled our waterskins
when we heard the retumbante snarl
of a glaring black beast that curdled
the very blood in our veins - our cook,
no less, shot the black beast in mid-
flight with his ancient flintlock pistola
men of the high seas
remain linked to the harsh land
joined at the hip
8/8/2023
Next: seed, linen, horse, reservoir, swarm, float
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-08-2023, 08:04 AM
Poor beast! Enjoyed this parody of an adventure story. On a desert island with cook!:D
Challenge accepted!
Next:seed, linen, horse, reservoir, swarm, float
Danik 2016
08-08-2023, 03:58 PM
Next:seed, linen, horse, reservoir, swarm, float
Moving Pictures
Seeds planted by the wind
Linen floating in the air
Horses galloping on the prairie
Swarms of fishes in the reservoir
A choir of children on the lawn
https://www.google.com/search?q=Coroinfantil+no+gramado&oq=Coroinfantil+no+g
Next:orchestra, bells, wood, peacock, timing, intense.
tailor STATELY
08-08-2023, 06:39 PM
Wonderful poem :)
I chose this short video: https://www.google.com/search?q=Coroinfantil+no+gramado&oq=Coroinfantil+no+g#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:f1617cf1,vid:apX10TonJEA A wonderful idea for the children and what better place for the public :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-09-2023, 07:27 AM
Challenge: orchestra, bells, wood, peacock, timing, intense
decibels
bad orchestral timing in the wood -
a white bellbird was being harangued
by a peacock new to the hood
the tension in the air was intense
bells tolled when the dust had dispensed
after the white bellbird struck back
with his song
8/9/2023
The White Bellbird: https://www.thedodo.com/in-the-wild/worlds-loudest-bird
Next: memory, parse, literary, texture, button, whisper
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-09-2023, 08:53 AM
Lol!Charming concise poem! By the way this bellbird is called here "Araponga-da-amazônia". We are a loud people!
https://www.google.com/search?q=Araponga+canto&oq=Araponga+canto&aqs=chrome..69i57.9580j0j0&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:b76bcf0a,vid:hf_nXtG51B0
Challenge accepted!
Next: memory, parse, literary, texture, button, whisper
Danik 2016
08-09-2023, 10:54 PM
The Diary
When you take it in your hand
and press the button
that opens it
you almost hear the whisper
of the secret voices
that habit its memories.
The feel of its texture
its books smell
evoke literary adventures.
No parsing here,
rather the rustle
of ancient signs.
Next:swan, empowering, weaning, space ship, cryptic, dawn.
tailor STATELY
08-10-2023, 02:06 AM
Enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: swan, empowering, weaning, space ship, cryptic, dawn
"The souls of all good poets passed into swans" - Pythagorus
swan song superman
empowering
the weaning of our species
from the confines of earth
created a new dawn for man
cryptically black swan
events named Apollo -
space ships with lunar landers
whose bulwarks were
as thin as tin cans
8/10/2023
Next: coin, portfolio, vellum, vanish, kitty, studio
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-10-2023, 11:01 PM
Lol! Had to laugh at the title. Enjoyed the bringing together of swans and Apollo Mission.
Studio in the Shadow
The pink vellum portfolio
had a coin engraved in its front.
On the window sill of the studio
a white white kitty sat in contemplation.
Soon it vanished into the garden..
Next::gate, road, footprints, enchanting, cloud,
tailor STATELY
08-10-2023, 11:13 PM
Nice portfolio... kitties get bored easily, lol :) Enjoyed !
Only 5-words (woohoo!)...
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-11-2023, 04:57 AM
Challenge: gate, road, footprints, enchanting, cloud
an open gate
an open gate
footprints upon a road
where clouds await
enchanting
8/11/2023
Next: lamp, solitary, wreath, wing, twilight, bubble
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-11-2023, 08:54 AM
Something went missing! Very charming concise poem.
Challenge accepted!
Next: lamp, solitary, wreath, wing, twilight, bubble
Danik 2016
08-11-2023, 11:42 PM
Bubbles
A solitary lamp burning
In the street
in the twilight.
A wreath on the bride's head
another on the fresh grave
In the cemetery.
Left wing, right wing.
So many bubbles
bursting in the wind.
Next: endeavour, blasting, ring, shrub, teapot, melody.
tailor STATELY
08-12-2023, 03:02 AM
Well written poem... "So many bubbles / bursting in the wind""... enjoyed very much :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: endeavour, blasting, ring, shrub, teapot, melody
tempest in a teapot
avast! across the couch
an enemy bonsai shrub
exiting from the fog, 'tis
endeavouring to come about !
strike the jolly roger mates !
tack with sinews fraught
let the sheets rend the wind
and take it on broadside !!!
a silver clad teapot pirate ship
blasting its cannonade
rings of fire from the
mouths of death
ah, what a sweet melody
8/12/2023
Next: everlasting, phoenix, færieland, children, soldier, owlish
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-12-2023, 09:19 AM
Lol! Murderous bonsai! Enjoyed this charming household war!
Challenge accepted!
Next: everlasting, phoenix, færieland, children, soldier, owlish
Danik 2016
08-12-2023, 05:43 PM
There was once
in fairyland
a legit Phoenix
The children and even
the weary soldiers loved him.
One day he met a bad witch.
Being bored and irritated,
she transformed him,
giving him an owlish face.
The children abhorred him
and the soldiers didn't visit him
anymore.
The sad bird went to Godmother
and asked her for his old face.
The old fairy sighed and said:
"My dear that was my enemy Uglynova.
She hates good looks.
If I restore your old face
She will change it again and again.
So I will teach you to live
with your new one.
You will practice being reborn
out of the ashes during thirty days.
Then you will be able to resume your life
The young bird followed his Godmother's advice
and went home feeling much stronger.
Danik 2016
08-12-2023, 05:48 PM
I had editing problems the poem above will be finished tomorrow when on PC.
Next: clown, home, journey, philosophy, daily, excel.
tailor STATELY
08-13-2023, 12:33 AM
Poor phoenix :(Quite a parable / færie tale... enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-13-2023, 09:28 AM
Challenge: clown, home, journey, philosophy, daily, excel
I should have been a class clown
I should have been a class clown -
clowning around
at home was dis-
couraged; at sch-
ool however it appeared its daily
philosophy a am-
ost excellent jou-
rney to get thro-
ugh the trauma
and stress of de-
aling with peers
and generally ju-
st surviving each day
8/13/2023
Next: mountain, wool, vineyard, rain, grass, vagabond
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-13-2023, 01:11 PM
Next: everlasting, phoenix, færieland, children, soldier, owlish Complete version
The Phoenix
There was once
in fairyland
a legit Phoenix.
He was noted in all the country
for his beauty.
The children and even
the weary soldiers loved him.
One day he met a bad witch.
Being bored and irritated,
she transformed him,
giving him an owlish face.
Every one now abhorred him.
The children took flight
when they saw him
and the soldiers didn't visit him
anymore.
The sad bird went to his Godmother
and asked her for his old face.
The old wise fairy sighed and said:
"My dear that was my enemy Uglynova.
She hates good looks.
If I restore your old face
She will change it again and again.
So I will teach you to live
with your new one.
You will practice being reborn
out of the ashes during thirty days.
Then you will be able to resume your life.
The young bird followed his Godmother's advice.
During thirty days he practiced assiduously
being reborn out of the ashes
When he went home
he felt more lighthearted
and when the children run away from him
he winked at them with his owlish eye.
Soon the children got used to his new face
and enjoyed his company as they did before.
He was invited to give interviews
on the telly and in the net
about his transformation
and he enchanted now with his humor
as he had before enchanted with his looks.
Even the weary soldiers returned.
They loved to take a pint
in his wise company.
As for Uglynova
She exploded out of sheer rage
at his everlasting success!
Danik 2016
08-13-2023, 01:38 PM
Challenge: clown, home, journey, philosophy, daily, excel
I should have been a class clown
I should have been a class clown -
clowning around
at home was dis-
couraged; at sch-
ool however it appeared its daily
philosophy a am-
ost excellent jou-
rney to get thro-
ugh the trauma
and stress of de-
aling with peers
and generally ju-
st surviving each day
8/13/2023
Next: mountain, wool, vineyard, rain, grass, vagabond
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Aw! Why are shy children always supposed to feel well among their peers?
Challenge accepted!
Next: mountain, wool, vineyard, rain, grass, vagabond
Danik 2016
08-13-2023, 09:48 PM
Vagabond Poem
The vineyard trives on the mountain
The rain falls on the grass.
But where does the wool come in
if there are no sheep
and nobody is knitting?
Next:oranges, lake, myriads, sing, border, strong.
tailor STATELY
08-14-2023, 12:43 AM
lol... no sheep :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-14-2023, 01:28 PM
Challenge: oranges, lake, myriads, sing, border, strong
leimenids and oranges
myriads of leimenids inhabit fresh water lakes -
a strong community of naiads above reproach
living in harmony with peoples beyond the
borderlands of orange groves ever diffused
with the oranges' blossoms delightful scent
which fragrance spurs all to joyously sing
naiad neighbors dream
coexisting peacefully
with man and færie
8/14/2023
Next: catamaran, palm, orca, lagoon, parrots, coral
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-14-2023, 10:15 PM
Enjoyed the poem.
Challenge accepted!
Next:catamaran, palm, orca, lagoon, parrots, coral.
Danik 2016
08-15-2023, 08:37 AM
Next:catamaran, palm, orca, lagoon, parrots, coral.
Sail away!
Sail away, sail away on a catamaran
in company of pirates and parrots
"Pieces-of- eight! Pieces of eight!"
In quest of Treasure Island.
Heading south, south, south!
Passing the reefs of Coral Island
and the turmoiled realm of the orcas
Dreaming of palm beaches
and enigmatic lagoons
mirroring the eternally blue sky.
Next:Aldebaran, magic, Orient, unfold, water, rich.
tailor STATELY
08-15-2023, 01:09 PM
:) A rousing sea shanty ! Enjoyed very much !
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-16-2023, 08:21 AM
Challenge: Aldebaran, magic, Orient, unfold, water, rich
The Light of the Soul
The ancient Orients knew of celestial magic;
I offer one example... let the events unfold...
The eye of Taurus, Aldebaran, wielded by sages
inflicted tragic atrocities upon their unknowing
quarry... the "evil" eye captured from the
heavens within a ewer of water floating upon
pure quick silver beneath a cloud free sky
Only a star ruby gem could preserve one from
the "evil" eye, hence coveted by the rich and
powerful and sought by nearly everyone
It was on a short trip to a waterfall to where
I sought to meditate and put ink to paper
as inspiration struck when I was lulled to
slumber by the serene sylvan surroundings
I dreamt that an evil sage, a rival court poet,
was contemplating my destruction that very
night and I had but scant hours to counter
his spell before Aldebaran rose in the heavens
- but I hadn't the talisman necessary, for I
never realized my position was worthy of death
Summoning my spiritual courage I awoke to
find a white tiger curled at my feet and, lo, a
peacock strutting nearby contemplating me
Another dream, perhaps the universe weighing
my worthiness when a golden koi fish leapt from
the waterfall's pool and truly stirred me to awaken
My compassion welled within me to gently gather
the koi with both hands and return it back into
the pool when I espied a sparkling pink pebble
amongst the gray matrices at the pool's bottom -
it beckoned me like nothing before and I strode
confidently into the cool swirling waters after
shedding my humble court garments and sandals
I plucked the gem from the bottom after dousing my
head and reaching with all my might with eager
fingers, clutching as not to drop it if I should falter
- a perfect pink star ruby! the light of my soul !
The sun was setting as if embarrassed, jealous
of my prize, and, as I dressed and gathered my
belongings secured the heaven sent gem as
best I could - curious, I brushed a few white
stray hairs from my sandals and nearby spied a
pristine peacock feather with which I thought
I could make into a fresh quill pen to write with
Aldebaran glowed angrily within the silver ewer
as smoke curled and the very water became fire
The palace was rent with the bloodcurdling cries
of the jealous sage whose incantations had
rebounded upon himself as he was torn asunder
by the massive claws of a silent unseen beast
8/16/2023
Next: clue, primrose, declare, cloak, fractal, brick
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-16-2023, 01:34 PM
Lol! Enjoyed that dramatic saga!
Challenge accepted!
Next: clue, primrose, declare, cloak, fractal, brick
Danik 2016
08-17-2023, 07:55 AM
Next: clue, primrose, declare, cloak, fractal, brick
Poem of the open prospects
I do declare:
this isn´t going to be easy.
Take a bunch of primroses,
of all available colors.
Put it in the hand of a mysterious figure
clad in a dark cloak
and than set the cloaked one on a horse
letting him gallop along a narrow road
to that house of bricks
organized in a fractal pattern.
The fractal house at the forked road
is your clue.
If you part from there
everything becomes possible.
Next: hailstorm, brook, llama, inscribe, letter, awesome.
tailor STATELY
08-17-2023, 10:25 AM
Brilliant solution ! Enjoyed... "The fractal house at the forked road" :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-19-2023, 08:03 AM
Challenge: hailstorm, brook, llama, inscribe, letter, awesome
Incan Signs and Portents
I repose near a swollen brook resulting
from a mountainous runoff after a
hailstorm had gone and the night's sky
revealed
The stars appear as dead to me as Vacana's
contribution to the galactic river Mayu
Today's emptiness and llama dung
will be my inspiration as I absently inscribe
the finishing touches upon an urpu's
decorative design of concentric coils
of lancehead snakes
A breathless runner brings tidings
an assortment of khipu - a sort of letter;
quickly examining the knotted contents
noting the awesome depth of encrypted
coloration I totter rejoicing that my
labors have not been in vain -
the temple priests await my pleasure
8/19/2023
Next: bottle, portico, misty, envelop, acquaintance, artisan
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-19-2023, 08:54 AM
Enjoyed that "Incan" poem! Where did you find that Incan vocabulary? The few lists I found contained very few words and were very similar.
Challenge accepted!
Next: bottle, portico, misty, envelop, acquaintance, artisan
Danik 2016
08-21-2023, 08:39 AM
Next: bottle, portico, misty, envelop, acquaintance, artisan
Wandering in the mist
In memory of Francois Villon
Here am I
tottering about aimlessly,
enveloped in the cold mist
of the night,
a bottle in the hand
a bottle in the head.
I am all alone
no old acquaintance
crosses my path.
Suddenly out of the mist
crafted by ancient artisans,
a portico rises in front of me
in all its majesty.
Where will it lead me?
Next: bower, flower tree, drench-coat, sublime, endure, highly.
tailor STATELY
08-21-2023, 02:39 PM
Enjoyed ! Invoking Villon no less. "a bottle in the hand / a bottle in the head." :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-22-2023, 05:44 AM
Challenge: bower, flower tree, drench-coat, sublime, endure, highly
a drench-coat'd man
past the bowers of the flower tree
as sublime a trek one could endure
to the beach, a highly sought shore
whilst the village was fast asleep
a drench-coat'd man sat down upon
the cool sand beneath a full moon
https://gsy.bailiwickexpress.com/gsy/news/abandoned-drench-coat-be-dug-out/
8/22/2023
Next: gaze, comet, sleep, loop, wheel, lonely
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-22-2023, 09:47 PM
Enjoyed de poem. A hiatus is suggested between the scene described in the poem and the one in the article.
Challenge accepted!
Next: gaze, comet, sleep, loop, wheel, lonely
Danik 2016
08-23-2023, 09:40 AM
Next: gaze, comet, sleep, loop, wheel, lonely
Waltzing stars
A comet dancing
before her stunned gaze,
wriggling in loops and lozenges,
covered with winking stars
shining wheels
criss crossed the sky,
"Lucy in the sky with diamonds".
She woke up sweating
from her agitated sleep.
Outside the sky was calm.
Among the the nighty clouds
one star blinked in lonely majesty.
Next: family, waves, lace, aeons, raise, intently.
tailor STATELY
08-23-2023, 02:54 PM
Love this poem ! S1 is very imaginative, and S2 a perfect counterpoint :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: family, waves, lace, aeons, raise, intently
Sing Daughters and Sons of Sion
We exist among the aeons
intently aware
all are of one family
one with the universe
irreplaceable raised voices
in the chorus
of harmonic waves
encompassing eternity
8/23/2023
Next: bridge, simple, music, ladybug, shower, joy
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-23-2023, 08:43 PM
re:Thanks! (red emoji not working).
The style of the poem evokes a bit the chanting of the angels in the Prolog in Heaven of Faust I.
Tomorrow, when on PC I'll put the link in.
PS-Not commenting on the solution given to "lace":D.
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
08-24-2023, 09:07 AM
Two translations of "Prolog in Heaven" (Faust I, Goethe). I think I prefer the second one. I couldn´t find the name of the translator though:
https://southerncrossreview.org/129/faust-fts-trans.html
https://www.online-literature.com/goethe/faust-part-1/4/
Next: bridge, simple, music, ladybug, shower, joy
Ladybug
Walking with simple grace
over the bridge
Ladybug, ladybug!
Dancing with cautious steps
to the music
Ladybug, ladybug!
Drops of dew fall on your body
in a shower
Ladybug, ladybug!
Friendly spotted beetle
Ladybug, ladybug
Bring us joy and luck
Ladybug, ladybug!
Next: longing, waterfront, musings, elevation, rhyme, seasoned.
tailor STATELY
08-24-2023, 03:40 PM
Gobsmacked ! How wonderful !!! Like a nursery rhyme :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-24-2023, 04:44 PM
"The style of the poem evokes a bit the chanting of the angels in the Prolog in Heaven of Faust I.
Tomorrow, when on PC I'll put the link in." -
Enjoyed Faust... have yet to read it beyond what you provided.
"PS-Not commenting on the solution given to "lace"." -
My apology... I'll try to adhere to the word list better unless it's an emergency, or otherwise... it's a technique I learned 20-years ago and it's hard to break :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-24-2023, 10:03 PM
re:Thanks.
re: Faust. Yes, I like Faust I. Will look for a translation of the complete play. It's not a long read and it's mostly in verse.
re: About "lace", It was meant to be a humorous comment not a criticism, but the grinning emoji :D didn't appear. I'm always amused by your alternative solutions so don´t worry.
Enjoyed the word Gobsmacked.
Danik 2016
08-25-2023, 08:17 AM
Here are some options of Faust I
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/14591 Translation by Bayard Taylor
https://www.poetryintranslation.com/klineasfaust.php Translation by Anthony Kline ( modern, couldn´t check has to be downloaded directly)
tailor STATELY
08-25-2023, 11:02 AM
Thanx... Will check out the links :)
Challenge: longing, waterfront, musings, elevation, rhyme, seasoned
Old Sac
walking the Old Sacramento river waterfront
located just west of where rhyme and reason
holds no sway with an inland elevation the length
of 18 cats (minus their furry tails of course) -
the nighttime air is seasoned with the musings
of kenspeckled tourists longing for something
novel while poking through imaginative shops,
and restaurants, hoping for a souvenir or two
8/25/2023
Next: eyes, spice, shroud, fleeting, dewdrops, tangerine
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-25-2023, 12:28 PM
Enjoyed!Lol "an inland elevation the length/
of 18 cats". I use to say that the balcony of my apartment has the length of two cats.
Challenge accepted:
Next: eyes, spice, shroud, fleeting, dewdrops, tangerine
Tangerine dreams
Wistful eyes shrouded
by a curtain of tears:
fleeting dewdrops.
Cinnamon spice
tearing the air
tangerine dreams!
Next: ancient, curtain, bliss, lake, rhododendron, obtain.
tailor STATELY
08-25-2023, 04:34 PM
Enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: ancient, curtain, bliss, lake, rhododendron, obtain
a white rhododendron
a white rhododendron
graces my garden entrance
obtained by monks anciently
and planted in the dead of night
unawares to me -
draw back the curtains of time
when bliss was
punting on a sylvan lake
gathering water lilies
at dusk with my beloved -
after centuries she wearied
of the paradise we had made
and sought to converse with man
and was lost -
my grief was inconsolable
my wrath barely held in check
when word came to me of her demise
- and so the white flower of
the rhododendron serves
both as a warning to others
and a reminder of my beloved
lost to the end of time
8/25/2023
Next: scythe, coins, poppy, laugh, timing, abode
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-25-2023, 10:09 PM
Enjoyed this flower legend!
Challenge accepted!
Danik 2016
08-26-2023, 09:59 AM
Next: scythe, coins, poppy, laugh, timing, abode
Harvest
Draw the scythe through a dubious time
Harvest coins, poppies,
the chirping of birds
but above all laughter!
Don´t just abide in your abode
but go in quest
of the flowers of the season!
Next: moon, slanting, hope, nettles, justly, run.
tailor STATELY
08-26-2023, 03:03 PM
Wonderful ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-27-2023, 07:51 AM
Challenge: moon, slanting, hope, nettles, justly, run
imbalanced nature
nettles sting a young
sleek jaguarundi
unjustly as it
uncharacteristically
hunts under a full moon
full of hope it seeks
surprise over creatures
less wary, active at night -
yet it encounters
even easier quarry
a slanting ramp leads to
quiescent chickens and
pandemonium ensues -
a plump hen yields
to a snap! and just before
dogs and ranchers
commence to metastasize
the jaguarundi
disappears like a ghost into
the night with its prize
8/27/2023
Next: lichen, forest, silence, chameleon, twilight, glass
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-27-2023, 11:14 PM
Poor hen! Some unusual images :)."dogs and ranchers metastasize ","quiescent chickens."
Down in the forest..,
Down in the forest
the chameleon enjoys
the silent presence
of the lichen.
In the twilight
the lake's surface
is a mirror of glass.
:
Next:avowal, sunshine, continent, part,likewise, meanwhile.
tailor STATELY
08-28-2023, 12:18 AM
Thanx ! (sorry about the chxn)
Wonderful minimalism... Enjoyed ! "the chameleon enjoys / the silent presence / of the lichen" :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: avowal, sunshine, continent, part, likewise, meanwhile
a lasting testimony
an avowal of the truth, a lasting testimony
such are the mighty words of Moroni -
meanwhile, likewise, all in all, and in part
they spread over each varied continent
scattered like sunshine with all they portent
8/28/2023
Next: agile, cockatoo, shine, soup, tears, paradox
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-28-2023, 08:51 AM
re: ;)
Lol!Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Next: agile, cockatoo, shine, soup, tears, paradox
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cockatoo
Danik 2016
08-28-2023, 09:57 PM
Baby Cockatoo
Baby cockatoo was in tears!
He didn't want soup
he wanted to shine
as the most agile bird
and the one with the biggest crest.
Mother cockatoo pondered on
the paradoxes of life:
her baby's crest
was still so very small
and as for being agile
it was so clumsy!
Next:ferry boat, sounds,waterfront, whisper, marginal, dawn.
tailor STATELY
08-29-2023, 02:01 AM
Lol... Cute :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: ferry boat, sounds, waterfront, whisper, marginal, dawn
waterfront sounds
waterfront sounds
before the dawn
marginal at best
tidewater lapping shores
seagulls
empty ferry boats
whispering to each other
8/29/2023
Next: gaze, power, enlightenment, eclipse, super moon, fireball
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-29-2023, 08:33 AM
Charming poem!
Challenge accepted!
Next: gaze, power, enlightenment, eclipse, super moon, fireball
Danik 2016
08-29-2023, 11:04 PM
Night Sky
When our forefathers
gazed at the sky
before Enlightenment
they were just delighted
with the profusion of stars.
The sky today is more scientific
than romantic.
Who still moons under the moon?
Powerfull telescopes
show a sky behind the sky:
super moons, unidentified fireballs
black holes and milky ways
eclipse the modest performances
of ancient times .
But mankind
will never disclose
all its mysteries.
Next: limelight, thunder, entranced, wisdom, lily, erratic.
tailor STATELY
08-30-2023, 12:12 AM
Enjoyed ! There will always be some mystery :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: limelight, thunder, entranced, wisdom, lily, erratic
gilding the lily
there are they
who gild the lily
of Christendom
entranced by the
thunder and
not His reign
comes the stolen
limelight that they
embrace - the
erraticism of
so called wisdom
8/30/2023
Next: vision, songbird, arrange, glow, synergy, change
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-31-2023, 08:32 AM
(What happened to my answer from yesterday? Did I forget to click on the reply button?)
re:True enough!
The invisible choir
Ever had the vision of
a choir of songbirds?
Me neither,
cause they arrange themselves
on the hidden branches
of the trees.
Yet the air resounds,
with the glowing synergy
of their small but powerful voices.
May that secret picture never change!
Next: bush, road, lost, archer, wander, intrinsic.
tailor STATELY
08-31-2023, 01:28 PM
Wonderful ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: bush, road, lost, archer, wander, intrinsic
archers in the midst
intrinsic to the road we wander
is wonder
beating the bushes metaphorically
for færies
and djinns, dragons, archers, and
plunder - lost
is our zeal for life if when in the
forest we
neither regard nor embrace the trees
8/31/2023
Next: quest, lift, strange, rainbow, riverbank, cloister
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-31-2023, 10:50 PM
Synthetic and wise!
Challenge accepted!
But no...
A challenging quest
Uplifting spirits dancing in the morning brise
Inviting riverbanks
Strakes of rainbow music
No!
Just a view of
a strange,
monumental
cloister.
Next:radar, phantom, hostage, grim, mobbing, trance.
tailor STATELY
09-01-2023, 12:08 AM
Ominous toned poem... enjoyed :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: radar, phantom, hostage, grim, mobbing,, trance
ravens in the midst
a super blue moon shines down where
a keen eyed phantom with black wings
and radar redundancy seeks a hostage,
a victim, to entrance and feed upon -
when ravens come mobbing grim in
their resolve to defend the skies - harry-
ing the phantom into skulking away
9/1/2023
Next: horse, prestige, sleep, kinship, wind, fantasy
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-01-2023, 11:15 PM
Lol!Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Pegasus
When he races through the firmament
he is the fastest
horse ever.
He doesn't know any sleep.
People believe
in his kinship with the wind.
He enjoys worldwide prestige.
Next:lighthouse, predator, afterglow, kindred, seed,soar.
tailor STATELY
09-03-2023, 06:38 AM
Enjoyed ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: lighthouse, predator, afterglow, kindred, seed, soar
pea soup fog
pea soup fog has rolled in from offshore
predators and prey hunkering down watch
a lighthouse bathed in its afterglow as
it booms out a warning with its foghorn.
kindred moonseed and nightshade become
fog harps catching droplets of moisture
which drip-drip into the thirsty sandy soil.
shore birds who would otherwise soar
circle short distances or land wandering
noisily by the shore restricted by the
foggy low ceiling until the fog lifts again.
9/3/2023
Next: aubergine, crescent, crystal, manor, portico, kitten
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-03-2023, 10:02 AM
Loved the fog description!
Challenge accepted!
Next: aubergine, crescent, crystal, manor, portico, kitten
Danik 2016
09-03-2023, 08:56 PM
Night scene
Crescent crystal moon.
Manor house with portico.
Solemn grandeur!
But for the kitten,
white moving flake
in the dark
attacking an innocent aubergine
on the silvery lawn.
Next:dewdrops, Aurora, tent, jingle, valiant, ensemble.
tailor STATELY
09-04-2023, 04:19 AM
Lol ! Brilliant solution! Enjoyed very much :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: dewdrops, Aurora, tent, jingle, valiant, ensemble
butterfly pea flower tea
existential keys jingle from an ensemble of
valiant Aeons creating far distant stars - the
resultant shimmering bringing forth Auroræ
in a heavenly dance that glisten upon dewdrops
collecting on poppies to the delight of færies
who harvest the rarified celestial dews for an
early twilight's vibrant butterfly pea flower tea
9/4/2023
Next: basin, exotic, hyperbole, closer, robin, breeze
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-04-2023, 01:09 PM
lol! Enjoyed the butterfly pea flower tea. Is there a tent hidden anywhere?
Challenge accepted!
Next: basin, exotic, hyperbole, closer, robin, breeze
tailor STATELY
09-04-2023, 03:42 PM
yes... albeit existential :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-04-2023, 10:52 PM
re: I see!,;)
Hyperbolic
A single
singing robin
sailing in
the breeze
hypothetically,
comes
closer
and
finally
dives
splashingly
into
that exotic
basin
as if
it had not
seen
any water
for the
last
three
months!
Next: lead, fruit, entrance, bear, wording, panels.
tailor STATELY
09-05-2023, 05:20 PM
Enjoyed ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: lead, fruit, entrance, bear, wording, panels
artful repurposing
repurposed wood panels made from
vintage fruit-
crates bearing colorful artwork and
artful wording
entrances ones imagination leading
to a rewarding
essence of joyful expression beyond
a mild dispute
https://lorabloomquist.com/easy-and-fun-ways-to-decorate-with-vintage-wooden-crates/
9/5/2023
Next: basket, fanciful, meander, closure, penny-farthing, riverside
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-05-2023, 11:15 PM
Charming poem, unexpected theme. Enjoyed the crates with artwork too. My bookshelf in my first apartment was made of crates without artwork. The problem with pinewood though is that it attracts insects that eat wood.
Challenge accepted!
Flower baskets
On the meanders
of the riverside,
near the closure,
you find these fanciful baskets
for a few farthings.
Visitors delight themselves
with the display of multicored flowers
and the delicate lace on the border
Next: ballad, storm, horses, plains, dragons, legendary.
tailor STATELY
09-06-2023, 12:32 AM
Enjoyed ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-06-2023, 10:40 AM
Challenge: ballad, storm, horses, plains, dragons, legendary
mediæval ragtime tanka
legendary the
ballads/lays of great dragons
battling valiant knights -
hors d'oeuvres served on stormy plains
whilst their stout horses were braised
9/6/2023
Next: transit, constellation, willow, compose, close, cavern
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-06-2023, 12:50 PM
Heard it so often!Newer knew that it was ragtime:[url]https:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PYrlKGYUcBM :)
Challenge accepted!
Next: transit, constellation, willow, compose, close, cavern
tailor STATELY
09-06-2023, 06:25 PM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh... the link is broken :( Using my imagination :)
Looking forward to your solution...
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-06-2023, 11:03 PM
Sorry! Replacing link tomorrow when on PC, as I have difficulty with copy and past on tablet. Anyway the piece is The Entertainer.
The Hermit
In a cavern
ciose to a willow tree
a hermit composes
a treaty on the transit
of the Centaur constellation.
Afar the stars shine indifferently
Next: salamander, rules, fire, adamant, hillside, interact
.
tailor STATELY
09-07-2023, 01:09 AM
Ah, yes... found this one: https://www.google.com/search?client=opera&q=The+Entertainer.+rag+time&sourceid=opera&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:9298580e,vid:PYrlKGYUcBM
Brought up to date as the theme to "The Sting" starring: Robert Redford and Paul Newman... great movie :)
Very nice: "Afar the stars shine indifferently". :)
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Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-07-2023, 06:46 AM
Challenge: salamander, rules, fire, adamant, hillside, interact
where have the salamanders gone ?
new rules ?
where have the salamanders gone ?
"fire lizards" were common
before the drought
not a good year for mantids neither
- nary a single one
nor rattlesnakes - but I'm adamantly
fine with that
but then I rarely venture up our hillside
nor down to the meadow nor ponds
much anymore to interact,
to explore -
such are rules that must
be broken
9/7/2023
Next: curious, fresh, logic, hour, tears, mandolin
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-07-2023, 09:39 AM
re: Thanks! Yes, that is the link!
Charming poem!The woodlouses one found in the gardens when I was a kid, seem to have disappeared too.
Challenged accepted!
Next: curious, fresh, logic, hour, tears, mandolin
Danik 2016
09-07-2023, 02:31 PM
Next: curious, fresh, logic, hour, tears, mandolin
The (un)logic of tears
Have you ever been curious
about the phenomena of tears?
Some people weep easily,
others remain dry eyed
even at the most
tearing events.
There are those
that are moved to tears
at the sweet sound
of a mandolin,
at a intense movie scene
or the antics of a child or
a small animal,
yet remain frozen eyed
at a funeral.
The secret working
of tears
is a mystery
to this hour.
Next: wagon, gossip, tide, swans, anthem, lovely.
tailor STATELY
09-08-2023, 03:59 AM
Brilliant! Love your poem :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-08-2023, 08:11 AM
Challenge: wagon, gossip, tide, swans, anthem, lovely
our swansong
how lovely were the little moments
gossiping about nothingness
perhaps an anthem for the times
since time and tide wait for no one
we hitched our wagon to the stars
this to be our swansong
9/8/2023
Next: comfort, gamut, portrait, showers, able, dance
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-08-2023, 09:28 PM
Beautiful poem, hope though that the swansong is only poetic and that the swans are all well and kicking.
Challenge accepted!
Confort gamut,
lost streaks of rainbow.
Portrait of a lady,
A colorful,
sleepy and slopy hillside.
Clouds dancing overhead
enable showers.
The world has become
a small place
wrapped for present
in a curtain of water.
Next:chess, entertainment, softly, platform, weird, timeless.
tailor STATELY
09-09-2023, 06:06 AM
Beautiful imagery... enjoyed very much :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: chess, entertainment, softly, platform, weird, timeless
Games
Perhaps it's weird in these Latter-days -
entertainment platforms for gaming is not
my forte; chess is more my idea of timeless
warfare with a side of "Risk" or "Stratego"
or dimpleboarded marble checkers, not the
American checkers - not that I get to play
much of anything any more he softly sighed
Scrabble or Yahtzee are fond memories
Dabbling with backgammon without really
understanding its nuances was a short lived
diversion - it's classic board games for me
Where the entertainment platforms shine
is the endless streaming possibilities...
why, for less than $1000.00 USD per month
one can access the entirety of archived
drivel available for mind-numbing binge
watching - and I've done it too, to a much
lesser extent: another opioid for the masses
Perhaps government has got it all wrong with
caring for our homeless: spending billions
of dollars on planning commissions and feas-
ibility studies with an endgame strategy of
getting absolutely nothing constructively done
other than lining the pockets of the privileged
... such are the games we play
9/9/2023
Next: locus, prism, bonsai, clock, cards, ficus
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-09-2023, 09:05 AM
Enjoyed the poem even not knowing most games mentioned. The connection with politics is opportune and sigh familiar.
Challenge accepted!
Next: locus, prism, bonsai, clock, cards, ficus
Danik 2016
09-09-2023, 10:07 PM
Musings
The locus of the ficus
is more than a wordplay.
What's on the cards
for the bonsai?
Viewed through
the prism of time,
cards and clocks
point at the future.
Next:tournament, variant, buffalo, direct, insect, environment.
tailor STATELY
09-10-2023, 01:16 AM
Enjoyed the word play :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-11-2023, 05:08 AM
Challenge: tournament, variant, buffalo, direct, insect, environment
savanna provenance
young bucks tilting
at life tournaments
for dominance
dung, and more dung
buffalo chips
a direct impact on
the environment of
the savanna -
nutrients and
atmosphere
insects in their
variant forms
drone
9/11/2023
Next: adamant, winter, direct, thought, swag, blink
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-11-2023, 08:57 AM
Enjoyed the savanna tournaments!
Challenge accepted!
Next: adamant, winter, direct, thought, swag, blink
Danik 2016
09-11-2023, 10:15 PM
Winter Zero Grade
Winter that year was adamant.
Snow kept falling directly and
continuously
on rooftops and roadsides.
The white landscape made anyone blink
that ventured on the streets.
Yet the taverns where full.
The guests drank to keep warm,
at least they thought this a good excuse,
and went swaggering home.
Next:festival, barn, leaves, track, intense, fragments.
tailor STATELY
09-12-2023, 01:45 AM
Enjoyed ! "The guests drank to keep warm, / at least they thought this a good excuse, / and went swaggering home."
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-12-2023, 10:29 PM
Challenge: festival, barn, leaves, track, intense, fragments
progress
down the beaten track of time
fragments of memories of a barn
where festivals were once held
where when one left they left
with the one who brought them
down the beaten track of time
all intense and purposeless
leaves jostled with the wind
in the fall before the developers
came and bulldozed it all down
9/12/2023
Next: iris, needle, pears, pensive, tinsel, shrug
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-13-2023, 09:51 AM
Enjoyed this nostalgic poem!:)
Challenge accepted!
Next: iris, needle, pears, pensive, tinsel, shrug
Danik 2016
09-13-2023, 11:21 PM
Tints and Tinsel
Pensively
shrugging off
the waste words:
gossip, garbage,ghettos, gutters..
Welcoming the saving words:
iris, needles, cloudless skies!
Certainly pears!
Certainly peace!
Next:amorphous, way, discover, deer, meadows, undertones
tailor STATELY
09-15-2023, 03:55 AM
Enjoyed! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: amorphous, way, discover, deer, meadows, undertones
amorphous undertones
amorphous undertones
the way of the deer
in high mountain meadows
where God would have us walk
in discovery without fear
9/15/2023
Next: refine, tireless, crypt, retinue, palm, magnetic
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-16-2023, 10:04 AM
Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Next: refine, tireless, crypt, retinue, palm, magnetic
(Sorry!I wrote but forgot posting the answer above yesterday)
So here goes:
The life of a poem
The tireless retinue
of refined words
encrypted by time
materialize
magnetically
on the palm
of your hand
Little fairies, pucks, djinns
your fingers move them
ever so softly.
They have something
to say,
to show,
to imply,
above all
to encrypt again,
to sink again
into
the vast oblivion of time
until summoned forth
again!
Next: Autumn, colors, birds, squirrels, blossom, heartily.
tailor STATELY
09-17-2023, 12:58 AM
Wonderful poem! Enjoyed very much :) Perhaps "vast" for "wast".
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: Autumn, colors, birds, squirrels, blossom, heartily
Autumn cannot come too soon
Autumn cannot come too soon
the colors we so warmly desire
goldens, yellows, and browns
supplant the vibrant blossoms
heartily hoped for in Spring
and sustained in most part to
delight squirrels and birds
9/17/2023
Next: essence, majestic, hummingbird, ballet, flame, thirst
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-17-2023, 09:12 AM
Thanks for the correction, tailor!
AAIII! :)
I also prefer Autumn to Spring!
Challenge accepted!
Next: essence, majestic, hummingbird, ballet, flame, thirst
Danik 2016
09-17-2023, 08:16 PM
The essential ballet
quenches our thirst
for art,
for the gracious movement.
Dance has
the lightness of a hummingbird,
the intensity of a flame,
the majesty of a princess.
Next:storm, sun, Neptune, tortoises,flow, evolve.
tailor STATELY
09-18-2023, 08:28 AM
Brilliant!: "the lightness of a hummingbird, / the intensity of a flame, / the majesty of a princess." Enjoyed very much :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: storm, sun, Neptune, tortoises, flow, evolve
Red Dawn on Triton
Red dawn, a storm was brewing -
massive creatures, akin to
tortoises, evolved from a
teeming blue planet destroyed
in the red giant expansion,
sought refuge in hospitable seas
Effortlessly they flowed through
waving blue fronds in the
effervescent fluidity common
to the massive moon Triton
revolving the 5th planet from
the sun - Neptune
Storms were welcome - they
stirred up creatures from the
depths which in turn attracted
mariner bipeds to venture out
from the firmaments they called
home - easy prey once capsized
9/18/2023
Next: winter, relinquish, boulevard, scurry, windows, inspired
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-18-2023, 09:05 AM
Impressive saga!Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Next: winter, relinquish, boulevard, scurry, windows, inspired
Winter at 33º
Thor in wrath at earth's destruction
has relinquished all his control
on temperature.
in the cities, boulevards
That used to glitter under the sun
loaded with the liveliness of people,
now groan deserted under the weight of snow.
In the forests little animals scurry
through and fro
not knowing where to hide
from fire, frost and flood.
Yet there is still
much uninspired,
passive,
looking out of
windows,
with the secret hope
that the moment of destruction
will pass just by itself
at a snap of fingers.
It won´t!
Next: tiles, wonder, infancy, realms, explode, round.
tailor STATELY
09-19-2023, 08:05 PM
Yes, winters have been very unforgiving lately. Enjoyed! :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-20-2023, 07:50 AM
Challenge: tiles, wonder, infancy, realms, explode, round
"We cannot even recollect the actions of our infancy, our childhood is like something written on a slate and rubbed off." - Vinoba Bhave
upon a blank slate
what a wonder infancy is -
a time very few remember
'round about age zero, in the
western canon, an exchange
of realms occurs as a being,
or beings, transitions
from womb to cradle and
feedings and cleanings
and hoped for sleepings
an intimate dependency
upon parenting commences
involving all six senses
cooing, cuddling, and making
faces embracing all of God's
graces enshrined with love
milestone after milestone
pass by in a blur and soon
a personality blooms
unique to the universe
a mobile explorer under foot
exploding with laughter or
tantrums where anything
within reach become projec-
tiles at a babbling whim
9/20/2023
Next: mosaic, persist, harmony, vision, thirst, canvas
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-21-2023, 07:38 AM
Cute and ingenious!
Challenge accepted!
Next: mosaic, persist, harmony, vision, thirst, canvas
A vision
It seems
we have lost
our thirst of harmony
celebrated on canvas.
Though some of
the aim at perfection
still persists,
all we have got,
it's a picture broken in mosaics.
Next: veiled, phantom,elude, mighty, spineless,interlude.
tailor STATELY
09-22-2023, 09:42 AM
"a picture broken in mosaics" - a sad tableau... Enjoyed! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: veiled, phantom, elude, mighty, spineless, interlude
that interlude 'twixt dusk and dawn
that interlude
'twixt dusk and dawn
phantoms of the night
spineless apparitions
veiled from view
elude the mighty hale
of heart and mind
to prey upon the
downtrodden drawn
to the hopelessness
of the homeless and
poorest of mankind
9/22/2023
Next: shrike, beauty, thrilling, metaphor, spice, fog
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-22-2023, 02:54 PM
"that interlude 'twixt dusk and dawn". Sad and impressive!Enjoyed!
Challenge accepted!
Next: shrike, beauty, thrilling, metaphor, spice, fog
Metaphors
There certainly are
spicy metaphors of beauty
Venus with or without arms.
exuberant flowers
gorgeous birds.
But nothing thrilling about
the diminutive but cruel shrike.
His colors shine modestly
through the thick fog
of representation.
Next:interlude, radio, satellite, voice,history, pregnant.
tailor STATELY
09-22-2023, 11:18 PM
Enjoyed very much - "the diminutive but cruel shrike. / His colors shine modestly / through the thick fog / of representation" :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: interlude, radio, satellite, voice, history, pregnant
fellow traveler: October 4, 1957
a pregnant pause ensued
an historic interlude
when on radios and tellies
worldwide a somber voice
proclaimed a satellite
innocently named Sputnik
had been deployed hurtling
unseen in orbit ratcheting
up the Cold War tensions
several frisson notches
9/23/2023
Next: polarize, blissful, silence, methodic, starlight, passers-by
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-23-2023, 08:18 AM
Enjoyed this historic poem!
Challenge accepted!
Next: polarize, blissful, silence, methodic, starlight, passers-by
En passant
Let´s not polarize opinions, rumors,shrill shrieks
Let´s enjoy the blissful silence
and appreciate the methodical starlight
that every night bathes the world.
Aren´t we just passers-by?
Next: lines, thorough, keys, endow, waterfront, luminous.
tailor STATELY
09-23-2023, 04:31 PM
Wonderful poem and title :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-24-2023, 04:44 AM
Challenge: lines, thorough, keys, endow, waterfront, luminous
music once played brightly
ghostliness pervades
a waterfront once graced
thoroughly luminous
with bright halogen lights
endowed further at times
with a full moon which
harbored no monkeyshines
whilst a jazz festival played
much to the delight of
music purist and tagalongs
now gone but for memories
9/24/2023
Next: swarm, exotic, skeleton, poetry, dance, twilight
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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