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    Auntie's April 2012 Thread: 30 Poems in 30 Days

    30 Poems in Thirty Days



    Because yer ol' Auntie is completely insane, but mainly because it is once again National Poetry Month, I have challenged myself to produce a poem a day for thirty days. This represents a break from my usual m.o., since it usually takes me days, if not weeks, to produce something halfway fit for human consumption. Not only that, I can't guarantee the continued health of this computer, not less the looming specter of other factors which may prevent me from using it at all, still I'm going to give it the decades-out-of-college try.

    Before someone reminds me that it's April 2, not the first, I'll add that I am aware of today's date. Didn't start yesterday though, and not just because of a technical glitch. I was afraid LitNutters would think it was an April Fool's joke. There are two offerings today, though, which keeps me on track.

    For now.


    April 1
    Poetry Month

    Again it’s April, time to write in verse.
    It makes me anxious that I can’t rehearse
    these feeble lines, which genius makes look worse.

    In literary light they fall to shame,
    with excellence exceeding fickle fame.
    Unworthy am I to mention the name

    of Chaucer, whom time never could discard;
    nor less the birth and death day of the Bard,
    both on the twenty-third. It’s also hard

    with Browning’s fond longing for England’s cool
    clime in the month great Eliot found cruel.
    But I’ll try it anyway, like a fool.


    Take the National Poetry Month Challenge!
    Last edited by AuntShecky; 04-03-2012 at 03:18 PM.

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    April 2--"The Trout"

    April 2
    The Trout

    Between the rocks
    a silver
    rainbow
    flash

    above
    the clear
    and churning
    water’s
    splash,

    it moves
    along
    the swollen,
    silvan brook

    beyond
    the human
    babbling, and
    the hook.

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    A noble and ambitious quest Auntie! Two accomplished offerings which are both pleasurable to peruse. I like them both equally well, not that I wouldn't be able to suggest some minor, presumptuous tweaks and alterations - but I shall refrain

    Keep up the good work! (Somebody has to - LOL)

    Live and be well - H

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    Excellent challenge. Good Luck!
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    Go Auntie!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Good poems Auntie. I like how you've started with a poem about poets.

    It looks like April will be a fruitful month.

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    April the third
    the last that was heard.

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Two brilliant pieces to read Aunt! Very well done!
    A great idea indeed!
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    April the third
    the last that was heard.
    Is that your very own Jerrybaldy?
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    April 3- "The Crocus"

    Thanks, fellow LitNutters, for your encourging words! Here's April 3, JerryB:

    April 3

    The Crocus

    Forget about
    the oligarch
    and those whose
    boots would stomp
    upon our will.

    Instead submit
    to anarchy,
    the kind
    that lets
    our spirits soar.

    Kneel down
    and take
    a loving look

    at the little
    purple spikes
    conquering
    the shifting ground.

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    April 4- "Gehenna's Child"

    April 4

    Gehenna’s Child

    My Irish ma, devout and proud,
    who cherished chalices and The Shroud,
    would set aside each Holy Day
    as one more reason we should pray.

    “Spy Wednesday” * in the last week of Lent–
    oh my-- what sinful thoughts that sent:
    like cloaks and daggers, furtive feints,
    state secrets not among the saints.

    Hypocrisy was what she meant,
    but I, intrigued, could not repent.

    *Matthew xxiii: 3-5, 4-16

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    What a treat!

    Thanks, Aunt.
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    I was thinking today Auntie that you are following the tradition of invoking the poetic spirits of inspiration in your first poem. Excellent stuff. Looks like it's working.

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    Apart from the several excellences of these I'm mightily impressed by the variety of voices/form in which you've witten thus far. But what does it mean that you've presented us with April 4 a day ahead of time?

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    Quote Originally Posted by PrinceMyshkin View Post
    But what does it mean that you've presented us with April 4 a day ahead of time?
    It only means that since I lack the foreknowledge of what may happen on any given day or how Pong 3.0 might choose to behave, I'm working "ahead" when I can to have a cushion so I won't fall too far behind.

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