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    02-22-2018, 07:19 PM
    Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Shadowlight in Personal Poetry
    Felt it was written in the constraints of the required rhyme. It’s always an issue if the rhyme or the message is at the helm.
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    02-22-2018, 07:15 PM
    You are much better than this MM. Hope you take that in the spirit it’s intended.
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    02-19-2018, 07:13 PM
    Jerrybaldy started a thread The Brave. in Personal Poetry
    The vodka and the pills With no more bills Those who cut vertical Hang from a bough Or the balustrade To the people who suddenly Step from...
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    02-18-2018, 07:18 PM
    I am exactly where I put myself As wealthy or as poor as I made myself I broke my own heart And nose Chose to choose who hurt me, If I should...
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    02-15-2018, 07:34 PM
    Jerrybaldy started a thread Tea. in Personal Poetry
    I stir my tea in the morning Rearranging the universe, Swirling planets and stars And time, afloat in Assam, Earl Grey, Lapsang souchon. When...
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    02-14-2018, 07:33 PM
    Jerrybaldy started a thread Fish supper in Personal Poetry
    On an English beach In a February freezing Salty f uck off wind There are rocks With whelks and mussels And stuff clinging on And I’m...
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    02-14-2018, 06:46 PM
    Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Four Ones in Personal Poetry
    Was every line never a Slave to the rhyme?
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    02-14-2018, 06:44 PM
    Tony. I enjoyed but feel you got bogged down in the literal memory of this. The opening was poetic then became more diary entry. Nothing I wouldn’t...
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    02-14-2018, 06:30 PM
    Jerrybaldy started a thread Secret wish in Personal Poetry
    I don’t have hair where I’d like it People don’t find me as funny as I hoped they would I must surely be misunderstood And bald I’m unique...
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    02-14-2018, 06:13 PM
    Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Familiar in Personal Poetry
    Thanks Kiz. You keep popping up and thanks tailor for your indefatigable following you madman ��
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    02-14-2018, 06:10 PM
    Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Familiar in Personal Poetry
    Thank you. Tony the last line refers back to the second line. Cyclical.
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    02-10-2018, 09:09 PM
    Jerrybaldy started a thread Familiar in Personal Poetry
    I can hear a familiar tune It’s The Eagles or The Byrds Or something. I can hear birds When there are none And see dusk when it’s the dawn ...
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    02-08-2018, 07:35 PM
    I love you with all my heart Every leaking ventricle, The caked up arteries Like sugar lined Tunnels of love, The heaving sexuality Of the...
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    02-08-2018, 06:21 PM
    Jerrybaldy replied to a thread Sinking feeling in Personal Poetry
    Great writing Dieter. Particularly appreciated the link from two to three. I don’t read much anymore but glad I read this
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    02-03-2018, 08:56 PM
    She felt the same as me And he felt the same as me And we felt the same together, As solid as Ashford and Simpson We began again and began...
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    01-30-2018, 07:42 PM
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    HB JB *dirty martini*

    in your honor http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?84017-Happy-birthday-Jerrybaldy!&p=1312294#post1312294

    ok "honour" because its your birthday
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    well, if it returns... but you know, I'm mother-tongueless.

    Us: of course, only one person in the poem/bed. just my Freudian (or pseudo) speculation. and, once both are dead, that person is free to make a great encounter. Tenessy's "Come to the garden, Maud" then came to my mind, paraphrazed. perhaps my head is too complicated.

    cheers! and thxs for yr words of welcome!
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    Like to read your poetry. Mine is dead. I survived... dull. xxx
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    Mrs??? When did that happen?
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    New Haunted posting alert
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    Hey Jerry, could you go check out General Chat section? Thanks!
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