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    "I Love You"

    "I love you"
    only needs one breath

    "I love you"
    can hold even less

    "I love you"
    is easy
    because it tells you that it was all a nightmare
    and now you're awake
    and dreaming

    "I love you"
    makes me forget,
    but one day I'll remember.
    And when I do
    and you look at me twice
    and ask what's wrong,
    I'll just give you a sigh
    Only one sigh
    Only one breath.

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    I love you. To me these words always have weigh, even if the poem lacks such depth.
    Last edited by Buh4Bee; 05-23-2013 at 09:35 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    I love you. To me these words always have weigh, even if the poem lacks such depth.
    Very good point.

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