The Blank Sheet

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Originally Posted by E.A Rumfield

You gave me an idea. Literally copulating with the poem.

****ing with the poem
a mutual masturbation
I fill her up, with my words
gentle yet stern
and she gives me release
****ing with the poem
when I'm done
I wipe off on the sheet

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How old are you?

I liked it Rumfield. Don't stop writing. Experience will give weight to your words. Life can make a person feel lonely and isolated. Unlike some of the other readers, I liked the last line. Many of us have probably read that same line before, so it can seem like a cliche. The feeling behind the line isn't a cliche though, it's heartbreaking. We hear you here, and I hope you'll continue to share your works with us.

Nice scrap.Would like to read some of your professional poetry.

Don't like the porn version. All subtlety and ambiguity has gone.

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Originally Posted by Varenne Rodin

I liked it Rumfield. Don't stop writing. Experience will give weight to your words. Life can make a person feel lonely and isolated. Unlike some of the other readers, I liked the last line. Many of us have probably read that same line before, so it can seem like a cliche. The feeling behind the line isn't a cliche though, it's heartbreaking. We hear you here, and I hope you'll continue to share your works with us.

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Thank you. All I can do is keep writing, I love it. The ability to put yourself into words is something I truly strive towards. I've been writing for about a year and a half and I remember when I first started writing and why.

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Originally Posted by hallaig

Don't like the porn version. All subtlety and ambiguity has gone.

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Haha it was just a joke.