Nice going there, Alex, a wonderful poem and deserving of the win!
Nice going there, Alex, a wonderful poem and deserving of the win!
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
Yeh, well done Alex, particularly as there was so much competition for this one.
H
Great job Alex! :]
"O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
-Louis Aragon
Well done Alex,
English my native language and have characterizes of dyslexia.
Copyright (C) 2011, Zoolane
I have pass by English Exam.
Thank you darkmuse and everyone else, sorry it took me so long to respond, This contest had completely slipped my mind. I have the next picture ready.
THE LADIES’ EXCUSE ME
You are my darling, sweetest girl,
A bud I’m longing to unfurl.
Such delicate décolletage,
In pink rose-petal camouflage.
Those blushing lips, those languid eyes…..
You look a trifle tranquilised;
These surgeon’s hands, my skill, my guile,
Rewarded by your touch, your smile
I can’t believe my future bride
Had skin resembling walrus hide;
To think these biceps once were scarred
With hearts and anchors by the yard
Your long, dark hair with silken sheen
Once shaven short, my ex-Marine,
A perfect Boticelli Venus
Now you’ve gone and lost that penis
Forget the funny looks and smirks
From all those narrow-minded jerks
We’ll soon be man and wife, my dear…..
Is that a rumba I can hear?
H :-)
*sigh* Hillwalker, after reading "I Hope They Serve Beer in Hell" compounded on your well worded poem and that chin... I'm gonna be stuck thinking post op transvestite the whole time I'm thinking about what to write. This is gonna be rough. Well played sir. Well played.
Great entry Hillwalker. it's not often I laugh out loud.
I didn't post in the last competition as my ideas didn't gel - the entries were great though. Well done Alex.
The standard is high again...
Fatale Seduction
Her beauty rivaled with the night
alive with the passion burning through
her hyacinth eyes.
A crimson rose, she defies
to be denied as her presence
filled the room leaving a wake
of lingering French perfume.
The epitome of debonair,
her laughter a sirens song,
and her charms cast a
hypnotic spell.
Secrets lived upon her smiles
which left you with a hunger
for a taste of what she knew.
And when she danced
her body moved as subtle
as a serpent with those
entrancing undulations.
It should have been as clear
as a Black Widow's hour glass,
but once she set you in her sight
there was no where left to run hide.
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
Memories, Once Over Lightly
We moved together
to the music of the soul
I thought you'd always be there
we could share growing old
But life has its ups and downs
The years fade memories into chance
I could have done without the heartache
But I still miss the dance
Pendragon
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
You are the reason I keep roses around
even after your perfume has left
its memory stained in the moon,
has left and taken the music along
off uptown, down on Broadmoor St.
to tour the Ritzier gentlemen.
I cannot afford you dear,
but I can afford roses.
Wow! What a flow, what spontaneousness!Originally Posted by hillwalker
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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As I glide with you,
across the floor.
With red glow enchanted your slender body.
My hand try touches your radiance soul.
Your soul float round the floor,
Passioned grow burn within me.
Twist and turn as flame,
fall into my arms, lover's home.
English my native language and have characterizes of dyslexia.
Copyright (C) 2011, Zoolane
I have pass by English Exam.
Tonight, we'll dance.
Put on your red dress, my darling
and flowers in your hair.
The age of godesses is gone
but you will take me there.
This night.
Put on your dancing suit, my dear
with your pearly bow
You look so charming
Such broad shoulders
Cary me all night long.
Tonight, we will not smile
Together
as one
Black hair
red lips
fingers like claws
We'll dance our dance
as dance we shall
the music calls
the floor invites
Lets forget there is a dawn.
It is not too late, to be wild for roundabouts - to be wild for life
Wolfsheim - It is not too late
Hmm this one required much thought but I think enough time has passed and a winner must be appointed.
My top two favorites were :
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Dark Muse !!!
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