old, raunchy lovenotes

[PrinceMyshkin]

Thank you, Jer
I didn't know if the beating off in the closet part was too much, but it's an image I wanted to portray...thanks for appreciating it lol!

love
kate

It seems my previous response to this was vaporized, maybe because I listed some of the available alternatives to "beating off," all of which I thought were either too clinical or smirky or cute.

[TheFifthElement]

This is an extraordinary poem paperleaves, it really carries, no drags the reader along, helplessly entranced. It manages to be at once vulnerable and powerful. Beautiful stuff.

[Scheherazade]

It seems my previous response to this was vaporized, maybe because I listed some of the available alternatives to "beating off," all of which I thought were either too clinical or smirky or cute.

If by "vaporized" you mean "deleted", no posts have been deleted in this thread.

[paperleaves]

thank you, fifth!