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    awww...i feel honored that you have my poems bookmarked!!!
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    awww...i feel honored that you have my poems bookmarked!!!
    Aw! I feel honored that you feel honored

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    ....i feel honored that you feel honored that i feel honored!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    ....i feel honored that you feel honored that i feel honored!!
    And I feel honored that you feel honored that I feel honored that you feel honored!! .... Where's this gonna end, in a madhouse?

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    Jot, spot, jot spot,
    I enjoyed both of these.
    And I hope that writing them,
    the first one especially,
    did help to ease your pain.

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    ...right now...it ends, okay i get that we both feel honored....madhouse indeed!!
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    Falling....

    the thrill of the wild pounding in your chest,
    of having your head filled with daydreams,
    to see that someone special everyday,
    with anticipation of the next day,

    "oh what will he think?"
    "oh what will she think?"
    you don't know what to think when they're here,
    but perfectly clear when they disappear...

    what will you do when you can't stop,
    when all your mind is filled with is images?
    when you finally realize that you are falling...


    this was on another thread, but still mine...what do you think?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    ...right now...it ends, okay i get that we both feel honored....madhouse indeed!!
    Okay!
    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    the thrill of the wild pounding in your chest,
    of having your head filled with daydreams,
    to see that someone special everyday,
    with anticipation of the next day,

    "oh what will he think?"
    "oh what will she think?"
    you don't know what to think when they're here,
    but perfectly clear when they disappear...

    what will you do when you can't stop,
    when all your mind is filled with is images?
    when you finally realize that you are falling...


    this was on another thread, but still mine...what do you think?
    Cutie, supreme, outstanding and meaningful!
    Thought about anyone special as an inspiration?

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    ...maaaybe!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    ...maaaybe!
    uh, huh!!! Gotcha!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maximilianus View Post
    uh, huh!!! Gotcha!
    oh no! i'm caught!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    oh no! i'm caught!
    one lucky schoolmate maybe?

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    maybe...okay, yes, he is...thoughi won't be able to see him for another month...summer vaca can be a pain sometimes!!!

    how about you? any girl inspire you to write poetry?
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    I Just Can't Live Without You

    here's one of my favorites that i posted a while back...

    this is a poem i made up a while back....(it's a sonnet)


    Roses are redder than daisies of white,
    You are my bright and shining light,
    Violets are bluer than the deep blue sea,
    I just can't live without you,can't you see?

    As the days of my life become longer,
    My love for you becomes rapidly stronger,
    And if my life decided to go on?
    I would just have to drag you along.
    I just can't live without you, can't you see?
    You are the only one who can complete me.

    In you gentle hands is where my heart lay,
    And there is only one thing left to say...
    I just can't live without you, can't you see?
    I just hope one day you, too, can say you love me.

    whaddya think?
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    maybe...okay, yes, he is...thoughi won't be able to see him for another month...summer vaca can be a pain sometimes!!!

    how about you? any girl inspire you to write poetry?
    All ladies inspire me somehow, though I haven't found a specific one... yet
    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    here's one of my favorites that i posted a while back...

    this is a poem i made up a while back....(it's a sonnet)


    Roses are redder than daisies of white,
    You are my bright and shining light,
    Violets are bluer than the deep blue sea,
    I just can't live without you,can't you see?

    As the days of my life become longer,
    My love for you becomes rapidly stronger,
    And if my life decided to go on?
    I would just have to drag you along.
    I just can't live without you, can't you see?
    You are the only one who can complete me.

    In you gentle hands is where my heart lay,
    And there is only one thing left to say...
    I just can't live without you, can't you see?
    I just hope one day you, too, can say you love me.

    whaddya think?
    Wow, that feeling's strong enough! I wish I had a lady writing about me that way!
    Is he aware of it?

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