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    Farewell/goodbye Poems, Anybody?

    Does anybody have any ideas for a goodbye poem?
    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    In

    this extraordinary world,

    With

    this extraordinary girl,

    -Surely, surely I’d die.

    She

    is this ball of fire,

    Walking the world with herself.

    -Surely she has to be mine.

    She

    doesn’t know, though:

    Cancer

    has claimed her before me.

    -Surely, she will die.

    Marriage,

    she says to me,

    Works

    if love exists.

    -Love? For her, God I’ll defy.

    But she

    holds my hands,

    Chaining

    me to her post.

    -I can’t believe we’ll survive.

    Turning

    many unturned stones,

    Leafing

    up the sore spots.

    -’You didn’t have to lie.’

    Still

    she lay on her bed

    Died

    on the 3rd Sunday of June

    -A life gone horribly awry.

    Now

    on the beaches of some sea

    As

    the sun sets on mankind

    -Where the horizon passes idly by.

    I see

    Her good little girls

    And

    her good little boys

    -Waving goodbye.

    Goodbye!
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    With Leonard Cohen it's never sure where the distinction between song and poem lies... Therefore I'd like to mention:

    Hey, That's No Way To Say Goodbye

    I loved you in the morning, our kisses deep and warm,
    your hair upon the pillow like a sleepy golden storm,
    yes, many loved before us, I know that we are not new,
    in city and in forest they smiled like me and you,
    but now it's come to distances and both of us must try,
    your eyes are soft with sorrow,
    Hey, that's no way to say goodbye.
    I'm not looking for another as I wander in my time,
    walk me to the corner, our steps will always rhyme
    you know my love goes with you as your love stays with me,
    it's just the way it changes, like the shoreline and the sea,

    but let's not talk of love or chains and things we can't
    untie,
    your eyes are soft with sorrow,
    Hey, that's no way to say goodbye.
    I loved you in the morning, our kisses deep and warm,
    your hair upon the pillow like a sleepy golden storm,
    yes many loved before us, I know that we are not new,
    in city and in forest they smiled like me and you,
    but let's not talk of love or chains and things we can't
    untie,
    your eyes are soft with sorrow,
    Hey, that's no way to say goodbye

    And then there is of course this one by Spike Milligan

    Goodbye

    Go away girl, go away
    and let me pack my dreams
    Now where did I put those yesteryears
    made up with broken seams
    Where shall I sweep the pieces
    my God they still look new
    There's a taxi waiting at the door
    but there's only room for you

    I like that last one a lot Nice and short and full of meaning (yet not that hard to grasp)
    It is not too late, to be wild for roundabouts - to be wild for life
    Wolfsheim - It is not too late

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    This is not exactly a farewell poem but still one in some ways (and one of my favorites):

    We'll go no more a-roving

    SO, we'll go no more a-roving
    So late into the night,
    Though the heart be still as loving,
    And the moon be still as bright.

    For the sword outwears its sheath,
    And the soul wears out the breast,
    And the heart must pause to breathe,
    And love itself have rest.

    Though the night was made for loving,
    And the day returns too soon,
    Yet we'll go no more a-roving
    By the light of the moon.
    ~
    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
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    Farewell

    Farewell to thee! but not farewell
    To all my fondest thoughts of thee:
    Within my heart they still shall dwell;
    And they shall cheer and comfort me.
    O, beautiful, and full of grace!
    If thou hadst never met mine eye,
    I had not dreamed a living face
    Could fancied charms so far outvie.

    If I may ne'er behold again
    That form and face so dear to me,
    Nor hear thy voice, still would I fain
    Preserve, for aye, their memory.

    That voice, the magic of whose tone
    Can wake an echo in my breast,
    Creating feelings that, alone,
    Can make my tranced spirit blest.

    That laughing eye, whose sunny beam
    My memory would not cherish less; --
    And oh, that smile! whose joyous gleam
    Nor mortal language can express.

    Adieu, but let me cherish, still,
    The hope with which I cannot part.
    Contempt may wound, and coldness chill,
    But still it lingers in my heart.

    And who can tell but Heaven, at last,
    May answer all my thousand prayers,
    And bid the future pay the past
    With joy for anguish, smiles for tears?

    Anne Bronte


    THERE IS ALSO COLERIDGE'S "THE NIGHTINGALE"...IT IS SORT OF A FAREWELL SONG. KIND OF LONG SO I DID NOT WANT TO PASTE IT HERE.
    "All gods are homemade, and it is we who pull their strings, and so, give them the power to pull ours." -Aldous Huxley

    "Sooner murder an infant in its cradle than nurse unacted desires." -William Blake

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    How's this Pensy:

    Sonnet LXXXVII
    by William Shakespeare


    Farewell! thou art too dear for my possessing,
    And like enough thou knowst thy estimate.
    The Charter of thy worth gives thee releasing;
    My bonds in thee are all determinate.
    For how do I hold thee but by thy granting,
    And for that riches where is my deserving?
    The cause of this fair gift in me is wanting,
    And so my patent back again is swerving.
    Thy self thou gav’st, thy own worth then not knowing,
    Or me, to whom thou gav’st is, else mistaking,
    So thy great gift, upon misprision growing,
    Comes home again, on better judgement making.
    Thus have I had thee as a dream doth flatter:
    In sleep a king, but waking no such matter.
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

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    William Wordsworth

    TO A HIGHLAND GIRL


    (At Inversneyde, upon Loch Lomond)


    Sweet Highland Girl, a very shower
    Of beauty is thy earthly dower!
    Twice seven consenting years have shed
    Their utmost bounty on thy head:
    And these grey rocks; that household lawn;
    Those trees, a veil just half withdrawn;
    This fall of water that doth make
    A murmur near the silent lake;
    This little bay; a quiet road
    That holds in shelter thy Abode—
    In truth together do ye seem
    Like something fashioned in a dream;
    Such Forms as from their covert peep
    When earthly cares are laid asleep!
    But, O fair Creature! in the light
    Of common day, so heavenly bright,
    I bless Thee, Vision as thou art,
    I bless thee with a human heart;
    God shield thee to thy latest years!
    Thee, neither know I, nor thy peers;
    And yet my eyes are filled with tears.


    With earnest feeling I shall pray
    For thee when I am far away:
    For never saw I mien, or face,
    In which more plainly I could trace
    Benignity and home-bred sense
    Ripening in perfect innocence.
    Here scattered, like a random seed,
    Remote from men, Thou dost not need
    The embarrassed look of shy distress,
    And maidenly shamefacedness:
    Thou wear'st upon thy forehead clear
    The freedom of a Mountaineer:
    A face with gladness overspread!
    Soft smiles, by human kindness bred!
    And seemliness complete, that sways
    Thy courtesies, about thee plays;
    With no restraint, but such as springs
    From quick and eager visitings
    Of thoughts that lie beyond the reach
    Of thy few words of English speech:
    A bondage sweetly brooked, a strife
    That gives thy gestures grace and life!
    So have I, not unmoved in mind,
    Seen birds of tempest-loving kind—
    Thus beating up against the wind. ........

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    Thanks for the participation, guys! Even though none of the following exactly fits the criteria the poem I am looking for fits upon, nevertheless, it's always a pleasure to entertain one's self with such good pieces of poetry!

    Quote Originally Posted by Scheherazade View Post
    This is not exactly a farewell poem but still one in some ways (and one of my favorites):

    We'll go no more a-roving

    SO, we'll go no more a-roving
    So late into the night,
    Though the heart be still as loving,
    And the moon be still as bright.

    For the sword outwears its sheath,
    And the soul wears out the breast,
    And the heart must pause to breathe,
    And love itself have rest.

    Though the night was made for loving,
    And the day returns too soon,
    Yet we'll go no more a-roving
    By the light of the moon.
    'We will go no more a-rooving' and 'She Walks in Beauty' are two of my favourites by Lord Byron!

    Oh and here is my favourite farewell poem that I would like to share (though unfortunately it isn't the poem I require either):

    Ae fond kiss, and then we sever;
    Ae fareweel, alas, for ever!
    Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
    Warring sighs and groans I'll wage thee.
    Who shall say that Fortune grieves him,
    While the star of hope she leaves him?
    Me, nae cheerful twinkle lights me;
    Dark despair around benights me.

    I'll ne'er blame my partial fancy,
    Naething could resist my Nancy:
    But to see her was to love her;
    Love but her, and love for ever.
    Had we never lov'd sae kindly,
    Had we never lov'd sae blindly,
    Never met-or never parted,
    We had ne'er been broken-hearted.

    Fare-thee-weel, thou first and fairest!
    Fare-thee-weel, thou best and dearest!
    Thine be ilka joy and treasure,
    Peace, Enjoyment, Love and Pleasure!
    Ae fond kiss, and then we sever!
    Ae fareweeli alas, for ever!
    Deep in heart-wrung tears I'll pledge thee,
    Warring sighs and groans I'll wage thee.
    Last edited by Pensive; 03-13-2009 at 09:04 AM.
    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    My Heart's In The Highlands

    Farewell to the Highlands, farewell to the North,
    The birth-place of Valour, the country of Worth;
    Wherever I wander, wherever I rove,
    The hills of the Highlands for ever I love.

    My heart's in the Highlands, my heart is not here;
    My heart's in the Highlands a-chasing the deer;
    A-chasing the wild-deer, and following the roe,
    My heart's in the Highlands wherever I go.

    Farewell to the mountains high covered with snow;
    Farewell to the straths and green valleys below;
    Farewell to the forests and wild-hanging woods;
    Farewell to the torrents and loud-pouring floods.

    My heart's in the Highlands, my heart is not here;
    My heart's in the Highlands a-chasing the deer;
    A-chasing the wild-deer, and following the roe,
    My heart's in the Highlands wherever I go.

    Robert Burns
    Art is a lie that leads to the truth.
    --Picasso

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    This is not really a goodbye poem, but it has the longing to say goodbye ...

    I Have Longed to Move Away - Dylan Thomas

    I have longed to move away
    From the hissing of the spent lie
    And the old terrors' continual cry
    Growing more terrible as the day
    Goes over the hill into the deep sea;
    I have longed to move away
    From the repetition of salutes,
    For there are ghosts in the air
    And ghostly echoes on paper,
    And the thunder of calls and notes.

    I have longed to move away but am afraid;
    Some life, yet unspent, might explode
    Out of the old lie burning on the ground,
    And, crackling into the air, leave me half-blind.
    Neither by night's ancient fear,
    The parting of hat from hair,
    Pursed lips at the receiver,
    Shall I fall to death's feather.
    By these I would not care to die,
    Half convention and half lie.

    Another one that is quite sad:

    The Farewell - Edward Field

    They say the ice will hold
    so there I go,
    forced to believe them by my act of trusting people,
    stepping out on it,

    and naturally it gaps open
    and I, forced to carry on coolly
    by my act of being imperturbable,
    slide erectly into the water wearing my captain's helmet,
    waving to the shore with a sad smile,
    "Goodbye my darlings, goodbye dear one,"
    as the ice meets again over my head with a click.
    Last edited by Sapphire; 03-13-2009 at 09:41 AM.
    It is not too late, to be wild for roundabouts - to be wild for life
    Wolfsheim - It is not too late

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    Here's something from a newer poet:
    Farewell

    Farewell is a word,
    So simple, so dour
    Saying what started
    but did not endure.
    Farewell is a feeling
    of something that’s gone
    Farewell is a memory
    that stays for too long
    Farewell is everything
    that’s been left unsaid
    Farewell is the greeting
    of someone
    who’s dead.

    Peter Rhodes

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    Darn someone posted Byron's so we'll go no more a roving.

    ALBA

    from "Langue d'Oc"

    When the nightingale to his mate
    Sings day-long and night late
    My love and I keep state
    In bower,
    In flower,
    'Till the watchman on the tower
    Cry:
    "Up! Thou rascal, Rise,
    I see the white
    Light
    And the night
    Flies."

    Translated by Ezra Pound

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    Can't resist a mention for Private Eye magazine's standard obit poem opener, And so farewell then, probably invented by Peter Cook, ascribed to EJ Thribb, aged 17 and a half. Here's a sample:

    In Memoriam
    HOWARD HUGHES

    So. Farewell then
    Howard Hughes
    Mystery millionaire.

    It would seem that
    You are dead

    But are you?

    We have been
    Hoaxed before

    So why not now?

    But then. Does
    Anyone really die?

    This is the enigma.

    It's a song, but it's pretty good as poetry:


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T86tK...eature=related

    So Long Marianne
    Leonard Cohen

    Come over to the window, my little darling,
    Id like to try to read you palm
    I used to think I was some kind of gypsy boy
    Before I let you take me home.

    Chorus: so long marianne, its time that we began
    To laugh and cry and cry and laugh about it all again

    Well, you know that I love to live with you,
    But you make me forget so very much
    I forget to pray for the angel
    And then the angels forget to pray for us.

    so long marianne, its time that we began
    To laugh and cry and cry and laugh about it all again

    We met when we were almost young
    Deep in the green lilac park
    You held on to me like I was a crucifix
    As we went kneeling through the dark.

    so long marianne, its time that we began
    To laugh and cry and cry and laugh about it all again

    Your letters say that you are beside me now
    Then why do I feel alone?
    Im standing on a ledge and your fine spider web
    Is fastening my ankle to a stone.

    so long marianne, its time that we began
    To laugh and cry and cry and laugh about it all again

    For now I need your hidden love
    Im cold as a new razor blade
    You left when I told you I was curious
    I never said that I was brave.

    so long marianne, its time that we began
    To laugh and cry and cry and laugh about it all again

    O you are really such a pretty one
    I see youve gone and changed your name again
    And just when I climbed this whole mountainside
    To wash my eyelids in the rain.

    so long marianne, its time that we began
    To laugh and cry and cry and laugh about it all again

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    Quote Originally Posted by JBI View Post
    Darn someone posted Byron's so we'll go no more a roving.
    Why "darn"?

    Quote Originally Posted by Pensive View Post
    (though unfortunately it isn't the poem I require either):
    Why not? Is there a particular poem you are after or a specific type maybe?
    ~
    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    Trying to find some fitting things, from the archive of my mind, and the depths of my bookshelf ( with assistance from google, since I won´t type it all myself)

    Do you want a poem about the writer leaving someone, or someone leaving the writer, or ja poem about endings, or perhaps something that says you never really part? What feeling would you like it to show? Here are three, but I can always get more. We shall find the one poem that will fit :-)


    For the writer leaving

    Song: Sweetest love, I do not go
    by John Donne

    Sweetest love, I do not go,
    For weariness of thee,
    Nor in hope the world can show
    A fitter love for me;
    But since that I
    Must die at last, 'tis best
    To use myself in jest
    Thus by feign'd deaths to die.

    Yesternight the sun went hence,
    And yet is here today;
    He hath no desire nor sense,
    Nor half so short a way:
    Then fear not me,
    But believe that I shall make
    Speedier journeys, since I take
    More wings and spurs than he.

    O how feeble is man's power,
    That if good fortune fall,
    Cannot add another hour,
    Nor a lost hour recall!
    But come bad chance,
    And we join to'it our strength,
    And we teach it art and length,
    Itself o'er us to'advance.

    When thou sigh'st, thou sigh'st not wind,
    But sigh'st my soul away;
    When thou weep'st, unkindly kind,
    My life's blood doth decay.
    It cannot be
    That thou lov'st me, as thou say'st,
    If in thine my life thou waste,
    That art the best of me.

    Let not thy divining heart
    Forethink me any ill;
    Destiny may take thy part,
    And may thy fears fulfil;
    But think that we
    Are but turn'd aside to sleep;
    They who one another keep
    Alive, ne'er parted be.


    Things ending - poem

    Nothing Gold Can Stay
    by Robert Frost

    Nature's first green is gold,
    Her hardest hue to hold.
    Her early leafs a flower;
    But only so an hour.
    Then leaf subsides to leaf.
    So Eden sank to grief,
    So dawn goes down to day.
    Nothing gold can stay.


    and just a small favorite, that can be used to show that no matter what we are together:

    i carry your heart with me by E. E. Cummings

    i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
    my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
    i go you go,my dear; and whatever is done
    by only me is your doing,my darling)
    i fear
    no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want
    no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)
    and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
    and whatever a sun will always sing is you

    here is the deepest secret nobody knows
    (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
    and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows
    higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide)
    and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

    i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
    "Man was made for joy and woe;
    And when this we rightly know
    Through the world we safely go" Blake

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