in sight
are those words that
you wrote on my heart's slate
when sky bowed down to kiss the earth
with love
in sight
are those words that
you wrote on my heart's slate
when sky bowed down to kiss the earth
with love
watching
you leave so soon
my heart weeps with sorrow
unjust that you leave me alone
to die
to see
for a blind man
is as difficult as
for a woman to lend her ears
to love
Nicebut u dont have to give a cinquain for all the former ones, weaving one with the last line of the prev. post will do. But okay if u chose to... better make it a single thread though.
To Love:
I was with you
since the day i breathed last.
To Hate: I saw you in her eyes
in death.
.
...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
sometimes it is difficult to let go a good thread just because it happened to crossOriginally Posted by symphony
Nice
To Love:
I was with you
since the day i breathed last.
To Hate: I saw you in her eyes
in death.
in death
we live again
to love and keep loving
as we loved in the life before
on earth
on earth
we stand and gaze
wondering what lies out
beyond the stars, behind it all--
go on...
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
go on,
leap into space,
it is there inside you,
take a ride on your heart, send it
rockin'
go on
just keep going
beyond the stars
till you find yet another world
asleep
sorry, i'm confused
Last edited by ampoule; 10-21-2007 at 03:00 PM.
I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.
"If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor
I'm confused as to what our new friend mazHur is doing. I believe he should have used fire's cinquain to continue the game. Perhaps, like symphony suggested, he should start his own thread of cinquains.
rockin'
is better than
robbin' the cradle, right?
just don't tip it too far or we'll
fall out
I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.
"If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor
fall out,
will all fall down,
the heart knows its limits,
from the frail air of dreams, we must
return
return
i beg of you
the children are waiting
our hearts hurt, our eyes only cry
come back
I intend to live forever...
so far so good.
return
my heart my love
you took away cleverly
through your enchanting looks and guile
all fraud
come back
my pussy cat
don't make me feel lonely
without your sweet rub and purr
and meow !
and meow
says messed up dogs
a dog that says meow
its a wonder why dogs say that
freaky
???
I intend to live forever...
so far so good.
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