Thanks fire! Dont you worry! as long as i keep feeling, i'll keep writing!Originally Posted by firefangled
Thanks fire! Dont you worry! as long as i keep feeling, i'll keep writing!
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
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the last line of this last poem is ultra-cool
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...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
Thanks Symphony!I throw in the last two lines when i was typing it up.
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
lol those hurried additions make a poem so much more enjoyable to read, funny how they become, at times, the very essence of a poem! happens too often.
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...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
I know! It happens way too often for me. Its always the lines that people tell me they really liked. Maybe its the last bit of passion you unleash into the poem and thats why it brings it together!
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
lol same goes for me.
i remember once when i wrote a bengali poem and kept it unfinished, i added a 2-line closing to it later when showing it to some friends, and those 2 lines were more appreciated than the whole poem! so much to sharp add-ons!!
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...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
You said it! You spend ages getting the other lines sorted and then lash a couple down and wham, they are the favs. A well i suppose that once they like it thats all that should matter!
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
not what we can call justice to the other lines though
but still yeah i suppose all that matters is ppl liking them. after all, the add-ons are but our creation as well so...
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...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
Hi, your poems are good. you are too much philosophical....!!!
Corruption is nothing but the beginning,
Destruction middle, loss the end.
And with a band of heralds singing,
God his Angels shall he send.
Thanks Nagaraja. Welcome to Litnet! Hope you have fun around the forum!
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
As i lie down to rest
my head is filled with thoughts
of future emotions and troubled past.
Sometimes eyes glisten,
tears forming on surface fighting for release.
Darkness overcomes,
And as i lie dreaming
My dreams are filled with thoughts
of future emotions and troubled past.
Last edited by Niamh; 08-28-2007 at 05:27 PM.
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
Short and fine!
But I think of future emotions and 'troubled' past would look better than of future emotions and 'troubles' past.
I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.
done.Short and fine!
But I think of future emotions and 'troubled' past would look better than of future emotions and 'troubles' past.
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
Good one
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...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
thanks symphony!
"Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
W.B.Yeats
"If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer
my poems-please comment Forum Rules
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