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  • Gingerbread Men

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  • A Christmas Poem

    2 18.18%
  • Holy Night

    4 36.36%
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    Christmas Poetry Competition Final

    Here are the poems taking part in our Christmas Poetry Competition!

    Please vote for the poem you like best to win!


    PS: The identity of the contributors will remain anonymous till the end of the competition and please refrain from commenting on the poems not to influence others' decisions.
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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
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    Poem 1: Ginergerbread Men

    GINGERBREAD MEN

    Aunt Marion for Christmas
    Makes Gingerbread Men
    Their bodies outlined
    In vanilla icing.
    Their eyes and coat buttons
    Are Red Hot candies.
    We hang them
    In the tree
    My brothers and sisters
    And me.
    Eight Gingerbread Men
    Hang from the tree
    Dangling
    Waiting to be eaten.
    I can't sleep!
    Where are you Santa?
    I'm hungry!
    And then I remember!
    The Gingerbread Men
    We are not to touch
    Till morning!
    I can't take it so
    I crawl into the
    Living room.
    At first I eat
    My brother's leg.
    And then I twist off
    The arm of my sister's,
    And pop Red Hots into
    My mouth until
    My tongue burns!
    I am full now so
    I crawl back to bed
    Unnoticed until-
    Awoken by a scream!
    Seven brothers and sisters
    Tears in their eyes and
    Accusations!
    -He did it!-
    -She did it!-
    Silence. Then
    All eyes
    Upon me.
    Father and Mother
    Towering over me
    Until I point at
    The little girl and say,
    -Hey, she did it!-
    She can't talk much.
    She's only two.
    I forgot she can't
    Reach the Gingerbread Men
    And I forgot to bite
    My own!
    I'm busted.

    The End
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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    Poem 2: A Christmas Poem

    I’d like to write a Christmas poem
    It really would be nice
    To put in candy canes and toys,
    Tall trees and dreams of ice.
    I’d like to write a Christmas poem
    Which would convey the joy
    Of rushing down in early morn -
    Gifts for each girl and boy.
    But Christmas doesn’t come this year
    It never has, or will
    No sweet striped sticks to suck on,
    Living room empty still.
    To watch here all the windows
    As they fill up with lights –
    And sitting home inside my room
    On Christmas Eve and Night.
    Decorating others’ trees
    With tinsel and bright bells
    Watching Nativity scenes
    The stories that they tell . . .

    Yet Christmas-time inside my room
    Is one small price to pay;
    I have eight nights to rejoice
    They have but one day . . .

    Menorah on the windowsill
    To shine away the cold
    And staying until every candle
    Has grown dim and old;
    Family and friends and all
    To be here by my side
    For eight full days to tell stories
    Of Solomon the Wise –
    Or how a lamp with but a day
    Of oil in its shell
    Burned until more could be found
    To refill its dry well.
    Even if you don’t believe,
    Or do not have a God
    No holiday to celebrate
    No songs with which to nod
    Still you have people to love –
    I know without a doubt,
    That even with no gifts at all,
    That’s what Christmas’ about.
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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    Poem 3: Holy Night

    Holy Night

    The rocking motion of the beast
    Jiggles the belly,
    Wobbles the amniotic sac.

    They reach a barn,
    Granted privilege,
    Poor beast watered and fed.

    Husband cushions wife in hay,
    Breathing of bestiary only sound,
    Marital understanding between eyes
    In silent consecration.
    Wife slips into sleep.

    Husband ventures out for midwife
    An evening which may bring
    Fatherhood or widowhood,
    Returns unaccompanied,
    Wood being easier to shape.

    Returns with evening meal,
    Some bread, some wine.
    Returns to screams of wife,
    Eyes wide, teeth glaring,
    Preagonal motions of enfeebled ritual.

    Water, then, to rinse her face
    To cool her arms, unwrapping her clothes,
    Bathes pre-maternal breasts,
    Spreads arms out to refresh pilous pits.

    Her hands grip to fists
    Contraction strikes through belly
    An unclothing to light
    Lifts her legs to release, to release—

    Beasts clench to screams
    Husband strokes her head
    Sweat pastes black hair to crown
    Naked on her back with streaks of heat
    With bulge of belly below.

    And the water that flows from her groin
    And the pain—to release
    Like a crucifixion.

    And water—
    And lifts her legs—
    To release—
    And pain—
    To a crucifixion—

    Will it bring death this life
    In some invisible double?
    Or will life bring death?

    And then release to final pain
    To feel arms and feet glide
    Through her opening.

    And then release of blood,
    Release to pure light
    Babe swaddled with pain of cry
    Wet and bloodied in father’s arms.
    Husband covers her with beast’s blanket.

    Feels ease of numbness,
    Eyes close once again
    Crosses legs to close pain
    Passes to ethereal sleep.

    Hours later she wakes to morning light,
    To look at eyes of love.
    ~
    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    Poem 4: ---------

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    [ONCE UPON A TIME] on a gray
    and cold Christmas night, in a
    small town with tree-lined streets
    overlooking the cacophony of
    burning neon lights to the city that
    never sleeps...

    I saw a face with loneliness
    framed in a second-story red brick,
    eyes set far back raging
    and yet so calm; a face
    worn to translucence, with lines
    that flowed in every direction.

    I saw a face with loneliness,
    through glassy eyes I could see a father
    who had waited in bread lines asking
    himself over, "Why?" these eyes hers that
    welled up a younger brother [who had
    volunteered for WWII] a-cross the Rhine
    and into France, and under an impassive
    White Cross where he remains.

    I saw a face with loneliness march over
    serrated shadows of old Vietnam to
    Cambodia; into Peru she scaled maccu
    piccu heights, and with the howl of a
    magenta horizon, thought of flowers.

    My numb hallucination, a rift between
    snowflakes mingling and a knife-wind; like
    an April shower caught in a season not its
    own, she whispers discreetly, "Kiss me
    mister before I wade off into a cold
    homecoming wind."

    With a fuzzy scarf pulled over my breath
    steam, I turned away into the misty bone of
    night [learning some years after] in that time
    clap she smiled down to me had as soon
    swiftly gone, to be bathed by an angel's
    tears [they said]. How the body emancipates
    itself to dawn's disbelief; even on a gray
    and cold Christmas night.
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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    Oh great. Another contest. When will voting end?
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

    My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/

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    You should be able to see when the voting closes in your part of the world on top of the poll.
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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scheherazade View Post
    You should be able to see when the voting closes in your part of the world on top of the poll.
    Oh thanks.
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

    My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/

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    **Bump**

    People, you only have a couple of days to vote.
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

    My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/

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    Only two days!!

    I have to read four poems, and then think and decide. Its too less.... Anyhow i'll try my best....
    Charms strike the sight, but merit wins the soul.

    Be the change you wish to see

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    I wonder if there is a min post counted needed to vote on this? Does anyone know?
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

    My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/

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    Well, so far I am dismayed to see there has only been 4 voters. Maybe most people can't find this thread.
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    Going once...
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    Great Poems, everyone!

    Every poem was well-written, and especially choosing between A Christmas Poem and Holy Night was immensely difficult for me.
    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    Just found this thread. I hadn't seen anything about this Christmas Poetry Competition. I thought they were all good and, like Pensive, was especially torn between "A Christmas Poem" and "Holy Night." But, since I have to choose just one...
    Last edited by Petrarch's Love; 12-30-2006 at 04:14 PM.

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