Oh, so sorry Janine and Laind!
Oh, so sorry Janine and Laind!
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Well, I think you messed up - you used my first line and not my last line. I will go from here using your last line since I am middle-agedOriginally Posted by dramasnot6
Crushed with middle age
She bend to her endless woe
Alone and forlorn
oh, no i didnt accidentally use your first line. we must have been creating our haikus simultaneously, and i posted a couple minutes later. i do that fairly often...i probably take way too much time writing one haiku that i dont press refresh to see if anyone has already written for that one. But thanks for keeping mine!!
Beautfil haiku by the way
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Alone and forlorn
Left to scream at concrete walls
Feelings like a leech
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Thanks for the compliment, and BTW I love your Avatar. I still can't decide on one. I think that has happened to me before on other threads - posting same time as someone else. I try to do the haiku spontaneously but I am slow too.
Feelings like a leech
I cling to the stem
Life circles round me
Last edited by Janine; 11-28-2006 at 04:20 PM. Reason: changed around to round - too many syllables - pointed out to me from poster
Nite all ...yawn.....fad i n g a w a y
correct me if I'm wrong, but I do think that last line is 6 syllabels.
Anyway rock on
Life circles around me
Labeled ego speaks loudly
Thats so last season!
A man should never be ashamed to own he has been in the wrong, which is but saying in other words that he is wise today than yesterday - Alexander Pope
Conviction that is not under-girded by LOVE makes the possessor of that conviction obnoxious and the dogma possessed becomes repulsive - Ravi Zacharias.
yea, it is 6. ah well, we all had messy syllables as begginers.
Thats so last season!
Shopaholic clarifies
But could i care less?
hehe...a felt like making one a bit blunt and unsophisticated for once
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Yes indeed you are.I'm so very proud.
Maybe a good way to do it would be just to copy and paste the instructions found on the first post in this thread?
But could I care less?
Not even if my friend was
Tickling my rib cage.
“As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”
Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.
Hey ShoutGrace, you're here!Hello!
Tickling my rib cage
To force humour out of me
Defy gravity
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sorry, I am really a Haiku Failure Personified but I wanna say hello to ShoutGrace..
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive!
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
Hey ShoutGrace, you're here!
Tickling my rib cage
To force humour out of me
Defy gravity
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sorry, I am really a Haiku Failure Personified but I wanna say hello to ShoutGrace..
"The only bad haiku is the one not written."How are you toni?
Defy gravity
Lets get these space suits on and
Have some weightless sex.
“As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”
Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.
I am fine, now that I saw me fwend.
Have some wightless sex
Some bottled wine and crupmets
Time will transport us
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Question! ShoutGrace's age is a mystery..
If you don't mind me asking,
Are you 20-ish 30-ish 40-ish or 50-ish?
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
It's not that I don't mind your asking, it's just that I don't like to think of myself as an "ish."
Time will transport us
Back to the dissolution
Of our former love.
“As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”
Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.
Of our former love
So tragic I remember
spitting on dark holes
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LOL.
Okay, Im gonna ask again, are you in your twenties, thirties fourties or fifties?
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Your haikus are soo Romantic, you know..
Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
the whole boatload of sensitive
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.
Well, I try my best
Spitting on dark holes
Watching the sun set over
The hulking sand dunes.
“As Kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame . . .”
Why disqualify the rush? I'm tabled. I'm tabled.
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