theres a chain? woops
my first time on the forums in 6 months, sorry lol
i'll check next time. you can continue with snow drift if u like, just ignore my haiku completley
theres a chain? woops
my first time on the forums in 6 months, sorry lol
i'll check next time. you can continue with snow drift if u like, just ignore my haiku completley
"...thought is the arrow of time, memory never fades."
They actually were very lovely haiku's. But the game is as I described in post above. I like the way you write. Stay in - it is so much fun!
stay in - it is fun!! I just wrote you a message and it did not post...wait I will rewrite it.
It just posted - sorry....just slow I suppose....
If I'm tracking this right I think I'm following Janine:
A statue made white
With the gentle falling ash
Pompeii life now stilled.
"In rime sparse il suono/ di quei sospiri ond' io nudriva 'l core/ in sul mio primo giovenile errore"~ Francesco Petrarca
"Follies and nonsense, whims and inconsistencies do divert me, I own, and I laugh at them whenever I can."~ Jane Austen
Lovley P, as always. I particularly like this one though.
Pompeii life now stilled
Ashen walls and earthly time
still as gentle rain
Still as gentle rain
they await the dawn of fear
army passing by
PS: P - I was referring to your poem and not mine last time...sounded confusing...last sentence.
Thanks Janine (I got it). I like yours too.
Army passing by
Beautiful young men passing
Away far from home.
"In rime sparse il suono/ di quei sospiri ond' io nudriva 'l core/ in sul mio primo giovenile errore"~ Francesco Petrarca
"Follies and nonsense, whims and inconsistencies do divert me, I own, and I laugh at them whenever I can."~ Jane Austen
Away, far from home
Is where his two feet takes him.
Don't know where to go.
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
Don't know where to go
Now that I have gone this far
Endless possibilities
Endless possibilities
Endless musical passion
Endless dreams and hopes
Hey Shougrace, I'm being a good girl...
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
Endless dreams and hopes
Thwarted now in memory
Trapped beyond time alone
Endless dreams and hopes
Aspirations of fooled youth
Crushed with middle age
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
Uh, whom shall I follow?
"You have enemies? Good. That means you’ve stood up for something, sometime in your life."
To go wrong in one's own way is better than to go right in someone else's" - Dostoevksy
haha, my mom read my last one and said, with a very grim face, "was i the inspiration?"
I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.
Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
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