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    Waking and melting
    eye of curiosity
    view beyond the wall

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    View beyond the wall
    Black hearts weep like crawling stones
    Death will march itself
    Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
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    — Allen Ginsberg, Howl II.

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    Death will march itself
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    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    Nice irony, dear Pensy..

    Full of happiness
    Whenever you see his face
    Tides will swallow me
    Dreams! adorations! illuminations! religions!
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    tides will swallow me
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    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    with importance (since Pensive's got skipped)
    Loves not important
    I drown myslef in the bath

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janine View Post
    I drown myself in the bath
    Deceptions long past
    Murderous time stalks
    Getting better Janine. I like that last line.

    Murderous time stalks
    The dark streets of Manhattan.
    How will you save him?
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

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    Thanks dramasnot.

    I've done this sort of thing on another forum, so I have lots of practice.

    How will you save him
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    a stubborn flower
    petals of sinewy tone
    and trampoline bounce
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Virgil View Post
    Getting better Janine. I like that last line.

    Murderous time stalks
    The dark streets of Manhattan.
    How will you save him?
    Thanks - maybe practice helps. That last line made a great first one. I like yours. Think I would like the "the" to be like "dank dark streets...something more rank would be better. Gee, now I am giving advice and I am still pretty lame in writing them myself! sorry

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    and trampoline bounce
    balloons bursting in thin air
    Circus comes to town!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janine View Post
    and trampoline bounce
    balloons bursting in thin air
    Circus comes to town!
    Excellent!!!

    Circus comes to town
    And Boy decides to run off.
    Perfect cannon ball.
    LET THERE BE LIGHT

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    Yay! Go Janine!!
    Perfect cannon ball
    Ships staring with thirsty gore
    Pirates Tete a Tete
    I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of anything than of a book! When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.


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    Pirates Tete a Tete
    Swords sharpened gnawing sharks teeth
    Fast fury begins
    Last edited by Janine; 11-27-2006 at 10:40 PM.

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