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    Nothing required today

    He went because the fridge was bare,
    And Beer can stand in for plans.
    The street took him with no fuss.

    Phones lighting girls’ smiles as they passed—
    Not at him, no, but somewhere just beyond
    Where he had once been.

    An old man in a cap moved carefully,
    Like the ground will shift.

    Inside the fluorescent store,
    He took a bottle from where the others stood,
    Cold, interchangeable.

    Outside light dulled a shade.
    He walked back slowly, beer in hand,
    Something settled in place, hard to name.

    He noticed this
    Nothing was pressing on him
    Just an accumulation of the world.

    Home, lock turned.
    He sat and opened it.
    The sound was small, precise, and quickly gone—

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    "Just an accumulation of the world". Well expressed this summing up of loneliness, Tony. Life parties are needed.
    "I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
    Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row

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    Quote Originally Posted by Danik 2016 View Post
    "Just an accumulation of the world". Well expressed this summing up of loneliness, Tony. Life parties are needed.
    Thanks Danik. I do poetry readings (my poetry)at parties �� -

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    "Nothing was pressing on him / Just an accumulation of the world." Enjoyed

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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