Delicate poem. I saw the the Cowherd and Weaving Maid as constellations within the Milky Way...Enjoyed
"Reality is a manifestation in flux," - Tony DeLorger; Reality is a Slippery Surface... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18482917-...-Tony-DeLorger
Delicate poem. I saw the the Cowherd and Weaving Maid as constellations within the Milky Way...Enjoyed
"Reality is a manifestation in flux," - Tony DeLorger; Reality is a Slippery Surface... https://allpoetry.com/poem/18482917-...-Tony-DeLorger
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Tony's poem reads like an philosophical essay..I tend to think whether I agree or not with his propositions.
"Spring pond deep and wide". "Duckweed Pound" by Wang Wei
https://allpoetry.com/Duckweed-Pond
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
An ethereal poem by Wang Wei... Enjoyed
"The earliest pleasure I remember" - Joanne M. Clarkson; Velvet... https://joanneclarkson.com/publicati...vet-in-thimble
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
"Velvet", lovely poem!
"Unequal thus to Caesar, Pompey yields"."Brundusium" by Lucan
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/po...rundusium.html
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brindisi
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed... that's near where my Brother lives
"Visions and ideas surround us all." - A person; Truth - Reality... https://allpoetry.com/poem/11243743-...ty-by-A-person
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tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Gymnastics now! Back later for the poem and more..
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
I'm at the hospital visiting my wife, so cool
(Episodic non-seizure seizures after a med prior to an MRI... I spent the nigh too)
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Hope your wife is feeling better and getting a safer med. Going to pray for her quick recovery. Take good care of yourself too!
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Both had a rough night... hers exacerbated with terrible shoulder pain....Waiting for the doctor still. Daughter and Sister in law to arrive so I can go home for a respite. Hopefull ��
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Hopefully the doctor arrives quickly. What is the problem with her shoulder?
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
She has fallen twice this week for one shoulder and her repaired shoulder is failing. She's been having falls for several years now and some medications and anesthesia cause the severe non-seizure seizures which will cause her BP to appear sometimes over 200 bpm, but we're reassued that it's not a true reading. She will have the seizure- type things without med or anesthesia at home too. No one knows why.
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Strange!The doctors probably have some kind of diagnosis to prescribe the med. Is her doctor a neurologist?
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Another essay like poem. Reminds mea bit of Cacians poems.Originally Posted by tailor STATELY
Enjoyed... that's near where my Brother lives
"Visions and ideas surround us all." - A person; Truth - Reality... https://allpoetry.com/poem/11243743-...ty-by-A-person
"While I sleep, wind shears the plateau, lifts trees by the crown,"."Goat Dream" by Todd Davis
https://www.versedaily.org/2024/goatdream.shtml
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Tailor, here are some links on non epileptic seizures. Maybe it would be good to get another opinion if that is possible. This blood pressure even if wrong doesn't look nice.
https://www.cedars-sinai.org/health-...-seizures.html
https://appliedradiology.com/article...ional-seizures
https://www.epilepsy.com/diagnosis/i...t-Causes-PNES?
Going to pray for her quick recovery.
Last edited by Danik 2016; 11-11-2025 at 10:28 PM.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
My wife finally saw a neurologist who stopped her from being discharged by a GP when she had a bad episode just prior to leaving (she is spending another night). Misspoke re: BP... it's her pulse that gives the erroneous reading, though her blood pressure does act erratically. It's been a rollercoaster. Thanx... Will check out the links
eft: salamander/newt. Dense poem about a surreal dream... Enjoyed
Poem by a poet with an 'x' in their name:
"Made up of tiny fibers" - Curtis X Meyer; Material... https://share.google/JzhefzAsW0IBzes2S
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
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