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    Snapshot

    Snapshot

    You stand there
    on the hiking bridge,
    surrounded by your family;
    wife and three children.

    Does this one snapshot
    in time capture
    your outlook on life?

    Huddled as one family unit
    hugging each other
    everyone, smiling at the lens,
    except you.

    Defined into this
    family role you stand there
    as if a stranger to this concept
    of husband and father.

    The blackness of your cap
    shades your faceless
    expression.
    You squeeze
    your son to your side.

    When I knew you
    your bellows,
    like a jackass' bray
    would blow flocks of birds out of trees.
    .
    What has life
    done to you?
    Why can't I see
    your crooked teeth?
    It breaks my heart
    to see you dead inside.

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    It's enthralling and beautiful. I really love this. It's delicately and exquisitely crafted.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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    Thank you for your encouragement. It makes me want to go back and write more bad poetry. Hahaha!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    Thank you for your encouragement. It makes me want to go back and write more bad poetry. Hahaha!
    Really, you write exquisitely and beautifully. Do write more so that we can enjoy more different life stories and beautiful poems of course.

    Try to live in harmony with people and nature


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