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  1. 11-26-2005, 12:50 PM #1
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    another shared poem thread...complete the thought...

    OK!..dunno how i got around starting this...but here's another shared poetry thread...put down ur thoughts randomly in form of a four line stanza and try to get the rhyming sequence something like a-b-c-b...

    I wrote these lines a few minutes back while writing on another thread...they didn't seem to fit in anywhere..coz they hardly make sense...can anyone complete the thought and continue??

    The sweetness of the sweet nothings
    Dreams that never were real
    A feeling that never grew
    A thought that disappeared...

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  2. 11-26-2005, 02:31 PM #2
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    Fades out with time and soon
    Forgotten and we're thrown in doom.
    Feelings that once were shared
    And now slowly died.

    Oh! life you'r but hell
    Oh! hell you'r but in me
    When I'v lost your love
    I'm lost in an ocean of destiny
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  3. 11-27-2005, 01:32 PM #3
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    Memories rush into the mind
    taunting, tormenting past...
    Why did Time play this game?
    To take away all the first, the last...
    Last edited by smilingtearz; 11-27-2005 at 01:34 PM.

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  4. 11-27-2005, 02:54 PM #4
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    Hey I am getting to love your poetry smilingtearz & adilyoussef partnering is great. I am busy till the coming weekend. I'll continue after that if situation permits.
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  5. 11-27-2005, 03:22 PM #5
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    And throw me alone in a place
    Far away without help and grace
    Thought are killing me
    Slowly, and no one helped me

    Oh! life you'r but hell
    Oh! hell you'r but in me
    When I'v lost your love
    I'm lost in an ocean of destiny
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  6. 11-28-2005, 08:32 AM #6
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    I did try to call out..
    A ray of hope I'd seen...
    But my cries were all stifled
    My tears all Unseen...

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  7. 11-28-2005, 02:14 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by geetanjali
    Hey I am getting to love your poetry smilingtearz & adilyoussef partnering is great. I am busy till the coming weekend. I'll continue after that if situation permits.

    thanx...guess i shud make adil my poetry partner...

    Would my prayers be heard..
    who'd hear me weep..
    I've lost my joys,
    My peaceful sleep...

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  8. 11-29-2005, 01:14 PM #8
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    Without Thy help I'm lost
    In torture and can't sleep
    Reddemption I ask
    For a heart wounded so deep

    Oh! life you'r but hell
    Oh! hell you'r but in me
    When I'v lost your love
    I'm lost in an ocean of destiny
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  9. 11-29-2005, 01:23 PM #9
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    This wound hath no cure...
    I seek, I search for thee
    I'm sure thou art around,
    and I cry "Help me!"...

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  10. 11-29-2005, 01:33 PM #10
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    'My eyes, my eyes', I cry
    'These fonts, these colours are killing me!'

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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
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  11. 11-29-2005, 01:39 PM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scheherazade
    'My eyes, my eyes', I cry
    'These fonts, these colours are killing me!'

    Do u want me to change the color scheher??

    would this do??

    Save me, Help i cry!
    The darkness killing me
    im broken deep inside
    but i still call out to thee...

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  12. 11-29-2005, 01:40 PM #12
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    Begging I'm on my knees
    Crying I ask you pleese
    Relieve my hear from sorrow
    And pardon it for being hollow

    Oh! life you'r but hell
    Oh! hell you'r but in me
    When I'v lost your love
    I'm lost in an ocean of destiny
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  13. 11-29-2005, 02:34 PM #13
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    I haven't yet lost faith or hope
    i wait to see you beside
    and relieve, pardon me...
    the pain..my guilt...decide...
    Last edited by smilingtearz; 11-29-2005 at 02:36 PM.

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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  14. 11-30-2005, 07:43 AM #14
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    I've never been good
    And in front of Thee I stood
    Asking with tears
    your pardon with fear

    Oh! life you'r but hell
    Oh! hell you'r but in me
    When I'v lost your love
    I'm lost in an ocean of destiny
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    I wish you knew
    how i need you with me
    Comforting words that say
    You have forgiven me...

    And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
    And Thou shalt not, writ over the door:
    So I turned to the Garden of Love,
    That so many sweet flowers bore. - "The Garden of Love", William Blake.
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